Unit 1 教学教案Reading for Writing
学科 英语 年级 高一
版本及章节 人教版高中英语 第一册
学习领域 Unit 1 Teenage Life
授课教师
教学学案
单元学习主题 Reading for Writing——A letter of advice
自查和互查评价表
Teaching procedure
Step 1: Pre-learning (7’ )(固化探索类活动)
Teacher’s activities 1(lead in) T introduces the topic by presenting a series of sentences of different patterns for the students. Students’ activities 1 Ss read them on the screen and make guesses of the expressions about the pictures.
Intentions These activities aim at introducing the topic of the class, arousing Ss’ interest in class and helping Ss get to know some basic information from the expressions of different sentence patterns. 活动意图说明：根据高一学生的真实情况设置真实情景，从而导入本课话题，激活学生相关话题知识。该环节问题贴近学生能力，学生可根据图片实际情况选择问题来回答，这样更具体化和个性化，因此学生在该环节应该是头脑风暴，拓展词汇上没有很大问题。
Step 2 While Reading --Fast Reading (3’ )
Teacher’s activities 2 T raises the following questions, directing Ss to read the first paragraph of the passage and answer the questions. What do you think of Chen Lei? Can you tell us the reasons? What is the passage mainly about?(What is Worried Friend’s problem?) Students’ activities 2 Ss read the whole passage and answer the questions put forward by T.
Intentions This activity aims to help Ss have a clear understanding of the problems of the Worried Friend. 活动意图说明: 通过快速阅读文章，选择恰当的内容来帮助学生把握文章主旨，找出“忧心忡忡的朋友”的问题。该环节设计的主要意图是帮助学生理清文章主旨和脉络结构，加强对语篇的整体理解。
Step 3: While Reading --Detailed Reading (15’)
Teacher’s activities 3 T asks the students to read the passage carefully and complete the mind map on their hand-out with the key information taken from the passage. T invites a volunteer to finish drawing his map on the blackboard. T asks students to compare their map with that on the blackboard and then draw their own map in different colors if they have different opinions. Based on the mind map, T makes comments and instructions on some points if necessary to help students get a better understanding of the passage. Students’ activities 3 Students read the passage and complete the mind map on their hand-out. One of the students draw the pictures on the blackboard while the others add information on the blackboard. Students polish their mind maps with the instruction of the teacher to form a better understanding of the passage.
Intentions This activity aims to help students get to know the letter of advice and develop Ss’ ability to summarize the story, grasp the details of it and even infer the author’s purpose appropriately. 活动意图说明: 通过本环节的思考和讨论，学生加深对问题与建议的认识；通过阅读表达的细节内容，使学生明确其所代表的人文精神和文化价值，并意识到遇到问题后向朋友寻求帮助和建议的必要性和迫切性。
Step 4 Reading for writing (15’)(应用实践类活动)
Teacher’s activities 4 Guide Ss first to read the three paragraphs with pictures, trying to find out their problems. Guide Ss to have a discussion in groups about how to share suggestions and reasons by using the following expressions "I recommend that you ...I think you should...Why not...?" Guide Ss to write the problems on the paper in groups. Choose a leader to show in the front for other students to listen and evaluate. Students’ activities 4 1. Students read the passage and try to find out their problems. 2. Students focus on the content of the passage with the picture and then talk about the problems showing suggestions and reasons. 3. One student acts as a group leader and writes down the result of discussion on the blackboard.
活动意图说明: 本环节的一系列活动能够提升学生的查找能力和综合语言表达能力，实践与内化所学习的语言知识，提炼所学的结构化知识和语言信息并形成口头语言表达，进而内化目标语言知识和相关书面信息。这项活动能够提高学生运用所学短语的能力，提升学生小组间成员的合作能力，提升学生的组织和展示能力。
Teacher’s activities 5 Guide the students to offer one suggestion or reason to the others and arrive at one conclusion so as to lead the students to have a good reflecting. With this kind of activity, the students will perhaps have a better understanding of themselves. Students’ activities 5 The related student will take down each comment from the students. And then make a plan for his new life.
