牛津版（深圳·广州）初中英语八年级上册期末复习（题型专练）：书面表达（含答案及解析）

牛津版（深圳·广州）初中英语八年级上册
期末复习（题型专练）：书面表达
一、书面表达
1.电脑已经成为现代社会的必需品，但目前中学生迷恋网络游戏的现象越来越严重，影响了学生的身心健康，请结合下列提示，以“Computers”为题写一篇作文，谈谈你对使用电脑的看法。
提示:1）益处:帮助学习，查资料，了解更多的信息和新知识(knowledge)；
2）弊处:花很多时间玩游戏，经常网上聊天(chat online)，影响学习，成绩下降；
建议:平时上学时间不玩电脑，不上网(get online)，周末和假期可以适当上网，但不要在游戏上浪费时间。
要求:60~80词。
Computers
??? Computers have become more and more useful in our lives. 21教育网
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??? But don't waste too much time on computers.
2.请以“My favourite invention'”为题写一篇英语作文,阐明你最喜欢的发
明是什么,为什么喜欢这项发明,以及这项发明产生的作用或者影响。80词
左右。
My favourite invention
??? There are many inventions in the world.
???
??? I think in the future, computers will be used by everyone.21世纪教育网版权所有
3.请根据下面的提示,以“Mark Twain”为题,写一篇英文短文。
内容提示: 1）美国著名的作家,写了许多著名的小说;
2）1835年出生于佛罗里达的乡村,4岁时全家搬到城镇,12岁时父亲去世;
3）从童年就开始工作,做过不同的工作。他最著名的小说之一是《汤姆?索亚历险记》
4）他的写作才能并不是从小就有,而是来自他个人的经历.要求:语法正确、逻辑合理,80词左右,开头和结尾已给出,不计人总词21·cn·jy·com
数,可根据提示内容适当发挥
Mark Twain
??? Mark Twain was an American writer. … I enjoy his works very much.2·1·c·n·j·y
4.手机已经成为现代社会的必需品，但目前，许多中学生不顾学校规定，带手机到学校，沉溺于玩手机游戏和看手机小说，影响了学生的身心健康。请你根据下列说明用英语写一篇，谈谈你对手机使用的看法。
优点：帮助学习，查资料，更快了解更多信息知更多新知识；及时与家人和朋友取得联系。
缺点：经常上网聊天，听音乐，看电影，看小说，花很多时间玩手机游戏，视力下降，影响学习，成绩下降。
你的建议：①上学期间不带手机，不玩手机游戏，不上网。②周末或假期可以适当上网，但是不要在手机游戏上浪费太多时间。【来源：21·世纪·教育·网】
要求：①词数：80词左右（开头己给出，不计入总词数）；②文章必须包含上面所有要点；③文中不得出现真实姓名和校名；④条理清楚，语句通顺，意思连贯，书写规范。21教育名师原创作品
参考词汇：知识knowledge; 网上聊天chat on line; 上网:surf the internet21*cnjy*com
??? Mobile phones are becoming more and more necessary nowadays.
5.作为一个国际化城市，深圳每年都有大量的外国学生来访，留学和交流. 假如你是李华，美国Berkman Middle school的师生将到你们学校进行交流，需要在中方学生中征集接待美国学生的寄宿家庭，你与父母商量后决定做出申请.请你向美方负责任Mr. Smith写一封申请信。
内容包括以下要点：
1）简单介绍家庭成员：一家三口，父亲母亲皆为英语老师，为人友善。
2）介绍你家基本条件：舒适的房子，单独的卧室，学校离家近。
3）说明你们为交流生计划的特色活动。（至少两项）
写作要求：
1）文章必须包含所有提示内容，并可作适当发挥；
2）表达清楚，语句通顺，意思连贯，书面规范；
3）文中不得出现真实姓名和校名。
4）字数要求80—100次（开头和结尾已给出，不计入总词数）
参考词汇（仅供参考）：apply for 申请； host family住宿家庭
Dear Mr. Smith,
??? My name is Li Hua. I'm glad that some of your students and teachers will come to our school for an educational exchange. I'm writing to apply for a chance to be one of the host families of American students.
???
