专题八 短文改错
挖命题
【考情探究】
卷名
体裁
题材
考点
动词
名词、
数词
连词
形容词
副词
代词
冠词
介词
2018
课标
全国Ⅰ
记叙文
家庭生活
2
1
1
2
2
0
1
1
2017
记叙文
社会生活
2
2
1
1
2
1
1
1
2016
记叙文
个人生活
2
1
2
0
2
1
1
1
2015
记叙文
个人生活
3
1
1
2
0
1
2
1
2014
记叙文
个人生活
1
1
1
2
2
1
1
1
合计
10
6
6
7
8
4
6
5
2018
课标
全国Ⅱ
记叙文
家庭生活
4
2
1
0
0
1
1
1
2017
记叙文
个人生活
3
2
0
1
2
2
1
0
2016
记叙文
个人生活
4
1
1
0
0
3
1
0
2015
记叙文
个人生活
3
1
1
0
2
2
1
1
2014
记叙文
学校生活
4
1
0
2
0
1
1
1
合计
18
7
3
3
4
9
5
3
2018
课标
全国Ⅲ
记叙文
学校生活
4
1
2
1
1
1
1
0
2017
记叙文
个人生活
3
0
1
2
0
3
1
1
2016
记叙文
个人生活
2
1
0
2
1
2
1
1
合计
9
2
3
5
2
6
3
2
分析解读 高考英语短文改错涉及词汇、语法、句型结构等方面的知识和逻辑情理的推断和综合辨析,是一种在较高层次上考查考生对英语知识的掌握和语言综合运用能力的测试题型。五年高考课标全国卷短文改错的体裁以记叙文为主,题材以考生所熟悉的个人生活、学校生活为主。错误处均为考生平时写作中常出现的错误。试题大多是加词1个,删词1个,改正8个。
1.五年高考课标全国卷短文改错对动词的考查占相当大比例,其中包括:①时态、语态的错用;②过去分词与过去式的混用;③一般现在时主语为第三人称单数,谓语动词需加“-s”的用法;④情态动词后需加动词原形而非过去式;⑤虚拟语气的考查主要集中在表示“命令、建议、请求、要求”的动词后面宾语从句谓语动词要用“should+动词原形”,且should可以省略;⑥非谓语动词作宾语、状语,且在考查非谓语动词作宾语时主要考查介词后需用动名词作宾语。
2.对名词、代词的考查也是五年高考课标全国卷短文改错的重点之一。其中包括:①名词单、复数的混用;②名词所有格的错用;③名词构词法;④不按照上下文逻辑导致人称代词、物主代词的误用;⑤不按照语法规则导致主格、宾格、所有格的误用;⑥反身代词的滥用;⑦易混代词的误用,如:both与all;another与other等。
3.对形容词、副词的考查是五年高考课标全国卷短文改错的重点之一。其中包括:①形容词、副词的混用;②形容词、副词比较等级用法的误用;③易混形容词、副词的误用,如:many与much,ago与before,somewhere与everywhere等;④形容词、副词构词法。
4.冠词也是五年高考课标全国卷短文改错的必考内容,其中包括:①冠词的基本用法;②冠词的习惯用法。
5.连词、介词是五年高考课标全国卷短文改错的难点,其中包括:①for, in, with, by, on, of等常用介词的用法;②并列连词and, but, or, so的用法;③名词性从句、定语从句中的引导词;④引导状语从句的从属连词与并列连词的混用。
6.未来高考课标全国卷短文改错仍会以实词为主、虚词为辅,句子结构可能会由以简单句为主逐渐过渡到以复合句为主。
【真题典例】
/
/
During my last winter holiday, I went to ①∧the countryside with my father to visit my grandparents. I ②
find
found
a big change there. The first time I went there, they were living in a small house with dogs, ducks, and ③
another
other
animals. Last winter when I went④
here
there
again, they had a big separate house to raise dozens of⑤
chicken
chickens
. They also had a small pond ⑥∧in
which
where
they raised fish. My grandpa said last summer they earned quite a lot by⑦
sell
selling
the fish. I felt ⑧
happily
happy
that their life had improved. At the end of our trip, I told my father that I planned to return⑨ for every two years, ⑩
but
and
he agreed.
/作为记叙文,作者在第二句中首先提出本文主题:I found a big change there。接下来作者按时间顺序分别介绍了两次回乡下的所见,以支撑主题句。
/the+序数词+time表面上看是名词短语,但该短语起连词作用,引导时间状语从句
/
/
①考查定冠词。 句意:在去年寒假,我和爸爸去乡下看望爷爷奶奶。countryside与定冠词连用为习惯用法。
②考查动词时态。 根据第一句话的时间状语During my last winter holiday可知,第二句也应该用一般过去时。
③考查限定词。 句中animals是复数形式,所以修饰该名词的限定词应该用other(其他的)。而原文中的 another(又一;另一)后接名词单数。
④考查副词。 根据上文的the countryside,可知错误处表示there(那里),而非原文中的here(这里)。
⑤考查名词。dozens of(几打;几十个)用来修饰名词复数形式 chickens。 chicken作可数名词时,意为“小鸡”。
⑥考查定语从句。 先行词为a small pond,代入定语从句后可知先行词与介词in一起作地点状语,故将which前加in或将which改为where。
⑦考查非谓语动词。 句意:我爷爷说去年夏天通过卖鱼他们挣了很多钱。 介词(by)后需用动名词而非动词原形作宾语。
⑧考查形容词。 本句中的felt为系动词,后面要用形容词作表语,故将副词happily改为形容词happy。
⑨考查固定短语。every two years本身是固定短语,不用加介词。
⑩考查连词。 根据句意可知,作者计划每两年回乡下一次,“并且”父亲同意了,应该是顺承而不是转折关系,原词混淆了上下文的逻辑关系。
解题原则:1.规范性原则:按照规定的符号改错
2.四不改原则:词序不改;大小写不改;标点符号不改;单词拼写不改
3.五改动原则:忠实原文;一对一原则;改动最少原则;实词以改变形式为主;虚词以添加或删除为主
4.六个一致:语义一致;主谓一致;时态、语态一致;代词指代一致;名词单复数一致;平行结构中的一致
过专题
【五年高考】
Correction 1(2018课标全国Ⅱ)
When I was little, Friday’s night was our family game night. After supper, we would play card games of all sort in the sitting room. As the kid, I loved to watch cartoons, but no matter how many times I asked to watching them, my parents would not to let me. They would say to us that playing card games would help my brain. Still I unwilling to play the games for them sometimes. I didn’t realize how right my parents are until I entered high school. The games my parents taught me where I was a child turned out to be very useful later in my life.
