人教版英语初中九年级上册知识讲解，巩固练习（教学资料，补习资料）： Unit 2 I think that mooncakes are delicious! 第4课时Writing（含答案）

重点
【写作模板】
【常用表达】
中考英语作文满分必备万能句
1. It goes without saying that... /(It is) needless to say (that).../ It is obvious that...不用说……
?It goes without saying that it pays to keep early hours.不用说早睡早起是值得的。
2. Among various kinds of.../ Of all the... 在各种……之中
?Among various kinds of sports, I like jogging in particular. 在各种运动中我尤其喜欢慢跑。
3. In my opinion/To my mind/ As far as I am concerned/ I am of the opinion that... 就我的看法……; 我认为……
?In my opinion, playing video games not only takes much time but is also harmful to health. 就我的看法打电动玩具既花费时间也有害健康。
4. With the increase/growth of the population... 随着人口的增加……
With the advance of science and technology... 随着科技的进步……
?With the rapid development of Taiwan’s economy, a lot of social problems have come to pass. 随着台湾经济的快速发展许多社会问题产生了。
5. It is necessary (for sb.) to do / that... ……是必要的
It is important/essential (for sb.) to do / that... ……是重要的
It is proper (for sb.) to do / that... ……是适当的
It is urgent (for sb.) to do / that... ……是紧急的
?It is proper for us to keep the public places clean. = It is proper that we (should) keep the public places clean.我们应当保持公共场所的清洁。
6. spend... on sth. / doing sth.花费
?We shouldn’t spend too much time on something we aren’t interested in. 我们不应该在我们不感兴趣的事情上花太多的时间。
7. how引导的感叹句
?At least it will prove how honest you are. 那至少可以证明你很诚实。
8. 状语从句If you don’t..., you’ll... 如果你不……，你就会……；so... that... 如此……，以至于……
?If you don’t keep working hard, you’ll lose the chance. 如果你不坚持努力工作，你就会失去这次机会。
?At that moment, I was so upset that I wanted to give up. 当时，我非常伤心，最后都想放弃了。
9. 宾语从句
I think / I don’t think that... 我认为…… / 我认为……不
I wonder whether...我想知道是否……
?He doesn’t think I should stop him joining the club. 他认为我不应该阻止他参加这个俱乐部。
10. Since + 过去式，Since + 现在完成式
?Since he went to senior high school, he has worked very hard.自从他上高中，他就一直很用功。
【典例】
（一）
假如你叫李华，请根据下面海报的内容给你的外籍老师Mr. Hunt发一封电子邮件，邀请他来参加你校举办的元宵节晚会。
时间：2月27日星期六下午6点
活动及地点：
◆吃元宵(学校餐厅)
◆观看舞狮表演(学校餐厅)
◆看灯展、猜谜语(riddle)(操场)
◆欣赏音乐、舞蹈(操场)
要求：1. 电子邮件须包含提示内容，可适当增加细节；
2. 词数80左右，电子邮件的格式、开头和结尾已给出，但不计入总词数。
Dear Mr. Hunt,
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Yours,
Li Hua
【佳作展示】
Dear Mr. Hunt,
How are you doing? You said you like Chinese Lantern Festival. There will be a Lantern Festival party in our school dining hall at 6 p. m. on Saturday, February 27 th. At the party, we will eat some sweet dumplings first. Then we will watch the wonderful lion dance on TV. At 8 p. m. we will go outside to watch lantern shows and guess the answers to the lantern riddles. The lanterns are in different colors and shapes. From 10 p. m. to 11 p. m. we will enjoy music and dance. Would you like to join us? You’ll have a great time. Best wishes!
