高考英语作文高分策略：名校真实学生考试中高分作文整理（四）

高考英语作文高分策略：
名校真实学生考试中高分作文整理（四）

作文题目：
你的同学Tom由于未能参加介绍著名物理学家史蒂芬﹒霍金(Steven Hawking)的讲座，请求你写信转告一下讲座内容。
基本信息 1941年1月生于英国，自幼对科学感兴趣； 从牛津大学毕业后，进修于剑桥大学，专攻宇宙学； 求学期间身患疾病，靠轮椅出行；1985年彻底丧失说话能力。
重要著作及成就 积极面对不幸，战胜困难，为全世界树立了榜样； 出版许多著作，其中《时间简史》最为人熟知； 为宇宙学理论做出了伟大的贡献，被认为是21世纪最杰出的物理学家。
牛津大学University of Oxford 剑桥大学University of Cambridge
宇宙学 cosmology 《时间简史》A Brief History of Time

好词



1. fail to attend the meeting
2. be greatly interested in;
have/ show a great interest in
3. at a young age; when young
4. owing to; due to; on account of
5. be admitted to/ into
6. further study
7. specialize in; major in
8. be struck by; be attacked by
9. suffer from
10. lead to his disability of…
11. face the misfortune
12. full of optimism; optimistically
13. overcome/ get over difficulties/ obstacles
13. set a good example to the world;
be a role model to the world
14. among the books published,…
15. with a lot of works coming out,…
16. be best known; be best received
17. make great contributions to
18. be regarded/ considered as/ to be
19. greatly inspire people
20. learn from



好句
1. Hearing that you were not able to come to the lecture which introduces the great physicist, Steven Hawking, I’m writing to give you some information about the lecture.
2. Owing to his gift for physics, patience as well as his hard work, he had an opportunity to have a further study in University of Cambridge after graduating from University of Oxford.
3. Unfortunately, he suffered from serious disease, which led to his reliance on a wheelchair to travel and his disability to speak in 1985.
4. Faced with great hardship, Mr. Hawking never gave in.
5. He was such a fighter who never gave in to life, especially when he needed to depend on a wheelchair to travel.
6. In spite of that, Steven Hawking set an example to the whole world, showing his determination to overcome any hardship.
7. His great courage to face the misfortune positively and overcome obstacles sets a good example to the whole world.
8. When it comes to his achievements, what I admire most are his perseverance and optimism when struggling with difficulties and tough times.
9. Among a large number of famous books published by him, A Brief History of Time is the best known one.
10. With surprising persistence and enthusiasm, he made great contributions to cosmology theory.
范文
Dear Tom,
Learning that you failed to attend the lecture on the introduction to the famous physicist-Steven Hawking, I am writing to tell you something about it.
Born in Britain in January 1941, Hawking showed great interest in science when he was young. After graduation from University of Oxford, he went to University of Cambridge for further study, specializing in cosmology, during which, he was unfortunately struck by a severe disease, leaving him in a wheelchair for the rest of his life and later totally unable to speak in 1985.
In spite of this, not only did he face the misfortune positively, but he also managed to overcome all the obstacles, which sets a good example to the whole world. What’s more, with great efforts and perseverance, he successfully published several works, among which, A Brief History of Time, is best received and highly praised. Hawking, having made great contributions to the theory of cosmology, is regarded as the most outstanding physicist in the 21st century.
That is all about Steven Hawking, and I hope you will be inspired by him and his experience. Best wishes!
Yours,
Li Hua



优秀作文（一）：
Knowing your regret for failing to attend the lecture introducing Steven Hawking, a famous physicist, I am writing to bring the content of the lecture to your knowledge.
Born in Britain in January 1941, Steven took great interest and was very talented in science as a kid. After graduating from University of Oxford, he then went to University of Cambridge, specializing in cosmology. Unfortunately, he suffered from serious disease, which led to his reliance on a wheelchair to travel and his disability to speak in 1985.
Though confined in a small wheel-chair, his strong will power and the vastness of his mind amazed and encouraged everyone throughout the world. His great courage to face the misfortune positively and overcome obstacles sets a good example to the whole world. Furthermore, with numerous works published, among which the most widely-known is A Brief History of Time, he made great contributions to circulating the theories of cosmology, for which he was respected as the most outstanding physicist in the 21st century.
I am looking forward to exchanging views on his life with you.

优秀作文（二）
Regretting to hear that you have missed the speech, I’m glad to introduce some information about Steven Hawking, a famous physicist.
Born in England in January 1941, Steven Hawking showed great interest in science when he was a child. After graduating from University of Oxford, he went on further study in University of Cambridge, devoting himself to cosmology.
Unfortunately, serious illness occurring to him, he had to go out on a wheelchair. What’s worse, his ability to speak was completely lost in 1985. However, not only did he face the misfortune and overcome difficulties with optimism, but he also became a role model to the whole world. More than one book came out, of which, A Brief History of Time was the most popular one. Making incredible contributions to the theory of cosmology, Mr. Hawking is considered as the greatest physicist in the 21st century.
It’s my pleasure if you’re content with my introduction.