(共17张PPT)
Sissi
Hangzhou
Nanjing
Fuzhou
Inner
Mongolia
Jiangxi
What
do
you
think
of
Jiangxi
Last
year,
I
stepped
into
the
beautiful
province
of
Jiangxi.
And
it
was
as
I
always
thought:
green
countryside,
clear
sky
and
fresh
air.
Luckily,
on
the
first
day,
I
was
taken
to
visit
Wuyuan.
When
I
saw
the
ancient
buildings
that
were
among
millions
of
yellow
flowers,
I
felt
like
being
part
of
a
picture.
Wugong
mountain
was
my
next
step.
Although
it's
difficult
to
get
to
the
top
of
the
mountain,
I
thought
that
I
had
been
taken
to
a
paradise
when
I
saw
the
sea
of
clouds.
Sometimes
it's
so
quiet
and
comfortable
that
I
really
wanted
to
live
among
those
hills
for
a
while.
The
final
leg
of
the
day's
journey
was
a
primary
school.
I
was
welcomed
warmly
by
the
smiles
on
the
faces
of
many
young
kids.
I
believe
that
if
you
have
the
chance
to
visit
Jiangxi,
the
trip
will
remain
in
your
memory
forever.
Last
year,
I
stepped
into
the
beautiful
province
of
Jiangxi.
And
it
was
as
I
always
thought:
green
countryside,
clear
sky
and
fresh
air.
Luckily,
on
the
first
day,
I
was
taken
to
visit
Wuyuan.
When
I
saw
the
ancient
buildings
that
were
among
millions
of
yellow
flowers,
I
felt
like
being
part
of
a
picture.
Wugong
mountain
was
my
next
step.
Although
it's
difficult
to
get
to
the
top
of
the
mountain,
I
thought
that
I
had
been
taken
to
a
paradise
when
I
saw
the
sea
of
clouds.
Sometimes
it's
so
quiet
and
comfortable
that
I
really
wanted
to
live
among
those
hills
for
a
while.
The
final
leg
of
the
day's
journey
was
a
primary
school.
I
was
welcomed
warmly
by
the
smiles
on
the
faces
of
many
young
kids.
I
believe
that
if
you
have
the
chance
to
visit
Jiangxi,
the
trip
will
remain
in
your
memory
forever.
adjectives
conjunctions（连词）
Last
year,
I
stepped
into
the
beautiful
province
of
Jiangxi.
And
it
was
as
I
always
thought:
green
countryside,
clear
sky
and
fresh
air.
Luckily,
on
the
first
day,
I
was
taken
to
visit
Wuyuan.
When
I
saw
the
ancient
buildings
that
were
among
millions
of
yellow
flowers,
I
felt
like
being
part
of
a
picture.
Wugong
mountain
was
my
next
step.
Although
it's
difficult
to
get
to
the
top
of
the
mountain,
I
thought
that
I
had
been
taken
to
a
paradise
when
I
saw
the
sea
of
clouds.
Sometimes
it's
so
quiet
and
comfortable
that
I
really
wanted
to
live
among
those
hills
for
a
while.
The
final
leg
of
the
day's
journey
was
a
primary
school.
I
was
welcomed
warmly
by
the
smiles
on
the
faces
of
many
young
kids.
I
believe
that
if
you
have
the
chance
to
visit
Jiangxi,
the
trip
will
remain
in
your
memory
forever.
adjectives
conjunctions（连词）
Last
year,
I
stepped
into
the
beautiful
province
of
Jiangxi.
And
it
was
as
I
always
thought:
green
countryside,
clear
sky
and
fresh
air.
Luckily,
on
the
first
day,
I
was
taken
to
visit
Wuyuan.
When
I
saw
the
ancient
buildings
that
were
among
millions
of
yellow
flowers,
I
felt
like
being
part
of
a
picture.
Wugong
mountain
was
my
next
step.
Although
it's
difficult
to
get
to
the
top
of
the
mountain,
I
thought
that
I
had
been
taken
to
a
paradise
when
I
saw
the
sea
of
clouds.
Sometimes
it's
so
quiet
and
comfortable
that
I
really
wanted
to
live
among
those
hills
for
a
while.
The
final
leg
of
the
day's
journey
was
a
primary
school.
I
was
welcomed
warmly
by
the
smiles
on
the
faces
of
many
young
kids.
I
believe
that
if
you
have
the
chance
to
visit
Jiangxi,
the
trip
will
remain
in
your
memory
forever.
adjectives
conjunctions（连词）
complex
sentences（复合句）
Last
year,
I
stepped
into
the
beautiful
province
of
Jiangxi.
And
it
was
as
I
always
thought:
green
countryside,
clear
sky,
fresh
air.
Luckily,
on
the
first
day,
I
was
taken
to
visit
Wuyuan.
When
I
saw
the
ancient
buildings
that
were
among
millions
of
yellow
flowers,
I
felt
like
being
part
of
a
picture.
Wugong
mountain
was
my
next
step.
Although
it's
difficult
to
get
to
the
top
of
the
mountain,
I
thought
that
I
had
been
taken
to
a
paradise
when
I
saw
the
sea
of
clouds.
Sometimes
it's
so
quiet
and
comfortable
that
I
really
wanted
to
live
among
those
hills
for
a
while.
The
final
leg
of
the
day's
journey
was
a
primary
school.
