短文改错专练(一)
Test 1
[2019·重庆市七校联考]This morning I happened to meet a foreigner when I was taking walk in the park. It was a good chance for me to practise my spoken English, but I went up to him, introduced himself in English and expressed my wish to have a talk with him. In my surprise, he just stared at me, looking puzzling. I thought I had not made myself understand, so I repeated again what I had said. But he just said anything that I didn't understand. I suddenly realize he was not an English speaker! Not all foreigner speak English.
答案与解析：
This morning I happened to meet a foreigner when I was taking walk in the park. It was a good chance for me to practise my spoken English, I went up to him, introduced in English and expressed my wish to have a talk with him. my surprise, he just stared at me, looking . I thought I had not made myself ， so I repeated what I had said. But he just said that I didn't understand. I suddenly he was not an English speaker! Not all speak English.
①taking后加a 考查固定短语。take a walk固定短语“散步”可知，此处应加不定冠词a。
②but改为so 考查连词。根据语境可知，前后句存在逻辑上的因果关系，并非转折关系，故用连词so。
③himself改为myself 考查代词。与句子主语I呼应，故用反身代词myself作动词introduced的宾语。
④In改为To 考查介词。根据语境可知，此处表示“令我吃惊的是”。to one's surprise固定短语“使某人惊讶的是”可知，此处应用介词To。
⑤puzzling改为puzzled 考查形容词。puzzled“困惑的”形容人；puzzling“令人困惑的”往往修饰物，故把puzzling改为puzzled。
⑥understand改为understood 考查非谓语动词。make oneself understood“清楚表达自己的意思”，为固定用法。
⑦删除again 考查副词。repeat“重复，重说”本身就含有“再次”的含义，因此副词again“再一次”多余，故删除。
⑧anything改为something 考查代词。根据语境可知，此处表示一些东西，故用代词something。
⑨realize改为realized 考查时态。根据上文中的时间状语“This morning”可知，此处叙述的是过去发生的事情，故用一般过去时。
⑩foreigner改为foreigners 考查名词。foreigner是可数名词，其前有all修饰，故用其复数形式。
Test 2
[2019·邯郸一模] I am very luckily to have the opportunity to see so many place, but sometimes I experience culture shock when I see or do something new. Dad and I now are traveled through Denmark, Norway and Sweden. I used to thinking that these countries are the same, but not any more. People in Denmark are a bit of friendlier, while Norwegians and Swedes prefer not to talk to strangers. I'm surprised to learn that many people there speak English in addition their national languages. In Sweden, it seems that anyone has golden hair and blue eyes. I feel a little strange with my black hair and dark eyes. I imagine this is that foreigners feel when they visit China!
答案与解析：
I am very to have the opportunity to see so many ， but sometimes I experience culture shock when I see or do something new. Dad and I now are through Denmark, Norway and Sweden. I used to that these countries the same, but not any more. People in Denmark are a bit friendlier, while Norwegians and Swedes prefer not to talk to strangers. I'm surprised to learn that many people speak English in addition their national languages. In Sweden, it seems that has golden hair and blue eyes. I feel a little strange with my black hair and dark eyes. I imagine this is foreigners feel when they visit China!
①luckily改为lucky 考查形容词。be lucky to do sth.固定短语，意为“做某事很幸运”，be动词后常跟形容词作表语，故将luckily改为lucky。
②place改为places 考查名词。place为可数名词，其前有many修饰，表示复数概念，应用复数形式，故将place改为places。
③traveled改为traveling 考查非谓语动词。根据本句的时间状语now可知，此处表示正在进行的动作，应用现在进行时，且travel与主语Dad and I之间为主动关系，故将traveled改为traveling。
④thinking改为think 考查非谓语动词。used to do sth.固定短语“过去常常做某事”，故将thinking改为think。
⑤are改为were 考查时态。根据前面的used to可知，此处叙述发生在过去的事情，应用一般过去时，故将are改为were。
⑥删除of 考查介词。根据后面的friendlier可知，此处应用a bit修饰形容词比较级，而a bit of修饰名词，故删除of。
⑦there改为here 考查副词。根据上下文可知，此文应是“我”在北欧三国旅行时于当地写的，表示近指，故将there改为here。
⑧在addition后加to 考查介词。in addition固定短语“此外，另外”，常用在句首，后跟逗号； in addition to...固定短语“除……之外”，后常接名词或动名词。根据句意及语境可知，此处表示“除……之外”，故在addition后加to。
⑨anyone改为everyone 考查不定代词。根据上下文可知，此处指每一个瑞典人似乎都长着金发碧眼，故将anyone改为everyone。
⑩that改为how 考查表语从句。分析句子结构可知，此处引导表语从句，并在从句中作方式状语，应用how引导该从句，故将that改为how。
Test 3
[2019·山西六校测试] My hometown is a small city in Southwest China, that is surrounded by rolling green mountains. A river runs across it, with various kinds of trees lined both banks. In spring fruit trees all blossom at the same time, spreading sweetly fragrance all around the city. In summer smaller boats are floating on the river, and the sound of the running water accompanying the laughters of children can be heard from far away. Although it rains a lot, but the climate is very mild. People here were warm-hearted and straightforward. It's good place to spend hot summer days. I love it from the bottom of her heart.
