2020届广西中考英语复习课件 专题二十　书面表达（268张PPT）

课件268张PPT。 中考英语（广西专用）第二部分　读写能力提升
专题二十　书面表达Writing 1(2019北部湾经济区)
　　暑假将至,你校English Club在社刊上发起了征文活动,题目为“My Plan for Summer Holiday”。请你根据以下提示,用英语写一篇80词左右的短文。
写作要点:
1.学习计划;
2.运动计划;
3.娱乐计划;
4.你的愿望。
写作要求:
1.内容必须包括所给要点,可适当发挥,使行文连贯;A组　2015—2019年广西中考题组2.语篇完整,语句通顺,语法正确,书写规范;
3.文中不得出现人名、校名以及透露个人信息的地名,否则不予评分;
4.开头已给出,不计入总词数。
My Plan for Summer Holiday
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写作要点
本文可根据题目所给的要点提示,采用总分总的结构进行写作。写作过程中注意以一般将来时为主。为了使内容充实,在写每一个要点时,可适当发挥。
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My Plan for Summer Holiday
The summer holiday is coming. I can't wait to make a good plan for it.
First, I will spend hours on my study every day. Reading more books and practicing writing will be good ways to improve myself. Second, in order to keep fit, I will do some sports with my friends, such as playing basketball and swimming. This summer holiday will be a good time for fun, so I plan to watch movies and have picnics with my family. What's more, to experience different cultures in other places will be the most important part of my plan.
All of these will be helpful for my future life. I am looking forward to a meaningful holiday. Writing 2(2019桂林)
假如你是小玲,上周日,你和你的美国朋友Betty在西山公园玩得很开心,现在请你根据下列表格的信息,以“A Happy Day”为题写一篇英语短文。[写作要求]1.文中应包括以上信息,可适当发挥,行文连贯,书写规范。
2.文章词数在70词左右,开头已经给出,不计入总词数。
3.文中不得出现涉及考生真实信息的人名、地名或校名等。
A Happy Day
Last Sunday, Betty and I had a very good time in Xishan Park.?? ??
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写作要点
学生审题时一定要注意到题目所给的限定时间是上周日,所以应以一般过去时为主。题目所给的要点以英文的形式给出,学生只需按照时间顺序将题目的要点进行整合,写出完整的句子即可。
参考范文
A Happy Day
Last Sunday, Betty and I had a very good time in Xishan Park.In the morning, we get up early to catch the bus to Xishan Park. We climbed the mountain, laughing and singing. On the way up to the top, we saw lots of beauti-ful flowers and lovely monkeys. When we got back to the foot of the mountain, it was time to have lunch. So we had a picnic on the grassland. After that, we listened to music, feeling relaxed. In the afternoon, we went boating on the lake and fed fish. When we got home, both of us felt tired but happy.精彩语句????
1.精美词汇
lots of许多;have a picnic野餐
2.出彩结构
When we got back to the foot of the mountain, it was time to have lunch.
After that, we listened to music, feeling relaxed.
When we got home, both of us felt tired but happy.Writing 3(2019玉林)
每周星期一的升旗仪式(Flag-raising ceremony)是你们学校的常规活动。你的英国笔友Bob对你校的升旗仪式很感兴趣。假定你是张华,请你给Bob写一封电子邮件,介绍一下你校升旗仪式的情况。1.升旗的时间和地点;
2.参加升旗的人员;
3.升旗活动的意义;
4.你的感想。
参考词汇:(仅供参考)
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要求:
1.包括所有的内容要点,不要逐句翻译,可以适当发挥;
2.80词左右,语法正确;(开头和结尾已给出,不计入总词数)内容要点:3.文中不得出现考生真实的姓名、地点和所在的学校名称。
Dear Bob,
Hearing that you are interested in the Flag-raising ceremony of our school. I am glad to tell you something about it.?? ?
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Hope you can experience the Flag-raising ceremony of our school.
Yours,
Zhang Hua答案
写作要点
本书面表达的审题应确定好写作的时态,以一般现在时为主。内容要点应该包括时间、地点、人员、意义以及自己对于升旗仪式的感想,其中前三项内容可简要写明,后面两项需着重说明。写作人称应以第一人称为主。
参考范文
Dear Bob,
Hearing that you are interested in the Flag-raising ceremony of our school. I am glad to tell you something about it.Every Monday morning, the Flag-raising ceremony is held on the square in front of the teaching building. All the teachers and the students must attend it. We stand there seriously and sing the national anthem. It is educa-tional to take part in such a ceremony, because the national flag is a symbol of a country. To admire it means to admire our motherland.
When I hear the national anthem, a sense of pride will rise in my heart. I am so proud of my country. I must study hard, so that I can serve our country better in the future.
Hope you can experience the Flag-raising ceremony of our school.
Yours,
Zhang Hua
精彩语句????
1.精美词汇
in front of在……前面; take part in参加; a sense of pride自豪感;be proud of对……感到自豪
2.出彩结构
It is educational to take part in such a ceremony, because the national flag is a symbol of a country.
To admire it means to admire our motherland.
When I hear the national anthem, a sense of pride will rise in my heart.Writing 4(2019百色)
假设李华是你的同班同学,请根据以下提示及要求,用英语写一篇题为“My Classmate”的短文。
提示:1.他个子高,长相英俊,成绩优秀,擅长运动;2.他乐于助人(举一个例子);3.对他的评价。
要求:1.文中不能出现真实的姓名及校名;
2.词数80左右。
My Classmate
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写作要点
本书面表达的题材接近学生的日常生活,写作的难度不大,而且题目所给的提示也比较清晰,学生只需按照题目的提示正确组织语言,运用正确的句子结构即可完成本篇写作。时态应以一般现在时为主,在描述他乐于助人的具体例子时可适当使用一般过去时。
参考范文
My Classmate
I have a good friend and he is also my classmate,whose name is LiHua. He is not only a tall and handsome boy but also good at study. Besides, he does well in sports. The thing that makes him different is that he is always ready to help others. Once upon a time, I can't understand what the teacher said in math class, and he spent his spare time helping me.
