Module 5 Look after yourself Unit 3 Language in use.写作指导课件（20PPT无素材）

课件20张PPT。HealthWithout health, everything is nothing.
The biggest wealth in life is the health.Writing3抓1看2定写作步骤4选5重6查
中考即将到来，作为迎接中考的我们如何才能确保中考前拥有充分的精力和体力呢？请结合饮食，运动，休息， 情绪调节等至少三方面给大家提出合理的健康建议，内容提示如下：
拥有一个健康体魄的重要性
现实生活中我们这么做才能练就健康的体魄
要求：
内容完整，重点突出
语义连贯，层次清晰，书写规范
80词左右________________________________________________________________________Step 2 定（文体 人称 时态） Style(文体): _________________
Person(人称): 第______人称为主
Tense(时态）: ____________
Key points : _____________
议论文一一般现在时抓要点Step 3 抓（相关话题要点梳理）1.The importance of the health.2.The way of keeping healthy.1.身心健康
2.锻炼身体
3.保持健康
4.享受生活
5.对某人有利/害
6.精神焕发
7.精力充沛physical and mental health
take exercise
keep fit / healthy
keep in good health
enjoy life
do good / harm to sb.
in high spirits
be full of energyStep 4 选（Useful phrases）8. 强健身体
9. 养成……的习惯
10.改掉……的习惯build up our bodies
get into the habit of
get rid of the habit ofThe importance of health1. When we are healthy, we can enjoy a happpy life.
2. Good health may bring us a long happy life,good work and even better grades.
3. Keeping healthy can help us study or work better.
Free talkhealth and fitnessEat healthy foodTake exerciseRest while you canSay no to smoking Stay happyBook 9B
P42-43Ways of keeping healthyExercise and health
Get off the sofa
Exercise is important. Make sure that you take plenty of exercise.
To keep fit, you should walk at least 10,000 steps every day.P42 (Book 9B),
1.我建议你加强锻炼。
I advise you to take more exercise.2. 做运动与健康息息相关。
Taking exercise is closely related to health.
It’s important to eat plenty of the right things that is fresh and natural, for example,/above all, fruit, vegetables.
Eating too much of the wrong food will harm your health.
Too much chocolate isn’t good for the body.
Cola is bad for your health.
A lot of ice cream,hamburgers and cola is not healthy.
Eat the right food and be healthy.
Carrots,eggs and sweet potatoes are good for your eyes.
Milk,cheese and fish are good for your teeth.
It’s important to remember: eat well,stay healthy,and don’t get fat! P21,22 (Book 7A)P42 (Book 9B)
Eat healthy foodFood and healthIt’s important for you to get about eight hours’ sleep.
At weekends,you have got more time,so use it not just for your friends, but for rest too.
P42 (Book 9B)
Rest while you canRest and healthSmoking and healthSay no to smokingP42(Book 9B)
P46 (Book9B)
Say no to smoking because it harms nearly every part of your body .
Smoking is bad for your breath and it causes many illnesses .
(I know that it is very difficult to stop but you must try.)
1.众所周知吸烟对身体有害。
As we all know, smoking does great harm to human beings.
2.为了保持身体健康，我们应当改掉吸烟的坏习惯。
In order to keep healthy, we should get rid of the bad habit of smoking.Don’t worry,be happyAttitude and healthDon’t worry.
Happiness is important for your general health.
If you are worried about something, talk to your parents or your teacher.
“Laughter is the best medicine.”P42 (Book 9B)表示建议或祝愿的功能句
1）Why don’t we …?　／Why not …?
2）It’s a good idea for us to …?
3）We’d better ...
4）It’s important for us to…
5）Don’t worry.
6）Best wishes for all of us to have a healthy and happy life .
Step5 重（条理，过渡）温馨提示表述句子时，采用灵活多变的句式，避免单一，乏味。书面表达中可能会用到表逻辑关系的关联词At first /First of all/First,Second,Next,Finally
In fact
In my opinion
On one hand,On the other hand/ As well
By the way / In addition/What’s more/Also/Then
In a word / In short/Generally speaking
So…that…
表并列：and, both…and, not only…but also, or(否定）,either…or,neither..nor,as well as
表结果：so, because,so...that...
表时间：when, while, (not)…until, since, before, after, as soon as，at first, then, finally
表条件：if,as long as,unless(除非)
表转折：but, though,although,however
表目的：in order to（为了）, so that （以便）
表比较：than, as (so)…as，compared to...Work in groupsUse the words below,make some sentences about health.Conclusion表达要点句子时,
应理清句子间的____________逻辑关系 , keep a balanced diet is very important.Firstly / First of all , It’s a good idea to have an active attidude towards life.
Secondly / ThenMake amazing sentences(请补充细节)温馨提示表达要点时要补充必要的细节
以增加句子的生动性和感染力。1. Firstly, we should keep an active attitude
towards life. .2.Secondly,we’d better eat balanced diet._____.Life is filled with not only sunshine but also hard time.Carrots,eggs and sweet potatoes are good for your eyes.Make amazing sentences 谋篇布局
As we all know ,good health may bring us a long happy life,good work and even better grades. __________is very important.
--------总（开门见山，引出主题，抛出观点）
Above all/First,_____/In my opinion,_____is the most important.Second/Then________.What’s more/In addition,Of course,____.Finally,_________.
--------分（举出具体事例，分层详细论述）
If we can do all these things,we will_______/I hope______.
------- 总（提出倡议，发出号召，扣题，首尾呼应）Health and fitnessEat healthy foodTake exerciseRest while you canSay no to smoking Stay happyWe all know that health is so important to us that it can not only help us improve our study but also bring us a long happy life.Without health,everthing is nothing.Then how to keep healthy?
Firstly,We’d better take some exercise because it’s closely related to our health and it can build our bodies at the same time.Secondly,it’s important to eat plenty of the right food that is fresh and natural.Such as carrots,eggs which are good for our eyes.Finally,don’t worry,be happy.There’s a saying‘‘laughter is the best medicine.It’s also helpful for our general health.So in my opinion, if you are worried about something,talk to our teachers or our friends.
In a word,if we can do all of these things ,we can expect to be in good health and we will be in a high spirit to face the coming exams.Let’s keep fit together! 比比谁的眼睛亮，找出文章妙处所在Homework结合本课所学短语，句式及范文继续修改并完善作文。 Thanks !
May you be blessed
have strength and health
forever!