(共30张PPT)
Writing a letter of invitation
Post-exam writing appraisal class
Calligraphy
Hand
writing
Calligraphy, the art of writing characters (汉字) especially by using brush and ink, is a reflection of Chinese culture.
书面表达
假如你是李华。你所在的书法协会正在招收新成员。请给你的留学生朋友David写邮件，邀请他加入该协会，内容包括：
1. 学习书法的意义
2.报名方式及截止日期
注意：
1. 词数100字数
2. 可以适当增加细节，以使行文连贯。
3. 文章的开头和结尾已经给出，不计入词数
假如你是李华。你所在的书法协会正在招收新成员。请给你的留学生朋友David写邮件，邀请他加入该协会，内容包括：
1.学习书法的意义
2.报名方式及截止日期
注意：
1. 词数100左右
2. 可以适当增加细节，以使行文连贯。(增加什么细节)
3. 文章的开头和结尾已经给出不计入词数
Step 1 Analyze the writing task
A letter of invitation
适当增加细节
Which type of writing is this?
How many points do you need to cover?
Step 2 Organize it
(greetings )
brief intro of the activity
writing purpose
the benefits of learning
calligraphy (at least 2 points)
signing up and deadline
expecting his participation or reply
Para 1
Introduction
Para 2
Body part
Para 3
Ending
Structure
How to write each paragraph
假如你是李华。你所在的书法协会正在招收新成员。请给你的留学生朋友David写邮件，邀请他加入该协会，内容包括：
1. 学习书法的意义
2.报名方式及截止日期
注意：
1. 词数100字数
2. 可以适当增加细节，以使行文连贯。
3. 文章的开头和结尾已经给出，不计入词数
Para 1
a brief intro of an activity +
writing purpose
Possible versions
Which one is better?
I have good news for you. Our calligraphy association is recruiting new members, and I am writing to invite you to take part in it because I know you are interested in Chinese culture.
主语的切换过于频繁 增加的细节放后面
I have good news for you. Our Calligraphy Association is taking in new members. Informed that you are enthusiastic about Chinese culture, I'm now dropping a line to you to extend my invitation of joining us.
书法协会
the calligraphy union/ club /association /society /organization
institute (学院)，constitution (宪法)
×
招募新人
recruit/look for/ hunt for/take in/want new members
hunt/absorb new members
×
加入
join
join in
take part in
participate in
join us
join the club/party
an activity
A good beginning does count!
假如你是李华。你所在的书法协会正在招收新成员。请给你的留学生朋友David写邮件，邀请他加入该协会，内容包括：
1.学习书法的意义
2.报名方式及截止日期
注意：
1. 词数100字数
2. 可以适当增加细节，以使行文连贯。
3. 文章的开头和结尾已经给出，不计入词数
Para 2
The benefits of practising calligraphy
Group discussion
The benefits of learnig calligraphy.
Is you opinion to the point？ (切题)
主题的选择要有2个
怎么做 分步骤
怎么才达标 评价 如 要告知要增加的细节
Possible versions
We learn and practise calligraphy in order to improve our inner character because when writing, you need to be quiet and put our heart into it.
Practising calligraphy can not only settle our minds, but also soften our moods, which contributes to our rational minds.Besides, devoting ourselves to the world of calligraphy is a good way to improve our capability of appreciation and develop an individual eye of beauty.
what + why
linking words
假如你是李华。你所在的书法协会正在招收新成员。请给你的留学生朋友David写邮件，邀请他加入该协会，内容包括：
1.学习书法的意义
2.报名方式及截止日期
注意：
1. 词数100字数
2. 可以适当增加细节，以使行文连贯。
3. 文章的开头和结尾已经给出，不计入词数
Para 3
signing up and deadline
How can he sign up?
What is the deadline?
× The information is unclear.
The more specific, the better!
The way to join the club is on the internet. The end time is next month.
Possible versions
Possible versions: 结尾一定是前面提到的东西。
Your participation can surely add fun to？ our club. I'm looking forward to you coming. 前文未提及
In a word, it is worthwhile to learn calligraphy. I do hope you can make it to our club. I'm looking forward to your coming.
Para 3
Expecting participation or reply
×
Group work
Let's learn to assess two articles.
Instructions
Compare the two articles on your hand-out, tell which one is better and give one or two comments. 4'
Please find out one or two sentences that you like best and give comments on them. 2'
Share your opinions with other teams. 3'
structure 1. Whether he or she has covered all the information given in the task? (是否覆盖所有信息点)
2. Does he or she divide the writing into parts?（是否合理分段）
content 3. Is everything to the point? (是否切题)
4. Is the article rich in details that support the main idea? （是否有足够的细节）
language 5. Does he or she use proper linking words between sentences?
（句与句之间是否有连接词）
6. Please underline one of the most excellent sentences and tell us why it is good. (请标出你认为写的最好的一句，并简要点评）
Presentation
Homework
Learn to use a variety of sentence patterns
Homework: Find out the simple sentences in you writing and try to improve them.
e.g
You know, calligraphy is traditional culture in China.
提升：It is widely acknowledged that calligraphy is one of the most significant arts in China, witnessing the rise and fall of different dynasties.
Thank you
谢谢
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Comments on a letter of invitation
书面表达：
假如你是李华。你所在的书法协会正在招收新成员。请给你的留学生朋友David写邮件，邀请他加入该协会，内容包括： 1. 学习书法的意义 2. 报名方式及截止日期
注意：
1. 词数100字数 2. 可以适当增加细节，以使行文连贯。 3. 文章的开头和结尾已经给出，不计入词数
Contents of the class:
Part 1 What to write in each paragraph in this letter of invitation
Part 2 Learn to appreciate your peers’ writing and understand why it is good
Teaching Procedure:
Lead-in: Have you ever practised calligraphy? What do you think of it?
I. Analyze the writing task. Answer two questions:
What is the type of writing? __________________
How many points are included in the writing task? Please underline them?
II. Organize the writing (Make an outline)
III. What to write in each paragraph with students’ examples.
1. Para 1 A brief introduction of the activity and the writing purpose
Compare the following two versions. Which one is better? Why?
I have good news for you. Our calligraphy association is recruiting new members, and I am writing to invite you to take part in it.
I have good news for you. Our Calligraphy Association is taking in new members. Informed that you are enthusiastic about Chinese culture, I'm now dropping a line to you to extend my invitation of joining us.
2. Para 2 Benefits of practising calligraphy.
Group discussion: What can you gain from learning calligraphy?
Is your idea to the points?
Possible versions:
We learn and practise calligraphy in order to improve our inner character because when writing, you need to be quiet and put our heart into it.
Practising calligraphy can not only settle our minds, but also soften our moods, which contributes to our rational minds.Besides, devoting ourselves to the world of calligraphy is a good way to improve our capability of appreciation and develop an individual eye of beauty.
3. Para 3 Signing up and deadline + expecting participation or a reply
How can he sign up and what is the deadline?
e.g The way to join the club is on the internet. The end time is next month.
Have this sentence answered the questions?
Tips: You need to be more specific when illustrating a point.
Possible versions:
If you are interested in joining us, please fill in the application letter attached to this letter by this Friday. Your participation can surely add fun to our club. I'm looking forward to you coming.
If you would like to join the calligraphy club, please send an e-mail to me before December 31st. In a word, it is worthwhile to learn calligraphy. I do hope you can make it to our club. I'm looking forward to your coming.
IV. A possible version for you to appreciate.
V. Compare the two articles on your hand-out and tell which one is better and give one or two comments
VI. Homework: Find out the simple sentences in you writing and try to improve them.
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