He is such a boy that can make people around him happy. I am very glad to be his classmate and friend. 精彩语句????
1.精美词汇
not only...but also...不仅……而且……;once upon a time 曾经
2.出彩结构
He is not only a tall and handsome boy but also good at study.
The thing that makes him different is that he is always ready to help others.Writing 5(2019贺州)
梦想有多大,舞台就有多大。人人都有自己的梦想,你的梦想是什么?请根据下面提示,以“My Dream”为题,写一篇英语短文。
提示:1.你的梦想是什么?(如:成为一名记者、医生或者科学家等)
2.你为什么有这样的梦想?
3.你打算怎样实现自己的梦想?
参考词汇:grow up　　study hard　　come true
要求:1.根据所给提示内容,展开思路,可适当发挥;
2.不能出现真实的校名和人名;
3.80词左右。答案
写作要点
本文在审题时应该注意时态,既然谈的是梦想,那这一部分用的就应该是一般将来时,人称以第一人称为主。写作内容方面,应该把重点放在描述怎样实现自己的梦想上,写出一些具体的措施。
参考范文
My Dream
I'm a middle school student now. When I grow up, I'm going to be a reporter. Because being a reporter is cool. Besides, my favorite subject is Chinese and I'm good at it, too.
How can I make my dream come true? Firstly, I'm going to study Chinese harder by taking writing lessons and practicing writing articles. Secondly, if my articles are great, I will send them to magazines and newspapers. Lastly, I will never give up when I meet difficulties.
Where there is a will, there is a way. I'm sure my dream will come true one day.
?精彩语句???
1.精美词汇
come true实现;give up放弃
2.出彩结构
Besides, my favorite subject is Chinese and I'm good at it, too.
Lastly, I will never give up when I meet difficulties.
Where there is a will, there is a way.Writing 6(2019贵港)
假如你是林涛,你的笔友Sam在学校和同学发生了一些矛盾。现在他来信,请你给他一些关于怎样与他人相处和自我保护的建议。请根据下面表格提示,用英文给他写一封回信。写作要求:1.短文内容必须包含所给要点,并适当发挥;
2.语句通顺、语法正确、书写规范;
3.文中不能出现考生的真实姓名、校名和地名;
4.词数80左右。开头和结尾已给出,但不计入总词数。
参考词汇:respect尊重
Dear Sam,
How's it going? I'm happy to tell you how to get on well with others and protect ourselves.?? ??
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Best wishes!
Yours,
Lin Tao答案
写作要点
本文为提纲式作文,题目列出了写作所需的要点,内容较为贴近学生的校园生活。写作时应注意人称以第二人称为主,时态以一般现在时为主。另外注意,在写一些提建议类的文章时,我们应多选用适当的情态动词进行写作。
参考范文
Dear Sam,
How's it going? I'm happy to tell you how to get on well with others and protect ourselves.
On the one hand, you should learn how to get along well with others. You should try to be a good listener and try your best to help others. Besides, you should be careful when you want to make friends on the Internet. On the other hand, you should know how to protect yourself. Whenever you meet difficulties, you should talk with your classmates or ask your teachers or parents for help. If you cannot deal with these problems correctly, they will affect your study and life. You may lose your friends and you may fall behind others. I hope my suggestions can help you!
Best wishes!
Yours,
Lin Tao
精彩语句????
1.精美词汇
on the one hand...on the other hand...一方面……另一方面……;get along well with与……相处; make friends交朋友; deal with处理;fall behind落后
2.出彩结构
You should try to be a good listener and try your best to help others. Writing 7(2019河池)
“人生没有彩排,生命没有重来”,你平安、健康、快乐地成长是父母最大的心愿。今年6月下旬学校将举办一场以“Keep away from the danger!”为主题的英文演讲比赛。假如你是王雷同学,大家推选你参加这次比赛。请根据以下思维导图提示,写一篇英文演讲稿。
写作提示:
?写作要求:1.不得使用真实姓名和学校名;
2.所有的提示词都需用上,包含以上所有要点,可适当增加细节,使内容充实,行文连贯;
3.字迹工整,语言精练,表达准确,条理清楚;
4.词数100词左右。(演讲稿的开头和结尾已给出,不计入总词数。)答案
写作要点
本文的难度在于题目以英文的形式给出要点,学生要先读懂题目所给的图示的意思,才能进行写作。时态应以一般现在时为主,人称为第一人称。
参考范文
Keep away from the danger!
Hello! Everyone. I'm Wang Lei. The danger is around us.So we must learn how to keep away from the danger.First, we mustn't go swimming without our parents' or teachers' permission.When we swim in the water,we must wear life jackets. Second, it's important for us to follow the traffic rules.We mustn't go across the street when the traffic light is red.While crossing the street, never use mobile phones.We must walk on the pavement.Third,we have to be careful when we make friends, especially online.We mustn't meet net friends alone.Fourth,we are supposed to eat healthily and safely. Eating the food that goes bad will do harm to our health.Remember to wash hands before meals.What's more, we have to follow the school rules.Don't run in the hallways,or we'll be hurt easily. We should get on well with our classmates.Don't fight with them.If we are threatened,we should call the police for help in time.Last but not least,we must say no to the drugs.Never try them.When you see someone sell drugs,remember to call 110.
In a word, we must try our best to keep away from the danger!
