人教版英语初中八年级下册Unit 9 Have you ever been to a museum? Writing知识讲解+巩固练习（含答案，补习资料）

Unit 9 Have you ever been to a museum?
课时4 Writing
写作目标
本单元的协作任务是一篇关于旅游或介绍旅游景点的短文，可以介绍自己游览过的一个地方，也可以介绍自己的家乡，或者介绍一处名胜古迹。写作时，开头可点出要介绍的地方，中间具体介绍好玩的景点，结尾要写出自己的感受。时态可以用一般现在时、一般过去时或现在完成时。
写作指导
1. 描写某地的景色或景观时，一般要遵循的原则是：从总体到局部，从外到内。
2. 这类文章一般包括三段：开头是总体介绍，引出主题；中间是正文，具体介绍此地的特色，如著名的建筑、风景名胜等；第三部分是结尾。
3. 描写某地的短文属于说明文体，要弄清时间的立足点是＂过去＂、＂现在＂，还是＂将来＂。
4. 表达方式要有所变化，景物描写用词容易重复、单调，因此写作时应选用不同的句式和表达方式来描述事物，使表达方式多样化。
“四步法”介绍某地的文章：
◆第一步：先整体介绍某地。包括位置、人口及环境等。
◆第二步：写可以做的事情及可以参观的地方。
◆ 第三步：写出可以吃的食物。
◆ 第四步：最后写出气候条件及祝福语。
常用句型
1. 位置（location）
be located/situated in/on/at/to; lie in/on/at/to
in the center of; in/to/on the east of
2. 面积(area)
cover/have an area of…; with an area of …
It is …long/wide (from east to west).
3. 气候(climate)
The climate varies/is different from place to place
neither too hot nor too cold
4. 交通(transportation)
It is very convenient for…
The best /nearest way to … is…
It takes…to take a taxi/bus/walk from … to …
5. 人口(population)
have/with a (large) population (of…)
The population of…is…
…percent of the population are…
6. 历史(history)
have/with a history of…years
date from/ date back to
7. 资源(resources)
be rich/wealthy in; with abundant resources
be famous/well-known for/as…
mainly produce…
The main agricultural products are…
8. 景色(scenery)
is known as/ is famous for/is home to
places of interest
scenic spots
7. 特色(character)
The place is famous for…
The special character of the place is…
Something special in the place is…
（一）
海南岛是中国的第二大岛。它环境非常优美，每年都有很多游客到此来旅游。
根据下面的信息，写一篇短文。
要求：90词左右。
Hainan Island
the second largest island in China, beautiful，the temperature is almost the same all year round
Population
more than 9 million
Things you can do
scubadiving (潜水)，fishing, swimming, surfing and boating
Places you can visit
Tianya Haijiao, Nanwan Monkey Island
Food
Rice in Bamboo, Hainan powder
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【佳作展示】
Hainan Island—A place you will never forget!
Hainan Island is the second largest island in China. The population is more than 9 million. It's a beautiful place to take a holiday.
There are many things you can do, such as scuba-diving (潜水), fishing, swimming, surfing and boating. You can also visit Tianya Haijiao and Nanwan Monkey Island.
Have you ever tried Hainan food？In Hainan you should also try a lot of delicious food like Rice in Bamboo, Hainan powder,etc.
The temperature in Hainan is almost the same all year round. If you go there, I'm sure you will enjoy yourself.
【名师点评】
◆本文第一段先介绍海南岛的整体情况。然后介绍在海南可做的事情及可参观的地方。第三段描写在海南岛你可以品尝的食物。最后写海南岛的气候及祝福语。整体内容紧凑，语句连贯。
◆本文添彩点：
①文章很有条理，通过四步法，使文章显得更紧凑。
②恰当运用了本单元所学的句型Have you ever tried... food？及短语all year round，足以见得作者深厚的写
作功底。
（二）
请结合自己的经历，描述你去过的最有趣的一所公园（游乐场）。
要点提示：
1. 公园的名称、地理位置和基本设施；
2. 介绍公园的特色或最吸引你的地方；
3. 邀请大家多到这个地方玩。
作文要求：
1. 不能照抄原文，不得出现真实的人名和学校名字。
2. 语句连贯，词数80左右。
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【写作指导】
一、写什么——细审题，列要点
1. 介绍公园的名称、地理位置和基本设施。
2. 描述公园的特色。
3. 邀请大家到此游玩。
二、怎么写——遣词句，重结构
第一部分：开门见山 （介绍公园的位置和基本设施。用一般现在时。）
我去过的最有趣的公园是长隆海洋王国。
The most interesting park I have been to is _____________.
它坐落在珠海的横琴岛上。
It lies in _________________________________________.
公园里有各种各样的动物和表演。
There are _____________________________________.
我们还可以找到购物中心、餐厅和酒店。
We can also find _______________________________.
