2020届浙江中考英语复习课件 专题二十一 书面表达课件（289张）
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课件289张PPT。 中考英语 （浙江专用）专题二十一 书面表达Writing 1(2019杭州)
假定你是李平,最近收到意大利朋友Linda的电子邮件。以下是邮件的一部分,请你阅读后回复,词数80左右。A组 2015—2019年浙江中考题组?? 答案
写作要点
1.本文是书信格式的应用文。
2.写作主要采用第三人称,时态为一般现在时。
3.构思前应该仔细阅读邮件,找出写作要点,依次进行回答。
4.注意层次感,注意词数,使用完整的语句进行表达。
参考范文
Dear Linda,
Thank you so much for agreeing to show my brother around Rome. Now let me tell you something about my brother. He is thirteen years old, easy-going and humorous—we get along really well. He loves different cul- tures. He is interested in museums and likes trying local food.
My brother is also cute. He's of medium height with short straight black hair. He is good at Chinese kungfu, and usually wears T-shirts and jeans.Thanks again for your help!
Yours,
Li Ping
精彩语句????
1.精美词汇:
agree to do同意做;show...around带……参观;get along well相处得好
2.出彩结构:
Thank you so much for agreeing to show my brother around Rome.(Thank you for...为固定结构)Writing 2(2019温州)
最近,用手机APP买菜的人多了。手机菜场菜品丰富、洗净配好、预约送菜上门……外国朋友对此也很感 兴趣。
请你以A New Use of the Mobile Phone为题,写一篇110词左右的英语短文介绍手机买菜带来的便利,让外国 朋友了解中国人民生活中的这个新变化。
?A New Use of the Mobile Phone
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写作要点
1.本文是说明文。
2.审清题目,注意写作目的,不要写成议论文。
3.文章可分为三段:第一段描述背景,第二段就手机买菜的便利展开介绍,第三段总结。
参考范文
A New Use of the Mobile Phone
Preparing for meals is tiring. You may have to spend hours getting everything ready for cooking. Now in China, new mobile apps are here to help.
These apps provide you with meat, fish, and vegetables, almost everything you need for a meal. You can order whenever you like and decide on the time for them to arrive. If you like, they can be washed, cut and packed for a certain dish. Some apps even guide you to cook step by step, making cooking easier.Compared with the traditional way of going to the market, mobile apps save your time and energy. With such a
new use of the mobile phone, you can enjoy a more relaxing life.
精彩语句????
1.精美词汇:
spend...doing...花费……做……;provide...with...为……提供……
2.出彩结构:
Compared with the traditional way of going to the market, mobile apps save your time and energy.(过去分词短 语作状语)Writing 3(2019宁波)
回顾初中三年,有许多事令人难忘。校英语报Have Your Say栏目正面向九年级毕业生征文。假如你是李 华,请你选择其中一个话题,并结合具体事例,用英语写一封信表达你对某个人的谢意或歉意,参加此次征文 活动。
要点如下: 注意:
(1)短文必须包括你所选择话题的所有要点,并适当拓展;
(2)文中不得出现真实的人名和校名;
(3)词数:80~100。书信格式已给出;
(4)首句供参考:Looking back on the past three years, I'd like to say...
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写作要点????
1.本文是记叙文。
2.注意使用供参考的首句。行文中恰当使用连接词,指代清晰。
3.时态以一般过去时为主。
参考范文
Possible version 1:
Dear Alice,
Looking back on the past three years, I'd like to say thanks to you for helping me with my English.
When I was in Grade 7, I was not good at English. I just hid behind my textbook and never said anything in class. Once I did very badly in an English test, and I lost heart. However, you had a patient talk with me and en- couraged me to be more active in class.Since then, I have worked harder and made great progress. I feel lucky to be your student.
Thank you again. Wish you good luck.
Yours,
Li Hua
Possible version 2:
Dear Alan,
Looking back on the past three years, I'd like to say sorry to you for arguing with you.
When we were in Grade 8, we lost the chance to get first prize in the football match. I never stopped complain- ing to you that it was you who missed the goal. But you shouted back that you were not the only reason. You walked off angrily. From then on, we didn't talk to each other.
I have been regretting doing so. Soon we will graduate from our school. Let's forget about the past and become good friends again.
Yours,
Li Hua精彩语句????
1.精美词汇
do badly in在……方面做得糟糕;lose heart失去信心;make great progress取得巨大进步;walk off走开;graduate from从……毕业
2.出彩结构
I never stopped complaining to you that it was you who missed the goal.(that引导宾语从句;强调句型it was sb. who...)
I have been regretting doingWriting 4(2019湖州)
5月18日是国际博物馆日,下图是你班同学参观博物馆的情况。请你结合调查结果、自己的参观经历和感 受,写一份报告,并在英语课上汇报。
? 注意:
1.词数:80~100(短文首句已给出,不计入总词数);
2.文中不得出现真实的姓名和校名。
Visiting museums has become one of the most popular ways for us students to spend our spare time.????
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写作要点????
1.本文是一份调查报告。时态以一般现在时为主。
2.注意一定要结合图表信息,说明学生最愿意前往的博物馆。
3.结合自己参观博物馆的经历和感受,说明对博物馆感兴趣的原因。
参考范文????
Visiting museums has become one of the most popular ways for us students to spend our spare time. According to the survey made in our class, almost all the students have been to museums, such as science museums, tea mu- seums and film museums, etc. Among them, the science museum is our favorite.
I've been to Huzhou Science Museum and Lu Yu Tea Museum. I like the tea museum very much, because I can learn about the history and development of tea and watch the tea art performances there as well. What I'm inter- ested in most is the show of beautiful tea sets, which has left a deep impression on me.Museums make it possible for us students to learn knowledge and experience cultures at the same time. Why not
visit more?
精彩语句????
1.精美词汇
according to根据;make it possible to do使……成为可能
2.出彩结构
What I'm interested most is the show of beautiful tea sets, which has left a deep impression on me.(what引导主 语从句,which引导非限制性定语从句)Writing 5(2018杭州)
假定你是李平(Tel:1361234567),家住滨海市人民路1号。你在美国旅行期间不慎遗失钱包,曾向宾馆询问。 以下是宾馆的答复邮件,请你阅读后进行回复,词数80左右。
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写作要点
1.本文是应用文。
2.写作时应使用第一人称,时态主要为一般现在时。
3.写作中应包含何时入住宾馆、所住房间和对失物的描述及里面的物品,并附上地址和电话号码。
参考范文
Dear Mr. Smith,
Thank you so much for your reply. I stayed in your hotel on July 6, in Room 106, and I remember having left my new black wallet on the table. My ID card, two credit cards, and a 100-dollar bill, are in my wallet. Would you be kind enough to send me the wallet to No. 1 Renmin Road, Binhai, China by mail if you find it?Please call me at my phone number 1361234567 if needed.
Thanks again.
Yours,
Li Ping
精彩语句
1.精美词汇
remember doing记得做过……
2.出彩结构
Would you be kind enough to send me the wallet to No.1 Renmin Road, Binhai, China...?(拜托您……)Writing 6(2018温州)
如今,国内外很多孩子在父母的安排下没有了自己的周末,如下图中的Jack。请分析图中的这种现象并谈谈 你的看法,以Weekend or Not?为题写一篇约110词的英语短文向Parents杂志投稿,让父母们通过阅读你的文 章能有所启发。
?注意:文中若出现“Jack”以外的人名或任何学校名称,该作文得分不超过12分。
Weekend or Not?
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写作要点
1.本文是看图作文。
2.写作时应以第三人称为主,时态应以一般现在时为主。
3.写作中应先描述Jack周末的基本情况,而后分析现象,谈论自己的看法。
参考范文
Weekend or Not?
Jack has to attend lots of classes at weekends. He has little time for his favorite sport—soccer. Still, his parents are pushing him to do more math exercises, which worries him a lot.
Nowadays, many students are under much pressure like Jack. Their parents believe it necessary for them to make full use of the weekends and learn as much as possible. As a result, some students are stressed out and therefore lose interest in learning anything. What is worse, they may not be able to learn to manage their own life.
I do hope all the children can have the freedom to choose what they like to do and enjoy their weekends.精彩语句
1.精美词汇
make full use of充分利用
as a result结果是
be stressed out紧张,饱受压力
at weekends在周末
2.出彩结构
Still, his parents are pushing him to do more math exercises, which worries him a lot.(使用定语从句)
Their parents believe it necessary for them to make full use of the weekends and learn as much as possible. (it是 形式宾语,真正的宾语是动词不定式短语)
What is worse, they may not be able to learn to manage their own life.(连接词的使用)Writing 7(2018宁波)
今年5月11日,你校组织了一次社会实践活动,部分学生选择去了红星农场(见导图一),其余学生选择去了科 技博物馆(见导图二)。请根据你所选择的实践活动写一篇英语日记,记录当天的经历和感受。
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注意:(1)日记必须包括你所选择导图的所有要点,并适当发挥;
(2)文中不得出现真实的人名和校名;(3)词数:80~100。日记格式及首句已给出,不计入总词数。
Friday, May 11th
Today I had a school trip.??? ?
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写作要点
1.本文是应用文。
2.写作时应使用第一人称,时态应为一般过去时。
3.写作中应按照导图介绍人物、出行方式、活动,并补充自己对活动的感受,合理拓展。
参考范文
Possible version 1:
Friday, May 11th
Today I had a school trip. The weather was fine. My classmates and I set off to Hongxing Farm by bus early in the morning.
The minute we arrived, we took a walk around the farm. Then we fed the chickens. When I threw some food to them, they ran over to me with excitement and some of them even walked into their friends. The most exciting thing was that we picked strawberries after lunch. While we were picking, we ate a lot. How sweet they were!I had a wonderful time today! I do hope to go there again in the near future!
Possible version 2:
Friday, May 11th
Today I had a school trip. The weather was fine. My classmates and I set off to the Science Museum by subway at 7:00.
As soon as we reached the museum, we were amazed to see lots of pictures about science. Then we watched a video about different inventions and their inventors. It's unbelievable that technology has progressed in such a rapid way. In the afternoon, we played chess with some special robots. It was surprising to find that nobody could beat them. Before leaving, we bought some gifts for our friends.
I had a wonderful time today! I do hope to go there again!精彩语句????
1.精美词汇
set off出发
with excitement兴奋地
be amazed to do惊讶地做……
in such a rapid way以如此快速的方式
as soon as一……就……
2. 出彩结构
It's unbelievable that technology has progressed in such a rapid way.
The minute we arrived, we took a walk around the farm.(the minute一……就……)
How sweet they were!(感叹句的使用)Writing 8(2018金华)
在即将举行的中学生国际文化交流活动中,你将代表学校介绍中国的传统节日,请你从所给的卡片中任选 一张,用英语写一篇发言稿,介绍该节日。
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注意:
1.发言稿中必须包含卡片上的信息,并适当发挥;
2.文中不得出现真实姓名、学校等信息;
3.词数80~100;4.文章的开头和结尾已给出,不计入总词数。
Ladies and gentlemen,
Welcome to the Chinese culture tour.??? ?
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That's all. Thanks for listening.答案
写作要点
1.本文是应用文。
2.写作时应使用一般现在时。
3.写作中注意包含时间、活动、意义,在列提纲时注意把必要的活动和意义补充完整。
参考范文
Possible version 1:
Ladies and gentlemen,
Welcome to the Chinese culture tour. Now allow me to introduce one of the Chinese traditional festivals, the Spring Festival.