答案
When I was little, ①
Friday’s
Friday
night was our family game night. After supper, we would play card games of all ②
sort
sorts
in the sitting room. As ③
the
a
kid, I loved to watch cartoons, but no matter how many times I asked to ④
watching
watch
them, my parents would not ⑤ to let me. They would say to ⑥
us
me
that playing card games would help my brain. Still I ⑦∧was unwilling to play the games ⑧
for
with
them sometimes. I didn’t realize how right my parents ⑨
are
were
until I entered high school. The games my parents taught me ⑩
where
when
I was a child turned out to be very useful later in my life.
Correction 2(2018课标全国Ⅲ)
It was Monday morning, and the writing class had just begin. Everyone was silent, wait to see who would be called upon to read his and her paragraph aloud. Some of us were confident and eager take part in the class activity; others were nervous and anxious. I had done myself homework, but I was shy. I was afraid that to speak in front of a larger group of people. At that moment, I remembered that my father once said, “The classroom is a place for learning and that include learning from textbooks, and mistake as well.”Immediate, I raised my hand.
答案
It was Monday morning, and the writing class had just①
begin
begun
. Everyone was silent, ②
wait
waiting
to see who would be called upon to read his ③
and
or
her paragraph aloud. Some of us were confident and eager ④∧to take part in the class activity; others were nervous and anxious. I had done ⑤
myself
my/the
homework, but I was shy. I was afraid ⑥ that to speak in front of a ⑦
larger
large
group of people. At that moment, I remembered that my father once said, “The classroom is a place for learning and that ⑧
include
includes
learning from textbooks, and ⑨
mistake
mistakes
as well.” ⑩
Immediate
Immediately
, I raised my hand.
Correction 3(2017课标全国Ⅰ)
In the summer holiday following my eighteen birthday, I took driving lessons. I still remember how hard first day was. Before getting into the car, I thought I had learned the instructor’s orders, so once I started the car, my mind goes blank. I forgot what he had said to me altogether. The instructor kept repeating the word,“Speed up!”“Slow down!”“Turning left!”I was so much nervous that I could hardly tell which direction was left. A few minutes late, the instructor asked me to stop the car. It was a relief and I came to a suddenly stop just in the middle on the road.
答案
In the summer holiday following my ①
eighteen
eighteenth
birthday, I took driving lessons. I still remember how hard ②∧the/my first day was. Before getting into the car, I thought I had learned the instructor’s orders, ③
so
but/yet
once I started the car, my mind ④
goes
went
blank. I forgot what he had said to me altogether. The instructor kept repeating the ⑤
word
words
,“Speed up!”“Slow down!”“⑥
Turning
Turn
left!”I was so ⑦ much nervous that I could hardly tell which direction was left. A few minutes ⑧
late
later
, the instructor asked me to stop the car. It was a relief and I came to a ⑨
suddenly
sudden
stop just in the middle ⑩
on
of
the road.
Correction 4(2017课标全国Ⅱ)
Mr. and Mrs. Zhang all work in our school. They live far from the school, and it takes them about a hour and a half to go to work every day. In their spare time, they are interesting in planting vegetables in their garden, that is on the rooftop of their house. They often get up earlier and water the vegetables together. They have also bought for some gardening tools. Beside, they often get some useful informations from the Internet. When summer came, they will invite their students pick the fresh vegetables!
答案
Mr. and Mrs. Zhang ①
all
both
/ all work in our school. They live far from the school, and it takes them about ②
a
an/one
hour and a half to go to work every day. In their spare time, they are ③
interesting
interested
in planting vegetables in their garden, ④
that
which
is on the rooftop of their house. They often get up ⑤
earlier
early
and water the vegetables together. They have also bought ⑥ for some gardening tools. ⑦
Beside
Besides
, they often get some useful ⑧
informations
information
from the Internet. When summer ⑨
came
comes
, they will invite their students ⑩∧to pick the fresh vegetables!
Correction 5(2017课标全国Ⅲ)
When I look at this picture of myself, I realize of how fast time flies. I had grown not only physically, and also mentally in the past few years. About one month after this photo was took, I entered my second year of high school and become a new member of the school music club. Around me in picture are the things they were very important in my life at that time: car magazines and musical instruments. I enjoyed studying difference kinds of cars and planes, playing pop music, and collecting the late music albums. This picture often brings back to me many happy memories of your high school days.
答案
When I look at this picture of myself, I realize ① of how fast time flies. I ②
had
have
grown not only physically, ③
and
but
also mentally in the past few years. About one month after this photo was ④
took
taken
, I entered my second year of high school and ⑤
become
became
a new member of the school music club. Around me in ⑥∧the/this picture are the things ⑦
they
that/which
were very important in my life at that time:car magazines and musical instruments. I enjoyed studying ⑧
difference
different
kinds of cars and planes, playing pop music, and collecting the ⑨
late
latest
music albums. This picture often brings back to me many happy memories of ⑩
your
my
high school days.
Correction 6(2016课标全国Ⅰ)
My uncle is the owner of a restaurant close to that I live. Though not very big, but the restaurant is popular in our area. It is always crowded with customers at meal times. Some people even had to wait outside. My uncle tells me that the key to his success is honest. Every day he makes sure that fresh vegetables or high quality oil are using for cooking. My uncle says that he never dreams becoming rich in the short period of time. Instead, he hopes that our business will grow steady.
答案
My uncle is the owner of a restaurant close to ①
that
where
I live. Though not very big, ② but the restaurant is popular in our area. It is always crowded with customers at meal times. Some people even ③
had
have
to wait outside. My uncle tells me that the key to his success is ④
honest
honesty
. Every day he makes sure that fresh vegetables ⑤
or
and
high quality oil are ⑥
using
used
for cooking. My uncle says that he never dreams ⑦∧of becoming rich in ⑧
the
a
short period of time. Instead, he hopes that ⑨
our
his
business will grow ⑩
steady
steadily
.
Correction 7(2016课标全国Ⅱ)
The summer holiday is coming. My classmates and I are talking about how to do during the holiday. We can chose between staying at home and take a trip. If we stay at home, it is comfortable but there is no need to spend money. But in that case, we will learn little about world. If we go on a trip abroad, we can broaden your view and gain knowledges we cannot get from books. Some classmates suggest we can go to places of interest nearby. I thought that it is a good idea. It does not cost many, yet we can still learn a lot.
答案
The summer holiday is coming. My classmates and I are talking about ①
how
what
to do during the holiday. We can ②
chose
choose
between staying at home and ③
take
taking
a trip. If we stay at home, it is comfortable ④
but
and
there is no need to spend money. But in that case, we will learn little about ⑤∧the world. If we go on a trip abroad, we can broaden ⑥
your
our
view and gain ⑦
knowledges
knowledge
we cannot get from books. Some classmates suggest we ⑧
can
should
/can
go to places of interest nearby. I ⑨
thought
think
that it is a good idea. It does not cost ⑩
many
much
, yet we can still learn a lot.
