专项技能保分练(二十一) 短文改错
Test 1
[2019·湖北省联考]
Dear Wangping，
How are things going with you? It's been six month since you studied abroad in England.
It is the first time that you had been abroad. Without doubt, it is hard to fit in the life in a foreign country. Have you got accustom to living there? And how about the food? As an exchange student, have you overcome all the difficulties you have learn English? Can you understand that the teachers say in class and communicate free with your classmates now? You are such smart that you must have been made rapid progress in your studies. Everything is OK with me. I often recall the happy days that we stayed together.
I'm looking forward to hearing from you.
Yours，
Li Hua
答案与解析：
Dear Wangping，
How are things going with you? It's been six since you studied abroad in England.
It is the first time that you been abroad. Without doubt, it is hard to fit in the life in a foreign country. Have you got to living there? And how about the food? As an exchange student, have you overcome all the difficulties you have English? Can you understand the teachers say in class and communicate with your classmates now? You are smart that you must have been made rapid progress in your studies. Everything is OK with me. I often recall the happy days we stayed together.
I'm looking forward to hearing from you.
Yours，
Li Hua
①month改为months month为可数名词，前有six修饰，应用复数。故将month改为months。
②had改为have 此句“It is the first time that sb have done...”是现在完成时的固定句型之一，故将had改为have。
③在in后加with fit in with...为固定搭配，意为“适应……”，故在in后加with。
④accustom改为accustomed get accustomed to doing sth.意为“习惯于做某事”，为固定用法，故将accustom改为accustomed。
⑤learn改为learning 分析句子结构可知，此处为have difficulty (in) doing sth.的变形。故将learn改为learning。
⑥that改为what 分析句子结构可知，understand为动词，后接宾语从句，宾语从句引导词在从句中作say的宾语，故将that改为what。
⑦free改为freely communicate为动词，应用副词修饰。freely意为“自由地”；free作为副词时，意为“免费地”，不符合语境。故将free改为freely。
⑧such改为so smart为形容词，前面应用so修饰；such常用来修饰名词结构。故将such改为so。
⑨删除been make与其主语you之间为主动关系，故应用主动语态，故删除been。
⑩that改为when 分析句子结构可知， ... we stayed together为定语从句，先行词为days，定语从句引导词在从句中作时间状语，应用when引导。故将that改为when。
Test 2
[2019·重庆一中检测]Tea has a long history in China, dated back to 5,000 years ago. Obvious, it plays an important part in Chinese culture. A good many of distinguished poets and writers had written many masterpieces about the appreciate of tea and the love for it, among them was Lu Yu in the Tang dynasty. He wrote The Classic of Tea, a first book on tea, but he was regarded as the “Tea Saint (圣人)”．
Chinese people take delight in tea-drinking. It served almost everywhere. Whenever guest visit, offering a cup of tea to them is a basic social custom. Tea is part of Chinese people's daily life.
答案与解析：
Tea has a long history in China, back to 5,000 years ago. , it plays an important part in Chinese culture. A good many distinguished poets and writers written many masterpieces about the of tea and the love for it, among was Lu Yu in the Tang dynasty. He wrote The Classic of Tea, first book on tea, he was regarded as the “Tea Saint (圣人)”．
Chinese people take delight in tea-drinking. It served almost everywhere. Whenever visit, offering a cup of tea to them is a basic social custom. Tea is part of Chinese people's daily life.
①dated改为dating date back to...意为“追溯到……”，无被动语态，此处应用现在分词形式作时间状语。故将dated改为dating。
②Obvious改为Obviously 此处作状语，用来修饰后面的整个句子，应用副词。故将Obvious改为Obviously。
③删除of a good many后可直接加可数名词复数，和many的用法类似，此处意为“许多杰出诗人和作家”，表示泛指，不需要of。故删除of。
④had改为have 句意为：许多杰出的诗人和作家写了许多对于茶的鉴赏和热爱的杰作……此处表示诗人和作家关于茶的写作这件事从过去持续到现在，应用现在完成时。故将had改为have。
⑤appreciate改为appreciation about是介词，后面接名词或动名词作宾语。故将appreciate改为appreciation。
⑥them改为whom 此处是非限制性定语从句，引导词作介词among的宾语，在从句中作主语，应用whom，指代名词短语poets and writers。故将them改为whom。
⑦a改为the “the＋序数词＋名词”表示“第几……”，“a/an＋序数词”表示“又一/再一”。此处特指《茶经》是关于茶的第一本书，应用定冠词。故将a改为the。
⑧but改为and/so 句意为：他写了第一本关于茶的书籍——《茶经》，(所以)被认为是“茶圣”。根据句意可知，前后句存在顺承关系或因果关系，而非转折关系。故将but改为and/so。
⑨在It后加is 此处It指代茶，与serve之间是被动关系，又根据本段整体时态可知，此处应用一般现在时。故在It后加is。
⑩guest改为guests 句意为：无论什么时候客人来访，给他们上一杯茶是一种基本的社交习俗。guest为可数名词，且根据后面的them可知，此处应用复数形式。故将guest改为guests。
Test 3
[2019·山西省联考]This morning my American friends Jack and I went to the temple fair holding in our city. When we arrived at the park, we were amazed at that we saw. There were such many different performances and booths selling tradition handicrafts. Since there were lots of games to play, food to eat, and performances to see, we spend at least six hours walking through crowds of people. Jack said he had great time because he not only tasted numerous kinds of local snacks and another dishes but also enjoyed live dragon and lion dances, waist drum dancing and other folk performances. We came back of home at about seven p．m., tired and happy.