The Spring Festival falls in January or February. It is Chinese New Year and also the biggest day of year. So people come back home from different places and get together for a big dinner. Many people stay up late to wel- come the new year, hoping they will have a bright new start.During the festival, people visit their relatives and friends and wish each other good luck for the new year. Chil- dren can often get hongbao from their elders. Do you think it interesting?
That's all. Thanks for listening.
Possible version 2:
Ladies and gentlemen,
Welcome to the Chinese culture tour. Now allow me to introduce one of the Chinese traditional festivals, the Mid-Autumn Festival.
The Mid-Autumn Festival usually falls in September or October when the moon appears the biggest and the brightest in the year.
During the festival, Chinese people sit around the table with their family members and enjoy mooncakes as well as the beautiful moon. People believe that the round mooncakes and a full moon are symbols of being together. When seeing them, people will miss their family members far away. At the same time, they will express wishes and hopes for them. Does it sound interesting?
That's all. Thanks for listening.
精彩语句????
1.精美词汇
allow sb. to do sth.允许某人做某事
fall in January or February恰巧在一月或者二月
their elders 他们的长辈
have a bright new start 拥有一个全新的开始
as well as也,又
2.出彩结构
The Mid-Autumn Festival usually falls in September or October.
Many people stay up late to welcome the new year, hoping they will have a bright new start.(现在分词作伴随状 语)
At the same time,they will express wishes and hopes for them.Writing 9(2017温州)
假如你是李华,就读于Wenzhou Tanghe Middle School。你想去美国的Washington International School(WIS) 读高中。现在你需要给对方学校写一封简明扼要、有说服力的自荐信,争取让学校录取你。
参考要点:
?个人信息
?学习成绩
?爱好、能力
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要求: (1)不能出现真实的个人身份信息;
(2)词数: 110左右。开头和结尾已给出,不计入总词数。
Dear Sir/Madam,
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I am looking forward to your kind reply.
Yours sincerely,
Li Hua答案
写作要点
1.本文使用一般现在时态,要写清楚个人信息。
2.介绍自己喜爱的学科及成绩。
3.写出自己的爱好和能力。
参考范文
Dear Sir/Madam,
I am Li Hua from Wenzhou Tanghe Middle School. I wish to get an opportunity to study at WIS.
Like many other boys, I enjoy doing sports,but maths and science are my favourite. I like Chinese, English and music as well. I have won several prizes in various competitions, including a second prize in an international maths competition.
I have joined in three one-month-tour-study programs in the US, learnt a lot about American culture and made many friends there. So WIS is my first choice to study abroad.Although I am not the best now, I will make every effort to become a top student and I believe you will be proud of me.
I am looking forward to your kind reply.
Yours sincerely,
Li Hua
精彩语句????
1.精美词汇
make every effort 尽最大的努力
2.出彩结构
I wish to get an opportunity to study at WIS. (动词不定式作定语是英语表达中的一种特色)Writing 10(2017宁波)
三年的初中生活让你收获满满。校英语报邀你写一篇短文,给即将升入九年级的学弟学妹或他们的父母提 一些建议。请你结合自己的学习经历选择其中一个对象,阐述你的观点。 注意:
(1)短文必须包括你所选择一方的所有要点,并适当发挥;
(2)文中不得出现真实的人名和校名;
(3)词数:80—100;
(4)短文首句仅供参考,不计入总词数。
短文首句:How time flies! Now ????(you/your children)are students of Grade 9.
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写作要点
1.本文使用一般现在时态。
2.覆盖答题要点。
3.行为连贯,连接词使用恰当,指代清晰。
参考范文
Possible version 1:
How time flies! Now you are students of Grade 9. Here I'd like to tell you something that will make your school life more comfortable and wonderful.
First of all, it is important for you to keep healthy, so don't forget to exercise every day. Second, you'd better join clubs so that you can learn better and make more friends. Third, you will be able to make great progress if you develop your study skills. Besides, there are many ways for you to lower your stress, such as listening to music, hanging out with friends, and watching movies.I hope you will enjoy your school life and achieve your dreams.
Possible version 2:
How time flies! Now your children are students of Grade 9. Here I'd like to tell you something that will make their school life more wonderful.
First of all, it is important to encourage your children more so that they will be more confident. Second, please do not compare your children with others, because if you push them too hard, they will feel stressed out. Third, the children should be allowed to make their own decisions. There is no need to get everything ready for them. Besides, being a good listener will help you get along well with your children.
I hope your children's dreams will come true with your help.精彩语句
1.精美词汇
forget to do sth.忘记做某事
make great progress取得巨大的进步
compare...with...把……和……做比较
make one's own decision做好自己的决定
2.出彩结构
Besides, there are many ways for you to lower your stress, such as listening to music, hanging out with friends, and watching movies.而且,有很多减轻你压力的方式,比如听音乐、和朋友闲逛、看电影。Writing 11(2017湖州)
英语课上,老师组织大家就以下两幅图进行“To change or not”的话题讨论,请用英语阐述你对此话题的看 法。
注意:
(1)短文可结合图片信息或自身经历,作适当发挥;
(2)文中不得出现真实的姓名和校名;
(3)词数:80—100,短文首句仅供选择使用,不计入总词数。
短文首句:Last week, we had a discussion about the topic“To change or not”.
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写作要点
1.本文要恰当运用时态,对一般事实的论述用一般现在时,而对自己的经历要用一般过去时。
2.书写规范整洁。
3.用词恰当,句型变化多样。
参考范文
Last week, we had a discussion about the topic“To change or not”. I think different people have different choices to deal with problems. For example, when meeting with the weight problem, some people decide to take exercise to lose weight while others think they can't do anything about it.
When I was in Grade 7, I had difficulty with my spoken English. Instead of giving up, I chose to change. I tried my best to listen to tapes and practice speaking every day. Now my pronunciation has been improved a lot.
In a word, facing problems, we should take actions to change. Surely it will make a great difference.精彩语句????
1.精美词汇
deal with处理
lose weight减重
try one's best to do sth.尽某人最大的努力去做某事
2.出彩结构
When I was in Grade 7, I had difficulty with my spoken English.当我在七年级的时候,我的口语有很大困难。Writing 12(2016温州)
假如你是Lingling,学校根据下表中新西兰来温暑期交流师生的意愿,决定安排他们去100公里外的许村游 玩一天,但自行车来回路程需要8—9小时,权衡利弊,需调整这项内容,请你发邮件给对方带队老师Mr. Black 做好说明、沟通工作。要求:(1)文中不能出现真实的人名、校名等相关信息;
(2)文本长度:110词左右。开头和结尾已给出(不计入总词数。)
Dear Mr. Black,
I'm Lingling. My school asked us to make the one-day tour plan for you and we tried to make it best to your pref- erences, but I'm afraid we'll have to make some changes.
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Looking forward to your reply.
Best wishes.
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写作要点
1.首先要对活动、地点、用时和交通等情况进行描述。
2.其次表明自己对安排进行了哪些调整以及调整的理由,符合逻辑。
3.语句通顺,行文流畅。
参考范文
Dear Mr. Black,
I'm Lingling. My school asked us to make the one-day tour plan for you and we tried to make it best to your pref- erences, but I'm afraid we'll have to make some changes.
We'll visit a mountain village called Xucun, which is very famous for its old houses, fantastic sights and deli- cious food. I'm sure you will like it.
However, it will take us about 8 to 9 hours to go and come back by bike. Even if we set out at 7:00 a.m., we'll get there at about 11:30. Going around the beautiful, cultural places, including some old houses all with a history of over 500 years, will take us at least 2 to 3 hours. Having lunch (local food and drinks) takes another hour. What's more, it's very hot here in summer. So we think taking a bus there will be a much better choice.
Looking forward to your reply.
Best wishes.
Lingling
写作分析 本文具有读写结合的特点,试题呈现了“一日游”的安排和需要调整的内容,难点在于考生首 先要读懂表格,明确需要调整的内容,并对调整写出符合逻辑的理由。
精彩语句????
I'm sure you will like it.我确信你会喜欢的。
be famous for因……而著名
what's more而且Writing 13(2016绍兴)
针对大部分高中要求学生住校的现状,英语课上同学们就“Would you like to live in school?”这一话题展 开调查。请你根据下表内容,用英语写一篇短文,汇报调查结果,表达你的意愿并阐述理由。注意:1.短文必须包括表中所有内容,可适当增加细节;
2.你的理由至少两条;
3.词数:80—100;
4.短文首句仅供选择使用,不计入总词数。
参考词汇:方便的 convenient
Would you like to live in school?We had a survey about it and here's the result. ????
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写作要点
1.汇报调查结果:①大部分同学愿意,原因:方便与同学交流;学会照顾自己;②一些学生不愿意,原因:在家能 休息得更好;与家人相处时间更长。
2.表达你的意愿并阐述自己的理由。
参考范文
Would you like to live in school? We had a survey about it and here's the result. Most students prefer to live in school because they find it convenient to communicate with their classmates. Also, they can learn how to look after themselves in this way.
However, some students think living at home is a better choice. The main reason is that they can relax better at home. Besides, they can spend more time with their family members and get on better with them.
As for me, I'd like to live in school. That's because I can spend more time on study. What's more, it's a wonderful experience to live with other classmates. 精彩语句????
prefer to更喜欢
besides而且
As for me...对于我来说……Writing 14(2015温州)
美中文化交流中心(ACCEC)暑期将组织学生来华学习、交流,现正在中国招募志愿者,帮助他们学习中 文。假如你是扬帆中学的学生李平,请按要求给该项目负责人Mr.Miller写一封申请信。
内容包括:(1)申请担任志愿者;
(2)说明自己乐于助人、擅长中文;
(3)谈谈学好中文的方法;
(4)……
参考词汇:volunteer,be good at,improve,culture
注意:(1)申请信需要涵盖以上所有要点,可适当发挥;
(2)文中不能出现真实的人名、校名等相关信息;
(3)词数:110 词左右。开头和结尾已给出(不计入总词数)。Dear Mr.Miller,
I’m Li Ping from Yangfan Middle School.? ???
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Thank you for your consideration.
Yours truly,
Li Ping 答案
写作要点
1.本文属于应用文,主体时态为一般现在时。
2.内容要点:①申请担任志愿者;
②说明自己乐于助人、擅长中文;
③谈谈学好中文的方法。
参考范文
Dear Mr.Miller,
I'm Li Ping from Yangfan Middle School.I am very interested in your project and want to be the volunteer to help the students learn Chinese.
I am warm-hearted and always ready to help others.I am good at Chinese.Last year,I won the first prize for the Chinese Speech Competition in my city.I have many good ways to learn Chinese well.For example,we can listen to the radio and read aloud every morning.Also learning some Chinese classical songs helps improve the language quickly.Besides,talking with local people is a fun and effective way to learn Chinese and its culture.If I can get the job,I believe I can be a great helper.
Thank you for your consideration.
Yours truly,
Li Ping
精彩语句????
warm-hearted热心的
for example例如Writing 15(2015绍兴)
你校英语社团正在开展主题为“What should a good teacher be like?”的讨论,为此你采访了一些学生和家 长。请你根据下表内容,用英语写一篇短文进行交流,并阐述你的观点。注意:1.短文必须包括表中所有内容,可适当增加细节;
2.你的观点至少两条;
3.词数:80—100;
4.短文首句仅供选择使用,不计入总词数。
短文首句:Students and parents have different opinions about what a good teacher should be like.
