[命题规律]
短文改错的语言材料通常取自于学生的习作，以记叙文为主，主要考查学生在语篇中准确运用英语知识的能力。
1．错误类型相对稳定。全国三套卷的设题中，错词各为7—8个，多词和缺词为2—3个。需要注意的是，有时从句引导词错误既可按错一词改也按缺一词修改。
2．考查内容覆盖面广。动词、形容词、副词、名词、代词、冠词、介词、连词及行文逻辑是考查的重点。
3．三年考点稳中有变。如2019年全国卷Ⅱ首考了there be结构中there与they的误用，2018年全国卷Ⅱ首考了名词普通格与所有格的误用。
[命题趋势]
1．预计2020年高考短文改错仍将以记叙文为主，题材和难易度都会保持相对稳定，话题贴近学生生活，内容积极向上，反映核心价值观。
2．以词法考查为重点，其次会考查句法及行文逻辑。
3．备考时要注意近三年高考未考到的知识点，像情态动词，虚拟语气中的谓语动词，强调句型中that的用法、倒装句中助动词的用法等。
[短文改错解题三步骤]
第一步：从语篇入手，理解大意，着眼时态
短文改错取材于考生作文，在时态上常用一般现在时和一般过去时。有些句子中谓语动词的时态和语态本身并没有错误，只有立足于上下文才能发现其中的错误。因此，在理解短文大意之后就应该逐句排查每句的时态和语态。
第二步：从句子入手，逐句分析，推敲语法
解决语法类错误的关键是要熟知短文改错的出题点，对实词和虚词的考查角度了如指掌。如动词类错误一般有三个左右，第一步应从时态、语态角度进行排查，这时就需要考虑非谓语动词、主谓一致和情态动词；名词的数、形容词与副词的混用、冠词的用法、介词搭配等问题几乎每年都要考到，因此我们做题时要做到心中有数。
第三步：从行文逻辑入手，兼顾上下，审查连代
通过前两步仍然有做不出来的，就应该重读短文，看看是否存在连词错误、指代是否一致、是否符合行文逻辑。
A篇 (2019·全国卷Ⅰ)
I became interesting in playing football thanks to a small accident.One afternoon where I was in primary school，I was walking by the school playground.Suddenly football fell just in front of me but almost hit me.I stopped the ball and kicked it hardly back to the playground.To everyone's surprising，the ball went into the net.All the football player on the playground cheered loudly，say that I had a talent for football.From now on，I started to play my football with classmates after school.I am a good player now.
【答案】
I became in playing football thanks to a small accident.One afternoon I was in primary school，I was walking by the school playground.Suddenly football fell just in front of me almost hit me.I stopped the ball and kicked it back to the playground.To everyone's ，the ball went into the net.All the football on the playground cheered loudly， that I had a talent for football.From on，I started to play football with classmates after school.I am a good player now.
B篇 (2019·全国卷Ⅱ)
Since I was a kid，I've considered different job I would like to do.First，I wanted to be a fireman，whose uniform looked so coolly.Then，when I was in the five grade，I wanted to be a teacher because I liked my English teacher too much.When I studied chemistry high school，I reconsidered my goal or decided to be a doctor.They were two reasons for the decision.One was that I was amazing at the fact that a sick person could feel much more better after seeing a doctor.And the other is that I wanted to help people in need.
【答案】
Since I was a kid，I've considered different I would like to do.First，I wanted to be a fireman，whose uniform looked so .Then，when I was in the grade，I wanted to be a teacher because I liked my English teacher much.When I studied chemistry high school，I reconsidered my goal decided to be a doctor. were two reasons for the decision.One was that I was at the fact that a sick person could feel much better after seeing a doctor.And the other that I wanted to help people in need.
C篇 (2018·全国卷Ⅰ)
During my last winter holiday, I went to countryside with my father to visit my grandparents. I find a big change there. The first time I went there, they were living in a small house with dogs, ducks, and another animals. Last winter when I went here again, they had a big separate house to raise dozens of chicken. They also had a small pond which they raised fish. My grandpa said last summer they earned quite a lot by sell fish. I felt happily that their life had improved. At the end of our trip, I told my father that I planned to return for every two years, but he agreed.
