课件28张PPT。书面表达——遣词炼句(Writing-Diction of Words & Polishing of Sentences)Which child do you like better?Targets of the LessonRequirements from the
curriculum standards:
内容清楚,连贯
结构完整
逻辑性强
主题突出
用词及文体恰当
用词Targets of the Lesson
1. Learn different levels of words, expressions, and sentences.
2. Learn how to create a wonderful passage. WordsLevels(级别) of Words,
expressions and
sentencesbig large vastbig huge giganticbig great titanic Expressions decide to do choose to domake a decision to domake a choice to do SentencesI am writing to you. I want to tell you something interesting.I am writing to you, and I want to tell you something interesting.I am writing to tell you something interesting.Practice Makes Perfect! Practice!Arrange the words in a certain order according to their different levels(级别)(The first group is givenas an example): Small:tiny,fine, minute自主学习(Self-study 3?)Old aged elder elderlyGlad happy pleased delightedSad unhappy sorrowful depressedCheck with the classArrange the words in a certain order :Check with the classSum up:
The longer the word,
the ________ advanced it is.more Be adjusted to doing Be devoted to doing Be taken care of合作探讨(Cooperation 5?)写出下列短语更高级别的形式:Check with the class合作探讨(Cooperation 5?)Sum up:
The active voice is ____ advanced than the passive voice.写出下列短语更高级别的形式:Check with the classlessSentences In the class, it is theTang poetry that you will mainly learn , which reflects the traditional Chinese culture and is deeply loved by the Chinese. which reflectsis deeply loved by Levels of Sentencesit is theTang poetry thatSum up: The passive voice is _____________ than the active voice; the emphatic sentence is more ________ than the common sentence; and the big word is ____ advanced than the small.Check with the classmore advanced advancedmore 假定你是李华,正在教你的英国朋友Leslie学习汉语。请你写封邮件告知下次上课的计划。内容包括:1.时间和地点;2.内容:学习唐诗;3.课前准备:简要了解唐朝的历史。 注意:1.词数100左右; 2.可以适当增加细节,以使行文连贯。 书面表达(满分25分) The lesson will be given from 3 pm to 5 pm on the afternoon of next Tuesday in the classroom 502. In the class, you will mainly learn Tang poetry, which reflects the traditional Chinese culture and is deeply loved by the Chinese. You can feel the beauty of Chinese by learning Tang Poetry. You’d better make full preparations before class and have a brief understanding of the history of Tang Dynasty, which makes it easy for you to go through the class. If there is anything that I can help you, please don’t hesitate to tell me. You’d better make full preparations before class and have a brief understanding of the history of Tang Dynasty, which makes it easy for you to go through the class. If there is anything that I can help you, please don’t hesitate to tell me. You’d better make full preparations before class and have a brief understanding of the history of Tang Dynasty, which makes it easy for you to go through the class. If there is anything that I can help you, please don’t hesitate to tell me. The lesson will be given from 3 pm to 5 pm on the afternoon of next Tuesday in the classroom 502. In the class, you will mainly learn Tang poetry, which reflects traditional Chinese culture and is deeply loved by Chinese. You can feel the beauty of Chinese by learning Tang Poetry. You’d better make full preparations before class and have a brief understanding of the history of Tang Dynasty, which makes it easy for you to go through the class. If there is anything that I can help you, please don’t hesitate to tell me. The lesson will be given from 3 pm to 5 pm on the afternoon of next Tuesday in the classroom 502. In the class, you will mainly learn Tang poetry, which reflects traditional Chinese culture and is deeply loved by Chinese. You can feel the beauty of Chinese by learning Tang Poetry. Creation of a Wonderful Passage 假定你是李华,你所在的校乒乓球队正在招收新队员,请给你的留学生朋友Eric写封邮件邀请他加入,内容包括: 1. 球队活动; 2. 报名方式及截止日期。 注意: 1. 包括以上要点; 2. 不要逐字逐条翻译,可以适当增加细节; 3. 字数100左右。 全国高考英语书面表达评分标准 第五档(很好);(21-25分)Evaluation(评价)1. 所有任务2. 所有要点3. 语法结构和词汇5. 连接紧凑6. 达到预期4. 较复杂结构或较高级词汇(容错) 完善课堂内的书面表达,小组共同努力,打造一篇高质量的作业。小组长明确每位成员职责:单词拼写和词汇提升;语法时态和语态;句式提升;连贯和连接及卷面整洁。每组交一份,有每位组员的职责和签名,下节课为前三名优秀小组颁奖。HomeworkThanks for
your attendance!