What should a good teacher be like?
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写作要点
1.可以采用三段式作文。
2.第一段写学生的主要观点:
(1)与学生相处融洽;
(2)课堂生动有趣。
3.第二段写家长的主要观点:
(1)学识广博;
(2)严格要求学生。
4.你的观点(至少两条)。
参考范文
What should a good teacher be like?
Students and parents have different opinions about what a good teacher should be like.As for students,they think good teachers should get along well with their students.And they are supposed to make their classes lively and interesting.
However,parents think differently from students.For them,good teachers should first have plenty of knowledge. At the same time,they are expected to be strict with their students.
In my opinion,the most important thing for a good teacher is to love students.They should try to encourage stu- dents when they have problems with their studies.What's more,they should help their students learn how to learn.
精彩语句????
think differently考虑不同
at the same time同时
be strict with sb.对某人要求严格Writing 1(2019北京)
从下面两个题目中任选一题,根据中文和英文提示,完成一篇不少于50词的文段写作。文中已给出内 容不计入总词数。所给提示词语仅供选用。请不要写出你的校名和姓名。
题目①
假如你是李华,你们学校正在开展“安全月”宣传活动,倡议大家制作关于安全教育的主题海报,你们班交 换生Peter给你发邮件询问相关事情。请用英语回复一封邮件,告诉他海报上交的时间,并分享你设计海报 的一些想法。
提示词语:design, safety rule, careful, protect, picture
提示问题:●When should you hand in the poster?
●What would you like to share with Peter about designing the poster?B组 2015—2019年全国中考题组Dear Peter,
I’m glad to receive your email.??? ?
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If there is anything more that I can help with, please let me know.
Yours,
Li Hua
题目②
自律,即自我约束,是自我提升的一种途径,有助于我们成长,促使我们不断前行。
某英文网站正在开展以“自律”为主题的征文活动。假如你是李华,请用英语写一篇短文投稿,谈谈为了 增强自律意识,你做过什么,以及这样做给你带来的好处。提示词语:self-disciplined(自律的), plan, goal, habit, improve
提示问题:●What did you do to be self-disciplined?
●What benefits have you got from doing so?
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写作要点
题目①
1.人称:以第一人称为主。
2.时态:以一般现在时为主。
3.要点:1)海报上交的时间;
2)分享设计海报的想法。
题目②
1.人称:以第一人称为主。
2.时态:以一般过去时为主。
3.要点:1)列出你为了增强自律意识做过的事情;
2)自己已经获得的益处。参考范文
题目①
Dear Peter,
I'm glad to receive your email. We need to hand in the poster by next Monday. Now, I'd like to share some ideas on how I will design my poster.
The main part is about safety rules for traffic. For example, be careful when crossing the street. Wait till the traf- fic lights turn green.
To make my poster more attractive, I plan to add several pictures to it. Hope my ideas will be helpful.
If there is anything more that I can help with, please let me know.Yours,
Li Hua题目②
Self-discipline plays an important role in our life. To be self-disciplined, I started from doing simple things. I tried to form the habits of getting up early and reading books for 30 minutes every day. Though it was hard at the beginning, I pushed myself hard. After about three weeks, I got into the habits.
By doing so, I have improved myself. I am now more energetic and have a wider understanding of the world through reading.
精彩语句????
题目①
1.精美词汇:
hand in上交;share v.分享;attractive adj.好看的,美观的
2.出彩结构
Now, I'd like to share some ideas on how I will design my poster.(how引导宾语从句)
题目②
1.精美词汇:
try to do sth.尽力做某事;push oneself hard逼迫自己;energetic adj.精力充沛的
2.出彩结构
Though it was hard at the beginning, I pushed myself hard. (though引导让步状语从句)Writing 2(2019天津)
假如你是晨光中学的学生李华,平时坚持用英语写日记。请根据以下要点,描述你星期三放学乘地铁 回家路上看到的事情,并表达自己的想法。
(1)一个男孩不舒服,开始呕吐,一位穿着漂亮的女士帮着擦拭地面,男孩表达感谢。
(2)地铁到站,有人挤向座位,有人下不去车,有人因此争吵。
(3)你认为……
参考词汇:开始呕吐 begin to vomit
挤向座位 push towards the seat
争吵 have a quarrel
要求:
(1)词数:80~100个。
(2)日记格式和开头已给出,不计入总词数。
(3)要点齐全,行文连贯,可适当发挥。Wednesday
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写作要点
1.时态以一般过去时为主。
2.给出的要点和参考词汇要全部用上。
3.注意表达自己的观点时,要传递正能量,态度要明确。
参考范文
Wednesday
When I took the underground back home after school, I noticed a boy who looked uncomfortable, and then he began to vomit. But people around him just looked at him. Nobody wanted to help him. Just then, a beautifully dressed woman helped him scrub the floor, and the boy thanked her very much.
When the underground arrived, some people pushed towards the seat, some people couldn't get off, and some people had a quarrel about it.After seeing this, I think people should help each other. And we should obey some rules. Only in this way will
our world become better and better.Writing 3(2019重庆)
你正在组织一项暑假期间到山区为期一周的游学和帮扶活动。作为发起人,请你写一篇发言稿,在你 校“英语时光”广播中号召更多的同学参加。
要求:
1.80—120词,开头和结尾已给出,不计入总词数;
2.文中不能出现自己的姓名和所在学校的名称。
参考信息:
1.活动缘由(孤独、帮扶、游学……);
2.活动构想(时间、地点、内容……);
3.……
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写作要点
1.体裁:应用文。
2.人称:主体人称为第一人称和第三人称。
3.时态:以一般现在时态为主。
4.要点:
1)活动缘由(孤独、帮扶、游学……);
2)活动构想(时间、地点、内容……);
3)……
参考范文
Hello, everybody. I am planning a summer trip called “Be a Kid in the Mountains”. It will provide us with a meaningful week staying with the students in the mountains.
As many of their parents leave for the city development, these students might feel lonely and some may even find it hard to go on studying. So we can bring them some school things like books and pens for their study, and prepare some interesting stories to share. In the daytime, we can go hiking and do some teamwork. In the evening, we can do such activities as popular games and group dance around the fire.
Isn't that exciting? Come and join us. Let's be “a kid in the mountains”. I believe it will bring sunshine to the mountains as well as more confidence to us.
Thank you!
精彩语句????
1.精美词汇:meaningful adj.有意义的;development n.发展;prepare v.准备;share v.分享;as well as也,和……一 样
2.出彩结构
I believe it will bring sunshine to the mountains as well as more confidence to us. (I believe (that)...结构;as well as连接两个并列成分)Writing 4(2019江苏苏州)
假定你是苏华,最近你的澳大利亚笔友Nathan犯了一些错误,倍感懊恼,写了一封邮件向你诉说。为帮 助他排解困惑,请你根据他的邮件内容并结合自身经历,用英语回信开导他。注意:1.词数90左右,开头和结尾已经写好,不计入总词数;
2.回复需包括所有要点,可适当发挥,使短文连贯、通顺;
3.文中不得提及真实的人名、校名等相关信息。
Dear Nathan,
I‘m sorry to know that you are not happy these days.
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I hope my experience can help you out.
Best wishes,
Su Hua
答案
写作要点
1.审题:这是一篇应用文。注意人称的使用,主体时态为一般现在时和一般过去时。
2.确定要点:
1)同意(或不同意)每个人都会犯错;
2)描述自己犯过的一个错误;
3)如何处理自己的问题;
4)从错误中学到了什么。
参考范文
Dear Nathan,
I'm sorry to know that you are not happy these days. You needn't worry too much. It's true that everyone makes mistakes.
Take me, for example. One day, I spent so much time playing football with my friends that I forgot to do my homework. I said sorry to my teacher and finished it the next day. I found it important to achieve a balance be- tween schoolwork and hobbies.
It doesn't matter whether or not you make mistakes. What matters most is to correct and learn from them. In this way, others will understand you. Then you will feel much better.
I hope my experience can help you out.
Best wishes,
Su Hua
精彩语句????
1.精美词汇:
needn't do 不需要做……;achieve v.获得;matter v.要紧;correct v.改正;in this way用这种方法
2.出彩结构:
...I spent so much time playing football with my friends that I forgot to do my homework.(so...that...引导结果状 语从句)It doesn't matter whether or not you make mistakes. (whether引导宾语从句)
What matters most is to correct and learn from them.(What matters most为主语从句,表语部分是to correct and learn from them)Writing 5(2018北京)
从下面两个题目中任选一题,根据中文和英文提示,完成一篇不少于50词的文段写作。文中已给出内 容不计入总词数。所给提示词语仅供选用。请不要写出你的校名和姓名。
题目①
假如你是李华,你们学校将要举办一场关于京剧的讲座,你打算邀请你们班交换生Peter参加。请用英语写 一封电子邮件,告诉他讲座的时间和地点,以及需要做什么准备。
提示词语:lecture(讲座),invite,information,question,online
提示问题:●When and where will you have the lecture?
●What do you advise Peter to prepare for it?
Dear Peter,
How is it going?
There'll be a lecture on Peking Opera in our school.
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If there is anything that I can do, please let me know.
Yours,
Li Hua“题目②
静以修身,俭以养德”,勤俭节约是中华民族的传统美德。无论生活富足与否,我们都应该提倡节约,杜绝 浪费。
某英文网站正在开展以“节约是美德”为主题的征文活动。假如你是李华,请用英语写一篇短文投稿,谈 谈生活中你是怎么做的,以及这样做的意义。提示词语:thrifty(节约的),save,turn off,food,money,virtue(美德)提示问题:●What do you do in your daily life?
●Why do you do so?
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写作要点
题目①
1.本文是一篇应用文体裁的文章,要求以李华的身份写一封电子邮件告诉交换生关于京剧讲座的相关内容, 主体时态是一般将来时和一般现在时。
2.内容要点
①介绍讲座开始的时间和地点;
②建议Peter需要做的准备。
题目②
1.本篇写作的话题是关于勤俭节约的。要求考生写一篇英文短文投稿,谈谈在生活中自己是怎么做的。主 体时态是一般现在时态。
2.内容要点
①介绍如何在日常生活中做到勤俭节约;②介绍为什么要这样做。
参考范文
题目①
Dear Peter,
How is it going?
There'll be a lecture on Peking Opera in our school. I'd like to invite you to attend it.
Here's the information for it. The place will be the lecture hall. The time is from 9:00 to 11:00 this Friday morn- ing. The speaker is Mr. Li, an expert on Peking Opera.
You may ask questions at the end of the lecture. If you like, you can read online articles on the topic and get ready for your questions.
If there is anything that I can do, please let me know.
Yours,
Li Hua题目②
It's one of our traditional virtues to be thrifty. As a middle school student, I have been very thrifty in my daily life. I turn off the lights when leaving a room, and take shorter showers. Besides, I don't waste food, and I sel- dom spend money on things that I don't need.
