(共14张PPT)
话题十一 兴趣爱好
近几年来全国中考有关“兴趣爱好”话题的书面表达较多。考查形式主要采
用要点提示或表格提示;考查方面主要有:
1.简单地介绍与描述你的爱好,喜欢的原因及这些带给你的影响;
2.考生可将自己的思维发散出去,就某一兴趣爱好发表自己的观点。
命题探究
开头句
1.It
goes
without
saying
that
interest
is
the
best
teacher,
and
it
motivates
us
to
put
more
effort
into
things
that
we
enjoy.
2.Our
life
is
full
of
pleasure
because
different
people
have
different
hobbies.
3.A
hobby
plays
an
important
role
in
our
daily
life.
4.It's
necessary
for
us
to
take
up
a
hobby.
亮点句型
中间句
1.Hobbies
not
only
make
our
life
colorful,
but
also
bring
us
lots
of
benefits.
2.Hobbies
can
bring
us
not
only
happiness
but
also
knowledge.
3.I
love
music
that
I
can
sing
along
with.
4.He
likes
travelling
best.
In
this
way,
he
can
experience
different
life
and
learn
about
different
cultures.
结尾句
1.But
we
shouldn't
spend
all
our
time
on
our
favorite
hobbies,
because
there
are
many
other
interesting
things
to
do
in
life,
and
we
should
try
to
do
something
new
or
different.
2.I
hope
we
enjoy
our
hobbies
and
our
dreams
can
come
true.
3.I'll
keep
on
this
hobby
forever.
4.A
good
book
is
a
good
friend.
好句积累
1.Love
is
the
beginning
of
knowledge.爱为学问之始。
2.Where
there
is
no
interest,
there
is
no
memory.哪里没有兴趣,哪里就没有记
忆。
3.Love
is
the
first
step
towards
knowledge.喜爱即获得知识的第一步。
4.Happy
is
the
man
who
is
living
by
his
hobby.醉心于某种爱好的人是幸福的。
请以“My
hobby”为题写一篇短文,必须包含以下要点和词语提示信息。
1.What
is
your
hobby
2.How
do
you
develop
your
hobby
3.Share
your
happiness
you
get
from
your
hobby.
Give
at
least
one
example.
提示词语:practice,
different,
forget,
no
longer
要求:1.可以适当发挥,文中不得出现真实姓名和学校名称;
2.语言通顺,意思连贯,条理清楚,书写规范;
3.词数:100词左右。短文开头已给出,不计入总词数。
典例剖析
My
hobby
Everyone
has
his
or
her
own
hobby
and
so
do
I.
写作指导
本文是有关谈论爱好的记叙文。写作要点:你的爱好是什么;你是怎样培养自己
的爱好的;爱好给自己带来的快乐。根据提示要求进行,不可遗漏要点,注意连
接词及句式的运用。主体时态为一般现在时,人称为第一人称。
谋篇布局
范文评析
My
hobby
①Everyone
has
his
or
her
own
hobby
and
so
do
I.
My
hobby
is
listening
to
music.
②When
I
was
a
child
I
enjoyed
listening
to
music,
especially
the
cartoon
music.
Though
I'm
not
good
at
it,
I
often
lose
myself
in
it.
When
I
am
in
trouble,
music
can
make
me
calm
down.
When
I
am
very
tired,
it
can
make
me
comfortable.
When
I
am
angry
at
something,
it
can
also
make
me
hap-
py
again.
Listening
to
music
keeps
me
in
a
good
mood
and
it's
good
for
my
health.
③Do
you
like
listening
to
music
If
not,
I
hope
you
can
have
a
try,
and
you
will
find
it
so
good.
①开头:点题——我的爱好是听音乐。
②正文:叙述自己是怎样培养爱好的及爱好给自己带来的快乐。
③结尾:建议大家都去尝试一种爱好。
亮点仿写
短语
1.listen
to听……
2.enjoy
doing
sth.喜欢做某事
3.be
good
at擅长……
4.lose
oneself
in
sth.沉迷于某事
5.be
in
trouble处于困境中
6.calm
down平静
7.be
angry
at
sth.生某事的气
8.in
a
good
mood好心情
9.be
good
for对……有好处
10.have
a
try试一试
仿写
1.当你对某事生气时,一定要尽力让自己平静下来。比如,你可以听音乐,因为它
能使你的心情很快好起来。(when引导的状语从句,be
angry
at
sth.,
calm
down,
listen
to,
in
a
good
mood)
When
you
are
angry
at
something,
you
should
try
your
best
to
make
yourself
calm
down.
For
example,
you
can
listen
to
music,
because
it
can
make
you
be
in
a
good
mood
soon.
2.我妈妈虽然不擅长唱歌但她喜欢听歌,我经常看到她沉迷于其中。(be
good
at,
enjoy
doing
sth.,
lose
oneself
in
sth.)
Though
my
mother
is
not
good
at
singing,
she
enjoys
listening
to
songs.
I
often
see
her
lose
herself
in
it. (共14张PPT)
话题二 成长变化
全国与“成长变化”话题相关的真题,主要从以下两个角度进行考查:
1.自身的变化;
2.生活的变化。
针对此类话题可以从过去的表现、改变的原因、方法及改变后的表现进行写
作。
命题探究
开头句
1.The
biggest
personal
change
I
have
ever
made
is
that
I
have
fallen
in
love
with
reading.
2.From
my
point
of
view,
we
should
change
ourselves
when
the
situation
can't
be
changed
any
more.
3.Great
changes
have
taken
place
in
our
country
in
the
past
10
years.
4.We'd
better
change
our
attitude
towards
these
difficulties.
5.I
have
changed
a
lot
during
the
past
three
years.
亮点句型
中间句
1.With
the
help
of
teachers
and
classmates,
I
have
made
great
progress
in
English.
2.I
used
to
be
a
bit
shy,
but
now
I
become
outgoing.
3.At
that
time,
I
didn't
enjoy
books
at
all.
4.My
parents
and
my
teachers
used
to
worry
about
me,
but
now
they
are
both
pleased
with
me.
5.I
am
very
glad
that
I
have
made
great
progress
in
the
past
three
years.
结尾句
1.Thanks
for
the
middle
school
life,
I
have
changed
so
much!
Thanks
to
the
teach-
ers
and
classmates,
I
have
learnt
so
much!
Never
will
I
forget
the
valuable
middle
school
life!
2.Books
are
my
friends,
and
they
have
and
will
benefit
me
a
lot.
3.In
short,
our
life
has
become
comfortable
and
convenient.
4.I
believe
my
life
will
be
better
and
better
in
the
future.