答案与解析：
This morning my American Jack and I went to the temple fair in our city. When we arrived at the park, we were amazed at we saw. There were many different performances and booths selling handicrafts. Since there were lots of games to play, food to eat, and performances to see, we at least six hours walking through crowds of people. Jack said he had great time because he not only tasted numerous kinds of local snacks and dishes but also enjoyed live dragon and lion dances, waist drum dancing and other folk performances. We came back home at about seven p．m., tired happy.
①friends改为friend 此处指Jack这个美国朋友，故应用friend的单数形式。故将friends改为friend。
②holding改为held 分析句子成分可知，此处为非谓语作定语，修饰the temple fair，且hold与the temple fair之间为逻辑上的被动关系，故应用过去分词作后置定语。故将holding改为held。
③that改为what 分析句子结构可知，介词at之后是宾语从句，该从句中谓语动词saw缺少宾语，应用what引导该从句。故将that改为what。
④such改为so 名词前有many修饰时，其前通常用so，构成“so many＋复数名词”。故将such改为so。
快解：当名词前有many，much，few和little等词修饰时，要用so而不用such。
⑤tradition改为traditional 此处修饰名词handicrafts，应用形容词。故将tradition改为traditional。
⑥spend改为spent 根据语境可知，此处叙述的是发生在过去的事件，故谓语动词应用一般过去时。故将spend改为spent。
⑦在had后加a have a great time为固定搭配，意为“玩得开心”。故在had后加a。
⑧another改为other 根据语境可知，此处指许多当地小吃及其他的菜，other意为“其他的；别的”，符合语境。故将another改为other。
⑨删除of 句中home是副词，其前不加介词。故删除of。
⑩and改为but 句中tired和happy的意思是相对立的，所以用but表示意义的转折。故将and改为but。
Test 4
[2019·长春市质量监测二]It's been a long time before I left my hometown. I remember it was the beautiful place with an excellent environment, and people there were very kind-hearted. Last weekend, I make a call to a friend living there, but he sent me some pictures of the city by e-mail.
From the photo, I can see that great changes have been taken place there. For example, the streets have become wide, and the buildings higher. Beside, the people are dressed modern clothes. Several modern shopping malls are being built.
My hometown has changed very greatly that I can hardly believe my eyes. I hope my hometown can become better and better in the future.
答案与解析：
It's been a long time I left my hometown. I remember it was beautiful place with an excellent environment, and people there were very kind-hearted. Last weekend, I a call to a friend living there, he sent me some pictures of the city by e-mail.
From the , I can see that great changes have taken place there. For example, the streets have become , and the buildings higher. , the people are dressed modern clothes. Several modern shopping malls are being built.
My hometown has changed greatly that I can hardly believe my eyes. I hope my hometown can become better and better in the future.
①before改为since “It has been＋时间段＋since sb.did sth.”为固定句式，意为“自从某人做某事已经多久了”。故将before改为since。
②the改为a 句意为：我记得那是一个有着宜人环境的美丽的地方，那儿的人非常热心。结合句意可知，此处表示泛指，应用不定冠词，且beautiful的发音是以辅音音素开头，故将the改为a。
③make改为made 根据时间状语Last weekend可知，本句应使用一般过去时，故将make改为made。
④but改为and 句意为：上周末，我给住在那里的一位朋友打电话，他用邮件给我发了几张城市的照片。此处表示顺承关系，并非转折关系，故将but改为and。
⑤photo改为photos photo为可数名词，此处指不止一张照片，应用复数形式，故将photo改为photos。
⑥删除been take place意为“发生”，无被动形式，故删除been。
⑦wide改为wider 此处表示，现在的街道更宽了，楼房更高了，暗含与过去比较之意，因此此处应用比较级，故将wide改为wider。
⑧Beside改为Besides beside是介词，意为“在……旁边”；besides是副词，意为“此外”。此处应用副词，表递进，故将Beside改为Besides。
快解：学生如果看到beside单独在句首使用(后有逗号)，一般应改为besides。
⑨在dressed后加in be dressed in为固定搭配，意为“穿着……”，故在dressed后加in。
⑩very改为so so...that...为固定搭配，意为“如此……以至于……”，故将very改为so。
专项技能保分练(二十三) 短文改错
Test 1
[2019·成都第二次诊断]Last year, my friend and I went to visit the Yellow Mountain. We carried two backpacks, that turned out to be pretty heavier for the hike. I am not an experiencing hiker and those endless steps make me want to return to the safe and comfortable ground. But my friend encouraged me great. “Look, the top is coming closer and closer. We are almost there.” I pulled me together and kept going. After three-hour exhausting hike to the top, but with wonderful sceneries on the way, we got to the top finally. For our pleasure, we also found a hotel that looked very much inviting.