I think all such small things are beneficial to the environment and help me to become a person with good virtues.Writing 6(2018四川成都)
假如你是图中女孩,你与家人于4月29日共度周日。请根据图中所示写一篇英文日记,讲述你当天所见 和所做之事。
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注意:1.日记应包含图中所有信息;
2.日记中须写出当天的一些感受;
3.日记应格式正确,语句通顺,句式多样;
4.词数:100左右。参考词汇:城堡castle 螃蟹crab
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写作要点
1.人称:第一人称。
2.时态:一般过去时。
3.要点:
1)日记格式:日期、天气;
2)所见所做;
3)感受。
参考范文
April 29th, Sunday ?Sunny
Today I had a good time with my parents on the beach. It was so fine that I could see the rising sun and flying sea birds. A boat sailed in the distance. What a beautiful scene! Dressed in my swimming suit, I swam in the blue and clear sea. Then, I played volleyball with my parents. Finally, I managed to make a sand castle with tools. It looked so real that a crab even wanted to live in it.
What a pleasant day! I not only got close to nature but also shared happiness with my family.精彩语句
1.精美词汇:
have a good time 玩得开心;on the beach在沙滩上;get close to接近
2.出彩结构:
It was so fine that I could see the rising sun and flying sea birds.本句话使用了so...that...句式,意为“如此……
以至于……”。
What a pleasant day!本句为what引导的感叹句,其基本结构为:What+a/an+ adj.+可数名词单数(+其他)!Writing 7(2017天津)
英国学生Frank八月底将要来天津学习并住在李明家。请根据以下提示,以李明的名义给Frank写一封电子 邮件。
(1)Frank到来前,你们会给他准备好房间。
(2)你爸爸送你们上学,妈妈做美味的食物。
(3)周末你们会邀请Frank游览天津,如逛古文化街、乘船游海河。
(4)Frank喜欢打排球,你们可以一起看天津女排比赛。
(5)你相信……
参考词汇:古文化街 Tianjin Ancient Cultural Street
海河 Haihe River
天津女排 Tianjin Women's Volleyball Team
要求:
(1)词数:80~100个。(2)电子邮件的开头和结尾已给出,不计入总词数。
(3)要点齐全,行文连贯,可适当发挥。
Dear Frank,
I'm happy to hear that at the end of August you will come to Tianjin to study and stay with my family. I'm writ- ing to say welcome to you.
Before you arrive, we will??? ?
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Looking forward to seeing you soon.
Li Ming
答案
写作要点
1.本文是一封电子邮件,时态为一般将来时和一般现在时。
2.写作要点:1)为Frank准备房间以及爸爸妈妈要做的事情;2)周末游览天津;3)看排球赛。
参考范文
Dear Frank,
I'm happy to hear that at the end of August you will come to Tianjin to study and stay with my family. I'm writ- ing to say welcome to you.
Before you arrive, we will provide you with a room.It's very nice and clean.My father will send us to school and my mother will cook delicious food for us.
What's more, on weekends we can visit Tianjin Ancient Cultural Street,which is full of the footprints of Tianjin's history.We can also visit the Haihe River by ship,which is the mother river of Tianjin.I've heard you love playing volleyball,so I think a plan of watching a game of Tianjin Women's Volleyball Team
will delight you.
I believe that you will have fun in Tianjin and you will love Tianjin too!
Looking forward to seeing you soon.
Li Ming
精彩语句
1.精美词汇
provide...with...提供;delight v.使高兴;footprint n.足迹
2.出彩结构
We can also visit the Haihe River by ship,which is the mother river of Tianjin.(本句使用了非限制性定语从句)Writing 8(2017安徽)
假如你是李华,你们学校将举行“弘扬中华传统文化——戏曲进校园”展演活动,你打算邀请你的美 国朋友Mike参加。请你根据以下提示用英文给他写一封电子邮件。
1.时间:7月1日下午2点;
2.地点:学校操场;
3.内容:文化展览、节目表演等。
提示词:戏曲opera n. 表演performance n.
注意:1.词数80~100;
2.可适当增加细节,以使行文连贯;
3.信中不能出现与本人相关的信息;
4.开头和结尾已为你写好,不计入总词数。Dear Mike,
I know you are interested in traditional Chinese culture.
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Yours,
Li Hua答案
写作要点
1.这是一封电子邮件,属于应用文。
2.时态以一般将来时为主,辅之以一般现在时。
3.内容主要有①邀请的原因即学校将举行“弘扬中华传统文化——戏曲进校园”展演活动;②时间是7月1 日下午2点;③地点在学校操场;④内容包括文化展览、节目表演等。可以适当发挥,词数80~100。
参考范文
Dear Mike,
I know you are interested in traditional Chinese culture.
Now, I have a piece of good news to share with you. There is an activity about traditional Chinese operas at 2:00 p.m. on July 1. It will be held in the playground in our school and all the teachers and students will attend. On that day, a culture show and many wonderful opera performances will be put on. It's a chance for you to learn more about traditional Chinese culture. Come and join us! I think we'll have a great time.I‘m looking forward to your early reply.
Yours,
Li Hua
精彩语句
1.精美词汇
performance n.表演;traditional Chinese culture 中国传统文化; hold 举办; attend出席; a piece of good news一 条好消息。
2.出彩结构
It is a chance for you to learn more about traditional Chinese culture.(It is a chance for sb. to do sth.对某人来说 做某事是个好机会)Writing 9(2016山西)
向他人表达善意并帮助他人体现了一个人良好的品格。当你向别人表达善意并给他人提供帮助时,你 希望得到回报(repay)吗?针对这一话题,九年级六班的同学们展开了辩论。
假设你是正方或反方的一员,请围绕你的观点,结合自己的亲身经历,说出2至3条理由来说服同学们(只需选 择一方观点表达即可)。
?要求:1.词数不少于80词;
2.文章的开头已给出,不计入总词数;
3.文中不得出现真实的人名、校名。
When I show kindness and help others,?? ??
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写作要点
1.本文是夹叙夹议的文章。主体时态是一般现在时和一般过去时。
2.内容要点:帮助别人的好处;自己帮助别人的经历;总结。
参考范文
When I show kindness and help others, I never expect them to repay me. In my view, helping others gives me a strong feeling of being needed and brings me happiness. On the other hand, everyone may get into trouble and need help, too.
Several days ago, while I was having a walk in the park, I found a little boy crying. Then I asked him what was the matter, and he told me he couldn't find his mom. Luckily, he remembered his mother's phone number. So I called her immediately. Ten minutes later, the boy saw his mom and became excited. His mom was so thankful that she wanted to buy me a small gift, but I refused. At that time, I felt quite happy because I did something re- ally good.All in all, the world needs love and we should be ready to help others without expecting any repay. If you want- ed repay, a “Thanks”would be enough.Writing 10(2016陕西)
假如你是李明,你准备和父母周末去附近的村庄游玩,请根据提示语,给恰逢来你校交流学习的David写 一封e-mail,邀请他一同前往。要求:1.参考提示语,可适当发挥;
2.语句通顺,意思连贯,书写工整;
3.文中不得出现任何真实信息(姓名、校名和地名等);
4.词数:不少于70词。(开头和结尾已给出,但不计入总词数。)
Dear David,
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Yours,
Li Ming答案
写作要点
1.本文是应用文,主体时态为一般现在时和一般将来时。
2.第一段:提出邀请;第二段:游玩的具体活动;第三段:表达自己诚挚的期盼。
3.文中不可用真实的信息;表达完整,条理清晰。
参考范文
Dear David,
How are you recently?This weekend,my parents and I are going to a nearby village.Would you like to go with us?In the morning,we can feed animals.Then,we plan to pick fruit and vegetables in the fields.In the afternoon,we'll watch the villagers make tea.After that,we will learn to cook meals.In the evening,we can play games or chat with the people there.I'm sure we will have a good time.
I'm looking forward to your reply.
Yours,
Li MingWriting 11(2015江苏镇江)
帮助他人,快乐自己。李华一家常在周末去社区参加志愿者活动。假如你是李华的同学,请根据提供的信 息介绍李华一家,描述他们上周六所做的事,你对他们的做法有何感想?你是否愿意参与类似的活动?说明 理由。要求:
1.所写内容必须包括提供的所有信息,可适当发挥。
2.评价李华一家的做法;表达你的意愿,并说明理由。
3.文章不少于90词,开头已给出,不计入总词数。
4.语气通顺,意思连贯,语法正确,条理清楚,字迹工整。
5.文中不得出现真实的姓名、校名及地点。
I am Li Hua’s classmate and I’ve known that he and his parents often go to the community centre to do some voluntary work.????????? ??? ??? ??? ??? ??? ??? ??? ??? ??? ??? ??? ??? ??? ??? ??? ??? ??? ??? ??? ??? ??? ??? ??? ??? ??? ??? ??? ??? ??? ??? ??? ??? ??? ??? ???
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写作要点
1.本文属于记叙文,主体时态是一般现在时和一般过去时。
2.内容要点:
①介绍李华一家;
②介绍上周六李华一家人所做的事;
③对李华一家所做的事作出评价;
④自己是否愿意参加类似的活动并说明理由。
3.词数不少于90词。
参考范文
I am Li Hua's classmate and I've known that he and his parents often go to the community centre to do some voluntary work.His father is a computer engineer.He's good at repairing things.His mother is a manager of a company.She likes DIY.Li Hua is a middle school student.He plays chess well.Last Saturday,his family went there again and did something for others.His father checked and fixed computers for neighbours.His mother made rice dumplings for the elderly people there.Li Hua taught some primary school students to play chess.
I think what his family do is meaningful.I also want to be a volunteer like Li Hua.I will clean the house for the old people.
As we know,helping others is helping ourselves.It can also bring happiness to us all.Writing 1(2019江苏南京)
假如你是李华,在网上看到英国Britech公司为正在开发的一款提高英语写作能力的应用软件(app)征集 网友建议。请根据网上的征集信息,用英语给该公司写一封电子邮件。
IDEAS NEEDED
Britech is now designing an app that helps learners with their English writing. The app is to help learners explore ideas, organize them and write them down. Your ideas are needed!
Here's what to do:
Write to share your ideas! Feel free to be creative!
Please let us know:
●What's the name of the app?
●What problem does the app solve?
●What does the app do?
Contact us at appdesign@Britech.comC组 教师专用题组 注意:
1.内容涵盖所有要点,可适当发挥。
2.词数80左右(已给出的文章开头,不计入总词数)。
3.文中不得提及有关考生个人身份的任何信息,如校名、人名等。
Dear Sir or Madam,
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写作要点
1.体裁:本文是应用文中的回信类作文。
2.人称:第一人称等。
3.时态:主体时态为一般现在时。
4.确定要点:
1)这个app的名称;
2)这个app解决什么问题;
3)这个app应有的具体功能。参考范文
Dear Sir or Madam,
Thanks for designing an app for English writing. I'd like to share my ideas here. Could its name be “Writing Made Easy”?
Many of us have difficulty in writing. We don't know how to organize ideas, use proper words, and so on. I hope it can solve these problems.
Here is my advice on what the app does. First, it should provide some reading materials. The more we read, the better we write. Second, the app should have an online course so that we can develop our writing skills. Third, there should be an e-teacher who can correct mistakes and offer suggestions.
I hope my advice is worth taking.
Yours,
Li Hua精彩语句????