That's all. Thank you for listening!
精彩语句????
1.精美词汇
keep away from 远离;follow the traffic rules 遵守交通规则; be supposed to应该;do harm to 对……有害; get on well with与……相处
2.出彩结构
Second, it's important for us to follow the traffic rules.
Eating the food that goes bad will do harm to our health.
If we are threatened,we should call the police for help in time.Writing 8(2019梧州)
为配合学校开展“争当新时代好学生”活动,校英语社团将举办以“How to Be a Good Student”为题的征文比赛。请你根据以下内容要点,写一篇参赛短文。
内容要点:1.认真听课,努力学习;
2.礼貌待人,遵守规则;
3.助人为乐,关爱他人;
4.保护环境,节约能源;
5.……
要　点:1.文中必包括所给内容要点1—5项,可展开思路,适当发挥;
2.文中不能出现真实的校名、人名和其他真实信息;
3.词数不少于80(开头已给出,不计入总词数)。How to Be a Good Students
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写作要点
本文以第一人称为主,时态为一般现在时。短文结构为总—分—总。写作时可使用first、second等词体现文章的层次性,同时要灵活运用一些情态动词及提建议的句型。
参考范文
How to Be a Good Student
As a teenager, we should behave well and try to be a good student. But how to be a good student? Here are my opinions.
First, we should listen to the teacher carefully in calss; we must study hard and get good grades. Next, we should be polite. It is good manners to greet others politely. We should obey the rules and queue for our turns. Third, we should be willing to help others. For example, we can help the elderly clean their rooms in our spare time; we can save our pocket money to help those who are in need. Fourth, we'd better live a green life. We can save wa-ter by taking short showers, and save enerrgy by turning off lights when necessary. But we can't drop litter ev-
erywhere. Moreover, we should take more exercise. It is important to keep healgthy.
All in all, being a good student is good for our society, and behaving well can also improve our personal quali-ties.Writing 9(2018北部湾经济区)
　　假如你是李华,是向阳中学九年级(1)班的一名学生,你的初中生活即将结束,请你以“My Sugges-tions”为题写一篇80词左右的短文,在学习、生活、校园活动、同学关系这几方面给七年级的新生提几点建议,并提出你的希望和祝愿。
写作要求:
1.内容必须包含所给的信息,可适当发挥,使行文连贯;
2.语篇完整,语句通顺,语法正确,书写规范;
3.文中不能出现除题目以外的个人信息,否则一律不予评分;
4.开头已给出,不计入总词数。
My Suggestions
My name is Li Hua. I'm a student in Class 1, Grade 9 in Xiangyang Middle School.?? ??
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写作要点
本文要求学生以“My Suggestions”为题写一篇文章。写作过程中注意时态的选用。全篇应以一般现在时为主,在最后表达希望和祝愿时可用一般将来时。
参考范文
My Suggestions
My name is Li Hua. I'm a student in Class 1, Grade 9 in Xiangyang Middle School. Welcome to our school. When you come to the middle school, you will have more subjects to learn, so it is important to have good learn-ing habits first. Besides, reading more books is also helpful for your study. At the same time, you'd better do some exercise to keep healthy. And in order to make the school life more colorful, I suggest you should take part in more activities. It's necessary to get on well with your classmates. I hope that you will make great progress and have a wonderful life.Writing 10(2018玉林)
　　假如你叫李涛,是一名初中学生。你的英国笔友Tom很想了解中国优秀传统文化,恰好你校暑假将举办中国传统文化展(The Traditional Chinese Culture Fair)。请你给Tom写一封电子邮件,邀请他参加。
内容要点:1.展会目的:使更多人了解中国传统文化;
2.展会时间:2018年7月15日;
3.展会地点:学校艺术中心;
4.参会人员:全体师生、家长以及其他有兴趣的人;
5.展出内容:相关书籍、图片、录像。
参考词汇:(仅供参考)
要求:1.包括所有内容要点,不要逐句翻译,可以适当发挥。
2.80词左右,语句通顺,语法正确。(开头和结尾已给出,不计入总词数)
3.文中不得出现考生真实的姓名、地点和所在的学校名称。
Dear Tom,
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　　Looking forward to your coming!
Yours,
Li Tao答案
写作要点
本文要求写一封电子邮件邀请朋友来参加展会。文章时态以一般将来时为主,人称为第一人称。写作的要点应包含题目列出来的五点,但是不要逐条翻译,考生可根据要点内容进行描写,并适当发挥。
参考范文
Dear Tom,
How's it going? I would like to invite you to take part in The Traditional Chinese Culture Fair which will be held on 15th July in our school this summer holiday.
The Fair will be held in our school Art Center. And the purpose of this activity is to make more people learn about the traditional Chinese culture. All the teachers, students, parents and people who are interested in Chinese culture are all welcomed to join in. You will enjoy some books, pictures and videos that are related to Chinese culture. If you can come, I will be very happy.
Looking forward to your coming!Yours,
Li Tao
精彩语句
1.精美词汇
invite sb. to...邀请某人……;be interested in 对……感兴趣;be related to 与……有关系
2. 出彩结构
And the purpose of this activity is to make more people learn about the traditional Chinese culture.Writing 11(2018 梧州)
　　阳光中学校报的英语专刊就“中学生能否在学校使用智能手机(smartphone)的问题”向学生征稿。请你根据同学们的不同观点,写一篇征文,谈谈自己的看法。
要点提示:　　要求:1.文中必须包括上表的内容,可展开思路,适当发挥;
2.文中不能出现真实的校名、人名和其他真实信息;
3.词数不少于80(开头已给出,不计入总词数)。
Nowadays, smartphones are popular among students. Should they be allowed to use smartphones at school or not? Our students have different opinions.?? ?