答案与解析：
Last year, my friend and I went to visit the Yellow Mountain. We carried two backpacks, turned out to be pretty for the hike. I am not an hiker and those endless steps me want to return to the safe and comfortable ground. But my friend encouraged me . “Look, the top is coming closer and closer. We are almost there.” I pulled together and kept going. After three-hour exhausting hike to the top, but with wonderful on the way, we got to the top finally. our pleasure, we also found a hotel that looked very inviting.
①that改为which 考查定语从句。分析句子结构可知，此处是一个定语从句，先行词是backpacks，应用which引导该非限制性定语从句，在从句中作主语。
②heavier改为heavy 考查形容词。分析句子结构可知，此处pretty是副词，相当于very，并没有比较的含义，故用形容词原级即可。故将heavier改为heavy。
③experiencing改为experienced 考查形容词。根据句意可知，此处表示“我不是一个经验丰富的远足者”，应用experienced“经验丰富的，有经验的”，experiencing没有这个意思。
④make改为made 考查动词的时态。与上文中的“Last year”呼应可知，事情发生在过去，故用一般过去时。
⑤great改为greatly 考查副词。一般用副词修饰动词，在句子中作状语，故用greatly修饰动词“encouraged”。
⑥me改为myself 考查反身代词。与句子的主语I呼应可知，此处应用I的反身代词myself作动词pull的宾语，表示“使自己振作起来”。
⑦After后加a 考查冠词。hike是可数名词，被“three-hour exhausting”修饰，表示“一次三个小时的令人筋疲力尽的远足”，且three-hour的发音以辅音音素开头，故用不定冠词a修饰。
⑧sceneries改为scenery 考查名词。scenery是不可数名词，没有复数形式。
⑨For改为To 考查固定搭配。表示“令某人快乐的是”应用to one's pleasure，介词to在此表示“某事发生时某人的反应”。
⑩删除much 考查副词。very是副词，可修饰形容词，在句子中作状语，而much是副词，一般修饰形容词的比较级，此处修饰形容词inviting应用副词very，故删除much。
Test 2
[2019·河南五校联考]
Dear Daniel，
I'm really delighted to learn that you have won first prize in your school's Chinese Traditional Culture Quiz last week. I'm writing to offer your congratulations to you from the bottoms of my heart.
I know that you have always being interested in Chinese traditional culture since you came from China. Learning Chinese is not easy for you, and you keep on studying it hard. Now your efforts have paid off. There is your hard work that leads you to so a great success. I'm sure you will achieve an even great success in your future studies.
Wish you happy stay in China!
Yours ，
Li Hua
答案与解析：
Dear Daniel，
I'm really delighted to learn that you won first prize in your school's Chinese Traditional Culture Quiz last week. I'm writing to offer congratulations to you from the of my heart.
I know that you have always interested in Chinese traditional culture since you came China. Learning Chinese is not easy for you, you keep on studying it hard. Now your efforts have paid off. is your hard work that leads you to a great success. I'm sure you will achieve an even success in your future studies.
Wish you happy stay in China!
Yours ，
Li Hua
①删除won前的have 考查时态。句中有明确地表示过去时间的状语last week，因此不能与现在完成时连用，只能用一般过去时。
②your改为my 考查代词。根据语境可知，此处表示“我写信向你表示我真心的祝贺”，故congratulations前的物主代词应用my。
③bottoms改为bottom 考查名词的单复数。from the bottom of one's heart“从内心，真心地”，是固定搭配，bottom用单数形式。
④being改为been 考查时态。根据时间状语从句since you... China可知，此处应用现在完成时，故将being改为been。
⑤from改为to 考查介词。根据语境可知，Daniel从国外来到中国，故用to。
⑥and改为but/yet 考查并列连词。句意：学中文对你来说并非易事，但是你坚持努力学习。前后分句之间存在语意上的转折关系，故用but/yet。
⑦There改为It 考查强调句。根据后面的that和语境“正是你的努力带领你取得如此大的成功”可知，本句是强调主语部分的强调句结构，故只能用It。
⑧so改为such 考查限定词。so＋adj.＋a/an＋单数可数名词＝such＋a/an＋adj.＋单数可数名词，表示“如此……的……”，故此处要用such。
⑨great改为greater 考查形容词的比较级。上文提到Daniel取得了很大的成功，此处表示“我确信你会在未来的学业上取得更大的成功”，语意上有递进关系，故用形容词的比较级。
⑩happy前加a 考查冠词。stay作“停留，逗留，暂住”讲时，为可数名词。
Test 3
[2019·石家庄一模]The other day, we moved to the new school yard, where lies in the far north of the city. We were all on high spirits. It is much big than the old one. The classrooms are bright and clean. We have a lot of modern equipment, making convenient for students to learn every subject. Now we can have a lot of after-school activity on the new playground. Our teachers often play the basketball and soccer together with us. As spring approached, the flowers newly planting in the yard have just come out. With such many green trees and fragrant flowers around, we feel it less hardly to study and our school life more enjoyable.
