2020届河北中考英语复习课件 专题十七 书面表达（297张PPT）
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课件297张PPT。 中考英语
（河北专用） 专题十七 书面表达A组 2015—2019年河北中考题组Writing 1(2019河北)
文明礼貌从我做起,从现在做起,从点滴小事做起。请根据下面的提示和要求,以“When to Say Thank You”为题,写一篇短文。
提示:(1)When should we say “thank you” at home?
(2)When are we supposed to say “thank you” at school?
(3)...
要求:(1)短文须包括提示中的两个要点和一个补充要点,可适当发挥。
(2)短文中不要出现真实的地名、校名和人名。
(3)词数80个左右。(开头已给出,不计入总词数)
参考词汇:wash, encourage, openWhen to Say Thank You
It's polite to say“thank you”when others help us or say something kind to us.????
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写作要点
1.文体:议论文。
2.注意人称和时态的使用。
3.时态:一般现在时。
参考范文
When to Say Thank You
It's polite to say“thank you”when others help us or say something kind to us. For example, when Mom or Dad washes the clothes, cleans the room or cooks dinner for us, we should say“thank you”to them. At school, when someone lends us a pen or hands us something, it's nice to say “thank you”. If a teacher says“well done”to encourage us, we're supposed to say “thank you”. Whenever someone holds the door open for us, we should also say“thank you”.
Be polite and always remember to say “thank you”!精彩语句????
1.精美词汇:say “thank you” to sb. 感谢某人;be supposed to do sth. 应该做某事
2.出彩结构:If a teacher says “well done”to encourage us, we're supposed to say “thank you”.(本句含有if 引导的条件状语从句)Writing 2(2018河北)
请仔细观察下面的图片,并根据所给提示和要求写一篇短文。
提示:(1)What are the man and the woman doing?
(2)What should you do when you see people litter like this? Why?
要求:(1)短文须包括所有提示内容,可适当发挥。
(2)短文中不要出现真实的地名、校名和人名。
(3)词数80个左右(开头已给出,不计入总词数)。
参考词汇:throw, environment, civilized(文明的)I can see a man and a woman in the picture. The man is
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写作要点
1.人称:要点一用第三人称;要点二用第一人称。
2.时态:要点一用现在进行时态;要点二用一般现在时态。
3.要点:(1)图片上的男人和女人正在干什么?(2)当你看到人们像这样乱扔垃圾时你会怎么做?为什么?
参考范文
I can see a man and a woman in the picture. The man is throwing rubbish on the ground. The woman is telling him to put the rubbish in the dustbin.
When I see people litter like this, I believe I can not stand by and do nothing. I will stop them from doing so, like the woman in the picture did. The city is our home. It's our duty to protect our environment. What's more, it's important to learn to be a civilized person.
Let's take action and make the world more beautiful!精彩语句????
1.精美词汇:stand by and do nothing袖手旁观;what's more 另外
2.出彩结构:It's our duty to protect our environment.(It为形式主语,真正的主语为动词不定式to protect our environment)Writing 3(2017河北)
英语课上,同学们正在准备举行以“真实的自我”为主题的演讲活动。请你以李华的名义写一篇演讲 词,向同学们介绍一下自己。
提示:(1)What are your strong points?
(2)How do you improve yourself?
(3)What is your dream for the future?
要求:(1)演讲词须包括所有提示内容,可适当发挥。
(2)演讲词中不得出现真实的人名、校名和地名。
(3)词数80个左右(开头和结尾已给出,不计入总词数)。
Hello, everyone!
I'm Li Hua and I'm very happy to stand here to talk about myself.????
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Thanks for your attention!答案
写作要点
1.人称:第一人称。
2.时态:一般现在时、一般将来时。
3.要点:(1)你的优点是什么?(2)你怎样提高你自己?(3)你未来的梦想是什么?
参考范文
Hello, everyone!
I'm Li Hua and I'm very happy to stand here to talk about myself. I'm a kind and helpful person. I'm always ready to help others when they're in trouble. I can sing and dance so well that I often give performances at our school party.
When I think back what I've done before, I should help my parents do more housework. Doing housework is good for my future life.As for my dream, I want to be a teacher. I'll make friends with my kids. I want to teach them everything I know!
Thanks for your attention!精彩语句????
1.精美词汇:kind adj.善良的;helpful adj.有帮助的,有用的;be ready to help others乐于助人;be in trouble陷入 困境; make friends with sb.和某人交朋友
2.出彩结构:I can sing and dance so well that I often give performances at our school party.(“so+形容词 或副词+that...”意为“如此……以至于……”)Writing 4(2016河北)
关于“说英语”问题,李华和他的英语老师Miss Wang持不同的观点。请你仔细阅读下图中的对话内 容,从中选择一个角色,按照所给要求写一篇短文。
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要求:(1)用“Li Hua”或“Miss Wang”补全短文首句;(2)写出所选角色的观点,并续写理由;
(3)短文中不得出现真实的人名、校名和地名;
(4)词数80个左右(开头已给出,不计入总词数)。
参考词汇:shy;make a mistake;believe in
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写作要点
1.本文是议论文,主体时态为一般现在时;
2.内容要点:①用“Li Hua”或“Miss Wang”补全短文首句。
②写出所选角色的观点,并续写理由。
3.参考词汇:shy害羞的;make a mistake犯错;believe in相信
参考范文
Possible version 1:
I am Miss Wang. Your English is poor because you don't speak English. English, like any other language, is a tool of communication—the more you speak it, the better your English will become. So you should try to speak every day, as much as possible. And don't be shy or afraid of making a mistake. Your teacher and classmates are always ready to help you. The most important is that you must believe in yourself and never give up!Always remember: practice makes perfect!Possible version 2:
I am Li Hua. I don't speak English because my English is poor. I find it hard to speak English. I am a little shy and afraid of making a mistake. I always feel nervous when I stand up speaking English in class. I'm afraid that my classmates may laugh at me when I speak English. To tell you the truth, I don't believe in myself. The less I speak, the worse my English is. When my English improves, I will enjoy speaking it.Writing 5(2015河北)
英语课上,老师要求同学们介绍个人周末计划。假设下面表格内容是你的计划提纲,请根据表格提示 的活动内容,写一篇发言稿,介绍你的周末计划,并在班上与同学交流。要求:(1)发言稿须包括三个所列要点和一个补充要点;
(2)发言稿中四个要点都要适当发挥;
(3)发言稿中不得涉及真实的人名、校名和地名;
(4)词数:80个左右(已给出的开头和结尾不计入总词数)。
Hi,everyone! Here's my plan for the weekend.????
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Thank you!答案
写作要点
1.本文是一篇有关周末计划的班级发言稿,主体时态为一般将来时。2.内容要点:
(1)周六:看电视,去书店;周日:去看爷爷奶奶;个人补充要点;
(2)以上要点都要适当发挥。
参考范文
Hi,everyone!Here's my plan for the weekend.
On Saturday morning,I'm going to watch TV to relax myself after a long week's study.I like watching comedies and cartoons.On Saturday afternoon,I'm going to the bookstore to buy some books.Reading is one of my hob- bies.
On Sunday,I'm going to visit my grandparents because I miss them very much.I'll help them do some house- work.After I come back,I'll do my homework to get ready for the next week.
That's my weekend.
Thank you!B组 2015—2019年全国中考题组Writing 1(2019天津)
假如你是晨光中学的学生李华,平时坚持用英语写日记。请根据以下要点,描述你星期三放学乘地铁 回家路上看到的事情,并表达自己的想法。
(1)一个男孩不舒服,开始呕吐,一位穿着漂亮的女士帮着擦拭地面,男孩表达感谢。
(2)地铁到站,有人挤向座位,有人下不去车,有人因此争吵。
(3)你认为……
参考词汇:开始呕吐 begin to vomit
挤向座位 push towards the seat
争吵 have a quarrel
要求:
(1)词数:80~100个。
(2)日记格式和开头已给出,不计入总词数。
(3)要点齐全,行文连贯,可适当发挥。Wednesday
When I took the underground back home after school, I noticed
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写作要点
1.时态以一般过去时为主。
2.给出的要点和参考词汇要全部用上。
3.注意表达自己的观点时,要传递正能量,态度要明确。
参考范文
Wednesday
When I took the underground back home after school, I noticed a boy who looked uncomfortable, and then he began to vomit. But people around him just looked at him. Nobody wanted to help him. Just then, a beautifully dressed woman helped him scrub the floor, and the boy thanked her very much.
When the underground arrived, some people pushed towards the seat, some people couldn't get off, and some people had a quarrel about it.
After seeing this, I think people should help each other. And we should obey some rules. Only in this way will
our world become better and better.Writing 2(2019重庆)
你正在组织一项暑假期间到山区为期一周的游学和帮扶活动。作为发起人,请你写一篇发言稿,在你 校“英语时光”广播中号召更多的同学参加。
要求:
1.80—120词,开头和结尾已给出,不计入总词数;
2.文中不能出现自己的姓名和所在学校的名称。
参考信息:
1.活动缘由(孤独、帮扶、游学……);
2.活动构想(时间、地点、内容……);
3.……
Hello, everybody. I am planning a summer trip called “Be a Kid in the Mountains”.?? ??
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Thank you!答案
写作要点
1.体裁:应用文。
2.人称:主体人称为第一人称和第三人称。
3.时态:以一般现在时态为主。
4.要点:
1)活动缘由(孤独、帮扶、游学……);
2)活动构想(时间、地点、内容……);
3)……
参考范文
Hello, everybody. I am planning a summer trip called “Be a Kid in the Mountains”. It will provide us with a meaningful week staying with the students in the mountains.As many of their parents leave for the city development, these students might feel lonely and some may even
find it hard to go on studying. So we can bring them some school things like books and pens for their study, and prepare some interesting stories to share. In the daytime, we can go hiking and do some teamwork. In the evening, we can do such activities as popular games and group dance around the fire.
Isn't that exciting? Come and join us. Let's be “a kid in the mountains”. I believe it will bring sunshine to the mountains as well as more confidence to us.
Thank you!精彩语句????
1.精美词汇:meaningful adj.有意义的;development n.发展;prepare v.准备;share v.分享;as well as也,和……一样
2.出彩结构:I believe it will bring sunshine to the mountains as well as more confidence to us. (宾语从句;as well as连接两个并列成分)Writing 3(2019安徽)
假定你是李华,你的英国笔友Mike最近因视力减退而感到不安,请你用英文给他写封电子邮件,谈谈你 在保护视力方面的一些做法。要点如下:
1.经常做户外活动;
2.很少用电子产品;
3.坚持做眼保健操;
4.……
注意:1.词数80~100;
2.可适当增加细节,以使行文连贯;
3.文中不能出现与本人相关的信息;
4.开头和结尾已为你写好,不计入总词数。Dear Mike,
I'm sorry to learn that your eyesight is getting weaker.
Yours,
Li Hua答案
写作要点
1.视力减退有多种原因。有运动量减少,体质下降;有饮食不当,营养不良;有使用电子产品过度对视力造成 伤害等。可根据各条提出建议并解释原因。
2.以第一人称为主,一般现在时态为主。
参考范文
Dear Mike,
I'm sorry to learn that your eyesight is getting weaker. I'd like to share with you some ways of protecting eye- sight in my daily life.
At school, I often go out of the classroom to play with my classmates or do physical exercise during the breaks. In my free time, I also try hard to avoid using the mobile phone or computer. You know, the light they give off is harmful to our eyes. Besides, doing eye exercises plays an important role in relaxing my tired eyes. Lastly, I usually have my eyes examined every term to make sure my eyes stay healthy.I hope you'll find my ways helpful.
Yours,
Li Hua精彩语句????
1.精美词汇:do physical exercise进行体育锻炼
avoid using the mobile phone避免使用手机
2.出彩结构:Lastly, I usually have my eyes examined every term to make sure my eyes stay healthy.(to make sure...为动词不定式短语,作目的状语)Writing 4(2019山东青岛)
人生中有很多第一次:第一次学游泳;第一次跟家人外出旅行;第一次做家务;第一次赢得比赛;第一次 ……。请根据提示,就你的第一次……写一篇短文。
内容包括:
1.第一次……的整个过程;
2.你的感受。
要求:
1.词数:80—100(开头已给出,不计入总词数);
2.文中不得出现真实的校名和人名。
As we all know, everyone has his unforgettable memories. I still remember the first time????
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写作要点
1.本文为夹叙夹议文,介绍第一次做某事的经历用一般过去时,谈感受时用一般现在时。本文主要使用 第一人称。
2.叙述过程完整,避免语法错误,注意时态转换。
参考范文
As we all know, everyone has his unforgettable memories. I still remember the first time I won the English com- petition.
When I was a child, I was not good at English and I hated English class, so that I often lost my thought when I was learning English. However, my warm-hearted English teacher always encouraged me to study harder. Be- sides, she also taught me some ways of learning English, such as talking with native speakers, writing as often as possible and listening to English songs and so on. From then on, with her help and my efforts, I started to be in- terested in English and learn English actively in my class.Finally, I entered the English competition and won the first prize.
When you have trouble in studying subjects or something else, do not give up. I believe you will find the way to solve problems successfully. Only in this way can we achieve our dreams.
That's all! Thank you!精彩语句????
1.精美词汇:be good at擅长 so that 因此 encourage sb. to do sth. 鼓励某人做某事 as...as possible 尽可能 …… from then on 从那以后
2.出彩结构:
Only in this way can we achieve our dreams.(倒装句)Writing 5(2019江苏南京)
假如你是李华,在网上看到英国Britech公司为正在开发的一款提高英语写作能力的应用软件(app)征集 网友建议。请根据网上的征集信息,用英语给该公司写一封电子邮件。
IDEAS NEEDED
Britech is now designing an app that helps learners with their English writing. The app is to help learners explore ideas, organize them and write them down. Your ideas are needed!
Here's what to do:
Write to share your ideas! Feel free to be creative!
Please let us know:
●What's the name of the app?
●What problem does the app solve?
●What does the app do?
Contact us at appdesign@Britech.com注意:
1.内容涵盖所有要点,可适当发挥。
2.词数80左右(已给出的文章开头,不计入总词数)。
3.文中不得提及有关考生个人身份的任何信息,如校名、人名等。
Dear Sir or Madam,
Thanks for designing an app for English writing. ▲ ???? ????
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Yours,
Li Hua答案
写作要点
1.体裁:本文是应用文中的回信类作文。
2.人称:第一人称等。
3.时态:主体时态为一般现在时。
4.确定要点:
1)这个app的名称;
2)这个app解决什么问题;
3)这个app应有的具体功能。
参考范文
Dear Sir or Madam,
Thanks for designing an app for English writing. I'd like to share my ideas here. Could its name be “Writing Made Easy”?Many of us have difficulty in writing. We don't know how to organize ideas, use proper words, and so on. I hope it can solve these problems.
Here is my advice on what the app does. First, it should provide some reading materials. The more we read, the better we write. Second, the app should have an online course so that we can develop our writing skills. Third, there should be an e-teacher who can correct mistakes and offer suggestions.
I hope my advice is worth taking.
Yours,
Li Hua精彩语句????
1.精美词汇:have difficulty in doing sth.做某事有困难 and so on等等 correct mistakes纠错 offer sugges- tions提供建议
2.出彩结构:①The more we read, the better we write.(本句用了“the+比较级,the+比较级”结构,表示“越… …,就越 ……”)
②Second, the app should have an online course so that we can develop our writing skills. (so that引导目的状语 从句)
③Third, there should be an e-teacher who can correct mistakes and offer suggestions. (who引导定语从句,修饰 先行词an e-teacher)Writing 6(2019江苏苏州)
假定你是苏华,最近你的澳大利亚笔友Nathan犯了一些错误,倍感懊恼,写了一封邮件向你诉说。为帮 助他排解困惑,请你根据他的邮件内容并结合自身经历,用英语回信开导他。注意:1.词数90左右,开头和结尾已经写好,不计入总词数;
2.回复需包括所有要点,可适当发挥,使短文连贯、通顺;
3.文中不得提及真实的人名、校名等相关信息。
Dear Nathan,
I'm sorry to know that you are not happy these days.
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I hope my experience can help you out.
Best wishes,
Su Hua答案
写作要点
1.审题:这是一篇应用文。注意人称的使用,主体时态为一般现在时和一般过去时。
2.确定要点:
1)同意(或不同意)每个人都会犯错;
2)描述自己犯过的一个错误;
3)如何处理自己的问题;
4)从错误中学到了什么。
参考范文
Dear Nathan,
I'm sorry to know that you are not happy these days. You needn't worry too much. It's true that everyone makes mistakes.Take me, for example. One day, I spent so much time playing football with my friends that I forgot to do my
homework. I said sorry to my teacher and finished it the next day. I found it important to achieve a balance be- tween schoolwork and hobbies.