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写作要点
本篇写作要点应该包含对于中学生能否在学校使用智能手机的这个问题,赞成的观点有哪些,反对的观点有哪些,并提出你自己的观点和建议,这三方面缺一不可。时态应该以一般现在时为主。
参考范文
Nowadays, smartphones are popular among students. Should they be allowed to use smartphones at school or not? Our students have different opinions.
Some students think they should use smartphones at school, because it is easy for them to keep in touch with their family members. Besides, they can use the phone to search for some useful information. And they can also use the phone to look up English words. However, other students don't agree with them. They think some stu-dents may use the phones to play games and it is not good for their study. What's worse, it is bad for their bod-ies, if they use the phone for a long time.In my opinion, I don't think students should use smartphones at school. We should put all our heart into study.
精彩语句
1.精美词汇
keep in touch with 和某人保持联系;search for 查找;agree with 同意;in my opinion 在我看来
2. 出彩结构
What's worse, it is bad for their bodies, if they use the phone for a long time.
We should put all our heart into study.Writing 12(2017梧州)
时间去哪了?这是一些中学生的烦恼。事实上,时间就在我们手里,关键是能否合理利用。
请根据所给内容要点,以“How to spend our time properly”为题写一篇英语短文,谈谈你的看法。
内容要点:
1.时间在自己的掌控中;
2.花充足时间在学习上(如:订学习计划、听课和完成作业等);
3.有个人爱好,但不能花太多时间;
4.适当交流,适当锻炼;
5.……
要求:
1.文中必须包括所给内容要点的1—5项,可展开思路,适当发挥;
2.文中不能出现真实的校名、人名和其他真实信息;
3.词数不少于80(开头已给出,不计入总词数)。提示词:
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How to spend our time properly
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写作要点
本篇为提纲式作文,要求学生以“How to spend our time properly”为题写一篇文章。文章时态以一般现在时为主,人称为第一人称。写作的要点为题目列出来的1—5项要点。学生可根据要点内容进行描写,并适当发挥。
参考范文
How to spend our time properly
Where has our time gone?We will say we are in control of time. But how can we spend our time properly?
First, we should spend enough time on study, such as making study plans, listening to the teachers carefully in class and finishing our homework on time. Second, every one of us has some personal hobbies. But we should do the hobby without taking much time. Third, we should have time to communicate with others properly. And we should take some time to play sports so that we can be healthy. Finally, we can also do some after-school ac-tivities in our spare time. It's good for our development.If so, I'm sure we will live a happier school life.
精彩语句
1.精美词汇
properly 恰当地;spend...on...在……上花费(时间/金钱);such as 比如;on time 按时;communicate with...与……交流
2.出彩结构
First, we should spend enough time on study, such as making study plans, listening to the teachers carefully in class and finishing our homework on time.
And we should take some time to play sports so that we can be healthy.
If so, I'm sure we will live a happier school life.Writing 13(2016 玉林、防城港、崇左)
在学校,一些同学不注意保护学校环境,使学校环境受到了损害。请你根据所给内容要点,以“Keep Our School Clean”为题用英语写一篇80词左右的短文。
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内容要点:1.学校环境越来越差。
2.随地吐痰和乱扔垃圾。
3.毁坏花草树木。
4.多植树,循环使用教材。5.保护学校环境。
参考词汇:(参考词汇仅供参考)
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要求:1.包括所有内容要点,不要逐句翻译,可以适当发挥。
2.语句通顺、语法正确。
3.文中不得出现考生真实的姓名、地点和所在的学校名称。
Keep Our School Clean
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写作要点
本文是叙述现象,提出建议类的文章。主要时态为一般现在时。写作内容分两部分:①叙述现象;②提出建议。文中可适当使用情态动词should来表达建议。
参考范文
Keep Our School Clean
Environment in our school has become worse and worse. Some schoolmates spit here and there and throw litter everywhere. Some even destroy the flowers, grass and trees. So we should plant more trees to make our school more beautiful. We should also reuse our textbooks and nothing is a waste.
As students, we are responsible for the environment of our school. We should do something to protect our envi-ronment. Everyone in our school should play a part in cleaning it up! We hope that our school will become cleaner and tidier.精彩语句
1.精美词汇
here and there 到处;be responsible for 对……负责
2.出彩结构
Environment in our school has become worse and worse.
We should do something to protect our environment.Writing 14(2016钦州)
假如你是李华,你校正在举行“最佳教师奖”评选活动,你代表班委会向学校推荐金老师,现请你根据以下内容要点给校长写一封推荐信。
内容要点:1.任教英语20年,热爱教学,努力工作;
2.课堂生动有趣,深受学生欢迎;
3.关心学生,帮助学生解决学习和生活困难;
4.善良,热心,工作之余照顾家庭,乐于助人;
5.师生互爱,相处融洽。
要求:
1.词数80左右(开头和结尾已给出,不计入总词数);
2.使用正确的时态,不要逐条翻译,可适当增加细节,使行文连贯;
3.文中不得出现真实姓名、地名和学校名称。
参考词汇:生动的 lively;关心 care for;热心的 warm-hearted;乐于做某事 be ready to do sth.;相处融洽 get on well with
Dear headmaster,
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Yours faithfully,
Li Hua答案
写作要点
本文属于应用文,写一封推荐信。主要时态为一般现在时。写作时可分为两部分:①金老师的优点 (内容要点的1—4);②金老师和学生的相处情况 (内容要点5)。
参考范文
Dear headmaster,
I would like to recommend my teacher Miss King for this year's Best Teacher Award.