Correction 8(2016课标全国Ⅲ)
The teenage year from 13 to 19 were the most difficult time for me. They were also the best and worse years in my life. At the first, I thought I knew everything and could make decisions by yourself. However, my parents didn’t seem to think such. They always tell me what to do and how to do it. At one time, I even felt my parents couldn’t understand me so I hoped I could be freely from them. I showed them I was independent by wear strange clothes. Now I am leaving home to college. At last, I will be on my own, but I still want to have my parents to turn to whenever need help.
答案
The teenage ①
year
years
from 13 to 19 were the most difficult time for me. They were also the best and ②
worse
worst
years in my life. At ③ the first, I thought I knew everything and could make decisions by ④
yourself
myself
. However, my parents didn’t seem to think ⑤
such
so
. They always ⑥
tell
told
me what to do and how to do it. At one time, I even felt my parents couldn’t understand me so I hoped I could be ⑦
freely
free
from them. I showed them I was independent by ⑧
wear
wearing
strange clothes. Now I am leaving home ⑨
to
for
college. At last, I will be on my own, but I still want to have my parents to turn to whenever⑩∧I need help.
Correction 9(2015课标全国Ⅰ)
When I was a child, I hoped to live in the city. I think I would be happy there. Now I am living in a city, but I miss my home in countryside. There the air is clean or the mountains are green. Unfortunately, on the development of industrialization, the environment has been polluted. Lots of studies have been shown that global warming has already become a very seriously problem. The airs we breathe in is getting dirtier and dirtier. Much rare animals are dying out. We must found ways to protect your environment. If we fail to do so, we’ll live to regret it.
答案
When I was a child, I hoped to live in the city. I ①
think
thought
I would be happy there. Now I am living in a city, but I miss my home in ②∧the countryside. There the air is clean ③
or
and
the mountains are green. Unfortunately, ④
on
with
the development of industrialization, the environment has been polluted. Lots of studies have⑤ been
shown that global warming has already become a very ⑥
seriously
serious
problem. The ⑦
airs
air
we breathe in is getting dirtier and dirtier. ⑧
Much
Many
rare animals are dying out. We must ⑨
found
find
ways to protect ⑩
your
our/the
environment. If we fail to do so, we’ll live to regret it.
Correction 10(2015课标全国Ⅱ)
One day, little Tony went to a shopping center with his parent. It was very crowded. Tony saw a toy on a shop window. He liked it so very much that he quickly walked into the shop. After looks at the toy for some time, he turned around and found where his parents were missing. Tony was scared and begun to cry. A woman saw him crying and telling him to wait outside a shop. Five minutes later, Tony saw parents. Mom said, “How nice to see you again! Dad and I were terrible worried.”Tony promised her that this would never happen again.
答案
One day, little Tony went to a shopping center with his ①
parent
parents
.It was very crowded. Tony saw a toy ②
on
in
a shop window. He liked it so ③ very much that he quickly walked into the shop. After ④
looks
looking
at the toy for some time, he turned around and found ⑤
where
that
/where his parents were missing. Tony was scared and ⑥
begun
began
to cry. A woman saw him crying and ⑦
telling
told
him to wait outside ⑧
a
the
shop. Five minutes later, Tony saw ⑨∧his parents. Mom said, “How nice to see you again! Dad and I were ⑩
terrible
terribly
worried.” Tony promised her that this would never happen again.
Correction 11(2014课标全国Ⅰ)
Nearly five years before, and with the help by our father, my sister and I planted some cherry tomatoes(圣女果)in our back garden. Since then—for all these year—we had been allowing tomatoes to self-seed where they please. As result, the plants are growing somewhere. The fruits are small in size, but juicy and taste. There are so much that we often share them with our neighbors. Although we allow tomato plants to grow in the same place year after year, but we have never had any disease or insect attack problems. We are growing wonderfully tomatoes at no cost!
答案
Nearly five years ①
before
ago
,and with the help ②
by
of
our father, my sister and I planted some cherry tomatoes(圣女果)in our back garden. Since then—for all these ③
year
years
—we④
had
have
been allowing tomatoes to self-seed where they please. As ⑤∧a result, the plants are growing ⑥
somewhere
everywhere
.The fruits are small in size, but juicy and ⑦
taste
tasty
.There are so ⑧
much
many
that we often share them with our neighbors. Although we allow tomato plants to grow in the same place year after year,⑨ but /
but
yet
we have never had any disease or insect attack problems. We are growing ⑩
wonderfully
wonderful
tomatoes at no cost!
Correction 12(2014课标全国Ⅱ)
My dream school starts at 8:30 a.m. and ends at 3:30 p.m. They are three lessons in the morning and two in the afternoon. We didn’t need to do so many homework. Therefore, we have more time with after-school activities. For example, we can do reading for one and a half hour and play sports for one hour every day.
My dream school look like a big garden. There are all kinds of the flowers and trees around the classroom buildings. We can lie on the grass for a rest, or sat by the lake listening music. The teachers here are kind and helpfully. They are not only our teachers but also our friends.
答案
My dream school starts at 8:30 a.m. and ends at 3:30 p.m.①
They
There
are three lessons in the morning and two in the afternoon. We ②
didn’t
don’t
need to do so ③
many
much
homework. Therefore, we have more time ④
with
for
after-school activities. For example, we can do reading for one and a half ⑤
hour
hours
and play sports for one hour every day.
My dream school ⑥
look
looks
like a big garden. There are all kinds of ⑦ the flowers and trees around the classroom buildings. We can lie on the grass for a rest, or ⑧
sat
sit
by the lake listening ⑨∧to music. The teachers here are kind and⑩
helpfully
helpful
.They are not only our teachers but also our friends.
Correction 13(2016四川)
It is Mother’s Day today. Though it’s a western festival, it’s popular in China now.
Mom has a full-time job, so she has to do most of the houseworks. She is a great mother. Both Dad or I planned to do something on Mother’s Day. We get up early in the morning. Dad cleaned the house, and then went on shopping. When he came back, I found a bunch of flowers in her hand. I asked Mom to stay in the sitting room and I cooked in kitchen. The dishes what I cooked were Mom’s favoritest. At dinner, we said to her, “Happy Mother’s Day!” Mom was grateful and moving.
答案
It is Mother’s Day today. Though it’s a western festival, it’s popular in China now.