答案与解析：
My hometown is a small city in Southwest China, is surrounded by rolling green mountains. A river runs it, with various kinds of trees both banks. In spring fruit trees all blossom at the same time, spreading fragrance all around the city. In summer boats are floating on the river, and the sound of the running water accompanying the of children can be heard from far away. Although it rains a lot, / the climate is very mild. People here warm-hearted and straightforward. It's good place to spend hot summer days. I love it from the bottom of heart.
①that改为which 考查定语从句。逗号后是非限制性定语从句，修饰先行词city，且定语从句中缺少主语，故用which。
②across改为through 考查介词。across常表示运动在物体的表面进行，through表示运动在某个空间内进行。此处表示河流从城市内部穿过，故用through。
③lined改为lining 考查非谓语动词。此处line是及物动词，表示“沿……形成行或排”，根据后面的both banks可知，此处表示树沿着两岸排成排，line与trees是逻辑上的主谓关系，应用现在分词作后置定语。
④sweetly改为sweet 考查形容词。fragrance是名词，修饰名词用形容词。
⑤smaller改为small 考查形容词。本句中无比较的对象或范围，故用原级。
⑥laughters改为laughter 考查名词。laughter“笑声”只能作不可数名词用。
⑦删除the climate前面的but或者but改为still/yet 考查连词。Although引导让步状语从句，主句前不需要连词，但是可以使用副词still或yet。
⑧were改为are 考查时态。文章的主体时态是一般现在时，此处也应保持时态一致，用一般现在时。
⑨在good前加a 考查冠词。place是可数名词，此处表示泛指，需要在前面加不定冠词，且place的发音以辅音音素开头，故用a。
⑩her改为my 考查物主代词。根据句意可知，“我从我的心底爱着它”，故将her改为my。
Test 4
[2019·兰州诊断考试] Recently I found a donation box in my neighborhood. People come to them when they have old clothes, bags, newspapers and books to donate. This box, I think, was of great significance. My mother buys for me a lot of clothes, and I grow so fast. Much clothes don't fit me any longer. I've got no idea about what to deal with the clothes which are real new and still in good condition. However, with this donation box, I can help those people in needs. In a word, I do think it is a good idea that light up our life and makes the world better place to live in.
答案与解析：
Recently I found a donation box in my neighborhood. People come to when they have old clothes, bags, newspapers and books to donate. This box, I think, of great significance. My mother buys me a lot of clothes, I grow so fast. clothes don't fit me any longer. I've got no idea about to deal with the clothes which are new and still in good condition. However, with this donation box, I can help those people in . In a word, I do think it is a good idea that up our life and makes the world better place to live in.
①them改为it 考查代词。根据语境可知，此处指代上文提到的“a donation box”，是第三人称单数，故将them改为it。
②was改为is 考查时态。根据语境可知，此处是一般性描述，应用一般现在时。
③删除for 考查介词。buy sb. sth.固定短语“给某人购买某物”，故将for删除。
④and改为but 考查连词。根据语境可知，母亲给我买了许多衣物，但是我长得太快，很多衣服都不合身了，此处和上文构成转折关系，故用连词but。
⑤Much改为Many 考查形容词。句中的“clothes”是复数名词，故将Much改为Many。
⑥what改为how 考查连接词。根据语境可知，此处表示“我不知道该如何处理这些衣物”，故用how。
⑦real改为really 考查副词。此处应用副词修饰形容词new，故用really。
⑧needs改为need 考查固定短语。in need固定短语“短缺，困窘”，符合语境。
⑨light改为lights 考查主谓一致。此处的定语从句的先行词为a good idea，为单数形式，故用lights。
⑩world后加a 考查冠词。place为可数名词，其前无限定词修饰，且此处作宾语补足语，better的发音以辅音音素开头，故用不定冠词a。
短文改错专练(三)
Test 1
[2019·大连高三双基测试] While it comes to how to face a challenge, I think of my experience in learning maths.
When I was in junior middle school, I had great difficulties in learning maths. To change a situation, I made great efforts. Firstly, I bought some reference books and got prepared before class, make it easy for me to understand that the teacher would teach. Secondly, I listened attentive in class and took notes carefully, which helped my accumulate basic knowledge. Thirdly, I did my homework on time and turn to my teacher for help when I had problems. Finally I caught with others.