Miss King has taught English for 20 years. She loves teaching and works hard at it. Her lessons are lively and in-teresting. We are active in her class. She is very popular with her students. She cares for her students. Whenever we have troubles in study and life, she always helps us in time. Miss King is kind and warm-hearted. At the same time, she takes good care of her family in her spare time, and she is always ready to help others. We students love Miss King so much, and we are getting on well with her. I think that Miss King should get the award. We look forward to hearing from you soon.
Yours faithfully,
Li Hua
精彩语句
1.精美词汇
be popular with 受……欢迎;care for 关心;in time 及时;get on well with 与……相处得好
2.出彩结构
Whenever we have troubles in study and life, she always helps us in time.
At the same time, she takes good care of her family in her spare time, and she is always ready to help others.Writing 15(2015南宁)
随着南宁国际知名度的逐步提高,越来越多东盟国家的学生想了解南宁中学生的校园生活。请你用英语写一篇小短文,简要介绍你们的校园生活。
写作要点:1.校园环境;
2.文体活动及英语课外活动;
3.学习或生活的感受。
写作要求:1.80词左右;
2.文中不得出现校名和人名;
3.写作要点齐全,紧扣要点,可适当发挥。
Our School Life
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写作要点
1.本文主体时态用一般现在时;
2.内容要点要齐全,要有自己的感受;
3.语义连贯,语句通顺,不能透露学校、姓名等任何个人信息。
参考范文
Our School Life
In our school,there are six buildings. Many students like reading in the library.In the beautiful school,we have many colorful after-class activities.We have a sports meeting and an art festival every year,and we are excited about them.We also have some special English activities,such as the speaking competition,the singing competi-tion and so on. If you like,you can join some clubs as well. There you can experience something new.I have learned a lot.And I have formed close friendships with the teachers and friends.I'll never forget them.
Welcome to our school!I'm sure you'll enjoy the school life here!精彩语句
1.精美词汇
such as 例如;as well 也
2.出彩结构
If you like, you can join some clubs as well.
And I have formed close friendships with the teachers and friends.Writing 16(2015柳州)
平时你的父母工作很忙,你经常帮家里做家务。目前学校正在开展“我分担,我快乐”为主题的征文活动。请你根据表格中的提示信息,用英语写一篇70词左右的短文投稿。　　参考词汇:忙于某事(be busy with...)　帮助做家务(help sb. do the housework)　做饭(cook dinner)　洗碗(wash the dishes)　打扫房间(clean the room)　洗衣服(wash the clothes)　职责(duty)　分担(share)
要求:1.短文要包含所有的提示信息,可适当发挥。
2.短文开头部分已给出,不计入总词数。
3.文中不得出现真实的人名与校名。
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写作要点
1.试题分析:本题要求按照提示,假设父母工作忙,自己经常帮家里做家务,并以“我分担,我快乐”为主题写一份征文稿件。要写出自己常做的一些家务,同时写出自己虽累尤乐的感受,并表达出把分担家务当作自己的职责的观点。短文用一般现在时态,用第一人称进行写作。
2.写作框架:
第一部分:简要介绍自己的家;
第二部分:先写自己怎样帮忙做家务,再写做家务的感受及自己的观点;
第三部分:点明主题“我分担,我快乐”。
参考范文
There are three members in my family.
My parents are both so busy with their work that they have little time to do housework. So I often help them do the housework at home. I often help cook dinner, wash the dishes, clean the room and wash the clothes when I am free. Doing housework is not easy and I am tired sometimes. But I always feel happy when I see everything is tidy and clean in my house. My parents often praise me but I usually tell them that it is my duty to share housework at home.
The more housework I share, the happier I am.
精彩语句
1.精美词汇
so...that...如此……以至于……
2.出彩结构
The more housework I share, the happier I am.(the+比较级,the +比较级: 越……越……)Writing 1(2019北京)
　　从下面两个题目中任选一题,根据中文和英文提示,完成一篇不少于50词的文段写作。文中已给出内容不计入总词数。所给提示词语仅供选用。请不要写出你的校名和姓名。
题目①
假如你是李华,你们学校正在开展“安全月”宣传活动,倡议大家制作关于安全教育的主题海报,你们班交换生Peter给你发邮件询问相关事情。请用英语回复一封邮件,告诉他海报上交的时间,并分享你设计海报的一些想法。
提示词语:design, safety rule, careful, protect, picture
提示问题:●When should you hand in the poster?
●What would you like to share with Peter about designing the poster?B组　2015—2019年全国中考题组Dear Peter,
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If there is anything more that I can help with, please let me know.
Yours,
Li Hua
题目②
自律,即自我约束,是自我提升的一种途径,有助于我们成长,促使我们不断前行。
某英文网站正在开展以“自律”为主题的征文活动。假如你是李华,请用英语写一篇短文投稿,谈谈为了增强自律意识,你做过什么,以及这样做给你带来的好处。
提示词语:self-disciplined(自律的), plan, goal, habit, improve
提示问题:●What did you do to be self-disciplined?●What benefits have you got from doing so?
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写作要点
题目①
1.人称:以第一人称为主。
2.时态:以一般现在时为主。
3.要点:1)海报上交的时间;
2)分享设计海报的想法。
题目②
1.人称:以第一人称为主。
2.时态:以一般过去时为主。
3.要点:1)列出你为了增强自律意识做过的事情;
2)自己已经获得的益处。参考范文
题目①
Dear Peter,
I'm glad to receive your email. We need to hand in the poster by next Monday. Now, I'd like to share some ideas on how I will design my poster.
The main part is about safety rules for traffic. For example, be careful when crossing the street. Wait till the traf-fic lights turn green.
To make my poster more attractive, I plan to add several pictures to it. Hope my ideas will be helpful.
If there is anything more that I can help with, please let me know.
