Module 1 Geniuses>Unit 2 Great minds Writing课件18张

课件18张PPT。 A narrative of a person tall, thinfriendly, helpshort, fat, glassesgentle, smilelovely, singquiet, music, booksbeautiful,hard-workinghonest,popular,lovefunny,jokes,laugh Make sentences with these key words!He is tall and thin.She is friendly and always helps others.He is short and fat with glasses.She is gentle and always smilesShe is lovely and she likes singing.He is quiet and likes listening to music and reading books.She is beautiful and hard-working.He is honest and popular, everyone loves him.He is funny and he tells jokes to make people laugh.1. He is tall and thin.
2. She is friendly and always helps others.
3.He is short and fat with glasses.
4.She is gentle and always smiles.
5.She is lovely and she likes singing.
6. He is quiet and likes listening to music and reading books.
7. She is beautiful and hard-working.
8. He is honest and popular,everyone loves him.
9. He is funny and he tells jokes to make people laugh.
The words of describing person's appearancebeautifulstronghandsomehealthylovelyuglyshorttallfat thin
The words and phrases of describing person's personalitiesfriendlykindlazyconfidentoutgoingsmartbravenaughtyPhrases:喜爱因...而著名出生于对...某人严格要求对...疯狂be fond ofbe famous for be born inbe strict with sbbe crazy about对...厌倦be tired of 被看作...be regarded as 在...岁时at the age of被...尊敬be respected by为...树立榜样set an example for Our Monitor
Our monitor Liu Jie is not tall or handsome, but he is very popular at school.
He has a good personality(性格),Liu Jie is funny and forgiving. His stories and jokes make all of us laugh, especially when we are in low spirits. Yet when someone tries to make fun of him, he never gets angry. As a monitor,Liu Jie is friendly to every classmate. No matter who asks him for help, he is always warm-hearted . He is also a reliable(可信赖的 ) person. Both teachers and students trust him. Every day he is the last one to leave the classroom,making sure that all the windows are locked and the lights are off.
He is not only our classmate but also our friend. We all respect and love him.
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体裁：
人称：
时态：写人的记叙文第三人称一般现在时Our Monitor
Our monitor Liu Jie is not tall or handsome, but he is very popular at school.
He has a good personality(性格),Liu Jie is funny and forgiving. His stories and jokes make all of us laugh, especially when we are in low spirits. Yet when someone tries to make fun of him, he never gets angry. As a monitor,Liu Jie is friendly to every classmate. No matter who asks him for help, he is always warm-hearted . He is also a reliable(可信赖的 ) person. Both teachers and students trust him. Every day he is the last one to leave the classroom,making sure that all the windows are locked and the lights are off.
He is not only our classmate but also our friend. We all respect and love him.
Beginning
开头Middle
正文Ending 结尾Organization Our Monitor
Our monitor Liu Jie is not tall or handsome, but he is very popular at school.
He has a good personality(性格),Liu Jie is funny and forgiving(宽容的) . His stories and jokes make all of us laugh, especially when we are in low spirits. Yet when someone tries to make fun of him, he never gets angry. As a monitor,Liu Jie is friendly to every classmate. No matter who asks him for help, he is always warm-hearted . He is also a reliable(可信赖的 ) person. Both teachers and students trust him. Every day he is the last one to leave the classroom,making sure that all the windows are locked and the lights are off.
He is not only our classmate but also our friend. We all respect and love him.
Appearance
外貌Personality
and behaviour
性格和行为Conclusion
结论What to write?Organization of a composition 一篇写人的作文的结构Brief introduction简单介绍
Name of the person名字
The relationship between you and him/her你和他的关系
Main body正文
Personality characteristics性格特征
His/Her activities or achievements事迹
Conclusion总结
Your comments/feelings about the person你对他的评价Beginning
开头Middle 正文Ending 结尾How to describe a person’s personality or behaviour When you describe a person’s personality
and behaviour, please remember to
support your description with examples.
Liu Jie is funny and forgiving.His stories and jokes make all of us laugh, especially when we are in low spirits. Yet when someone tries to make fun of him, he never gets angry.As a monitor,Liu Jie is friendly to every classmate.No matter who asks him for help, he is always warm-hearted. Ms Li is a good teacher.Give you another example! She always makes her classes interesting
and lively. She loves us and always
helps us solve the problems in studying and lives.She is strict about our studies , but
she always encoursges us and gives
us support.假如你们学校校报举行英语征文活动，?主题是“ My favorite person”，?请你写一篇文章介绍一位你最喜爱的人（可以写你身边熟悉的人或名人）。
文章必须包含以下内容：
1.?人物简介；
2.?人物的性格特征和事迹；
3.?给你的启发。（共1题，15分） 要求：　　
1）条理清楚，意思连贯，语句通顺，标点正确、逻辑清晰；
2）80词左右。 My favorite person作文评分标准第一档（13-15分）
信息完整，表达流畅，无语言错误或基本无语言错误。
第二档（10-12分）
信息基本完整，表达较流畅，有少量语言错误，但不影响意思表达。
第三档（7-9分）
能传达部分信息，表达不够流畅，语言错误较多，但句子基本可读。
第四档（4-6分）
只能传达少量信息，表达不流畅，语言错误多，只有少量句子可读。
第五档（1-3分）
只能传达个别信息，表达不清楚，只有个别句子可读。 HomeworkEnjoy the writing and learn the key sentence of patterns by your heart.HomeworkEnjoy the writing and learn the key sentence of patterns by your heart.My good friend
HanMeimei is a good girl. She is tall and thin.
She is helpful. She always helps me with my English. Every time when I make a mistake, she tells me how to correct it.
She is popular with our classmates. She likes singing and playing tennis. That makes her happy and healthy.
She is not only my good friend but also my good teacher.