高考英语全国卷作文常考体裁突破--申请信 学案
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高考英语全国卷作文常考体裁突破—申请信
☆优秀作文标准
1.内容维度:准确+充实。内容要点表达完整、恰当，拓展内容合理、充实不空洞；
2.语言维度：正确+精彩。语言无错或少错；词汇、句式丰富多样；
3.篇章连贯与得体性维度：流畅+得体。结构安排规范合理、行文紧凑、语气得体、流畅自然；
4.书写维度：美观。卷面整洁，书写规范，字体优美。
在高一阶段，力求练出一手惊艳的书写，多积累背诵精彩字词与句式(非谓语动词；复合句;介词短语;倒装;强调;固定句型等)。
☆原题重现
假定你是李华，从互联网上得知一个国际中学生组织将在新加坡(Singapore)举办夏令营，欢迎各国学生参加。请写一封电子邮件申请参加。
内容包括：1.自我介绍 (包括英语能力)；2.参加意图(介绍中国，了解其他国家)；3.希望获准。
☆审题——申请信(Letters of Application)
一审体裁: 应用文中的申请信。特别注意两点：一是不要过分奉承对方，二是不要自吹自擂。
二审人称、时态和写作对象: “我”是李华,第一人称; 对方是一个国际组织,第二人称。一般现在时为主,陈述过去经历用一般过去时,陈述希望用一般将来时。
三审要点：题中要求写到三方面信息,可以按点分段并做总分总式拓展。须使用恰当的关联词语是行文流畅。
→本次审题普遍错误是没有考虑写作对象,以下这种直接翻译题目的开篇就是忽视了写作对象，写信时没有代入感: I know from the Internet that an international organization will hold a summer camp in Singapore. (写作对象就是这个国际组织,应改为I know from the Internet that you will hold a summer camp in Singapore.)
☆申请信常用词汇
人物能力类词汇主修…专业 major(vi.) in … 受到良好的教育 be well-educated优秀的学业成绩 excellent academic performance擅长… specialize in …/ be skilled at精通… be proficient/professional in … show/have proficiency in … have a good command of …能胜任… be competent in sth./ to do sth. gain/have competence in … 有能力做… be capable of doing..对...自信 be confident in/ about 在...方面有天赋 be gifted in对...有经验 be experienced in …对...有热情 be enthusiastic about …因...而获奖 be awarded for 与...和睦相处 get on well with sb. 在(学习语言……方面)打下坚实的基础 lay a solid foundation in (language study...) 申请应聘类词汇申请… apply for sth/apply to do sth.志愿者 volunteer申请n. application满足你们的资历/要求 meet your qualifications/requirements通过电话或电子邮件联系我I can be reached by telephone or email致力于/献身于… be devoted to合作精神 teamwork spirit责任感 sense of responsibility良好的人际关系 good interpersonal relationship在你方便的时候进行面谈 have a personal interview at your convenience最合适人选 the right person for the job/position 有…的优势 have an advantage of sth.珍惜机会 value the chance不遗余力做… spare no efforts to do sth.
☆精彩句式
第一段：自我介绍+写作目的
? Noticing the information on the Internet, I lost no time in deciding to take part in this fascinating activity since I am interested in different cultures. (1班 凌颢宁)
? Knowing from the Internet that as an international organization, you will launch a summer camp in Singapore, I can’t wait to join in it and am therefore writing this letter to apply. (1班郑清云)
常用申请信开头句式： On hearing that …, I am writing to apply for the opportunity to be ….
? After learning from the notice that…, I am writing to apply for the opportunity to be ….
? Having known that…, I am writing to apply for the opportunity to be ….
第二段：英语能力+参加意图(介绍中国，了解其他国家)
? Above all, I am quite good at oral English, which makes it easy for me to talk with foreign friends.