Yours,
Li Hua题目②
Self-discipline plays an important role in our life. To be self-disciplined, I started from doing simple things. I tried to form the habits of getting up early and reading books for 30 minutes every day. Though it was hard at the
beginning, I pushed myself hard. After about three weeks, I got into the habits.
By doing so, I have improved myself. I am now more energetic and have a wider understanding of the world through reading.
精彩语句????
题目①
1.精美词汇
hand in上交;attractive adj.好看的,美观的
2.出彩结构Now, I'd like to share some ideas on how I will design my poster.(how引导宾语从句)
题目②
1.精美词汇
try to do sth.尽力做某事;push oneself hard逼迫自己;energetic adj.精力充沛的
2.出彩结构
Though it was hard at the beginning, I pushed myself hard. (though引导让步状语从句)Writing 2(2019天津)
　　假如你是晨光中学的学生李华,平时坚持用英语写日记。请根据以下要点,描述你星期三放学乘地铁回家路上看到的事情,并表达自己的想法。
(1)一个男孩不舒服,开始呕吐,一位穿着漂亮的女士帮着擦拭地面,男孩表达感谢。
(2)地铁到站,有人挤向座位,有人下不去车,有人因此争吵。
(3)你认为……
参考词汇:开始呕吐　　begin to vomit
挤向座位　　push towards the seat
争吵　　have a quarrel
要求:
(1)词数:80~100个。
(2)日记格式和开头已给出,不计入总词数。
(3)要点齐全,行文连贯,可适当发挥。Wednesday
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1.时态以一般过去时为主。
2.给出的要点和参考词汇要全部用上。
3.注意表达自己的观点时,要传递正能量,态度要明确。
参考范文
Wednesday
When I took the underground back home after school, I noticed a boy who looked uncomfortable, and then he began to vomit. But people around him just looked at him. Nobody wanted to help him. Just then, a beautifully dressed woman helped him scrub the floor, and the boy thanked her very much.
When the underground arrived, some people pushed towards the seat, some people couldn't get off, and some people had a quarrel about it.
After seeing this, I think people should help each other. And we should obey some rules. Only in this way will our world become better and better.Writing 3(2019重庆)
　　你正在组织一项暑假期间到山区为期一周的游学和帮扶活动。作为发起人,请你写一篇发言稿,在你校“英语时光”广播中号召更多的同学参加。
要求:
1.80—120词,开头和结尾已给出,不计入总词数;
2.文中不能出现自己的姓名和所在学校的名称。
参考信息:
1.活动缘由(孤独、帮扶、游学……);
2.活动构想(时间、地点、内容……);
3.……
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写作要点
1.体裁:应用文。
2.人称:主体人称为第一人称和第三人称。
3.时态:以一般现在时态为主。
4.要点:
1)活动缘由(孤独、帮扶、游学……);
2)活动构想(时间、地点、内容……);
3)……
参考范文
Hello, everybody. I am planning a summer trip called “Be a Kid in the Mountains”. It will provide us with a meaningful week staying with the students in the mountains.
As many of their parents leave for the city development, these students might feel lonely and some may even find it hard to go on studying. So we can bring them some school things like books and pens for their study, and prepare some interesting stories to share. In the daytime, we can go hiking and do some teamwork. In the evening, we can do such activities as popular games and group dance around the fire.
Isn't that exciting? Come and join us. Let's be “a kid in the mountains”. I believe it will bring sunshine to the mountains as well as more confidence to us.
Thank you!
精彩语句????
1.精美词汇
meaningful adj.有意义的;development n.发展;prepare v.准备;share v.分享;as well as也,和……一样
2.出彩结构
I believe it will bring sunshine to the mountains as well as more confidence to us. (I believe (that)...结构;as well as连接两个并列成分)Writing 4(2019陕西)
　　即将毕业的你,将如何处理初中阶段的各种书籍和笔记呢?假如你是李华,请根据以下提示, 给学校英文报写一封电子邮件,分享你处理这些书籍和笔记的计划与理由。
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要求:1.参考提示语,可适当发挥;
2.语句通顺,意思连贯,书写工整;3.文章不得出现任何真实信息(姓名、校名和地名等);
4.词数:不少于70词。(开头和结尾已给出,但不计入总词数)
Dear Editor,
My name is Li Hua. I'm going to graduate soon. I'd like to share some ideas about how to deal with my books and notebooks.
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These are my ideas. I hope they can help.
Yours,
Li Hua答案
写作要点
1.文体:本文是一篇应用文。
2.时态:一般将来时态和一般现在时态。
3.人称:以第一人称为主。
4.要点:处理初中阶段的各种书籍和笔记的计划与理由。
参考范文
Dear Editor,
My name is Li Hua. I'm going to graduate soon. I'd like to share some ideas about how to deal with my books and notebooks.
First of all, I will put all my books into different kinds. Secondly, I am going to give my textbooks to my younger cousins. In this way, they can study at home during the coming summer vacation. Besides, I want to have a book sale so that children can buy the picture books at low prices. What's more, I decide to keep the notebooks for myself. They bring me lots of sweet memories. Finally, the used paper will be taken to the waste center.
These are my ideas. I hope they can help.
Yours,
Li Hua
精彩语句????
