课件20张PPT。School Life
Teaching type: a writing lessonLearning Aims1. Be able to describe an experience.
学会描述一次经历
2. Be able to learn some skills to write better.
学会写作技巧以便更好地写文章
3. Be grateful and learn how to get on well with others.
常怀感恩之心并与人和谐相处subjectsactivitiestimetableWhen we talk about school life, what can you think of?We would like to ___________ (参加) a lot of after-school activities.take part inWe live a happy life at school because we can ___________________(与……和谐相处) each other.get on well withWe worked so hard at our lessons that we could __________________(取得好成绩) at last.get good gradesWhat did your classmates do when you were in trouble at school? Please describe your experience.
在校园中,当你有困难时,你的同学曾经为你做了什么?请描述一下你的经历。Think & write & shareHow to describe your experience?For example:
Last week, I failed my English exam. I was unhappy because my English was always good. When my classmate Lily knew it, she cheered me up and said some encouraging words to me. I felt happy by her words. From then on, I overcame my failure and kept working hard.时间事件经过结果
Time
时间
2. Incident
事件
3. Process
经过
4. Result
结果Last year; When I was in Grade 7…; On a rainy afternoon;…① I was ill and missed many lessons…
② I failed an exam…
③ I didn’t win the singing competition…
④ I got hurt when playing football
⑤ I lost my meal card…help … with/do…; with the help of …;
encourage…to do; cheer… up; make…;
pass by; send… to hospital; ask… for help; call…as a result; at last; in the end…; from then on;
overcame; catch up with…; get well soon;
feel confident; feel moved;…Please use the points to describe your experience. 每天在学校与同学们朝夕相处,共同学习和生活一起,一定有很多感触吧,国际中学生论坛上有一个主题“Getting on Well with Our Classmates Is Important”的帖子,请你根据以下要点谈谈你的看法。
内容包括:1. 你和班级同学们相处的总体感受;
2. 写出一件你和同学们在学校生活中的最让
你感动的一件事;
3. 谈谈怎样才能和同学们和睦相处。
Getting on Well with Our Classmates Is Important
It is important to get on well with our classmates. I get on well with my classmates. _____________________________
___________________________________________________.Writing Task basic rules
(写作基本规则) 1. search(审题)
2. list(列提纲)
3. draw (画思维导图)
4. add(加内容) 每天在学校与同学们朝夕相处,共同学习和生活一起,一定有很多感触吧,国际中学生论坛上有一个主题“Getting on Well with Our Classmates Is Important”的帖子,请你根据以下要点谈谈你的看法。
内容包括:1. 你和班级同学们相处的总体感受;
2. 写出一件你和同学们在学校生活中的最让
你感动的一件事;
3. 谈谈怎样才能和同学们和睦相处。
Getting on Well with Our Classmates Is Important
It is important to get on well with our classmates. I get on well with my classmates. _____________________________
___________________________________________________.
Step 1: Search审题根据题目关键词简单列出文章的结构和要点。Step 2: List 列提纲(总)第一段:I feel …(总体感受)
(分)第二段:Last week, … (一件事)
(总)第三段:In my opinion, … (建议)ExperienceAdviceFeelingsTimebe friendlyhelp eath othergratefulhappyIncident(事件)Process(经过) luckyResultHow to get on well
with our classmates Step 3: Draw a Mind-map思维导图PK第二回合:
Group A 和Group B的同学自由上台在白纸相应位置写出“Feelings”和”Advice”相关的词或短语;
Group A用黑笔写,Group B用蓝笔写;
每人每次只能写一个,同一人可多次上台;
两组同学写的答案不能一样,先写先得;
每个有效答案得1分。 In my opinion, …(建议) …Last week (时间、事件、经过、结果)… It is important to get on well with our classmates. I get on well with my classmates. I feel…(总体感受)123Step 4: Add 加内容Practice makes perfect! 查分段信息点卷面
书写语法
&
表达评分标准(满分15分):
1. 总体感受。 (2分)
2. 一件事。(6分)
3. 做法。 (3分)
4. 卷面、书写及字数。
(2分)
5. 好词好句 。( 2分)参考范文:
It is important to get on well with our classmates. I get on well with my classmates. I feel very lucky that I have such lovely classmates.
I will never forget the touching thing that my classmates did for me. When I was in Grade 8, I got very bad grades in one mid-term exam. I was so upset that I was afraid to go to school. I told my teacher that I needed to rest at home because I was sick. All my classmates wrote wishes on a card and sent it to me. Some of them even lend their notes to me. I was really moved and encouraged.
From now on, I will help my classmates who need help. In my opinion, if we can help each other, we will get on well with each other.Summary (我的收获)School Life 审、列、画、加……Experience:
时间、事件、
经过、结果
How to get on well with our classmates Basic rules:Ways: Homework1. Exchange the drafts with your partner and help to make some revisions.
2. Complete your writing.
Thanks
for listening!