? Due to the efforts I made, I can communicate with others in English fluently now. (2班冯江雪)
? Realizing the world is increasingly connected, I would like to know more about other countries, which will widen my horizon. (2班冯江雪)
? There is no denying the fact that many people don’t know about China’s great culture and I sincerely hope my efforts can make a difference. (2班 李若菲)
? What attracts me most about this summer camp is that I will get a chance to learn more about foreign cultures. While learning from others, I can introduce my own country to students from all over the world, which will make me proud and meanwhile provide them with a wider idea about China.(2班 邓皖洛)
? No words can describe how excited I was when I came across the news that you will hold a summer camp in Singapore. (2班 林海琪)
? Recent years have witnessed a marked growth in China, which accounts for my desire to introduce my country to foreigners. (2班 周婷)
? Only when I drown myself in studying English can I feel relaxed and excited. (7班 何琳琳)
? By doing this, I have gained a lot and felt the charm of the English language.(8班 李雪)
? Not only can I experience the camping life, but I can also make more friends and learn from them.(8曾诗琦)
? Aiming to raise awareness of learning Chinese culture, I am eager to share Chinese traditional customs with those interested in China. (12班 吴倩怡)
? Born in Shanghai, an open and cosmopolitan city in China, I am brought up with multicultural influence, which shapes me into the person I am now. (根据13班唐楚雄的句子更改)
? In addition, I also want to know more about other countries and their cultures to broaden my horizon, which I think is significant for students like me in this globalized world.(22班 卓霖)
第三段：希望获准+感谢+盼复(参考佳作部分末段)
☆佳作欣赏I
Dear Sir or Madam,
Greetings from China!
Knowing that you are to hold a summer camp in Singapore, I’m writing to apply to be part of it. As a straight-A high school student, I am proficient in English and have no difficulty in communicating with native speakers, which meets your requirements concerning language.
Aiming to broaden my horizon and sharpen my mind, I’m eager to participate in this extracurricular activity to refresh myself both mentally and physically. Besides, it has long been one of my habits to introduce my beautiful country, China, to foreigners. It is my permanent hope that more and more people can have a better understanding of China’s inner beauty. Additionally, meeting with foreign friends offers a good opportunity to get to know other countries’ culture and customs by interacting with them.
I would highly appreciate it if a precious chance could be offered to me. I’m looking forward to your reply.
注意：如果将“语言能力”写入第一段，要明白这是申请加入该夏令营的一个条件，否则该句容易上下脱节,影响行文流畅。
也可以像“写作模板”中那样处理，将“语言能力”归入第二段。
Learning from......that......, I am writing to apply for/ to do
In reply to your advertisement in…, I am writing to apply for…
I sincerely hope… Your early response will be highly appreciated. I would be delighted to furnish additional information if needed.
写作模板
First, I am confident that I meet the language requirements needed for the communication and interaction in the summer camp. Besides, this is a golden opportunity I can’t miss….(接着写具体意图,参考精彩句式) (段落内部结构清晰)
英语能力+参加意图
希望获准+期待回复
(自我介绍)+写信目的
☆优秀作文标准
1.内容维度:准确+充实。内容要点表达完整、恰当，拓展内容合理、充实不空洞；
2.语言维度：正确+精彩。语言无错或少错；词汇、句式丰富多样；
3.篇章连贯与得体性维度：流畅+得体。结构安排规范合理、行文紧凑、语气得体、流畅自然；
4.书写维度：美观。卷面整洁，书写规范，字体优美。
在高一阶段，力求练出一手惊艳的书写，多积累背诵精彩字词与句式(非谓语动词；复合句;介词短语;倒装;强调;固定句型等)。
☆原题重现
假定你是李华，从互联网上得知一个国际中学生组织将在新加坡(Singapore)举办夏令营，欢迎各国学生参加。请写一封电子邮件申请参加。
内容包括：1.自我介绍 (包括英语能力)；2.参加意图(介绍中国，了解其他国家)；3.希望获准。
☆审题——申请信(Letters of Application)
一审体裁: 应用文中的申请信。特别注意两点：一是不要过分奉承对方，二是不要自吹自擂。
二审人称、时态和写作对象: “我”是李华,第一人称; 对方是一个国际组织,第二人称。一般现在时为主,陈述过去经历用一般过去时,陈述希望用一般将来时。
三审要点：题中要求写到三方面信息,可以按点分段并做总分总式拓展。须使用恰当的关联词语是行文流畅。
→本次审题普遍错误是没有考虑写作对象,以下这种直接翻译题目的开篇就是忽视了写作对象，写信时没有代入感: I know from the Internet that an international organization will hold a summer camp in Singapore. (写作对象就是这个国际组织,应改为I know from the Internet that you will hold a summer camp in Singapore.)