【答案】
During my last winter holiday, I went to countryside with my father to visit my grandparents. I a big change there. The first time I went there, they were living in a small house with dogs, ducks, and animals. Last winter when I went again, they had a big separate house to raise dozens of . They also had a small pond / they raised fish. My grandpa said last summer they earned quite a lot by fish. I felt that their life had improved. At the end of our trip, I told my father that I planned to return every two years, he agreed.
D篇 (2018·全国卷Ⅲ)
It was Monday morning, and the writing class had just begin. Everyone was silent, wait to see who would be called upon to read his and her paragraph aloud. Some of us were confident and eager take part in the class activity; others were nervous and anxious. I had done myself homework, but I was shy. I was afraid that to speak in front of a larger group of people. At that moment, I remembered that my father once said, “The classroom is a place for learning and that include learning from textbooks, and mistake as well.” Immediate, I raised my hand.
【答案】
It was Monday morning, and the writing class had just . Everyone was silent, to see who would be called upon to read his her paragraph aloud. Some of us were confident and eager take part in the class activity; others were nervous and anxious. I had done homework, but I was shy. I was afraid to speak in front of a group of people. At that moment, I remembered that my father once said, “The classroom is a place for learning and that learning from textbooks, and as well.” ， I raised my hand.
E篇 (2017·全国卷Ⅱ)
Mr. and Mrs. Zhang all work in our school. They live far from the school, and it takes them about a hour and a half to go to work every day. In their spare time, they are interesting in planting vegetables in their garden, that is on the rooftop of their house. They often get up earlier and water the vegetables together. They have also bought for some gardening tools. Beside, they often get some useful informations from the Internet. When summer came, they will invite their students pick the vegetables!
【答案】
Mr. and Mrs. Zhang / work in our school. They live far from the school, and it takes them about hour and a half to go to work every day. In their spare time, they are in planting vegetables in their garden, is on the rooftop of their house. They often get up and water the vegetables together. They have also bought some gardening tools. ， they often get some useful from the Internet. When summer ， they will invite their students pick the vegetables!
F篇 (2017·全国卷Ⅲ)
When I look at this picture of myself, I realize of how fast time flies. I had grown not only physically，and also mentally in the past few years. About one month after this photo was took, I entered my second year of high school and become a new member of the school music club. Around me in picture are the things they were very important in my life at that time：car magazines and musical instruments. I enjoyed studying difference kinds of cars and planes，playing pop music, and collecting the late music albums. This picture often brings back to me many happy memories of your high school days.
【答案】
When I look at this picture of myself, I realize how fast time flies. I grown not only physically， also mentally in the past few years. About one month after this photo was ， I entered my second year of high school and a new member of the school music club. Around me in picture are the things were very important in my life at that time：car magazines and musical instruments. I enjoyed studying kinds of cars and planes, playing pop music, and collecting the music albums. This picture often brings back to me many happy memories of high school days.
1．(2019·全国卷Ⅲ)Each of my cafes will have a different theme and an unique style. an→a
2．(2018·全国卷Ⅱ) As the kid, I loved to watch cartoons. the→a
3．(2019·哈尔滨师大附中模拟)Only in this way can we live energetic and healthy life. energetic前加an
4．(2019·云南师大附中模拟)I believe hard work is key to success, as the old saying goes, “No pains, no gains.” key前加the
5．(2019·河南省实验中学模拟)Everyone tends to have many problems while gaining a knowledge. 去掉a
6．(2019·合肥九中模拟)At the first, I thought I knew everything and could make decisions by myself. 去掉the
冠词错误主要有四种情况：①不定冠词a与an错用：元音音素前用an，辅音音素前用a。②不定冠词与定冠词错用：泛指用不定冠词，特指用定冠词。③冠词的缺失：可数名词单数前缺少不定冠词或定冠词。④冠词的多余：不可数名词或表泛指的可数名词复数前有多余的定冠词。
特别提示：注意固定搭配中的冠词。
1．(2019·全国卷Ⅲ)I wish to have a chain of cafes in many different city. city→cities
2．(2018·全国卷Ⅱ) After supper, we would play card games of all sort in the sitting room. sort→sorts
3．(2018·全国卷Ⅱ)When I was little, Friday's night was our family game night. Friday's→Friday
4．(2017·全国卷Ⅰ)In the summer holiday following my eighteen birthday, I took driving lessons. eighteen→eighteenth
5．(2019·长春外国语学校模拟)We recycle things and we give old clothes and furnitures to people in need. furnitures→furniture
6．(2019·湖南师大附中模拟)First, it is not easy for us students to make a wise choose of medicines to cure illness. choose→choice
7．(2019·龙岩市质检)Disappointed at the result of the examination, I sat on the sofa in silent after school. silent→silence
8．(2019·山东省实验中学检测)Mr. Li is my head teacher. He is now in his thirty and has been teaching for almost ten years. thirty→thirties
1．名词错误主要有三种情况：①名词数的错用：该用单数时错用复数或相反；误把不可数名词用作复数。②词性的错用：该用所有格时错用普通格或相反。③该用名词时错用动词或形容词。
2．数词错误有两种情况：①该用序数词时错用基数词；②该用复数时错用单数或相反。
1．(2019·银川六中模拟)Getting out of the classroom is indeed necessary for we all. we→us
2．(2019·武汉市部分市级示范高中联考) Looking forward to receiving you reply soon. you→your
3．(2019·重庆一中模拟)In the warm sunshine, we entertained us with stories, songs, dances and games. us→ourselves
4．(2019·成都市模拟)Then, my grandparents were in sixties and quite healthy, so they would come with us to the beach every day. sixties前加their
5．(2019·漳州市模拟)If I chose to take the next bus, I would have to wait for other 30 minutes. other→another
6．(2019·六安市模拟)It was the first time I had been away from home, so I found difficult to fit in. found后加it
代词错误主要有四种情况：①人称代词主格和宾格、人称代词与物主代词、人称代词与反身代词的错用。②人称代词和物主代词的缺失。③不定代词错用。④it的缺失或多余。
1．(2018·全国卷Ⅱ)Still I was unwilling to play the games for them sometimes. for→with
2．(2017·全国卷Ⅰ)It was a relief and I came to a sudden stop just in the middle on the road. on→of
3．(2019·河南省实验中学模拟)My father's friend Henry used to be a teacher and he was very strict to his students. 第二个to→with
4．(2019·山东师大附中模拟)I'm quite interested in the position so I want to apply it to improve my English. apply后加for
5．(2019·衡水中学调研考试)She attended a dance on last Saturday, where she wore a traditional Chinese dress called qipao in Chinese. 去掉on
6．(2019·六安市模拟)I remember clearly the days when I received the military training after I entered into senior high school. 去掉into
介词错误主要有三种情况：①介词的错用：应注意介词的基本用法以及介词与动词、名词、形容词构成的搭配。②介词的多余：及物动词后不能再加介词。③介词的缺失：不及物动词后跟宾语时需加介词。
特别提示：需特别注意固定搭配中的介词。
1．(2019·全国卷Ⅲ)What I want is not just an ordinarily cafe but a very special one. ordinarily→ordinary
2．(2017·全国卷Ⅰ)A few minutes late, the instructor asked me to stop the car. late→later
3．(2019·合肥市质检)Much to my disappointment, I found the river was serious polluted. serious→seriously
4．(2019·葫芦岛市模拟)It is so an instructive activity that we hope more will be organized in the future. so→such
5．(2019·河南省实验中学模拟)Never feel embarrassing to turn to your teachers or classmates. embarrassing→embarrassed
6．(2019·天水市质检)Among all the European cities, I love Paris more. more→most
7．(2019·青岛市模拟)But as a result, the more I explained, the more angrier he seemed. 去掉第二个more
8．(2019·湖南省八校联考)Last week, our teacher gave us an answer to a difficulty math problem in our class. difficulty→difficult
形容词、副词错误主要有四种情况：①形容词之间或副词之间的错用：由于词形或词义的接近而引起的错误；v.-ing形容词与v.-ed形容词的错用。②比较等级的错用：除了原级、比较级、最高级相互之间的错用，还要注意比较级的重复。③形容词与副词错用：作定语、表语时应用形容词，作状语时一般用副词(伴随状语用形容词)。④形容词与名词的错用：该用形容词时错用名词。
1．(2019·全国卷Ⅲ)Now my dream is to open a cafe. Though it may appear simple, it required a lot of ideas and efforts. required→requires
2．(2019·太原五中检测)But since then it has grew sharply, and by now it's national news. grew→grown
3．(2019·济南一中模拟)Last week, our school hold an activity about how to help some poor children to go to school and live their childhood happily. hold→held
4．(2019·山西大学附中模拟)Tired as we were, we felt happy as all of our work was paid off. 去掉was
5．(2019·长春市实验中学模拟)The notice said that all the tickets had fully booked from January 20 to February 28. booked前加been
6．(2019·重庆一中模拟)Recently campus safety has become a public concern since a series of violent attacks happen. happen→happened
时态语态错误主要有三种情况：①混淆时态、语态的构成形式；②未能依据时间状语判定适当的时态；③未能依据前后的逻辑关系判定适当的时态。
1．(2019·全国卷Ⅲ)If I succeed in manage one, I will open more. manage→managing
2．(2019·全国卷Ⅲ)I want my cafe have a special theme such as “Tang Dynasty”. have前加to
3．(2018·全国卷Ⅱ)No matter how many times I asked to watching them, my parents would not let me. watching→watch
4．(2019·江西省红色七校联考)Last Sunday, I went to a shop to have my watch repair. repair→repaired
5．(2019·成都市模拟)As a lucky student, I attended the 2019 National English Summer Camp holding in a beautiful city of South West. holding→held
6．(2019·六安市模拟)In short, learning to regard the challenges of life is a unique stone to future success and make the best of them. learning→learn
7．(2019·山西大学附中模拟)From my point of view, you can come to China after finished your studies.finished→finishing
8．(2019·南宁市模拟)Yesterday my friend Xiaoma sent me a short message says that true friendship is like water. says→saying
非谓语动词错误主要有三种情况：①非谓语动词错用：应根据非谓语动词的功能及所作成分来判断用哪种非谓语动词。一般来说，不定式表示尚未发生，动词-ing形式表示主动进行，过去分词表示被动完成。②介词后一般用动词-ing形式，需特别注意to是介词还是不定式符号。③误将非谓语动词用作谓语动词或相反。
1．(2019·湖南省长郡中学模拟)Laughing helps your body stay healthy and can even helped you fight pain. helped→help
2．(2019·哈尔滨三中模拟)If I am you, I would consider a bike as a birthday present for him. am→were
3．(2019·沈阳市模拟)It's high time we try our best to save energy in our daily life. try→tried或try前加should
4．(2019·云南师大附中模拟)How dangerous it was! Without your help, I will have been hit by the car. will→would
5．(2019·江西师大附中模拟)I wish the weather is better here for you. is→were
6．(2019·吉林省“五地六校”合作体联考)I strongly recommend that we could value time and redouble efforts to study so that we can get into a key university. could→should或去掉could
情态动词和虚拟语气错误主要有两种情况：①情态动词的错用：应熟记情态动词的基本含义及用法，例如其后跟动词原形、不能单独作谓语等。②虚拟语气中动词的形式受时态的影响而导致错用，应熟记不同句式中虚拟语气的不同用法。
1．(2019·长安一中质检)In a word, obeying the traffic rules are what all of us should pay attention to particularly. are→is
2．(2019·吉林省实验中学模拟)Almost all jobs that used to be done by men is done perfectly well by women. is→are
3．(2019·福州市质检)When I got there I found the environment was perfect and that there was various birds flying around. 第二个was→were
4．(2019·武汉市调研考试)The method of food preparation together with the secret ingredients have remained unchanged during the generations. have→has
5．(2019·山东省实验中学模拟)Good news is that an exhibition of Chinese paintings are to be held this weekend. are→is
6．On the New Year's Eve, each family have its members gather together. have→has
主谓不一致错误主要有三种情况：①语法的错用：应注意复数名词后的动词未必用复数，应找准句子的主语。②意义的错用：例如family表达不同的意思单复数不同。③忽视就近、就远原则。
1．(2017·全国卷Ⅰ)Before getting into the car, I thought I had learned the instructor's orders, so once I started the car, my mind went blank. so→but/yet
2．(2019·六盘山市模拟)As students, we should manage our own behaviors but help people around us form good habits. but→and
3．(2019·江西省红色七校联考)You are a nice and thoughtful boy, but I would like to help you pay for it. but→and/so
4．(2019·沈阳市模拟)What's more, we can go to work by bike once and twice a week. and→or
5．(2019·长春外国语学校模拟)Although dancing could do good to their health, but the long-time dancing and loud noise really brought the neighbors inconvenience. 去掉but
6．(2019·宁夏大学附中模拟)Since we can't pay enough attention to the traffic around us, so accidents may happen. 去掉so
7．(2019·济南市模拟)Besides, take an active part in sports or you'll feel more energetic than before. or→and
8．(2019·云南师大附中模拟)I was walking on the street while I saw a little girl trying to cross the road last Friday. while→when
并列连词错误主要有三种情况：①混淆并列、选择、转折等逻辑关系。②受汉语影响而引起的连词的多余，英语中although/though不能与but连用，because不能与so 连用。③注意常考句式be doing/be about to do ...when ...中when的应用；“祈使句＋and/or＋陈述句”中and/or的应用。
1．(2018·全国卷Ⅱ)The games my parents taught me where I was a child turned out to be very useful later in my life. where→when
2．(2019·葫芦岛市模拟)The moment when we entered the museum, the exhibition caught our attention. 去掉when
3．(2019·安庆市联考)In their spare time, they are interested in planting vegetables in their garden, that is on the rooftop of their house. that→which
4．(2019·安徽六校教育研究会联考)The man likes to sit in front of the shop, that people chat excitedly every day. that→where
5．(2019·河南省实验中学模拟)First, you must focus on which you are faced with. which→what
6．(2019·福州市质检)That attracted me most was the strange building. That→What
7．(2019·江西省红色七校联考)After checking the watch, the shop assistant said she would call her manager to see that if this kind of problem could be fixed. 去掉that
8．What's worse, I've gained some working and social experience and I have learnt something can't be learnt from textbooks. something后加that
复合句错误主要有三种情况：①状语从句的引导词错误或重复。②定语从句关系词的错用或缺失。③名词性从句中连接词的错用或重复。
特别关注：what与that，that与which，where与that的辨析。
1．(2018·全国卷Ⅱ) I didn't realize how right my parents are until I entered high school. are→were
2．(2019·遵义市航天高级学校模拟)With the improvement of people's living standards, more and more people possess their own cars. Some thought it is good to own a car. thought→think
3．(2019·衡水中学调研考试)She chose the dress because she liked its high collar, which highlights her figure and grace. highlights→highlighted
4．(2019·湖南师大附中模拟)I notice they don't ask doctors for help but tried medicines by themselves in order to save time. tried→try
5．(2019·济南市模拟)In your letter you said you suffer from depression because of the heavy load of study and didn't know how to get rid of it. suffer→suffered
时态不一致错误主要有三种情况：①前后句中的时态不一致。②并列句中的时态不一致。③主从句的时态不一致。
1．(2019·全国卷Ⅲ)In the cafe, customers will enjoy yourselves in the historical environment that is created for them. yourselves→themselves
2．(2019·吉林省实验中学模拟)Most of these apps allow users to take a photo of our schoolwork and the correct answers will just appear on their smartphones. our→their
3．(2019·遵义市航天高级学校模拟)As far as I'm concerned, we ought to think carefully before buying cars. Even if we have cars, we should use it less. it→them
4．(2019·皖南八校联考)I would never ask much from my parents because I knew it was not easy for him to make a living. him→them
5．(2019·沈阳市模拟)After polishing their skills, some of his students will become quite well-known himself. himself→themselves
6．(2019·大连市模拟)A man immediately rushed to the girl to give him first aid, and I joined in without any hesitation. Luckily she was not badly injured and we sent her to the nearest hospital. him→her
指代不一致错误主要有三种情况：①人称不一致。②单复数不一致。③性别不一致。
1．(2019·厦门市模拟)In fact, I often stayed up very late to do plenty of exercises. Because of more sleep and rest, I couldn't take my lessons effectively. more→less
2．(2019·广州市调研测试)Unluckily, she was not badly injured and we sent her to the nearest hospital. Unluckily→Luckily
3．(2019·吉林省实验中学模拟)Most students just copy the answers from the app, while only a few use the app to study. Better still, some students even use the study aid apps as social networks. Better→Worse
4．(2019·闽粤赣“三省十校”联考)Rain is of great importance to us. Therefore, too much rain does a lot of harm to us. Therefore→However
5．(2019·成都外国语学校模拟)I think doctors are the greatest. They can make patients recover from a disease. However, I am determined to be a doctor to help whoever suffers from illnesses. However→Therefore
6．(2019·兰州一中模拟)People there had a strong prejudice that girls should not go to school. Besides, my mother held a totally opposite view that her three daughters should get educated no matter how hard life was. Besides→However
逻辑不一致错误主要有两种情况：①肯定误用否定或相反。②转折误用因果、递进或相反。
A篇 (2019·石家庄市模拟)
The other day，we moved to the new school yard，where lies in the far north of the city.We were all on high spirits.It is much big than the old one.The classrooms are bright and clean.We have a lot of modern equipment，making convenient for students to learn every subject.Now we can have a lot of after-school activity on the new playground.Our teachers often play the basketball and soccer together with us.As spring approached，the flowers newly planting in the yard have just come out.With such many green trees and fragrant flowers around，we feel it less hardly to study and our school life more enjoyable.
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The other day，we moved to the new school yard， lies in the far north of the city.We were all high spirits.It is much than the old one.The classrooms are bright and clean.We have a lot of modern equipment，making convenient for students to learn every subject.Now we can have a lot of after-school on the new playground.Our teachers often play basketball and soccer together with us.As spring ，the flowers newly in the yard have just come out.With many green trees and fragrant flowers around，we feel it less to study and our school life more enjoyable.
B篇 (2019·沈阳市模拟)
The Moments(朋友圈) section of WeChat has become the popular part of the social networking platform. We can share everything about their life on it with our friend. Many teenagers, however, chose to keep their parents out their Moments. They argue that if their parents get involved, and they will feel upset. As far as I am concerning, I feel happily when my parents comment on my posts in my Moments. It shows their love and care for me. What's more, shut them off may make the generation gap bigger and bigger, when inviting them in would help us communicate better and feel closer to each other than before.
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The Moments(朋友圈) section of WeChat has become popular part of the social networking platform. We can share everything about life on it with our . Many teenagers, however, to keep their parents out their Moments. They argue that if their parents get involved, they will feel upset. As far as I am ， I feel when my parents comment on my posts in my Moments. It shows their love and care for me. What's more, them off may make the generation gap bigger and bigger, inviting them in would help us communicate better and feel closer to each other than before.
C篇 (2019·重庆市七校联考)
This morning I happened to meet a foreigner when I was taking walk in the park. It was a good chance for me to practise my spoken English, but I went up to him, introduced himself in English and expressed my wish to have a talk with him. In my surprise, he just stared at me, looking puzzling. I thought I had not made myself understand, so I repeated again what I had said. But he just said anything that I didn't understand. I suddenly realize he was not an English speaker! Not all foreigner speak English.
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This morning I happened to meet a foreigner when I was taking walk in the park. It was a good chance for me to practise my spoken English, I went up to him, introduced in English and expressed my wish to have a talk with him. my surprise, he just stared at me, looking . I thought I had not made myself ， so I repeated what I had said. But he just said that I didn't understand. I suddenly he was not an English speaker! Not all speak English.
D篇 (2019·潍坊市模拟)
School life is a large part of my adolescence. I have learned how to get on well with my fellow schoolmate and teachers at school. It's quite usual what arguments happen between students. For an example, we may have different opinions when it come to organizing an activity. However, we have to learn to respect other people's opinions and think about it carefully. It is necessary for us to have a discussion after we make a final decision. School life had really taught me how to communicate each other. It will certain play an important role in help me find a good job in the future.
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School life is a large part of my adolescence. I have learned how to get on well with my fellow and teachers at school. It's quite usual arguments happen between students. For example, we may have different opinions when it to organizing an activity. However, we have to learn to respect other people's opinions and think about carefully. It is necessary for us to have a discussion we make a final decision. School life really taught me how to communicate each other. It will play an important role in me find a good job in the future.
E篇 (2019·江西省五校协作体联考)
Is it necessary to practice handwriting? Some students consider handwriting least important than before. They preferred the keyboard to the pen now, for the former is fast, convenient and clear. They think it is waste of time practicing handwriting. However, others think Chinese handwriting is an important part of our traditional culture.
Though computers are very convenient, but handwriting still plays an important role in the modern world. Beside, beautiful handwriting makes a good impression in others. It shows your attitude to do things. Chinese character are very beautiful and rich in culture. As for me, when reading a neat written article, you will feel pleased and relaxed.
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Is it necessary to practice handwriting? Some students consider handwriting important than before. They the keyboard to the pen now, for the former is fast, convenient and clear. They think it is waste of time practicing handwriting. However, others think Chinese handwriting is an important part of our traditional culture.
Though computers are very convenient, handwriting still plays an important role in the modern world. ， beautiful handwriting makes a good impression others. It shows your attitude to / things. Chinese are very beautiful and rich in culture. As for me, when reading a written article, will feel pleased and relaxed.
F篇 (2019·太原市模拟)
There is a tradition in my family. On New Year's Eve, all my relative will come to our house for a feast. As matter of fact, it isn't the food that bring us together but the sense of belonging does. Making dumplings was always great fun. We put a coin into one of the dumplings. Everybody expects to eat the one with the coin inside, because it is said whomever gets the coin will have good fortune in the followed year. When my mom serves the dumplings, they help ourselves immediately, hoping to get the good luck of our entirely year. The coin never comes to me, and I am pretty sure of that the luck is always there.
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There is a tradition in my family. On New Year's Eve, all my will come to our house for a feast. As matter of fact, it isn't the food that us together but the sense of belonging does. Making dumplings always great fun. We put a coin into one of the dumplings. Everybody expects to eat the one with the coin inside, because it is said gets the coin will have good fortune in the year. When my mom serves the dumplings, help ourselves immediately, hoping to get the good luck of our year. The coin never comes to me, I am pretty sure that the luck is always there.
G篇 (2019·长春市质量监测)
My close friend Sunny has curly yellow hair and she cheered me up when I am down.I remember the day which I first met her. It was snowing and freezing cold.I found a little dirty dog by the road trembled under the bush. I stopped to wait for quite a while and there was no sign of her owner. When she looked into my eyes, her heart melted. I gentle held her and took her back home. I gave her a warm bathe and fed her some milk and soon she was recovered. Sunny is pleasant surprise for me and my family and I take good care for her every day.
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My close friend Sunny has curly yellow hair and she me up when I am down. I remember the day I first met her. It was snowing and freezing cold.I found a little dirty dog by the road under the bush. I stopped to wait for quite a while there was no sign of her owner. When she looked into my eyes, heart melted. I held her and took her back home. I gave her a warm and fed her some milk and soon she recovered. Sunny is pleasant surprise for me and my family and I take good care her every day.
H篇 (2019·合肥市第三次质检)
Last summer vacation，I worked as a volunteer in the Wolong China Giant Panda Garden in Sichuan，where I stay for two weeks.That I needed to do was to clean the pandas' houses，feed the pandas or make food for them.One male panda I took care was named Jingjing.She was one of the most interested pandas in the Garden.Normally，the panda is a shy creature，not used to be in contact with other animals，particularly humans，but Jingjing seemed very differently.He often reached out one of his foot to greet me and smiled at me.Sometimes he tried to make me to laugh.
