高考英语作文高分策略：名校真实学生考试中高分作文整理（九）

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高考英语作文高分策略：
名校真实学生考试中高分作文整理（九）

作文题目：
假定你是李华。你的美国笔友Jack给你发来邮件，告诉你他参加了美国中西部“汉语桥”比赛（U. S. Midwest Chinese Bridge Speech Contest），并获得了一等奖。他希望你继续帮他学习中文。请你给他回复一封电子邮件。要点如下：
1．祝贺他获奖；
2．希望继续向他学习英语，而你帮他学中文；
3．祝愿他能来中国参加决赛。
注意：
1．词数100左右；
2．可以适当增加细节，以使行文连贯。


写作要点：
Para.1:说明祝贺事由、表达诚挚祝贺；
Para.2:围绕事件表述贺喜内容、表扬收信人；
Para.3:其他要求信息+再次表达良好祝愿。
注意：重点赞扬当事人的优秀能力和取得的成就、并展望他将来的发展前景。
常用套语：
Dear xxx,
I’ve learned with delight that you 祝贺事由 . I'd like to extend to you my utmost congratulations and pride as well. You must be 激动\高兴等 . And I feel very happy for your 所取得的成绩.
This is quite exciting news! I know this is surely owing to 被祝贺人过去的努力. It is a reward you richly deserve for your 被祝贺人的优点.
Kindly let me know when you咨询对方何时有空.
Congratulations in receiving the most prestigious and deserving award once again.I hope that表达自己的愿望and wish best of luck for all your future endeavors.
Yours sincerely,
Li Hua

学生优秀词汇：
获奖：win a prize; receive an award; be awarded;
毅力：willpower; the power of determined will; perseverance;
坚持：persistence
投入：commitment
获得回报：pay off
树立榜样：set a good example to sb;
学习榜样：follow a good example of sb; take sb as the model
光明未来：a promising future
更大成功：further success

学生优秀句式：
（一）开头句式：
1. It was exciting news for me to learn of....
2. Please accept my sincere\hearty\warm congratulations on...
3. It was a great pleasure to send you my congratulations on ...
4. I was delighted to learn of your success/ achievements in ...
5. Allow me to convey my congratulations on your promotion to...
（二）结尾句式：
1. We wish to share your honor and joy.
2. I wish you success and fulfillment in the year ahead\ following\to come.
3. All my best wishes for an even more prosperous future \successful career!
4. Every good wish to you for much health, happiness and prosperity!
（三）其他：
1. Good news travels fast!
2. It was a splendid performance/ a triumph.
3. Best wishes for your great success in all that you undertake.
4. It is with the greatest pleasure that I offer you my sincerest congratulations on your...
5. I am sure a talented person as you will make great achievement and live a fuller life.


优秀范文一：
Dear Jack,
I’ve learned with delight that you won the first prize in the U.S. Midwest Chinese Bridge Speech Contest. Please accept my most sincere congratulations and best wishes for a good future.
I know how talented you are and how much hard work you’ve made to attain the goal. No one could be more deserving of the success. And I’m very glad to hear that you owe your success to my help and want to study Chinese with me as well. I’m surely willing to give you a hand. It’s such a great encouragement to me to see your efforts rewarded. I’m determined to learn English well, so can you do me a favor to help me learn English?
I do hope you can take part in the final contest to be held in China and expect your further achievement. Looking forward to hearing from you soon.
Yours,
Li Hua
优秀范文二：
Dear Jack,
I have learned with delight that you got the first prize in the U.S. Midwest Chinese Bridge Speech Contest. I would like to extend to you my utmost congratulations on your success. You must be both excited and delighted. And I feel very happy for you.
It is quite exciting news. I know this is surely owing to your hard work. It is a reward you richly deserve. Having you as a friend, I really feel both proud and lucky because I can learn so much from you. I wish you would continue to help me with my English,and meanwhile I would be willing to help you with your Chinese as well. As we all know,you are a hard-working and talented person,which is essential for making achievements. I am sure that I can learn much from you,for which I wish you can teach me English.
I hope that you can take part in the final contest to be held in China. I wish you would continue your efforts and gain further success in the future. Your success tells me that hard work will pay off in the end. And your example is a constant inspiration to me. I will struggle to catch up with you.
My best wishes to your further success. Congratulations again.
Yours,
Li Hua

优秀范文三：
Dear Jack,
Thrilled at hearing the news that you have won the first prize in the U.S. Midwest Chinese Bridge Speech Contest, I'm writing to offer you my sincerest congratulations and admiration.
Never easy as it is to master a foreign language,you've proved your perseverance with sweat of hard work and constant exercise throughout the year.Consequently,I hold a strong desire to learn English under your guidance, and in the meanwhile I will be more than willing to offer my assistance in return to further your apprehension in Chinese. Being mutually beneficial, it is to my great confidence that our collaboration will enable you to stand out on a more superior stage and achieve your well-deserved performance in the final contest to be held in China.
Although the road lying ahead is tough, I hope you'll spare no effort to conquer all obstacles and eventually set foot on the acme of your language learning. Yours,
Li Hua
优秀范文四：
Dear Jack,
Having received your e-mail, I am delighted to learn that you won the first prize in the U.S. Midwest Chinese Bridge Speech Contest.I'd like to extend my utmost congratulations on your achievement. As we are close friends, I feel proud and lucky to share your pride.
This is quite exciting news.Initially,your success is surely owing to your persistence and profound knowledge,which make you stand out in the contest. Moreover, the past few years have witnessed the time we spent together,dedicated to leaning English and Chinese from each other. And now your efforts pay off.Subsequently,thanks for your faith in me and I'm willing to continue to make every effort to teach you more various Chinese knowledge. I also hope I will learn more English culture from you. Definitely,we will achieve further progress with joint efforts.
I sincerely wish you greater success in Chinese learning. I hope you will be on the stage of the final contest in China.
优秀范文五：
Dear Jack,
I'm more than delighted to learn that you have gained the first prize of U.S. Midwest Chinese Bridge Speech Contest. Your success is obviously owing to your hard work and you deserve the reward. As we are close friends, I am proud of you.
Your example is really a constant inspiration to me, from which I learn that working hard is where the secret lies. Aiming at making achievements together, it is a pleasure for me to help you learn Chinese and I hope you can set aside some time to teach me English as well. Learning from each other will enable us to make greater progress.
Hearing that you can come to China to participate in the final contest, I would like to express my sincere congratulations and best wishes. There is no doubt that your study in the past will pay off. Look forward to your favorable reply.






















































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