It doesn't matter whether or not you make mistakes. What matters most is to correct and learn from them. In this way, others will understand you. Then you will feel much better.
I hope my experience can help you out.
Best wishes,
Su Hua精彩语句????
1.精美词汇:needn't do 不需要做…… achieve v.获得 matter v.要紧 correct v.改正 in this way用这种方法
2.出彩结构:
1)...I spent so much time playing football with my friends that I forgot to do my homework.(so...that...引导结果 状语从句)
2)It doesn't matter whether or not you make mistakes. (whether引导宾语从句)
3)What matters most is to correct and learn from them.(What matters most为主语从句,表语部分是to correct and learn from them)Writing 7(2019广西北部湾经济区)
暑假将至,你校English Club在社刊上发起了征文活动,题目为“My Plan for Summer Holiday”。请你 根据以下提示,用英语写一篇80词左右的短文。
写作要点:
1.学习计划;
2.运动计划;
3.娱乐计划;
4.你的愿望。
写作要求:
1.内容必须包括所给要点,可适当发挥,使行文连贯;
2.语篇完整,语句通顺,语法正确,书写规范;
3.文中不得出现人名、校名以及透露个人信息的地名,否则不予评分;
4.开头已给出,不计入总词数。My Plan for Summer Holiday
The summer holiday is coming.??? 答案
写作要点
本书面表达可根据题目所给的要点提示,采用总分总的结构进行写作。写作过程中注意以一般将来时为 主。为了使内容充实,在写每一个要点时,可适当发挥。
参考范文
My Plan for Summer Holiday
The summer holiday is coming. I can't wait to make a good plan for it.
First, I will spend hours on my study every day. Reading more books and practicing writing will be good ways to improve myself. Second, in order to keep fit, I will do some sports with my friends, such as playing basketball and swimming. This summer holiday will be a good time for fun, so I plan to watch movies and have picnics with my family. What's more, to experience different cultures in other places will be the most important part of my plan.
All of these will be helpful for my future life. I am looking forward to a meaningful holiday. 精彩语句????
精美词汇:can't wait to do sth.迫不及待做某事 spend...on...在……上花费(时间/金钱) in order to do sth.为 了做某事 such as例如 plan to do sth.计划做某事 what's more更为重要的是 look forward to期待评析????本书面表达的话题为学生所熟悉,贴近学生生活实际,使得学生有话可写。从命题的形式上来看,属 于“提纲式”作文,即让学生根据题目所给的要点提示来进行写作。Writing 8(2019湖北武汉)
学校英语社团正在组织题为“My Family”的征文活动。假如你是李明,请根据以下内容提示用英语 完成征文。
内容要点如下:
1.三口之家,家庭幸福,邻里和睦;
2.父母为教师,在校深受欢迎;
3.分担家务,周末户外活动;
4.相互陪伴,经常交流,良好家规助我成长;
5.请补充说明一至两点与家庭相关的情况。
注意:
1.文中不得透露个人姓名和学校名称;
2.词数:60—80;
3.内容连贯,不要逐条翻译;4.标题和开头已给出,不计入总词数。
参考词汇:popular adj.受欢迎的 activity n.活动 rule n.规矩
My Family
I'm Li Ming.???? 答案
写作要点
一、体裁:说明文。
二、要点齐全:
1.三口之家,家庭幸福,邻里和睦;
2.父母为教师,在校受欢迎;
3.分担家务,周末户外活动;
4.相互陪伴,经常交流,良好家规助我成长;
5.一至两点与家庭相关的情况。
三、时态:一般现在时态。参考范文
My Family
I'm Li Ming. I have a happy family, and there are three people in my family. We get on well with our neighbors.
My parents are teachers, who are popular in school, and they are loved by their students. They share the house- work at home and we do outdoor activities on weekends. I think it's important to spend time and communicate with family members. I have strict family rules at home. They're so important that they can help me grow up well. We all like doing sports, like basketball and volleyball.
We love each other. What a happy family I have! What about you?精彩语句????
1.精美词汇:get on well with和……相处融洽;be popular (with sb.)受(某人)欢迎的
2.出彩结构:I think it's important to spend time and communicate with family members.(本句话是一个含有宾 语从句的主从复合句,it作形式主语,动词不定式是真正的主语)Writing 9(2018河南)
每个人都生活在一个特定的环境。请以“What I like about where I live”为题,并根据以下要点和要求 用英语写一篇短文,描述你生活的环境。
1.要点:1)你生活在什么样的环境;
2)你喜欢这个环境的什么;
3)你对这个环境有何期望。
2.要求:1)文中不得出现真实姓名和学校名称;
2)词数80左右。
What I like about where I live
??? 答案
写作要点
1.你生活在什么样的环境;
2.你喜欢这个环境的什么;
3.你对这个环境有何期望;
4.人称以第一人称为主;
5.时态主要是一般现在时。
参考范文
What I like about where I live
I live in a small and quiet city in Henan Province. Different from other cities, it has no skyscrapers or endless cars on the streets. People there are seldom late for their work and enjoy a slow and peaceful life. And that is what I like most about my city.However, my city has her problems. She has no high-speed train. I hope she will soon have high-speed trains so
that I can travel to other cities more easily! 精彩语句????
1.精美词汇:endless adj.无穷无尽的;peaceful adj. 和平的,平静的;however adv. 然而
2.出彩结构:And that is what I like most about my city. (what引导表语从句)Writing 10(2018陕西)
假如你是李华,上周日你独自在家照看你五岁的妹妹Nana,请根据表格内容,写一篇短文。 要求:1.参考表格内容,可适当发挥;
2.语句通顺,意思连贯,书写工整;
3.文章不得出现任何真实信息(姓名、校名和地名等);4.词数:不少于70词。(开头已给出,但不计入总词数。)
Last Sunday, my parents were not at home, so I looked after my 5-year-old sister Nana at home.
???? 答案
写作要点
1.本文为提纲类作文,主要描写过去事情发生的经过,主要时态应用一般过去时。
2.根据题目要求写出“我”在家照顾妹妹的过程,所以主要用第一人称。
3.写全表格中所列不同时段所做的事情,恰当使用表时间的状语。
参考范文
Last Sunday, my parents were not at home, so I looked after my 5-year-old sister Nana at home.
In the morning, I told her many funny stories first. Then we sang and danced happily together. I also taught her to speak a few simple English words and she learned well. At noon, I cooked noodles with tomatoes and eggs. She said they were delicious. I was very glad that she enjoyed the lunch. Then we had a rest. In the afternoon, we played games together. After that, we watched cartoons until my parents came back. I felt tired but happy.精彩语句????
1.精美词汇:look after 照顾;teach sb. to do sth.教某人做某事;delicious adj.美味的;enjoy v.喜欢
2.出彩结构:(1)I also taught her to speak a few simple English words and she learned well.(用and连接了两个并 列分句,且巧妙使用了simple和well等修饰语)
(2)I was very glad that she enjoyed the lunch.(句中使用了“be glad+that从句”结构)Writing 11(2018天津)
请你根据以下内容提示,以“The Story of Li Hua”为题,为学校广播站英语专栏写一篇短文,介绍发生 在你班同学李华身上的一件事。
(1)上周五放学后李华乘公交车回家,看到有人在吃橘子,并把橘皮扔在车上。
(2)李华把橘皮捡起,放进垃圾桶。
(3)乘客用手机拍了照片,发布到网上。
(4)老师知道后表扬了李华,李华说这是他应该做的。
(5)你觉得……
参考词汇:果皮peel 垃圾桶dustbin
发布post 表扬praise
要求:
(1)词数:80~100个。
(2)短文的题目和开头已给出,不计入总词数。(3)要点齐全,行文连贯,可适当发挥。
The Story of Li Hua
Last Friday, when my classmate Li Hua took a bus back home from school,??? 答案
写作要点
1.本文是一篇介绍李华所做的好事,引发学生思考,进而提出自己观点的记叙文。主体时态是一般过去时。
2.内容要点:
①介绍李华在公交车上的文明举止(一般过去时);
②介绍乘客及老师对李华行为的认可与赞赏(一般过去时);
③介绍李华对这件事的态度(一般过去时);
④根据李华的小故事表达自己的观点(一般现在时)。
参考范文
The Story of Li Hua
Last Friday, when my classmate Li Hua took a bus back home from school, he noticed that someone threw the orange peel on the bus. Then he picked up the peel and put it into the dustbin. At that time, a passenger on the bus took some pictures of the whole process and posted them on the Internet.The pictures spread so fast that Li Hua's teacher knew what Li Hua had done and praised him. But Li Hua said that it was his responsibility to protect the environment around us.
I think all of us should learn from Li Hua, and if everyone can have good manners, our society would be better and better.精彩语句????
1.精美词汇:pick up拾起,捡起;good manners 有礼貌;responsibility n.责任
2.出彩结构:(1)The pictures spread so fast that Li Hua's teacher knew what Li Hua had done and praised him. (含有so...that...引导的结果状语从句,使句式更丰富多彩)
(2)...if everyone can have good manners, our society would be better and better.(含有if引导的条件状语从句,句 式丰富)Writing 12(2018安徽)
某英文杂志社正面向九年级毕业生征文,请从以下要点中选择一至两个方面,并结合具体事例,用英语 写一篇题为“Thank you, my teacher!”的短文参加此次活动。要点如下:
1.严格要求;
2.耐心指导;
3.热情鼓励;
4.……
注意:1.词数80~100;
2.可适当增加细节,以使行文连贯;
3.文中不得出现真实姓名及学校名称。
?? 答案
写作要点
1.时态以一般过去时为主。
2.人称以第三人称和第一人称为主。
3.主要内容:严格要求;耐心指导;热情鼓励。
参考范文
I'd like to say thanks to my English teacher, Miss Li, because she's helped me a lot.
Once, I failed my English exam. When she found I was very worried, she encouraged me to study harder and promised to help me. After that, I turned to her for help every time I had questions. She was always patient to make me understand every single question. With her help, I've had enough courage to face difficulties and made much progress in English.
Thank you, my dear teacher!The love and support from you will be with me forever.精彩语句????
1.精美词汇:fail v.不及格,未能通过;encourage v.鼓励;promise v.承诺;turn to sb. for help向某人求助;patient adj.有耐心的
2.出彩结构:(1)After that, I turned to her for help every time I had questions.(every time 引导时间状语从句)
(2)She was always patient to make me understand every single question.(不定式短语作状语)
(3)With her help, I've had enough courage to face difficulties and made much progress in English.(With her help作状语)Writing 13(2018内蒙古包头)
假设你是李华,请给你们的美籍教师Bob写一封电子邮件,向他简要介绍你校即将举办的英语文化节 (English Culture Festival),邀请他参加本次活动,并请他在节目最后做一个关于如何学好英语的讲座。
邮件还应包括以下内容:
1.活动时间:本周五下午14:30—17:30;
2.活动地点:报告厅(Lecture Hall);
3.活动内容:学生演唱英文歌曲……
注意:1.词数90左右,开头和结尾已经写好,不计入总词数;
2.可适当增加细节,以使行文连贯;
3.文中不得出现反映考生信息的真实人名、地名等内容。Dear Bob,
How is it going?
??? ?
Looking forward to your reply.
Yours,
Li Hua答案
写作要点
1.本题的文体是应用文,描述即将举办的文化节,故时态以一般将来时为主。
2.写作要点:
(1)邀请Bob参加文化节
(2)文化节的情况
活动时间:本周五下午14:30—17:30;
活动地点:报告厅(Lecture Hall);
活动内容:学生演唱英文歌曲……
(3)节目最后做关于如何学好英语的讲座参考范文
Dear Bob,
How is it going?
An English Culture Festival will be held in our school. All of us students do hope that you could come and join us.
The activity will begin in the Lecture Hall at 14:30 this Friday and last about 3 hours. We've prepared many programs for it, for example, English songs. What's more, some students will perform plays in English.
As you know, many students in our school have difficulty in learning English well.So,when the performance fin- ishes,it would be very nice if you could give a talk and provide us with some practical advice.
Looking forward to your reply.
?Yours,
Li Hua精彩语句????
1.精美词汇:last v.持续;prepare...for...为……准备……;what's more另外,而且
2.出彩结构:So, when the performance finishes, it would be very nice if you could give a talk and provide us with some practical advice.本句中的when引导的是时间状语从句,if引导的是条件状语从句。Writing 14(2018四川成都)
假如你是图中女孩,你与家人于4月29日共度周日。请根据图中所示写一篇英文日记,讲述你当天所见 和所做之事。
?
注意:1.日记应包含图中所有信息;
2.日记中须写出当天的一些感受;
3.日记应格式正确,语句通顺,句式多样;
4.词数:100左右。参考词汇:城堡castle 螃蟹crab
?? 答案
写作要点
1.人称:第一人称。
2.时态:一般过去时。
3.要点:
1)日记格式:日期、天气;
2)所见所做;
3)感受。
参考范文
April 29th, Sunday ?Sunny
Today I had a good time with my parents on the beach. It was so fine that I could see the rising sun and flying sea birds. A boat sailed in the distance. What a beautiful scene! Dressed in my swimming suit, I swam in the blue and clear sea. Then, I played volleyball with my parents. Finally, I managed to make a sand castle with tools. It looked so real that a crab even wanted to live in it.
What a pleasant day! I not only got close to nature but also shared happiness with my family.精彩语句????
1.精美词汇:have a good time 玩得开心;on the beach在沙滩上;get close to接近
2.出彩结构:(1)It was so fine that I could see the rising sun and flying sea birds.本句话使用了so...that...句式,意 为“如此……以至于……”。
(2)What a pleasant day!本句为what引导的感叹句,其基本结构为:What+a/an+ adj.+可数名词单数(+其他)!Writing 15(2018新疆)
请以“My Traveling Plan”为题写一篇短文介绍你的旅行计划,提示信息如下:
1.Where are you going and who are you going with?
2.Why are you going there?
3.What are you going to do there?
注意:1.书写清晰,字迹工整,行文流畅,语句通顺,内容完整;
2.文中不得出现真实姓名、校名等信息;
3.词数:80~100。
???? 答案
参考范文
My Traveling Plan
I am going to travel in Beijing with my friends next month. Beijing is a beautiful city with a long history. It is the capital of China. I am going to stay there for several days. There are many interesting places. First I am going to visit Tian'anmen Square, the Summer Palace and the Great Wall. Then I am going to Wangfujing Street. There are a lot of stores there. I want to buy some gifts for my parents. And I am going to eat Peking Duck there. How delicious it is!精彩语句????
1.精美词汇:stay there for several days 待在那里几天 interesting adj.有趣的 buy sth. for sb. 给某人买某物 a beautiful city with a long history 一座拥有悠久历史的美丽的城市
2.出彩结构:Beijing is a beautiful city with a long history. (使用了含有with的介词短语作后置定语修饰city)Writing 16(2018广东广州)
你是英语校报编辑李华。校报收到初一新生Ben的来信,他提出了所面临的两个问题。请你根据以下 提示写一封回信,说明Ben的问题,提出你的建议并陈述理由。Dear Ben,
I am sorry to hear that you are having trouble getting used to life in middle school. In your letter you said that...
…
Good luck with everything!
Li Hua
注意:
(1)回信应包括所有要点;
(2)词数80左右(信的开头和结尾已给出,不计入词数);
(3)不得透露学校、姓名等任何个人信息,否则不予评分。
??? 答案
写作要点????
1.本文为书信。主体时态为一般现在时。
2.补充完整题干中没有给出的写作要点。
3.理由要充分,建议要符合实际。
参考范文
Dear Ben,
I am sorry to hear that you are having trouble getting used to life in middle school. In your letter you said that you always felt lonely because of having few friends. I think it is a good choice to join some clubs in your school. In this way, you can make more friends who share the same interest with you. Besides, you'd better be friendly to others. Smile at others and you are sure to get a smile in return.You found it difficult to remember English words. Reading more English stories and news can help you learn English words in a practical way. In addition, if you can develop a habit of keeping an English diary every day, it
will be easier for you to remember more words. I hope you will find these suggestions useful.
Good luck with everything!
Li HuaWriting 17(2018江苏南京)
请根据你校校刊KIDS MAG中HAVE YOUR SAY栏目的征稿内容,用英语写一篇短文,表达你的想法。
Hi,
At KIDS MAG we like to share your ideas about our school. In my column, HAVE YOUR SAY, you can let oth- er kids know what you think. This month we want you to have your say about Culture Week in our school:
●what theme(主题)of Culture Week you like
●why you like the theme
●what activity/activities you can organize for the theme
Looking forward to hearing from you.