活动意图说明: 通过本环节的思考与分享，学生加深了对自己面临的问题的认识，学生更加明确地意识到在新的校园环境如何做人做事的必要性和迫切性，从而形成交友的意向，培养学生的合作关系和友好关系。此项活动有利于发展学生的核心素养，培养学生对自己、对他人，尤其在交友方面的责任感和自信心。
Teacher’s activities 6 Guide Ss to read the table and fill in the blanks. Guide the students to exchange drafts by using the checklist to give feedback. Guide the students to write in different levels to show their ability. Students’ activities 6 The students do as the teacher told them.
活动意图说明：通过本环节的学习活动，学生可以在新的情境中展开想象力和创造力，将所学知识进行迁移，填写相关知识，进而提高对整篇文章的表达能力，培养自己的知识迁移能力。
Step 5 Homework (20’)
Teacher’s activities 7 Guide the students to finish the writing in different levels. Students’ activities 7 The students do as the teacher told them.
Intentions: These activities aim to help Ss apply what they have learned and develop the right attitude towards life. This activity is intended to develop Ss’ ability of writing. 活动意图说明：本环节教学设计符合新课程标准要求，教师在设计教学过程中要根据学生的不同层次设计不同的内容。本次内容设计了基础部分写作，主要是针对本课所学的内容；拓展层写作，主要是用好本课所学的新知识要点和各类短语；竞赛类写作，主要是培养优秀生参加高一高二的各类能力大赛或竞赛活动。
Blackboard design(板书设计) How to write a letter of advice? problems... Making solutions suggestions: I suggest that we should do…. Reasons Actually… I think you should …. As a result, … I recommend you do…. The first reason is that….
特色学习，资源分析，技术手段应用说明 本节课的教学设计是以英语学科的核心素养发展为理论基础，紧紧围绕学习活动，设定学习目标并展开相关的学习活动，教师基于学习目标设计了多个层次的学习活动，活动之间层层相扣，层层推进，有效地促成学习目标的达成和发展学生的核心素养。 情境式创设，提高学生课堂参与度、学习注意力和兴趣，促进学习目标的达成。 根据学生新进校园的情况和所涉及的问题，确保学生有话可谈。在内化文本消息和最后的迁移创新类活动中设计的情景，可以使学生在轻松愉快的氛围内锻炼语言表达能力，掌握相关语法和文本信息，培养学习创造性地解决实际生活的能力。 2．运用多种手段，全方位提升学生学习能力、思维品质和语言能力。 在课堂开始，教师会提供一些图片，让学生通过图片，将所学的知识归纳提升，并引出新的话题，主要是在不同的语境中学习如何记忆词汇和归纳词语。本课包含了制作思维导图、小组活动、小组讨论和制作展示等环节，极大程度地体现了学生在课堂上的主体地位，可帮助学生锻炼思维和表达能力、答案的逻辑推理能力及听说读写全方位的能力，加强与他人沟通配合的协作能力。 3．教学设计紧扣学生思维发展模式，加强文本理解并联系实际生活。 在写作部分的设计上，由课本到现实生活，由浅入深，层层推进，一步步帮助学生加深对问题的理解，将学生的注意力迁移到对同学、对班级和对自己的问题上。 作业设计独特新颖，形成学生的第2课堂。 本课的作业主要是根据建议信改编的阅读理解和写作，分层体现能力，贴合文章主题，能够帮助学生从校园生活新生的角度获取不同方面的认知能力，作业设计形成了分层推进的培养能力。同时将自己的问题、建议或理由以不同的语言形式进行表达，这几个任务均可以在不同程度上帮助学生拓宽学习渠道，提升学生学习兴趣和热情。
教学反思与改进，存在的问题 本课的教学设计从整体上来说比较成功，学生的反馈大部分都很好，但也存在以下的问题： 1.在意见和理由的写作上，部分学生不能很好地利用本课所学的重点短语以及写作格式，从而浪费了时间。 2.在进行角色表演时学生不能脱离课本，或者部分学生不会很好地根据自己的思维导图进行复述，仍然捧着课本，阅读不够流畅。 3.所设计的四、五级写作在一定程度上需要大量的时间，会导致课时不够。 改进措施 鼓励优秀生率先示范，用自己的语言阐述观点。 教师可以通过分享优秀文章，让学生进行第2次交流。
教材思考 丰富性 在语言丰富方面，可以运用不同的句式，尤其要学会运用表达建议的句式以及非谓语形式，要学会用相对丰富的语言替代单句或者是单调的句型。 在Reading and Thinking环节下的文章，学生积累了表达问题和建议的短语： Noun phrasesVerb phrases (拓展类)Adj. phrasesAdv. phrasesPrep. phrases (拓展类)too much timefocus onbe very worried abouttoo oftenonline =on the Internetnew hobbiesconcentrate onfeel terribleother kinds of advicebecome addicted tobe anxiousencourage somebody to do