答案与解析：
The other day, we moved to the new school yard, lies in the far north of the city. We were all high spirits. It is much than the old one. The classrooms are bright and clean. We have a lot of modern equipment, making convenient for students to learn every subject. Now we can have a lot of after-school on the new playground. Our teachers often play basketball and soccer together with us. As spring , the flowers newly in the yard have just come out. With many green trees and fragrant flowers around, we feel it less to study and our school life more enjoyable.
①where改为which 考查定语从句。分析句子结构可知，此处引导非限制性定语从句，先行词为the new school yard，在从句中作主语，故应用which引导该定语从句。
②on改为in 考查介词。句意：我们都兴高采烈。in high spirits为固定搭配，意为“情绪高”。
③big改为bigger 考查形容词的比较级。根据该句中的“much”“than”可知，此处应用形容词的比较级。
④making后加it 考查代词。分析该句结构可知，making后缺形式宾语来指代动词不定式to learn every subject。
⑤activity改为activities 考查名词的单复数。此处activity“活动”为可数名词，根据该句中的“a lot of”可知，该处应用复数形式。
⑥删除the 考查冠词。表示球类、牌、棋等游戏名称的名词前用零冠词。
⑦approached改为approaches 考查动词的时态和主谓一致。根据语境可知，该处描述的是当前的情况，故用一般现在时；主语spring为第三人称单数，故用approaches。
⑧planting改为planted 考查非谓语动词。动词plant和其逻辑主语the flowers之间为动宾关系，故用过去分词形式作后置定语。
⑨such改为so 考查副词。根据many可知，该处应用副词so。
⑩hardly改为hard 考查形容词。句意：有这么多绿色的树和芳香的花在周围，我们觉得学习不那么困难了，我们的学校生活更愉快了。根据句意和前面的副词less可知，该处表示“不那么困难”，应用形容词hard。hardly为副词，表示“几乎不”，不符合语境。
Test 4
[2019·太原一模]My senior high school life is almost over. Although looked forward to entering college, I can't help missing those good old days very much that I feel sad. I'm unwilling to say goodbye to everyone and everything I am familiar. However, I come to realize nature never stood still. Different seasons come and go. Plants and animals die and new one come to life. We, like everything in nature, has to adapt to the changes. Before knowing it, I am a kind of calm. Now I'd like to recall the most wonderful things what have happened, and accept happy whatever is to happen.
答案与解析：
My senior high school life is almost over. Although forward to entering college, I can't help missing those good old days much that I feel sad. I'm unwilling to say goodbye to everyone and everything I am familiar . However, I come to realize nature never still. Different seasons come and go. Plants and animals die and new come to life. We, like everything in nature, to adapt to the changes. knowing it, I am kind of calm. Now I'd like to recall the most wonderful things have happened, and accept whatever is to happen.
①looked改为looking 考查现在分词。分析句子结构可知，look和其逻辑主语I是主谓关系，所以把looked改为looking。
②very改为so 考查固定用法。根据句意可知，此处是so... that...结构，意为“如此……以至于……”，所以把very改为so。
③familiar后加with 考查介词。根据句意可知，此处应为be familiar with sth.“熟悉某事物”。所以在familiar后加with。
④stood改为stands 考查时态。根据语境可知，此处为客观描述，应用一般现在时，所以把stood改为stands。
⑤one改为ones 考查代词。分析句子结构并结合语境可知，此处指代“Plants and animals”，所以用ones。
⑥has改为have 考查时态和主谓一致。句意：像自然界中的一切，我们不得不适应变化。此处为一般性描述，应用一般现在时，且主语是We，谓语动词应用复数，所以把has改为have。
⑦Before改为After 考查介词。句意：知道了这一点之后，我有点儿冷静了。根据句意可知此处应用After。
⑧删除kind前的a 考查冠词。句意参见上题解析。kind of表示“有点儿”，为固定用法，故a多余。
⑨what改为that 考查定语从句。分析句子结构可知，此处引导定语从句，指代前面的最高级形式“the most wonderful things”，所以把what改为that。
⑩happy改为happily 考查副词。修饰动词一般用副词，故用副词happily修饰动词accept。
专项技能保分练(二十二) 短文改错
Test 1
[2019·陕西省第二次联考]I am a person who always has a smile in my face. I don't like to be sad at any giving point in time. Whenever I came across any difficulties in my life, I get worried for a few minute as I am a human being and I have feelings, too. But again, I will tell one thing to me — life is short and you shouldn't waste time being sad, so just to cheer up. You are the one which needs to face the trouble. Wherever it is, you have to try to solve it. Be brave and accept the challenge with a smile or you will feel it was such small thing.