Sam Southland
注意:
1.对所有要点逐一陈述,适当发挥。
2.词数80左右,文章的开头已经给出,不计入总词数。3.文中不得提及有关考生个人身份的任何信息,如校名、人名等。
I am glad to share my ideas about Culture Week in our school.??? 答案
写作要点
1.审题:
本文是一篇对征文的回复。阐述自己对Culture Week活动主题、原因及活动设计的想法。前两个要求用 一般现在时,活动设计用一般将来时。
2.确定要点:
(1)你喜欢的“文化周”活动主题;
(2)你喜欢这个主题的理由;
(3)你为这个主题设计的活动。
参考范文
I am glad to share my ideas about Culture Week in our school. I like the theme about international cooking of our Culture Week, because this can help us better understand different cultures while enjoying nice food.First, we will invite teachers and parents to give talks about international cooking. Then, we will hold a Cooking
Festival. All the students can bring their own dishes and share them with each other. Near the end of the week, we will have a DIY competition. There will be a surprise in the end.
I hope our Culture Week will be a great success!精彩语句????
1.精美词汇:help us better understand 帮助我们更好地理解;international adj.国际的;invite sb. to do sth.邀请某 人做某事;share sth. with sb.与某人分享某物
2.出彩结构:...because this can help us better understand different cultures while enjoying nice food. because引 导原因状语从句,while+现在分词结构作状语。Writing 18(2017天津)
英国学生Frank八月底将要来天津学习并住在李明家。请根据以下提示,以李明的名义给Frank写一封 电子邮件。
(1)Frank到来前,你们会给他准备好房间。
(2)你爸爸送你们上学,妈妈做美味的食物。
(3)周末你们会邀请Frank游览天津,如逛古文化街、乘船游海河。
(4)Frank喜欢打排球,你们可以一起看天津女排比赛。
(5)你相信……
参考词汇:古文化街 Tianjin Ancient Cultural Street
海河 Haihe River
天津女排 Tianjin Women's Volleyball Team
要求:
(1)词数:80~100个。(2)电子邮件的开头和结尾已给出,不计入总词数。
(3)要点齐全,行文连贯,可适当发挥。
Dear Frank,
I'm happy to hear that at the end of August you will come to Tianjin to study and stay with my family. I'm writ-ing to say welcome to you.
Before you arrive, we will???
Looking forward to seeing you soon.
Li Ming答案
写作要点
1.本文是一封电子邮件,时态为一般将来时和一般现在时。
2.写作要点:1)为Frank准备房间以及爸爸妈妈要做的事情;2)周末游览天津;3)看排球赛。
参考范文
Dear Frank,
I'm happy to hear that at the end of August you will come to Tianjin to study and stay with my family. I'm writ-ing to say welcome to you.
Before you arrive, we will provide you with a room.It's very nice and clean.My father will send us to school and my mother will cook delicious food for us.
What's more, on weekends we can visit Tianjin Ancient Cultural Street,which is full of the footprints of Tianjin 's history.We can also visit the Haihe River by ship,which is the mother river of Tianjin.I've heard you love playing volleyball,so I think a plan of watching a game of Tianjin Women's Volleyball
Team will delight you.
I believe that you will have fun in Tianjin and you will love Tianjin too!
Looking forward to seeing you soon.
Li Ming精彩语句????
1.精美词汇:provide...with...给……提供……;delight v.使高兴;footprint n.足迹
2.出彩结构:We can also visit the Haihe River by ship,which is the mother river of Tianjin.本句使用了非限制 性定语从句。Writing 19(2017河南)
我们每天都要做很多事情,有些还很棘手。请以“I did it!”为题并根据要点和要求,用英语写一篇短 文,描述一件你完成的棘手事情。
1.要点:1)你做了什么事情;
2)你是如何做那件事情的;
3)你做完那件事情后的感受。
2.要求:1)文中不得出现真实姓名和学校名称;
2)词数80左右。
I did it!
???? 答案
写作要点
本文属于命题作文。围绕你做了什么事情,你是如何做那件事情的,你做完那件事情后的感受展开来写。 由于要求写自己的事情,所以应该使用第一人称。要求描述一件你完成的事情,应该使用一般过去时。
参考范文
I did it!
How nervous I was when I was told to give a speech!It was my first speech and I didn't know what to do.My teacher encouraged me and gave me some useful advice. After I chose a topic I liked best, I watched videos about how to be a good speaker and I learnt a lot of skills. Then I practiced and practiced. Finally, the big day came.
I did it!!!Everyone loved my speech. I was so proud of myself.精彩语句????
1.精美词汇:give a speech发表一次演讲
2.出彩结构:How nervous I was when I was told to give a speech!感叹句、时间状语从句和被动语态。Writing 20(2017陕西)
每个人都有自己喜欢的衣服,请根据提示语,以“My favorite ????”为题,写一篇短文,介绍一件你最 喜爱的衣服。
提示语:
?要求:1.请将短文题目补充完整;
2.参考提示语,可适当发挥;
3.语句通顺,意思连贯,书写工整;
4.文章不得出现任何真实信息(姓名、校名和地名等);
5.词数:不少于70词。
My favorite 答案
写作要点
1.本文介绍自己最喜欢的衣服,时态以一般现在时和一般过去时为主。
2.写作要点:(1)介绍最喜欢的衣服是什么样的和布料;(2)喜欢的原因;(3)什么时候穿。参考范文
My favorite T-shirt
Among all my clothes, I like one of the T-shirts best. It is white. It is made of cotton and fiber, so it's very com- fortable. I like it because there is a photo of my best friend and me on it. It's a special gift from him. He sent it to me last year for my 14th birthday. I often wear the T-shirt when I have parties with my friends. It makes me remember the time we two spent together.
This is my favorite T-shirt. It brings me a lot of happy memories.精彩语句????
1.精美词汇:be made of由……制成;comfortable adj.舒服的
2.出彩结构:Among all my clothes,I like one of the T-shirts best.本句使用了表示三者或三者以上的a- mong,还用到了one of the+名词复数结构。Writing 21(2016陕西)
假如你是李明,你准备和父母周末去附近的村庄游玩,请根据提示语,给恰逢来你校交流学习的David写 一封e-mail,邀请他一同前往。要求:1.参考提示语,可适当发挥;
2.语句通顺,意思连贯,书写工整;3.文中不得出现任何真实信息(姓名、校名和地名等);
4.词数:不少于70词。(开头和结尾已给出,但不计入总词数。)
Dear David,
How are you recently??? ??
??
Yours,
Li Ming答案
写作要点
1.本文是应用文,主体时态为一般现在时和一般将来时。
2.第一段:提出邀请;第二段:游玩的具体活动;第三段:表达自己诚挚的期盼。
3.文中不可用真实的信息;表达完整,条理清晰。
参考范文
Dear David,
How are you recently?This weekend,my parents and I are going to a nearby village.Would you like to go with us?
In the morning,we can feed animals.Then,we plan to pick fruit and vegetables in the fields.In the afternoon,we'll watch the villagers make tea.After that,we will learn to cook meals.In the evening,we can play games or chat with the people there.I'm sure we will have a good time.
I'm looking forward to your reply.
Yours,
Li MingWriting 22(2015北京)
根据中文和英文提示,用英文写一封意思连贯、符合逻辑、不少于50词的邮件。邮件的开头和结尾已给 出,不计入总词数。所给提示词语仅供选用。请不要写出你的校名和姓名。
假如你叫李华,你们学校为配合北京申办冬奥会,倡导人人都做文明中学生。请你根据以下提示,给你的英 国笔友Peter写一封邮件,告诉他你认为做个文明中学生什么是重要的,你通常是怎么做的,以及你的感受。
提示词语:think,smile,respect,say hello to,wait in line,on time,happy
?Dear Peter,
How is it going?At my school we're talking about what we should do to be a good student.
????
Anything new at your school?
Yours,
Li Hua答案
参考范文
Dear Peter,
How is it going?At my school we're talking about what we should do to be a good student.I think it is important to be polite to others.I say hello to my teachers and classmates.I smile at everyone I talk to.Following rules is al- so important.I wait in line at the bus stop and go to school on time.I feel happy for doing all these because it is right for a student to do so.
Anything new at your school?
Yours,
Li HuaC组 教师专用题组Writing 1(2019湖北黄冈)
同学们,在初中三年的英语学习中,我们从课本中学习了有关“Family”、“Be polite to sb.”、“Pro- tecting the environment”、“Volunteering”等话题和功能。假定你是李磊,请参考这些话题和功能,依据以 下要点提示,写一篇题为“I'm Proud of My Family”的英语短文,向校报投稿,讲述你的家庭故事。
要点提示:1.家人相亲相爱,努力学习、工作;
2.邻里和睦,礼貌待人;
3.爱护环境,从我做起;
4.积极参加志愿活动,帮助贫困儿童。
写作要求:1.词数90左右(短文的开头已经给出,不计入总词数);
2.根据要点提示,适当发挥;
3.短文中不得出现真实的姓名及校名。
参考词汇:work hard;be friendly to each other;get on well with;protect the environment;be volunteersI'm Proud of My Family
My name is Li Lei. I have a happy family. There are four people in my family: my parents, my sister and I.
???? 答案
写作要点
1.本篇是记叙文;
2.时态:一般现在时;
3.写作的主要内容:平日里家人会经常做的事情,如:相亲相爱,努力学习、工作;礼貌待人;爱护环境;参加志 愿活动等。
参考范文
I'm Proud of My Family
My name is Li Lei. I have a happy family. There are four people in my family: my parents, my sister and I.
My family love each other. (My parents love us and we love our parents.)My parents both work hard. My sister and I study hard at school, too.
My family are kind and friendly to our neighbors. We are all polite to each other. We get on well with each oth-er.My family try our best to protect the environment in our daily life. My mom and my sister usually bring a bag to go shopping. My father is used to taking the bus to work. I never order takeaway food.
My family are glad to be volunteers at any time. My parents often help the children in poor areas.(My sister helps in the school library twice a week.)Sometimes I read newspapers to the old people.
What a happy family! I'm proud of my family!精彩语句????
1.精美词汇:work/study hard 努力工作/学习 get on well with sb.和某人相处融洽 try one's best to do sth. 尽某人最大努力做某事 be used to doing sth.习惯于做某事
2.出彩结构:①My family try our best to protect the environment in our daily life.(本句好词组较多,try one's best to do,protect the environment,in our daily life)
②My family are glad to be volunteers at any time. (be glad to do sth.乐于做某事,at any time更是体现了作者 一家人乐于做志愿的心情)Writing 2(2019内蒙古呼和浩特)
临近毕业,学校在学习小组内开展了初中阶段自评和组评活动,假设你是Rainbow小组的组长Zhang Hong,请你为你的组员Li Ming进行综合素质的评价,写一份素质报告。
内容包括:1.他的爱好;
2.他的优点(两条);
3.他的缺点或存在的问题;
4.你对他的建议(两条)。
要 求:1.表达清楚、语法正确、上下文连贯;
2.要点必须包括所有相关信息,并作适当发挥,但不得出现真实班级、姓名等;
3.词数:不少于80词(所给内容不计入总词数)。
Li Ming is a member of my team called Rainbow.????
Zhang Hong答案
写作要点
1.本文主要运用一般现在时。
2.内容提示:
1)Li Ming的爱好和优点;
2)他的缺点或存在的问题;
3)你对他的建议。
参考范文
Li Ming is a member of my team called Rainbow. Generally speaking, he is a warm-hearted and outgoing boy. He is always ready to help others without asking for anything in return. He can also get on well with teachers and classmates. In his spare time, he likes reading books on history, so he knows a lot of knowledge about histo-ry.But as a famous saying goes, “Every coin has two sides”, sometimes he doesn't work hard enough on his
lessons. I advise him to spend more time on the subjects from now on. What's more, he'd better answer ques- tions in class actively so that he can make great progress.
I'm sure that if he can try harder to improve himself, he'll be an excellent student soon.
Zhang Hong精彩语句????
1.精美词汇:warm-hearted adj.热心的 get on well with 与……相处得好 make great progress取得很大的进步
2.出彩结构:I'm sure that if he can try harder to improve himself, he'll be an excellent student soon.(本句中if引 导条件状语从句)Writing 3(2018湖南长沙)
假如你是李华,于4月13日星期五这一天参加了学校组织的郊游活动。请你以school trip为主题,写一则 英文日记,内容包括参加活动的人员、集合时间、郊游地点、交通方式、活动内容以及个人感受等。
要求:(1)80词左右(开头已给出,不计入总词数);
(2)可适当增加细节,以使行文连贯;
(3)日记中不得出现真实的人名和校名。
Friday, April 13th
It was sunny today. We went on a school trip.??? 答案
写作要点
1.本文为应用文,是一则日记。主体时态为一般过去时。人称以第一人称为主。
2.按题目要求将写作要点一一呈现。
参考范文
Friday, April 13th
It was sunny today. We went on a school trip. We visited the Greenery Farm and it was great fun.
All of our classmates met at the school gate at 7: 00 a.m., and went to the farm by bus. On arriving there, we were given a warm welcome by the farm workers. Then one of the workers showed us around the farm, where we learned a lot about farming.
At noon, we had a picnic, during which we enjoyed ourselves in the sunshine, singing, dancing and flying the kites. We did love the fresh air and the beauty of nature. We took lots of pictures.Time flied! It was time for us to leave though we didn't want to. It was really an unforgettable and meaningful
trip for us.精彩语句????
1.精美词汇:beauty n.美,美丽;unforgettable adj.难忘的;meaningful adj.有意义的;show (sb.) around领(某人)参 观;enjoy oneself玩得开心男;take pictures照相
2.出彩结构:
On arriving there, we were given a warm welcome by the farm workers.(on doing sth.一……就……)
It was time for us to leave though we didn't want to.(though引导让步状语从句;It's time for sb. to do sth.到某 人做某事的时间了)Writing 4(2018山西)
某校计划在今年暑期开展社会实践活动。为使同学们更好地了解自己的意向,合理地规划自己的时 间,学校对某年级 100 人进行了抽样调查,下图是相关活动的统计结果。其中,计划参加社区志愿者活动的 人数占 66%,参与庭院拍卖的人数占 10%。
? 请你用两段话写一篇短文,第一段简要说明图表内容,第二段从图表中选出一项你感兴趣的活动项目, 制订相应的计划,并说明理由。
要求:1.词数不少于 80 词;
2.首句已给出,不计入总词数;
3.文中不得出现真实的人名、校名。
?? 答案
写作要点
1.人称:第一人称;
2.时态:一般现在时、一般将来时;
3.要点:1)简要说明图表内容;
2)从图表中选出一项你感兴趣的项目,制订相应的计划,并说明理由。
参考范文
A school did a survey among 100 students about their plans for social practice activities during the summer vaca- tion. Here are the results. Sixty-six students want to do community volunteer work. Twenty-four percent are go- ing to learn a life skill. And only one tenth are interested in having a yard sale. In my view, it's good to do community volunteer work.Doing community volunteer work is one of the best ways to develop my abilities to communicate and cooperate. The community is a lot like a big family of different people. First, I need to make a group of volunteers by talk-
ing with the teenagers. Then we're going to work out different plans based on old people's needs. We can also organize some outdoor activities for the kids and hand out advertisements to better our environment. They all need us to communicate and work well with others. Now, I'm already looking forward to the coming vacation.
注:1. 词数少于 80 词的,从总分中扣去 1 分。
2. 如书写较差,以致影响理解的,可扣去 1 分。精彩语句????
1.精美词汇:do a survey 做调查,做研究;be interested in 对……感兴趣;in my view 依我看,按我的观点
2.出彩结构:Doing community volunteer work is one of the best ways to develop my abilities to communicate and cooperate. 本句用到了“one of the+形容词最高级+名词复数”结构以及不定式作后置定语。Writing 5(2018云南)
Doing Something Nice to...
提示:每个人都向往美好的生活,美好的生活需要我们真诚的付出和给予。请以“Doing Something Nice to...”为题,写一篇英语短文,谈谈你曾经或将要为他人、社会等做的一件美好的事情。
要求:1.请先将题目补全后再做答;
2.语言流畅、书写规范、卷面整洁,词数不少于60个;
3.文中不得使用真实姓名、校名,否则以零分计。
?? 答案
写作要点
1.按照题目提示的要求,补充完整题目,注意是补充“人或社会”;
2.要求具体写出这一件美好的事情,注意时态的正确使用;
3.总结自己的感受。
参考范文
Doing Something Nice to My Friend
A true friend reaches for your hand and touches your heart!
Jerry is my good friend. He's very thin. Last winter, he got ill. He had to go to hospital once a week. He took lots of medicine. I hoped he would be as strong as me. So every weekend, I asked him to practice playing bas- ketball with me. I taught him how to play it. Now he is much stronger and healthier.
I feel very happy to have done something nice to my friend.精彩语句????