准确性 通过学习语法，学生明确了各种短语的使用，在此基础上拓展句子的基本结构，句子的基本类型，从而掌握短语在句子中的精确使用。 多元性 学生在阅读和写作的文章中，通过猜词和把握主题细节活动，遇到了本课需要学习的生词和短语，通过对主题问题的了解，学会了使用以下词汇和短语。如： 1)观点多元性。Do you think Ms. Luo’s advice is useful? Why or why not?在回答此问题时学生使用了本文阅读中的新学短语：I think I should encourage him to focus on other things in life, instead of concentrating on playing computer games constantly. 2）话题多元性 完整性和目标性 俱乐部看图描写 （1）自然俱乐部 There are four students in the Nature Club because they are interested in plants and animals. They are planting trees. Now, one is carrying a tree and holding it straight. One is digging some soil for the tree, while other girls help them. Actually, they are very good extra-curricular activities for senior high school students. （2）芭蕾舞俱乐部 A beautiful girl loves dancing, so she often dances in the Ballet Club. Now, she is learning new movements. She often practices dancing with the help of dance pole. As a dance player, she can dance on the tiptop wearing a white short skirt with two-belts on her shoulders. Actually, she is good at dancing and very pleased to have this extra-curricular activity to build up her talents. 写作方法概述，描写图片，即找出图片中的要点写成段落主题句，然后对要点形成解释，2~4句加结论，过渡词加结论（即观点，也就是对要点的情感表达。） 育人性和开放性 What other kinds of advice would you give? 在回答此问题时，学生不仅用了本文阅读中新学的短语，而且学会了使用情感类动词offer替代give，还使用了本文中的短语become addicted to, concentrate on 和make the team。最重要的是，学生在老师的引领下理解了生活的意义：happiness和love才是做事的最高追求。 I would offer other kinds of advice to some students who become addicted to the Internet and cannot concentrate on school and family life. We can make the team of five people to beat him. If he is always defeated, he will lose his interest in playing computer games. Then he will have no happiness because happiness can keep people going on, so having no happiness will stop people doing what they love. 【范文】 If you are his friends, what’s your advice to him? From my point of view, “all play and no work makes Jack a mere boy”, because all play will make you lose attraction to other things. Instead, without all work, you will make it difficult to focus on school and family life. Actually, it is an unhealthy lifestyle for teenagers of our generation. Obviously, it is not only a bad behavior, but also an unhealthy lifestyle and unusual to us. “If you have a dream to university, you must always prepare for a rainy day”. To be honest, our senior high school is really a short period. We are sure to meet with any problems like a rainy day jumping at us. We should try every Freshman Challenge with good preparations. Remember “Distance tests a horse’s strength. Time reveals a person’s character!” As your good friend, I hope you can follow me and keep our word. Stop playing computers too much on the Internet and you will make a bigger difference.
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Unit 1 Teenage life
Reading for Writing
A Letter of Advice
新人教版（2019） 必修一
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Teaching Objectives
To be able to use phrases to give advice.