好句积累
1.Never
underestimate
your
power
to
change
yourself!永远不要低估你改变自我
的能力!
2.Every
change
is
a
miracle
to
think
about,
and
every
moment
that
happens
can
be
a
miracle.一切变化都是值得思考的奇迹,每一刹那发生的事都可以成为奇迹。
3.Everything
in
the
world
is
ever-changing;change
is
the
eternal
truth
of
nature.世
上万物都是千变万化的,变化是大自然永恒的真理。
(2016河南)
我们的每一次变化都见证着我们的成长。请以“The
biggest
personal
change
I'
ve
ever
made”为题,并根据要点和要求,用英语写一篇短文。
1.要点:1)变化是什么;
2)变化是如何发生的;
3)变化后有何感受。
2.要求:1)文中不得出现真实姓名和学校名称;
2)词数80左右。
典例剖析
The
biggest
personal
change
I've
ever
made
写作指导
本文是记叙文,讲述变化及变化发生的过程和感受;主要使用的时态有:一般现
在时、一般过去时和一般将来时,注意时态的交错转换;人称以第一人称为主。
谋篇布局
范文评析
The
biggest
personal
change
I've
ever
made
①The
biggest
personal
change
I‘ve
ever
made
is
that
I
have
fallen
in
love
with
reading.
②When
I
was
a
child,
I
didn't
enjoy
books
at
all.
Later,
my
mother
always
read
stories
for
me
and
bought
me
books.
Gradually
I
began
to
love
reading.
③While
reading,
I
feel
like
talking
with
a
wise
man.
Reading
is
also
a
fantastic
way
to
pass
my
free
time.
④Books
are
my
friends.
And
they
have
and
will
benefit
me
a
lot.
①开头:“我”经历的最大的变化是什么
②正文:变化是如何发生的
③④结尾:变化后的感受
亮点仿写
短语
1.fall
in
love
with
sth./sb.爱上某物/人
2.not...at
all一点儿也不……
3.feel
like
doing
sth.感觉像是在做某事
4.talk
with
sb.与某人交谈
5.benefit
sb.
a
lot使某人受益很多
仿写
1.使我感到自豪的最重要的事情是我儿子爱上了学习。(that引导的定语从句;
fall
in
love
with...)
The
most
important
thing
that
makes
me
feel
proud
is
that
my
son
has
fallen
in
love
with
studying.
2.当我乘坐高铁时,我感觉像是在地面上飞行一样。(While...,
I
feel
like
doing
sth.)
While
taking
the
high-speed
railway,
I
feel
like
flying
on
the
ground.
3.当我小的时候,我一点儿也不喜欢和父母交谈。但现在我认识到与他们交谈
使我受益很多。(when引导的时间状语从句;not...at
all;talk
with;benefit
sb.
a
lot)
When
I
was
a
child,
I
didn't
like
talking
with
my
parents
at
all.
But
now
I
realize
talking
with
them
will
benefit
me
a
lot. (共13张PPT)
话题五 健康与急救
全国近几年关于“健康与急救”话题的书面表达涉及较广,主要从以下几个角
度命题:
1.谈论健康饮食以及如何保持健康;
2.如何保障个人的人身安全及对生活中常见的安全注意事项进行描述;
3.关于健康,谈自己的看法与做法。
命题探究
开头句
1.It
is
very
important
to
keep
healthy.
2.More
and
more
people
realize
the
importance
of
keeping
healthy.
3.What
is
the
most
important
thing
in
the
world
I
think
it
is
health.
亮点句型
中间句
1.It's
necessary
for
us
to
do
enough
exercise
to
keep
healthy.
2.Eating
fruit
and
vegetables
is
good
for
your
health,
while
eating
junk
food
is
bad
for
your
health.
3.We
neither
go
to
sleep
too
late
nor
get
up
too
late.
结尾句
1.If
we
can
follow
the
advice,
I
believe
we
can
have
a
healthier
body
and
a
better
life.
2.We
must
try
our
best
to
protect
and
value
our
lives.
3.I
hope
you
are
healthy
and
enjoy
your
life.
好句积累
1.Good
health
is
over
wealth.健康是最大的财富。
2.Health
is
happiness.健康就是幸福。
3.Good
medicine
always
tastes
bitter.良药苦口利于病。
4.Early
to
bed
and
early
to
rise
makes
a
man
healthy.早睡早起身体好。
3月26日是第二十三个全国中小学生安全教育日。今年安全教育日的主题是
“普及安全知识,确保生命安全”。暑假即将来临,为了进一步增强中小学生的
安全意识,提高自我保护能力,学校将举行以安全为主题的征文活动。请你根据
下面表格内容写一篇题为“How
can
we
make
ourselves
safe ”的英语短文。
典例剖析
要点
内容
饮食安全
不吃变质食物,少吃或不吃垃圾食品
交友安全
网上慎重交友,不和陌生人交谈
旅行安全
照看好私人物品,遇险及时报警
游泳安全
不独自游泳,不到河、湖里游泳
……
……
提示词:be
careful(小心)
go
bad(变质)
要求:1.必须包含所给的全部要点及内容,可适当发挥。
2.文中不能出现真实的姓名和学校名。
3.词数100左右,开头已给出,不计入总词数。
How
can
we
make
ourselves
safe
As
teenagers,
to
learn
how
to
make
ourselves
safe
is
especially
important.
写作指导
本文是篇说明文。写作内容要围绕“如何能使自己安全 ”而进行,根据写作提
示进行描述,不可遗漏要点,可适当发挥,全文应以第一人称为主,时态应为一般
现在时。注意过渡词的使用和句式的多样性。
谋篇布局
范文评析
How
can
we
make
ourselves
safe
①As
teenagers,
to
learn
how
to
make
ourselves
safe
is
especially
impor-
tant.
Here
are
some
of
my
suggestions.
②First,
we
are
supposed
to
be
careful
when
making
friends
online,
which
may
bring
us
unnecessary
troubles.
Second,
remember
never
to
go
swimming
on
our
own
in
the
river
or
lake
because
doing
that
will
probably
put
ourselves
into
dangerous
situations.
Besides,
in
order
to
eat
healthily
and
safely,
we'd
better
eat
less
junk
food
and
not
eat
food
that
goes
bad,
for
they
will
do
harm
to
our
health.
At
last,
when
traveling
outside,
take
care
of
our
personal
things
and
call
the
police
for
help
in
time
if
we
are
in
danger.
③In
short,
safety
must
come
first!