Nothing is impossible for a willing heart. Faced with challenges, I respond positively and overcome with them.
答案与解析：
it comes to how to face a challenge, I think of my experience in learning maths.
When I was in junior middle school, I had great in learning maths. To change situation, I made great efforts. Firstly, I bought some reference books and got prepared before class, it easy for me to understand the teacher would teach. Secondly, I listened in class and took notes carefully, which helped accumulate basic knowledge. Thirdly, I did my homework on time and to my teacher for help when I had problems. Finally I caught with others.
Nothing is impossible for a willing heart. Faced with challenges, I respond positively and overcome them.
①While改为When 考查连词。when it comes to...固定短语“当涉及……时”。故While改为When。
②difficulties改为difficulty 考查名词。此处表示在学习数学方面“我”有极大的困难。have difficulty (in) doing sth.固定短语“在做某事方面有困难”，故difficulties改为difficulty。
③a改为the 考查冠词。句意：为改变这种状况，“我”做出了很大的努力。根据句意可知，此处特指上文提到的情况，所以用定冠词the。
④make改为making 考查非谓语动词。分析句子结构可知，此处应用现在分词作结果状语。
⑤that改为what 考查宾语从句。分析句子结构可知，此处引导宾语从句，且在从句中作宾语，表示“……的东西”，所以用what。
⑥attentive改为attentively 考查副词。此处表示在课堂上“我”集中注意力听课。修饰动词应用副词，故用attentively修饰listened。
⑦my改为me 考查代词。此处表示那帮助“我”积累了很多基础知识，故此处应用代词me作helped的宾语。
⑧turn改为turned 考查时态。根据“and”可知，此处与谓语动词did并列，故用一般过去时。
⑨caught后加up 考查副词。catch up with...固定短语“赶上……”，故caught后加up。
⑩删除with 考查介词。此处overcome意为“战胜；克服”，为及物动词，其后直接跟名词作宾语。
Test 2
[2019·银川质量检测]
Dear Sir/Madam，
I'm Li Ming, the middle school student from China. I read the announcement of the summer camp that you have posted it on the Internet and I am interested in it. I know that you welcome student from different countries but I'd like to take part in it. I've been studied English for 10 years, and I speak fluently English. What's more, I'll be able to tell students from another countries about China and learning about their countries as well. I hope I will accepted as a member of your summer camp.
I'll appreciate it that you can take my application into consideration.
Yours，
Li Ming
答案与解析：
Dear Sir/Madam，
I'm Li Ming, middle school student from China. I read the announcement of the summer camp that you have posted on the Internet and I am interested in it. I know that you welcome from different countries I'd like to take part in it. I've been English for 10 years, and I speak English. What's more, I'll be able to tell students from countries about China and about their countries as well. I hope I will accepted as a member of your summer camp.
I'll appreciate it you can take my application into consideration.
Yours，
Li Ming
①the改为a 考查冠词。此处泛指“一名中学生”，是“Li Ming”的同位语，且middle的发音以辅音音素开头，故用不定冠词a。
②删除it 考查定语从句。分析句子结构可知，此处是一个定语从句，that在从句中作宾语，指代先行词“the announcement of the summer camp”，故it多余，应删除。
③student改为students 考查名词。student是可数名词，被介词短语“from different countries”修饰，表示复数概念，故应用其复数形式。
④but改为and 考查连词。根据语境可知，前后句表示逻辑上的并列或顺承关系，并非转折关系，故用连词and。
⑤studied改为studying 考查时态。根据语境和句中的“for 10 years”可知，此处应用现在完成进行时，即have been doing，故用studying。
⑥fluently改为fluent 考查形容词。此处应用形容词fluent修饰名词English。
⑦another改为other 考查限定词。根据语境和句中的“countries”可知，此处表示其他的国家，而非另一国家，故用other。
⑧learning改为learn 考查非谓语动词。根据句中的“and”可知，此处与“tell”并列，故用动词原形learn。
⑨accepted前加be 考查语态。分析句子结构可知，此处表示“被……接受”，应用被动语态，故在accepted前加be。
⑩that改为if 考查连词。根据语境可知，此处表示“如果您考虑我的申请，我将感激不尽”，故将that改为if。
Test 3
[2019·成都第一次诊断] How time flies! It won't be long after I say goodbye to my high school life. Look back on what has happened, I really want to share one of the most unforgettable experience with you.
It was my first time to give English speech. I felt worried, so I turned to Mrs. Li, my English teacher, with help. She had encouraged me to work hardly and practise more. Confidently, I practised them countless hours. My performance was very successful that it impressed my classmates a lot. I was not a talent speaker; I knew it took the SWEAT to finally taste the SWEET success.
答案与解析：
How time flies! It won't be long I say goodbye to my high school life. back on what has happened, I really want to share one of the most unforgettable with you.