To be able to grasp the writing style and the structure.
To be able to write a letter of advice.
Write a letter of advice
Reading for Writing
Now let's read the pictures.
Describe the pictures with proper words or expressions.
Before writing
annoyed
two annoyed female/ladies/women
deeply annoyed
bored
a bit bored
confused
a pair of confused eyes
depressed
a depressed look
frightened
extremely frightened
annoyed
bored
confused
欧锦赛葡萄牙1-2希腊 神情沮丧的菲戈
输掉G2后的詹姆斯
frightened
depressed
Now let's read a letter.
How is Worried Friend? Why?
Reading for writing
I'm coming!
worried
terribly worried
Friends
worried
confused
Always making troubles
frightened
depressed
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02
03
04
05
06
bored
Usually be afraid to talk with parents
Absent-minded
Playing computers too much
Having a constant high fever
Often sleeping in class
Not knowing what to do every day
What do you think of Chen Lei?
Can you tell us the reasons?
Discover
annoyed
What is the passage mainly about?
(What is Worried Friend's problem?)
Passage
Center question
Discover
活动意图说明：提炼所学的结构化知识和语言信息并形成口头语言表达，进而内化目标语言知识和相关书面信息。
unhealthy
anxious
What is the passage mainly about?
(What are Susan Luo's suggestions?)
responsible
friendly
Discover
Suggestions
As friends
1.Talk to your friend
2.Try to have a new hobby
unhealthy
anxious
Do students often meet with problems and need advice? Why?
Challenge
difficult
new/fresh
responsible
friendly
Discover
Challenge Yourself
1.Do you think Ms. Luo's advice is useful? Why or why not?
I would offer other kinds of advice to some students who become addicted to the Internet and cannot concentrate on school and family life. We can make the team of five people to beat him. If he is always defeated, he will lose his interest in playing computer games. Then he will have no happiness because happiness can keep people going on, so having no happiness will stop people doing what they love.
2. What other kinds of advice would you give?
Yes! Because as a good friend, we should encourage him to focus on other things in life, instead of concentrating on playing computer games constantly.
活动意图说明：通过这项活动提高学生运用所学短语的能力，提升学生小组间成员的合作能力，提升学生的组织和展示能力。
Form a habit to learn them by heart!
If you are his friend, what's your advice to him?
From my point of view, “all play and no work makes Jack a mere boy”, because all play will make you lose attraction to other things. Instead, without all work, you will make it difficult to focus on school and family life. Actually, it is an unhealthy lifestyle for teenagers of our generation. Obviously, it is not only a bad behavior, but also an unhealthy lifestyle and unusual to us.
“If you have a dream to university, you must always prepare for a rainy day”. To be honest, our senior high school is really a short period. We are sure to meet with any problems like a rainy day jumping at us. We should try every Freshman Challenge with good preparations. Remember “Distance tests a horse’s strength. Time reveals a person's character!” As your good friend, I hope you can follow me and keep our word. Stop playing computers too much on the Internet and you will make a bigger difference.
I know what the
problem is. I understand quite well...
B. I understand how
you feel. You think that...
C. This is my advice and reason(s). I recommend that...
D. I think my advice
will help. I'm sure he will listen to you.
I recommend that you talk to your friend about his behaviour.
I think you should encourage your friend to try new hobbies.
Why not discuss the problem together?
Develop Yourself
Role player
Susan Luo
Worried Friend
Chen Lei
Group work(three of you work together)
What're their problems?
I always feel lonely.
My parents won't listen.
problems
There is a girl I like in my class.
Group work( three of you work together)
Now you have three friends, what's your advice to them?
If I were you, I would't talk with my parents because I don't have time. I always go to school and devote myself to studying.
On the contrary，I won't talk with them until they have a better understanding of me，even though they are studying in their bedroom.
Group work(six of you work together)
What're their problems? Share your suggestions or reasons.
As far as I’m concerned, I recommend that you should go to after-school class for there are a lot of children like you in the class. You can discuss with them or play some computer games in the free time.