①开头:引出话题:要分享一些如何使自己安全的建议。
②正文:使自己安全的具体措施及理由。过渡语运用恰当,句式结构合
理且多样。
③结尾:再次强调安全的重要性。
亮点仿写
短语
1.be
supposed
to
do
sth.应该做某事
2.make
friends交朋友
3.on
one's
own靠某人自己
4.in
order
to为了
5.do
harm
to对……有害
6.take
care
of照顾
7.call
the
police
for
help
in
time及时报警求助
8.be
in
danger处于危险之中
仿写
1.为了将来能好好照顾自己,从现在开始我们应该靠我们自己去做一些事情。
(in
order
to,
take
care
of,
be
supposed
to
do
sth.,
on
one's
own)
In
order
to
take
care
of
ourselves
well
in
the
future,
we
are
supposed
to
do
some-
thing
on
our
own
from
now
on.
2.无论何时我们处于危险之中,我们应该及时报警求助。(whenever引导的状语
从句,be
in
danger,
call
the
police
for
help
in
time)
Whenever
we
are
in
danger,
we
should
call
the
police
for
help
in
time. (共14张PPT)
话题四 假期活动
分析近几年全国有关“假期活动”的书面表达可发现,这类话题主要从以下两
个角度进行考查:
1.陈述自己的假期活动计划,时态为一般将来时;
2.陈述自己经历的假期活动,包括活动后的感受和收获,时态为一般过去时。
命题探究
开头句
1.I
am
going
to
travel
to
some
places
of
interest
which
can
open
my
eyes.
2.As
for
travelling,
I'm
planning
to
go
to
Hainan.
But
whether
going
there
or
not
will
depend
on
the
weather.
3.It's
necessary
for
us
to
take
a
meaningful
summer
vacation
after
the
final
exam.
4.There
are
many
kinds
of
activities
for
us
to
take
part
in.
亮点句型
中间句
1.You'll
be
sure
to
experience
many
new
things
when
travelling.
2.By
travelling,
we
can
enjoy
the
beautiful
scenery
and
relax
ourselves.
3.Sometimes,
we
go
to
the
streets
to
collect
rubbish
or
go
to
the
hospital
to
cheer
up
the
sick
children.
4.Besides,
I
always
read
some
books
during
my
holiday
because
reading
can
im-
prove
my
writing.
5.I
took
many
photos,
ate
delicious
food
and
bought
special
gifts.
结尾句
1.Above
all,
I
hope
all
of
us
can
have
a
pleasant/wonderful
vacation/holiday.
2.I
will
never
forget
the
vacation.
3.Travel
can
help
me
to
refresh
my
mood.
When
I
come
back,
I
will
be
full
of
ener-
gy
again.
4.All
of
us
felt
very
happy
though
we
were
so
tired.
好句积累
1.Travel
broadens
the
mind.旅行开阔心灵。
2.Travel
ten
thousand
miles
and
read
ten
thousand
books.行万里路,读万卷书。
3.All
roads
lead
to
Rome.条条大路通罗马。
4.If
you
don't
go
to
travel,miss
more
than
just
scenery.如果你不去旅游,错过的不
只是风景。
5.One
who
fails
to
reach
the
Great
Wall
is
not
a
hero.不到长城非好汉。
暑期将至,我们都应该制订合理的假期计划。请你根据以下要点提示,以“My
Summer
Vacation
Plan”为题,用英语写一篇短文。
要点提示:
1.放松自己:听音乐,看电影,锻炼身体等;
2.陪伴家人:旅行,散步,与父母交流等;
3.做志愿者:看望老人,赠送礼物,为他们唱歌等;
4.努力学习:阅读书籍,复习知识,为以后学习做准备等;
5.个人观点:……。
典例剖析
要求:
1.词数100左右(短文首句已给出,不计入总词数);
2.要点提示均需涉及,可适当增加内容;
3.字迹工整,卷面整洁,文意连贯,语言流畅;
4.不用真实姓名、校名、地名。
参考词语:
relax
myself,
spend
time
with...,volunteer,
review,
prepare
for
My
Summer
Vacation
Plan
With
the
summer
vacation
coming,
I
will
make
a
plan
for
it.
First,
写作指导
本文是篇说明文。写作时要求围绕要点提示描述假期计划及具体做法,同时要
表达自己的观点,注意过渡词的恰当使用及句式的多样性,主体时态为一般现在
时和一般将来时,人称主要为第一人称。
谋篇布局
范文评析
My
Summer
Vacation
Plan
①With
the
summer
vacation
coming,
I
will
make
a
plan
for
it.
②First,
I'd
like
to
spare
some
time
to
relax
myself
by
listening
to
music,
watching
movies
as
well
as
exercising
to
keep
fit.
Besides,
I
plan
to
spend
more
time
with
my
dear
family.
For
example,
we
can
travel
together
to
somewhere
interesting.
Taking
a
walk
and
communicating
with
my
parents
are
also
advisable
choices.
At
the
same
time,
I'm
going
to
volunteer
in
an
old
peo-
ple's
home.
I
will
buy
some
gifts
and
sing
for
them.
Last
but
not
least,
it's
quite
important
for
me
to
keep
studying
hard.
I
must
prepare
myself
well
for
the
challenging
learning
in
senior
high
school.
I
think
reviewing
what
I
've
learned
in
junior
middle
school
and
reading
more
can
help
me
with
that.
③As
far
as
I'm
concerned,
the
summer
vacation
is
a
precious
time
to
do
something
meaningful.
Therefore
I'm
sure
to
make
the
best
of
it
and
make
my
plan
come
true.
①开头:直入主题:我将要为暑假制订一个计划。引出下文。
②正文:具体描述假期计划要点及具体做法。过渡词及句式运用多样
且恰到好处。
③结尾:表达自己的观点。as
far
as
I'm
concerned的运用使文章更有深
度。
亮点仿写
短语
1.make
a
plan制订计划
2.spare
some
time
to
do
sth.抽出时间去做某事
3.plan
to
do
sth.计划做某事
4.spend
some
time
with
sb.和某人一起度过一段时光
5.take
a
walk
散步
6.communicate
with
sb.与某人交流
7.prepare
for为……做准备
8.as
far
as
I'm
concerned依我看来
仿写
1.依我看来,对于父母来说每天抽出时间与孩子进行交流是很有必要的。(as
far
as
I'm
concerned,spare
some
time
to
do
sth.,communicate
with
sb.)
As
far
as
I'm
concerned,it's
very
necessary
for
parents
to
spare
some
time
to
communicate
with
their
children
every
day.
2.作为学生,我们应该做好制订假期计划的准备以便我们能过一个有意义的假
期。(prepare
for,
make
a
plan)
As
students,
we
should
prepare
for
making
a
plan
for
the
vacation
so
that
we
can
have
a
meaningful
vacation.