??? Thank you for considering my application. I'm looking forward to your reply.【出处：21教育名师】
Yours,
Li Hua
6.假设你是李华，你在伦敦阳光学校（Sunshine School）进行了为期半个月的交换生活。这半个月的生活给你留下了许多美好回忆。请以"Special Memories in London"为题写—篇作文。要求包括以下内容要点：
1）你在学校学习了英语课程、体验了英国文化；
2）你在课外游览了伦敦的著名景点如伦敦塔桥（London Tower Bridge）、大英博物馆（British Museum）；
3）你对这次交换学习的感受。
要求：
1）80词左右（开头已给出，不计入总词数）；
2）文章必须包含所有提示内容，并可做适当发挥；
3）不得出现真实校名和姓名；
4）条理清楚，语句通顺，意思连贯，书写规范。
Special Memories in London
??? I just came back from Sunshine School, London. I had a great time there.
7.目前，我国正实施城市化政策，这给从乡(镇)迁入城市的大多数孩子带来诸多问题，特别在交朋友方面尤为突出。假如你是贝蒂，你的朋友托尼发电子邮件向你请教关于如何交朋友的问题，请你给他回复一封电子邮件并提几点建议。
建议:1）在小区内玩耍时，你可以主动与他们交流成为新朋友，并告知家长你想交朋友的想法;
2）请求父母带你去图书馆或一些公共场所，并参加文体活动;
3）在星期天，可外出参加活动等;
4）总之，多参加交流活动，克服困难，保持耐心。
要求:1）涵盖所有要点,意思连贯，符合逻辑;
2）书写规范工整,不得逐字翻译,词数90左右。(提示词: first, second, third, in conclusion)
Dear Better,
??? I need some advice on how to make friends. I have just moved to a new city. I am 13. I don't know anybody here and I want to make some friends.
??? What's the best way? Where can I meet people?
Yours,
Tony
8.寒假将至，请根据下面的要点提示，以 South Sea School 校方的名义拟定一份放假通知。内容包括：
1）寒假将有30天，2月17日（17th）返校。
2）离校前请把教室打扫干净。
3）假期按时完成寒假作业，并经常锻炼身体。
4）在家时…外出旅游时…
5）祝福大家度过一个愉快的春节。
要求：内容完整，意思连贯，符合逻辑,表达准确，可适当发挥，注意：词数80左右，开头和结尾已给出，不计入词数。21·世纪*教育网
Notice
January 17, 2019
??? Hello, everyone! As you know, the winter holiday is coming. Here are some important things that we have to tell you. We'll be glad if you really follow them.【来源：21cnj*y.co*m】
???
??? Thank you very much!
9.假如你是李华，你的美国网友Frank参加了学校的交换生计划，下个月要来你校学习，但他对中国文化不太了解，因此给你发了一封邮件，请你根据下面的邮件，给Frank回一封邮件。
Dear Li Hua,
??? How's it going?
??? Next month. I'll go to your school to study for three months. We'll finally meet! But I'm feeling worried now. I know little about Chinese culture. Can you tell me what I should pay attention to? And tell me something about your school. Reply to me soon!
Yours,
Frank
要求：①语句通顺，语法正确，可适当发挥；②词数80左右，邮件开头和结尾已给出，不计入总词数。
Dear Frank,
??? I feel so happy that you're coming to study in my school. Now let me tell you something you should know.
??? Tell me the exact time you're arriving.
Yours,
Li Hua
10.科技为人们的生活带来种种便利，为了让同学们更好的去学习和了解它，学校组织八年级学生11月16日去深圳市图书馆参加科技展，请你帮忙写一份通知。
要求：1）表达清楚，语句通顺，意思连贯，要点齐全，书写规范。
2）80词左右，短文开头已给出，不计入总字数。
提示词：organize组织(v.)? activity 活动(n.)??? fair 展览(n.) www-2-1-cnjy-com
集合时间：8:00 a.m.
集合地点：校门口
交通工具：校车
要求：穿校服，不要迟到，参观过程中保持安静。
活动内容：1）听一些有关最新发明的介绍；
2）看一部有关机器人5D电影，了解机器人的发展；
3）亲自操作各种不同的智能(intelligent)机器人；
4）……
??? Technology brings people much convenience. In order to
???
??? What an amazing and exciting activity! Why not come with me?

答案解析部分
一、书面表达
1. Computers
??? Computer have become more and more useful in our lives. We can get the information and study on the computer. From the computer we can get a lot of new knowledge. But at the same time, it brings some disadvantages. For example, we will spend some time playing computer games and chatting online. As a result, it influences our study. It will make our grades worse.www.21-cn-jy.com
??? So we shouldn't play it at school time. At weekends we can play it a bit. But don't waste too much time on computers.