It was my first time to give English speech. I felt worried, so I turned to Mrs. Li, my English teacher, help. She encouraged me to work and practise more. Confidently, I practised / countless hours. My performance was successful that it impressed my classmates a lot. I was not a speaker; I knew it took the SWEAT to finally taste the SWEET success.
①after改为before 考查连词。根据语境可知，此处表示不久“我”就要和“我”的高中生活告别了，故将after改为before“在……以前”。
②Look改为Looking 考查非谓语动词。动词look和句子的谓语want之间没有连词，故此处为非谓语，又因为其和句子的主语I为逻辑上的主谓关系，故用现在分词短语作状语。
③experience改为experiences 考查名词。experience表示“往事，经历”时为可数名词，根据本句中的“one of the most unforgettable”可知，此处应用其复数形式experiences。
④give后加an 考查冠词。speech是可数名词，且此处是第一次出现，故用不定冠词修饰，表示泛指；English的发音以元音音素开头，故用不定冠词an。
⑤with改为for 考查介词。turn to sb. for help固定短语“向某人求助”，故用介词for。
⑥删除She后的had 考查时态。根据语境尤其是上文中的turned可知，此处描述的事情发生在过去，故用一般过去时；她鼓励“我”发生在“我”向她求助之后，并非在其之前，故不用过去完成时。
⑦hardly改为hard 考查副词。hardly是副词，意为“几乎不”，不符合语境；hard既可以作形容词又可以作副词，作副词时，意为“努力地”，符合语境，修饰动词work，在句子中作状语。
⑧them改为it或删除them 考查代词。practise既可作及物动词又可作不及物动词，作及物动词时，应将其后的宾语them改为it，指代English speech；作不及物动词时其后不跟宾语，故删除them。
⑨very改为so 考查副词。根据语境并分析句子结构可知，此处是so... that...句型，表示“如此……以至于……”，故用副词so。
⑩talent改为talented 考查形容词。此处前面为冠词a，后面为名词speaker，故应用其形容词形式talented修饰名词speaker，在句子中作定语。
Test 4
[2019·合肥第二次质量检测] Our school sports meeting finally came to end last Friday. Tiring but cheerful, we made it a success. I can say it's the best one I have ever been taken part in. The opening ceremony was a feast for the eyes. To begin with, the headmaster makes a speech. Then came various performance, including singing, dancing and kung fu. Besides, some students dressed up as dolls, and that they wanted to show was confident and talent. When the teachers' shows began, the audience went crazily. As a class photographer, I took pictures of such many brilliant moments, which, with doubt, meant a lot to all of us.
答案与解析：
Our school sports meeting finally came to end last Friday. but cheerful, we made it a success. I can say it's the best one I have ever taken part in. The opening ceremony was a feast for the eyes. To begin with, the headmaster a speech. Then came various ， including singing, dancing and kung fu. Besides, some students dressed up as dolls, and they wanted to show was and talent. When the teachers' shows began, the audience went . As a class photographer, I took pictures of many brilliant moments, which, doubt, meant a lot to all of us.
①end前加an 考查冠词。come to an end固定短语“结束”。
②tiring改为tired 考查非谓语动词。此处修饰人，意为“疲劳的”，应用tired。
③删除been 考查语态。take part in固定短语“参加”，此处表示“我”曾经参加过的最好的一次运动会，故不用被动语态。
④makes改为made 考查时态。根据上文中的“last Friday”可知，事情发生在过去，故应用一般过去时。
⑤performance改为performances 考查名词。根据下文提到的唱歌、跳舞等可知，此处表示不止一种表演，故应用复数形式。
⑥that改为what 考查主语从句。分析句子结构可知，此处引导主语从句，并且在从句中作宾语，表示“……的事物”，故用what。
⑦confident改为confidence 考查名词。根据并列的名词talent可知，此处也应用名词形式。
⑧crazily改为crazy 考查形容词。went在这里为连系动词，其后接形容词，故用crazy。
⑨such改为so 考查副词。修饰many应用副词so。
⑩with改为without或no 考查介词。根据语境可知，此处表示这些精彩的瞬间毫无疑问对我们所有人都非常重要。without/no doubt固定短语“毫无疑问”。
短文改错专练(二)
Test 1
[2019·成都第三次诊断] Applying for a foreign university is a huge project. Here is my experience. I did voluntary work in Grade One. I listed all of my achievement and the voluntary work I have done. After complete the online admission process, I took a deep breathe and dreamed about my dream college. However, except offer from the University of California, San Diego (UCSD), I total got eight rejections. One day, I locked myself in my room but thought about what I had done. Finally I understood that I could learn nothing from the experience even though those rejections were made me sad. I accepted the UCSD's offer and adjusted myself quickly. For this attitude, everything I saw of UCSD thrilled me.
