重点
【话题分析】
本单元写作要求同学们能描述自己的饮食喜恶及习惯。
1. 能用含like的肯定句及否定句表达自己或他人对某种食物的喜恶;
2. 能用because (因为),so(因此)谈谈喜欢或不喜欢某种食物的理由;
3. 能用and或but连接短语或句子。
【写作思路】总—分—总法介绍自己(他人)饮食情况。
总:总体介绍自己(他人)的情况。
分:分别介绍一日三餐具体情况。
总:总体说明应吃健康的食物。
【典例】假如你是Tom,下表显示的是你三餐喜欢和不喜欢的食物,请以"My favorite food"为题写一篇不少于60词的短文。
like
dislike(不喜欢)
breakfast
hamburgers, eggs
milk
lunch
tomatoes, chicken
carrots
dinner
salad, bread
提示:
单词:like, healthy, want, vegetables, fruit
短语:for breakfast/lunch/dinner, be fat
句式:I like...for..., I don’t like...for lunch.
【佳作展示】
My favorite food
I’m Tom. I am very healthy. I like vegetables and fruit. For① breakfast I like hamburgers and eggs, but I don’t like milk. I like tomatoes and chicken for lunch, but② I don’t like carrots. And I like salad and bread for dinner. I also eat lots of vegetables and fruit. So I am healthy. I don’t want to be fat③. And I don’t eat ice-cream. I like eating healthy food.
【名师点评】
本文包含了"介绍自己饮食情况"作文的3点:
总体介绍自己的情况(1~3句);
分别介绍一日三餐(4~7句);
总体说明应吃健康的食物(8~11句)。
本文的添彩点:
①介词for表示"当作;作为"。
②连词but的使用使语句通顺流畅。
③want to be fat的运用恰到好处。
基础训练
书面表达。
(一)
Jane和Mike是你的朋友,他们有着不同的饮食习惯。请你根据表格中的提示内容,写一篇50词左右的短文,介绍他们的饮食情况。开头已给出,不计入总词数。
Name
Jane
Mike
Breakfast
bread, milk
eggs, two bananas
Lunch
vegetables, rice
hamburgers, chicken
Dinner
an apple and two oranges
bread and chicken (ice-cream after dinner)
Jane and Mike are my friends.They have different eating habits.______________________________________
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(二)
请以My Three Meals(餐)为题写一篇短文。
要求:语句通顺,40词左右。
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(三)
假如你叫Jim,你喜欢吃健康食品,有一个良好的饮食习惯。你不吃垃圾食品。请根据下面的表格提示写一篇短文,介绍一下你的饮食习惯。词数:50左右。
喜 爱
水果、蔬菜
早 餐
牛奶、鸡蛋和面包
午 餐
米饭和鸡肉
晚 餐
蔬菜、水果和米饭
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参考答案
书面表达。
(一)
Jane_and_Mike_are_my_friends. They_have_different_eating_habits. For breakfast, Jane likes bread and milk. Mike usually eats eggs and two bananas. For lunch, Jane has vegetables and rice. Mike eats hamburgers and chicken. Jane doesn’t want to be fat. So for dinner, she only eats fruit.She eats an apple and two oranges. Mike eats bread and chicken.After dinner he eats ice-cream.
(二)
I have a healthy eating habit.I like fruit and vegetables for my meals. For breakfast, I like eggs, milk and some bread. I have some chicken and rice for lunch. And for dinner, I don’t eat too much. I have an apple, an orange and two bananas. I like junk food, but I don’t eat it often.
(三)
Hello, everyone! I am a boy. My name is Jim. Do you want to know my eating habits? Let me tell you.① I like vegetables and fruit. I like milk, eggs and bread for breakfast. For lunch②, I eat rice and chicken. I have vegetables, fruit and rice for dinner. I don’t eat ice-cream or hamburgers. I don’t want to be fat. So I am very healthy③.
(3)总体说明(11~12句)。
本文的添彩点:
①过渡句衔接得好。
②for lunch提前,运用灵活。
③want,fat,so及healthy运用得恰到好处。