答案与解析：
I am a person who always has a smile my face. I don't like to be sad at any point in time. Whenever I across any difficulties in my life, I get worried for a few as I am a human being and I have feelings, too. But again, I will tell one thing to — life is short and you shouldn't waste time being sad, so just cheer up. You are the one needs to face the trouble. it is, you have to try to solve it. Be brave and accept the challenge with a smile you will feel it was such small thing.
①in改为on 作地点介词时，in意为“在……内”，on意为“在……上面”，笑容应是展现在脸上，故将in改为on。
②giving改为given 分析句子成分可知，此处在句中作定语，修饰限定point，given在此为形容词，意为“指定的，特定的”；at any given point in time意为“在任何特定的时间点”，符合语境，故将giving改为given。
③came改为come 根据语境可知，此处在描述个人性格特点，应用一般现在时，故将came改为come。
④minute改为minutes minute为可数名词，其前有a few修饰，应用复数形式，故将minute改为minutes。
⑤me改为myself 根据语境可知，此处表示“我会告诉我自己一件事情”，谓语will tell的主语和宾语同指一人，此处的宾语应用反身代词myself，故将me改为myself。
⑥删除to so表示“因此”时，为连词，后面应是完整的句子，to do不定式不能构成完整的句子，因此应删除to，构成祈使句，故删除to。
⑦which改为that/who 此处为定语从句，先行词为不定代词one，修饰不定代词时，引导词只能用that，不用which，又因为先行词在这里指人，也可用who，故将which改为that/who。
⑧Wherever改为Whatever wherever在从句中充当状语，whatever充当主语、宾语或表语，分析句子成分可知，此处缺少is的表语，故将Wherever改为Whatever。
⑨or改为and “祈使句＋and/or/otherwise＋陈述句”为固定句式，当表示动作顺承时，用and连接；表示转折时，用or/otherwise连接。根据语境及句意可知，此处表示顺承，故将or改为and。
⑩在small前加a thing为可数名词，单数形式前应用不定冠词，such a small thing指“如此小的一件事”，故在small前加a。
Test 2
[2019·安徽安庆二模]Last weekend I went fishing with my cousins by a river, where was two miles away from my home by bike. When we were about to return for home, we found one of our bike lost. We were really nervous then. Asking about the lost bike, nobody told the truth except me. And to my surprise, my parents don't scold me. Instead, they said I was a honest boy. I have benefited great from my family rules. I'm not the best at schoolwork, but classmates trust me and nearly everyone is willing to making friends with me. It helps me know better about “Honesty is the best policy”．
答案与解析：
Last weekend I went fishing with my cousins by a river, was two miles away from my home by bike. When we were about to return home, we found one of our lost. We were really nervous then. about the lost bike, nobody told the truth except me. to my surprise, my parents scold me. Instead, they said I was honest boy. I have benefited from my family rules. I'm not the best at schoolwork, but classmates trust me and nearly everyone is willing to friends with me. It helps me know better about “Honesty is the best policy”．
①where改为which 此处引导非限制性定语从句，先行词是a river，关系词在从句中作主语，故将where改为which。
②删除for home为副词时，不与任何介词连用，故删除for。
③bike改为bikes “one of＋可数名词复数形式”为固定搭配，意为“……中的一个”，故将bike改为bikes。
④Asking改为Asked 此处为分词作状语，ask与其逻辑主语we之间为被动关系，应用过去分词形式，表示被问，故将Asking改为Asked。
⑤And改为But/Yet 句意为：但是令我吃惊的是，我的父母没有批评我，而是说我是个诚实的孩子。根据句意可知，此处前后为转折关系，表示“但是/然而”，故将And改为But/Yet。
⑥don't改为didn't 根据时间状语Last weekend可知，此处表示发生在过去的动作，应用一般过去时，故将don't改为didn't。
⑦a改为an honest中的字母h不发音，该词的发音以元音音素开头，其前有不定冠词时，应用an，故将a改为an。
⑧great改为greatly 此处修饰动词benefited，应用副词，故将great改为greatly。
⑨在classmates前加my 此处指“我的同学们”，应为特指，故在classmates前加my。
⑩making改为make be willing to do sth.为固定搭配，意为“乐意做某事”，故将making改为make。
Test 3
[2019·湖南省师大附中月考五]Recently, a lot of students in our school has fallen ill due to the bad weather. I notice they don't ask doctors for help but tried medicines by themselves in order to save time. Personally, I don't agree with them. First, it is not easier for us students to make a wise choose of medicines to cure illness. For example, when having a cold, most of us prefer to take antibiotics, which in fact is not necessary at most cases. And medicines have side effect, which may pose a threat to us because we don't have the enough knowledge of them. From I stand, I strongly suggest we talk to the doctor after taking medicines. Because stay healthy is more important than anything else. As a saying goes, an ounce of prevention is worth a pound of cure.