Mom has a full-time job, ①
so
but
she has to do most of the ②
houseworks
housework
. She is a great mother. Both Dad ③
or
and
I planned to do something on Mother’s Day. We ④
get
got
up early in the morning. Dad cleaned the house, and then went ⑤ on shopping. When he came back, I found a bunch of flowers in ⑥
her
his
hand. I asked Mom to stay in the sitting room and I cooked in⑦∧the kitchen. The dishes ⑧
what
that/which
/what I cooked were Mom’s ⑨
favoritest
favorite
. At dinner, we said to her, “Happy Mother’s Day!” Mom was grateful and ⑩
moving
moved
.
Correction 14(2016浙江)
When I was a very young children, my father created a regular practice I remember well years late. Every time he arrived home at end of the day, we’d greet her at the door. He would ask who we was and pretend not to knowing us. Then he and my mother would have had a drink while she prepared dinner and they would talk about his day and hers. While they chat, my father would lift my sister and me up to sit in the top of the fridge. It was both excited and frightening to be up there! My sister and I thought he was so cool for putting us there.
答案
When I was a very young ①
children
child
, my father created a regular practice I remember well years ②
late
later
. Every time he arrived home at ③∧the end of the day, we’d greet ④
her
him
at the door. He would ask who we ⑤
was
were
and pretend not to ⑥
knowing
know
us. Then he and my mother would have ⑦ had a drink while she prepared dinner and they would talk about his day and hers. While they ⑧
chat
chatted
, my father would lift my sister and me up to sit ⑨
in
on
the top of the fridge. It was both ⑩
excited
exciting
and frightening to be up there! My sister and I thought he was so cool for putting us there.
Correction 15(2015浙江)
My old classroom was interesting because three side of the classroom were made from glass. I enjoyed sit close to the windows and looking at the view. On the left-hand side of the class, I could easy see the football field. In the mornings, it was full of students exercising. The view from the back of the classroom is also splendid. Close to the school there was a beautiful park with many trees around them. Farther in the distance, I could not enjoy the view of snowy mountains. On the right side of the class was the road. I was always interested to see the drivers in hurry in the morning. The position of the classroom with its view made me felt like I was dreaming. If I was only a child when I studied in that classroom, I will never forget it.
答案
My old classroom was interesting because three ①
side
sides
of the classroom were made ②
from
of
glass. I enjoyed ③
sit
sitting
close to the windows and looking at the view. On the left-hand side of the class, I could ④
easy
easily
see the football field. In the mornings, it was full of students exercising. The view from the back of the classroom ⑤
is
was
also splendid. Close to the school there was a beautiful park with many trees around ⑥
them
it
.Farther in the distance, I could⑦ not enjoy the view of snowy mountains. On the right side of the class was the road. I was always interested to see the drivers in ⑧∧a hurry in the morning. The position of the classroom with its view made me ⑨
felt
feel
like I was dreaming.⑩
If
Although/Though
I was only a child when I studied in that classroom, I will never forget it.
Correction 16(2015陕西)
My soccer coach retired in last week. I wanted to do anything special for him at his retirement party. My mum makes the better biscuits in the world, so I decide to ask her for help. Mum taught me some basic step of baking. I insisted on doing most of the baking myself. I thought the biscuits were really well. My only mistake was that I dropped some on the floor after I was packing them up.
At a party, my coach, with a biscuit in his mouth, asked surprisingly who made them and joked, “I might have to retire again next year just get some more of these biscuits.”
My favorite picture at the party is of my coach and me enjoy the biscuits with happy laughter!
答案
My soccer coach retired ① in last week. I wanted to do ②
anything
something
special for him at his retirement party. My mum makes the ③
better
best
biscuits in the world, so I ④
decide
decided
to ask her for help. Mum taught me some basic ⑤
step
steps
of baking. I insisted on doing most of the baking myself. I thought the biscuits were really ⑥
well
good
.My only mistake was that I dropped some on the floor ⑦
after
when/while
I was packing them up.
At ⑧
a
the
party, my coach, with a biscuit in his mouth, asked surprisingly who made them and joked, “I might have to retire again next year just ⑨∧to get some more of these biscuits.”
My favorite picture at the party is of my coach and me ⑩
enjoy
enjoying
the biscuits with happy laughter!
Correction 17(2015四川)
Hi,Janice,
It’s been a month since I came to this new school and I really want share with you some of the problems I have been experiencing.
As I tell you last time, I made three new friend here. We hang out together during lunch and after school. We’ve been spending a lot of time sing in karaoke bars. It’s been three Saturdays now and it really costs me many. And I started to see this as a time-wasting activity! In fact, I don’t like to go anymore, so I’m afraid I’ll lose their friendship. How do you think I should do? If you are me, would you talk to him?
Please help with me and give me some advice.
Grace
答案
Hi,Janice,
It’s been a month since I came to this new school and I really want ①∧to share with you some of the problems I have been experiencing.
As I ②
tell
told
you last time, I made three new ③
friend
friends
here. We hang out together during lunch and after school. We’ve been spending a lot of time ④
sing
singing
in karaoke bars. It’s been three Saturdays now and it really costs me ⑤
many
much
. And I started to see this as a time-wasting activity! In fact, I don’t like to go anymore, ⑥
so
but
I’m afraid I’ll lose their friendship.⑦
How
What
do you think I should do? If you ⑧
are
were
me, would you talk to ⑨
him
them
?
Please help ⑩ with me and give me some advice.
Grace
Correction 18(2014浙江)
I was taking a train to London’s Victoria Station. I had noticed that the carriage was noise and filled with people.
Before long, a train inspector comes to check our tickets. A passenger realized he couldn’t find his ticket but became quite upset. Then everyone in the carriage began searching the ticket, which was eventually found under a seat several rows from his owner. The person who found a ticket smiled with pleasure at his success.
No one in the carriage had previous spoken to or even noticed the ticket-owner before. Yet they had so quickly offered the strangers their help. If we could show concern to others on need, the world would be a better place to live in.
答案
I was taking a train to London’s Victoria Station. I ① had noticed that the carriage was ②
noise
noisy
and filled with people.
Before long, a train inspector ③
comes
came
to check our tickets. A passenger realized he couldn’t find his ticket ④
but
and
became quite upset. Then everyone in the carriage began searching ⑤∧for the ticket, which was eventually found under a seat several rows from ⑥
his
its/the
owner. The person who found ⑦
a
the
ticket smiled with pleasure at his success.
No one in the carriage had ⑧
previous
previously
spoken to or even noticed the ticket-owner before. Yet they had so quickly offered the ⑨
strangers
stranger
their help. If we could show concern to others⑩
on
in
need, the world would be a better place to live in.
Correction 19(2014辽宁)
Dear Jeremy and Alice,
Although we’ve been delighted to have you as neighbors, we’re hoping to settle something that bothers to us. In a word, your dog—Cleo.