Yours,
Li Hua
【名师点评】
这是一篇材料作文，题中提示内容就是本文的写作要点。这些要点构成写作的基本框架。我们要做的就是用正确的英语把要点表达出来，并适当发挥想象说出自己的观点。动笔前要认真阅读材料，不要遗漏要点，并适当发挥。根据材料内容可知本文主要是用一般将来时态来写，要注意主谓一致等问题。写作中要适当使用连词，注意上下文联系紧密，符合逻辑关系。
【写作要点】
首先认真审题，看清题目中的要求和要点；然后根据提示内容，列出写作要点及每个要点中可能要用到的表达；然后紧扣要点，动笔写作，在写作过程中，要注意句与句、段与段之间的过渡，必要时可适当运用表示转折、因果、并列、比较等关系的连词，使文章过渡平稳，自然流畅；最后要细心复核检查，确保正确无误。
（二）
（2018 ? 辽宁辽阳首山镇第二初级中学九年级10月月考）假如你叫王雷，请给你的笔友Lucy写封信，介绍一下你最喜欢的节日——春节。注意书信的格式。（80词左右）
要点：1. When is Spring Festival?
2. When do people eat?
3. What do people do?
4. Why do you like it so much?
【写作方法】＂总分总法＂写介绍节日的文章
1. 总体介绍某一节日。
2. 具体介绍与这一节日相关的活动等内容。
3. 总结全文并谈谈感受。
【参考词汇和句式】
单词
relative, present, earn
短语
lucky money, ask sb. to do sth., give back to
句式
if引导的条件状语从句







【佳作展示】
Spring Festival begins on the first day of the first month.
Spring Festival is an excellent day for every Chinese, especially for children. During the festival, relatives go to visit each other and give presents to each other. Then it’s the happy moment for children, children are given some lucky money. But I’m not a child any longer. I want to make the festival a little bit different. I plan to have a different day. I’m going to sell some toys in the flower market. I will ask my friends to join me. If I earn some money, I’ll buy some presents for my parents. Well, it’s my turn to give back to my parents for their love.
基础训练
（一）
假如你是李磊，你的美国笔友Tom对中国传统文化很感兴趣。请你用英语给他写一 封80词左右的电子邮件，介绍一或两个中国传统节日，如春节(Spring Festival)、中秋节(Mid-autumn Festival)等。
要求：l. 所给词不计人总词数。
2. 语句通顺，表达准确，内容连贯。
3. 文中不能出现真实校名、姓名等相关信息。
参考词汇：traditional传统的；decorate装饰。
Dear Tom,
I’m very glad to tell you something about ________________________________________________________
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Yours,
Li Lei
（二）
如今，很多外国人对中国的春节很感兴趣。他们都想了解更多有关春节的情况。请你写一篇小短文，简单介绍春节及中国人是如何过春节的。短文应包括以下要点：
1. 春节在中国的地位；
2. 人们的活动(节前、除夕、节日期间)；
3. 你对春节的态度。
注意：1. 词数100左右；
2. 可适当发挥使行文连贯。
参考词汇：阴历 lunar year 春节联欢晚会Spring Festival Gala
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参考答案
（一）
Dear Tom,
I’m very glad to tell you something about the Spring Festival. It’s a traditional festival in China. It comes in winter.
It’s time to get new. We usually clean and decorate our house carefully before it comes. I always help my mother clean the windows and wash the clothes. We put on chunlian on the doors and chuanghua on the windows.
It’s time to get together. Everyone goes home to get together with their families, though someone is far away from home. They have a big dinner together that day. They usually visit their relatives and friends and say ＂Happy new year＂ to them. When the kids greet their grandparents, they can get lucky money.
Yours,
Li Lei
【名师点评】
【写作亮点】
这篇文章语言规范，叙事清楚，词汇及时态运用正确，能够把提示的内容叙述清楚，语句通顺，意思连贯是一篇不错的文章。
（二）
【名师点评】
本文采用＂总分总＂的写作方法，介绍了春节的基本情况。先写出所介绍节日——春节的重要性，然后介绍春节前以及春节期间人们的活动，最后总结全文并抒发对春节的感受。
本文的添彩点：
①the most important为最高级形式，表明了春节的地位。
②通过have fun表达春节期间人们的喜悦心情。