(共26张PPT)
Three tips to better our cmpositions
人教版高中英语必修四
Lead-in
colorful
article
polish
attractive
Activity 1
Activity 2
Compare two compositions
1. Review what we learned yesterday.
Tips: the structure of a letter
the content of introducing a festival
2. Choose one you prefer and explain why.
Activity 2
Compare two compositions
A
B
opening
3
letter
background
purpose
style:
topic:
introduction to Spring Festival
structure:
structure:
opening
body
body
ending
ending
hope / expectation
Spring Festival
Activity 2
Compare two compositions
The contents of introducing a festival
customs & activities
meaning & significance
time
history & origin
Activity 2
Compare two compositions
2. Which one do you prefer?
B
non-finite verbs
adverbial
attributive clause
Activity 3
2. Conclude
在两个句子中,其中一句中有代词(名词)或介词短语 指代另一个句子或另一个句子中的名词(代词) 时,可考虑用定语从句合并两个句子。
Add Attributive Clause skillfully
------“友尽”的表达,春节不买单
Activity 3
3. Have a try.
In addition, we also put on couplets, paper-cutting decorations, and New Year pictures. They are used to drive away bad luck and express their best wishes.
What's more, the elderly will give red packets to their children or grandchildren. They think it can bring them good luck in the new year.
Undoubtedly, Spring Festival Eve is an extremely important night. At that night, people all around the country will stay up late and wait to ring the new year.
Tips: pay attention to the nouns and pronouns.
Add Attributive Clause skillfully
------“友尽”的表达,春节不买单
Activity 3
3. Have a try.
In addition, we also put on couplets, paper-cutting decorations, and New Year pictures. They are used to drive away bad luck and express their best wishes.
In addition, we also put on couplets, paper-cutting decorations, and New Year pictures which / that are used to drive away bad luck and express their best wishes.
Add Attributive Clause skillfully
------“友尽”的表达,春节不买单
Activity 3
3. Have a try.
What's more, the elderly will give red packets to their children or grandchildren. It can bring them good luck in the new year.
What's more, the elderly will give red packets to their children or grandchildren, which can bring them good luck in the new year.
Add Attributive Clause skillfully
------“友尽”的表达,春节不买单
Activity 3
3. Have a try.
Undoubtedly, Spring Festival Eve is an extremely important night. At that night, people all around the country will stay up late and wait to ring the new year.
Undoubtedly, Spring Festival Eve is an extremely important night when people all around the country will stay up late and wait to ring the new year.
Add Attributive Clause skillfully
------“友尽”的表达,春节不买单
Activity 4
Apply non-finite verbs as adverbial.
-----让动词‘非’起来,更显‘清明’
1. Explore
QingMing Festival falls on 5th in April. It is one of the most important and meaningful traditional festivals in China.
Falling on 5th in April, QingMing festival is one of the most important and meaningful festivals.
finite or non-finite verbs?
谓语? or 非谓语?
Why ????
Activity 4
Apply non-finite verbs as adverbial.
-----让动词‘非’起来,更显‘清明’
1. Explore
QingMing Festival is usually celebrated on 5th in April. It is one of the most important and meaningful festivals.
Celebrated on 5th in April, QingMing festival is one of the most important and meaningful festivals.
finite or non-finite verbs?
谓语? or 非谓语?
Why ????
Activity 4
Apply non-finite verbs as adverbial.
-----让动词‘非’起来,更显‘清明’
1. Explore
People usually visit the graves of their ancestors or dead family members. They also set out offerings of food and drinks and add fresh soil to the tomb.
People usually visit the graves of their ancestors or dead family members, setting out offerings of food and drinks and adding fresh soil to the tomb.
Activity 4
Apply non-finite verbs as adverbial.
-----让动词‘非’起来,更显‘清明’
2. Conclude
若几个动词有相同的主语或有相同的的执行者时,可考虑用非谓语动词作状语合并简单句。
Activity 4
3. Practice
I am glad to know that you are crazy about traditional Chinese festivals. I will introduce QingMing Festival to you.
Besides, we often go outdoors on QingMing Festival. We will fly kites. And we will enjoy the beauty of spring.
Tips: pay attention to the verbs' time order.
Apply non-finite verbs as adverbial.
-----让动词‘非’起来,更显‘清明’
Activity 4
Apply non-finite verbs as adverbial.
-----让动词‘非’起来,更显‘清明’
I am glad to know that you are crazy about traditional Chinese festivals. I will introduce QingMing Festival to you.
Knowing that you are crazy about traditional Chinese festivals,I will introduce QingMing Festival to you.
3. Practice
后(果)
先(因)
Activity 4
Apply non-finite verbs as adverbial.
-----让动词‘非’起来,更显‘清明’
We often go outdoors on QingMing Festival. We will fly kites. And we will enjoy the beauty of spring.
We often go outdoors on QingMing Festival, flying kites and enjoying the beauty of spring.
3. Practice
后(果)
先
后(伴随)
Activity 5
Express your feelings or opinions.
-------写在‘中秋’情更浓
We often have a family reunion and eat moon-cakes.
We often have a family reunion and eat moon-cakes, which makes me feel quite excited.
1. Read and compare
Admiring the brightest moon is a must for us on that day.
Admiring the brightest moon is a must for us on that day, making us extremely relaxed.
(fact)
(fact + feeling)
(fact)
(fact + feeling)
Activity 5
Express your feelings or opinions.
-------写在‘中秋’情更浓
2. How to make our feelings stronger?
Conclusion:
可在句末用非限制性定语从句和 v-ing表达自己的感受或观点,以增强句子的情感。
Activity 5
Express your feelings or opinions.
-------写在‘中秋’情更浓
3. Have a try
The most common food is all kinds of moon-cakes.
Families will get together and share the moon-cakes.
Activity 6
Group work :Polish the compositions you get.
Practice
Tips: 1. use what we learned today.
2. use other skills you mastered.
Activity 6
2. Show time
Activity 6
Assessment Rules
points scores
Use one tip we discussed today 2
Use any other tip 1
1. Summary
Summary and Homework
Spring Festival
QingMing Festival
Mid-Autumn Festival
Traditional Cultures
pride
confidence
cohesion
How
2. Homework
Summary and Homework
(1) Scanning the QR code to get more information about how to improve your composition.
(2) Copy your final version in your exercise books.
Thank you