答案与解析：
Applying for a foreign university is a huge project. Here is my experience. I did voluntary work in Grade One. I listed all of my and the voluntary work I done. After the online admission process, I took a deep and dreamed about my dream college. However, except offer from the University of California, San Diego (UCSD), I got eight rejections. One day, I locked myself in my room thought about what I had done. Finally I understood that I could learn from the experience even though those rejections were made me sad. I accepted the UCSD's offer and adjusted myself quickly. this attitude, everything I saw of UCSD thrilled me.
①achievement改为achievements 考查名词。根据该句中的“all of”可知，这里表示不止一项成就，故要用名词复数。
②have改为had 考查动词。根据本句中的“listed”可知，这里讲述的是过去的经历，此处表示截止到过去这个时间点我已经做的志愿者工作，故要用过去完成时。
③complete改为completing 考查非谓语动词。介词After后面要用动名词，故应改为completing。
④breathe改为breath 考查名词。根据前面的冠词a和形容词deep可知，此处应用名词，take a deep breath固定短语“深吸一口气”。
⑤except后加an/the 考查冠词。offer为可数名词，故前面要用限定词修饰；此处可表泛指，且offer的发音以元音音素开头，故用an；也可表特指，故用the。
⑥total改为totally 考查副词。修饰动词got要用副词形式。
⑦but改为and 考查连词。“我将自己锁在房间里”和“思考我所做的一切”之间不存在转折关系，而是顺承关系，故要用and。
⑧nothing改为something 考查代词。根据句中的“even though”并结合语境可知，虽然之前被拒绝让“我”很伤心，但是“我”也从中学到了一些东西，故要用something。
⑨删除made前的were 考查语态。此处表示那些拒绝让我伤心，应用主动语态。
⑩For改为With 考查介词。此处表示“带着这样一种态度”，故应用介词With。
Test 2
[2019·郑州高三第一次质量预测] This summer, I visited Hangzhou, and this journey had impressed me deeply.
Being a capital of Zhejiang Province, Hangzhou lies in the southeast of China. There are a lot of place of interest. Among them the West Lake is the best-known attraction, where water seem to melt into the sky by the distance. Besides, there are several museums locating in Hangzhou that show its unique culture. What's more, you can enjoy many kinds of deliciously local food such as West Lake Fish in Vinegar Sauce and Dongpo Pork. The people there are friendly and kind, but they are working hard make the city more beautiful.
What attractive and inviting Hangzhou is!
答案与解析：
This summer, I visited Hangzhou, and this journey had impressed me deeply.
Being capital of Zhejiang Province, Hangzhou lies in the southeast of China. There are a lot of of interest. Among them the West Lake is the best-known attraction, where water to melt into the sky the distance. Besides, there are several museums in Hangzhou that show its unique culture. What's more, you can enjoy many kinds of local food such as West Lake Fish in Vinegar Sauce and Dongpo Pork. The people there are friendly and kind, they are working hard make the city more beautiful.
attractive and inviting Hangzhou is!
①删除had 考查时态。had done为过去完成时，表示“过去的过去”。但在此句中，visited先发生，impressed后发生，因此用一般过去时，had多余，故删除。
②a改为the 考查冠词。杭州为浙江省的省会，此处表示特指，故把a改为the。
③place改为places 考查名词。place为可数名词，且根据该句中的“a lot of”可知，此处应用其复数形式。
④seem改为seems 考查时态和主谓一致。根据该句中的“is”可知，此处叙述一般的情况，应用一般现在时；该从句的主语是water，是不可数名词，故用seems。
⑤by改为in 考查介词。in the distance固定短语“在远处，在远方”，故把by改为in。
⑥locating改为located 考查非谓语动词。be located in固定短语“位于……”，此处省略了be动词，故用过去分词短语作后置定语。
⑦deliciously改为delicious 考查形容词。根据语境及该句中的“local food”，可知此处应用形容词delicious。
⑧but改为and 考查连词。此处前面意为“这里的人友好、善良”，此处后面意为“他们正在努力工作以使这座城市更美丽”，根据句意可知，前后句之间为并列关系，而不是转折关系，因此把but改为and。
⑨hard后加to 考查非谓语动词。参见上题解析。此处应用动词不定式作目的状语，故在hard后加to。
⑩What改为How 考查感叹句。根据该句中的“attractive and inviting”以及“How＋adj.＋主语＋谓语”结构可知，此处应用How来引导该感叹句。
Test 3
[2019·福建省质量检查] As everybody know, parents are worried too much about their child, especially when the young meet with challenges. So do my parents. They are even more nervous than I when a important test is coming. I have been thinking about talked to them. I'll let them know I have a goal and will work hard to achieve them. When they are convincing that I'll be responsible for that what I should do, they surely won't feel worried. Please keep in mind that our parents love us unconditional. I hope my thought can be helpful to you in dealing the relationship with your parents.
