(共19张PPT)
Unit 10
If you go to the party, you'll have a great time!
Writing
have too many tests and exams
have too much homework
have too many after-school classes
Parents fight a lot
argue with parents
Parents are too busy to have time for their children.
have no close friends
can't get enough exercise
Imagine you have one of the problems .Try to describe it in details.
For example,what problems may it cause if you have too much homework every day?
My biggest problem is that I have too much homework to do every day.
In order to finish my homework , I usually have to stay up late so I don't get enough sleep.
And I can't find any time to do what I like .
I feel so tired and sleepy that I can't follow the teachers in class.
Para.1 _________________
Para.2 _____________________
Para. 3 ____________________
self-introduction and the problem
details about the problem
asking for advice
文章中可借鉴使用的短语：
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be crazy about
feel stressed and angry
from time to time
spend… on …
when to stop
what to do
how to solve it
文章中可借鉴使用的语句
复合句：
it 作形式主语：
表达烦恼的语句：__________________________
征询建议的语句：__________________________
I really don't know why they are so strict.
I believe it is important for us to spend some time on our hobbies.
I wish I could have my parents' support.
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It is important for us to spend some time on our hobbies.
Is it bad to stay out late to play
football?
I really don't know what to do .
Can you offer me some suggestions?
八年级的中学生, Millie，兴趣广泛，目前最酷好画画，但因为功课繁多，学习任务重找不到时间。而且她父母认为画画浪费时间，她应该努力学习，上好的高中，好的大学。假如你是Millie，写一封信给你的笔友Alice，倾诉你的烦恼并征求她的建议。
要求：1. 内容完整，语句连贯，语法准确；
2. 词数70个左右。
Check and correct your writing according to the form below.
(自评评价量表)
1. Is there a topic sentence?
2. Did you use the right tense?
3. Are there any spelling or grammatical mistakes?
4. Is your handwriting good?
项目 标准 评价
结构（3分） 段落合理（2分）
衔接自然（1分）
内容（8分） 要点全面（6分）
拓展合理（2分）
语言（3分） 词汇丰富（1分）
句法正确，语言优美（2分）
卷面（1分） 书写工整（1分）
你的习作
要点是否齐全？
是否注意了人称、时态、体裁？
是否用到了连接词？
是否用到好词、好句？
书写是否规范、漂亮？
Homework
1. Rewrite a better composition.
2. Exchange and enjoy your group
members’ compositions.
Worksheet for:
Unit 10 If you go to the party, you’ll have a great time?
话题：Problems and solutions
School Class Name Date
一、本课学习目标
1．能力目标
（1）正确提出个人遇到的问题，并请求帮助；
（2）明确书信的写作要求，向他人寻求帮助，同时完成相应的写作任务。
2．情感目标
（1）学会向他人倾述烦恼，主动寻求帮助；
（2）能积极参与合作学习，学会分享互助。
二、语料箱
▲词块：
动词词块：keep...to oneself, solve the problem, ask...for help, advise...to do..., get advise from, do nothing, talk to..., make mistakes, cut...in half, run away from..., get solutions
名词词块：careless mistakes, lots of worries, the worst thing, serious problems, useful advice
▲句型：
1. If you do, you’ll be sorry.
2. If people have problems, they should keep them to themselves.
3. They should get advise from an expert.
4. The worst thing is to do nothing.
5. It is best not to run away from your problems.
6. Sharing a problem is like cutting it in half.
▲名言、谚语、警句:
1. Find in helping others is a virtue. 助人为乐是一种美德。
2. When we lift people, we are likewise lifted. 赠人玫瑰，手有余香.
写作前任务
快速阅读短文，了解文章框架结构。
Simon has a problem. He wrote to a famous youth worker about his problem. Here is his letter.
Dear Mr. Known,
My name is Simon. I am a Grade 9 student and I am crazy about football! I love watching football, reading about football, and of course, playing football. However, my love of football has become a big problem. I want to know how to solve it.
I always play football with my friends at school or in the park after school. We like staying out late to play football. Very often, we play for three hours and we just forget when to stop. My parents don’t like this and ask me to come home before 6 p.m. I really don’t understand why they are so strict. I feel stressed and angry from time to time. I believe it is important for us to spend some time on our hobbies. This can help us relax and make our lives colourful.I wish I could have my parents’ support.
Is it bad to stay out late to play football? Should I spend less time on it? I really don’t know what to do. Can you offer me some suggestions? They would be most valuable. I hope to hear from you soon.
1. How many paragraphs are there in this passage?
2. What is each paragraph about?
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（二）细读短文， 关注文章中的好词好句。
圈出文章中可借鉴使用的短语：
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画出文章中可借鉴使用的语句：
复合句：
______________________________________________________
______________________________________________________
______________________________________________________
it 作形式主语：
_______________________________________________________
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表达烦恼的语句：_____________________________________
征询建议的语句：_____________________________________
四、写作任务
八年级的中学生, Millie，兴趣广泛，目前最酷好画画，但因为功课繁多，学习任务重找不到时间。而且她父母认为画画浪费时间，她应该努力学习，上好的高中，好的大学。假如你是Millie，写一封信给你的笔友Alice，倾诉你的烦恼并征求她的建议。
要求：1. 内容完整，语句连贯，语法准确；2. 词数70个左右。
写作后任务
1. Self-check
Check and correct your writing according to the form below.
1. Is there a topic sentence and an ending?
2. Did you use the right tense?
3. Are there any spelling or grammatical mistakes?
4. Is your handwriting good?
6. Peer-evaluation
项目 标准 自我评价 同伴评价 教师评价
结构（3分） 段落合理 （2 分）
衔接自然 ( 1分)
内容（8分） 要点全面（6分）
拓展合理 ( 2分)
语言（3分） 词汇丰富 (1 分)
句法正确 ，语言优美( 2分)
卷面（1分） 书写工整（ 1分）
六、总结反思 When we write about our problems, we must be sure that we know the following writing skills very well. Now ask yourself the following questions.
1、要点是否齐全？
2、是否注意了人称、时态、体裁？
3、是否用到了连接词？
4、是否用到好词、好句？
5、书写是否规范、漂亮？
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