课件19张PPT。WelcomeWriting a letter of adviceLead-inPresentation1. As we all know, stress is a part of our everyday life and there is no way to it.2. In fact, a little bit of stress can give
us and excitement to our goals successfully. 3. However , according to scientific researches, if continually to stress, we are more likely to suffer problems. 4. As far as I’m , the following steps maybe used to fight with stress from
and . Note-takingmotivationachievehealth exposed naturalconcerneddifficultiesproblemsavoid Last but not , if you have your best, just let it _______ .
Firstly inside. Try to figure out what is causing you to worry. Secondly, your situation. Find out what part of the is under your .Thirdly, come up with a to solve the most difficult part of your problem. If you can't deal with it , you can ... for help.But how to conquer it?lookanalyzesituationcontrolsolutionindependentlyturn toleasttried goOutline of a letter of advice
Beginning (to give reasons)Body (to analyze and offer suggestions)Ending (to express expectations)Step 1 List the key pointsStep 2 Make sentences
Step 3 Form a passage and polish
Three steps for writingHelpful sentence patternsBegining(to give reasons)
1. After reading your letter, I feel sorry to know that …
2. I am very glad to hear that you want to…
3. I am writing to you for the purpose of …
I am writing to share some advice/opinions with you.
You have asked me for some advice with regard to …
and I will try to make some constructive suggestions.
7. You have asked me for my advice about/on …Body(to offer suggestions)
1 .I think it would be beneficial if you could …
2. I would like to suggest/recommend that…
3. If I were you, I would…
4. You may consider doing …
5. It would seem/seems to me that you could …
6. In my opinion, it would be wise to take the
following actions.
First,/Firstly,/ Secondly,/ Then,/ After that,/ In the end,/ Finally, /Meanwhile, /What’s more,/
In addition,/ Besides,/ Furthermore, …
Ending(to expess expectations) 1. I believe you will take my advice into account/ consideration.
2. I hope you will find these proposals/ suggestions/ recommendations practical/ useful/ helpful.
3. I would appreciate it very much if you could consider my suggestions.
4. I feel that it would be beneficial if you stick to it.
5. In the end, I will be glad if you find my suggestions useful/ helpful.Dear _____(receiver),
I am writing to express my views concerning ______
(problem).
First and for the most, _______(1st suggestion). In addition, _____(2nd suggestion). What’s more, _____(3rd suggustion).
I hope you’ll find these proposals helpful.
Yours sincerely,
(writer)
Dear (receiver),
I'm glad to receive your letter asking for my advice on how to .(leading in the topic)
Here are a few suggestions. First, it is important to . Then, it also helps to . Besides, it should be a good idea to . You can also . (using different sentence patterns)
As to , I suggest .(offering advice from the oposite) In addition, .(other suggestions) I'm sure .(predicting possible results and giving inspiration)
I'm looking forward to .(expressing expectations)
Sincerely yours,
(Writer)Writing:a letter of adviceDiscussion and polishingSummary: what makes a good letter of advice
Summary4. Make your writing clear, coherent and
impressive. 1. Express your empathy and use a polite tone.
2. Offer brief, convincing, and objective advice.3. Follow the form of a letter and use the proper
tenses.HomeworkPolish your own writing and post it in your own cyberspace.Help to polish at least one of your classmates' writing in their cyber-
space.GOODBYE!Thanks for listening!