1.精美词汇:touch your heart触动心灵;much stronger and healthier更加强壮和健康
2.出彩结构:I feel very happy to have done something nice to my friend.我感觉很高兴为我的朋友做了一些好 的事情。(feel+adj.+ to do sth.做某事感到……)Writing 6(2018浙江杭州)
假定你是李平(Tel:1361234567),家住滨海市人民路1号。你在美国旅行期间不慎遗失钱包,曾向宾馆询问。 以下是宾馆的答复邮件,请你阅读后进行回复,词数80左右。
? 答案
写作要点
1.本文是应用文。
2.写作时应使用第一人称,时态主要为一般现在时。
3.写作中应包含何时入住宾馆、所住房间和对失物的描述及里面的物品,并附上地址和电话号码。
参考范文
Dear Mr. Smith,
Thank you so much for your reply. I stayed in your hotel on July 6, in Room 106, and I remember having left my new black wallet on the table. My ID card, two credit cards, and a 100-dollar bill, are in my wallet. Would you be kind enough to send me the wallet to No. 1 Renmin Road, Binhai, China by mail if you find it?Please call me at my phone number 1361234567 if needed.
Thanks again.
Yours,
Li PingWriting 7(2018黑龙江齐齐哈尔,B)
习主席在十九大报告中提出要建设美丽中国、推进绿色发展、解决环境问题,足见习主席对环保的重 视!作为新时代的中学生,如何响应习主席的号召,从“我”做起保护环境?请用英语写一篇短文,表达你的 想法。
要求:1.词数:80—100词。
2.字迹工整,语言流畅,表达准确,逻辑清晰。
3.要有复合句的表达。
??? 答案
写作要点
1.本文是一篇有关环境保护的文章。主体时态是一般现在时。
2.内容要点:
①环境的现状和保护环境的重要性。
②保护环境的具体做法。
③自己对保护环境的想法。
参考范文
The environmental problems are very serious these days. In order to make our country more beautiful, we stu- dents should do something to protect the environment.
I think we should turn off the lights to save electricity when we leave the room. And when we brush our teeth, we'd better turn off the taps. Also, we should advise our parents to take the bus to work instead of driving and use reusable bags when shopping. Only if we know what to do in our daily life can we make a difference.How important it is for us to protect the environment!精彩语句????
1.精美词汇:in order to do sth.为了做某事;instead of doing sth.代替做某事;取代做某事;make a difference 产 生影响
2.出彩结构:
①Only if we know what to do in our daily life can we make a difference.(倒装句)
②How important it is for us to protect the environment!(感叹句)Writing 8(2018吉林长春,B)
在日常生活中,总有些事情影响着你的自身发展。请写一篇不少于80词的英语短文,叙述一件对你影 响较大的事情,谈一谈这件事情是如何影响了你某一方面品质(quality)的提升,如独立、勤奋、乐于助人等, 并在班级的英语园地中展出。(文中不得出现真实的人名和校名)
???? 答案
写作要点????
这是一篇记叙文,要求叙述一件对你影响较大的事情以及这件事对你品质上的影响。内容要点包括:①事 件;②影响。人称以第一人称为主,时态以一般过去时为主。
参考范文
Among a number of unforgettable memories, what impressed me most in my junior high school was joining the singing competition, which proved to be meaningful.
During the singing competition, although we spent a large amount of time preparing for it, we still failed many times and lost our confidence. The moment we would give up, our teacher encouraged us,“It doesn't matter whether we win or lose and we should support each other.”Encouraged by our teacher, we eventually made it.
What an amazing memory it was!I didn't realize the real meaning of success until I learnt to work together and help each other.精彩语句????
1.精美词汇:a number of许多;spend time doing sth.花费时间做某事;give up放弃;help each other互相帮助
2.出彩结构:①It doesn't matter whether we win or lose and we should support each other.(whether引导主语从 句)
②What an amazing memory it was!(感叹句)
③I didn't realize the real meaning of success until I learnt to work together and help each other.(not...until...结 构)Writing 9(2018重庆)
假如你是李华,你校正举办英语读书节活动,你在参与活动的过程中遇到一些困难,请给你的英国朋友 Nick写一封email向他求助。
要求:
1.80~120词,开头和结尾已给出,不计入总词数;
2.文中不能出现自己的姓名和所在学校的名称。
参考要点:
1.活动情况简介(时间、内容……);
2.遇到的困难(如:缺少相关书籍、英语阅读困难……);
3.请求帮助的事项。Dear Nick,
How's everything going?
??
Yours,
Li Hua答案
写作要点
1.时态以一般现在时为主。
2.人称以第一人称为主。
3.主要内容:活动情况、遇到的困难和请求帮助的事项。
参考范文
Dear Nick,
How's everything going?
Our school is holding an English reading festival this June. I'm very interested in it. There are many different activities in the festival such as reading good English books, sharing good stories and so on. It's a good chance for us to learn more about western cultures. However, I have some problems. First, I don't have enough books. For example, I want to get some books about western history. Next, I'm not so good at English. I have trouble in reading. Would you please share some good books with me and give me some advice on reading?I expect to hear from you soon.
Best wishes!
Yours,
Li Hua精彩语句????
1.精美词汇:activity n.活动;festival n.节日;chance n.机会;advice n.建议;western adj.西方的
2.出彩结构:(1)I have trouble in reading.have trouble in doing sth.在做某事方面有麻烦。
(2)Would you please share some good books with me and give me some advice on reading?Would you please do...?请你做……好吗?Writing 10(2017辽宁沈阳,B)
为迎接国际慈善日(the International Day of Charity)的到来,某英文报刊将要举办有奖征文活动,请你以I would like to ???? for charity为题写篇短文(词数80~100),为本次活动投稿。步骤与要点如下:
1.确定主题,并在文中说明原因;
2.围绕主题,进行叙述;
3.写出具体计划,也可以讲述一段与主题有关的故事或经历。
要求:
1.补全标题(参考词汇:sell old things, hold a book fair, pick up rubbish, organize an activity等);
2.字迹工整,内容完整连贯,语言准确规范;
3.鼓励写出真情实感,对紧扣主题的适当发挥不予扣分。短文的开头已给出,不计入总词数;
4.作文中可以写出具体计划内容,也可以使用亲身经历或虚构故事,但要注意时态的运用;如果参照短文中 的内容,不可以直接引用短文中的句子;
5.作文中不要出现考生和相关人物的真实校名和姓名。I would like to ???? for charity
The International Day of Charity is coming. Many people will do something for it. What should I do?Here is my idea.
I would like to...
??? 答案
写作要点
1.本文话题是表达计划与愿望。主体时态是一般将来时。
2.内容要点:①补全标题I would like to ???? for charity.(sell old things, hold a book fair, pick up rubbish, or- ganize an activity等);
②说明想为慈善做什么及原因(一般现在时);
③围绕主题进行叙述(一般将来时)。
参考范文
I would like to hold a book fair for charity
The International Day of Charity is coming.Many people will do something for it. What should I do? Here is my idea.I would like to hold a book fair in our community at weekends. At the book fair, people can not only read books they want to and share their ideas with others but also can buy some books they like.
In order to have enough books for the book fair, I will take out all my books that I have ever read and I will also collect some books from my friends or relatives. I think the book fair will be very meaningful to everyone in our community. I hope it will last a long time.Writing 11(2017内蒙古呼和浩特)
良好的文明素养应该从小抓起,作为青城的文明市民、文明中学生,我们应该做到哪些方面?短文要包 括以下内容:
1.保护环境,不乱扔垃圾,不践踏草坪;
2.文明出行,遵守交通规则;
3.尊敬老师,努力学习,助人为乐;
4.……
要求:1.80—100词(开头已给出,不计入总词数);
2.文中不得使用你的真实姓名、校名;
3.语言流畅、书写规范、卷面整洁。
4.参考词:rubbish 垃圾;spit 吐痰;traffic rules 交通规则;respect 尊敬Our city is making its effort to become a civilized city. As citizens of Green City, we should????
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写作要点
1.人称:第一人称
2.时态:一般现在时
3.要点:(1)保护环境,不乱扔垃圾,不践踏草坪;(2)文明出行,遵守交通规则;(3)尊敬老师,努力学习,助人为乐; (4)根据自己生活中的实际情况适当发挥。
参考范文
Our city is making its effort to become a civilized city. As citizens of Green City, we should not only protect our environment but also follow the traffic rules.
First, we mustn't step on the grass or climb trees. Rubbish mustn't be thrown everywhere. We should also plant more trees. Second, we must obey the traffic rules. When crossing the streets, we should walk on the zebra cross- ing. Besides, we mustn't go across the street when the traffic lights are red. What's more, we must respect our teachers and be polite to others, and help those who are in need and be friendly to the people around us. In short, we should get on well with our teachers and classmates.
All in all, we should have good manners. Green City is our hometown. We should protect it. We all love our hometown!精彩语句????
1.精美词汇:go across the street 穿过大街;be polite to 对……有礼貌;be friendly to对……友好;in short 简言 之;all in all 总的说来
2.出彩结构:not only...but also...不但……而且;what's more另外Writing 12(2017甘肃兰州)
同学们好!会工作、会学习、会运动、会娱乐就是会生活。良好的运动习惯是生活的重要组成部分。 请你根据以下内容要点提示,以“Sports Make Me Strong and Confident”为题,写一篇短文,可以适当发挥。
1.每天早晨6:30按时起床,做半个小时运动,晚饭后散步1小时左右。
2.骑车或步行上学。
3.主动上体育课,积极参加课外活动,从不旷课。
4.身体健壮,精力充沛,运动会常得第一,永远保持运动习惯。
写作要求:
1.80—100词,开头部分已给出,但不计入规定字数。
2.内容合理;要点齐全;句子及篇章结构正确、连贯;书写规范。
3.不得出现校名和自己的姓名等个人信息。Everybody, men or women, young or old, should have a good habit of doing sports. So should I, and so I do.
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写作要点
本篇文章的时态为一般现在时,人称为第一人称;在写作时,要注意4个要点齐全,句子及篇章结构正确、连 贯,注意书写工整。
参考范文
Everybody, men or women, young or old, should have a good habit of doing sports. So should I, and so I do.
In the morning, I usually get up at 6:30 on time, and do morning exercises for half an hour. After breakfast, I ride or walk to school, which is also a kind of exercise. In the school, I take an active part in P.E. Sometimes we play football and volleyball, and sometimes we play basketball, table tennis or badminton. Football is my favorite sport. I also join in all the after-class activities. I have never been absent from them. In the evening after supper, I often take a walk along the street near my house for an hour with either my parents or my friends.精彩语句????
1.精美词汇:absent adj.缺席;energetic/full of energy精力充沛;take an active part in...积极参加……
2.出彩结构:After breakfast, I ride or walk to school, which is also a kind of exercise.which引导定语从 句。I like sports, which makes me healthy, strong and energetic/full of energy. So I often get the first prize in the school sports meeting. I will keep the good habit all my life. Writing 13(2017吉林,B)
假如你是李华,是一名初三学生,2017年被评为“校园运动之星”。你的笔友Jim想请你介绍一下在初 中三年里,运动在身体、心理、学习等方面给你带来的一些益处和你未来的运动计划。请你给Jim发一封 电子邮件。
内容包括:1.运动的益处(至少2点)
2.未来的运动计划(至少2点)
写作要求:1.词数90字左右,开头结尾已给出,不计入总词数。
2.文中不得出现真实的学校名称与姓名。
Dear Jim,
How is it going?I am proud of being chosen as“the School Sports Star”of 2017.??? ?
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Yours,
Li Hua答案
写作要点
1.本文是一封电子邮件,时态主要为将来时和一般现在时。
2.写作要点:1)运动的益处 2)未来的运动计划
参考范文
Dear Jim,
How is it going?I am proud of being chosen as“the School Sports Star”of 2017. Now, I'd like to share my ex- perience with you.
I used to be weak and shy, but now I become healthier than before by doing sports. Exercise also helps me get more confident, so I am popular in our school now. With the growth of confidence and popularity, I study harder and get better grades.
To stay healthy, I want to make a plan. First of all, I will do some running every morning. Then, I will climb the mountains on weekends.I believe it's never too late to do sports. Only in this way can we keep in good health.
Please write to me soon.
Yours,
Li Hua精彩语句????
1.精美词汇:be proud of为……而自豪;confident adj.自信的
2.出彩结构:Only in this way can we keep in good health.本句使用了倒装结构,还有keep in good health这 一短语。Writing 14(2017云南)
A Special Day
提示:在每个人的生活中,总会有些特别的日子。请根据所给题目“A Special Day”写一篇英语短文, 记叙你特别的一天。
要求:1.语言流畅、书写规范、卷面整洁,词数不少于60个;
2.文中不得使用真实姓名、校名,否则以零分计。
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写作要点
本文属于命题作文。要求写自己的经历,所以应该使用第一人称和一般过去时。写作内容注意以下几点:1. 点题;2.具体描述这一天;3.总结。参考范文
A Special Day
I had a very special day when I was a primary school student.
On that day, I went for a picnic with my friends. When we were about to leave after the picnic, a farmer stopped us and said:“It's not good to leave so much litter here. You should clean it.”We were ashamed and did it at once. From then on, the farmer's words remind me that I should protect the environment.
I'll never forget such a special day that makes me grow up.精彩语句????
1.精美词汇:be about to即将;ashamed adj.惭愧的
2.出彩结构:It's not good to leave so much litter here.固定句型It's+adj.+to do sth. 做某事是……的。Writing 15(2017福建)
你的美国朋友John计划暑假来中国旅游。请你根据以下图示,用英语在QQ中给他留言,介绍并推荐你 的家乡福建,词数80左右。
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要求:
1.必须包含所有提示信息,开头与结尾已给出,不计入总词数;2.意思清楚,表达通顺,行文连贯,书写规范;
3.请勿在文中使用真实的姓名、校名及提示信息以外的地名。
Hi, John, I'm glad to hear that you're planning to travel around China during the summer vacation. I'd like to invite you to my hometown Fujian for a visit.
Fujian lies????
I'm looking forward to meeting you!答案
写作要点
1.时态:一般现在时;
2.要点:1)位置:中国东南部;2)省会:福州;3)人口:超过38 million;4)环境:从空气、大山等方面介绍;5)名胜古 迹:武夷山,鼓浪屿;6)其他方面。
参考范文
Hi, John, I'm glad to hear that you're planning to travel around China during the summer vacation. I'd like to invite you to my hometown Fujian for a visit.
Fujian lies in the southeast of China with Fuzhou as its capital city. It has a population of over 38 million. Be- cause of the nice environment, it's known as Refreshing Fujian, which attracts millions of tourists from home 精彩语句????
1.精美词汇:attract v.吸引;millions of 数以百万计的;from home and abroad来自国内外;be well worth doing很 值得做某事;look forward to期待
2.出彩结构:It has a population of over 38 million.表达某地人口数量。and abroad. If you come, you can enjoy fresh air, blue sky as well as beautiful mountains and clear rivers. Many famous places of interest like Mount Wuyi and Gulang Island are well worth visiting. Besides, you can taste var- ious kinds of delicious food.
I'm looking forward to meeting you!Writing 16(2017重庆)
在过去的日子里,我们曾经欢笑,也曾经哭泣……照片,或将这些精彩定格,或勾起你对往事的回忆。某英语 网站向你发出邀请,请你按要求用英语写一篇文章,分享你照片背后的故事。
要求:
1.故事必须原创;
2.80—120词,开头已给出,不计入总词数;
3.文中不能出现自己的姓名和所在学校的名称。
参考要点:
1.描述你的照片(时间,地点,人物……);
2.分享你的故事(起因,经过,结果……);
3.谈谈你的感受(感动,怀念,影响……)。This is a photo that is very special to me. In the photo,
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写作要点
1.本文分享过去的事情,所以主要用一般过去时。
2.写作要点:(1)描述你的照片;(2)分享你的故事;(3)谈谈你的感受。
参考范文
This is a photo that is very special to me. In the photo, I was 10 while my dad looked younger. Look, we are playing ping pong happily.
I used to be a ping pong player. My dad trained me so hard, though he was tired after a day's work. Once, I lost a game and I felt so sad that I wanted to give up. My father said nothing, sitting quietly with me. The next morn- ing, I found a piece of paper. It said,“Never give up, dear. I am proud of you!”
Now, I spend less time playing ping pong because of my busy study. But I will never
（河北专用） 专题十七 书面表达A组 2015—2019年河北中考题组Writing 1(2019河北)
文明礼貌从我做起,从现在做起,从点滴小事做起。请根据下面的提示和要求,以“When to Say Thank You”为题,写一篇短文。
提示:(1)When should we say “thank you” at home?
(2)When are we supposed to say “thank you” at school?