解析：这是一篇议论文写作题，题目为Computers ，通过分析可知时态用一般现在时，人称以第三人称单数和第一人称复数为主。文章可以先使用电脑的好处，然后介绍使用电脑的坏处，最后谈谈自己的感受。 点评：在写作的时候，注意紧扣主题，连句成篇，保持文章的连贯性，同时注意准确运用时态，语言的表述应该符合语法的结构。造句应该符合英语的表达习惯。为了使文章更通顺完整，需要用上适当的连接词，尽力使用自己熟悉单词句式，确保正确率。另外，可以用上一些句型、短语、较高级的语言，文章可以使用的短语如：more and more useful；on the computer；at the same time； brings some disadvantages；For example；spend some time playing；chatting online； As a result；make our grades worse；At weekends；waste too much time等等，且使用了连接词and,but so等使文章增色不少。文章层次清楚，内容饱满，表达流畅，是一篇优秀的作文。
2. My favourite invention
??? There are many inventions in the world. But my favourite invention is computer. As a student, the computer helps me a lot. With the computer, I can find lots of information I need. I can read books, know the latest news and watch films. I can play games or listen to music when I am tired. It is easy to communicate with my friends. I often chat with them through email and QQ.
??? I think in the future, computers will be used by everyone.
解析：这是一篇命题作文，题目是“My favourite invention”，主要介绍自己最喜欢的发明，注意时态是一般将来时和一般现在时，首先介绍自己最喜欢的发明；然后介绍喜欢这项发明的原因及产生的作用或者影响；最后总结。为文章增色，注意运用好词好句，同时注意恰当使用连词，使文章上下文联系更为紧密。 点评：写作时注意作文内容全面，运用好词好句，如：lots of；listen to music；It+be+形容词+to do；communicate with；in the future等。定语从句、状语从句、宾语从句。一般将来时的被动语态的运用为文章增色不少，如：I can find lots of information I need.I can play games or listen to music when I am tired.I think in the future, computers will be used by everyone. 等。连词when，but，or，and的运用使文章上下文联系更为紧密。
3. Mark twain
??? Mark Twain was an American writer. He wrote many famous novels.
Mark Twain was born in the countryside in Florida in 1835. He moved to the town with his family when he was four years old. At the age of 12, his father died. He began working from his childhood and did different jobs. The Adventures of Tom Sawyer is one of his most famous novels. He didn't show his writing ability from an early age, and it came from his persona experiences. I enjoy his works very much.
解析：这是一篇命题作文，题目是“Mark Twain” ，注意时态是一般过去时和一般现在时，首先介绍马克吐温的籍贯、遭遇；然后介绍他的写作成就及才能；最后介绍总结。为文章增色，注意运用好词好句，同时注意恰当使用连词，使文章上下文联系更为紧密。 点评：写作时注意作文内容全面，运用好词好句，如：be born；move to；at the age of；begin doing；one of+the+形容词最高级+可数名词复数等。状语从句、最高级的运用为文章增色不少，如：He moved to the town with his family when he was four years old.The Adventures of Tom Sawyer is one of his most famous novels.等。连词when，and的运用使文章上下文联系更为紧密。
4. ???Cellphones have become more and more useful in our lives. However, some students often bring their cellphones to school without obeying the rules of schools.
??? One the one hand, we can get more information and learn more new knowledge on the Internet from the cellphones. And we can keep in touch with our families and friends in time.
??? However, on the other hand, some students like playing games, listening to music, watching films, reading novels or chatting on line with cellphone. Their eyesight often becomes poorer and poorer. And they fail their exams because of playing games too much.
??? In my opinion, we shouldn't bring cellphones to school. On weekdays we shouldn't play games too much. We can surf the Internet at weekends or on holidays, but remember not to waste too much time playing games.
解析：这是一篇材料作文，主要介绍自己对手机的看法，注意时态是现在完成时和一般现在时，首先介绍目前，许多中学生不顾学校规定，带手机到学校，沉溺于玩手机游戏和看手机小说，影响了学生的身心健康 ；然后介绍手机使用的优缺点；最后总结自己的观点。注意运用好词好句为文章增色，同时注意恰当使用连词，使文章上下文联系更为紧密。点评：写作时注意作文内容全面，运用好词好句，如：bring...to；without doing；on the one hand；on the other hand；learn from；keep in touch with；in time；like doing；比较级+and+比较级；because of；too much；in my opinion；remember not to do；waste time in doing等。比较级、比较级+and+比较级和祈使句的运用为文章增色不少，如：One the one hand, we can get more information and learn more new knowledge on the Internet from the cellphones.Their eyesight often becomes poorer and poorer.but remember not to waste too much time playing games.等。连词and，however，on the one hand；on the other hand；or；but的运用使文章上下文联系更为紧密。【版权所有：21教育】
5. Dear Mr. Smith,
? ??My name is Li Hua. I'm glad that some of your students and teachers will come to our school for an educational exchange. I'm writing to apply for a chance to be one of the host families of American students. There are three people in my family. My father and mother are English teachers. They are very friendly. We all can speak English, so it will be easy for communicate with our guest.(家庭成员) Besides, we have a separate room with a washroom and shower for our guest's convenience. What's more, the school is close to my home. It usually takes about 10 minutes by subway or 25 minutes by bus. My mum is good at cooking. She will teach you how to cook Chinese food. We are also going to take you to visit some places of interest in China at the weekend so that you can know more about China. I believe my guest will have a pleasant stay with my family.