1.精美词汇
first of all 首先;put...into different kinds 把……分成不同种类;in this way 这样,用这种方法;what's more 另外
2.出彩结构
Besides, I want to have a book sale so that children can buy the picture books at low prices.(so that引导目的状语从句)Writing 5(2019安徽)
　　假定你是李华,你的英国笔友Mike最近因视力减退而感到不安,请你用英文给他写封电子邮件,谈谈你在保护视力方面的一些做法。要点如下:
1.经常做户外活动;
2.很少用电子产品;
3.坚持做眼保健操;
4.……
注意:1.词数80~100;
2.可适当增加细节,以使行文连贯;
3.文中不能出现与本人相关的信息;
4.开头和结尾已为你写好,不计入总词数。
Dear Mike,
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Li Hua答案
写作要点
1.视力减退有多种原因。有运动量减少,体质下降;有饮食不当,营养不良;有使用电子产品过度对视力造成伤害等。可根据各条提出建议并解释原因。
2.以第一人称为主,一般现在时态为主。
参考范文
Dear Mike,
I'm sorry to learn that your eyesight is getting weaker. I'd like to share with you some ways of protecting eye-sight in my daily life.
At school, I often go out of the classroom to play with my classmates or do physical exercise during the breaks. In my free time, I also try hard to avoid using the mobile phone or computer. You know, the light they give off is harmful to our eyes. Besides, doing eye exercises plays an important role in relaxing my tired eyes. Lastly, I usually have my eyes examined every term to make sure my eyes stay healthy.I hope you'll find my ways helpful.
Yours,
Li Hua
精彩语句????
1.精美词汇
do physical exercise进行体育锻炼;avoid using the mobile phone避免使用手机
2.出彩结构
Lastly, I usually have my eyes examined every term to make sure my eyes stay healthy.(to make sure...为动词不定式短语,作目的状语)Writing 6(2019江苏苏州)
　　假定你是苏华,最近你的澳大利亚笔友Nathan犯了一些错误,倍感懊恼,写了一封邮件向你诉说。为帮助他排解困惑,请你根据他的邮件内容并结合自身经历,用英语回信开导他。注意:1.词数90左右,开头和结尾已经写好,不计入总词数;
2.回复需包括所有要点,可适当发挥,使短文连贯、通顺;
3.文中不得提及真实的人名、校名等相关信息。
Dear Nathan,
I'm sorry to know that you are not happy these days.
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Best wishes,Su Hua答案
写作要点
1.审题:这是一篇应用文。注意人称的使用,主体时态为一般现在时和一般过去时。
2.确定要点:
1)同意(或不同意)每个人都会犯错;
2)描述自己犯过的一个错误;
3)如何处理自己的问题;
4)从错误中学到了什么。
参考范文
Dear Nathan,
I'm sorry to know that you are not happy these days. You needn't worry too much. It's true that everyone makes mistakes.
Take me, for example. One day, I spent so much time playing football with my friends that I forgot to do my homework. I said sorry to my teacher and finished it the next day. I found it important to achieve a balance be-tween schoolwork and hobbies.
It doesn't matter whether or not you make mistakes. What matters most is to correct and learn from them. In this way, others will understand you. Then you will feel much better.
I hope my experience can help you out.
Best wishes,
Su Hua
精彩语句????
1.精美词汇
needn't do 不需要做……;achieve v.获得;matter v.要紧;correct v.改正;in this way用这种方法
2.出彩结构:
I spent so much time playing football with my friends that I forgot to do my homework.(so...that...引导结果状语从句)It doesn't matter whether or not you make mistakes. (whether引导宾语从句)
What matters most is to correct and learn from them.(What matters most为主语从句,表语部分是to correct and learn from them)Writing 7(2019湖南长沙)
假如你是李华,你们班输了上周的篮球赛。Henry认为是他未能投进最后一球所造成的,有的队友也因此而责怪他。请你写一封英文邮件安慰他,谈谈你对此事的看法,并就如何取得队友的理解提出建议。
要求:(1)80词左右(开头已给出,不计入总词数);
(2)可适当增加细节,以使行文连贯;
(3)信中不得出现真实人名和校名。
Dear Henry,
I learned that you are feeling sorry and upset because of losing the basketball game...
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写作要点
1.本文为一封邮件。主体时态应该为一般现在时。人称以第二人称为主。
2.按题目要求将要点进行呈现,其中建议应不少于两点。
参考范文
Dear Henry,
I learned that you are feeling sorry and upset because of losing the basketball game. It's not easy being in your situation, and it's normal to have these feelings. Anyway, don't be too hard on yourself.
You know, basketball is about team effort. It's never just one person's fault. What matters is that you should learn from the games as well as your mistakes. Besides, you need to think about how you can do better next time.
As a whole, teammates should support and believe in each other. Why don't you sit down and communicate with them? And you could promise that you will spare no effort to better your skills. If all of you pull together, you're sure to win the next one.
Best wishes!
Yours,
Li Hua
精彩语句????
1.精美词汇
be hard on sb.严厉对待某人;pull together 齐心协力
2.出彩结构
If all of you pull together, you're sure to win the next one.(if引导条件状语从句)Writing 8(2019湖南衡阳)
　　根据一项新的调查,学生安全已经成为一个大的问题。假设你是一名老师,对学生进行以“自我保护”为主题的消防安全教育,请以“How to Protect Yourself in a Fire”为题,提出你的建议。
要求:1.短文中不得出现真实的人名和地名。
2.书写工整,语句通顺、连贯,词数不少于80。
参考词汇:cover v.遮盖　take the lift乘坐电梯　exit n.出口　towel n.毛巾　shut off切断
How to Protect Yourself in a Fire
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写作要点
　　1.本文为应用文,注意以老师的身份来写。
2.时态以一般现在时为主。
3.围绕“消防安全”和“自我保护”分条给出建议。
参考范文
How to Protect Yourself in a Fire
Nowadays, a growing number of fire accidents have drawn our attention. If we are caught in a fire, what can we do to protect ourselves? Here comes my advice.