We’ve called several time about Cleo’s early morning barking. It is difficult to understanding why she barks every minute she’s outside. The early morning barking have been disturbing us as we are often up all night with the baby. Beside, Cleo tends to bark a average of six hours a day. This morning she starts barking even before 5 o’clock. That is too much for us, considering how closely the houses are.
We appreciate our apologies and goodwill, but we hope that you can figure a good way of settling the matter.
Sincerely,
Jack and Rose
答案
Dear Jeremy and Alice,
Although we’ve been delighted to have you as neighbors, we’re hoping to settle something that bothers ① to us. In a word, your dog—Cleo.
We’ve called several ②
time
times
about Cleo’s early morning barking. It is difficult to ③
understanding
understand
why she barks every minute she’s outside. The early morning barking ④
have
has
been disturbing us as we are often up all night with the baby.⑤
Beside
Besides
,Cleo tends to bark ⑥
a
an
average of six hours a day. T his morning she ⑦
starts
started
barking even before 5 o’clock. That is too much for us, considering how ⑧
closely
close
the houses are.
We appreciate ⑨
our
your
apologies and goodwill, but we hope that you can figure ⑩∧out a good way of settling the matter.
Sincerely,
Jack and Rose
Correction 20(2014四川)
Hello, boys and girls! Today, I am going to talk with what you should do when a fire alarm go off. If you hear the alarm, stand in line at the door and wait your teacher to lead you outside. Stay close to your teacher and classmate. Don’t panic or get out of line, and trying to remain quiet and calmly. Soon the firefighters will come and put out a fire. If it’s a false alarm and there is no fire, your teacher will lead us back to the classroom. If you notice that when someone is missing and hurt, tell your teacher immediately.
答案
Hello, boys and girls! Today, I am going to talk ①
with
about
what you should do when a fire alarm ②
go
goes
off. If you hear the alarm, stand in line at the door and wait ③∧for your teacher to lead you outside. Stay close to your teacher and④
classmate
classmates
.Don’t panic or get out of line, and ⑤
trying
try
to remain quiet and ⑥
calmly
calm
.Soon the firefighters will come and put out ⑦
a
the
fire. If it’s a false alarm and there is no fire, your teacher will lead ⑧
us
you
back to the classroom. If you notice that ⑨ when someone is missing ⑩
and
or
hurt, tell your teacher immediately.
【三年模拟】
每篇建议用时:8分钟
A组 2017—2019年模拟·基础题组
Correction 1(2019届福建泉港一中、南安国光中学期中联考)
Of my teachers, Mr. Moore is the one who makes an impression of me. Though he is 50, but he appears very young. Undoubtedly, he’s one of the most popular teacher in our school. Comparing with other teachers, Mr. Moore pays more attention to his way of teaching. He tries various ways to make his classes lively and interesting. In his point of view, we should not only know “what”, but also understand “why”. Consequently, instead of giving us immediately answers, he is always encouraged us to think by himself whenever he puts forward questions. With his help, we’ve made rapid progresses, learning how to analyze and settled problems. What wonderful world of “why” he leads us to!
答案
Of my teachers, Mr. Moore is the one who makes an impression ①
of
on
me. Though he is 50, ② but he appears very young. Undoubtedly, he’s one of the most popular ③
teacher
teachers
in our school. ④
Comparing
Compared
with other teachers, Mr. Moore pays more attention to his way of teaching. He tries various ways to make his classes lively and interesting. In his point of view, we should not only know “what”, but also understand “why”. Consequently, instead of giving us ⑤
immediately
immediate
answers, he is always ⑥
encouraged
encouraging
us to think by ⑦
himself
ourselves
whenever he puts forward questions. With his help, we’ve made rapid ⑧
progresses
progress
, learning how to analyze and ⑨
settled
settle
problems. What⑩∧a wonderful world of “why” he leads us to!
Correction 2(2019届湖北孝感一中、应城一中等五校期中联考)
One of my friends have sent me a short message, say that true friends are one soul in two bodies, which moves me very much and makes me think how true friendship is.
Nowadays, the word friendship has been used very often that it has lost its meaning. Some jokingly put it that friends are made to be taken advantage. In my opinion, true friendship doesn’t mean that when you need your friends help, you’ll treat them to dinner. True friendship is the communication of the hearts and understand of the souls. True friends keep you in the mind, no matter where they are. Once you have found such true friends, do treasure him. With friendship, life proves happily and harmonious.
答案
One of my friends ①
have
has
sent me a short message, ②
say
saying
that true friends are one soul in two bodies, which moves me very much and makes me think ③
how
what
true friendship is.
Nowadays, the word friendship has been used ④
very
so
often that it has lost its meaning. Some jokingly put it that friends are made to be taken advantage⑤∧of. In my opinion, true friendship doesn’t mean that when you need your ⑥
friends
friends’
help, you’ll treat them to dinner. True friendship is the communication of the hearts and ⑦
understand
understanding
of the souls. True friends keep you in ⑧ the mind, no matter where they are. Once you have found such true friends, do treasure ⑨
him
them
. With friendship, life proves ⑩
happily
happy
and harmonious.
Correction 3(2019届湖北宜昌示范高中协作体期中)
Swimming is my favorite sport. I usually swims in a swimming pool close to that I live. Yesterday, my friend Tony and I decide to go swimming in the sea. It turned out to be one of the most exciting experiences I had ever had. At first, seen the waves coming one after another, I was afraid. Though I was not a bad swimmer in the swimming pool, but swimming in the sea was different. I was just about to give it up while I suddenly noticed a little boy walking towards the sea calm. Weak as he seemed, he went straight into the sea with any hesitation. Encouraged by her, I overcame my fear and finally made successful attempt.
答案
Swimming is my favorite sport. I usually ①
swims
swim
in a swimming pool close to ②
that
where
I live. Yesterday, my friend Tony and I ③
decide
decided
to go swimming in the sea. It turned out to be one of the most exciting experiences I had ever had. At first, ④
seen
seeing
the waves coming one after another, I was afraid. Though I was not a bad swimmer in the swimming pool, ⑤but swimming in the sea was different. I was just about to give it up ⑥
while
when
I suddenly noticed a little boy walking towards the sea ⑦
calm
calmly
. Weak as he seemed, he went straight into the sea ⑧
with
without
any hesitation. Encouraged by ⑨
her
him
, I overcame my fear and finally made ⑩∧a successful attempt.