答案与解析：
As everybody ， parents are worried too much about their ， especially when the young meet with challenges. So my parents. They are even more nervous than I when important test is coming. I have been thinking about to them. I'll let them know I have a goal and will work hard to achieve . When they are that I'll be responsible for that what I should do, they surely won't feel worried. Please keep in mind that our parents love us . I hope my thought can be helpful to you in dealing the relationship with your parents.
①know改为knows 考查时态和主谓一致。句意：众所周知，父母太担心他们的孩子了，尤其是当孩子遇到挑战的时候。该句陈述的是客观情况，故用一般现在时；主语为everybody，为第三人称单数，故谓语动词用单数。
②child改为children 考查名词。该处表示“他们的孩子”， child为可数名词，由该句中的“parents”和“their”可知，该处应用复数形式children。
③do改为are 考查倒装句。句意：我的父母也是如此。此处表示前一句话中的谓语所说明的情况也适用于本句主语；根据前一句中的“are worried”可知，该处应用are。
④a改为an 考查冠词。该处泛指“一场重要的考试”，故用不定冠词；important的发音以元音音素开头，故用不定冠词an。
⑤talked改为talking 考查非谓语动词。about为介词，后接动名词talking作宾语。
⑥them改为it 考查代词。句意：“我”会让他们知道“我”有一个目标并且会努力地去实现它。此处代指前面的“a goal”，为单数，故用it。
⑦convincing改为convinced 考查固定用法。句意：当他们确信“我”会对“我”应该做的事情负责时，他们想必不会感到担心。be convinced that...固定短语“确信……”。
⑧删除that 考查宾语从句。分析句子结构可知，该处为宾语从句，作介词for的宾语，连接词what在从句中作do的宾语，句子成分完整，that多余，故删除。
⑨unconditional改为unconditionally 考查副词。一般用副词修饰动词，此处修饰动词love，故用副词形式unconditionally。
⑩dealing后加with 考查介词。句意：我希望我的想法能对你处理与父母之间的关系有所帮助。deal with固定短语“处理，应付”。
Test 4
[2019·昆明质量检测] Our school encouraged us to experience some future careers last vacation. Some students choose to work as either cashiers in a store and waiters at a restaurant. I was one of the 500 student to join in the activity. I decided be an assistant in a photo studio because of I love taking photos. With the help of a advanced photographer in the studio, I opened my imagination in my daily work. I also developed practically skills which are necessary for them to face future challenges. The most important thing I've learned are to improve myself after I get my dream job.
答案与解析：
Our school encouraged us to experience some future careers last vacation. Some students to work as either cashiers in a store waiters at a restaurant. I was one of the 500 to join in the activity. I decided be an assistant in a photo studio because of I love taking photos. With the help of advanced photographer in the studio, I opened my imagination in my daily work. I also developed skills which are necessary for to face future challenges. The most important thing I've learned to improve myself I get my dream job.
①choose改为chose 考查时态。根据上文中的“last vacation”可知，此处描述的情况发生在过去，应用一般过去时。
②and改为or 考查连词。句意：一些学生选择当商店的收银员或者餐馆的服务员。either... or...固定短语“或者……或者……”。
③student改为students 考查名词。根据前面的“one of the 500”可知，此处应用名词的复数形式。
④decided后加to 考查非谓语动词。decide to do sth.固定短语“决定做某事”。
⑤删除of 考查连词。此处应用because引导原因状语从句，故删除of。because of是介词短语，后一般跟名词、代词等。
⑥a改为an 考查冠词。advanced的发音以元音音素开头，所以用冠词an。
⑦practically改为practical 考查形容词。名词前面应用形容词修饰，故用practical。
⑧them改为me 考查代词。句意：我也培养了一些实用的技能，这些技能对我面对未来的挑战来说是必要的。根据句意可知，应把them改为me。
⑨are改为is 考查时态和主谓一致。此处为一般性描述，且主语The most important thing为第三人称单数，故将are改为is。
⑩after改为before/until 考查状语从句。此处表示在“我”找到理想的工作之前/直到“我”找到理想的工作。根据句意可知，应将after改为before/until。
短文改错专练(四)
Test 1
[2019·济南高三模拟]
Dear Mr. Brown，
We have learned that you were going back to America for the summer vacation. To express our thank for your excellent teaching in our school, we have decided have a party for you. The party which will start at 6：30 on Friday evening in the lecture hall. It will possible last an hour. To start with, our monitor will give a speech on behalf of a whole class. Then we would like to invite you to join us and singing some English songs. In the end of the party, we will present you with some gifts and cards, mostly making by ourselves. I believe you will have a good time together.
