人教版高中英语Book 10 Unit 3 Fairness for all Speech Writing教学课件 （共18张PPT）

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福 州 八 中
speech
欢 迎 您
Lead-in Pre-writing Writing Presentation Homework
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Pre-writing--writing task:
advice

Suppose you’re invited to deliver a speech on“My high school”to the lower graders on behalf of the third-graders. The speech must be written within 120 words.
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Pre-writing--structure of the speech:
Main body
Ending
Speech
Beginning
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Pre-writing--beginning and ending:





Beginning
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Ending
Good morning, ladies and gentlemen. I’m Wang Ping from Class 6, Senior 3. It’s my great honor to give you a speech on behalf of the third-graders. The title of my speech today is “My high school”.
Main body
Thanks for your attention.
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advice
main body
Pre-writing—brainstorming for the main body:
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Pre-writing--rhetorics in the speech:
I have a dream that one day…
repetition
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Pre-writing--rhetorics in the speech:
“We hold these truths to be self-evident that all men are created equal. ”
quotation
from The American Constitution
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Pre-writing--rhetorics in the speech:
...an oasis of freedom and justice...
...a stone of hope from the mountain of despair...
metaphor
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Pre-writing--rhetorics in the speech:
rhetoric
修辞
repetition
metaphor
quotation
Lead-in Pre-writing Writing Presentation Homework
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Pre-writing--brief oral practice:
Discuss in pairs about “memories, growth, appreciation or wishes” by using repetition, quotation, metaphor or simile.
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repetition
●I have a dream that…
● I won’t forget…
● I’m proud of my school because…
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quotation
Pre-writing--suggested sentence patterns for writing:
●俗话说，患难见真情。
As an old saying goes, “________________.”
●俗话说，先苦后甜。
There’s a popular saying which says that “No ______ without ______. ”
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metaphor and simile
Pre-writing--suggested sentence patterns for writing:
● Our ____teacher is like our ______who is very concerned about us.
● Our school looks like a_______ which has many trees and flowers.
● My class is a_______ where we have great fun together.
● Our dormitories have become a ______where we study and live happily.
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repetition
●I have a dream that…
● I won’t forget…
● I’m proud of my school because…
…
quotation
● AS an old saying goes, “A friend in need is a friend indeed.”
● There’s a popular saying which says that “No sweet without sweat”.
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metaphor and simile
● Our ____teacher is like …
● Our school looks like …
● My class is a…
● Our dormitories have
become a…
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Pre-writing—oral practice:
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Writing :
Group 1&2 --memories and growth
Group 3&4 --appreciation and wishes
Use at least one rhetoric mentioned today.
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repetition
●I have a dream that…
● I won’t forget…
● I’m proud of my school because…
…
quotation
Suggested sentence patterns for writing:
● AS an old saying goes, “A friend in need is a friend indeed.”
● There’s a popular saying which says that “No sweet without sweat”.
…
metaphor and simile
● Our ____teacher is like …
● Our school looks like …
● My class is a…
● Our dormitories have
become a…
●My classmates are my…
…
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Presentation:
comments 1 2 3 4 5 6
handwriting neat
tidy ? ? ? ? ?
sentence structures good ? ? ? ? ?
rhetoric √ ? ? ? ? ?
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Homework assignment:
Reedit your speech draft with the right linking words and rhetorical techniques.
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