3.散步是和我们的家人一起度过时光的好方式。(take
a
walk,
spend
some
time
with
sb.)
Taking
a
walk
is
a
good
way
to
spend
some
time
with
our
family. (共12张PPT)
话题一 保护环境
近几年中考与“保护环境”话题相关的书面表达越来越受命题者的青睐,
从命
题来看,通常有以下三种设题角度:
1.记叙你参加过的一次环保活动;
2.对环境污染的看法和感受;
3.保护环境的措施和建议。
命题探究
开头句
1.It's
everyone's
duty
to
love
and
protect
the
environment.
2.To
have
a
healthy
living
environment,
we
must
keep
the
air
clean
and
fresh.
3.The
environment
is
becoming
worse
and
worse
and
we
must
do
something
to
prevent
people
from
polluting
the
environment.
4.As
a
middle
school
student,
it's
our
duty
to
help
build
a
green
city.
亮点句型
中间句
1.We
should
neither
throw
litter
onto
the
ground
nor
escape
serious
problems
that
we
face
today.
2.We
are
supposed
to
plant
more
trees,
reduce
the
waste
we
produce,
and
recycle
the
waste
paper
and
soft
drink
cans.
3.You'd
better
walk
or
ride
a
bike
instead
of
taking
a
bus
or
a
taxi
if
you
travel
a
short
distance.
4.You
ought
to
turn
off
the
lights
when
you
leave
a
room.
结尾句
1.We
should
do
everything
we
can
to
protect
the
environment
from
now
on.
2.If
we
try
our
best,
the
environment
will
be
better
and
better.
3.If
everyone
makes
a
contribution
to
protecting
the
environment,
the
world
will
become
more
beautiful.
好句积累
1.Don't
let
our
tears
become
the
last
drop
of
water
on
the
earth.不要让我们的眼泪
成为地球上最后一滴水。
2.Care
for
the
environment,
because
we
have
only
one
earth,
and
this
is
our
com-
mon
home!
爱护环境吧,因为我们只有一个地球,这是我们共同的家园!
3.Actions
speak
louder
than
words.行胜于言。
4.Easier
said
than
done.说起来容易做起来难。
5.Nature,
to
be
commanded,
must
be
obeyed.要想征服自然就必须服从自然。
习主席在十九大报告中提出要建设美丽中国、推进绿色发展、解决环境问题,
足见习主席对环保的重视!作为新时代的中学生,如何响应习主席的号召,从
“我”做起保护环境 请用英语写一篇短文,表达你的想法。
要求:1.词数:100左右。
2.字迹工整,语言流畅,表达准确,逻辑清晰。
3.要有复合句的表达。
典例剖析
写作指导
本文写保护环境的具体做法及原因,体裁为说明文。时态为一般现在时,提出建
议可以用情态动词。写作要点:保护环境的重要性及具体做法。
谋篇布局
范文评析
①The
environmental
problems
are
very
serious
these
days.In
order
to
make
our
country
more
beautiful,
we
students
should
do
something
to
protect
the
environment.
②I
think
we
should
turn
off
the
lights
to
save
electricity
when
we
leave
the
room.
And
when
we
brush
our
teeth,
we'd
better
turn
off
the
taps.
Also,
we
should
advise
our
parents
to
take
the
bus
to
work
instead
of
driving
and
use
reusable
bags
when
shopping.
Only
if
we
know
what
to
do
in
our
daily
life
can
we
make
a
difference.
③How
important
it
is
for
us
to
protect
the
environment!
①指出保护环境的迫切性,提出我们应为保护环境做些事情,引出
下文。
②具体做法。提建议的句式及情态动词用得恰当。
③再次强调我们要保护环境。
亮点仿写
短语
1.in
order
to为了
2.protect
the
environment保护环境
3.turn
off
the
lights/taps关灯/水龙头
4.advise
sb.
to
do
sth.建议某人做某事
5.instead
of代替
6.make
a
difference起作用
仿写
1.为了保护环境,我建议人人都要从小事做起而不是仅仅说说而已。(in
order
to,
protect
the
environment,advise
sb.
to
do
sth.)
In
order
to
protect
the
environment,
I
advise
everyone
to
start
with
something
small
instead
of
just
saying.
2.只有你做出决定我们才能知道如何去处理这个问题。(only
if引导的条件状
语从句)
Only
if
you
make
a
decision
can
we
know
how
to
deal
with
this
problem. (共13张PPT)
话题八 人际沟通
近几年中考关于“人际沟通”的话题,在全国中考的书面表达中所占的范围和
比重是相当大的,此类作文命题通常有下列几个角度:
1.中学生遇到的烦恼并给出建议或做法;
2.跟父母或家人、朋友、老师、同学之间的相处问题;
3.感恩周围的人(家人、朋友、老师、同学等)。
命题探究
开头句
1.Communication
plays
an
important
role
in
our
daily
life.
2.In
today's
society,
we
have
to
work
cooperatively
with
others.
3.Be
confident
about
yourself
and
forget
others'
opinions
about
you.
4.You'd
better
try
to
do
something
to
change
yourself.
亮点句型
中间句
1.A
man
who
is
confident
about
himself
tends
to
have
a
bigger
chance
to
succeed.
2.The
more
you
join
in
the
group
activities,
the
more
outgoing
you
will
be.
3.Start
to
chat
with
your
classmates
either
online
or
face
to
face.
结尾句
1.If
you
can
do
this,
I
believe
you
will
be
more
confident.
2.I
hope
you
can
get
on
well
with
the
people
around
you
and
make
good
friends
with
them
in
the
future.
3.Thank
you,
my
parents,
my
teachers
and
my
classmates.
好句积累
1.There
is
kindness
to
be
found
everywhere.人间处处有温情。
2.Respect
yourself,
or
no
one
else
will
respect
you.要人尊敬,必须自重。
3.We
should
never
remember
the
benefits
we
offered
nor
forget
the
favor
we
re-
ceived.自己的好事别去提,别人的恩惠要铭记。
亲爱的同学,在你三年的初中生活中,总会与有些同学成为朋友。请以
“My
Best
Friend
and
I”
为题,根据以下要求与提示,用英语写一篇短文。
要求:
1.如果你最好的朋友是女生,请用名字Mary;如果是男生,请用Jeff。短文中不得
出现任何真实人名、校名及其他相关信息,否则不予评分。
2.词数100左右。
提示:
1.Who
is
your
best
friend
典例剖析
2.How
long
have
you
been
friends
And
how
did
you
become
friends
3.How
are
you
the
same
as
and
different
from
your
best
friend
And
what
do
you
like
about
him/her
My
Best
Friend
and
I
写作指导
本文是篇写人叙事类的记叙文。围绕提示要点分别叙述:谁是你最好的朋友
你们成为好朋友多久和你们是怎样成为朋友的 你们的相同点和不同点是什
么 你喜欢他/她什么 人称以第一人称为主,主体时态为一般过去时和一般现在
时。
谋篇布局
范文评析
My
Best
Friend
and
I
①We
are
graduating
from
our
school
soon.