答案与解析：
Recently, a lot of students in our school fallen ill due to the bad weather. I notice they don't ask doctors for help but medicines by themselves in order to save time. Personally, I don't agree with them. First, it is not for us students to make a wise of medicines to cure illness. For example, when having a cold, most of us prefer to take antibiotics, which in fact is not necessary most cases. And medicines have side , which may pose a threat to us because we don't have enough knowledge of them. From I stand, I strongly suggest we talk to the doctor taking medicines. Because healthy is more important than anything else. As a saying goes, an ounce of prevention is worth a pound of cure.
①has改为have 本句主语为a lot of students，谓语动词应用复数形式，故将has改为have。
②tried改为try 分析句子结构可知，try为句子的谓语，与前面的don't ask为并列关系，时态应保持一致，故应用一般现在时。故将tried改为try。
③easier改为easy “It is＋adj. for sb. to do sth.”为固定句式，意为“做某事对某人来说是……的”。easy在句中作表语，句中没有比较之意。故将easier改为easy。
④choose改为choice make a choice为固定搭配，意为“作出选择”。故将choose改为choice。
⑤at改为in in most cases意为“在大多数情况下”，是固定短语。故将at改为in。
⑥effect改为effects effect为可数名词，side effect意为“副作用”。由于其前没有冠词修饰，所以此处应用复数形式。故将effect改为effects。
⑦删除the enough knowledge在句中非特指，所以，前面的the是多余的，故将the删除。
⑧在From后加where 分析句子结构可知，此处为宾语从句。句意为：从我个人的立场看，我强烈建议我们在服药前和医生谈谈。引导词在句中作地点状语，应用where引导该从句。故在From后加where。
⑨after改为before 根据常识可知，应在服药前咨询医生。故将after改为before。
⑩stay改为staying 此处作句子主语，应用动名词形式。故将stay改为staying。
Test 4
[2019·衡水中学考试]As my parents and I was on our way to pay for our parking space, a woman came up to them. She said she had just paid for hers but she had called back home just now and was curious about how we would like to have her parking pass. She refused to take up any money for it and insisted that we took it. We gladly accepted it and thanked her. We got down to the beach in time to watch the sun setting because of this woman's kind and we were so thankfully. It was a wonderful experience and a sunset was so delighted a sight!
答案与解析：
As my parents and I on our way to pay for our parking space, a woman came up to . She said she had just paid for hers but she had called back home just now and was curious about we would like to have her parking pass. She refused to take any money for it and insisted that we it. We gladly accepted it and thanked her. We got down to the beach in time to watch the sun setting because of this woman's and we were so . It was a wonderful experience and sunset was so a sight!
①was改为were 本句主语为my parents and I，所以系动词应为复数形式，故将was改为were。
②them改为us 此处指代前面提到的my parents and I，所以，应用第一人称复数宾格代词。句意为：……一位女士向我们走来。故将them改为us。
③在had后加been she与call back之间为被动关系，因此应用过去完成时的被动语态。故在had后加been。
④how改为whether 句意为：她说她已经付了停车费，但是刚被打电话叫回家。她想知道我们是否愿意用她的停车通行证。about后接宾语从句，从句引导词意为“是否”，且位于介词后，应用whether。故将how改为whether。
⑤删除up 句意为：她拒绝因此而要任何钱并坚持要我们接受她的停车通行证。take up意为“占据(一定的时间或空间)”，此处take意为“接受(某人给的东西、提议等)”。故删除up。
⑥took改为take insist作“坚持主张；坚决要求”讲时，后接宾语从句用虚拟语气，谓语用“should＋动词原形”的形式，should可以省略。故将took改为take。
⑦kind改为kindness kind在此作介词of的宾语，其前有woman's修饰，应用其名词形式，意为“善良”，故将kind改为kindness。
⑧thankfully改为thankful 此处在句中作表语，应用形容词形式。句意为：因为这位女士的善举，我们才能及时去到海边看日落，我们对此很是感激。故将thankfully改为thankful。
⑨a改为the 因前文已经提到过sun setting，所以此处应表示特指，其前应加定冠词the，故将a改为the。
⑩delighted改为delightful 句意为：这是一次美好的体验，并且日落也是如此美丽的景色。delighted意为“高兴的”，常用人作主语；delightful意为“令人愉快的”，常用物体作主语。此处形容日落令人愉快，应用delightful。故将delighted改为delightful。
专项技能保分练(二十四) 短文改错
Test 1
[2019·山东省、湖北省联考]Several days before, we held an activity in the schoolyard to learn and appreciate what the history and art of Peking Opera facial masks. Facial masks dated back to over 1,000 years. Different colors of masks, as well the various facial expressions, represent different characters and personalities of the roles. Prepared Peking-Opera-themed things, we let Peking Opera fans try them. It took me nearly one and a half hour to finish one piece of face painting. Some fans even put on facial makeup under the help of Miss Mei, a professional teacher, and they certain looked impressive. We all admired them because of the perfect makeup technique. What an meaningful day we had!