(3)...
要求:(1)短文须包括提示中的两个要点和一个补充要点,可适当发挥。
(2)短文中不要出现真实的地名、校名和人名。
(3)词数80个左右。(开头已给出,不计入总词数)
参考词汇:wash, encourage, openWhen to Say Thank You
It's polite to say“thank you”when others help us or say something kind to us.????
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写作要点
1.文体:议论文。
2.注意人称和时态的使用。
3.时态:一般现在时。
参考范文
When to Say Thank You
It's polite to say“thank you”when others help us or say something kind to us. For example, when Mom or Dad washes the clothes, cleans the room or cooks dinner for us, we should say“thank you”to them. At school, when someone lends us a pen or hands us something, it's nice to say “thank you”. If a teacher says“well done”to encourage us, we're supposed to say “thank you”. Whenever someone holds the door open for us, we should also say“thank you”.
Be polite and always remember to say “thank you”!精彩语句????
1.精美词汇:say “thank you” to sb. 感谢某人;be supposed to do sth. 应该做某事
2.出彩结构:If a teacher says “well done”to encourage us, we're supposed to say “thank you”.(本句含有if 引导的条件状语从句)Writing 2(2018河北)
请仔细观察下面的图片,并根据所给提示和要求写一篇短文。
提示:(1)What are the man and the woman doing?
(2)What should you do when you see people litter like this? Why?
要求:(1)短文须包括所有提示内容,可适当发挥。
(2)短文中不要出现真实的地名、校名和人名。
(3)词数80个左右(开头已给出,不计入总词数)。
参考词汇:throw, environment, civilized(文明的)I can see a man and a woman in the picture. The man is
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写作要点
1.人称:要点一用第三人称;要点二用第一人称。
2.时态:要点一用现在进行时态;要点二用一般现在时态。
3.要点:(1)图片上的男人和女人正在干什么?(2)当你看到人们像这样乱扔垃圾时你会怎么做?为什么?
参考范文
I can see a man and a woman in the picture. The man is throwing rubbish on the ground. The woman is telling him to put the rubbish in the dustbin.
When I see people litter like this, I believe I can not stand by and do nothing. I will stop them from doing so, like the woman in the picture did. The city is our home. It's our duty to protect our environment. What's more, it's important to learn to be a civilized person.
Let's take action and make the world more beautiful!精彩语句????
1.精美词汇:stand by and do nothing袖手旁观;what's more 另外
2.出彩结构:It's our duty to protect our environment.(It为形式主语,真正的主语为动词不定式to protect our environment)Writing 3(2017河北)
英语课上,同学们正在准备举行以“真实的自我”为主题的演讲活动。请你以李华的名义写一篇演讲 词,向同学们介绍一下自己。
提示:(1)What are your strong points?
(2)How do you improve yourself?
(3)What is your dream for the future?
要求:(1)演讲词须包括所有提示内容,可适当发挥。
(2)演讲词中不得出现真实的人名、校名和地名。
(3)词数80个左右(开头和结尾已给出,不计入总词数)。
Hello, everyone!
I'm Li Hua and I'm very happy to stand here to talk about myself.????
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Thanks for your attention!答案
写作要点
1.人称:第一人称。
2.时态:一般现在时、一般将来时。
3.要点:(1)你的优点是什么?(2)你怎样提高你自己?(3)你未来的梦想是什么?
参考范文
Hello, everyone!
I'm Li Hua and I'm very happy to stand here to talk about myself. I'm a kind and helpful person. I'm always ready to help others when they're in trouble. I can sing and dance so well that I often give performances at our school party.
When I think back what I've done before, I should help my parents do more housework. Doing housework is good for my future life.As for my dream, I want to be a teacher. I'll make friends with my kids. I want to teach them everything I know!
Thanks for your attention!精彩语句????
1.精美词汇:kind adj.善良的;helpful adj.有帮助的,有用的;be ready to help others乐于助人;be in trouble陷入 困境; make friends with sb.和某人交朋友
2.出彩结构:I can sing and dance so well that I often give performances at our school party.(“so+形容词 或副词+that...”意为“如此……以至于……”)Writing 4(2016河北)
关于“说英语”问题,李华和他的英语老师Miss Wang持不同的观点。请你仔细阅读下图中的对话内 容,从中选择一个角色,按照所给要求写一篇短文。
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要求:(1)用“Li Hua”或“Miss Wang”补全短文首句;(2)写出所选角色的观点,并续写理由;
(3)短文中不得出现真实的人名、校名和地名;
(4)词数80个左右(开头已给出,不计入总词数)。
参考词汇:shy;make a mistake;believe in
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写作要点
1.本文是议论文,主体时态为一般现在时;
2.内容要点:①用“Li Hua”或“Miss Wang”补全短文首句。
②写出所选角色的观点,并续写理由。
3.参考词汇:shy害羞的;make a mistake犯错;believe in相信
参考范文
Possible version 1:
I am Miss Wang. Your English is poor because you don't speak English. English, like any other language, is a tool of communication—the more you speak it, the better your English will become. So you should try to speak every day, as much as possible. And don't be shy or afraid of making a mistake. Your teacher and classmates are always ready to help you. The most important is that you must believe in yourself and never give up!Always remember: practice makes perfect!Possible version 2:
I am Li Hua. I don't speak English because my English is poor. I find it hard to speak English. I am a little shy and afraid of making a mistake. I always feel nervous when I stand up speaking English in class. I'm afraid that my classmates may laugh at me when I speak English. To tell you the truth, I don't believe in myself. The less I speak, the worse my English is. When my English improves, I will enjoy speaking it.Writing 5(2015河北)
英语课上,老师要求同学们介绍个人周末计划。假设下面表格内容是你的计划提纲,请根据表格提示 的活动内容,写一篇发言稿,介绍你的周末计划,并在班上与同学交流。要求:(1)发言稿须包括三个所列要点和一个补充要点;
(2)发言稿中四个要点都要适当发挥;
(3)发言稿中不得涉及真实的人名、校名和地名;
(4)词数:80个左右(已给出的开头和结尾不计入总词数)。
Hi,everyone! Here's my plan for the weekend.????
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Thank you!答案
写作要点
1.本文是一篇有关周末计划的班级发言稿,主体时态为一般将来时。2.内容要点:
(1)周六:看电视,去书店;周日:去看爷爷奶奶;个人补充要点;
(2)以上要点都要适当发挥。
参考范文
Hi,everyone!Here's my plan for the weekend.
On Saturday morning,I'm going to watch TV to relax myself after a long week's study.I like watching comedies and cartoons.On Saturday afternoon,I'm going to the bookstore to buy some books.Reading is one of my hob- bies.
On Sunday,I'm going to visit my grandparents because I miss them very much.I'll help them do some house- work.After I come back,I'll do my homework to get ready for the next week.
That's my weekend.
Thank you!B组 2015—2019年全国中考题组Writing 1(2019天津)
假如你是晨光中学的学生李华,平时坚持用英语写日记。请根据以下要点,描述你星期三放学乘地铁 回家路上看到的事情,并表达自己的想法。
(1)一个男孩不舒服,开始呕吐,一位穿着漂亮的女士帮着擦拭地面,男孩表达感谢。
(2)地铁到站,有人挤向座位,有人下不去车,有人因此争吵。
(3)你认为……
参考词汇:开始呕吐 begin to vomit
挤向座位 push towards the seat
争吵 have a quarrel
要求:
(1)词数:80~100个。
(2)日记格式和开头已给出,不计入总词数。
(3)要点齐全,行文连贯,可适当发挥。Wednesday
When I took the underground back home after school, I noticed
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写作要点
1.时态以一般过去时为主。
2.给出的要点和参考词汇要全部用上。
3.注意表达自己的观点时,要传递正能量,态度要明确。
参考范文
Wednesday
When I took the underground back home after school, I noticed a boy who looked uncomfortable, and then he began to vomit. But people around him just looked at him. Nobody wanted to help him. Just then, a beautifully dressed woman helped him scrub the floor, and the boy thanked her very much.
When the underground arrived, some people pushed towards the seat, some people couldn't get off, and some people had a quarrel about it.
After seeing this, I think people should help each other. And we should obey some rules. Only in this way will
our world become better and better.Writing 2(2019重庆)
你正在组织一项暑假期间到山区为期一周的游学和帮扶活动。作为发起人,请你写一篇发言稿,在你 校“英语时光”广播中号召更多的同学参加。
要求:
1.80—120词,开头和结尾已给出,不计入总词数;
2.文中不能出现自己的姓名和所在学校的名称。
参考信息:
1.活动缘由(孤独、帮扶、游学……);
2.活动构想(时间、地点、内容……);
3.……
Hello, everybody. I am planning a summer trip called “Be a Kid in the Mountains”.?? ??
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Thank you!答案
写作要点
1.体裁:应用文。
2.人称:主体人称为第一人称和第三人称。
3.时态:以一般现在时态为主。
4.要点:
1)活动缘由(孤独、帮扶、游学……);
2)活动构想(时间、地点、内容……);
3)……
参考范文
Hello, everybody. I am planning a summer trip called “Be a Kid in the Mountains”. It will provide us with a meaningful week staying with the students in the mountains.As many of their parents leave for the city development, these students might feel lonely and some may even
find it hard to go on studying. So we can bring them some school things like books and pens for their study, and prepare some interesting stories to share. In the daytime, we can go hiking and do some teamwork. In the evening, we can do such activities as popular games and group dance around the fire.
Isn't that exciting? Come and join us. Let's be “a kid in the mountains”. I believe it will bring sunshine to the mountains as well as more confidence to us.
Thank you!精彩语句????
1.精美词汇:meaningful adj.有意义的;development n.发展;prepare v.准备;share v.分享;as well as也,和……一样
2.出彩结构:I believe it will bring sunshine to the mountains as well as more confidence to us. (宾语从句;as well as连接两个并列成分)Writing 3(2019安徽)
假定你是李华,你的英国笔友Mike最近因视力减退而感到不安,请你用英文给他写封电子邮件,谈谈你 在保护视力方面的一些做法。要点如下:
1.经常做户外活动;
2.很少用电子产品;
3.坚持做眼保健操;
4.……
注意:1.词数80~100;
2.可适当增加细节,以使行文连贯;
3.文中不能出现与本人相关的信息;
4.开头和结尾已为你写好,不计入总词数。Dear Mike,
I'm sorry to learn that your eyesight is getting weaker.
Yours,
Li Hua答案
写作要点
1.视力减退有多种原因。有运动量减少,体质下降;有饮食不当,营养不良;有使用电子产品过度对视力造成 伤害等。可根据各条提出建议并解释原因。
2.以第一人称为主,一般现在时态为主。
参考范文
Dear Mike,
I'm sorry to learn that your eyesight is getting weaker. I'd like to share with you some ways of protecting eye- sight in my daily life.
At school, I often go out of the classroom to play with my classmates or do physical exercise during the breaks. In my free time, I also try hard to avoid using the mobile phone or computer. You know, the light they give off is harmful to our eyes. Besides, doing eye exercises plays an important role in relaxing my tired eyes. Lastly, I usually have my eyes examined every term to make sure my eyes stay healthy.I hope you'll find my ways helpful.
Yours,
Li Hua精彩语句????
1.精美词汇:do physical exercise进行体育锻炼
avoid using the mobile phone避免使用手机
2.出彩结构:Lastly, I usually have my eyes examined every term to make sure my eyes stay healthy.(to make sure...为动词不定式短语,作目的状语)Writing 4(2019山东青岛)
人生中有很多第一次:第一次学游泳;第一次跟家人外出旅行;第一次做家务;第一次赢得比赛;第一次 ……。请根据提示,就你的第一次……写一篇短文。
内容包括:
1.第一次……的整个过程;
2.你的感受。
要求:
1.词数:80—100(开头已给出,不计入总词数);
2.文中不得出现真实的校名和人名。
As we all know, everyone has his unforgettable memories. I still remember the first time????
??? 答案
写作要点
1.本文为夹叙夹议文,介绍第一次做某事的经历用一般过去时,谈感受时用一般现在时。本文主要使用 第一人称。
2.叙述过程完整,避免语法错误,注意时态转换。
参考范文
As we all know, everyone has his unforgettable memories. I still remember the first time I won the English com- petition.
When I was a child, I was not good at English and I hated English class, so that I often lost my thought when I was learning English. However, my warm-hearted English teacher always encouraged me to study harder. Be- sides, she also taught me some ways of learning English, such as talking with native speakers, writing as often as possible and listening to English songs and so on. From then on, with her help and my efforts, I started to be in- terested in English and learn English actively in my class.Finally, I entered the English competition and won the first prize.
When you have trouble in studying subjects or something else, do not give up. I believe you will find the way to solve problems successfully. Only in this way can we achieve our dreams.
That's all! Thank you!精彩语句????
1.精美词汇:be good at擅长 so that 因此 encourage sb. to do sth. 鼓励某人做某事 as...as possible 尽可能 …… from then on 从那以后
2.出彩结构:
Only in this way can we achieve our dreams.(倒装句)Writing 5(2019江苏南京)
假如你是李华,在网上看到英国Britech公司为正在开发的一款提高英语写作能力的应用软件(app)征集 网友建议。请根据网上的征集信息,用英语给该公司写一封电子邮件。
IDEAS NEEDED
Britech is now designing an app that helps learners with their English writing. The app is to help learners explore ideas, organize them and write them down. Your ideas are needed!
Here's what to do:
Write to share your ideas! Feel free to be creative!
Please let us know:
●What's the name of the app?
●What problem does the app solve?
●What does the app do?
Contact us at appdesign@Britech.com注意:
1.内容涵盖所有要点,可适当发挥。
2.词数80左右(已给出的文章开头,不计入总词数)。
3.文中不得提及有关考生个人身份的任何信息,如校名、人名等。
Dear Sir or Madam,
Thanks for designing an app for English writing. ▲ ???? ????
▲ ????
▲ ????
Yours,
Li Hua答案
写作要点
1.体裁:本文是应用文中的回信类作文。
2.人称:第一人称等。
3.时态:主体时态为一般现在时。
4.确定要点:
1)这个app的名称;
2)这个app解决什么问题;
3)这个app应有的具体功能。
参考范文
Dear Sir or Madam,
Thanks for designing an app for English writing. I'd like to share my ideas here. Could its name be “Writing Made Easy”?Many of us have difficulty in writing. We don't know how to organize ideas, use proper words, and so on. I hope it can solve these problems.
Here is my advice on what the app does. First, it should provide some reading materials. The more we read, the better we write. Second, the app should have an online course so that we can develop our writing skills. Third, there should be an e-teacher who can correct mistakes and offer suggestions.
I hope my advice is worth taking.
Yours,
Li Hua精彩语句????
1.精美词汇:have difficulty in doing sth.做某事有困难 and so on等等 correct mistakes纠错 offer sugges- tions提供建议
2.出彩结构:①The more we read, the better we write.(本句用了“the+比较级,the+比较级”结构,表示“越… …,就越 ……”)
②Second, the app should have an online course so that we can develop our writing skills. (so that引导目的状语 从句)
③Third, there should be an e-teacher who can correct mistakes and offer suggestions. (who引导定语从句,修饰 先行词an e-teacher)Writing 6(2019江苏苏州)
假定你是苏华,最近你的澳大利亚笔友Nathan犯了一些错误,倍感懊恼,写了一封邮件向你诉说。为帮 助他排解困惑,请你根据他的邮件内容并结合自身经历,用英语回信开导他。注意:1.词数90左右,开头和结尾已经写好,不计入总词数;
2.回复需包括所有要点,可适当发挥,使短文连贯、通顺;
3.文中不得提及真实的人名、校名等相关信息。
Dear Nathan,
I'm sorry to know that you are not happy these days.
????
I hope my experience can help you out.
Best wishes,
Su Hua答案
写作要点
1.审题:这是一篇应用文。注意人称的使用,主体时态为一般现在时和一般过去时。
2.确定要点:
1)同意(或不同意)每个人都会犯错;
2)描述自己犯过的一个错误;
3)如何处理自己的问题;
4)从错误中学到了什么。
参考范文
Dear Nathan,
I'm sorry to know that you are not happy these days. You needn't worry too much. It's true that everyone makes mistakes.Take me, for example. One day, I spent so much time playing football with my friends that I forgot to do my
homework. I said sorry to my teacher and finished it the next day. I found it important to achieve a balance be- tween schoolwork and hobbies.
It doesn't matter whether or not you make mistakes. What matters most is to correct and learn from them. In this way, others will understand you. Then you will feel much better.
I hope my experience can help you out.
Best wishes,
Su Hua精彩语句????