I
miss
so
many
good
friends,
especially
my
best
friend
Jeff.
②We've
been
friends
for
three
years.
Three
years
ago,
I
was
a
new
stu-
dent
in
our
class.
I
felt
very
lonely.
My
English
was
very
poor.
Jeff
often
helped
me
learn
English.
With
his
help,
I
made
much
progress
in
English.
So
we
became
friends.
③Though
we
are
both
tall
and
thin,
we
are
different.
Jeff
is
more
outgoing
than
me
and
he
is
good
at
playing
soccer.
But
I'm
quieter
than
him.
I'm
good
at
playing
basketball.
We
often
help
each
other.
He
is
very
kind
and
friendly.
So
we
get
on
well
with
each
other.
④I
hope
he
will
have
a
bright
future
and
that
our
friendship
will
last
for-
ever.
①开头:直入主题:指出最好的朋友是谁。
②③正文:阐述成为最好的朋友有多久、如何成为最好朋友的及与好
朋友之间的相同与不同之处,并指出喜欢好朋友的什么。
④结尾:表达对最好朋友和这份友谊的美好祝愿。
亮点仿写
短语
1.make
progress取得进步
2.both...and...既……又……
3.be
good
at...擅长……
4.help
each
other相互帮助
5.get
on
well
with
each
other相互之间融洽相处
仿写
1.尽管我爸爸不擅长做运动,但他喜欢看世界杯。(though引导的让步状语从句,
be
good
at)
Though
my
father
is
not
good
at
playing
sports,
he
likes
watching
the
World
Cup.
2.相互帮助使得我和我的同桌取得了很大进步。(help
each
other,
make
progress)
Helping
each
other
made
my
deskmate
and
I
make
great
progress. (共13张PPT)
话题七 梦想与未来
分析近几年中考有关“梦想与未来”话题的书面表达,可知这类话题的作文要
求考生发挥自己的想象力写出对未来生活的畅想和期待。主要考查角度为:
1.畅想未来的生活;
2.描述个人的梦想。
命题探究
开头句
1.Everyone
has
his
or
her
own
dreams.
Dreams
are
regarded
as
the
goal
of
one's
life.
2.What
do
you
think
the
world
will
be
like
in
100
years
3.Living
without
an
aim
is
like
sailing
without
a
compass.
4.I
look
forward
to
being
a
great
scientist
like
Newton.
5.I
dream
to
be
a
nurse
in
the
future.
亮点句型
中间句
1.I
think
our
life
in
the
future
will
be
more
and
more
beautiful.
2.I
will
try
my
best
to
achieve
my
dream
by
working
hard.
3.In
the
future,
there
is
no
doubt
that
the
world
will
develop
well,
and
our
life
will
be
facilitated
by
all
kinds
of
new
technologies.
4.First,
I
would
like
to
study
hard
and
try
to
learn
more
dancing
skills.
结尾句
1.As
long
as
we
work
hard,
we
will
realize
our
dreams.
2.I
believe
if
I
put
my
heart
into
it,
I
can
be
successful
one
day.
3.I'm
looking
forward
to
the
future.
4.Never
give
up
your
dream
or
lose
heart.
好句积累
1.Where
there
is
a
will,
there
is
a
way.有志者,事竟成。
2.Nothing
seek,
nothing
find.没有追求就没有收获。
3.Great
hopes
make
great
men.伟大的抱负造就伟大的人物。
4.A
good
beginning
is
half
done.良好的开端是成功的一半。
5.No
pain,
no
gain.不劳则无获。
梦想是前行的指路灯,是对美好未来的憧憬,人要有梦想才能有前行的动力。请
以My
dream为题写一篇英语短文。谈谈你的梦想、理由及你准备如何实现
它。
1.要点:
1)你的梦想是什么;
2)你为什么有这个梦想;
3)你将如何实现它。
2.要求:
典例剖析
1)文中不得出现真实姓名和学校名称;
2)词数100左右。
写作指导
本文是篇介绍类的说明文。要求围绕写作要点写一篇关于梦想的文章。主要
使用时态有:一般现在时(陈述梦想)和一般将来时(阐述实现梦想的计划),写作
时不可遗漏要点,可适当发挥,并且要注意连接词的使用。
谋篇布局
范文评析
My
dream
①Everyone
has
his
dream.
My
dream
is
to
be
a
reporter.
②I
think
it
is
fun
to
be
a
reporter.
I
can
not
only
see
different
people
but
also
can
make
friends
with
more
people.
What's
more,
I
can
tell
people
the
truth
about
something
popular.
What
can
I
do
to
become
a
reporter
I
will
write
articles
for
magazines
or
newspapers.
When
I
graduate
from
high
school
I
will
go
to
college
in
Beijing,
because
I
think
I
can
learn
more
there.
I
want
to
work
at
a
TV
station
so
that
I
can
travel
around
the
world.
③I
think
if
I
work
hard,
my
dream
will
come
true.
①开头:点明主题:指出梦想是什么。
②正文:阐述梦想的理由及如何实现。
③结尾:表达自己的期望。
亮点仿写
短语
1.not
only...but
also...不但……而且……
2.make
friends
with
sb.与某人交朋友
3.write
articles写文章
4.go
to
college上大学
5.want
to
do
sth.想做某事
6.work
at...在……工作
7.travel
around
the
world周游世界
8.work
hard努力学习
9.come
true实现
仿写
1.不仅孩子们而且父母也想去周游世界。(not
only...but
also...,
want
to
do
sth.,
travel
around
the
world)
Not
only
children
but
also
parents
want
to
travel
around
the
world.
2.为了实现我的梦想,我要好好学习而且上大学去上海工作。(come
true,
work
hard,
go
to
college)
In
order
to
make
my
dream
come
true,
I
will
work
hard
and
go
to
college
to
work
in
Shanghai. (共13张PPT)
话题九 人物介绍
近几年中考关于“人物介绍”类的话题作文,所占比重较大。此类话题主要涉
及的内容有:人物的外貌描写、性格和爱好、个人经历、变化及自己对此人的
看法和认识等。考查角度有:
1.介绍自己;
2.介绍自己所熟悉的名人、同学或朋友等。
命题探究
开头句
1.Friends
are
important
in
our
life.