Correction 4(2019届湖南浏阳六校期中联考)
One Monday afternoon, we were playing basketball in playground while I suddenly slipped and fell over. On seeing that, all my classmates rushed to me. Under the help of several other students, Li Xiang, one of my best friend put me on his back and head to for the clinic immediately. It turned out that my right ankle got injured but I had to be sent to hospital. He did not leave until an ambulance arrived. The following day, he came to see me. To my greatly relief, he brought textbooks to them and helped me with my lessons. It was a great pleasure to have such a devoting friend.
答案
One Monday afternoon, we were playing basketball in①∧the playground ②
while
when
I suddenly slipped and fell over. On seeing that, all my classmates rushed to me. ③
Under
With
the help of several other students, Li Xiang, one of my best ④
friend
friends
put me on his back and ⑤
head
headed
⑥ to for the clinic immediately. It turned out that my right ankle got injured ⑦
but
and/so
I had to be sent to hospital. He did not leave until an ambulance arrived. The following day, he came to see me. To my ⑧
greatly
great
relief, he brought textbooks to ⑨
them
me
and helped me with my lessons. It was a great pleasure to have such a ⑩
devoting
devoted
friend.
Correction 5(2019届福建长汀一中等六校联考)
Recently many schools have taken up tough measures to forbid students to bring their smartphones to school. Therefore, some students break this rule and some even play with their smartphones in class and that makes the teachers discouraging.
The disadvantages of students bringing smartphones to school is obvious. On the one hand, smartphones can distract students’ attentions. On other hand, some students may get access for some unhealthy websites, which does harm to their development. What’s bad, some students are likely to compare the brands of their smartphones with their classmates’.
In my opinion, I strong support banning smartphones in schools. Only by this means can you devote more energies to our study and achieve our goals.
答案
Recently many schools have taken ① up tough measures to forbid students to bring their smartphones to school. ②
Therefore
However
, some students break this rule and some even play with their smartphones in class and that makes the teachers ③
discouraging
discouraged
.
The disadvantages of students bringing smartphones to school ④
is
are
obvious. On the one hand, smartphones can distract students’ ⑤
attentions
attention
. On ⑥∧the other hand, some students may get access ⑦
for
to
some unhealthy websites, which does harm to their development. What’s ⑧
bad
worse
, some students are likely to compare the brands of their smartphones with their classmates’.
In my opinion, I ⑨
strong
strongly
support banning smartphones in schools. Only by this means can ⑩
you
we
devote more energies to our study and achieve our goals.
Correction 6(2018福建漳州二次调研)
I am so glad you can visit me in London. Knowing that you’ve never travel outside of Asia, I’d tell you a bit about you can expect to find. When I first arrived, I found that London is such a international city. There are many Chinese restaurants, so British people hardly eat Chinese food for breakfast. Most of them get used to bacon or egg with a few slices of toast. Tipping always puzzles me. If you want to avoid to getting confused, you should always leave 10% of the bill to the service. Besides, it’s very difficult for our Chinese to understand British humour. So don’t be surprised when you don’t think anything is funny. The majority of British people is friendly. Anyway, I am so looking forward to your visit there.
答案
I am so glad you can visit me in London. Knowing that you’ve never ①
travel
traveled/travelled
outside of Asia, I’d tell you a bit about ②∧what you can expect to find. When I first arrived, I found that London is such ③
a
an
international city. There are many Chinese restaurants,④
so
but
British people hardly eat Chinese food for breakfast. Most of them get used to bacon or ⑤
egg
eggs
with a few slices of toast. Tipping always puzzles me. If you want to avoid ⑥ to getting confused, you should always leave 10% of the bill ⑦
to
for
the service. Besides, it’s very difficult for ⑧
our
us
Chinese to understand British humour. So don’t be surprised when you don’t think anything is funny. The majority of British people ⑨
is
are
friendly. Anyway, I am so looking forward to your visit ⑩
there
here
.
Correction 7(2018安徽合肥二次质检)
Last Saturday our class went hiking in a countryside. We meet at our school gate and set off at 8:00 am. On the way, we were singing and laughing happily while a girl suddenly fell into a deep hole. She felt so frightening and even burst into tears. One of my classmate found a long rope and we finally got him out. Fortunately, she didn’t suffer seriously injuries, but it seemed that her ankle slightly twisted. We managed to sending her to the nearest hospital. It is an experience we’ll never forget it, though we didn’t enjoy ourselves very much that day.
答案
Last Saturday our class went hiking in ①
a
the
countryside. We ②
meet
met
at our school gate and set off at 8:00 am. On the way, we were singing and laughing happily ③
while
when
a girl suddenly fell into a deep hole. She felt so ④
frightening
frightened
and even burst into tears. One of my ⑤
classmate
classmates
found a long rope and we finally got ⑥
him
her
out. Fortunately, she didn’t suffer ⑦
seriously
serious
injuries, but it seemed that her ankle ⑧∧was slightly twisted. We managed to ⑨
sending
send
her to the nearest hospital. It is an experience we’ll never forget ⑩ it, though we didn’t enjoy ourselves very much that day.
Correction 8(2018河南新乡二模)
My friend and I always played outdoor when we were young. During spring rains, we climbed up to our comfort tree house and played cards. Then in the amused autumn, we rolled around in the orange leaf. This all end one day, when my friend received video game player for his birthday. In the begin, he sometimes invited me over to play with him. But this began to happen less and less, because of his house was small, and his mother didn’t like visitors. Now we never see each another, as he is always played his video games. I miss my friend.
答案
My friend and I always played ①
outdoor
outdoors
when we were young. During spring rains, we climbed up to our ②
comfort
comfortable
tree house and played cards. Then in the ③
amused
amusing
autumn, we rolled around in the orange ④
leaf
leaves
. This all ⑤
end
ended
one day, when my friend received ⑥∧a video game player for his birthday. In the ⑦
begin
beginning
, he sometimes invited me over to play with him. But this began to happen less and less, because ⑧ of his house was small, and his mother didn’t like visitors. Now we never see each ⑨
another
other
, as he is always ⑩
played
playing
his video games. I miss my friend.
Correction 9(2017四川宜宾二诊)
Dear Editor,
I’m a senior high school student, named Li Hua. Nowadays, it was fashionable for us students to have iPads. Using an iPad, you can listen to music, download learning materials, and so on. Obvious, it greatly helps us at our studies. Some students, however, bring their iPads to the classroom and listen to music without earphones, that makes teachers and other students annoying. Some of them even waste time play video games in class.
In my opinions, the classroom is a place to study in. Therefore, we should make a good use of iPads to improve our studies. Meanwhile, schools should make some rules instruct the students to use iPads properly.