I
was
welcomed
warmly
by
the
smiles
on
the
faces
of
many
young
kids.
I
believe
that
if
you
have
the
chance
to
visit
Jiangxi,
the
trip
will
remain
in
your
memory
forever.
宾语从句
状语从句
定语从句
Last
year,
I
stepped
into
the
beautiful
province
of
Jiangxi.
And
it
was
as
I
always
thought:
green
countryside,
clear
sky,
fresh
air.
Luckily,
on
the
first
day,
I
was
taken
to
visit
Wuyuan.
When
I
saw
the
ancient
buildings
that
were
among
millions
of
yellow
flowers,
I
felt
like
being
part
of
a
picture.
Wugong
mountain
was
my
next
step.
Although
it's
difficult
to
get
to
the
top
of
the
mountain,
I
thought
that
I
had
been
taken
to
a
paradise
when
I
saw
the
sea
of
clouds.
Sometimes
it's
so
quiet
and
comfortable
that
I
really
wanted
to
live
among
those
hills
for
a
while.
The
final
leg
of
the
day's
journey
was
a
primary
school.
I
was
welcomed
warmly
by
the
smiles
on
the
faces
of
many
young
kids.
I
believe
that
if
you
have
the
chance
to
visit
Jiangxi,
the
trip
will
remain
in
your
memory
forever.
complex
sentences
状语从句
宾语从句
状语从句
状语从句
定语从句
宾语从句
状语从句
adj.
:beautiful
...
conj.:although
...
宾语从句：
I
believe
that...
状语从句：
so...
that...
定语从句：
...that...
Jane
Dear
Jane,
How
is
everything
going
I
know
you
miss
me
and
always
want
to
travel
in
Quzhou.
Last
week,
you
came
to
my
hometown-Quzhou.
It'
a
pity
that
I
wasn't
there
at
that
time.
Please
tell
me
where
you
went
Did
you
eat
anything
special
or
go
shopping
there
What
do
you
think
of
Quzhou
I'm
looking
forward
to
your
reply!
Yours,
Sissi
past
tense
Step1
Step2
Step3
Step4
spent
,
ancient
rang
the
bell
was
logical
I
visited
Lanke
mountain
that
was
an
amazing
mountain
with
lots
of
strange
rocks
and
a
magical
story.
There
were
so
many
birds
that
I
could
even
hear
the
birds
singsing.
Because
I
hope
I
can
get
good
luck
by
ringing
it.
having
delicious
food
and
going
shopping
there.
Homework:
1.Suppose
you're
Jane
and
write
the
letter.
2.Fill
the
box
with
more
words
and
sentences
.
Love
travelling,
enjoy
your
life!(
My
trip
to
Jiangxi
Last
year,
I
stepped
into
the
beautiful
province
of
Jiangxi.
And
it
was
as
I
always
thought:
green
countryside,
clear
sky
and
fresh
air.
Luckily,
on
the
first
day,
I
was
taken
to
visit
Wuyuan.
When
I
saw
the
ancient
buildings
that
were
among
millions
of
yellow
flowers,
I
felt
like
being
part
of
a
picture.
Wugong
mountain
was
my
next
step.
Although
it's
difficult
to
get
to
the
top
of
the
mountain,
I
thought
that
I
had
been
taken
to
a
paradise
when
I
saw
the
sea
of
clouds.
Sometimes
it's
so
quiet
and
comfortable
that
I
really
wanted
to
live
among
those
hills
for
a
while.
The
final
leg
of
the
day's
journey
was
a
primary
school.
I
was
welcomed
warmly
by
the
smiles
on
the
faces
of
many
young
kids.
I
believe
that
if
you
have
the
chance
to
visit
Jiangxi,
the
trip
will
remain
in
your
memory
forever.
)
采分点
满分
可给分值
1.
内容充实，覆盖要点
（内容、要点）
7
6~7
描述所有信息，内容合理、丰富
3~5
描述了大部分信息，内容比较合理
1~2
描述了小部分信息，内容不合理
0
没有作答或描述内容与主题无关
2.
用词适切，语法正确，句型多样
（词汇、语法、句型）
7
6~7
用词适切，句型变化多样且有效，完全或基
本没有语言错误
3~5
用词基本适切，句型较为单一，有少量语
言错误但不影响理解
1~2
有较多语言错误，一定程度上影响理解
0
有大量语言错误，影响了理解
3.
结构紧凑，意思连贯
（语意、连词、指代）
4
3~4
行文连贯，连接词使用恰当，指代清晰
1~2
行文不够连贯，连接词使用不够恰当，指代
不够清晰
0
没有连贯的意识
4.
书写规范，词数适宜
（标点符号、大小写、词数）
2
2
大小写、标点正确，词数达标，书写规范整洁
1
大小写、标点有部分错误，词数达标，书写尚
可辨认
0
大小写、标点错误较多，语言应用不规范，词
数严重不足，书写难以辨认
Words
Box
Sentences
Box
(
Dear
Jane,
How
is
everything
going
I
know
you
miss
me
and
always
want
to
travel
in
Quzhou.
Last
week,
you
came
to
my
hometown-Quzhou.
It'
a
pity
that
I
wasn't
there
at
that
time.
Please
tell
me
what
do
you
think
of
Quzhou
Where
did
you
go
Did
you
climb
mountains
or
go
shopping
there
I'm
looking
forward
to
your
reply!
Yours,
Sissi
)
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2
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