人教版英语初中九年级上册知识讲解，巩固练习（教学资料，补习资料）：Unit 5 What are the shirts made of?第4课时Writing（含答案）

重点
如何写好物品描写类文章
【写作技巧】＂三步法＂介绍你所喜欢的物品的文章
一、首先介绍喜欢的物品是什么
二、然后具体介绍此物品的相关信息(如：材料、产地等)
三、总结收尾
【典例】
一种名为＂丽影＂的数码（digital）照相机，现准备打入国际市场，请你用英语为该产品写一份广告推荐书。
相关资料：产地：中国上海。
生产厂家：乐达照相机厂（生产相机史50余年）。
性能特点：款式新颖、多样；体积小，重量轻，操作方便，可作多用途。
价格：是同类新产品价格的70%。
注意：1. 本题是写一篇新产品介绍的推荐书。
2. 词数80左右。
备注：介绍是一种说明书，也是一种常见的应用文。产品介绍除了说明性和广告性外还应有较强的推荐性。语言要简练，有吸引力和趣味性。要突出写产品的特色和优点。
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【佳作展示】
Come to buy this wonderful camera. The Liying Digital Camera is a newcomer in the camera family. It is made in Shanghai, China, by Leda Camera Factory, which has been making cameras for 50 years and enjoys rich experience and good fame for its high quality. Liying Camera attracts people by its modern and various models and also, it is small in size and light in weight, so you’ll feel it very convenient and easy to use. What’s more, it can be used for different purposes, for example, you can use it for art or for ordinary life purpose. As for the price, it is surprisingly low. It costs only 70% of that of the same kind of other cameras.
Why wait?
基础训练
（一）
请以＂我的电脑＂为题，写一篇英语短文。
要求：1. 主题鲜明、语句通顺、意思连贯、适当发挥、拼写正确、书写工整。
2. 词数80左右。
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（二）
大家都有自己喜欢的东西。请根据以下提示，介绍一下你所喜欢的物品。词数不少于80。
内容须包括：
1．物品的制成材料、产地等相关信息；
2．如何得到的这个物品；
3. ……
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（三）
近年来，丰富多彩的课外活动(After-class activities) 在许多学校受到学生们的广泛欢迎。某英文报社正在举办以＂After-class activities＂为题的英文征文活动，请你根据以下提示写一篇征文，介绍你们学校开展课外活动的情况。要点如下：
最受欢迎的课外活动：球类运动、英语角交流等；
参加课外活动的益处：学到更多知识、交到更多朋友等；
你的建议：选择适合自己的课外活动，丰富课余生活。
注意：1. 词数80—100；
2. 文中不得提及人名、校名及地名；
3. 征文的开头已为你写好，不计入总词数。
After-class Activities
Recently, after-class activities are becoming more and more popular in middle schools. ___________________
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参考答案
（一）
My Computer
My father bought a computer as a birthday present for me last year. It becomes my best friend in my room. I’d like to play on the computer as soon as I get home. At weekends, I often play games online with my friends. I’ve made a lot of friends on the Internet. But my eyesight becomes poorer and poorer, and I am not able to finish my homework on time. It’s terrible that my father will remove the computer.
From now on, I should pay more attention to my study.
（二）
I have a lovely doll. It’s a toy girl. The toy girl has two big blue eyes with① curly yellow hair and wears a white skirt. The doll is made of② cotton. So it feels very soft. And it is made in② Hangzhou. My mother bought it for me on my eighth birthday. I often go to sleep with it. I regard it as my best friend. I think it’s the best gift.
I like the doll very much and I’ll keep it forever.
（三）
After-class Activities
Recently, after-class activities are becoming more and more popular in middle schools.
We have many colorful and meaningful after-class activities in our school. We take an active part in all kinds of after-class activities. We especially like ball games. Practicing our English at the English corner is another smart choice. Of course, we also have some other activities, such as swimming, running,
playing computer games and so on.
We can learn a lot from these after-class activities. We are able to enrich our lives and get more new knowledge. Besides, we can make more new friends. And these after-class activities can free us from the heavy work of study.
In my opinion, we’d better choose the activities that interest us. They will not only make our school life colorful, but also improve our learning.
【写作亮点】
这是一篇优秀写作，它按照写作要求和目的，介绍了课外活动情况。目的明确，要点全面，语言地道。短语使用恰当，句子规范，为短文增色不少。如：take an active part in，such as，and so on，In my opinion；We are able to enrich our lives and get more new knowledge. They will not only make our school life colorful, but also improve our learning.。