Unit 4 What’s the best movie theater? Section B Writing 课件16张PPT

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Unit 4.
What's the best movie theater?
writing
Lead in
Nigeria尼日利亚
Write an email about your town and the best places/things to the students from Nigeria(尼日利亚).
Places to eat


口味:4.8 服务:4.5 价格:4.3

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口味:4.7 服务:4.5 价格:4.7

45条 ?45/人

40条 ?20/人

30条 ?35/人

城市农夫
大众点评
_____is the best place to eat, because_____.
KFC
Willove
Cityfarmers
Places to live


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65条 ?88/人

40条 ?128/人

80条 ?188/人

城市农夫
大众点评
_____is the best place to live, because______.


鑫田
长江宾馆

7天连锁
Xintian Hotel
Changjiang Hotel
7 Days Hotel
Places to study


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765条

2065条

城市农夫
大众点评
____is the best place to study, because____.





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凤凰初级中学
江声实验中学
云龙实验中学
Fenghuang Middle School
Jiangsheng Middle School
Yunlong Middle School
Places to play


环境:4.9 娱乐:4.8 设施:4.8

环境:4.9 娱乐:4.8 设施:4.8

环境:4.8 娱乐:4.8 设施:4.7

765条

69条

城市农夫
大众点评
____is the best place to play, because____.





78条
金霞山
白石广场
沿江风光带
Mount Jinxia
Baishi Square
sightseeing Area of Xiangjiang
Read the teacher's article
I live in Yi Suhe Town. There are many places you can enjoy your time. For restaurant, I think Willove is the best place to eat because it has the most delicious food. My friends like it, too. So I can sometimes meet my friends there. At night, you can live in Xintian Hotel. Although it is a little expensive, it has the most comfortable bed. And you can watch the most wonderful show in this hotel. For study, Fenghuang Middle School is a good choice. Because it has the smartest students. You can ask them many questions about study. Mount Jinxia is the best place to play. There is something for everyone in Yi Suhe Town.
Read and answer
What activities can people have in my town? 1.__________________________________________________________________
2.____________________________
3.___________________________
eat and meet friends
live and watch the most wonderful show
ask them many questions about study

Body
1. For restaurant, I think...is the best place to eat
because it has the delicious food. ..I can
sometimes meet my friends there.
2. At night, you can live in... Although it is..., it has
the most... And you can watch the most
wonderful show in this hotel.
3. For study, ...is a good choice. Because it has...
You can ask them many questions about study.


Beginning:
Ending:
I live in Yi Suhe Town.
There is something for everyone in Yi Suhe Town.
Tip1.Make a list of the main points can help you
write the article.
列举要点能帮助你写文章。
Tip2.A good ending can upgrade our article.
一个好的结尾能使我们的文章升格。
Can you think about more endings for my article?
1.首尾呼应:There is something for everyone in Yi Suhe town.
2.个人情感: ...
3.谚语: ...
e.g.1.The best scenery(风景) is around us.
2.East or west, home is the best.
I live in Yi Suhe Town. There are many places you can enjoy your time. For restaurant, I think Willove is the best place to eat because it has the delicious food. My friends like it, too. ___ I can sometimes meet my friends there. At night, you can live in Xintian Hotel. ________ it is a little expensive, it has the most comfortable bed. ____ you can watch the most wonderful show in this hotel. For study, Fenghuang Middle School is a good choice. _______ it has the smartest students. You can ask them many questions about study. Mount Jinxia is the best place to play. There is something for everyone in Yi Suhe Town.
Find out the conjunctions(连词).
and, or, but, because, so, although
So
Although
And
Because
Tip3.Correct conjunctions can beautify our article.
恰当的连词可以美化我们的文章
Work in pairs
A: Which is the best...in your hometown?
B: ...
A: Why?
B: Because...
A: What acitivities can people do there?
B: ...
Write an email about your town and the best places/things to the students from Nigeria(尼日利亚).
Writing
写作评分标准



档次
分值
作文分五档计分
一 13-15 要点齐全，语篇连贯，层次清晰，字迹工整，几乎没有语法错误。
二 10-12 要点齐全，表达流畅，少量语法错误。
三 7-9 有1-2处要点遗漏，单词拼写及语法错误较多。
四 4-6 至少出现了2个要点，且有2-3个可读句的。
五 0-3 没有可读句子，不作答或答题内容与主题无关。
Show time!
Remember:
It's always a pleasure to greet
a friend from after.
有朋自远方来，不亦乐乎。