?? ?Thank you for considering my application. I'm looking forward to your reply.
Yours,
Li Hua
解析：这是一篇说明文写作题，通过分析可知时态用一般现在时，人称以第三人称复数和第一人称复数的口吻来叙述。文章可以先提出申请自己家想成为寄宿家庭。然后介绍自己家成为寄宿家庭的优势，最后谈谈自己家为成为寄宿家庭的筹备工作。 点评：在写作的时候，注意紧扣主题，连句成篇，保持文章的连贯性，同时注意准确运用时态，语言的表述应该符合语法的结构。造句应该符合英语的表达习惯。为了使文章更通顺完整，需要用上适当的连接词，尽力使用自己熟悉单词句式，确保正确率。另外，可以用上一些句型、短语、较高级的语言，文章可以使用的短语如：I'm glad that；apply for a chance to be；one of the host families；There are…in my family；a separate room with a washroom and shower；What's more；is close to；is good at cooking； is good at cooking；places of interest；have a pleasant stay；I'm looking forward to your reply等等，且使用了besides，so，so that等使文章增色不少。文章层次清楚，内容饱满，表达流畅，是一篇优秀作文。
6. Special Memories in London
??? I just came back from Sunshine School, London. I had a great time there.
? ??First, I learned English course in the Sunshine School, and experienced English culture. I made a lot of friends in the school. I liked to talk with them. I found that language learning really needs good environment. Second, after class, I visited famous place of interests, such as London Tower Bridge and British Museum. They were amazing, I felt like I was a bird flying in the sky so freely.
? ??I was proud to be exchanged to study there, and I will never forget. They belongs to my special memories.
解析：这是一篇命题作文，题目是"Special Memories in London"，主要介绍 在伦敦阳光学校（Sunshine School）进行了为期半个月的交换生活，这半个月的生活给自己留下了许多美好回忆，时态是一般现在时、一般过去时和一般将来时。首先介绍在学校学习的英语课程及体验的英语文化；然后介绍浏览的伦敦景点；最后总结感受。为文章增色，注意运用好词好句，同时恰当使用连词，使上下文联系更为紧密。 点评：习作时作文内容全面，涵盖提示信息。运用好词好句，如：make friends；like to do；talk with；places of interest；feel like；be proud to do；belong to等。宾语从句、被动语态的运用为文章增色不少，如I found that language learning really needs good environment. I was proud to be exchanged to study there等。连词first，and，second等运用使文章上下文联系更为紧密。
7. Dear Tony,
??? There are lots of things you can do.
??? First, you can ride your bike in your neighbourhood and try to find some kids. When you find some, you can go up and talk to them. You should also let your parents know that you want to make friends because they can help you. Second, you can ask your parents to take you to the library or some places where there are lots of kids. You can try joining an art class or a sports club. These are all great ways to meet people. Third, you can try making friends if you go out to take part in activities on Sundays. In conclusion, try to be active wherever you are, but just be yourself and don't try so hard. It takes time and patience. I hope you will find a best friend soon!
Yours,
Betty
解析：这是一篇应用文写作题，通过分析可知时态用一般现在时，人称以第二人称单数的口吻来叙述。文章可以先提出交朋友的一些方法。然后请求父母带自己去人多的公共场所并参加一些文体活动。 点评：在写作的时候，注意紧扣主题，连句成篇，保持文章的连贯性，同时注意准确运用时态，语言的表述应该符合语法的结构。造句应该符合英语的表达习惯。为了使文章更通顺完整，需要用上适当的连接词，尽力使用自己熟悉单词句式，确保正确率。另外，可以用上一些句型、短语、较高级的语言，文章可以使用的短语如：try to find；go up and talk to；make friends；take you to；go out to；take part in activities；In conclusion；try to be active 等等，且使用了and,first，second，third及定语从句和because引导的原因状语从句等使文章增色不少。文章层次清楚，内容饱满，表达流畅，是一篇优秀作文。
8. Notice
January 17, 2019
??? Hello, everyone! As you know, the winter holiday is coming. Here are some important things that we have to tell you. We'll be glad if you really follow them.2-1-c-n-j-y
??? The winter holiday will have 30 days. You must return to school on February 17th. Please clean up the classroom before you leave school. During the holidays, you must finish your homework on time and exercise regularly. At home, you should help your parents with the housework. You should be polite when you travel. Finally, I wish you a happy Spring Festival.