1.精美词汇:
have difficulty in doing sth.做某事有困难;and so on等等;correct mistakes纠错;offer suggestions提供建议
2.出彩结构:
①The more we read, the better we write.(本句用了“the+比较级,the+比较级”结构,表示“越……,就越 ……”)
②Second, the app should have
假定你是李平,最近收到意大利朋友Linda的电子邮件。以下是邮件的一部分,请你阅读后回复,词数80左右。A组 2015—2019年浙江中考题组?? 答案
写作要点
1.本文是书信格式的应用文。
2.写作主要采用第三人称,时态为一般现在时。
3.构思前应该仔细阅读邮件,找出写作要点,依次进行回答。
4.注意层次感,注意词数,使用完整的语句进行表达。
参考范文
Dear Linda,
Thank you so much for agreeing to show my brother around Rome. Now let me tell you something about my brother. He is thirteen years old, easy-going and humorous—we get along really well. He loves different cul- tures. He is interested in museums and likes trying local food.
My brother is also cute. He's of medium height with short straight black hair. He is good at Chinese kungfu, and usually wears T-shirts and jeans.Thanks again for your help!
Yours,
Li Ping
精彩语句????
1.精美词汇:
agree to do同意做;show...around带……参观;get along well相处得好
2.出彩结构:
Thank you so much for agreeing to show my brother around Rome.(Thank you for...为固定结构)Writing 2(2019温州)
最近,用手机APP买菜的人多了。手机菜场菜品丰富、洗净配好、预约送菜上门……外国朋友对此也很感 兴趣。
请你以A New Use of the Mobile Phone为题,写一篇110词左右的英语短文介绍手机买菜带来的便利,让外国 朋友了解中国人民生活中的这个新变化。
?A New Use of the Mobile Phone
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写作要点
1.本文是说明文。
2.审清题目,注意写作目的,不要写成议论文。
3.文章可分为三段:第一段描述背景,第二段就手机买菜的便利展开介绍,第三段总结。
参考范文
A New Use of the Mobile Phone
Preparing for meals is tiring. You may have to spend hours getting everything ready for cooking. Now in China, new mobile apps are here to help.
These apps provide you with meat, fish, and vegetables, almost everything you need for a meal. You can order whenever you like and decide on the time for them to arrive. If you like, they can be washed, cut and packed for a certain dish. Some apps even guide you to cook step by step, making cooking easier.Compared with the traditional way of going to the market, mobile apps save your time and energy. With such a
new use of the mobile phone, you can enjoy a more relaxing life.
精彩语句????
1.精美词汇:
spend...doing...花费……做……;provide...with...为……提供……
2.出彩结构:
Compared with the traditional way of going to the market, mobile apps save your time and energy.(过去分词短 语作状语)Writing 3(2019宁波)
回顾初中三年,有许多事令人难忘。校英语报Have Your Say栏目正面向九年级毕业生征文。假如你是李 华,请你选择其中一个话题,并结合具体事例,用英语写一封信表达你对某个人的谢意或歉意,参加此次征文 活动。
要点如下: 注意:
(1)短文必须包括你所选择话题的所有要点,并适当拓展;
(2)文中不得出现真实的人名和校名;
(3)词数:80~100。书信格式已给出;
(4)首句供参考:Looking back on the past three years, I'd like to say...
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写作要点????
1.本文是记叙文。
2.注意使用供参考的首句。行文中恰当使用连接词,指代清晰。
3.时态以一般过去时为主。
参考范文
Possible version 1:
Dear Alice,
Looking back on the past three years, I'd like to say thanks to you for helping me with my English.
When I was in Grade 7, I was not good at English. I just hid behind my textbook and never said anything in class. Once I did very badly in an English test, and I lost heart. However, you had a patient talk with me and en- couraged me to be more active in class.Since then, I have worked harder and made great progress. I feel lucky to be your student.
Thank you again. Wish you good luck.
Yours,
Li Hua
Possible version 2:
Dear Alan,
Looking back on the past three years, I'd like to say sorry to you for arguing with you.
When we were in Grade 8, we lost the chance to get first prize in the football match. I never stopped complain- ing to you that it was you who missed the goal. But you shouted back that you were not the only reason. You walked off angrily. From then on, we didn't talk to each other.
I have been regretting doing so. Soon we will graduate from our school. Let's forget about the past and become good friends again.
Yours,
Li Hua精彩语句????
1.精美词汇
do badly in在……方面做得糟糕;lose heart失去信心;make great progress取得巨大进步;walk off走开;graduate from从……毕业
2.出彩结构
I never stopped complaining to you that it was you who missed the goal.(that引导宾语从句;强调句型it was sb. who...)
I have been regretting doingWriting 4(2019湖州)
5月18日是国际博物馆日,下图是你班同学参观博物馆的情况。请你结合调查结果、自己的参观经历和感 受,写一份报告,并在英语课上汇报。
? 注意:
1.词数:80~100(短文首句已给出,不计入总词数);
2.文中不得出现真实的姓名和校名。
Visiting museums has become one of the most popular ways for us students to spend our spare time.????
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写作要点????
1.本文是一份调查报告。时态以一般现在时为主。
2.注意一定要结合图表信息,说明学生最愿意前往的博物馆。
3.结合自己参观博物馆的经历和感受,说明对博物馆感兴趣的原因。
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Visiting museums has become one of the most popular ways for us students to spend our spare time. According to the survey made in our class, almost all the students have been to museums, such as science museums, tea mu- seums and film museums, etc. Among them, the science museum is our favorite.
I've been to Huzhou Science Museum and Lu Yu Tea Museum. I like the tea museum very much, because I can learn about the history and development of tea and watch the tea art performances there as well. What I'm inter- ested in most is the show of beautiful tea sets, which has left a deep impression on me.Museums make it possible for us students to learn knowledge and experience cultures at the same time. Why not
visit more?
精彩语句????
1.精美词汇
according to根据;make it possible to do使……成为可能
2.出彩结构
What I'm interested most is the show of beautiful tea sets, which has left a deep impression on me.(what引导主 语从句,which引导非限制性定语从句)Writing 5(2018杭州)
假定你是李平(Tel:1361234567),家住滨海市人民路1号。你在美国旅行期间不慎遗失钱包,曾向宾馆询问。 以下是宾馆的答复邮件,请你阅读后进行回复,词数80左右。
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写作要点
1.本文是应用文。
2.写作时应使用第一人称,时态主要为一般现在时。
3.写作中应包含何时入住宾馆、所住房间和对失物的描述及里面的物品,并附上地址和电话号码。
参考范文
Dear Mr. Smith,
Thank you so much for your reply. I stayed in your hotel on July 6, in Room 106, and I remember having left my new black wallet on the table. My ID card, two credit cards, and a 100-dollar bill, are in my wallet. Would you be kind enough to send me the wallet to No. 1 Renmin Road, Binhai, China by mail if you find it?Please call me at my phone number 1361234567 if needed.
Thanks again.
Yours,
Li Ping
精彩语句
1.精美词汇
remember doing记得做过……
2.出彩结构
Would you be kind enough to send me the wallet to No.1 Renmin Road, Binhai, China...?(拜托您……)Writing 6(2018温州)
如今,国内外很多孩子在父母的安排下没有了自己的周末,如下图中的Jack。请分析图中的这种现象并谈谈 你的看法,以Weekend or Not?为题写一篇约110词的英语短文向Parents杂志投稿,让父母们通过阅读你的文 章能有所启发。
?注意:文中若出现“Jack”以外的人名或任何学校名称,该作文得分不超过12分。
Weekend or Not?
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写作要点
1.本文是看图作文。
2.写作时应以第三人称为主,时态应以一般现在时为主。
3.写作中应先描述Jack周末的基本情况,而后分析现象,谈论自己的看法。
参考范文
Weekend or Not?
Jack has to attend lots of classes at weekends. He has little time for his favorite sport—soccer. Still, his parents are pushing him to do more math exercises, which worries him a lot.
Nowadays, many students are under much pressure like Jack. Their parents believe it necessary for them to make full use of the weekends and learn as much as possible. As a result, some students are stressed out and therefore lose interest in learning anything. What is worse, they may not be able to learn to manage their own life.
I do hope all the children can have the freedom to choose what they like to do and enjoy their weekends.精彩语句
1.精美词汇
make full use of充分利用
as a result结果是
be stressed out紧张,饱受压力
at weekends在周末
2.出彩结构
Still, his parents are pushing him to do more math exercises, which worries him a lot.(使用定语从句)
Their parents believe it necessary for them to make full use of the weekends and learn as much as possible. (it是 形式宾语,真正的宾语是动词不定式短语)
What is worse, they may not be able to learn to manage their own life.(连接词的使用)Writing 7(2018宁波)
今年5月11日,你校组织了一次社会实践活动,部分学生选择去了红星农场(见导图一),其余学生选择去了科 技博物馆(见导图二)。请根据你所选择的实践活动写一篇英语日记,记录当天的经历和感受。
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注意:(1)日记必须包括你所选择导图的所有要点,并适当发挥;
(2)文中不得出现真实的人名和校名;(3)词数:80~100。日记格式及首句已给出,不计入总词数。
Friday, May 11th
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写作要点
1.本文是应用文。
2.写作时应使用第一人称,时态应为一般过去时。
3.写作中应按照导图介绍人物、出行方式、活动,并补充自己对活动的感受,合理拓展。
参考范文
Possible version 1:
Friday, May 11th
Today I had a school trip. The weather was fine. My classmates and I set off to Hongxing Farm by bus early in the morning.
The minute we arrived, we took a walk around the farm. Then we fed the chickens. When I threw some food to them, they ran over to me with excitement and some of them even walked into their friends. The most exciting thing was that we picked strawberries after lunch. While we were picking, we ate a lot. How sweet they were!I had a wonderful time today! I do hope to go there again in the near future!
Possible version 2:
Friday, May 11th
Today I had a school trip. The weather was fine. My classmates and I set off to the Science Museum by subway at 7:00.
As soon as we reached the museum, we were amazed to see lots of pictures about science. Then we watched a video about different inventions and their inventors. It's unbelievable that technology has progressed in such a rapid way. In the afternoon, we played chess with some special robots. It was surprising to find that nobody could beat them. Before leaving, we bought some gifts for our friends.
I had a wonderful time today! I do hope to go there again!精彩语句????
1.精美词汇
set off出发
with excitement兴奋地
be amazed to do惊讶地做……
in such a rapid way以如此快速的方式
as soon as一……就……
2. 出彩结构
It's unbelievable that technology has progressed in such a rapid way.
The minute we arrived, we took a walk around the farm.(the minute一……就……)
How sweet they were!(感叹句的使用)Writing 8(2018金华)
在即将举行的中学生国际文化交流活动中,你将代表学校介绍中国的传统节日,请你从所给的卡片中任选 一张,用英语写一篇发言稿,介绍该节日。
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注意:
1.发言稿中必须包含卡片上的信息,并适当发挥;
2.文中不得出现真实姓名、学校等信息;
3.词数80~100;4.文章的开头和结尾已给出,不计入总词数。
Ladies and gentlemen,
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That's all. Thanks for listening.答案
写作要点
1.本文是应用文。
2.写作时应使用一般现在时。
3.写作中注意包含时间、活动、意义,在列提纲时注意把必要的活动和意义补充完整。
参考范文
Possible version 1:
Ladies and gentlemen,
Welcome to the Chinese culture tour. Now allow me to introduce one of the Chinese traditional festivals, the Spring Festival.