Everyone
needs
friendship.
2.That's
the
most
important
reason
that
makes
me
so
popular.
3.I
would
like
to
make
friends
with
people
who
are
honest.
4.The
person
I
love
most
is
my
mother.
亮点句型
中间句
1.In
our
spare
time,
we
take
part
in
all
kinds
of
activities
together.
2.Thanks
to
him,
I
have
made
great
progress
in
many
ways.
3.I
can
always
tell
some
jokes
or
funny
stories
to
make
my
friends
laugh.
4.He
is
outgoing
and
there
is
always
a
smile
on
his
face,
so
everyone
likes
to
play
with
him.
5.He
is
honest,friendly
and
he
is
always
ready
to
help
others.
6.He
likes
playing
basketball
and
he
is
good
at
singing
pop
songs.
结尾句
1.If
everyone
is
kind
and
warm-hearted
like
Li
Hua,
I
believe
our
world
will
be-
come
more
and
more
beautiful.
2.In
my
opinion,
friends
are
the
persons
whom
we
can
share
happiness
and
sorrow
with.
3.I
think
a
true
friend
plays
an
important
role
in
our
life.
4.Besides,
I
feel
like
making
friends
with
different
people,
no
matter
where
they
come
from.
I'm
sure
that
I
will
get
along
well
with
them.
5.It's
important
for
us
to
have
true
friends
because
we
can
learn
to
share
something
with
others.
好句积累
1.Friendship
is
like
wine—the
older,
the
better.友谊如美酒,越陈越醇厚。
2.A
faithful
friend
is
hard
to
find.知音难觅。
3.Friendship
is
like
money,
easier
made
than
kept.友谊如金钱,得来容易维持难。
4.A
life
without
the
friend
is
a
life
without
the
sun.在世无朋友,犹如生活无太阳。
5.Make
new
friends
and
keep
the
old
ones,
because
one
is
silver
and
the
other
is
gold.结交新朋友,不忘老朋友,因为一方是银,另一方是金。
每个人都是独一无二的,都有着与众不同之处,人们喜欢你一定会有很多原因。
请以“What
makes
me
a
good
friend ”为题写一篇英语短文。
要求:
1.语言表达准确,短文连贯通顺;
2.文中不得出现真实姓名和学校名称;
3.100词左右。
典例剖析
What
makes
me
a
good
friend
写作指导
本文是介绍类的说明文。主体时态为一般现在时,也涉及一般将来时或一般过
去时。注意时态的交错转换。人称以第一人称为主。主要内容:介绍自己成为
一个好朋友的原因——人们喜欢“我”的原因——“我”的优点。
谋篇布局
范文评析
What
makes
me
a
good
friend
①I
am
a
boy
easy
to
get
along
with.
②I
never
get
angry
easily.
That's
the
most
important
reason
that
makes
me
so
popular.
③I
am
always
ready
to
help
others.
Whenever
my
friends
meet
with
trou-
bles,
I
will
give
them
a
hand
without
even
a
moment's
thought.
④Besides,
I'm
quite
humorous.
I
can
always
tell
some
jokes
or
funny
sto-
ries
to
make
my
friends
laugh.(I
can
always
tell
some
jokes
or
funny
sto-
ries
that/which
make
my
friends
laugh.)
They
say
time
spent
with
me
is
full
of
fun.
⑤I'm
honest.
I
never
tell
lies.
So
I'm
a
friend
worth
trusting.
①开头:介绍“我”成为好朋友的原因。
②③④写了“我”受大家欢迎的原因,要点明确,举例说明更清晰。
⑤结尾:重新强调“我”的优点。
亮点仿写
短语
1.get
along
with
sb.与某人融洽相处
2.be
ready
to
do
sth.准备做某事
3.give
sb.
a
hand帮助某人
4.tell
jokes讲笑话
5.make
sb.
do
sth.使某人做某事
6.sth.
be
worth
doing值得做某事
仿写
1.那就是使我的学生们看了一遍又一遍的书。(定语从句,make
sb.
do
sth.)
That's
the
book
that
makes
my
students
read
again
and
again.
2.无论何时我帮助别人,我总是感到很快乐。(whenever引导的从句,give
sb.
a
hand)
Whenever
I
give
somebody
a
hand,
I
always
feel
happy.
3.擅长讲笑话也是与某人融洽相处的一种好方法,值得学习。(tell
jokes,get
a-
long
with
sb.,
sth.
be
worth
doing)
Being
good
at
telling
jokes
is
also
a
good
way
to
get
along
with
others;it
is
worth
learning. (共13张PPT)
话题十 如何学习
分析近几年中考与“如何学习”话题相关的真题可知,此话题主要涉及以下两
个角度:
1.介绍自己的学习方法,可根据自己在学习生活中的积累进行写作;
2.介绍某一种学习方法,并针对该方法发表自己的观点和建议。
命题探究
开头句
1.Here
I
would
like
to
share
some
of
my
ways
of
learning
English.
2.There
is
no
doubt
that
English
is
of
great
importance.
3.Good
learning
habits
can
help
us
study
better
and
more
easily.
4.There
are
some
good
ways
to
learn
English.
亮点句型
中间句
1.You
should
take
notes
carefully
in
class
when
necessary.
2.Don't
be
shy
or
afraid
of
making
mistakes.
Your
teacher
and
classmates
are
al-
ways
ready
to
help
you.
3.The
most
important
is
that
you
must
believe
in
yourself
and
never
give
up.
4.We
should
listen
to
the
teachers
carefully
in
class.
结尾句
1.By
doing
this,
my
English
improves
a
lot.
2.If
we
follow
the
advice,
we
are
sure
to
make
progress.
3.I
hope
you
will
be
interested
in
Chinese
and
make
great
progress
soon.
好句积累
1.Practice
makes
perfect.熟能生巧。
2.Failure
is
the
mother
of
success.失败是成功之母。
3.A
good
beginning
is
half
done.良好的开端是成功的一半。
作为一名中学生,我们不仅要有独立意识,还需有团队合作意识。在团队合作学
习中,我们能互相学习,互相帮助,共同讨论。能分享学习中的快乐与悲伤,能感
受到爱与被爱。让团队合作精神伴随我们成长!
