Module 1 My life Unit 3 Trouble!（Writing） 课件（16张PPT）

课件16张PPT。WritingA diaryOctober 20th,2018, FineMy trip to Sheshan last month with my parents, was my most enjoyable trip ever.
The scenery of Sheshan was so charming and amazing that I couldn’t take my eyes off it. Fallen leaves covered the ground like a golden blanket. Falling leaves were like dancing butterflies, playing in the wind. After a long car ride, we reached a large farm. I was joyful, as this was my first time seeing a real cow! I tried to milk it, but the milk just wouldn’t come out. While my family laughed loudly, I tried to hide an embarrassed smile.
Our trip in Sheshan was unforgettable because we enjoyed the magic of nature and had great fun.firstpastLast monthSheshancharmingamazinga golden blanketfallinglarge farmmilkedFive elementsWhoexperienceWhenWhereWhatHowNow, think about your own experience of an outing, such as a school autumn outing and a family trip.My friends/ parents…Last month/On a cool autumn weekend/Last National Holiday…I went on an outing to Shanghai Film Studio/ Century Park/ Shanghai Disneyland Park…firstpastBody ‘What?’—activities and detailstake photosgo hikinghave a picnicrow a boatride on a roller coasterAppreciate beautiful sentences!The scenery of Sheshan was so charming and amazing that I couldn’t take my eyes off it.
1. ______________________________(so…that)2. _____________________(take one’s eyes off…)Make sentences by using the good words. Find some useful adjectives. Write down what you did during the outing.We had a picnic. We went to a man-made beach. Everyone jumped into water without hesitation. Examples:Body We went to a man-made beach. We went to a rope ladder and had a race.We took out our sausage sandwiches and drinks, and had a joyful picnic in the shade under a tree. We had a rope climbing race. Wind kissed our faces when we were finally on the top of the rope.adj.foodmore activitiesmore descriptionsavoid repetition1. We went hiking on a mountain.We ________________the woods.
It was ___________ but ___________.Think and add more details to the activities.More activitiesThink and add more details to the activities.More activities2. We went hiking on a mountain.When we finally reached the top of the mountain, wind ___________________. The sky was _________ and the air was ________. The view was really__________.Write down what you did during the outing.We took out our sausage sandwiches and drinks and had a joyful picnic in the shade under a tree. ______________, we went to a man-made beach. Everyone jumped into water without hesitation. _______________, we had a rope climbing race. Wind kissed our faces when we were finally on the top of the rope.Example:Body Coherence (连贯性)After the picnicIn the afternoonWe set out at dawn and got there at noon. Coherence The park was so huge that we had to take a small train to go around it. There were different kinds of trees and flowers everywhere. Thus, the air was quite fresh. ___________, happiness was in the air. We had some interesting activities on the grass when we had a picnic. ___________, several players tried their best to eat the biscuits from the faces, which was really full of fun. b. Thereforea. For examplec. What’s moreRead a part of an article, and choose the suitable phrase. Ending adjectives‘How?’—feelings and expectationsreasons_____________________________________________________________
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