First and foremost, you should shut off the electricity in the house in case you could get hurt by it. What's more, it is of great value to learn how to get out of the fire by yourselves. You'd better first find out a wet towel to cover the mouth and the nose so that you won't breathe in much smoke on the way out. Before you stay indoors, please make sure where the exit is. And always remember never try to take the lift to the exit when you are in a fire.
These are my suggestions for everybody in case of any fire accident. Anyway, wish good luck will always be with you!Writing 9(2019湖北武汉)
　　学校英语社团正在组织题为“My Family”的征文活动。假如你是李明,请根据以下内容提示用英语完成征文。
内容要点如下:
1.三口之家,家庭幸福,邻里和睦;
2.父母为教师,在校深受欢迎;
3.分担家务,周末户外活动;
4.相互陪伴,经常交流,良好家规助我成长;
5.请补充说明一至两点与家庭相关的情况。
注意:
1.文中不得透露个人姓名和学校名称;
2.词数:60—80;
3.内容连贯,不要逐条翻译;4.标题和开头已给出,不计入总词数。
参考词汇:popular adj.受欢迎的;activity n.活动;rule n.规矩
My Family
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写作要点
一、体裁:说明文。
二、要点齐全:
1.三口之家,家庭幸福,邻里和睦;
2.父母为教师,在校受欢迎;
3.分担家务,周末户外活动;
4.相互陪伴,经常交流,良好家规助我成长;
5.一至两点与家庭相关的情况。
三、时态:一般现在时态。
参考范文
My Family
I'm Li Ming. I have a happy family, and there are three people in my family. We get on well with our neighbors. My parents are teachers, who are popular in school, and they are loved by their students. They share the house-work at home and we do outdoor activities on weekends. I think it's important to spend time and communicate with family members. I have strict family rules at home. They're so important that they can help me grow up well. We all like doing sports, like basketball and volleyball.
We love each other. What a happy family I have! What about you?
精彩语句????
1.精美词汇
get on well with和……相处融洽;be popular (with sb.)受(某人)欢迎的
2.出彩结构
I think it's important to spend time and communicate with family members.(本句话是一个含有宾语从句的主从复合句,it作形式主语,动词不定式是真正的主语)Writing 10(2019湖北黄冈)
　　同学们,在初中三年的英语学习中,我们从课本中学习了有关“Family”、“Be polite to sb.”、“Pro-tecting the environment”、“Volunteering”等话题和功能。假定你是李磊,请参考这些话题和功能,依据以下要点提示,写一篇题为“I'm Proud of My Family”的英语短文,向校报投稿,讲述你的家庭故事。
要点提示:1.家人相亲相爱,努力学习、工作;
2.邻里和睦,礼貌待人;
3.爱护环境,从我做起;
4.积极参加志愿活动,帮助贫困儿童。
写作要求:1.词数90左右(短文的开头已经给出,不计入总词数);
2.根据要点提示,适当发挥;
3.短文中不得出现真实的姓名及校名。
参考词汇:work hard;be friendly to each other;get on well with;protect the environment;be volunteers
I'm Proud of My FamilyMy name is Li Lei. I have a happy family. There are four people in my family: my parents, my sister and I.
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写作要点
1.本篇是记叙文;
2.时态:一般现在时;
3.写作的主要内容:平日里家人会经常做的事情,如:相亲相爱,努力学习、工作;礼貌待人;爱护环境;参加志愿活动等。
参考范文
I'm Proud of My Family
My name is Li Lei. I have a happy family. There are four people in my family: my parents, my sister and I.
My family love each other. (My parents love us and we love our parents.)My parents both work hard. My sister and I study hard at school, too.
My family are kind and friendly to our neighbors. We are all polite to each other. We get on well with each other.My family try our best to protect the environment in our daily life. My mom and my sister usually bring a bag to go shopping. My father is used to taking the bus to work. I never order takeaway food.
My family are glad to be volunteers at any time. My parents often help the children in poor areas.(My sister helps in the school library twice a week.)Sometimes I read newspapers to the old people.
What a happy family! I'm proud of my family!
精彩语句????
1.精美词汇
work/study hard努力工作/学习;get on well with sb.和某人相处融洽;try one's best to do sth.尽某人最大努力做某事;be used to doing sth.习惯于做某事
2.出彩结构
My family try our best to protect the environment in our daily life.
My family are glad to be volunteers at any time. (be glad to do sth.乐于做某事)Writing 11(2019内蒙古包头)
　　假定你是李华,请给你的笔友Alan写封邮件,告诉他今年暑假你将去他所在的城市游玩,并制订了旅行计划。你想征求他的意见,同时询问他是否可以接机。
邮件还应包括以下内容:注意:1.词数90左右,开头和结尾已经写好,不计入总词数;
2.可适当增加细节,以使行文连贯;
3.文中不得出现反映考生信息的真实人名、地名等内容。
Dear Alan,
How is it going?
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Looking forward to your reply.
Yours,Li Hua答案
写作要点
1.本文为一封邮件。注意人称和时态。
2.写作要点分解:(1)告诉Alan你将去他所在的城市游玩;(2)陈述你的旅行计划,并征求他的意见;(3)询问是否可以接机。
3.注意行文的流畅性和语法的正确性。
参考范文
Dear Alan,
How is it going?
I'm thinking of taking a trip to your city this summer vacation. I wonder if you will meet me at the airport at 10:30 am, July 2, since it is my first visit there.
Besides, I've made a travel plan, including enjoying music at a concert, going camping and visiting some places of interest. I've heard that there are some amazing sights in your city! Would you please give me some advice? Either traveling by bike or by bus would suit me fine. It's environmentally friendly. Do you have any plans for the coming vacation?
Looking forward to your reply.
Yours,
Li Hua
精彩语句????
1.精美词汇
besides adv.除……之外;including prep.包括;place of in