（根据实际情况描述，挑有代表的性的建筑来讲。）
第二部分：突出特色（描述具体的特色，以公园的常规活动为例时，动词用一般现在时。）
海洋王国最吸引我的是大游行。
The most attractive thing of the park is ________.
大游行每天三次。
We can see the cruise ___________________.
游行开始时，游客站在路的两旁。
When it begins, visitors will stand on _________.
游行人员沿路又唱又跳，还会和游客玩游戏。
The people _________, they also _______ with the visitors.
这让游客们很高兴。
It makes the visitors ______________________.
第三部分：邀请出游（提建议时可以选用各种提建议的句型。）
快到海洋王国玩一玩吧！
So, __________ to Chimelong and ____________________.
【佳作展示】
The Most Interesting Park I Have Been to
The most interesting park that I have ever been to is the Chimelong Ocean Kingdom. It lies in Hengqin island in Zhuhai, Guangdong Province. There are many animals and shows in the park. We can find public toilets, shopping centers, restaurants and hotels inside.
The most attractive thing of the park to me is the cruise. We can see the cruise three times in the park. every day When it begins, visitors will stand on both sides of the road. The people in the cruise dance and sing along the way. They also play games with visitors when they walk. It makes the visitors happy.
So, come to Chime long! Have fun in the Ocean Kingdom!
(一)
你到过什么地方？你对它有什么深刻的印象？请用英语写一篇短文来介绍你游历过的城市或风景点。80词左右。
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（二）
假设英语课上将以“家乡的名胜”为话题展开讨论，请你根据下面表格中的信息，用英语写一篇发言稿，介绍中国十大历史文化名街之一的福州坊十巷。
要求：
1．内容完整，意思连贯，语句通顺，书写规范；
2．请不要逐字翻译；词数90左右，不包含已给出的句子的词数。
参考词汇：便利的convenient 明清风格the style of the Ming and Qing Dynasty
故居former home 民俗folk custom 传承pass on特产special local product
Three Lanes and Seven Alleys in Fuzhou is among the top ten historical and cultural streets of China．_____
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参考答案
（一）
【思路点拨】
这是一篇要你介绍你游历过的城市或风景点的文章。动笔前先要认真阅读要点，围绕要点组织材料，然后用正确的英语句子把这些内容表达出来，在此基础上亦可适当发挥，注意不要遗漏材料中给出的要点。根据材料可知本文主要是应用第一人称，一般过去时态和一般现在时态，注意标点符号及大小写等问题，不要犯语法错误。注意上下文之间的逻辑关系，语意连贯。
【参考范文】
Have you ever been to Wuhan? I went there several times. I think it' s really a beautiful city. I fell in love with it when I first traveled there. It has many nice places. The traffic is fine, and the people are friendly. There are some beautiful parks such as the Zhongshan Park, the East Lake Park and the Liberation Park. In the zoo, you can see many kinds of animals. You can easily buy what you want, because there are supermarkets everywhere. You can see tall buildings up and down the streets. And the streets are wide and tidy. Trees can be seen everywhere. Buses and taxis can take you where you want to go. The drivers are polite. You will feel comfortable. There is an airport in Wuhan. You can fly to the foreign countries and take air trips freely. Please travel to Wuhan. I would like to be your tour guide.
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【思路点拨】
这是一篇给材料作文，本文已经给出了主要写作要点，动笔前要先认真阅读要点，然后围绕要点适当发挥。写作中，应注意描述的全面性，尽量将提示的内容利用上；结合材料内容，可知本文主要用第三人称，一般现在时态进行叙述，注意主谓一致问题。注意语言的表述应该符合语法的结构，造句应该符合英语的表达习惯。适当使用连词，做到上下文联系紧密，符合逻辑关系。
【参考范文】
Three Lanes and Seven Alleys in Fuzhou is among the top ten historical and cultural streets of China. It lies in the city center and the traffic is convenient. It is famous for old buildings in the style of the Ming and Qing Dynasty. Many famous people in history used to live here. The former homes are well protected and attract lots of people from home and abroad. There're wonderful folk custom shows that pass on the culture of Fuzhou. Besides, the tourists can enjoy different kinds of delicious foods and special local products. I'm proud of this great place of interest in my hometown. It is well worth visiting.
【亮点说明】
这篇短文包含了所有要点，能围绕内容要点适当发挥，内容具体、丰富。应用了较丰富的语言结构和词汇，用词准确、句子通顺、行文连贯、表达清楚，具有较强的语言运用能力。层次清晰，语言地道，主题鲜明，内容翔实，格式正确，结构紧凑。使用了一些比较好的字句。比如：be famous for以……文明；used to 过去常常做某事；from home and abroad来自国内外的；be proud of为……感到骄傲；be worth doing值得做某事等。学习中注意总结,牢记一些固定句式及短语，写作时就可以适当引用，让文章更出彩。