高考英语作文高分策略:名校真实学生考试中高分作文整理(五)

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高考英语作文高分策略:
名校真实学生考试中高分作文整理(五)

作文题目:
假设你是李华,你的好友David在过去的圣诞节里体重快速增长,对此他很苦恼。他写信给你想要了解一下中国的春节是怎么庆祝的,中国的中学生的饮食习惯是否健康,以及如何打造一个健康的体魄。请按要求写一封100字左右的回信。

一.好词
1. attach great importance to
2. spare no efforts to do
3. from the bottom of my heart
4. think highly of
5. from my point of view/from where I stand
6. on the contrary
7. be of great importance / significance
8. be concerned about
9. due to/on account of the fact(+从句)
10. Not only should we do…but also we should…(部分倒装)
11. a variety of
12. a symbol of
13. lessen the possibility of falling sick
13. exercise regularly
14. ignore the significance of
15. be particular about food
16. build up a healthy body
17. various options of food
18. be fundamental to
19. It’s a common phenomenon that
20. as a consequence,
21. create an atmosphere of joy
22. refuse the charm of
23. propose a toast to
24. refresh our mind

二.好句
1. Hearing that you’re worried about your increasing weight after Christmas, I’m writing to share with you about the Spring Festival in China and Chinese students’ eating habit.
2. Time permitting, we’ll not only share everything with each other but also express our faithful and heartfelt(衷心的、诚挚的) miss and love to our family members.
3. I’ll appreciate it if you can take my advice into account.
4. Most of them ignored the significance of balanced diets, being particular about food.
5. You should eat on a regular basis instead of going to school without breakfast.
6. As for how to build up a healthy body, a balanced diet in combination with(=together with) regular exercises is the key to keeping fit.
7. I’m convinced that(insist that) if you take my suggestions into consideration you can soon strengthen your body.
8. Your early reply is highly appreciated.
9. The main reason why they are aching for the coming of the Spring Festival is that…

范文
Dear David,
Knowing that you’re bothered by putting on weight after Christmas, I suppose many of us share the same problem.
In China, the approaching of Spring Festival marks the reunion of family as well as the feast of food. A variety of activities will be held, ranging from dragon dancing to setting off fireworks at night, but food always comes first, which accounts for the fact that many people are gaining weight after the festival.
Though an increasing number of students have already been aware of the significance of keeping a healthy diet, a minority of them have health problem due to overeating or ignoring the importance of breakfast. As far as I’m concerned, regular exercises and healthy eating habits are of necessity to maintain our health status.
Taking all the above into account, I regard it important for you to go on a diet and be fit again.
Yours,
Li Hu



优秀作文(一):
Having heard that you have put on too much weight during the past Christmas Day, which puzzled you the most, I’m writing to tell you the eating habits of Chinese students together with helping you have a better knowledge of the Spring Festival in China.
To be frank, we Chinese enjoy a variety of delicious meals during the Spring Festival. What makes us feel most comfortable is sitting with our family around the dinner table, with the excitement of getting ready to eat. With a large amount of vegetables included in the meal, on the whole, our diet remains to be relatively balanced, though during the festival. Chinese students attach great importance to balanced diets as well, with which they can stay healthy. What’s more, we spare no efforts to exercise as often as we can. Only by doing so will we succeed in building a strong body.
From the bottom of my heart, I hope these suggestions can help you.

优秀作文(二)
Delighted to receive your letter, frankly speaking, I’m concerned about your increasing weight. What I want to tell you are as follows.
On hearing that you are of great curiosity about our Spring Festival, I’d like to tell you that we annually have a meal with family, visit some friends who we are missing for a long period of time and give red envelop to the young. As for your confusion about whether Chinese students’ eating habits are healthy, I tend to give you a positive answer. Not only do we have a great meal at home, but also the school provides a healthy diet without junk food. Last but not least, I’d also like to propose that you should build your strength by taking abundant exercises, which is of great significance to your health.
Eventually, hoping you will consider my proposal above, I’ll always be by your side through sick and thin.