Unit 9 What does he look like?
重点
【话题分析】
描写人物外貌
本单元的写作任务是写一篇描述某人外貌特征的短文。这要求同学们熟悉长相、身高、体形、发型、衣着打扮等方面的表述,注意使用描述性形容词,正确而具体地描写人物的外貌特征。
常用句型:
He’s really tall.
He isn’t tall or short.
He’s of medium height.
He has straight brown hair and he doesn’t wear glasses.
He usually wears jeans, a T-shirt and sports shoes.
【写作方法】
(一)写作过程一:标题的选择
▲Who (Please check who you want to describe选择你要描述的人)
1. My favorite teacher
2. My father/mother
3. My deskmate
4. My classmate
5. My best friend
6. My sister/brother/cousin
7. My pen friend
8. My favorite actor/actress …[
▲你的标题是
(二)写作过程二:外貌的描述
▲Looks (根据你要描述的人的实际情况,选择恰当的单词或短语)
1. hair: curly,straight,long,short,black,blonde
2. eyes: big/small
3. nose: big/small
4. mouth: big/small
5. face: round/long
6. height: tall/short/medium height
7. build: thin/heavy/medium build
▲请根据已选信息,正确添加“am,is,are,has,(don’t/doesn’t)have”等词,用完整的句子描述其外貌。
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(三)写作过程三:穿着打扮的描述
▲Clothes or glasses (根据你要描述的人的实际情况,选择恰当的单词或短语)[
1. clothes:a school uniform/a beautiful sweater/a T-shirt/jeans/sports shoes…
2. glasses:wear/not wear
▲请根据已选信息,正确添加 “wear,wears,don’t wear,doesn’t wear” 等,用完整的句子描述其穿着打扮。
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(四)写作过程四:对他或她的评价(What you think of him or her)
用恰当的形容词评价他或她。请用“handsome/beautiful/cool/funny/friendly”等形容词,正确添加“is,are,looks,look”等动词对他或她进行评价。
I think __________________________________________________________________________________
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(五)写作过程五:喜欢他或她的理由(Why you like him/her)
请用恰当的词将下面的句子补充完整,表达你喜欢他或她的理由。
I like him/her best because he/she is ________and he/she is good at ________.
【典例】
我们每个人都在爱的包围中成长。今天英语课上,你的英语老师也请你谈谈你喜欢的人。谈谈他或她的外貌、穿着、性格以及你喜欢他或她的理由。先完成表格,然后根据表格信息,以“My________”为题,写一篇80词左右的短文。
Who
Looks
hair______ eyes______ nose______ face______ mouth______ height______ build______
Clothes or glasses
What you think of him/her
Why you like him/her
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【佳作展示】
My Father
My favorite person is my father. Let me tell you what he looks like.
First of all,he has short black hair. He has two big eyes and a big nose. He has a round face and a small mouth. He is of medium build and height. He wears glasses and sometimes he wears sunglasses. So he looks cool. Many people like his looks. I like him because he is kind and often helps me. He is also good at cooking. I like the food that he cooks. He is really great.
基础训练
一、以读促写。
请用括号中所给单词的适当形式填空,并从方框中选择适当的连接词,完成篇章。
first of all,but,because,and
My favorite teacher is Miss Chen. Let me tell you what she ________ (look) like. ________,she ________(have) long curly black hair. It is beautiful. She________(have) two big eyes, a small nose, a small mouth ________a long face. She is of medium build ________ she is very tall. She usually ________(wear) jeans, ________ sometimes she________(wear) dresses. She ________(not wear) glasses. She is really friendly. She also looks very beautiful. I like her ________ she is fun, ________ she is good at playing music. She often sings for us.
▲请你用“first of all,but,because,so,and”等词连成篇章,将你所要描述的人的外貌、穿着、性格、你为什么喜欢他或她等信息流畅地表达出来。
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二、篇章训练。
根据下面的提示,写一篇60词左右的短文,向大家介绍你最好的朋友,要写出他/她的外貌特征及爱好等情况。
提示词:straight, brown, hair, medium, height, glasses
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参考答案
一、以读促写。
looks;First of all;has;has;and;but;wears;but;wears;doesn’t wear;because;and
二、篇章训练。
I want to introduce my best friend Li Lei to you. He's the captain of the school basketball team. He_has_short_straight_brown_hair②.
He_is_of_medium_height③. He is good at playing basketball. He often wears a pair of glasses. But his glasses are different from others'. Because his glasses are funny. I think he_is_handsome①. Do you think so?
【点评】
本文运用“三步法”描述人物外貌。首先,开篇点题—想介绍自己的朋友;其次,对自己的朋友进行了详细的描述;最后,表达了自己的感受。[
添彩点:文中用到了描述人的外貌的三种句式: