专题限时集训(二十六) 短文改错(Ⅰ)
A (2019·广州市调研测试)
I can well remember an incident that happened on a rain Sunday afternoon. I was waiting for the green light that a girl of about ten was knocked down by a pass car. The car then drives off quickly. A man immediately rushed to the girl to give him first aid, but I joined in without any hesitation. Unluckily she was not badly injured and we sent her to the near hospital.
I am proud of what I did for the girl. As member of the society, I am aware of that being responsible is what it takes to make a better society.
【答案】
I can well remember an incident that happened on a Sunday afternoon. I was waiting for the green light a girl of about ten was knocked down by a car. The car then off quickly. A man immediately rushed to the girl to give first aid, I joined in without any hesitation. she was not badly injured and we sent her to the hospital.
I am proud of what I did for the girl. As member of the society, I am aware that being responsible is what it takes to make a better society.
B (2019·昆明市诊断测试)
Our neighbor Butler owns a 80-acre farm. Visitors from cities can pick melons, tomato and cabbages by themselves. After school I feel like go to the farm and playing with some other children there. These little children can learn much things about farm work during their first trip to there. One visitor said Butler's farm bring back good memories of their childhood in the countryside. “It's like what I used to have as a kid, it is nice to bring my child here, ” he said.I think the farm actual gives a happy time to those which are close to nature.
【答案】
Our neighbor Butler owns 80-acre farm. Visitors from cities can pick melons, and cabbages by themselves. After school I feel like to the farm and playing with some other children there. These little children can learn things about farm work during their first trip there. One visitor said Butler's farm back good memories of childhood in the countryside. “It's like what I used to have as a kid, it is nice to bring my child here, ” he said. I think the farm gives a happy time to those are close to nature.
C (2019·湖南省五市十校联考)
Sheila, a exchange student from Ireland, is a good friend of mine, who has studied in my school since she came to China three months later. But he had not studied Chinese before she arrived here. So she had some difficulty communicate with people at the beginning of this term. However, Sheila works very hardly. She get up early every morning to study a bit before class. Now she has made great progresses. I admire her independence while she lives so far away her family. I'm not sure that whether I could do the same thing if I am in her position.
【答案】
Sheila, exchange student from Ireland, is a good friend of mine, who has studied in my school since she came to China three months . But had not studied Chinese before she arrived here. So she had some difficulty with people at the beginning of this term. However, Sheila works very . She up early every morning to study a bit before class. Now she has made great . I admire her independence while she lives so far away her family. I'm not sure whether I could do the same thing if I in her position.
D (2019·安徽省五校联盟质检)
Last Saturday our class went hiking in a countryside. We meet at our school gate and set off at 8：00 am. On the way, we were singing and laughing happily while a girl suddenly fell into a deep hole. She felt so frightening and even burst into tears. One of my classmate found a long rope and we finally got him out. Fortunately, she didn't suffer seriously injuries, but it seemed that her ankle slightly twisted. We managed to sending her to the nearest hospital. It is an experience we'll never forget it, though we didn't enjoy ourselves very much that day.
【答案】
Last Saturday our class went hiking in countryside. We at our school gate and set off at 8：00 am. On the way, we were singing and laughing happily a girl suddenly fell into a deep hole. She felt so and even burst into tears. One of my found a long rope and we finally got out. Fortunately, she didn't suffer injuries, but it seemed that her ankle slightly twisted. We managed to her to the nearest hospital. It is an experience we'll never forget ， though we didn't enjoy ourselves very much that day.
专题限时集训(二十七) 短文改错(Ⅱ)
A (2019·湖南省湘东六校联考)
I still remember an embarrassed experience last month. That day, I was overslept.I was running around my apartment quickly because there was something scarier for me than be late for work. I called a taxi, put a dress, threw all the necessary things into my bags, and closed it without even looking into it.Then I took my wallet, and run out. It didn't take much time to get to work so I was hurrying the driver at every traffic light. At last, I was in the office. Surprising, when I opened my bag, I saw the two yellow or scared eyes of my cat looking at me. It seemed to be just as shocked as I was.
【答案】
I still remember an experience last month. That day, I overslept. I was running around my apartment quickly because there was scarier for me than late for work. I called a taxi, put a dress, threw all the necessary things into my ， and closed it without even looking into it.Then I took my wallet, and out. It didn't take much time to get to work I was hurrying the driver at every traffic light. At last, I was in the office. ， when I opened my bag, I saw the two yellow scared eyes of my cat looking at me. It seemed to be just as shocked as I was.
B (2019·福建省三校联考)
One year ago, I was in great trouble. I worked hard at English and devote all my spare time to practise it. But I failed to pass the mid-term examination, which made me great disappointed. So I asked my grandpa for advice when I got to home. Hearing that I told him, he said, “To some extent examination results sometime cannot reflect your study level. You can't judge your progress by one examination.” He encouraged myself to work hard for long time to check my results. I took my grandpa's advices. Now I realize that the process of learning is much more important and my English is much good than before. From my experience, I feel that we should listen to opinions from old people.
【答案】
One year ago, I was in great trouble. I worked hard at English and all my spare time to it. But I failed to pass the mid-term examination, which made me disappointed. So I asked my grandpa for advice when I got home. Hearing I told him, he said, “To some extent examination results cannot reflect your study level. You can't judge your progress by one examination.” He encouraged to work hard for long time to check my results. I took my grandpa's . Now I realize that the process of learning is much more important and my English is much than before. From my experience, I feel that we should listen to opinions from old people.
C (2019·太原市测评)
After school today, I took a walk in the park, depressing and down. I have made considerable efforts win the talent contest, but I only finished fourth. Just while I was crying, a boy in glasses walked by. He noticed me and came over. He played me a piece of Beethoven's symphony with his mobile phone. Beside, he said Beethoven wrote it as his hearing grew worse. Hearing his word, I was no longer in tears. I came to realize that if we put all our efforts into that we loved, we could create great things no matter what obstacles were in the front of us. I was true thankful for their encouragement.
【答案】
After school today, I took a walk in the park, and down. I made considerable efforts win the talent contest, but I only finished fourth. Just while I was crying, a boy glasses walked by. He noticed me and came over. He played me a piece of Beethoven's symphony with his mobile phone. ， he said Beethoven wrote it as his hearing grew worse. Hearing his ， I was no longer in tears. I came to realize that if we put all our efforts into we loved, we could create great things no matter what obstacles were in front of us. I was thankful for encouragement.
D (2019·江西省三校联考)
A woman was in a business trip. She stayed in a big and comfort hotel. But every day, she had lots of meetings to attend to, which made her very tiring. One Saturday afternoon, she decided to sunbathe to relax. So she went to the top of the hotel in her swimsuit and lay down on roof.
After about an hour of sunbathing, she heard someone come up to the roof. It is the manager of the hotel. He said, “Excuse me, Miss, but do you mind sunbathe somewhere else？” “Why？”the woman asked, “I'm on the top of the hotel... Everybody can see me！” The man answered, “That's true, and you are lying on the window above the dining room. All of the guest can see you right above them！”
【答案】
A woman was a business trip. She stayed in a big and hotel. But every day, she had lots of meetings to attend ， which made her very . One Saturday afternoon, she decided to sunbathe to relax. So she went to the top of the hotel in her swimsuit and lay down on roof.
After about an hour of sunbathing, she heard someone come up to the roof. It the manager of the hotel. He said, “Excuse me, Miss, but do you mind somewhere else？” “Why？”the woman asked, “I'm on the top of the hotel... can see me！” The man answered, “That's true, you are lying on the window above the dining room. All of the can see you right above them！”
专题限时集训(二十八) 短文改错(Ⅲ)
A (2019·武汉市部分学校调研测试)
Dear Sir，
Last Saturday I went shop at your food store and saw a saleswoman take the ready-to-eat food with the same hands that she took the money. I didn't think this was not the right thing to do for her. But when I told her so, she got so angrily that she said it was none of your business and asked me to leave the counter.
A saleswoman has a bad effect on your store. I am sure that you will not allow so kind of things to happen again. I suggest that you took steps to punish those who is irresponsible for the work and impolite to the customer. I will appreciate if you let me know what you have done to solve the problem.
Yours faithfully，
Lei Yang
【答案】
Dear Sir，
Last Saturday I went / at your food store and saw a saleswoman take the ready-to-eat food with the same that she took the money. I didn't think this was the right thing to do for her. But when I told her so, she got so that she said it was none of business and asked me to leave the counter.
saleswoman has a bad effect on your store. I am sure that you will not allow kind of things to happen again. I suggest that you steps to punish those who irresponsible for the work and impolite to the customer. I will appreciate if you let me know what you have done to solve the problem.
Yours faithfully，
Lei Yang
B (2019·安徽省师范高中模拟)
Last week, my friend Tony, a Chinese-American, invited me to have traditional Chinese meal with his family. When we were seat, Tony's mother put various foods which were unfamiliar with me onto the plates. Seen I was nervous about eating with chopsticks, Tony gave me some instructions. I was true delighted when I finally made it. Therefore, my fingers suddenly lost control of the chopsticks while he was picking up a piece of chicken. It flew across the table or landed in Tony's soup. Everyone laughed. Then Tony's father had kindly encouraged me to try again, which made me a bit relaxed. I really enjoyed the delicious dinners.
【答案】
Last week, my friend Tony, a Chinese-American, invited me to have traditional Chinese meal with his family. When we were ， Tony's mother put various foods which were unfamiliar me onto the plates. I was nervous about eating with chopsticks, Tony gave me some instructions. I was delighted when I finally made it. ， my fingers suddenly lost control of the chopsticks while was picking up a piece of chicken. It flew across the table landed in Tony's soup. Everyone laughed. Then Tony's father kindly encouraged me to try again, which made me a bit relaxed. I really enjoyed the delicious .
C (2019·唐山市模拟)
Last summer, my class spend a week as volunteers in Yongping, Yunnan, that left a deep impression on us. During the week, we acted as teachers, and taught knowledges to kindergarten students. Not have tried this kind of job, we thought it was easy to teach a little kids. However, the kids were terrible noisy in class. In spite of the great anger hidden in their hearts, we had to keep smiling. When we turned their teachers for help, the smiles on their faces made us embarrassing. Not until then did we understand how hard the teachers' job was. A week of the voluntary work was short, and it was long enough to stay in my memory.
【答案】
Last summer, my class a week as volunteers in Yongping, Yunnan, left a deep impression on us. During the week, we acted as teachers, and taught to kindergarten students. Not tried this kind of job, we thought it was easy to teach little kids. However, the kids were noisy in class. In spite of the great anger hidden in hearts, we had to keep smiling. When we turned their teachers for help, the smiles on their faces made us . Not until then did we understand how hard the teachers' job was. A week of the voluntary work was short, it was long enough to stay in my memory.
D (2019·绵阳市诊断性考试)
I'm well feed at home with Dad as my cook. Dad has acquired various cooking method by trial and error. Not only does his cooking appeal to my appetite, but also guarantee the diversity of nutrition for me. Dad includes lots of fruits, vegetables or grains in my regular meals to keep my diet balanced. For each one meal, I eat quite a lot, but I don't actually risk any healthy problem. So when comparing me with my classmates, I feel very lucky to live with such good dad. I also feel grateful for my dad just because of which he has been doing for me.
【答案】
I'm well at home with Dad as my cook. Dad has acquired various cooking by trial and error. Not only does his cooking appeal to my appetite, but also the diversity of nutrition for me. Dad includes lots of fruits, vegetables grains in my regular meals to keep my diet balanced. For each meal, I eat quite a lot, but I don't actually risk any problem. So when comparing with my classmates, I feel very lucky to live with such good dad.I also feel grateful my dad just because of he has been doing for me.
专题限时集训(二十九) 短文改错(Ⅳ)
A (2019·湖南省六校联考)
Last Friday, our class invited a old craftsman to teach us how make dough figurines(面人). First, he show us the basic steps and making techniques. We stood around him but watched attentively. Then he started to have a try. He walked around and helped us patient when necessary. Finally, all of us had our own work and we took pictures for our hand-made figurines excitedly. Looked at these lifelike figurines, we were all felt happy.
【答案】
Last Friday, our class invited old craftsman to teach us how make dough figurines(面人). First, he us the basic steps and making techniques. We stood around him watched attentively. Then started to have a try. He walked around and helped us when necessary. Finally, all of us had our own and we took pictures our hand-made figurines excitedly. at these lifelike figurines, we all felt happy.
B (2019·福州市质量抽测)
Last Saturday I had a trip to a new opened park called Guangfulin Relics Park. When I got there I found the environment was perfect and that there was various birds flying around. That attracted me most was the strange building. It looked like a flooding house, the roof of which was above the water, and indeed it's “body” was under the water. People could get there by going down the stair. In the building there was an exhibition which was very much great, for there were plenty architectural models and exhibits.
In a word, this park is a place worth visited again.
【答案】
Last Saturday I had a trip to a opened park called Guangfulin Relics Park. When I got there I found the environment was perfect and that there various birds flying around. attracted me most was strange building. It looked like a house, the roof of which was above the water, and indeed “body” was under the water. People could get there by going down the . In the building there was an exhibition which was very great, for there were plenty architectural models and exhibits.
In a word, this park is a place worth again.
C (2019·重庆市质量调研抽测)
Lily is a good girl. She always listens in her parents and never makes their own choice. As she becomes middle school student, she realizes that she had grown up and wants to make her own decision. This is the very classic situation for those children who wants to be independent, so they dare not speak out their inner voices. They are afraid of hurt their parents' feelings. In fact, if we speak out, our parent will understand that we need to grow up sooner or late. They will be happy and let us to make our own decision.
【答案】
Lily is a good girl. She always listens her parents and never makes own choice. As she becomes middle school student, she realizes that she grown up and wants to make her own decision. This is the very classic situation for those children who to be independent, they dare not speak out their inner voices. They are afraid / their parents' feelings. In fact, if we speak out, our will understand that we need to grow up sooner or . They will be happy and let us make our own decision.
D (2019·贵阳市监测考试)
Dear Mr. Smith，
I am Li Hua. At this moment, I'm honored to express our sincerely thanks to you in behalf of my classmates. We do appreciate everything what you have done for us. We had been very lucky to have you as our English teacher in the past few years. With your help, everyone has made progresses in both English learning or school life. We have been enjoyed your teaching and guidance a lot. Your humorous stories, big smiles and encouraged words have already rooted in our memories. Since he will leave soon, we wish you pleasant journey back home and a happy life there. We will miss you. Thanks again, Mr. Smith.
Yours truly，
Li Hua
【答案】
Dear Mr. Smith，
I am Li Hua. At this moment, I'm honored to express our thanks to you behalf of my classmates. We do appreciate everything / you have done for us. We been very lucky to have you as our English teacher in the past few years. With your help, everyone has made in both English learning school life. We have / your teaching and guidance a lot. Your humorous stories, big smiles and words have already rooted in our memories. Since will leave soon, we wish you pleasant journey back home and a happy life there. We will miss you. Thanks again, Mr. Smith.
Yours truly，
Li Hua