1.精美词汇:needn't do 不需要做…… achieve v.获得 matter v.要紧 correct v.改正 in this way用这种方法
2.出彩结构:
1)...I spent so much time playing football with my friends that I forgot to do my homework.(so...that...引导结果 状语从句)
2)It doesn't matter whether or not you make mistakes. (whether引导宾语从句)
3)What matters most is to correct and learn from them.(What matters most为主语从句,表语部分是to correct and learn from them)Writing 7(2019广西北部湾经济区)
暑假将至,你校English Club在社刊上发起了征文活动,题目为“My Plan for Summer Holiday”。请你 根据以下提示,用英语写一篇80词左右的短文。
写作要点:
1.学习计划;
2.运动计划;
3.娱乐计划;
4.你的愿望。
写作要求:
1.内容必须包括所给要点,可适当发挥,使行文连贯;
2.语篇完整,语句通顺,语法正确,书写规范;
3.文中不得出现人名、校名以及透露个人信息的地名,否则不予评分;
4.开头已给出,不计入总词数。My Plan for Summer Holiday
The summer holiday is coming.??? 答案
写作要点
本书面表达可根据题目所给的要点提示,采用总分总的结构进行写作。写作过程中注意以一般将来时为 主。为了使内容充实,在写每一个要点时,可适当发挥。
参考范文
My Plan for Summer Holiday
The summer holiday is coming. I can't wait to make a good plan for it.
First, I will spend hours on my study every day. Reading more books and practicing writing will be good ways to improve myself. Second, in order to keep fit, I will do some sports with my friends, such as playing basketball and swimming. This summer holiday will be a good time for fun, so I plan to watch movies and have picnics with my family. What's more, to experience different cultures in other places will be the most important part of my plan.
All of these will be helpful for my future life. I am looking forward to a meaningful holiday. 精彩语句????
精美词汇:can't wait to do sth.迫不及待做某事 spend...on...在……上花费(时间/金钱) in order to do sth.为 了做某事 such as例如 plan to do sth.计划做某事 what's more更为重要的是 look forward to期待评析????本书面表达的话题为学生所熟悉,贴近学生生活实际,使得学生有话可写。从命题的形式上来看,属 于“提纲式”作文,即让学生根据题目所给的要点提示来进行写作。Writing 8(2019湖北武汉)
学校英语社团正在组织题为“My Family”的征文活动。假如你是李明,请根据以下内容提示用英语 完成征文。
内容要点如下:
1.三口之家,家庭幸福,邻里和睦;
2.父母为教师,在校深受欢迎;
3.分担家务,周末户外活动;
4.相互陪伴,经常交流,良好家规助我成长;
5.请补充说明一至两点与家庭相关的情况。
注意:
1.文中不得透露个人姓名和学校名称;
2.词数:60—80;
3.内容连贯,不要逐条翻译;4.标题和开头已给出,不计入总词数。
参考词汇:popular adj.受欢迎的 activity n.活动 rule n.规矩
My Family
I'm Li Ming.???? 答案
写作要点
一、体裁:说明文。
二、要点齐全:
1.三口之家,家庭幸福,邻里和睦;
2.父母为教师,在校受欢迎;
3.分担家务,周末户外活动;
4.相互陪伴,经常交流,良好家规助我成长;
5.一至两点与家庭相关的情况。
三、时态:一般现在时态。参考范文
My Family
I'm Li Ming. I have a happy family, and there are three people in my family. We get on well with our neighbors.
My parents are teachers, who are popular in school, and they are loved by their students. They share the house- work at home and we do outdoor activities on weekends. I think it's important to spend time and communicate with family members. I have strict family rules at home. They're so important that they can help me grow up well. We all like doing sports, like basketball and volleyball.
We love each other. What a happy family I have! What about you?精彩语句????
1.精美词汇:get on well with和……相处融洽;be popular (with sb.)受(某人)欢迎的
2.出彩结构:I think it's important to spend time and communicate with family members.(本句话是一个含有宾 语从句的主从复合句,it作形式主语,动词不定式是真正的主语)Writing 9(2018河南)
每个人都生活在一个特定的环境。请以“What I like about where I live”为题,并根据以下要点和要求 用英语写一篇短文,描述你生活的环境。
1.要点:1)你生活在什么样的环境;
2)你喜欢这个环境的什么;
3)你对这个环境有何期望。
2.要求:1)文中不得出现真实姓名和学校名称;
2)词数80左右。
What I like about where I live
??? 答案
写作要点
1.你生活在什么样的环境;
2.你喜欢这个环境的什么;
3.你对这个环境有何期望;
4.人称以第一人称为主;
5.时态主要是一般现在时。
参考范文
What I like about where I live
I live in a small and quiet city in Henan Province. Different from other cities, it has no skyscrapers or endless cars on the streets. People there are seldom late for their work and enjoy a slow and peaceful life. And that is what I like most about my city.However, my city has her problems. She has no high-speed train. I hope she will soon have high-speed trains so
that I can travel to other cities more easily! 精彩语句????
1.精美词汇:endless adj.无穷无尽的;peaceful adj. 和平的,平静的;however adv. 然而
2.出彩结构:And that is what I like most about my city. (what引导表语从句)Writing 10(2018陕西)
假如你是李华,上周日你独自在家照看你五岁的妹妹Nana,请根据表格内容,写一篇短文。 要求:1.参考表格内容,可适当发挥;
2.语句通顺,意思连贯,书写工整;
3.文章不得出现任何真实信息(姓名、校名和地名等);4.词数:不少于70词。(开头已给出,但不计入总词数。)
Last Sunday, my parents were not at home, so I looked after my 5-year-old sister Nana at home.
???? 答案
写作要点
1.本文为提纲类作文,主要描写过去事情发生的经过,主要时态应用一般过去时。
2.根据题目要求写出“我”在家照顾妹妹的过程,所以主要用第一人称。
3.写全表格中所列不同时段所做的事情,恰当使用表时间的状语。
参考范文
Last Sunday, my parents were not at home, so I looked after my 5-year-old sister Nana at home.
In the morning, I told her many funny stories first. Then we sang and danced happily together. I also taught her to speak a few simple English words and she learned well. At noon, I cooked noodles with tomatoes and eggs. She said they were delicious. I was very glad that she enjoyed the lunch. Then we had a rest. In the afternoon, we played games together. After that, we watched cartoons until my parents came back. I felt tired but happy.精彩语句????
1.精美词汇:look after 照顾;teach sb. to do sth.教某人做某事;delicious adj.美味的;enjoy v.喜欢
2.出彩结构:(1)I also taught her to speak a few simple English words and she learned well.(用and连接了两个并 列分句,且巧妙使用了simple和well等修饰语)
(2)I was very glad that she enjoyed the lunch.(句中使用了“be glad+that从句”结构)Writing 11(2018天津)
请你根据以下内容提示,以“The Story of Li Hua”为题,为学校广播站英语专栏写一篇短文,介绍发生 在你班同学李华身上的一件事。
(1)上周五放学后李华乘公交车回家,看到有人在吃橘子,并把橘皮扔在车上。
(2)李华把橘皮捡起,放进垃圾桶。
(3)乘客用手机拍了照片,发布到网上。
(4)老师知道后表扬了李华,李华说这是他应该做的。
(5)你觉得……
参考词汇:果皮peel 垃圾桶dustbin
发布post 表扬praise
要求:
(1)词数:80~100个。
(2)短文的题目和开头已给出,不计入总词数。(3)要点齐全,行文连贯,可适当发挥。
The Story of Li Hua
Last Friday, when my classmate Li Hua took a bus back home from school,??? 答案
写作要点
1.本文是一篇介绍李华所做的好事,引发学生思考,进而提出自己观点的记叙文。主体时态是一般过去时。
2.内容要点:
①介绍李华在公交车上的文明举止(一般过去时);
②介绍乘客及老师对李华行为的认可与赞赏(一般过去时);
③介绍李华对这件事的态度(一般过去时);
④根据李华的小故事表达自己的观点(一般现在时)。
参考范文
The Story of Li Hua
Last Friday, when my classmate Li Hua took a bus back home from school, he noticed that someone threw the orange peel on the bus. Then he picked up the peel and put it into the dustbin. At that time, a passenger on the bus took some pictures of the whole process and posted them on the Internet.The pictures spread so fast that Li Hua's teacher knew what Li Hua had done and praised him. But Li Hua said that it was his responsibility to protect the environment around us.
I think all of us should learn from Li Hua, and if everyone can have good manners, our society would be better and better.精彩语句????
1.精美词汇:pick up拾起,捡起;good manners 有礼貌;responsibility n.责任
2.出彩结构:(1)The pictures spread so fast that Li Hua's teacher knew what Li Hua had done and praised him. (含有so...that...引导的结果状语从句,使句式更丰富多彩)
(2)...if everyone can have good manners, our society would be better and better.(含有if引导的条件状语从句,句 式丰富)Writing 12(2018安徽)
某英文杂志社正面向九年级毕业生征文,请从以下要点中选择一至两个方面,并结合具体事例,用英语 写一篇题为“Thank you, my teacher!”的短文参加此次活动。要点如下:
1.严格要求;
2.耐心指导;
3.热情鼓励;
4.……
注意:1.词数80~100;
2.可适当增加细节,以使行文连贯;
3.文中不得出现真实姓名及学校名称。
?? 答案
写作要点
1.时态以一般过去时为主。
2.人称以第三人称和第一人称为主。
3.主要内容:严格要求;耐心指导;热情鼓励。
参考范文
I'd like to say thanks to my English teacher, Miss Li, because she's helped me a lot.
Once, I failed my English exam. When she found I was very worried, she encouraged me to study harder and promised to help me. After that, I turned to her for help every time I had questions. She was always patient to make me understand every single question. With her help, I've had enough courage to face difficulties and made much progress in English.
Thank you, my dear teacher!The love and support from you will be with me forever.精彩语句????
1.精美词汇:fail v.不及格,未能通过;encourage v.鼓励;promise v.承诺;turn to sb. for help向某人求助;patient adj.有耐心的
2.出彩结构:(1)After that, I turned to her for help every time I had questions.(every time 引导时间状语从句)
(2)She was always patient to make me understand every single question.(不定式短语作状语)
(3)With her help, I've had enough courage to face difficulties and made much progress in English.(With her help作状语)Writing 13(2018内蒙古包头)
假设你是李华,请给你们的美籍教师Bob写一封电子邮件,向他简要介绍你校即将举办的英语文化节 (English Culture Festival),邀请他参加本次活动,并请他在节目最后做一个关于如何学好英语的讲座。
邮件还应包括以下内容:
1.活动时间:本周五下午14:30—17:30;
2.活动地点:报告厅(Lecture Hall);
3.活动内容:学生演唱英文歌曲……
注意:1.词数90左右,开头和结尾已经写好,不计入总词数;
2.可适当增加细节,以使行文连贯;
3.文中不得出现反映考生信息的真实人名、地名等内容。Dear Bob,
How is it going?
??? ?
Looking forward to your reply.
Yours,
Li Hua答案
写作要点
1.本题的文体是应用文,描述即将举办的文化节,故时态以一般将来时为主。
2.写作要点:
(1)邀请Bob参加文化节
(2)文化节的情况
活动时间:本周五下午14:30—17:30;
活动地点:报告厅(Lecture Hall);
活动内容:学生演唱英文歌曲……
(3)节目最后做关于如何学好英语的讲座参考范文
Dear Bob,
How is it going?
An English Culture Festival will be held in our school. All of us students do hope that you could come and join us.
The activity will begin in the Lecture Hall at 14:30 this Friday and last about 3 hours. We've prepared many programs for it, for example, English songs. What's more, some students will perform plays in English.
As you know, many students in our school have difficulty in learning English well.So,when the performance fin- ishes,it would be very nice if you could give a talk and provide us with some practical advice.
Looking forward to your reply.
?Yours,
Li Hua精彩语句????
1.精美词汇:last v.持续;prepare...for...为……准备……;what's more另外,而且
2.出彩结构:So, when the performance finishes, it would be very nice if you could give a talk and provide us with some practical advice.本句中的when引导的是时间状语从句,if引导的是条件状语从句。Writing 14(2018四川成都)
假如你是图中女孩,你与家人于4月29日共度周日。请根据图中所示写一篇英文日记,讲述你当天所见 和所做之事。
?
注意:1.日记应包含图中所有信息;
2.日记中须写出当天的一些感受;
3.日记应格式正确,语句通顺,句式多样;
4.词数:100左右。参考词汇:城堡castle 螃蟹crab
?? 答案
写作要点
1.人称:第一人称。
2.时态:一般过去时。
3.要点:
1)日记格式:日期、天气;
2)所见所做;
3)感受。
参考范文
April 29th, Sunday ?Sunny
Today I had a good time with my parents on the beach. It was so fine that I could see the rising sun and flying sea birds. A boat sailed in the distance. What a beautiful scene! Dressed in my swimming suit, I swam in the blue and clear sea. Then, I played volleyball with my parents. Finally, I managed to make a sand castle with tools. It looked so real that a crab even wanted to live in it.
What a pleasant day! I not only got close to nature but also shared happiness with my family.精彩语句????
1.精美词汇:have a good time 玩得开心;on the beach在沙滩上;get close to接近
2.出彩结构:(1)It was so fine that I could see the rising sun and flying sea birds.本句话使用了so...that...句式,意 为“如此……以至于……”。
(2)What a pleasant day!本句为what引导的感叹句,其基本结构为:What+a/an+ adj.+可数名词单数(+其他)!Writing 15(2018新疆)
请以“My Traveling Plan”为题写一篇短文介绍你的旅行计划,提示信息如下:
1.Where are you going and who are you going with?
2.Why are you going there?
3.What are you going to do there?
注意:1.书写清晰,字迹工整,行文流畅,语句通顺,内容完整;
2.文中不得出现真实姓名、校名等信息;
3.词数:80~100。
???? 答案
参考范文
My Traveling Plan
I am going to travel in Beijing with my friends next month. Beijing is a beautiful city with a long history. It is the capital of China. I am going to stay there for several days. There are many interesting places. First I am going to visit Tian'anmen Square, the Summer Palace and the Great Wall. Then I am going to Wangfujing Street. There are a lot of stores there. I want to buy some gifts for my parents. And I am going to eat Peking Duck there. How delicious it is!精彩语句????
1.精美词汇:stay there for several days 待在那里几天 interesting adj.有趣的 buy sth. for sb. 给某人买某物 a beautiful city with a long history 一座拥有悠久历史的美丽的城市
2.出彩结构:Beijing is a beautiful city with a long history. (使用了含有with的介词短语作后置定语修饰city)Writing 16(2018广东广州)
你是英语校报编辑李华。校报收到初一新生Ben的来信,他提出了所面临的两个问题。请你根据以下 提示写一封回信,说明Ben的问题,提出你的建议并陈述理由。Dear Ben,
I am sorry to hear that you are having trouble getting used to life in middle school. In your letter you said that...
…
Good luck with everything!
Li Hua
注意:
(1)回信应包括所有要点;
(2)词数80左右(信的开头和结尾已给出,不计入词数);
(3)不得透露学校、姓名等任何个人信息,否则不予评分。
??? 答案
写作要点????
1.本文为书信。主体时态为一般现在时。
2.补充完整题干中没有给出的写作要点。
3.理由要充分,建议要符合实际。
参考范文
Dear Ben,
I am sorry to hear that you are having trouble getting used to life in middle school. In your letter you said that you always felt lonely because of having few friends. I think it is a good choice to join some clubs in your school. In this way, you can make more friends who share the same interest with you. Besides, you'd better be friendly to others. Smile at others and you are sure to get a smile in return.You found it difficult to remember English words. Reading more English stories and news can help you learn English words in a practical way. In addition, if you can develop a habit of keeping an English diary every day, it
will be easier for you to remember more words. I hope you will find these suggestions useful.
Good luck with everything!
Li HuaWriting 17(2018江苏南京)
请根据你校校刊KIDS MAG中HAVE YOUR SAY栏目的征稿内容,用英语写一篇短文,表达你的想法。
Hi,
At KIDS MAG we like to share your ideas about our school. In my column, HAVE YOUR SAY, you can let oth- er kids know what you think. This month we want you to have your say about Culture Week in our school:
●what theme(主题)of Culture Week you like
●why you like the theme
●what activity/activities you can organize for the theme
Looking forward to hearing from you.
Sam Southland
注意:
1.对所有要点逐一陈述,适当发挥。
2.词数80左右,文章的开头已经给出,不计入总词数。3.文中不得提及有关考生个人身份的任何信息,如校名、人名等。
I am glad to share my ideas about Culture Week in our school.??? 答案
写作要点
1.审题:
本文是一篇对征文的回复。阐述自己对Culture Week活动主题、原因及活动设计的想法。前两个要求用 一般现在时,活动设计用一般将来时。
2.确定要点:
(1)你喜欢的“文化周”活动主题;
(2)你喜欢这个主题的理由;
(3)你为这个主题设计的活动。
参考范文
I am glad to share my ideas about Culture Week in our school. I like the theme about international cooking of our Culture Week, because this can help us better understand different cultures while enjoying nice food.First, we will invite teachers and parents to give talks about international cooking. Then, we will hold a Cooking
Festival. All the students can bring their own dishes and share them with each other. Near the end of the week, we will have a DIY competition. There will be a surprise in the end.