☆申请信常用词汇
人物能力类词汇主修…专业 major(vi.) in … 受到良好的教育 be well-educated优秀的学业成绩 excellent academic performance擅长… specialize in …/ be skilled at精通… be proficient/professional in … show/have proficiency in … have a good command of …能胜任… be competent in sth./ to do sth. gain/have competence in … 有能力做… be capable of doing..对...自信 be confident in/ about 在...方面有天赋 be gifted in对...有经验 be experienced in …对...有热情 be enthusiastic about …因...而获奖 be awarded for 与...和睦相处 get on well with sb. 在(学习语言……方面)打下坚实的基础 lay a solid foundation in (language study...) 申请应聘类词汇申请… apply for sth/apply to do sth.志愿者 volunteer申请n. application满足你们的资历/要求 meet your qualifications/requirements通过电话或电子邮件联系我I can be reached by telephone or email致力于/献身于… be devoted to合作精神 teamwork spirit责任感 sense of responsibility良好的人际关系 good interpersonal relationship在你方便的时候进行面谈 have a personal interview at your convenience最合适人选 the right person for the job/position 有…的优势 have an advantage of sth.珍惜机会 value the chance不遗余力做… spare no efforts to do sth.
☆精彩句式
第一段：自我介绍+写作目的
? Noticing the information on the Internet, I lost no time in deciding to take part in this fascinating activity since I am interested in different cultures. (1班 凌颢宁)
? Knowing from the Internet that as an international organization, you will launch a summer camp in Singapore, I can’t wait to join in it and am therefore writing this letter to apply. (1班郑清云)
常用申请信开头句式： On hearing that …, I am writing to apply for the opportunity to be ….
? After learning from the notice that…, I am writing to apply for the opportunity to be ….
? Having known that…, I am writing to apply for the opportunity to be ….
第二段：英语能力+参加意图(介绍中国，了解其他国家)
? Above all, I am quite good at oral English, which makes it easy for me to talk with foreign friends.
? Due to the efforts I made, I can communicate with others in English fluently now. (2班冯江雪)
? Realizing the world is increasingly connected, I would like to know more about other countries, which will widen my horizon. (2班冯江雪)
? There is no denying the fact that many people don’t know about China’s great culture and I sincerely hope my efforts can make a difference. (2班 李若菲)
? What attracts me most about this summer camp is that I will get a chance to learn more about foreign cultures. While learning from others, I can introduce my own country to students from all over the world, which will make me proud and meanwhile provide them with a wider idea about China.(2班 邓皖洛)
? No words can describe how excited I was when I came across the news that you will hold a summer camp in Singapore. (2班 林海琪)
? Recent years have witnessed a marked growth in China, which accounts for my desire to introduce my country to foreigners. (2班 周婷)
? Only when I drown myself in studying English can I feel relaxed and excited. (7班 何琳琳)
? By doing this, I have gained a lot and felt the charm of the English language.(8班 李雪)
? Not only can I experience the camping life, but I can also make more friends and learn from them.(8曾诗琦)
? Aiming to raise awareness of learning Chinese culture, I am eager to share Chinese traditional customs with those interested in China. (12班 吴倩怡)
? Born in Shanghai, an open and cosmopolitan city in China, I am brought up with multicultural influence, which shapes me into the person I am now. (根据13班唐楚雄的句子更改)
? In addition, I also want to know more about other countries and their cultures to broaden my horizon, which I think is significant for students like me in this globalized world.(22班 卓霖)
第三段：希望获准+感谢+盼复(参考佳作部分末段)
☆佳作欣赏I
Dear Sir or Madam,
Greetings from China!
Knowing that you are to hold a summer camp in Singapore, I’m writing to apply to be part of it. As a straight-A high school student, I am proficient in English and have no difficulty in communicating with native speakers, which meets your requirements concerning language.
Aiming to broaden my horizon and sharpen my mind, I’m eager to participate in this extracurricular activity to refresh myself both mentally and physically. Besides, it has long been one of my habits to introduce my beautiful country, China, to foreigners. It is my permanent hope that more and more people can have a better understanding of China’s inner beauty. Additionally, meeting with foreign friends offers a good opportunity to get to know other countries’ culture and customs by interacting with them.
I would highly appreciate it if a precious chance could be offered to me. I’m looking forward to your reply.
注意：如果将“语言能力”写入第一段，要明白这是申请加入该夏令营的一个条件，否则该句容易上下脱节,影响行文流畅。
也可以像“写作模板”中那样处理，将“语言能力”归入第二段。
Learning from......that......, I am writing to apply for/ to do
In reply to your advertisement in…, I am writing to apply for…
I sincerely hope… Your early response will be highly appreciated. I would be delighted to furnish additional information if needed.
写作模板
First, I am confident that I meet the language requirements needed for the communication and interaction in the summer camp. Besides, this is a golden opportunity I can’t miss….(接着写具体意图,参考精彩句式) (段落内部结构清晰)
英语能力+参加意图
希望获准+期待回复
(自我介绍)+写信目的