??? Thank you very much!
解析：这是一篇应用作文，主要介绍放假通知，时态是一般现在时和一般将来时。首先介绍放假的时间及放假前把教室打扫干净；然后介绍假期间完成作业及锻炼身体，同时介绍在家和外出时的注意事项；最后总结。为文章增色，注意运用好词好句，同时恰当使用连词，使文章上下文联系更为紧密。 点评：习作时注意作文内容全面，涵盖提示信息。运用好词好句，如：return to；clean up；finish one's homework；on time；help sb. with sth.；wish sb. sth.等。祈使句。状语从句的运用为文章增色不少，如Please clean up the classroom before you leave school.You should be polite when you travel. 等。连词and、before、when，finally等运用使文章上下文联系更为紧密。
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Dear Frank,
??? I feel so happy that you're coming to study in my school. Now let me tell you something you should know.
??? First, we Chinese usually shake hands when meeting each other for the first time. Secondly, when we have meals, we usually pick up our bowls. Remember not to make noise because it's not polite. Sometimes the Chinese host uses chopsticks to put food in your plate. This is a sign of politeness.21*cnjy*com
??? My school lies in the centre of Shenzhen. With over 200 teachers and about 2, 000 students, it welcomes exchange students like you from all over the world. So I'm sure you will have a great time here.
??? Tell me the exact time you're arriving.
Yours,
Li Hua
解析：本文要求根据Frank的电子邮件内容，给Frank回复一封电子邮件介绍你学校的情况及应注意的问题。根据提示及要求，邮件内容包括：告诉Frank应注意关于中国风俗习惯方面的问题（当第一次见面时要握手；吃饭时通常端起碗，吃饭时发出响声是没礼貌的；有时主人用筷子给盘子放食物，是礼貌的标志）；介绍学校情况（学校的位置；拥于多少老师和学生）；结尾总结全文并表达祝愿。文体说明文；人称第一人称和第三人称；时态一般现在时。适当运用连词，做到上下文联系紧密，符合逻辑关系。 点评：这篇短文包含了题目所给的所有信息。连词and，so使用得当。还运用了时间状语从句、宾语从句和定语从句。 we Chinese usually shake hands when meeting each other for the first time. Secondly, when we have meals, we usually pick up our bowls. （时间状语从句）You ask me if? I? had an? unforgettable trip .I hope you will have a good time.（时间状语从句） So I'm sure you will have a great time here. （宾语从句） Now let me tell you something you should know. （定语从句）21cnjy.com
10. ??? Technology brings people much convenience. In order to make students study and understand it better, our school will organize an activity for Grade Eight students. We will visit a technology fair on November 16th in Shenzhen library.
??? We will meet at the school gate at 8:00 a. m. and go there by school bus. Everyone should wear school uniforms and not be late. We also keep quiet during the visit.
??? The activity includes four parts. First, we will listen to some introductions of the newest inventions. Next, we will enjoy a 5D film about Roberts to learn about their development. Then, we can operate different kinds of intelligent Roberts ourselves. At last, we can take some photos of our favourite inventions.
??? What an amazing and exciting activity! Why not come with me?
解析：这是一篇应用作文，主要介绍通知八年级学生11月16日去深圳市图书馆参加科技展，时态是一般现在时和一般将来时。首先介绍集合的时间、地点和交通工具；然后介绍集合的要求；最后介绍活动的内容。为文章增色，注意运用好词好句，同时恰当使用连词，使文章上下文联系更为紧密。 点评：写作时注意作文内容全面，涵盖提示信息。运用好词好句，如：in order to do；make sb. do；listen to；learn about；different kinds of；at last；take some photos of等。比较级，状语从句，一般将来时的运用为文章增色不少，如 In order to make students study and understand it better, our school will organize an activity for Grade Eight students. We will visit a technology fair on November 16th in Shenzhen library.等，连词and，first，next，then，at last运用使文章上下文联系更为紧密。