The Spring Festival falls in January or February. It is Chinese New Year and also the biggest day of year. So people come back home from different places and get together for a big dinner. Many people stay up late to wel- come the new year, hoping they will have a bright new start.During the festival, people visit their relatives and friends and wish each other good luck for the new year. Chil- dren can often get hongbao from their elders. Do you think it interesting?
That's all. Thanks for listening.
Possible version 2:
Ladies and gentlemen,
Welcome to the Chinese culture tour. Now allow me to introduce one of the Chinese traditional festivals, the Mid-Autumn Festival.
The Mid-Autumn Festival usually falls in September or October when the moon appears the biggest and the brightest in the year.
During the festival, Chinese people sit around the table with their family members and enjoy mooncakes as well as the beautiful moon. People believe that the round mooncakes and a full moon are symbols of being together. When seeing them, people will miss their family members far away. At the same time, they will express wishes and hopes for them. Does it sound interesting?
That's all. Thanks for listening.
精彩语句????
1.精美词汇
allow sb. to do sth.允许某人做某事
fall in January or February恰巧在一月或者二月
their elders 他们的长辈
have a bright new start 拥有一个全新的开始
as well as也,又
2.出彩结构
The Mid-Autumn Festival usually falls in September or October.
Many people stay up late to welcome the new year, hoping they will have a bright new start.(现在分词作伴随状 语)
At the same time,they will express wishes and hopes for them.Writing 9(2017温州)
假如你是李华,就读于Wenzhou Tanghe Middle School。你想去美国的Washington International School(WIS) 读高中。现在你需要给对方学校写一封简明扼要、有说服力的自荐信,争取让学校录取你。
参考要点:
?个人信息
?学习成绩
?爱好、能力
?……
要求: (1)不能出现真实的个人身份信息;
(2)词数: 110左右。开头和结尾已给出,不计入总词数。
Dear Sir/Madam,
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I am looking forward to your kind reply.
Yours sincerely,
Li Hua答案
写作要点
1.本文使用一般现在时态,要写清楚个人信息。
2.介绍自己喜爱的学科及成绩。
3.写出自己的爱好和能力。
参考范文
Dear Sir/Madam,
I am Li Hua from Wenzhou Tanghe Middle School. I wish to get an opportunity to study at WIS.
Like many other boys, I enjoy doing sports,but maths and science are my favourite. I like Chinese, English and music as well. I have won several prizes in various competitions, including a second prize in an international maths competition.
I have joined in three one-month-tour-study programs in the US, learnt a lot about American culture and made many friends there. So WIS is my first choice to study abroad.Although I am not the best now, I will make every effort to become a top student and I believe you will be proud of me.
I am looking forward to your kind reply.
Yours sincerely,
Li Hua
精彩语句????
1.精美词汇
make every effort 尽最大的努力
2.出彩结构
I wish to get an opportunity to study at WIS. (动词不定式作定语是英语表达中的一种特色)Writing 10(2017宁波)
三年的初中生活让你收获满满。校英语报邀你写一篇短文,给即将升入九年级的学弟学妹或他们的父母提 一些建议。请你结合自己的学习经历选择其中一个对象,阐述你的观点。 注意:
(1)短文必须包括你所选择一方的所有要点,并适当发挥;
(2)文中不得出现真实的人名和校名;
(3)词数:80—100;
(4)短文首句仅供参考,不计入总词数。
短文首句:How time flies! Now ????(you/your children)are students of Grade 9.
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写作要点
1.本文使用一般现在时态。
2.覆盖答题要点。
3.行为连贯,连接词使用恰当,指代清晰。
参考范文
Possible version 1:
How time flies! Now you are students of Grade 9. Here I'd like to tell you something that will make your school life more comfortable and wonderful.
First of all, it is important for you to keep healthy, so don't forget to exercise every day. Second, you'd better join clubs so that you can learn better and make more friends. Third, you will be able to make great progress if you develop your study skills. Besides, there are many ways for you to lower your stress, such as listening to music, hanging out with friends, and watching movies.I hope you will enjoy your school life and achieve your dreams.
Possible version 2:
How time flies! Now your children are students of Grade 9. Here I'd like to tell you something that will make their school life more wonderful.
First of all, it is important to encourage your children more so that they will be more confident. Second, please do not compare your children with others, because if you push them too hard, they will feel stressed out. Third, the children should be allowed to make their own decisions. There is no need to get everything ready for them. Besides, being a good listener will help you get along well with your children.
I hope your children's dreams will come true with your help.精彩语句
1.精美词汇
forget to do sth.忘记做某事
make great progress取得巨大的进步
compare...with...把……和……做比较
make one's own decision做好自己的决定
2.出彩结构
Besides, there are many ways for you to lower your stress, such as listening to music, hanging out with friends, and watching movies.而且,有很多减轻你压力的方式,比如听音乐、和朋友闲逛、看电影。Writing 11(2017湖州)
英语课上,老师组织大家就以下两幅图进行“To change or not”的话题讨论,请用英语阐述你对此话题的看 法。
注意:
(1)短文可结合图片信息或自身经历,作适当发挥;
(2)文中不得出现真实的姓名和校名;
(3)词数:80—100,短文首句仅供选择使用,不计入总词数。
短文首句:Last week, we had a discussion about the topic“To change or not”.
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写作要点
1.本文要恰当运用时态,对一般事实的论述用一般现在时,而对自己的经历要用一般过去时。
2.书写规范整洁。
3.用词恰当,句型变化多样。
参考范文
Last week, we had a discussion about the topic“To change or not”. I think different people have different choices to deal with problems. For example, when meeting with the weight problem, some people decide to take exercise to lose weight while others think they can't do anything about it.
When I was in Grade 7, I had difficulty with my spoken English. Instead of giving up, I chose to change. I tried my best to listen to tapes and practice speaking every day. Now my pronunciation has been improved a lot.
In a word, facing problems, we should take actions to change. Surely it will make a great difference.精彩语句????
1.精美词汇
deal with处理
lose weight减重
try one's best to do sth.尽某人最大的努力去做某事
2.出彩结构
When I was in Grade 7, I had difficulty with my spoken English.当我在七年级的时候,我的口语有很大困难。Writing 12(2016温州)
假如你是Lingling,学校根据下表中新西兰来温暑期交流师生的意愿,决定安排他们去100公里外的许村游 玩一天,但自行车来回路程需要8—9小时,权衡利弊,需调整这项内容,请你发邮件给对方带队老师Mr. Black 做好说明、沟通工作。要求:(1)文中不能出现真实的人名、校名等相关信息;
(2)文本长度:110词左右。开头和结尾已给出(不计入总词数。)
Dear Mr. Black,
I'm Lingling. My school asked us to make the one-day tour plan for you and we tried to make it best to your pref- erences, but I'm afraid we'll have to make some changes.
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Looking forward to your reply.
Best wishes.
Lingling答案
写作要点
1.首先要对活动、地点、用时和交通等情况进行描述。
2.其次表明自己对安排进行了哪些调整以及调整的理由,符合逻辑。
3.语句通顺,行文流畅。
参考范文
Dear Mr. Black,
I'm Lingling. My school asked us to make the one-day tour plan for you and we tried to make it best to your pref- erences, but I'm afraid we'll have to make some changes.
We'll visit a mountain village called Xucun, which is very famous for its old houses, fantastic sights and deli- cious food. I'm sure you will like it.
However, it will take us about 8 to 9 hours to go and come back by bike. Even if we set out at 7:00 a.m., we'll get there at about 11:30. Going around the beautiful, cultural places, including some old houses all with a history of over 500 years, will take us at least 2 to 3 hours. Having lunch (local food and drinks) takes another hour. What's more, it's very hot here in summer. So we think taking a bus there will be a much better choice.
Looking forward to your reply.
Best wishes.
Lingling
写作分析 本文具有读写结合的特点,试题呈现了“一日游”的安排和需要调整的内容,难点在于考生首 先要读懂表格,明确需要调整的内容,并对调整写出符合逻辑的理由。
精彩语句????
I'm sure you will like it.我确信你会喜欢的。
be famous for因……而著名
what's more而且Writing 13(2016绍兴)
针对大部分高中要求学生住校的现状,英语课上同学们就“Would you like to live in school?”这一话题展 开调查。请你根据下表内容,用英语写一篇短文,汇报调查结果,表达你的意愿并阐述理由。注意:1.短文必须包括表中所有内容,可适当增加细节;
2.你的理由至少两条;
3.词数:80—100;
4.短文首句仅供选择使用,不计入总词数。
参考词汇:方便的 convenient
Would you like to live in school?We had a survey about it and here's the result. ????
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写作要点
1.汇报调查结果:①大部分同学愿意,原因:方便与同学交流;学会照顾自己;②一些学生不愿意,原因:在家能 休息得更好;与家人相处时间更长。
2.表达你的意愿并阐述自己的理由。
参考范文
Would you like to live in school? We had a survey about it and here's the result. Most students prefer to live in school because they find it convenient to communicate with their classmates. Also, they can learn how to look after themselves in this way.
However, some students think living at home is a better choice. The main reason is that they can relax better at home. Besides, they can spend more time with their family members and get on better with them.
As for me, I'd like to live in school. That's because I can spend more time on study. What's more, it's a wonderful experience to live with other classmates. 精彩语句????
prefer to更喜欢
besides而且
As for me...对于我来说……Writing 14(2015温州)
美中文化交流中心(ACCEC)暑期将组织学生来华学习、交流,现正在中国招募志愿者,帮助他们学习中 文。假如你是扬帆中学的学生李平,请按要求给该项目负责人Mr.Miller写一封申请信。
内容包括:(1)申请担任志愿者;
(2)说明自己乐于助人、擅长中文;
(3)谈谈学好中文的方法;
(4)……
参考词汇:volunteer,be good at,improve,culture
注意:(1)申请信需要涵盖以上所有要点,可适当发挥;
(2)文中不能出现真实的人名、校名等相关信息;
(3)词数:110 词左右。开头和结尾已给出(不计入总词数)。Dear Mr.Miller,
I’m Li Ping from Yangfan Middle School.? ???
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Thank you for your consideration.
Yours truly,
Li Ping 答案
写作要点
1.本文属于应用文,主体时态为一般现在时。
2.内容要点:①申请担任志愿者;
②说明自己乐于助人、擅长中文;
③谈谈学好中文的方法。
参考范文
Dear Mr.Miller,
I'm Li Ping from Yangfan Middle School.I am very interested in your project and want to be the volunteer to help the students learn Chinese.
I am warm-hearted and always ready to help others.I am good at Chinese.Last year,I won the first prize for the Chinese Speech Competition in my city.I have many good ways to learn Chinese well.For example,we can listen to the radio and read aloud every morning.Also learning some Chinese classical songs helps improve the language quickly.Besides,talking with local people is a fun and effective way to learn Chinese and its culture.If I can get the job,I believe I can be a great helper.
Thank you for your consideration.
Yours truly,
Li Ping
精彩语句????
warm-hearted热心的
for example例如Writing 15(2015绍兴)
你校英语社团正在开展主题为“What should a good teacher be like?”的讨论,为此你采访了一些学生和家 长。请你根据下表内容,用英语写一篇短文进行交流,并阐述你的观点。注意:1.短文必须包括表中所有内容,可适当增加细节;
2.你的观点至少两条;
3.词数:80—100;
4.短文首句仅供选择使用,不计入总词数。
短文首句:Students and parents have different opinions about what a good teacher should be like.