请你以How
to
learn
together
as
a
team 为标题写一篇英语演讲稿,代表学校参加
达州市中学生英语演讲比赛。
要求:
1.卷面整洁(无污迹),书写工整(有美感)。
2.全文字数100词左右。文章开头已给出,不计入单词总数。
典例剖析
3.条理清楚,句式规范,标点符号和大小写使用正确。
4.内容尽量包括提示信息,并适当发挥;文中不能出现真实的人名、地名。
5.参考词汇:friendly,help,discuss(talk,listen),share,grow
up。
How
to
learn
together
as
a
team
Good
morning,ladies
and
gentlemen.Today
my
topic
is
“How
to
learn
together
as
a
team”.
That's
all
for
my
speech.Thank
you!
写作指导
本文是一篇演讲稿,属于应用文。要注意演讲稿的格式,内容是围绕“团队合作
学习”而展开的,主体时态为一般现在时。写作要点:团队合作学习的好处;怎
样进行团队学习及团队合作的必要性;最后表达感谢。
谋篇布局
范文评析
How
to
learn
together
as
a
team
①Good
morning,
ladies
and
gentlemen.
Today
my
topic
is
“How
to
learn
together
as
a
team”.
②Teamwork
is
always
very
important.It
offers
us
chances
to
learn
how
to
get
along
well
with
others
and
to
share
our
experiences
with
others.
We
can
learn
from
each
other
and
help
each
other.
But
how
could
we
learn
together
as
a
team
③In
my
opinion,we
should
be
friendly
to
each
other.
When
we
have
problems,we
should
offer
help
to
others.
Maybe
we
don't
know
what
to
do,but
we
can
discuss
together
and
find
a
solution
at
last.After
all,when
we
work
along
with
others,
we
may
be
able
to
learn
from
them.
Meanwhile
working
together
with
others
helps
us
grow
up.
Many
hands
make
light
work.We
need
teamwork
in
our
daily
life.
④That's
all
for
my
speech.Thank
you!
①开头:文章已给出:直入主题:How
to
learn
together
as
a
team
②③正文:阐述团队合作的重要性、如何进行团队合作学习及团
队合作学习的必要性。
④结尾:文章已给出:表达感谢。
亮点仿写
短语
1.offer
sb.
sth.=offer
sth.
to
sb.提供给某人某物
2.get
along
well
with
others与他人融洽相处
3.share
sth.
with
sb.与某人分享某物
4.learn
from
each
other
and
help
each
other相互学习相互帮助
5.be
friendly
to...对……友好
仿写
1.我妹妹对人友好而且乘坐公交车时总是主动为老人让座位。(be
friendly
to,
offer
sth.
to
sb.)
My
sister
is
friendly
to
others
and
always
offers
her
seat
to
the
old
when
she
takes
the
bus.
2.作为学生,我们不但应该相互学习相互帮助,而且应该学习如何与他人融洽相
处。(learn
from
each
other
and
help
each
other,get
along
well
with
others)
As
students,
we
should
not
only
learn
from
each
other
and
help
each
other
but
al-
so
learn
how
to
get
along
well
with
others. (共13张PPT)
话题六 经历与感受
近几年中考中与“经历与感受”话题相关的书面表达通常从以下三个角度进
行考查:
1.记述一件事并谈自己的感受;
2.围绕学校生活谈自己的经历及感受;
3.表达对家人、学校或朋友的情感和祝愿。
命题探究
开头句
1.I'd
like
to
talk
about
my
trouble
I'm
facing
these
days.
2.In
my
view,
helping
others
gives
me
a
strong
feeling
of
being
needed
and
brings
me
happiness.
3.Last
weekend,
when
my
parents
went
out,
I
did
something
surprising
for
them.
4.I'd
like
to
express
my
thanks
to
my
parents
for
their
devotion
to
me
these
years.
亮点句型
中间句
1.I
feel
sad
today
for
I
failed
the
math
exam
again.
2.He
is
a
positive
person
and
never
loses
heart.
3.He
is
so
strong-minded
that
he
gets
over
all
the
difficulties.
4.Friends
should
be
honest.
If
you
are
honest,
your
friend
will
trust
you.
5.I
was
so
thankful
that
I
decided
to
help
others
from
then
on.
结尾句
1.Thank
you
for
everything
you
have
done
for
me.
2.I
think
the
wonderful
party
will
always
be
in
my
mind.
3.No
matter
how
hard
life
is,
we
won't
fail
unless
we
give
up
our
hope.
4.It's
important
for
us
to
learn
to
be
thankful.
If
everyone
can
help
each
other,
the
world
will
be
full
of
love.
好句积累
1.Gratitude
is
the
memory
of
the
heart.感恩就是心灵的记忆。
2.Old
friends
and
old
wine
are
the
best.陈酒味醇,老友情深。
2018年父亲节(6月17日)快到了。为了表达对父亲的爱和感恩,学校校刊要做一
期“爸爸,我想对你说……”的英文专栏,请根据以下要求,写一篇短文向校刊
投稿。
要点提示:
1.描述父亲的外貌、性格;
2.父亲让你感动的是……
3.今天,你最想对父亲说……
典例剖析
写作要求:
1.词数100左右,标题已给出;
2.可适当增减词汇,使语句流畅、完整;
3.文中不能透露个人真实信息。
Dad,
I
want
to
tell
you...
写作指导
本文是篇记叙文。写作要点:描写父亲的外貌特征和性格(一般现在时)——父
亲让你感动的事(一般过去时)——今天,想对父亲说的话(一般现在时及一般将
来时)。主要人称为第三人称。
谋篇布局
范文评析
Dad,I
want
to
tell
you...
①My
father
is
tall
and
strong.
He
has
black
hair
and
big
shining
eyes.
He
likes
telling
jokes.
He
is
a
doctor.
He
not
only
can
help
with
people's
physical
health
but
also
can
help
with
people's
hearts.
②He
is
my
hero
in
my
heart.What
touched
me
most
happened
last
year.
I
fell
in
love
with
a
pretty
girl
in
another
school.
I
spent
much
time
thinking
of
her
so
that
I
couldn't
focus
on
my
schoolwork.
After
knowing
this,
my
father
didn't
shout
at
me.
Instead,
he
wrote
to
me
every
day
to
talk
with
me
about
it
like
a
big
brother.
Finally
I
got
out
of
my
trouble
gradually.
I
love
his
way
of
dealing
with
my
private
problems.
③
Father's
Day
is
coming.My
dear
dad,
you
don't
need
to
worry
about
me
anymore.
I
believe
there
would
be
some
other
problems
on
my
way
to
growing
up.
But
I
also
believe
that
I
can
deal
with
them
well
with
you
around
me.
Thank
you,
my
dear
dad,
I
love
you!
You
are
the
best
dad
in
the
world!