答案与解析：
Several days , we held an activity in the schoolyard to learn and appreciate the history and art of Peking Opera facial masks. Facial masks back to over 1,000 years. Different colors of masks, as well the various facial expressions, represent different characters and personalities of the roles. Peking-Opera-themed things, we let Peking Opera fans try them. It took me nearly one and a half to finish one piece of face painting. Some fans even put on facial makeup the help of Miss Mei, a professional teacher, and they looked impressive. We all admired because of the perfect makeup technique. What meaningful day we had!
①before改为ago 副词错误。ago表示“从事情发生到现在时间过去了多久”，需和过去时连用。before指“从事情发生到过去某个时间是多久”，常和完成时连用。由下文对活动的介绍可知，活动是几天前举办的，故此处用ago。
②删除appreciate后的what 引导词多用。what可引导宾语从句，但此处宾语是名词短语，故what多余。
③dated改为date 动词时态错误。此处date back应用一般现在时表示一种客观情况，且前面主语为复数形式，故用date。
④as well后加as 固定搭配错误。as well as意为“也，除……之外，以及某事物/某人”。
⑤Prepared改为Preparing 非谓语动词错误。此处作状语，且prepare与主语we是逻辑上的主谓关系，故用现在分词形式。
⑥hour改为hours 名词单复数错误。one and a half后跟名词复数。
⑦under改为with 介词错误。with the help of...“在……的帮助下”。
⑧certain改为certainly 词性错误。修饰动词looked应用副词。
⑨them改为her 代词错误。我们都很钦佩她娴熟的化妆技巧。此处指上文中的Miss Mei，故用her。
⑩an改为a 冠词错误。meaningful读音以辅音音素开头，故应用不定冠词a。
Test 2
[2019·江西八所重点中学高三联考]It was raining hardly outside, which made it difficult for me to go home for lunch. Just as I was wondering what I should eat at noon, I saw a familiar figure passed by our classroom. I rushed out and found it was my mother, already in fifties, which brought me lunch in spite of the heavy rain. In China, many parents make great sacrifices for our children. But what had the children done in return? All too often, most children just take it for granted that their parent should serve for them unconditionally. My dear mum or dad, thank you very much for bringing me up. How shall I do for you?
答案与解析：
It was raining outside, which made it difficult for me to go home for lunch. Just as I was wondering what I should eat at noon, I saw a familiar figure by our classroom. I rushed out and found it was my mother, already in fifties, brought me lunch in spite of the heavy rain. In China, many parents make great sacrifices for children. But what the children done in return? All too often, most children just take it for granted that their should serve them unconditionally. My dear mum dad, thank you very much for bringing me up. shall I do for you?
①hardly改为hard 考查副词。此处表示外面雨下得很大。hard意为“大量地”，符合语境；hardly意为“几乎不”，与语境不符。
②passed改为passing 考查非谓语动词。句意：正当我在想中午吃什么时，我看见一个熟悉的身影从我们教室经过。see sb. doing sth.为固定用法，表示“看到某人正在做某事”。
③in后加her 考查固定搭配。句意：我冲出去，发现那是我妈妈，她已经五十多岁了，冒着大雨给我送来午饭。in one's fifties为固定用法，意为“在某人五十多岁时”。
④which改为who 考查关系代词。分析该句结构可知，此处引导非限制性定语从句，先行词为my mother，此处在从句中作主语，故用关系代词who引导该定语从句。
⑤our改为their 考查代词。句意：在中国，许多父母为他们的孩子作出了巨大的牺牲。该句主语为many parents，此处表示“他们的孩子”，故用their。
⑥had改为have 考查动词的时态。句意：但是，作为回报，孩子们又做了些什么呢？根据句意可知，该处陈述的是发生在过去的动作对现在造成的影响，强调的是现在的情况，故用现在完成时。
⑦parent改为parents 考查名词的单复数。parent为可数名词，根据该句中的“most children”和“their”可知，该处应用复数形式。
⑧删除serve后的for 考查介词。此处serve为及物动词，serve sb.意为“为某人服务”，故删除for。
⑨or改为and 考查连词。句意：亲爱的爸爸妈妈，非常感谢你们把我养大。根据句意可知，mum和dad之间为并列关系，故用and。
⑩How改为What 考查疑问词。句意：我能为你们做些什么？根据句意可知，此处应用What。
Test 3
[2019·洛阳市第二次统考]When I was very young, I stayed at my hometown with my grandma. She was a diligent woman. She likes to grow vegetables or takes care of all the houseworks. Though my parents often ask her to quit the work, my grandma never listen. She takes that she does as her great joy. I understand her because I see her smile and she is satisfied with life. Several months before, my father bought for her a new smartphone. And during the Spring Festival, I instructed her how email and use the Internet. Aside from emailing, she thinks it feels greatly to talk to their grandchildren on WeChat.
