人教版英语初中九年级上册知识讲解，巩固练习（教学资料，补习资料）：Unit 9 I like music that I can dance to 第4课时Writing

重点
如何写好描写类文章
【常用表达】
1. 描述人物心情的常用词语：
sad 难过的 happy 高兴的excited 兴奋的 pleased 高兴的satisfied 满意的 angry 生气的worried 担心的 disappointed 失望的terrified 恐惧的 friendly 友好的anxious 焦虑的 curious 好奇的eager 急切的
2. 表达人物兴趣和爱好的常用词组或短语：
like very much 非常喜欢 love 喜爱be interested in 对……感兴趣 be fond of 喜欢hate 憎恨 be tired of 对……厌倦be crazy about 对……极度喜欢 enjoy 喜欢lose interest in 对……失去兴趣
3. 描写人物外貌和性格特征的常用词语：
good-looking 长得好看的 funny-looking 长相滑稽的 ordinary-looking 长相一般的white-haired 白头发的 warm-hearted 热心肠的kind-hearted 好心的 bad-tempered 脾气不好的 near-sighted 近视眼的far-sighted 远视眼的 tall 个高的short 个矮的 pretty 漂亮的naughty 淘气的 lovely 可爱的easy-going 温和宽容的 smart 精明的wise 明智的 bright 聪明的diligent 勤奋的 lazy 懒惰的clever 聪明的 healthy 健康的humorous 幽默的 funny 滑稽的silent 沉默的 attractive 有吸引力的talkative 多话的
4. 介绍人物的姓名、出身：
She was born in Beijing on Oct. 12, 1986.
She was a great woman with the name...
Born of a poor clerk’s family, she had little schooling.
【典例】（一）简要介绍你喜欢的一本书，并阐述你喜欢它的理由和你从中学到了什么。
要求：1. 词数80左右。文中不得出现真实的校名、姓名。
2. 须包括所有内容要点，可适当发挥，使语句通顺，意思连贯，符合逻辑。
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【佳作展示】
My favorite book
My favorite book is Harry Potter. I think it is a nice and a funny book. It is good for us teenagers. I like reading it because it is full of science fiction, it is easy to understand and it is the most funny book I have read. I have learned a lot from it. I know that as a teenager, we should be confident and brave. So as Harry. And we should love and protect our friends. We all need friends. We all need get along well with our friends. If I have the chance to learn some magic, I’d love to be a teenager like Harry Potter. Flying and do some magic tricks, that’s my interest and that’s the most important reason why I love read Harry potter so much.
【典例】（二）假如你是Millie，上星期你们搬家后，你有了属于自己的房间。请你用英语写一篇 80—100词的短文介绍你的房间。短文开头已经给出，但不计入总词数。
短文应包含以下要点，可以适当发挥:
1. 房间是粉红色的，使人感觉温暖；
2. 有一张大而舒适的床和一张书桌；
3. 书桌上有一台电脑，可以在学习之后；
4. 你会打扫房间并保持房间整洁；
5. 你的房间是你学习和放松最好的地方， 你非常喜欢它。
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【佳作展示】
I have a room of my own after I moved to our new house last week. My room is pink and it makes me feel warm because pink is my favorite color. There is a big bed and a desk in it. My bed is very comfortable. I often lie on it when I want to relax myself. On the desk， there is a computer. I can learn on it and I can also play games to relax after finishing my homework. Near the desk is my bookshelf. I have many kinds of books on it. I clean my room every day and I can keep it clean and tidy.
My room is the best place to study and relax. I love it very much.
本题是一篇提纲作文。要求介绍一下自己的房间。短文要包含提纲要求的所有要点，并作适当发挥。要注意语言的选择及句型的运用，把简单的内容表达具体生动。短文用一般现在时态，第一、三人称进行表达。
本范文抓住了一个学生房间中的两大主件：床和书桌。先对床和书桌进行介绍，然后围绕着床和书桌介绍了房间中的其它东西。层次清楚，结构合理。短文夹叙夹议，在叙述中表达出了作者对小房间的浓浓的情感。中心突出，主题鲜明。
基础训练
（一）
请根据中文提示，用英语写一篇80词左右的短文，介绍一下你的好朋友Millie。
1. Millie是一个文静(quiet)的害羞（shy）的女孩。
2. 她喜欢穿蓝色的衣服，因为蓝色象征（represent平静和安宁(peace)。她穿蓝色的衣服很好看。
3. 她有时候感到压抑(stressed)，因为她总为一些事情担忧(worry about)。
4. 有人说她可以穿红色的衣服，因为红色是一种强烈的色彩，它象征着力量(power)，能使Millie看上去更活泼、充满活力(lively)。
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根据下面的要点提示写一篇文章，对自己熟悉的人物进行描述。时态用一般现在时，人称以第三人称为主。词数80左右。
要点：1. 人物的年龄和外貌；
2. 人物的爱好；
3. 人物的性格；
4. 对人物进行评价。
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（三）
根据要求完成大作文，词数：80词左右。
现在的科技日新月异，各种发明以及高科技产品成为了我们生活中不可缺少的东西，如电脑、笔记本电脑(laptop)、手机(mobile phone)、MP4、数码相机(digital camera)、数码摄影机(DV)等。请以My Favorite Invention为题描述你最喜欢的一种发明，并说明理由(理由至少有两个方面)。
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参考答案
（一）
Millie is a shy quiet girl. She likes wearing blue clothes because blue represents calm and peaceful. She looks nice in blue. Sometimes she feels stressed because she is too worried about some things. Someone advises her to wear red because red is a strong colour. It represents power. It can make Millie look more lively and energetic.
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My Teacher
I have met many good/excellent teachers in school. One of them is my English teacher. Her name is Ms. Li. She is 35 years old. She is tall and beautiful with long curly(卷曲的) hair.
In her free time, she likes reading, singing and dancing. She also enjoys playing sports.In the school when we ask for questions, she is very patient. Every time we have trouble, she is always friendly and warm-hearted to help us. She is a good teacher. She is like not only our friend but also our mother.
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My Favorite Invention