①开头:描写父亲的外貌及性格。not
only...but
also...使用恰当。
②正文:写父亲使自己感动的事,从句及过渡词运用多样。
③结尾:表达自己要对父亲说的话。表达自然贴切。
亮点仿写
短语
1.tell
jokes讲笑话
2.not
only...but
also...不但……而且……
3.focus
on集中于
4.shout
at...对……大喊
5.deal
with处理
6.not...anymore不再……
7.worry
about担心
仿写
1.讲笑话不仅能使你放松而且也能使别人快乐。(tell
jokes,
not
only...but
also...)
Telling
jokes
not
only
can
make
you
relax
but
also
can
make
others
happy.
2.我集中于学习后,我的妈妈不再担心我的学习,也不对我大喊了。(focus
on,
not...any
more,worry
about,
shout
at...)
After
I
focused
on
my
study,
my
mother
didn't
worry
about
my
study
or
shout
at
me
any
more. (共14张PPT)
话题三 规章制度
近几年中考中话题为“规章制度”的书面表达,通常是对学生们在“家庭”
“学校”和“社会”上的一些普遍行为准则进行介绍和规范,同时谈论自己的
观点及建议。从全国近几年与“规章制度”话题有关的书面表达的命题来看,
通常有以下两个角度的内容:
1.关于安全教育和自我保护;
2.生活中的行为规范和准则,学生该做什么,不该做什么,要求学生树立正确的价
值观。
命题探究
开头句
1.In
order
to
grow
safely,
our
school
has
made
many
safety
rules
for
us
to
follow.
2.As
a
middle
school
student,
I
think
we
should
obey
the
school
rules.
3.There
are
many
rules
we
should
follow
in
our
daily
life.
亮点句型
中间句
1.We
must
obey
the
traffic
rules
and
mustn't
cross
the
streets
when
the
traffic
lights
are
red.
2.We
should
be
careful
to
eat
healthy
food
and
keep
away
from
junk
food.
3.Don't
crowd
with
each
other,
especially
when
we
go
upstairs
or
downstairs.
4.If
we're
in
danger,
we
must
call
the
police
for
help
in
time.
结尾句
1.I
think
safety
always
comes
first.
2.All
in
all,
we
should
obey
the
rules
above.
3.It's
our
duty/responsibility
to
obey/follow
the
rules.
4.If
we
do
like
this,
our
school
will
be
better
and
better.
5.Anyway,
school
rules
are
necessary
for
us
to
make
fewer
mistakes
and
become
better
students.
好句积累
1.Everyone
is
supposed
to
stick
to
the
rules.每个人都应该遵守规则。
2.Every
brave
man
is
a
man
of
his
word.勇敢的人都是信守诺言的人。
3.A
nation
has
its
rule
and
a
family
also
has
one!国有国法,家有家规!
4.Nothing
can
be
accomplished
without
norms
or
standards.没有规矩,不成方圆。
5.Rules
are
meant
to
be
followed,
not
broken.规则制定出来是让人遵守的,而不是
让人破坏的。
树立自我保护意识,健康快乐地成长是每个青少年的必修课,下面是某地关心下
一代工作委员会为青少年编写的《青少年自我保护、健康成长手册》的部分
内容。作为一名中学生,写一篇文章,内容包括:①陈述你是怎样践行手册中提
及的三条事项的;②补充至少一条你认为重要的其他事项。
典例剖析
要求:1.语言通顺,要点齐全,意思连贯,条理清楚,书写规范;
2.文中不得出现真实的姓名和学校名称;
3.词数100左右,文章开头和结尾已给出,不计入总词数。
Self-protection
is
one
of
the
most
important
skills
for
teenagers.
But
how
do
I
pro-
tect
myself
and
grow
up
healthily
Now
let
me
share
my
experiences
and
ideas
with
you.
First,
I
always
obey
the
traffic
rules
In
short,
if
we
obey
the
rules
and
take
care
of
ourselves,
we
will
grow
up
safely
and
healthily.
写作指导
本文是篇说明文。要求细读所给提示信息,提取写作信息,文章描述的是客观的
安全条例,应使用一般现在时,人称主体是
“我们”,应用第一人称。
谋篇布局
范文评析
①Self-protection
is
one
of
the
most
important
skills
for
teenagers.
But
how
do
I
protect
myself
and
grow
up
healthily Now
let
me
share
my
experiences
and
ideas
with
you.
②First,
I
always
obey
the
traffic
rules
and
I
never
run
the
red
light.
When
the
traffic
light
is
red,
I
won‘t
go
until
it
turns
green.
I
always
cross
the
zebra
crossing
because
it’s
safe.
Second,
I
often
eat
healthily
and
safely.
It's
important
to
eat
more
fruit
and
vegetables.
Eating
too
much
fast
food
will
do
harm
to
my
body.
Third,
I
never
meet
strangers
alone,
especially
friends
who
I
make
on
the
Internet.
At
the
same
time
if
we
are
true
friends,
we
should
help
each
other.
③What‘s
more,
I’d
like
to
give
you
some
advice.
Now
summer
is
coming,
and
it's
dangerous
for
us
to
swim
alone,
especially
in
deep
lakes
or
rivers.
So
don't
do
that.
④In
short,
if
we
obey
the
rules
and
take
care
of
ourselves,
we
will
grow
up
safely
and
healthily.
①开头:提出青少年自我保护的重要性并引出下文。
②③正文:根据写作要点归纳出三条安全注意事项并阐述理由,最后补
充自己的观点。过渡语用得恰当,使文章层次清晰。
④结尾:总结并号召大家都来遵守规则,健康成长。
亮点仿写
短语
1.grow
up
healthily健康成长
2.share
sth.
with
sb.与某人分享某物
3.obey
the
traffic
rules遵守交通规则
4.not...until直到……才……
5.do
harm
to对……有害
6.at
the
same
time同时
7.help
each
other相互帮助
8.would
like
to
do
sth.想做某事
仿写
1.对于青少年来说遵守交通规则是最重要的安全规则之一。(one
of
the+形容词
最高级+可数名词复数形式;obey
the
traffic
rules)
Obeying
the
traffic
rules
is
one
of
the
most
important
safety
rules
for
teenagers.
2.我想与我的朋友一起分享健康成长的快乐。(would
like
to
do
sth.,
share
sth.
with
sb.,
grow
up
healthily)
I'd
like
to
share
the
happiness
of
growing
up
healthily
with
my
friends.
3.他每天晚上到12点才上床睡觉,这对他的健康是有害的。同时,这对他的学习
也没好处。(not...until,do
harm
to,at
the
same
time)
He
doesn't
go
to
bed
until
12
o'clock
every
night,
and
it
does
harm
to
his
health.
At
the
same
time,
it's
also
bad
for
his
study.