答案与解析：
When I was very young, I stayed at my hometown with my grandma. She a diligent woman. She likes to grow vegetables takes care of all the . Though my parents often ask her to quit the work, my grandma never . She takes she does as her great joy. I understand her because I see her smile and she is satisfied with life. Several months , my father bought her a new smartphone. And during the Spring Festival, I instructed her how email and use the Internet. Aside from emailing, she thinks it feels to talk to grandchildren on WeChat.
①was改为is 考查时态。文章的主体时态是一般现在时，故把was改为is。
②or改为and 考查连词。根据语境可知，前后句表示顺承关系，不是转折关系，故把or改为and。
③houseworks改为housework 考查名词。housework是不可数名词，没有复数，故把houseworks改为housework。
④listen改为listens 考查时态和主谓一致。文章的主体时态是一般现在时，主语是my grandma，故把listen改为listens。
⑤that改为what 考查名词性从句。分析句子结构可知，此处引导宾语从句，作does的宾语，表示“……的事物”，故把that改为what。
⑥before改为ago 考查副词。before表示从事情发生到过去某个时间是多久，ago表示从事情发生到现在时间过去了多久。根据语境和文章的主体时态为一般现在时可知，此处应用ago。
⑦删除bought后的for 考查介词。buy sb. sth.“给某人买某物”为固定用法。for多余，故删除。
⑧how后加to 考查非谓语动词。此处考查“疑问词＋不定式”结构，故在how后加to。
⑨greatly改为great 考查词形转换。feel是连系动词，后面应该用形容词great构成系表结构。
⑩their改为her 考查代词。该句主语是she，此处表示“她的(外)孙子(女)们”，所以应用形容词性物主代词her。
Test 4
[2019·安徽省百所重点中学三模]I would never forget the day where my sister left home to work in another city. I was sad or unwilling to separate from her, but later I realized our separation was not permanently. She often wrote to me, telling she felt proud to be able to live on her. Since my sister was able to earn money from her first job, she decided to find out her own apartment, at least her own rooms. That
was how she met Rebecca, who put an advertisement to a roommate. It was perfect match. With so many sharing interests and values, they become good friends quickly.
答案与解析：
I would never forget the day my sister left home to work in another city. I was sad unwilling to separate from her, but later I realized our separation was not . She often wrote to me, telling she felt proud to be able to live on . Since my sister was able to earn money from her first job, she decided to find her own apartment, at least her own . That was how she met Rebecca, who put an advertisement a roommate. It was perfect match. With so many interests and values, they good friends quickly.
①where改为when 定语从句关系词错误。分析句子结构可知，这里用when引导定语从句修饰先行词day，且when在定语从句中作时间状语。
②or改为and 并列连词错误。我感到伤心，而且不愿意跟姐姐分开。此处表顺承，而不是表选择，故用and。
③permanently改为permanent 形容词错误。此处从句为主系表结构，应该用形容词permanent“永久的”作表语。
④her改为herself 代词错误。这里用反身代词herself，与从句的主语she呼应。
⑤删除find后的out 副词多余。find out意为“查明，弄清(情况)”，find则指找到或发现寻找的物品。根据语境可知，此处用find。
⑥rooms改为room 名词单复数错误。她决定找一间属于自己的公寓，至少有一间自己的房间。此处显然用room的单数形式。
⑦to改为for 介词错误。此处表示登广告找室友，应该用介词for表示“为得到，为获取”。
⑧在perfect前加a 缺少冠词。match在此处是可数名词，表示“匹配”，且常用单数形式，故应在perfect前加不定冠词，又因perfect的发音以辅音音素开头，故用a。
⑨sharing改为shared 非谓语动词错误。此处非谓语动词作前置定语，表示“共同的”，share与被修饰词是逻辑上的动宾关系，应该用过去分词作定语。
⑩become改为became 时态错误。全文记叙的是发生在过去的事情，因此此处应用一般过去时。