I hope our Culture Week will be a great success!精彩语句????
1.精美词汇:help us better understand 帮助我们更好地理解;international adj.国际的;invite sb. to do sth.邀请某 人做某事;share sth. with sb.与某人分享某物
2.出彩结构:...because this can help us better understand different cultures while enjoying nice food. because引 导原因状语从句,while+现在分词结构作状语。Writing 18(2017天津)
英国学生Frank八月底将要来天津学习并住在李明家。请根据以下提示,以李明的名义给Frank写一封 电子邮件。
(1)Frank到来前,你们会给他准备好房间。
(2)你爸爸送你们上学,妈妈做美味的食物。
(3)周末你们会邀请Frank游览天津,如逛古文化街、乘船游海河。
(4)Frank喜欢打排球,你们可以一起看天津女排比赛。
(5)你相信……
参考词汇:古文化街 Tianjin Ancient Cultural Street
海河 Haihe River
天津女排 Tianjin Women's Volleyball Team
要求:
(1)词数:80~100个。(2)电子邮件的开头和结尾已给出,不计入总词数。
(3)要点齐全,行文连贯,可适当发挥。
Dear Frank,
I'm happy to hear that at the end of August you will come to Tianjin to study and stay with my family. I'm writ-ing to say welcome to you.
Before you arrive, we will???
Looking forward to seeing you soon.
Li Ming答案
写作要点
1.本文是一封电子邮件,时态为一般将来时和一般现在时。
2.写作要点:1)为Frank准备房间以及爸爸妈妈要做的事情;2)周末游览天津;3)看排球赛。
参考范文
Dear Frank,
I'm happy to hear that at the end of August you will come to Tianjin to study and stay with my family. I'm writ-ing to say welcome to you.
Before you arrive, we will provide you with a room.It's very nice and clean.My father will send us to school and my mother will cook delicious food for us.
What's more, on weekends we can visit Tianjin Ancient Cultural Street,which is full of the footprints of Tianjin 's history.We can also visit the Haihe River by ship,which is the mother river of Tianjin.I've heard you love playing volleyball,so I think a plan of watching a game of Tianjin Women's Volleyball
Team will delight you.
I believe that you will have fun in Tianjin and you will love Tianjin too!
Looking forward to seeing you soon.
Li Ming精彩语句????
1.精美词汇:provide...with...给……提供……;delight v.使高兴;footprint n.足迹
2.出彩结构:We can also visit the Haihe River by ship,which is the mother river of Tianjin.本句使用了非限制 性定语从句。Writing 19(2017河南)
我们每天都要做很多事情,有些还很棘手。请以“I did it!”为题并根据要点和要求,用英语写一篇短 文,描述一件你完成的棘手事情。
1.要点:1)你做了什么事情;
2)你是如何做那件事情的;
3)你做完那件事情后的感受。
2.要求:1)文中不得出现真实姓名和学校名称;
2)词数80左右。
I did it!
???? 答案
写作要点
本文属于命题作文。围绕你做了什么事情,你是如何做那件事情的,你做完那件事情后的感受展开来写。 由于要求写自己的事情,所以应该使用第一人称。要求描述一件你完成的事情,应该使用一般过去时。
参考范文
I did it!
How nervous I was when I was told to give a speech!It was my first speech and I didn't know what to do.My teacher encouraged me and gave me some useful advice. After I chose a topic I liked best, I watched videos about how to be a good speaker and I learnt a lot of skills. Then I practiced and practiced. Finally, the big day came.
I did it!!!Everyone loved my speech. I was so proud of myself.精彩语句????
1.精美词汇:give a speech发表一次演讲
2.出彩结构:How nervous I was when I was told to give a speech!感叹句、时间状语从句和被动语态。Writing 20(2017陕西)
每个人都有自己喜欢的衣服,请根据提示语,以“My favorite ????”为题,写一篇短文,介绍一件你最 喜爱的衣服。
提示语:
?要求:1.请将短文题目补充完整;
2.参考提示语,可适当发挥;
3.语句通顺,意思连贯,书写工整;
4.文章不得出现任何真实信息(姓名、校名和地名等);
5.词数:不少于70词。
My favorite 答案
写作要点
1.本文介绍自己最喜欢的衣服,时态以一般现在时和一般过去时为主。
2.写作要点:(1)介绍最喜欢的衣服是什么样的和布料;(2)喜欢的原因;(3)什么时候穿。参考范文
My favorite T-shirt
Among all my clothes, I like one of the T-shirts best. It is white. It is made of cotton and fiber, so it's very com- fortable. I like it because there is a photo of my best friend and me on it. It's a special gift from him. He sent it to me last year for my 14th birthday. I often wear the T-shirt when I have parties with my friends. It makes me remember the time we two spent together.
This is my favorite T-shirt. It brings me a lot of happy memories.精彩语句????
1.精美词汇:be made of由……制成;comfortable adj.舒服的
2.出彩结构:Among all my clothes,I like one of the T-shirts best.本句使用了表示三者或三者以上的a- mong,还用到了one of the+名词复数结构。Writing 21(2016陕西)
假如你是李明,你准备和父母周末去附近的村庄游玩,请根据提示语,给恰逢来你校交流学习的David写 一封e-mail,邀请他一同前往。要求:1.参考提示语,可适当发挥;
2.语句通顺,意思连贯,书写工整;3.文中不得出现任何真实信息(姓名、校名和地名等);
4.词数:不少于70词。(开头和结尾已给出,但不计入总词数。)
Dear David,
How are you recently??? ??
??
Yours,
Li Ming答案
写作要点
1.本文是应用文,主体时态为一般现在时和一般将来时。
2.第一段:提出邀请;第二段:游玩的具体活动;第三段:表达自己诚挚的期盼。
3.文中不可用真实的信息;表达完整,条理清晰。
参考范文
Dear David,
How are you recently?This weekend,my parents and I are going to a nearby village.Would you like to go with us?
In the morning,we can feed animals.Then,we plan to pick fruit and vegetables in the fields.In the afternoon,we'll watch the villagers make tea.After that,we will learn to cook meals.In the evening,we can play games or chat with the people there.I'm sure we will have a good time.
I'm looking forward to your reply.
Yours,
Li MingWriting 22(2015北京)
根据中文和英文提示,用英文写一封意思连贯、符合逻辑、不少于50词的邮件。邮件的开头和结尾已给 出,不计入总词数。所给提示词语仅供选用。请不要写出你的校名和姓名。
假如你叫李华,你们学校为配合北京申办冬奥会,倡导人人都做文明中学生。请你根据以下提示,给你的英 国笔友Peter写一封邮件,告诉他你认为做个文明中学生什么是重要的,你通常是怎么做的,以及你的感受。
提示词语:think,smile,respect,say hello to,wait in line,on time,happy
?Dear Peter,
How is it going?At my school we're talking about what we should do to be a good student.
????
Anything new at your school?
Yours,
Li Hua答案
参考范文
Dear Peter,
How is it going?At my school we're talking about what we should do to be a good student.I think it is important to be polite to others.I say hello to my teachers and classmates.I smile at everyone I talk to.Following rules is al- so important.I wait in line at the bus stop and go to school on time.I feel happy for doing all these because it is right for a student to do so.
Anything new at your school?
Yours,
Li HuaC组 教师专用题组Writing 1(2019湖北黄冈)
同学们,在初中三年的英语学习中,我们从课本中学习了有关“Family”、“Be polite to sb.”、“Pro- tecting the environment”、“Volunteering”等话题和功能。假定你是李磊,请参考这些话题和功能,依据以 下要点提示,写一篇题为“I'm Proud of My Family”的英语短文,向校报投稿,讲述你的家庭故事。
要点提示:1.家人相亲相爱,努力学习、工作;
2.邻里和睦,礼貌待人;
3.爱护环境,从我做起;
4.积极参加志愿活动,帮助贫困儿童。
写作要求:1.词数90左右(短文的开头已经给出,不计入总词数);
2.根据要点提示,适当发挥;
3.短文中不得出现真实的姓名及校名。
参考词汇:work hard;be friendly to each other;get on well with;protect the environment;be volunteersI'm Proud of My Family
My name is Li Lei. I have a happy family. There are four people in my family: my parents, my sister and I.
???? 答案
写作要点
1.本篇是记叙文;
2.时态:一般现在时;
3.写作的主要内容:平日里家人会经常做的事情,如:相亲相爱,努力学习、工作;礼貌待人;爱护环境;参加志 愿活动等。
参考范文
I'm Proud of My Family
My name is Li Lei. I have a happy family. There are four people in my family: my parents, my sister and I.
My family love each other. (My parents love us and we love our parents.)My parents both work hard. My sister and I study hard at school, too.
My family are kind and friendly to our neighbors. We are all polite to each other. We get on well with each oth-er.My family try our best to protect the environment in our daily life. My mom and my sister usually bring a bag to go shopping. My father is used to taking the bus to work. I never order takeaway food.
My family are glad to be volunteers at any time. My parents often help the children in poor areas.(My sister helps in the school library twice a week.)Sometimes I read newspapers to the old people.
What a happy family! I'm proud of my family!精彩语句????
1.精美词汇:work/study hard 努力工作/学习 get on well with sb.和某人相处融洽 try one's best to do sth. 尽某人最大努力做某事 be used to doing sth.习惯于做某事
2.出彩结构:①My family try our best to protect the environment in our daily life.(本句好词组较多,try one's best to do,protect the environment,in our daily life)
②My family are glad to be volunteers at any time. (be glad to do sth.乐于做某事,at any time更是体现了作者 一家人乐于做志愿的心情)Writing 2(2019内蒙古呼和浩特)
临近毕业,学校在学习小组内开展了初中阶段自评和组评活动,假设你是Rainbow小组的组长Zhang Hong,请你为你的组员Li Ming进行综合素质的评价,写一份素质报告。
内容包括:1.他的爱好;
2.他的优点(两条);
3.他的缺点或存在的问题;
4.你对他的建议(两条)。
要 求:1.表达清楚、语法正确、上下文连贯;
2.要点必须包括所有相关信息,并作适当发挥,但不得出现真实班级、姓名等;
3.词数:不少于80词(所给内容不计入总词数)。
Li Ming is a member of my team called Rainbow.????
Zhang Hong答案
写作要点
1.本文主要运用一般现在时。
2.内容提示:
1)Li Ming的爱好和优点;
2)他的缺点或存在的问题;
3)你对他的建议。
参考范文
Li Ming is a member of my team called Rainbow. Generally speaking, he is a warm-hearted and outgoing boy. He is always ready to help others without asking for anything in return. He can also get on well with teachers and classmates. In his spare time, he likes reading books on history, so he knows a lot of knowledge about histo-ry.But as a famous saying goes, “Every coin has two sides”, sometimes he doesn't work hard enough on his
lessons. I advise him to spend more time on the subjects from now on. What's more, he'd better answer ques- tions in class actively so that he can make great progress.
I'm sure that if he can try harder to improve himself, he'll be an excellent student soon.
Zhang Hong精彩语句????
1.精美词汇:warm-hearted adj.热心的 get on well with 与……相处得好 make great progress取得很大的进步
2.出彩结构:I'm sure that if he can try harder to improve himself, he'll be an excellent student soon.(本句中if引 导条件状语从句)Writing 3(2018湖南长沙)
假如你是李华,于4月13日星期五这一天参加了学校组织的郊游活动。请你以school trip为主题,写一则 英文日记,内容包括参加活动的人员、集合时间、郊游地点、交通方式、活动内容以及个人感受等。
要求:(1)80词左右(开头已给出,不计入总词数);
(2)可适当增加细节,以使行文连贯;
(3)日记中不得出现真实的人名和校名。
Friday, April 13th
It was sunny today. We went on a school trip.??? 答案
写作要点
1.本文为应用文,是一则日记。主体时态为一般过去时。人称以第一人称为主。
2.按题目要求将写作要点一一呈现。
参考范文
Friday, April 13th
It was sunny today. We went on a school trip. We visited the Greenery Farm and it was great fun.
All of our classmates met at the school gate at 7: 00 a.m., and went to the farm by bus. On arriving there, we were given a warm welcome by the farm workers. Then one of the workers showed us around the farm, where we learned a lot about farming.
At noon, we had a picnic, during which we enjoyed ourselves in the sunshine, singing, dancing and flying the kites. We did love the fresh air and the beauty of nature. We took lots of pictures.Time flied! It was time for us to leave though we didn't want to. It was really an unforgettable and meaningful
trip for us.精彩语句????
1.精美词汇:beauty n.美,美丽;unforgettable adj.难忘的;meaningful adj.有意义的;show (sb.) around领(某人)参 观;enjoy oneself玩得开心男;take pictures照相
2.出彩结构:
On arriving there, we were given a warm welcome by the farm workers.(on doing sth.一……就……)
It was time for us to leave though we didn't want to.(though引导让步状语从句;It's time for sb. to do sth.到某 人做某事的时间了)Writing 4(2018山西)
某校计划在今年暑期开展社会实践活动。为使同学们更好地了解自己的意向,合理地规划自己的时 间,学校对某年级 100 人进行了抽样调查,下图是相关活动的统计结果。其中,计划参加社区志愿者活动的 人数占 66%,参与庭院拍卖的人数占 10%。
? 请你用两段话写一篇短文,第一段简要说明图表内容,第二段从图表中选出一项你感兴趣的活动项目, 制订相应的计划,并说明理由。
要求:1.词数不少于 80 词;
2.首句已给出,不计入总词数;
3.文中不得出现真实的人名、校名。
?? 答案
写作要点
1.人称:第一人称;
2.时态:一般现在时、一般将来时;
3.要点:1)简要说明图表内容;
2)从图表中选出一项你感兴趣的项目,制订相应的计划,并说明理由。
参考范文
A school did a survey among 100 students about their plans for social practice activities during the summer vaca- tion. Here are the results. Sixty-six students want to do community volunteer work. Twenty-four percent are go- ing to learn a life skill. And only one tenth are interested in having a yard sale. In my view, it's good to do community volunteer work.Doing community volunteer work is one of the best ways to develop my abilities to communicate and cooperate. The community is a lot like a big family of different people. First, I need to make a group of volunteers by talk-
ing with the teenagers. Then we're going to work out different plans based on old people's needs. We can also organize some outdoor activities for the kids and hand out advertisements to better our environment. They all need us to communicate and work well with others. Now, I'm already looking forward to the coming vacation.
注:1. 词数少于 80 词的,从总分中扣去 1 分。
2. 如书写较差,以致影响理解的,可扣去 1 分。精彩语句????
1.精美词汇:do a survey 做调查,做研究;be interested in 对……感兴趣;in my view 依我看,按我的观点
2.出彩结构:Doing community volunteer work is one of the best ways to develop my abilities to communicate and cooperate. 本句用到了“one of the+形容词最高级+名词复数”结构以及不定式作后置定语。Writing 5(2018云南)
Doing Something Nice to...
提示:每个人都向往美好的生活,美好的生活需要我们真诚的付出和给予。请以“Doing Something Nice to...”为题,写一篇英语短文,谈谈你曾经或将要为他人、社会等做的一件美好的事情。
要求:1.请先将题目补全后再做答;
2.语言流畅、书写规范、卷面整洁,词数不少于60个;
3.文中不得使用真实姓名、校名,否则以零分计。
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写作要点
1.按照题目提示的要求,补充完整题目,注意是补充“人或社会”;
2.要求具体写出这一件美好的事情,注意时态的正确使用;
3.总结自己的感受。
参考范文
Doing Something Nice to My Friend
A true friend reaches for your hand and touches your heart!
Jerry is my good friend. He's very thin. Last winter, he got ill. He had to go to hospital once a week. He took lots of medicine. I hoped he would be as strong as me. So every weekend, I asked him to practice playing bas- ketball with me. I taught him how to play it. Now he is much stronger and healthier.
I feel very happy to have done something nice to my friend.精彩语句????