答案
Dear Editor,
I’m a senior high school student, named Li Hua. Nowadays, it ①
was
is
fashionable for us students to have iPads. Using an iPad, ②
you
we
can listen to music, download learning materials, and so on. ③
Obvious
Obviously
, it greatly helps us ④
at
with
our studies. Some students, however, bring their iPads to the classroom and listen to music without earphones, ⑤
that
which
makes teachers and other students ⑥
annoying
annoyed
. Some of them even waste time ⑦
play
playing
video games in class.
In my ⑧
opinions
opinion
, the classroom is a place to study in. Therefore, we should make ⑨ a good use of iPads to improve our studies. Meanwhile, schools should make some rules⑩∧to instruct the students to use iPads properly.
Correction 10(2017山东枣庄一模)
It is my grandfather’s eighty birthday today. As usual, all my family got together to celebrate him. We bought him a lot of present, and my father prepared a big birthday cake. At the dinner party, we sing the Happy Birthday song. He made a wish happy before he blew the candles out. With a surprise gift, I cooked a dish for him! As I had never cooked before, he was so surprised that the dish was served. My grandfather said that it was the better birthday gift he had received. Actually, my mother helped me cooked it and I had been practiced for several days.
答案
It is my grandfather’s ①
eighty
eightieth
birthday today. As usual, all my family got together to celebrate ②him/
him
it
.We bought him a lot of ③
present
presents
,and my father prepared a big birthday cake. At the dinner party, we ④
sing
sang
the Happy Birthday song. He made a wish ⑤
happy
happily
before he blew the candles out.⑥
With
As
a surprise gift, I cooked a dish for him! As I had never cooked before, he was so surprised ⑦
that
when
the dish was served. My grandfather said that it was the ⑧
better
best
birthday gift he had received. Actually, my mother helped me ⑨
cooked
cook
it and I had ⑩ been practiced for several days.
B组 2017—2019年模拟·提升题组
Correction 1(2019届湖南三湘名校教育联盟一次联考)
Last Sunday, my family went for walk in a nearby park. We wanted to breathe the fresh air and having fun there. However, when going out, we find it was cloudy and smoggy. Only a few people were walking quick on the streets wearing their masks. I was wondering why was the matter when my little brother began to cough loudly. Suddenly I realized that it was air pollution. So we had to go to home that day. Smoke from cars, buses, and factories make the air dirty, that is harmful to our health. I think they should all do some thing to keep the air clean.
答案
Last Sunday, my family went for ①∧a walk in a nearby park. We wanted to breathe the fresh air and ②
having
have
fun there. However, when going out, we ③
find
found
it was cloudy and smoggy. Only a few people were walking ④
quick
quickly
on the streets wearing their masks. I was wondering ⑤
why
what
was the matter when my little brother began to cough loudly. Suddenly I realized that it was air pollution. So we had to go ⑥ to home that day. Smoke from cars, buses, and factories ⑦
make
makes
the air dirty, ⑧
that
which
is harmful to our health. I think ⑨
they
we
should all do some ⑩
thing
things
to keep the air clean.
Correction 2(2019届安徽皖南八校一次联考)
Many a child take what their parents do for them for granted. They haven’t realized the meaning of be grateful. But they always get angry with their parents because they don’t get what they want. My friend once told me the news that a little girl went out of the house and refuse to return home as her parents did not give her enough money. I was so shocking to hear it. I would never ask much from my parents because I knew it was not easy for him to make a living. And I always feel so thankful to what they have offered to me. If someone who gives me a hand when I am in need, I will remember him and if I have a chance, I will pay him back. In short, it is a grateful heart makes us becoming kind people and create a harmonious environment.
答案
Many a child ①
take
takes
what their parents do for them for granted. They haven’t realized the meaning of ②
be
being
grateful.③
But
And/So
they always get angry with their parents because they don’t get what they want. My friend once told me the news that a little girl went out of the house and ④
refuse
refused
to return home as her parents did not give her enough money. I was so ⑤
shocking
shocked
to hear it. I would never ask much from my parents because I knew it was not easy for ⑥
him
them
to make a living. And I always feel so thankful ⑦
to
for
what they have offered to me. If someone ⑧who gives me a hand when I am in need, I will remember him and if I have a chance, I will pay him back. In short, it is a grateful heart ⑨∧that makes us ⑩
becoming
become
kind people and create a harmonious environment.
Correction 3(2019届福建安溪一中、养正一中、惠安一中、泉州实验中学期中)
I have a older sister. Her name is Monica. He is very pretty and smart, with long black hair and big eye. She is always ready to help me and look after me. But she was used to be easy to get angry, especially that she was with family members only. Once I talked to her this problem. Feeling terrible sorry, she agreed with me but promised to make a change. She also thanked me for making her aware of her problem. She had made huge progress on that bad habit so far. Now I like her even more and I am glad I have so a great sister.
答案
I have ①
a
an
older sister. Her name is Monica. ②
He
She
is very pretty and smart, with long black hair and big ③
eye
eyes
. She is always ready to help me and look after me. But she ④ was used to be easy to get angry, especially ⑤
that
when
she was with family members only. Once I talked to her ⑥∧about this problem. Feeling ⑦
terrible
terribly
sorry, she agreed with me ⑧
but
and
promised to make a change. She also thanked me for making her aware of her problem. She ⑨
had
has
made huge progress on that bad habit so far. Now I like her even more and I am glad I have ⑩
so
such
a great sister.
Correction 4(2019届吉林省重点中学二次联考)
Growing up, I didn’t have much ambition and I was wasted a lot of time on video games. One day, I picked up a book, that was about seven habits of highly successful teenagers. We don’t remember much about the story, and one key concept that truly impressed me was the idea of time. The book stressed the importance of use our time wisely. During that time I was aimless person. It sounded crazily, but I determined to read it. After I read it, I make a decision to spending as much time as possible just reading. I’ve made great progresses since then.
答案
Growing up, I didn’t have much ambition and I ① was wasted a lot of time on video games. One day, I picked up a book, ②
that
which
was about seven habits of highly successful teenagers. ③
We
I
don’t remember much about the story, ④
and
but/yet
one key concept that truly impressed me was the idea of time. The book stressed the importance of ⑤
use
using
our time wisely. During that time I was ⑥∧an aimless person. It sounded ⑦
crazily
crazy
, but I determined to read it. After I read it, I ⑧
make
made
a decision to ⑨
spending
spend
as much time as possible just reading. I’ve made great ⑩
progresses
progress
since then.
Correction 5(2019届安徽江淮十校二次联考)
Miss Zhang is one of my most favorite teachers. She has a slim build and always ties his hair in a ponytail. She is 35, but she looks quite young at her age. Which impresses me most is Miss Zhang’s way of teaching. She devotes herself to teach and prepares well for every class. Not only did she help us to understand “what”, but she explores “why”. She encourages us to think independent and have discussions among ourselves when we faced with problems. She is such a inspiring person with a strong sense of responsibilities, and we all respect and admire her.