What should a good teacher be like?
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写作要点
1.可以采用三段式作文。
2.第一段写学生的主要观点:
(1)与学生相处融洽;
(2)课堂生动有趣。
3.第二段写家长的主要观点:
(1)学识广博;
(2)严格要求学生。
4.你的观点(至少两条)。
参考范文
What should a good teacher be like?
Students and parents have different opinions about what a good teacher should be like.As for students,they think good teachers should get along well with their students.And they are supposed to make their classes lively and interesting.
However,parents think differently from students.For them,good teachers should first have plenty of knowledge. At the same time,they are expected to be strict with their students.
In my opinion,the most important thing for a good teacher is to love students.They should try to encourage stu- dents when they have problems with their studies.What's more,they should help their students learn how to learn.
精彩语句????
think differently考虑不同
at the same time同时
be strict with sb.对某人要求严格Writing 1(2019北京)
从下面两个题目中任选一题,根据中文和英文提示,完成一篇不少于50词的文段写作。文中已给出内 容不计入总词数。所给提示词语仅供选用。请不要写出你的校名和姓名。
题目①
假如你是李华,你们学校正在开展“安全月”宣传活动,倡议大家制作关于安全教育的主题海报,你们班交 换生Peter给你发邮件询问相关事情。请用英语回复一封邮件,告诉他海报上交的时间,并分享你设计海报 的一些想法。
提示词语:design, safety rule, careful, protect, picture
提示问题:●When should you hand in the poster?
●What would you like to share with Peter about designing the poster?B组 2015—2019年全国中考题组Dear Peter,
I’m glad to receive your email.??? ?
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If there is anything more that I can help with, please let me know.
Yours,
Li Hua
题目②
自律,即自我约束,是自我提升的一种途径,有助于我们成长,促使我们不断前行。
某英文网站正在开展以“自律”为主题的征文活动。假如你是李华,请用英语写一篇短文投稿,谈谈为了 增强自律意识,你做过什么,以及这样做给你带来的好处。提示词语:self-disciplined(自律的), plan, goal, habit, improve
提示问题:●What did you do to be self-disciplined?
●What benefits have you got from doing so?
Self-discipline plays an important role in our life.????
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写作要点
题目①
1.人称:以第一人称为主。
2.时态:以一般现在时为主。
3.要点:1)海报上交的时间;
2)分享设计海报的想法。
题目②
1.人称:以第一人称为主。
2.时态:以一般过去时为主。
3.要点:1)列出你为了增强自律意识做过的事情;
2)自己已经获得的益处。参考范文
题目①
Dear Peter,
I'm glad to receive your email. We need to hand in the poster by next Monday. Now, I'd like to share some ideas on how I will design my poster.
The main part is about safety rules for traffic. For example, be careful when crossing the street. Wait till the traf- fic lights turn green.
To make my poster more attractive, I plan to add several pictures to it. Hope my ideas will be helpful.
If there is anything more that I can help with, please let me know.Yours,
Li Hua题目②
Self-discipline plays an important role in our life. To be self-disciplined, I started from doing simple things. I tried to form the habits of getting up early and reading books for 30 minutes every day. Though it was hard at the beginning, I pushed myself hard. After about three weeks, I got into the habits.
By doing so, I have improved myself. I am now more energetic and have a wider understanding of the world through reading.
精彩语句????
题目①
1.精美词汇:
hand in上交;share v.分享;attractive adj.好看的,美观的
2.出彩结构
Now, I'd like to share some ideas on how I will design my poster.(how引导宾语从句)
题目②
1.精美词汇:
try to do sth.尽力做某事;push oneself hard逼迫自己;energetic adj.精力充沛的
2.出彩结构
Though it was hard at the beginning, I pushed myself hard. (though引导让步状语从句)Writing 2(2019天津)
假如你是晨光中学的学生李华,平时坚持用英语写日记。请根据以下要点,描述你星期三放学乘地铁 回家路上看到的事情,并表达自己的想法。
(1)一个男孩不舒服,开始呕吐,一位穿着漂亮的女士帮着擦拭地面,男孩表达感谢。
(2)地铁到站,有人挤向座位,有人下不去车,有人因此争吵。
(3)你认为……
参考词汇:开始呕吐 begin to vomit
挤向座位 push towards the seat
争吵 have a quarrel
要求:
(1)词数:80~100个。
(2)日记格式和开头已给出,不计入总词数。
(3)要点齐全,行文连贯,可适当发挥。Wednesday
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写作要点
1.时态以一般过去时为主。
2.给出的要点和参考词汇要全部用上。
3.注意表达自己的观点时,要传递正能量,态度要明确。
参考范文
Wednesday
When I took the underground back home after school, I noticed a boy who looked uncomfortable, and then he began to vomit. But people around him just looked at him. Nobody wanted to help him. Just then, a beautifully dressed woman helped him scrub the floor, and the boy thanked her very much.
When the underground arrived, some people pushed towards the seat, some people couldn't get off, and some people had a quarrel about it.After seeing this, I think people should help each other. And we should obey some rules. Only in this way will
our world become better and better.Writing 3(2019重庆)
你正在组织一项暑假期间到山区为期一周的游学和帮扶活动。作为发起人,请你写一篇发言稿,在你 校“英语时光”广播中号召更多的同学参加。
要求:
1.80—120词,开头和结尾已给出,不计入总词数;
2.文中不能出现自己的姓名和所在学校的名称。
参考信息:
1.活动缘由(孤独、帮扶、游学……);
2.活动构想(时间、地点、内容……);
3.……
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写作要点
1.体裁:应用文。
2.人称:主体人称为第一人称和第三人称。
3.时态:以一般现在时态为主。
4.要点:
1)活动缘由(孤独、帮扶、游学……);
2)活动构想(时间、地点、内容……);
3)……
参考范文
Hello, everybody. I am planning a summer trip called “Be a Kid in the Mountains”. It will provide us with a meaningful week staying with the students in the mountains.
As many of their parents leave for the city development, these students might feel lonely and some may even find it hard to go on studying. So we can bring them some school things like books and pens for their study, and prepare some interesting stories to share. In the daytime, we can go hiking and do some teamwork. In the evening, we can do such activities as popular games and group dance around the fire.
Isn't that exciting? Come and join us. Let's be “a kid in the mountains”. I believe it will bring sunshine to the mountains as well as more confidence to us.
Thank you!
精彩语句????
1.精美词汇:meaningful adj.有意义的;development n.发展;prepare v.准备;share v.分享;as well as也,和……一 样
2.出彩结构
I believe it will bring sunshine to the mountains as well as more confidence to us. (I believe (that)...结构;as well as连接两个并列成分)Writing 4(2019江苏苏州)
假定你是苏华,最近你的澳大利亚笔友Nathan犯了一些错误,倍感懊恼,写了一封邮件向你诉说。为帮 助他排解困惑,请你根据他的邮件内容并结合自身经历,用英语回信开导他。注意:1.词数90左右,开头和结尾已经写好,不计入总词数;
2.回复需包括所有要点,可适当发挥,使短文连贯、通顺;
3.文中不得提及真实的人名、校名等相关信息。
Dear Nathan,
I‘m sorry to know that you are not happy these days.
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I hope my experience can help you out.
Best wishes,
Su Hua
答案
写作要点
1.审题:这是一篇应用文。注意人称的使用,主体时态为一般现在时和一般过去时。
2.确定要点:
1)同意(或不同意)每个人都会犯错;
2)描述自己犯过的一个错误;
3)如何处理自己的问题;
4)从错误中学到了什么。
参考范文
Dear Nathan,
I'm sorry to know that you are not happy these days. You needn't worry too much. It's true that everyone makes mistakes.
Take me, for example. One day, I spent so much time playing football with my friends that I forgot to do my homework. I said sorry to my teacher and finished it the next day. I found it important to achieve a balance be- tween schoolwork and hobbies.
It doesn't matter whether or not you make mistakes. What matters most is to correct and learn from them. In this way, others will understand you. Then you will feel much better.
I hope my experience can help you out.
Best wishes,
Su Hua
精彩语句????
1.精美词汇:
needn't do 不需要做……;achieve v.获得;matter v.要紧;correct v.改正;in this way用这种方法
2.出彩结构:
...I spent so much time playing football with my friends that I forgot to do my homework.(so...that...引导结果状 语从句)It doesn't matter whether or not you make mistakes. (whether引导宾语从句)
What matters most is to correct and learn from them.(What matters most为主语从句,表语部分是to correct and learn from them)Writing 5(2018北京)
从下面两个题目中任选一题,根据中文和英文提示,完成一篇不少于50词的文段写作。文中已给出内 容不计入总词数。所给提示词语仅供选用。请不要写出你的校名和姓名。
题目①
假如你是李华,你们学校将要举办一场关于京剧的讲座,你打算邀请你们班交换生Peter参加。请用英语写 一封电子邮件,告诉他讲座的时间和地点,以及需要做什么准备。
提示词语:lecture(讲座),invite,information,question,online
提示问题:●When and where will you have the lecture?
●What do you advise Peter to prepare for it?
Dear Peter,
How is it going?
There'll be a lecture on Peking Opera in our school.
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If there is anything that I can do, please let me know.
Yours,
Li Hua“题目②
静以修身,俭以养德”,勤俭节约是中华民族的传统美德。无论生活富足与否,我们都应该提倡节约,杜绝 浪费。
某英文网站正在开展以“节约是美德”为主题的征文活动。假如你是李华,请用英语写一篇短文投稿,谈 谈生活中你是怎么做的,以及这样做的意义。提示词语:thrifty(节约的),save,turn off,food,money,virtue(美德)提示问题:●What do you do in your daily life?
●Why do you do so?
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写作要点
题目①
1.本文是一篇应用文体裁的文章,要求以李华的身份写一封电子邮件告诉交换生关于京剧讲座的相关内容, 主体时态是一般将来时和一般现在时。
2.内容要点
①介绍讲座开始的时间和地点;
②建议Peter需要做的准备。
题目②
1.本篇写作的话题是关于勤俭节约的。要求考生写一篇英文短文投稿,谈谈在生活中自己是怎么做的。主 体时态是一般现在时态。
2.内容要点
①介绍如何在日常生活中做到勤俭节约;②介绍为什么要这样做。
参考范文
题目①
Dear Peter,
How is it going?
There'll be a lecture on Peking Opera in our school. I'd like to invite you to attend it.
Here's the information for it. The place will be the lecture hall. The time is from 9:00 to 11:00 this Friday morn- ing. The speaker is Mr. Li, an expert on Peking Opera.
You may ask questions at the end of the lecture. If you like, you can read online articles on the topic and get ready for your questions.
If there is anything that I can do, please let me know.
Yours,
Li Hua题目②
It's one of our traditional virtues to be thrifty. As a middle school student, I have been very thrifty in my daily life. I turn off the lights when leaving a room, and take shorter showers. Besides, I don't waste food, and I sel- dom spend money on things that I don't need.
