九年级下Revision module A Writing 课件（35PPT无素材）

课件35张PPT。writingWhat does the word “write” make you think of?wh-
Who,what,
when,where,
howwriterevisingeditingthoughtsI 初中
英语
写作
话题families
friends
idolsyourself
personyounatureenvironmentlifesocietyschool lifechangeactivitiesscience and technologyhabit and hobbyhealth and safetylearningresourcetravelingThe High School Entrance Exam(中考) is coming!tiredbusygood ways to get relaxed
You should /shouldn’t …
You’d better…
Why not …
Why don’t you …
How / What about …
Advantages:
What do you think of studying under less pressure?3. I can study by myself

I will have more free time than before. 2.I will feel relaxed
4. I can do sports with my friends after class.5.
WritingTopic
Connection
words
Complex
sentences课堂教学模式
Study
under less pressure

Phrases
Sentence
frames

Translate these phrasesdo exercise做练习
帮……做某事help sb. do sth.听音乐listen to music做运动do sports不仅…而且…not only …but also…从现在起在我的业余时间from now onin my free timeTranslate these phraseseven though尽管对…有益/害be good/bad forLet’s remember them!对……有益/有害看电视不仅……而且……听音乐do exercise
do sportshelp sb. do sth.even thoughin my spare timeRemember these frames
1.It’s+adj.(kind/good/clever/foolish/…) of sb.to do sth.
2. It’s a good idea to do sth.
3. I don’t think(that)…
4. I suggest that …
5…. and so on…
Can you make some sentences?1.放学后去做运动是一个好主意。
2.对于我们来说，抄袭作业是愚蠢的。
It’s a good idea to do sports after class.It’s foolish of us to copy homework. 如果你想保持健康，你就要多锻炼。_____________ stay fit, you should do more exercise.
条件状语从句连词：if 如果If you want to1. Homework is finished by us every day ________ we want to practise more.
2. It’s faster than a usual one______ it can help us save time .becauseso原因状语从句连词：because因为, so所以注意：because 和 so在同一句话中不能同时出现。 1.虽然他累了，但是他仍然坚持学习。
________________ he was tired, he still studied hard.
OR: He was tired, ____ he still studied hard.
2.尽管是九年级的学生也应该做够运动。
Students should take enough exercise ____ _____ they are in Grade Nine.even thoughThough/Although让步状语从句连词：thoughalthough虽然, but但是，even though即使but 史密斯先生说话很慢以便学生们能够听清楚。
Mr. Smith speaks slowly____ _____ the students can hear him clearly.
so that目的状语从句连词：so that2. She is ____ a lovely girl that we love her very much.1.They study ____ hard that they have no time to do sports.结果状语从句连词：so(+adj.)… that,
such(+n.)…that 如此…以致sosuch(1) Add conjunctions.
1.表示并列或递进: and, as well as, both…and, what’s more ,not only…but also,
neither…nor
2.表示选择: or, either…or
3.表示转折:but,however,although/though,
after all,anyway
4.表示因果: because, so, therefore
as a result
5.表示条件: if , unless
关联词(connection words)6.表示对比: instead, not…but, while,
7.表示解释: for example, for instance, such as, that is to say, in other words,to tell the truth
8.表示顺序: firstly, first (of all), second(ly), next, finally,
9.表示强调: also, besides, especially,
in fact
10.表示结论: all in all, altogether, in a word,
generally speaking, in shortLet’s try1.?It's raining hard. _______, I still want to go there.
2. We like doing kinds of sports _______ swimming, running and hiking.
3. _____, he stood up. Then he got out. _____, he went back. _______, he smiled.
4.He worked all the time, __________, he finished it in time.
5. _________ （总之）I?can‘t?go?out?as?I?have?many?things?to?do. ?
as a resultsuch asFirstNextFinallyHoweverIn?a?word,first, however, for example, such as,
as a result, finally, next, in fact, in a wordWork in groupsABC
1.We can do a lot of interesting things, such as play football, sing songs and read books.
2. Because my mother has done everything for me, so I want to thank her.
playingsingingreading注意：although和but在一句话中也不能同时出现。改正句子1.周末里，我们不需要再在学校里学习了。
We _____ need to study at school __________at weekends.
2.没有老师，我们不知道怎样学习。
We don’t know ____________ without teachers.
3.我建议，我们应该更努力学习，目的是保持好的成绩。
I ________ that we should study harder________ we can keep good grades.
don’tany morehow to study
suggestso that完成句子
1.它使我得到了足够的睡眠时间。(make sb. do)
2.
It made us get enough time to sleep.
If you improve your grade, you will be very happy.
如果你提高了成绩，你将会很快乐。翻译句子Write a composition 2014年初，天津市发布“减负”的新规定。作为一名九年级毕业生，临近中考，学业紧张，你如何理解“减负”，在“减负”的同时，你如何利用这关键的一个月时间？如何保证成绩的提高？
请根据以下提示，写80-100字短文，介绍你的观点。内容包括：
1、你对新规定的见解。
2、“减负”的优点。(reduce pressure)
3、号召大家一起努力。
主题句要突出写作层次要清楚句式和时态要多样化注意句与句的连贯性表达思想要清楚准确书写工整How to get a high score in writing?have a rest, do sports ,
be good for … , keep … doing sth.
It’s a good way to… ,
It’s important for us to… We know that______I think______is good for_________________________
There are many advantages of reducing pressure.First,__________Second,___________ Third,_______________
In a word, we should_______Let’s_______________
中考作文评分标准第一档：13~15分
1. 所写内容符合提示的文字信息，层次清楚，有创意；
2. 句子结构灵活、正确通顺，或只有个别小错；字数合乎要求；
3. 单词拼写错误不超过3个。第二档：10~12分
1. 所写内容与所提示的语言信息相符，层次较清楚；
2. 句子正确，表达较通顺；字数合乎要求；
3. 表达错误较少，单词拼写错误不超过5个。第三档：6~9分
1. 所写内容与提示的信息基本相符；
2. 少数句子表达错误，但尚可读懂；
3. 单词拼写错误不超过7个。中考作文评分标准第四档：3~5分
1. 所写内容与所提示的信息多数不符；
2. 只有少数句子表达正确；
3. 拼写错误在10个以上。第五档：0~2分
语言错误很多，只能写出与所要求内容有关的一些单词。writing time10 minutes! Time is flying!Appreciation 小结(Summary)：

1. 作文的卷面； -----整洁的卷面
2. 文章的语言； -----丰富的词汇
3. 行文的流畅； -----流畅的结构
4. 文章的思想； -----独到的见解You did a good job in writingWe’rewreallyinterested intalking aboutexpressions.riteThank you!Thank you!1. A students sum up what you can do to avoid mistakes and improve your composition.
2. B students write 5 more sentence on the same topic.
3. C students try to memorize 3 sentences which is correct.Homework