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Module 1 Europe--writing
年级:高一
学科:英语
教材:外研版 必修3
Writing:
How to introduce a place
Beijing, the capital of our motherland--China.
location: in the north of...
population:about 20 million
size:16,000 square kilometers
climate: hot and rainy
cold and dry
It has a history of more than 3,000 years.
hosted the 2008 Olympic Games
famous universities
places of interests:
Beijing, the capital of our great mother—China, has a population of about 20 million and covers an area of more than 16, 000 square kilometers. Located in the north of the North China Plain, Beijing has four distinct seasons. It is hot and rainy in summer and cold and dry in winter.
Beijing has a history of more than 3,000 years. As the political and cultural center of China, Beijing successfully hosted the 2008 Olympic Games and drew the attention of the world.There are many universities in Beijing, of which Peking University and Tsinghua University are the most famous.
Beijing is also a great place to enjoy your holiday and it’s convenient to travel there. There are many places of interest, such as Tian’anmen Square, the Forbidden City, the Great Wall and the Bird’s Nest. Now, Beijing is playing a more and more important role in the world.
population
size
location
climate
history
status
university
places of interest
写作指导:
本单元的写作任务是介绍一个地方。介绍地方的文章属于 说明文,其主体时态通常是一般现在时。内容一般包括该地区的位置、面积、人口、历史、气候、特产等。但是一定要抓住该地区的主要特色,这样才能给读者留下深刻的印象。其基本结构:
第一部分:首先点明文章主要是介绍什么地方;
第二部分:说明具体情况(如某地的历史、人口、地位等基本情况以及名胜、饮食等);
第三部分:最后一段进行总结。
增分佳句
1.地理位置
①Located in..., ...is considered as the centre of...
②It faces...across the sea.
③...is situated in the north of...Province.
④..., which is the capital of ..., lies in/on/to the east of...
⑤...is a coastal city/located between...and...
2.人口与面积
①It is a city with a population of...
②...covers a total area of...square kilometers, making it the largest city in...
③Covering an area of about...square kilometers, it has a population of...
3.地域特色
①As a...city, it attracts millions of tourists from all over the world each year.
②...is a city with rich tourism resources.
③...is famous for its...and...
④What makes the city so special is that...
⑤Two?thirds of the city is covered with...
⑥It is neither...in summer nor...in winter.
写作模板:
Beijing is a big city. It has a population of ________.(介绍基本情况)Beijing is famous for ... Thousands of people are attracted here every day.
There are many other tourist attractions in the city. They are________.(介绍一些著名的名胜古迹)With the development of our city, the city will become________.(展望未来)
【题目要求】
假如你是李华,你的美国朋友Jack 准备到海南来旅游,请你回信介绍海南的情况,要点如下:
·海南位于祖国的南方,有2,000多年历史,人口超过九百万;
·海口是海南省省会,是海南省的政治、经济和文化中心;
·海南很美,有五公祠、五指山等名胜古迹,有蓝天,白云,大海和沙滩,有美味的特色小吃,是一个来了就不想离开的地方。
注意:1.信的格式已为你写好,不计入总词数;
2.词数100左右。
参考词汇:五公祠Wugong Temple; 五指山 Wuzhi Mountain; 特色小吃 local snacks
Dear Jack,
__________________________________________________________________________________________________
Yours,
Li Hua
五步写作规范:
第一步:审题构思很关键
一、审题
1.确定体裁:本文是介绍地点的文章,为说明文;
2.确定人称:本文的主要人称为第一人称;
3.确定时态:以一般现在时为主。
二、构思
第一段:写信动机。在开头说明写信要向对方介绍一下海南。
第二、三段:说明具体情况。详细介绍海南的历史、地理、人口等情况。
第四段:结尾。向对方表达祝愿。
第二步:核心词汇想周全
l.have a long history 拥有悠久的历史
2.population 人口
3. more than 超过;多于
4.province 省
5.politics 政治
6.economy 经济
7.culture 文化
8.places of interest 名胜
9.such as 例如
lo.delicious 美味的
第三步:由词扩句雏形现
1.海南位于祖国的南方,有2000多年的悠久历史。(主谓宾结构)
Located in the south of China, Hainan has a long history of over 2,000 years.
2.海南人口超过九百万。(主谓宾结构)
Hainan has a large population of more than 9 million.
3.海口是海南省的省会城市。(主系表结构)
Haikou is the capital city of Hainan Province.
4.海口是海南省的政治、经济和文化中心。(主系表结构)
Haikou is the centre of politics, economy and culture in Hainan.
5.它的确是一个非常美丽的城市。(主系表结构)
It's really a very beautiful city.
6.有许多名胜古迹,例如五公祠和五指山。(Therebe句型)
There are a lot of places of interest ,such as Wugong Temple and Wuzhi Mountain.
7.除此之外,当地美味小吃中外闻名。(主系表结构:at home and abroad)
Besides, the delicious local snacks are well-known both at home and abroad.
8.一旦你来这里,你将不想离开。(现在分词作状语)
Coming here, you will never want to leave.
第四步:句式升级造亮点
1.用with把句1和句2合并成一个简单句
Hainan has a long history of over 2000 years ,with a large population of more than 9 million.
2.用同位语结构把句3和句4合并成一个简单句
Haikou, the capital city of Hainan Province, is the centre of politics , economy and culture in Hainan.
3.用once引导时间状语从句改写句8
Once you come here, you will never want to leave.
第五步:过渡衔接连成篇
Dear Jack,
I'm really glad that you're coming to Hainan. Now let me tell you something about it.
Located in the south of China, Hainan has a long history of 2,000 years, ①with a large population of over 9 million. Haikou, ②the capital city of Hainan Province, is the centre of politics, economy and culture in Hainan.
Summary:
How to introduce a place
(population, size, location, climate, history, status, university, places of interest,...)
Five steps for writing a composition
①审题构思 ②核心词汇 ③由词扩句
④句式升级 ⑤过渡衔接成篇
Homework:
1.Finish the composition
and hand it in.
2.Finish the exercises on Workbook.