Module 6 Old and New Writing 课件（21张PPT）

(共21张PPT)
Module 6
Old and New
Writing

Learning Objectives
By the end of this lesson, you will
be able to improve your writing ability by

using attributive clause and some
sentence patterns.
2.learning how to put useful details
into writing.
3.combing the writing order.
The Three Gorges Dam ,China
The Three Gorges Dam, which is the biggest construction
project in China since the building of the great wall and the Grand Canal, has been built to control flooding and provide hydro-electric power for the central region of China. The dam
is nearly 200 meters high and 1.5 kilometers wide. It is the largest hydro-electric power station and dam in the world and has cost more than any other construction project in history.
★ How to describe the size?
__________________________________________________
……is …meters high and …meters wide .
★The height of it is 200 meters .
★ It is as high as 200 meters.
★ It is 200 meters in height.
★ It measures 200 meters in height.
★ It is a 200- meter-high building.
The dam is nearly 200 meters high and
1.5 kilometers wide.
Let’s practice
Let’s practice
The ZhaoZhou Bridge is 64 meters ________.
The ZhaoZhou Bridge is 64 meters __________.
The ZhaoZhou Bridge _________64 meters in length.
The ZhaoZhou Bridge is __________64 meters.
in length
long
measures
as long as
The Three Gorges Dam ,China
The Three Gorges Dam, which is the biggest construction
project in China since the building of the great wall and the grand canal, has been built to control flooding and provide hydro-electric power for the central region of China. The dam
is nearly 200 meters high and 1.5 kilometers wide. It is the largest hydro-electric power station and dam in the world and has cost more than any other construction project in history.
★ How to make your sentence long when writing?
__________
_____
attributive clause, and……
Let’s practice
Westminster Abbey,
_________was _______ hundreds
of years ago, ______ a tourist
attraction in the world.
which
is
built
Let’s practice
built in 2005, 5853 meters long
The NanJing ChangJiang Tunnel,
which was built in the year of 2005, is 5853
meters long.
video
The Empire State Building ,
New York
The Empire State Building ,New York

The Empire State Building,
which was the tallest building at the time was finished in May 1931.
Ten million bricks……
6500 windows……
You can see 5 states on a clear day……
Lightning strikes the Empire State building ……
A US military plane……
…has 102 storeys.
The Empire State Building has 102
storeys.
★ It is 102 storeys high.
★ It is a building of 102 storeys.
★ It is a 102-storey building.
★ It is a 102-storeyed building.
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Let’s practice
Taipei 101,
2004,
101 storeys,
509 meters
Let’s practice
Taipei 101 , which was built in the year of 2004, has 101 storeys and is 509 meters high.
The Empire State Building ,New York

Ten million bricks……
6500 windows……
You can see 5 states on a clear day……
Lightning strikes it 5 times a year ……
A US military plane crashed the 78th ……
★ What are the numbers about?
details
Brain Storm
★ What are the details when we describe a school?
teachers
playground
buildings
equipment
students
activities
compus
The No.2 Senior High School ,DaLian
假设你是李华，你给你的
美国朋友Tom回信，讲讲你学
校的新变化，内容包括：
新建的教学楼，24米高，6层
教师，学生，环境
特色活动

可适当增加细节以使行文连贯。
词数100左右。
01
02
03
Writing structure ?
01
02
03
Writing structure ?
Try to lengthen your sentence by using attributive clause
and put more details into your composition.
The No.2 Senior High School ,DaLian
假设你是李华，你给你的
美国朋友Tom回信，讲讲你学
校的新变化，内容包括：
新建的教学楼，24米高，6层
教师，学生，环境
特色活动
可适当增加细节以使行文连贯。
词数100左右。
…, which… …and…
newly-built
…meters high…
…storeys
friendly, hardworking, experienced…
be surrounded by…
various activities…
playing instruments, pottery, handwriting, English film

Showtime
Summary 微课
My introduction
Homework
Prepare a news bulletin about the landmark of our hometown-the Hope building. Please contain the following points:

◎Where is it?
◎ When was it built?
◎ What is it like?
◎ More details ?

Thank you!