答案
Miss Zhang is one of my ① most favorite teachers. She has a slim build and always ties ②
his
her
hair in a ponytail. She is 35, but she looks quite young ③
at
for
her age. ④
Which
What
impresses me most is Miss Zhang’s way of teaching. She devotes herself to ⑤
teach
teaching
and prepares well for every class. Not only ⑥
did
does
she help us to understand “what”, but she explores “why”. She encourages us to think ⑦
independent
independently
and have discussions among ourselves when we ⑧∧are faced with problems. She is such ⑨
a
an
inspiring person with a strong sense of ⑩
responsibilities
responsibility
, and we all respect and admire her.
Correction 6(2018江西赣州3月模拟)
My name is Li Ming, a student studied in Ganzhou No.18 Middle School. I am eager become a volunteer in your group and I can work till my next term begins. I have a real talent on singing. I get first prize in the singing competition in our school last year. However, I can teach children how to sing songs. Besides, I play the piano very well, that will help a lot in my work. I am warm-hearted and always be ready to help. Helping other people makes myself happy. I believe I can make friend with the children. I hope I am fortunately enough to be a member of your group.
答案
My name is Li Ming, a student ①
studied
studying
in GanzhouNo.18 Middle School. I am eager ②∧to become a volunteer in your group and I can work till my next term begins. I have a real talent ③
on
for
singing. I ④
get
got
first prize in the singing competition in our school last year. ⑤
However
Therefore/Thus
, I can teach children how to sing songs. Besides, I play the piano very well, ⑥
that
which
will help a lot in my work. I am warm-hearted and always ⑦ be ready to help. Helping other people makes⑧
myself
me
happy. I believe I can make ⑨
friend
friends
with the children. I hope I am ⑩
fortunately
fortunate
enough to be a member of your group.
Correction 7(2018安徽江南十校3月联考)
It is no doubt that we produce lots of garbage every day. However, few people have the habit of sorting waste.
This will bring lots of problem. First, the value of things that can be recycled or reused, such as plastic and paper, are reduced. Besides, deal with some waste by burning it will cause serious environmentally pollution.
For these reasons, the government should take effectively measures to call for waste sorting. More publicity campaigns and public service advertisements should run to raise public aware. The government can also design the colorful garbage cans with clear waste-sorting images on it to encourage people to sort waste.
答案
①
It
There
is no doubt that we produce lots of garbage every day. However, few people have the habit of sorting waste.
This will bring lots of ②
problem
problems
. First, the value of things that can be recycled or reused, such as plastic and paper, ③
are
is
reduced. Besides, ④
deal
dealing
with some waste by burning it will cause serious ⑤
environmentally
environmental
pollution.
For these reasons, the government should take ⑥
effectively
effective
measures to call for waste sorting. More publicity campaigns and public service advertisements should ⑦∧be run to raise public ⑧
aware
awareness
. The government can also design ⑨ the colorful garbage cans with clear waste-sorting images on ⑩
it
them
to encourage people to sort waste.
Correction 8(2018山西二模)
My mum is a volunteer in a hospital. She brought dinner every Sunday to the people attending their relatives who are in hospital.
One Sunday, Mum asked me to help her with dinner. At the first, I didn’t want to, so in the end she persuaded me to go. Half an hour late, we arrived. We quickly set up a table and started giving people food. The people serving there were deeply moved and showed our gratefulness. It was amazed to look at people’s face, especially those of children. It made me feel gladly for being there.
That day I realized that the value of life is not only about receiving, but giving as well.
答案
My mum is a volunteer in a hospital. She ①
brought
brings
dinner every Sunday to the people attending ②∧to their relatives who are in hospital.
One Sunday, Mum asked me to help her with dinner. At ③ the first, I didn’t want to, ④
so
but
in the end she persuaded me to go. Half an hour ⑤
late
later
, we arrived. We quickly set up a table and started giving people food. The people ⑥
serving
served
there were deeply moved and showed ⑦
our
their
gratefulness. It was ⑧
amazed
amazing
to look at people’s ⑨
face
faces
, especially those of children. It made me feel ⑩
gladly
glad
for being there.
That day I realized that the value of life is not only about receiving, but giving as well.
Correction 9(2017江西八所重点中学4月联考)
Last night I was at a coffee shop. There was a wonderfully music show. As I got up to get a cup of coffee and a cookie, I notice a middle-aged woman near me. Clearly, she had caught in a fire of some kind. His face was so badly burned that she looked very tight. I thought about how brave she was to come out but appear in public. When I returned back to my seat, I turned towards the woman and said, “Isn’t he a wonderful performers?” And I gave her the largest smile I was able to give. To my pleased, she looked right at me and gave me a huge smile for return. It was her smile which made her whole face light up last night. She was beautiful.
答案
Last night I was at a coffee shop. There was a ①
wonderfully
wonderful
music show. As I got up to get a cup of coffee and a cookie, I ②
notice
noticed
a middle-aged woman near me. Clearly, she had③∧been caught in a fire of some kind. ④
His
Her
face was so badly burned that she looked very tight. I thought about how brave she was to come out ⑤
but
and
appear in public. When I returned ⑥ back to my seat, I turned towards the woman and said, “Isn’t he a wonderful ⑦
performers
performer
?” And I gave her the largest smile I was able to give. To my ⑧
pleased
pleasure
, she looked right at me and gave me a huge smile ⑨
for
in
return. It was her smile ⑩
which
that
made her whole face light up last night. She was beautiful.
Correction 10(2017河北衡水中学下学期期中)
Is creativity a natural gift like good looks, or is it something that it can be acquired like knowledge? If we analyze the creative process careful, we might know what it is and what it might work. The creative process has always accepted as the source of all important works in the arts, so we should not think the creativity plays a role only in the arts. Every major scientific discover begins with someone seeing the world differently from the way others sees it. And this is which creativity is all about—imagining the world in the new way. We all have the potential to imagine the world in an absolutely new way. In fact, we are born for it.
答案
Is creativity a natural gift like good looks, or is it something that ① it can be acquired like knowledge? If we analyze the creative process ②
careful
carefully
, we might know what it is and ③
what
how
it might work. The creative process has always ④∧been accepted as the source of all important works in the arts, ⑤
so
but
we should not think the creativity plays a role only in the arts. Every major scientific ⑥
discover
discovery
begins with someone seeing the world differently from the way others ⑦
sees
see
it. And this is ⑧
which
what
creativity is all about—imagining the world in ⑨
the
a
new way. We all have the potential to imagine the world in an absolutely new way. In fact, we are born ⑩
for
with
it.