Looking forward to your coming.
Yours sincerely，
Frank
答案与解析：
Dear Mr. Brown，
We have learned that you going back to America for the summer vacation. To express our for your excellent teaching in our school, we have decided have a party for you. The party will start at 6：30 on Friday evening in the lecture hall. It will last an hour. To start with, our monitor will give a speech on behalf of whole class. Then we would like to invite you to join us and some English songs. the end of the party, we will present you with some gifts and cards, mostly by ourselves. I believe will have a good time together.
Looking forward to your coming.
Yours sincerely，
Frank
①were改为are 考查时态。根据主从句时态一致的原则，并结合语境可知，对方回美国是将来要发生的事情，故用are, be going back to...表示“将要回到……”。
②thank改为thanks 考查名词。根据前面的“our”并结合语境可知，此处应用名词，故用名词thanks“谢意”。
③decided后加to 考查固定搭配。decide to do sth.固定短语“决定做某事”，故在decided后加to。
④删除which 考查关系词。分析句子结构可知，本句是一个简单句，不是一个主从复合句，句中的“will start”作谓语，which多余，故删除。
⑤possible改为possibly 考查副词。分析句子结构可知，本句中的last是动词，表示“持续”，故用副词possibly修饰动词last，在句子中作状语。
⑥a改为the/our 考查限定词。此处表示“代表整个班级/我们整个班级”，故用定冠词the或形容词性物主代词our修饰。
⑦singing改为sing 考查非谓语动词。根据and可知，此处和前面的join并列，应用动词原形。
⑧In改为At 考查介词。at the end of...固定短语“在……结束时”，符合语境；in the end意为“最后”，单独使用，后不跟介词of。
⑨making改为made 考查非谓语动词。分析句子结构可知，动词make和其逻辑主语some gifts and cards构成动宾关系，且和介词by呼应，故用过去分词作后置定语。
⑩you改为we 考查代词。根据句中的together和语境可知，此处表示“我们”，故把you改为we。
Test 2
[2019·合肥市质量检测] Last month our class organized a hike along the Chaobai River, which run through Hebei, Beijing and Tianjin. Much to my disappoint, I found the river was serious polluted. At that moment, I was determined to do what I could protect it. First, under my teacher's help, I used the equipments from the school lab to test the quality of the river water. But then, I used the data I had collected it to analyze the pollution of the river. Finally, I write a report on the pollution of the river to the local government. I also gave a presentation in class where I suggested that we must make changes to protect our water resources.
答案与解析：
Last month our class organized a hike along the Chaobai River, which through Hebei, Beijing and Tianjin. Much to my ， I found the river was polluted. At that moment, I was determined to do what I could protect it. First, my teacher's help, I used the from the school lab to test the quality of the river water. then, I used the data I had collected to analyze the pollution of the river. Finally, I a report on the pollution of the river to the local government. I also gave a presentation in class where I suggested that we must make changes to protect our water resources.
①run改为runs 考查时态和主谓一致。此处描述的是客观事实，应用一般现在时；分析句子结构可知，which引导定语从句，指代先行词the Chaobai River，是第三人称单数，故把run改为runs。
②disappoint改为disappointment 考查名词。much to one's disappointment固定短语“使某人大失所望的是”，故将disappoint改为disappointment。
③serious改为seriously 考查副词。修饰动词polluted应用副词，所以将形容词serious改为副词seriously。
④protect前加to 考查非谓语动词。句中do what I could为do what I could do的省略；根据语境可知，此处表示目的，故在protect前加to。
⑤under改为with 考查介词。with one's help固定短语“在某人的帮助下”，故将under改为with。
⑥equipments改为equipment 考查名词。equipment是不可数名词，没有复数形式，所以将equipments改为equipment。
⑦But改为And 考查连词。根据上文中的First和下文中的Finally可知，此处是作者保护河流的第二条措施，所以应是顺承关系而不是转折关系，故将But改为And。
⑧删除it 考查代词。该句含有定语从句I had collected，修饰先行词the data，关系代词作从句谓语had collected的宾语而被省略，所以代词it多余，故删除。
⑨write改为wrote 考查时态。根据第一句中的时间状语“Last month”可知，该文描述的是发生在过去的事，故用一般过去时。
⑩must改为should或删除must 考查虚拟语气。此处that引导的是宾语从句，且主句谓语动词为suggest，意为“建议”，that从句的谓语只能用“should＋动词原形”结构，且should可以省略，故可将must改为should或删除must。
Test 3
[2019·长沙一模] Welcome to the Great Wall. Measured more than 6,000 kilometers in length, the Great Wall is known as the long wall in the world. It has a long history of more than 2,000 years. That is amazing about the Great Wall is that it is main made of stones and bricks, and all the construction was done by hand. Though it was used to protect the country from foreign invaders, every few hundred meters along with the Great Wall, there was a watchtower. Now, as symbol of China, the Great Wall will become one of the most famous tourist attractions in the world. It is no wonderful that the Great Wall attract hundreds of thousands of foreign tourists every year.