If you still feel lonely, I think you should arrange some study tasks for yourself. Why not make up for your courses? I'm sure you won't feel lonely then.
Group work(six of you work together)
What're their problems? Share your suggestions or reasons.
I understand quite well that anyone of us will like a girl to a certain degree. As a result, Someone who's quite self-confident will speak it out to her, then perhaps they will go on making friends. Maybe, more often, the girl will refuse him.
Anyone who is too shy to let out the secret will keep it to himself or herself alone. Actually, most people have already chosen to do so. I think such is very necessary to us young Chinese students, because we have to study hard at our lessons and do some more amusements or practical activities during the three-year precious period.
Group work(six of you work together)
What're their problems? Share your suggestions or reasons.
Your friends Work alone: since they are your friends, please offer one suggestion or reason to each of them.
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……
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After reading for writing
Evaluation scores
1.Are all the parts of a letter included and organized in
good order？ 1 2 3 4 5
2.Does the writer give reasons for the advice？ 1 2 3 4 5
3.Does the writer use proper expressions to give
suggestions？ 1 2 3 4 5
4.Does the writer use commas and stops correctly? 1 2 3 4 5
5.Is the handwriting easy to read？
1 2 3 4 5
Writing with four levels
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Level A：Basic
Level B：Expanded
Level C：For competition
Level D：For reading
Level E：To be continued
Dear Xu Ting，
You are worried that you feel very terrible about feeling lonely. I understand that how you feel.
To be honest, I think maybe you should join after-school class, because there are a lot of children like you. During the periods you can discuss anything with them or play some games.
If you still feel lonely, personally you ought to arrange some study tasks for yourself. Why not make up for your courses? I'm sure that you will feel more pleased instead of feeling lonely.
Best wishes!
Yours,
Li Hua
A层：基础层
Dear Xu Ting,
You are worried that you feel very terrible about being lonely. I understand how you feel because you don't stay together with your parents who are working in another city.
To be honest, I think maybe you should join after-school activities because there are a lot of children like you. Of course, during the period you can focus on discussing anything with them even playing some games.
If you still feel lonely, personally you ought to arrange some study tasks for yourself and concentrate on it. Why not make up for your courses and you won't feel lonely. I'm sure you will be attracted to your study here. You should be responsible for yourself.
B层：拓展层
Needless to say,?the ability to plan and organize has always been essential, however, these days the methods used to plan and organize our daily lives have changed.?Our world has become more business oriented and being late is unacceptable in most social environments.Whether you are young or old, there is no question that planning and organizing is essential. I completely agree with the above statement.
Do you agree or disagree with the following statements? Because modern life is very complex, it is essential for young people to have the ability to plan and organize. Use specific reasons and examples to support your answer.
C 层：竞赛类
I was born in the late 80’s, and when I grew up I remember seeing a lot of people using small calendars to take notes. I also remember seeing a watch on almost everyone’s wrist. Those were the tools needed to stay organized in the past. No one would use their cell phone to plan anything because those functions were virtually non-existent.
Unfortunately, as our society has evolved into a more materialistic and developed version of our past society, people have become too reliant on technology. For example, it has become virtually impossible to keep a conversation going between friends without someone fiddling with their cell phone or someone answering a phone call. Alarm clocks and other devices with power cords are basically non-existent and the use of wireless devices are on the rise.
When we use our phone as our personal assistant, there are way too many potential problems. Being late because the alarm didn’t go off due to?our phones running out of battery?and missing a meeting because we put something in our calendar and forgot about it are just two examples. Compared to things in the past, I would say that?we have become more disorganized. In order to solve this issue I believe that we need to start planning and organizing like we did in the past. Bring back the paper calendars with the big red circles marking important events and start using old-school alarm clocks that literally makes you jump out of bed at the moment it goes off!
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To conclude, having the ability to plan and organize is definitely an essential skill. In order to improve our ability to do that, we should become less reliant on technology and start using less convenient but more effective methods, or at least make sure that our phones are fully charged (or charging) when we go to bed.
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