1.精美词汇:touch your heart触动心灵;much stronger and healthier更加强壮和健康
2.出彩结构:I feel very happy to have done something nice to my friend.我感觉很高兴为我的朋友做了一些好 的事情。(feel+adj.+ to do sth.做某事感到……)Writing 6(2018浙江杭州)
假定你是李平(Tel:1361234567),家住滨海市人民路1号。你在美国旅行期间不慎遗失钱包,曾向宾馆询问。 以下是宾馆的答复邮件,请你阅读后进行回复,词数80左右。
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写作要点
1.本文是应用文。
2.写作时应使用第一人称,时态主要为一般现在时。
3.写作中应包含何时入住宾馆、所住房间和对失物的描述及里面的物品,并附上地址和电话号码。
参考范文
Dear Mr. Smith,
Thank you so much for your reply. I stayed in your hotel on July 6, in Room 106, and I remember having left my new black wallet on the table. My ID card, two credit cards, and a 100-dollar bill, are in my wallet. Would you be kind enough to send me the wallet to No. 1 Renmin Road, Binhai, China by mail if you find it?Please call me at my phone number 1361234567 if needed.
Thanks again.
Yours,
Li PingWriting 7(2018黑龙江齐齐哈尔,B)
习主席在十九大报告中提出要建设美丽中国、推进绿色发展、解决环境问题,足见习主席对环保的重 视!作为新时代的中学生,如何响应习主席的号召,从“我”做起保护环境?请用英语写一篇短文,表达你的 想法。
要求:1.词数:80—100词。
2.字迹工整,语言流畅,表达准确,逻辑清晰。
3.要有复合句的表达。
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写作要点
1.本文是一篇有关环境保护的文章。主体时态是一般现在时。
2.内容要点:
①环境的现状和保护环境的重要性。
②保护环境的具体做法。
③自己对保护环境的想法。
参考范文
The environmental problems are very serious these days. In order to make our country more beautiful, we stu- dents should do something to protect the environment.
I think we should turn off the lights to save electricity when we leave the room. And when we brush our teeth, we'd better turn off the taps. Also, we should advise our parents to take the bus to work instead of driving and use reusable bags when shopping. Only if we know what to do in our daily life can we make a difference.How important it is for us to protect the environment!精彩语句????
1.精美词汇:in order to do sth.为了做某事;instead of doing sth.代替做某事;取代做某事;make a difference 产 生影响
2.出彩结构:
①Only if we know what to do in our daily life can we make a difference.(倒装句)
②How important it is for us to protect the environment!(感叹句)Writing 8(2018吉林长春,B)
在日常生活中,总有些事情影响着你的自身发展。请写一篇不少于80词的英语短文,叙述一件对你影 响较大的事情,谈一谈这件事情是如何影响了你某一方面品质(quality)的提升,如独立、勤奋、乐于助人等, 并在班级的英语园地中展出。(文中不得出现真实的人名和校名)
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写作要点????
这是一篇记叙文,要求叙述一件对你影响较大的事情以及这件事对你品质上的影响。内容要点包括:①事 件;②影响。人称以第一人称为主,时态以一般过去时为主。
参考范文
Among a number of unforgettable memories, what impressed me most in my junior high school was joining the singing competition, which proved to be meaningful.
During the singing competition, although we spent a large amount of time preparing for it, we still failed many times and lost our confidence. The moment we would give up, our teacher encouraged us,“It doesn't matter whether we win or lose and we should support each other.”Encouraged by our teacher, we eventually made it.
What an amazing memory it was!I didn't realize the real meaning of success until I learnt to work together and help each other.精彩语句????
1.精美词汇:a number of许多;spend time doing sth.花费时间做某事;give up放弃;help each other互相帮助
2.出彩结构:①It doesn't matter whether we win or lose and we should support each other.(whether引导主语从 句)
②What an amazing memory it was!(感叹句)
③I didn't realize the real meaning of success until I learnt to work together and help each other.(not...until...结 构)Writing 9(2018重庆)
假如你是李华,你校正举办英语读书节活动,你在参与活动的过程中遇到一些困难,请给你的英国朋友 Nick写一封email向他求助。
要求:
1.80~120词,开头和结尾已给出,不计入总词数;
2.文中不能出现自己的姓名和所在学校的名称。
参考要点:
1.活动情况简介(时间、内容……);
2.遇到的困难(如:缺少相关书籍、英语阅读困难……);
3.请求帮助的事项。Dear Nick,
How's everything going?
??
Yours,
Li Hua答案
写作要点
1.时态以一般现在时为主。
2.人称以第一人称为主。
3.主要内容:活动情况、遇到的困难和请求帮助的事项。
参考范文
Dear Nick,
How's everything going?
Our school is holding an English reading festival this June. I'm very interested in it. There are many different activities in the festival such as reading good English books, sharing good stories and so on. It's a good chance for us to learn more about western cultures. However, I have some problems. First, I don't have enough books. For example, I want to get some books about western history. Next, I'm not so good at English. I have trouble in reading. Would you please share some good books with me and give me some advice on reading?I expect to hear from you soon.
Best wishes!
Yours,
Li Hua精彩语句????
1.精美词汇:activity n.活动;festival n.节日;chance n.机会;advice n.建议;western adj.西方的
2.出彩结构:(1)I have trouble in reading.have trouble in doing sth.在做某事方面有麻烦。
(2)Would you please share some good books with me and give me some advice on reading?Would you please do...?请你做……好吗?Writing 10(2017辽宁沈阳,B)
为迎接国际慈善日(the International Day of Charity)的到来,某英文报刊将要举办有奖征文活动,请你以I would like to ???? for charity为题写篇短文(词数80~100),为本次活动投稿。步骤与要点如下:
1.确定主题,并在文中说明原因;
2.围绕主题,进行叙述;
3.写出具体计划,也可以讲述一段与主题有关的故事或经历。
要求:
1.补全标题(参考词汇:sell old things, hold a book fair, pick up rubbish, organize an activity等);
2.字迹工整,内容完整连贯,语言准确规范;
3.鼓励写出真情实感,对紧扣主题的适当发挥不予扣分。短文的开头已给出,不计入总词数;
4.作文中可以写出具体计划内容,也可以使用亲身经历或虚构故事,但要注意时态的运用;如果参照短文中 的内容,不可以直接引用短文中的句子;
5.作文中不要出现考生和相关人物的真实校名和姓名。I would like to ???? for charity
The International Day of Charity is coming. Many people will do something for it. What should I do?Here is my idea.
I would like to...
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写作要点
1.本文话题是表达计划与愿望。主体时态是一般将来时。
2.内容要点:①补全标题I would like to ???? for charity.(sell old things, hold a book fair, pick up rubbish, or- ganize an activity等);
②说明想为慈善做什么及原因(一般现在时);
③围绕主题进行叙述(一般将来时)。
参考范文
I would like to hold a book fair for charity
The International Day of Charity is coming.Many people will do something for it. What should I do? Here is my idea.I would like to hold a book fair in our community at weekends. At the book fair, people can not only read books they want to and share their ideas with others but also can buy some books they like.
In order to have enough books for the book fair, I will take out all my books that I have ever read and I will also collect some books from my friends or relatives. I think the book fair will be very meaningful to everyone in our community. I hope it will last a long time.Writing 11(2017内蒙古呼和浩特)
良好的文明素养应该从小抓起,作为青城的文明市民、文明中学生,我们应该做到哪些方面?短文要包 括以下内容:
1.保护环境,不乱扔垃圾,不践踏草坪;
2.文明出行,遵守交通规则;
3.尊敬老师,努力学习,助人为乐;
4.……
要求:1.80—100词(开头已给出,不计入总词数);
2.文中不得使用你的真实姓名、校名;
3.语言流畅、书写规范、卷面整洁。
4.参考词:rubbish 垃圾;spit 吐痰;traffic rules 交通规则;respect 尊敬Our city is making its effort to become a civilized city. As citizens of Green City, we should????
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写作要点
1.人称:第一人称
2.时态:一般现在时
3.要点:(1)保护环境,不乱扔垃圾,不践踏草坪;(2)文明出行,遵守交通规则;(3)尊敬老师,努力学习,助人为乐; (4)根据自己生活中的实际情况适当发挥。
参考范文
Our city is making its effort to become a civilized city. As citizens of Green City, we should not only protect our environment but also follow the traffic rules.
First, we mustn't step on the grass or climb trees. Rubbish mustn't be thrown everywhere. We should also plant more trees. Second, we must obey the traffic rules. When crossing the streets, we should walk on the zebra cross- ing. Besides, we mustn't go across the street when the traffic lights are red. What's more, we must respect our teachers and be polite to others, and help those who are in need and be friendly to the people around us. In short, we should get on well with our teachers and classmates.
All in all, we should have good manners. Green City is our hometown. We should protect it. We all love our hometown!精彩语句????
1.精美词汇:go across the street 穿过大街;be polite to 对……有礼貌;be friendly to对……友好;in short 简言 之;all in all 总的说来
2.出彩结构:not only...but also...不但……而且;what's more另外Writing 12(2017甘肃兰州)
同学们好!会工作、会学习、会运动、会娱乐就是会生活。良好的运动习惯是生活的重要组成部分。 请你根据以下内容要点提示,以“Sports Make Me Strong and Confident”为题,写一篇短文,可以适当发挥。
1.每天早晨6:30按时起床,做半个小时运动,晚饭后散步1小时左右。
2.骑车或步行上学。
3.主动上体育课,积极参加课外活动,从不旷课。
4.身体健壮,精力充沛,运动会常得第一,永远保持运动习惯。
写作要求:
1.80—100词,开头部分已给出,但不计入规定字数。
2.内容合理;要点齐全;句子及篇章结构正确、连贯;书写规范。
3.不得出现校名和自己的姓名等个人信息。Everybody, men or women, young or old, should have a good habit of doing sports. So should I, and so I do.
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写作要点
本篇文章的时态为一般现在时,人称为第一人称;在写作时,要注意4个要点齐全,句子及篇章结构正确、连 贯,注意书写工整。
参考范文
Everybody, men or women, young or old, should have a good habit of doing sports. So should I, and so I do.
In the morning, I usually get up at 6:30 on time, and do morning exercises for half an hour. After breakfast, I ride or walk to school, which is also a kind of exercise. In the school, I take an active part in P.E. Sometimes we play football and volleyball, and sometimes we play basketball, table tennis or badminton. Football is my favorite sport. I also join in all the after-class activities. I have never been absent from them. In the evening after supper, I often take a walk along the street near my house for an hour with either my parents or my friends.精彩语句????
1.精美词汇:absent adj.缺席;energetic/full of energy精力充沛;take an active part in...积极参加……
2.出彩结构:After breakfast, I ride or walk to school, which is also a kind of exercise.which引导定语从 句。I like sports, which makes me healthy, strong and energetic/full of energy. So I often get the first prize in the school sports meeting. I will keep the good habit all my life. Writing 13(2017吉林,B)
假如你是李华,是一名初三学生,2017年被评为“校园运动之星”。你的笔友Jim想请你介绍一下在初 中三年里,运动在身体、心理、学习等方面给你带来的一些益处和你未来的运动计划。请你给Jim发一封 电子邮件。
内容包括:1.运动的益处(至少2点)
2.未来的运动计划(至少2点)
写作要求:1.词数90字左右,开头结尾已给出,不计入总词数。
2.文中不得出现真实的学校名称与姓名。
Dear Jim,
How is it going?I am proud of being chosen as“the School Sports Star”of 2017.??? ?
??? ?
Yours,
Li Hua答案
写作要点
1.本文是一封电子邮件,时态主要为将来时和一般现在时。
2.写作要点:1)运动的益处 2)未来的运动计划
参考范文
Dear Jim,
How is it going?I am proud of being chosen as“the School Sports Star”of 2017. Now, I'd like to share my ex- perience with you.
I used to be weak and shy, but now I become healthier than before by doing sports. Exercise also helps me get more confident, so I am popular in our school now. With the growth of confidence and popularity, I study harder and get better grades.
To stay healthy, I want to make a plan. First of all, I will do some running every morning. Then, I will climb the mountains on weekends.I believe it's never too late to do sports. Only in this way can we keep in good health.
Please write to me soon.
Yours,
Li Hua精彩语句????
1.精美词汇:be proud of为……而自豪;confident adj.自信的
2.出彩结构:Only in this way can we keep in good health.本句使用了倒装结构,还有keep in good health这 一短语。Writing 14(2017云南)
A Special Day
提示:在每个人的生活中,总会有些特别的日子。请根据所给题目“A Special Day”写一篇英语短文, 记叙你特别的一天。
要求:1.语言流畅、书写规范、卷面整洁,词数不少于60个;
2.文中不得使用真实姓名、校名,否则以零分计。
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写作要点
本文属于命题作文。要求写自己的经历,所以应该使用第一人称和一般过去时。写作内容注意以下几点:1. 点题;2.具体描述这一天;3.总结。参考范文
A Special Day
I had a very special day when I was a primary school student.
On that day, I went for a picnic with my friends. When we were about to leave after the picnic, a farmer stopped us and said:“It's not good to leave so much litter here. You should clean it.”We were ashamed and did it at once. From then on, the farmer's words remind me that I should protect the environment.
I'll never forget such a special day that makes me grow up.精彩语句????
1.精美词汇:be about to即将;ashamed adj.惭愧的
2.出彩结构:It's not good to leave so much litter here.固定句型It's+adj.+to do sth. 做某事是……的。Writing 15(2017福建)
你的美国朋友John计划暑假来中国旅游。请你根据以下图示,用英语在QQ中给他留言,介绍并推荐你 的家乡福建,词数80左右。
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要求:
1.必须包含所有提示信息,开头与结尾已给出,不计入总词数;2.意思清楚,表达通顺,行文连贯,书写规范;
3.请勿在文中使用真实的姓名、校名及提示信息以外的地名。
Hi, John, I'm glad to hear that you're planning to travel around China during the summer vacation. I'd like to invite you to my hometown Fujian for a visit.
Fujian lies????
I'm looking forward to meeting you!答案
写作要点
1.时态:一般现在时;
2.要点:1)位置:中国东南部;2)省会:福州;3)人口:超过38 million;4)环境:从空气、大山等方面介绍;5)名胜古 迹:武夷山,鼓浪屿;6)其他方面。
参考范文
Hi, John, I'm glad to hear that you're planning to travel around China during the summer vacation. I'd like to invite you to my hometown Fujian for a visit.
Fujian lies in the southeast of China with Fuzhou as its capital city. It has a population of over 38 million. Be- cause of the nice environment, it's known as Refreshing Fujian, which attracts millions of tourists from home 精彩语句????
1.精美词汇:attract v.吸引;millions of 数以百万计的;from home and abroad来自国内外;be well worth doing很 值得做某事;look forward to期待
2.出彩结构:It has a population of over 38 million.表达某地人口数量。and abroad. If you come, you can enjoy fresh air, blue sky as well as beautiful mountains and clear rivers. Many famous places of interest like Mount Wuyi and Gulang Island are well worth visiting. Besides, you can taste var- ious kinds of delicious food.
I'm looking forward to meeting you!Writing 16(2017重庆)
在过去的日子里,我们曾经欢笑,也曾经哭泣……照片,或将这些精彩定格,或勾起你对往事的回忆。某英语 网站向你发出邀请,请你按要求用英语写一篇文章,分享你照片背后的故事。
要求:
1.故事必须原创;
2.80—120词,开头已给出,不计入总词数;
3.文中不能出现自己的姓名和所在学校的名称。
参考要点:
1.描述你的照片(时间,地点,人物……);
2.分享你的故事(起因,经过,结果……);
3.谈谈你的感受(感动,怀念,影响……)。This is a photo that is very special to me. In the photo,
??? 答案
写作要点
1.本文分享过去的事情,所以主要用一般过去时。
2.写作要点:(1)描述你的照片;(2)分享你的故事;(3)谈谈你的感受。
参考范文
This is a photo that is very special to me. In the photo, I was 10 while my dad looked younger. Look, we are playing ping pong happily.
I used to be a ping pong player. My dad trained me so hard, though he was tired after a day's work. Once, I lost a game and I felt so sad that I wanted to give up. My father said nothing, sitting quietly with me. The next morn- ing, I found a piece of paper. It said,“Never give up, dear. I am proud of you!”
Now, I spend less time playing ping pong because of my busy study. But I will never
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- 词法
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- 动词和动词短语
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- 动词时态
- 助动词和情态动词
- 非谓语动词
- 冠词
- 代词
- 数词和量词
- 形容词副词及其比较等级
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- 连词和感叹词
- 构词法
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- 陈述句
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- 特殊疑问句及选择疑问句
- 反意疑问句
- 存在句(There be句型)
- 宾语从句
- 定语从句
- 状语从句
- 主谓一致问题
- 简单句
- 并列句
- 复合句
- 主谓一致
- 主、表语从句
- 名词性从句
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- 虚拟语气
- 感叹句
- 强调句
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- 祈使句
- 句子的成分
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- 单项选择部分
- 易错题
- 完形填空
- 阅读理解
- 词汇练习
- 听说训练
- 句型转换
- 补全对话
- 短文改错
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