I think all such small things are beneficial to the environment and help me to become a person with good virtues.Writing 6(2018四川成都)
假如你是图中女孩,你与家人于4月29日共度周日。请根据图中所示写一篇英文日记,讲述你当天所见 和所做之事。
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注意:1.日记应包含图中所有信息;
2.日记中须写出当天的一些感受;
3.日记应格式正确,语句通顺,句式多样;
4.词数:100左右。参考词汇:城堡castle 螃蟹crab
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写作要点
1.人称:第一人称。
2.时态:一般过去时。
3.要点:
1)日记格式:日期、天气;
2)所见所做;
3)感受。
参考范文
April 29th, Sunday ?Sunny
Today I had a good time with my parents on the beach. It was so fine that I could see the rising sun and flying sea birds. A boat sailed in the distance. What a beautiful scene! Dressed in my swimming suit, I swam in the blue and clear sea. Then, I played volleyball with my parents. Finally, I managed to make a sand castle with tools. It looked so real that a crab even wanted to live in it.
What a pleasant day! I not only got close to nature but also shared happiness with my family.精彩语句
1.精美词汇:
have a good time 玩得开心;on the beach在沙滩上;get close to接近
2.出彩结构:
It was so fine that I could see the rising sun and flying sea birds.本句话使用了so...that...句式,意为“如此……
以至于……”。
What a pleasant day!本句为what引导的感叹句,其基本结构为:What+a/an+ adj.+可数名词单数(+其他)!Writing 7(2017天津)
英国学生Frank八月底将要来天津学习并住在李明家。请根据以下提示,以李明的名义给Frank写一封电子 邮件。
(1)Frank到来前,你们会给他准备好房间。
(2)你爸爸送你们上学,妈妈做美味的食物。
(3)周末你们会邀请Frank游览天津,如逛古文化街、乘船游海河。
(4)Frank喜欢打排球,你们可以一起看天津女排比赛。
(5)你相信……
参考词汇:古文化街 Tianjin Ancient Cultural Street
海河 Haihe River
天津女排 Tianjin Women's Volleyball Team
要求:
(1)词数:80~100个。(2)电子邮件的开头和结尾已给出,不计入总词数。
(3)要点齐全,行文连贯,可适当发挥。
Dear Frank,
I'm happy to hear that at the end of August you will come to Tianjin to study and stay with my family. I'm writ- ing to say welcome to you.
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Looking forward to seeing you soon.
Li Ming
答案
写作要点
1.本文是一封电子邮件,时态为一般将来时和一般现在时。
2.写作要点:1)为Frank准备房间以及爸爸妈妈要做的事情;2)周末游览天津;3)看排球赛。
参考范文
Dear Frank,
I'm happy to hear that at the end of August you will come to Tianjin to study and stay with my family. I'm writ- ing to say welcome to you.
Before you arrive, we will provide you with a room.It's very nice and clean.My father will send us to school and my mother will cook delicious food for us.
What's more, on weekends we can visit Tianjin Ancient Cultural Street,which is full of the footprints of Tianjin's history.We can also visit the Haihe River by ship,which is the mother river of Tianjin.I've heard you love playing volleyball,so I think a plan of watching a game of Tianjin Women's Volleyball Team
will delight you.
I believe that you will have fun in Tianjin and you will love Tianjin too!
Looking forward to seeing you soon.
Li Ming
精彩语句
1.精美词汇
provide...with...提供;delight v.使高兴;footprint n.足迹
2.出彩结构
We can also visit the Haihe River by ship,which is the mother river of Tianjin.(本句使用了非限制性定语从句)Writing 8(2017安徽)
假如你是李华,你们学校将举行“弘扬中华传统文化——戏曲进校园”展演活动,你打算邀请你的美 国朋友Mike参加。请你根据以下提示用英文给他写一封电子邮件。
1.时间:7月1日下午2点;
2.地点:学校操场;
3.内容:文化展览、节目表演等。
提示词:戏曲opera n. 表演performance n.
注意:1.词数80~100;
2.可适当增加细节,以使行文连贯;
3.信中不能出现与本人相关的信息;
4.开头和结尾已为你写好,不计入总词数。Dear Mike,
I know you are interested in traditional Chinese culture.
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Yours,
Li Hua答案
写作要点
1.这是一封电子邮件,属于应用文。
2.时态以一般将来时为主,辅之以一般现在时。
3.内容主要有①邀请的原因即学校将举行“弘扬中华传统文化——戏曲进校园”展演活动;②时间是7月1 日下午2点;③地点在学校操场;④内容包括文化展览、节目表演等。可以适当发挥,词数80~100。
参考范文
Dear Mike,
I know you are interested in traditional Chinese culture.
Now, I have a piece of good news to share with you. There is an activity about traditional Chinese operas at 2:00 p.m. on July 1. It will be held in the playground in our school and all the teachers and students will attend. On that day, a culture show and many wonderful opera performances will be put on. It's a chance for you to learn more about traditional Chinese culture. Come and join us! I think we'll have a great time.I‘m looking forward to your early reply.
Yours,
Li Hua
精彩语句
1.精美词汇
performance n.表演;traditional Chinese culture 中国传统文化; hold 举办; attend出席; a piece of good news一 条好消息。
2.出彩结构
It is a chance for you to learn more about traditional Chinese culture.(It is a chance for sb. to do sth.对某人来说 做某事是个好机会)Writing 9(2016山西)
向他人表达善意并帮助他人体现了一个人良好的品格。当你向别人表达善意并给他人提供帮助时,你 希望得到回报(repay)吗?针对这一话题,九年级六班的同学们展开了辩论。
假设你是正方或反方的一员,请围绕你的观点,结合自己的亲身经历,说出2至3条理由来说服同学们(只需选 择一方观点表达即可)。
?要求:1.词数不少于80词;
2.文章的开头已给出,不计入总词数;
3.文中不得出现真实的人名、校名。
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写作要点
1.本文是夹叙夹议的文章。主体时态是一般现在时和一般过去时。
2.内容要点:帮助别人的好处;自己帮助别人的经历;总结。
参考范文
When I show kindness and help others, I never expect them to repay me. In my view, helping others gives me a strong feeling of being needed and brings me happiness. On the other hand, everyone may get into trouble and need help, too.
Several days ago, while I was having a walk in the park, I found a little boy crying. Then I asked him what was the matter, and he told me he couldn't find his mom. Luckily, he remembered his mother's phone number. So I called her immediately. Ten minutes later, the boy saw his mom and became excited. His mom was so thankful that she wanted to buy me a small gift, but I refused. At that time, I felt quite happy because I did something re- ally good.All in all, the world needs love and we should be ready to help others without expecting any repay. If you want- ed repay, a “Thanks”would be enough.Writing 10(2016陕西)
假如你是李明,你准备和父母周末去附近的村庄游玩,请根据提示语,给恰逢来你校交流学习的David写 一封e-mail,邀请他一同前往。要求:1.参考提示语,可适当发挥;
2.语句通顺,意思连贯,书写工整;
3.文中不得出现任何真实信息(姓名、校名和地名等);
4.词数:不少于70词。(开头和结尾已给出,但不计入总词数。)
Dear David,
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Yours,
Li Ming答案
写作要点
1.本文是应用文,主体时态为一般现在时和一般将来时。
2.第一段:提出邀请;第二段:游玩的具体活动;第三段:表达自己诚挚的期盼。
3.文中不可用真实的信息;表达完整,条理清晰。
参考范文
Dear David,
How are you recently?This weekend,my parents and I are going to a nearby village.Would you like to go with us?In the morning,we can feed animals.Then,we plan to pick fruit and vegetables in the fields.In the afternoon,we'll watch the villagers make tea.After that,we will learn to cook meals.In the evening,we can play games or chat with the people there.I'm sure we will have a good time.
I'm looking forward to your reply.
Yours,
Li MingWriting 11(2015江苏镇江)
帮助他人,快乐自己。李华一家常在周末去社区参加志愿者活动。假如你是李华的同学,请根据提供的信 息介绍李华一家,描述他们上周六所做的事,你对他们的做法有何感想?你是否愿意参与类似的活动?说明 理由。要求:
1.所写内容必须包括提供的所有信息,可适当发挥。
2.评价李华一家的做法;表达你的意愿,并说明理由。
3.文章不少于90词,开头已给出,不计入总词数。
4.语气通顺,意思连贯,语法正确,条理清楚,字迹工整。
5.文中不得出现真实的姓名、校名及地点。
I am Li Hua’s classmate and I’ve known that he and his parents often go to the community centre to do some voluntary work.????????? ??? ??? ??? ??? ??? ??? ??? ??? ??? ??? ??? ??? ??? ??? ??? ??? ??? ??? ??? ??? ??? ??? ??? ??? ??? ??? ??? ??? ??? ??? ??? ??? ??? ??? ???
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写作要点
1.本文属于记叙文,主体时态是一般现在时和一般过去时。
2.内容要点:
①介绍李华一家;
②介绍上周六李华一家人所做的事;
③对李华一家所做的事作出评价;
④自己是否愿意参加类似的活动并说明理由。
3.词数不少于90词。
参考范文
I am Li Hua's classmate and I've known that he and his parents often go to the community centre to do some voluntary work.His father is a computer engineer.He's good at repairing things.His mother is a manager of a company.She likes DIY.Li Hua is a middle school student.He plays chess well.Last Saturday,his family went there again and did something for others.His father checked and fixed computers for neighbours.His mother made rice dumplings for the elderly people there.Li Hua taught some primary school students to play chess.
I think what his family do is meaningful.I also want to be a volunteer like Li Hua.I will clean the house for the old people.
As we know,helping others is helping ourselves.It can also bring happiness to us all.Writing 1(2019江苏南京)
假如你是李华,在网上看到英国Britech公司为正在开发的一款提高英语写作能力的应用软件(app)征集 网友建议。请根据网上的征集信息,用英语给该公司写一封电子邮件。
IDEAS NEEDED
Britech is now designing an app that helps learners with their English writing. The app is to help learners explore ideas, organize them and write them down. Your ideas are needed!
Here's what to do:
Write to share your ideas! Feel free to be creative!
Please let us know:
●What's the name of the app?
●What problem does the app solve?
●What does the app do?
Contact us at appdesign@Britech.comC组 教师专用题组 注意:
1.内容涵盖所有要点,可适当发挥。
2.词数80左右(已给出的文章开头,不计入总词数)。
3.文中不得提及有关考生个人身份的任何信息,如校名、人名等。
Dear Sir or Madam,
Thanks for designing an app for English writing.?? ?
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Li Hua答案
写作要点
1.体裁:本文是应用文中的回信类作文。
2.人称:第一人称等。
3.时态:主体时态为一般现在时。
4.确定要点:
1)这个app的名称;
2)这个app解决什么问题;
3)这个app应有的具体功能。参考范文
Dear Sir or Madam,
Thanks for designing an app for English writing. I'd like to share my ideas here. Could its name be “Writing Made Easy”?
Many of us have difficulty in writing. We don't know how to organize ideas, use proper words, and so on. I hope it can solve these problems.
Here is my advice on what the app does. First, it should provide some reading materials. The more we read, the better we write. Second, the app should have an online course so that we can develop our writing skills. Third, there should be an e-teacher who can correct mistakes and offer suggestions.
I hope my advice is worth taking.
Yours,
Li Hua精彩语句????
1.精美词汇:
have difficulty in doing sth.做某事有困难;and so on等等;correct mistakes纠错;offer suggestions提供建议
2.出彩结构:
①The more we read, the better we write.(本句用了“the+比较级,the+比较级”结构,表示“越……,就越 ……”)
②Second, the app should have