答案与解析：
Welcome to the Great Wall. more than 6, 000 kilometers in length, the Great Wall is known as the wall in the world. It has a long history of more than 2,000 years. is amazing about the Great Wall is that it is made of stones and bricks, and all the construction was done by hand. it was used to protect the country from foreign invaders, every few hundred meters along the Great Wall, there was a watchtower. Now, as symbol of China, the Great Wall become one of the most famous tourist attractions in the world. It is no that the Great Wall hundreds of thousands of foreign tourists every year.
①Measured改为Measuring 考查非谓语动词。分析句子结构可知，动词measure和其逻辑主语the Great Wall构成主谓关系，故应用其现在分词形式。
②long改为longest 考查形容词。根据该句中的“the”“in the world”并结合常识可知，长城是世界上最长的城墙，故用形容词的最高级。
③That改为What 考查主语从句。分析句子结构可知，此处引导主语从句，连接词在从句中作主语，故用What来引导该主语从句。
④main改为mainly 考查副词。修饰动词应用副词，故把main改为mainly。
⑤Though改为As/Since/Because 考查连词。根据前后句的句意可知，此处表示原因，故用连词As/Since/Because。
⑥删除with 考查介词。along the Great Wall表示“沿着长城”， with多余，故删除。
⑦as后加a 考查冠词。symbol为可数名词，此处泛指“中国的一个象征”，且symbol的发音以辅音音素开头，故在as后加a。
⑧will改为has 考查时态。根据语境可知，此处表示长城已经成为全世界最著名的风景名胜之一，故应使用现在完成时。
⑨wonderful改为wonder 考查固定用法。It is no wonder that...固定短语“……不足为奇”。
⑩attract改为attracts 考查时态和主谓一致。此处描述的是一般的情况，应用一般现在时；句子主语为the Great Wall，是第三人称单数，故把attract改为attracts。
Test 4
[2019·山西八校联考] Hi, Mike. How are you going to celebrate your birthday the next month? If you hadn't arranged anything, come to the concert to be holding by my favorite band in the city stadium. I'm sure you will not regret it. The concert will be Sunday. Clearly it will be a hit, because the ticket of the concert are sold very well. The only problem is when the performance starts quite lately — at nine p．m. We can take a bus there, so there will be no bus when the concert is over. I will ask your dad to pick us up and you can stay in my home for the night.
答案与解析：
Hi, Mike. How are you going to celebrate your birthday next month? If you arranged anything, come to the concert to be by my favorite band in the city stadium. I'm sure you will not regret it. The concert will be Sunday. Clearly it will be a hit, because the of the concert are very well. The only problem is the performance starts quite — at nine p．m. We can take a bus there, there will be no bus when the concert is over. I will ask dad to pick us up and you can stay in my home for the night.
①删除next前的the 考查冠词。next month表示从现在算起的下一个月。the next month表示从过去或将来某时算起的下个月。从全文看，作者现在在询问对方下个月如何庆祝他的生日，显然是指从现在算起的下个月。
②hadn't改为haven't 考查时态。如果你还没有安排任何生日庆祝活动，请来看我最喜欢的乐队在市体育场举行的演唱会吧。表示“你还没有安排”，应该用现在完成时，而非过去完成时，因为这里不存在“过去之过去”。
③holding改为held 考查非谓语动词。此处作后置定语，hold与被修饰词之间是逻辑上的动宾关系且表将来故用不定式的被动式。
④be后加on 考查介词。如果没有介词，表示“演唱会是一个周日”，不符合逻辑。加上介词后，表示“这个演唱会在周日举行”，符合上下文意思。
⑤ticket改为tickets 考查名词。本句谓语是are，再根据上下文，演唱会的票应是复数，故用tickets。
⑥sold改为selling 考查语态。sell在此表示“有销路”，sth. sell well/badly固定短语“某物畅销/不畅销”，不用于被动语态。
⑦when改为that 考查表语从句。根据句意和分析句子结构可知，表语从句成分及意思完整，是在说明“演唱会开始的时间很晚”这一情况，故用that引导该表语从句。
⑧lately改为late 考查副词。late表示“晚，迟”，但lately表示“最近”，与上下文意思不符，故lately改为late。
⑨so改为but 考查连词。此处表示“我们去的时候可以坐公交车，但是演唱会结束时就没有公交车了”，前后分句为转折关系，故用but。
⑩your改为my 考查代词。根据下文的“你可以在我家过夜”可知，此处应是“我会让我爸爸来接我们”，故用my。