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Last summer vacation，I worked as a volunteer in the Wolong China Giant Panda Garden in Sichuan，where I for two weeks. I needed to do was to clean the pandas' houses，feed the pandas make food for them.One male panda I took care was named Jingjing. was one of the most pandas in the Garden.Normally，the panda is a shy creature，not used to in contact with other animals，particularly humans，but Jingjing seemed very .He often reached out one of his to greet me and smiled at me.Sometimes he tried to make me laugh.
I篇 (2019·湖南师大附中模拟)
Every year, a great much holidaymakers go abroad for sightseeing and relaxation. While they are enjoying themselves, some of them behave rudely, which cause a big problem. How to be a civilized tourist has become a heating topic. In my opinion, it's necessary to watch our manner. First, we must respect and follow locally customs. Besides，we had better talk loudly in public places to avoid disturb others. Also, be aware that queue jumping is unacceptable in many countries. More importantly, we should bear at mind that we are representing our country while abroad, because we need to be cautious about how we act. Only in this way can we enjoy our trips abroad and have beautiful memories as well as.
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Every year, a great holidaymakers go abroad for sightseeing and relaxation. While they are enjoying themselves, some of them behave rudely, which a big problem. How to be a civilized tourist has become a topic. In my opinion, it's necessary to watch our . First, we must respect and follow customs. Besides，we had better talk loudly in public places to avoid others. Also, be aware that queue jumping is unacceptable in many countries. More importantly, we should bear mind that we are representing our country while abroad, we need to be cautious about how we act. Only in this way can we enjoy our trips abroad and have beautiful memories as well .
J篇 (2019·福建省高三毕业班质检)
As everybody know, parents are worried too much about their child, especially when the young meet with challenges. So do my parents. They are even more nervous than I when a important test is coming. I have been thinking about talked to them. I'll let them know I have a goal and will work hard to achieve them. When they are convincing that I'll be responsible for that what I should do, they surely don't feel worried. Please keep in mind that our parents love us unconditional. I hope my thought can be helpful to you in dealing the relationship with your parents.
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As everybody ， parents are worried too much about their ， especially when the young meet with challenges. So my parents. They are even more nervous than I when important test is coming. I have been thinking about to them. I'll let them know I have a goal and will work hard to achieve . When they are that I'll be responsible for what I should do, they surely don't feel worried. Please keep in mind that our parents love us . I hope my thought can be helpful to you in dealing the relationship with your parents.
K篇 (2019·洛阳市、许昌市质检)
One day during last holiday, together with my friend, Zhou Jie, we travel to Hong Kong by high-speed rail. We arrived at there in the afternoon. Felt excited and satisfied, I stood at Hong Kong's Victoria Harbour with my friends, enjoying the last rays of the sun. A few years after, I stood in this same spot for first time with my mother. It was the same beautifully night and the same gentle breeze, and a totally different me. Now, I'm no much a child following my parents, but a young adult who can make decisions by himself.
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One day during last holiday, together with my friend, Zhou Jie, we to Hong Kong by high-speed rail. We arrived there in the afternoon. excited and satisfied, I stood at Hong Kong's Victoria Harbour with my ， enjoying the last rays of the sun. A few years ， I stood in this same spot for first time with my mother. It was the same night and the same gentle breeze, a totally different me. Now, I'm no a child following my parents, but a young adult who can make decisions by .
L篇 (2019·成都市检测)
How time flies! It won't be long after I say goodbye to my high school life. Look back on what has happened, I really want to share one of the most unforgettable experience with you.
It was my first time to give English speech. I felt worried, so I turned to Mrs. Li, my English teacher, with help. She had encouraged me to work hardly and practise more. Confidently, I practised them countless hours. My performance was very successful that it impressed my classmates a lot.I was not a talent speaker; I knew it took the SWEAT to finally taste the SWEET success.
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How time flies! It won't be long I say goodbye to my high school life. back on what has happened, I really want to share one of the most unforgettable with you.
It was my first time to give English speech. I felt worried, so I turned to Mrs. Li, my English teacher, help. She encouraged me to work and practise more. Confidently, I practised /countless hours. My performance was successful that it impressed my classmates a lot.I was not a speaker; I knew it took the SWEAT to finally taste the SWEET success.
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