2020届高考英语二轮复习讲义：专题五 短文改错1（解析版）

一 1
(2019·河南六市联考)
话题：认养树木
难度：★
建议用时：7分
One Saturday morning，I was watching TV with my parents when a piece of news caught our attentions.The Guangming Park called on people adopt trees.That’s exact what we had been thinking about.So on the next morning，we went to the park directly.A worker there gave us a detailed introduction or showed us to the pine woods.We choose a beautiful pine tree and the worker tied a adoption card to it.When my name was seeing on the card，I was so proud and felt a sense of responsibility at the same time.To memorize the excited moment，we took photos with our new family member—the pine tree.In one of the photos，we both smiled from the bottom of our hearts.
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(2019·江西4月模拟)
话题：如何减少压力
难度：★★
建议用时：8分
Nowadays Senior 3 students are generally faced with a lot of pressure，that is rather common.To reduce it，the following suggestion may help.First of all，know exactly what lead to your pressure，and then you can take measures to deal with it.Secondly，set up a goal that is not too high，in the other words，don’t put too many pressure on yourself.Thirdly，finding a way to relax yourself occasionally.For example，you can listen music，go swimming or just simple go walking.Eventually，make friends with others，for example，your classmates，your teachers，and our parents.They will understand you and come to your help though you are really in trouble.In a word，never get yourself stuck in the pressure for “impossible is nothing”．
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(2019·江西吉安一模)
话题：问候方式
难度：★
建议用时：7分
When holidays draw nearly，people usually greeted each other in a variety of ways.Some people often go on the line and send e-mails or electronic cards to their friends，relatives and teachers that others prefer to make phone calls or send short messages by mobile phone.In a word，people choose differently to exchange their best wish during our holidays.
As to me，I’d like send e-mails or electronic cards.First，it costs little and no money.What’s more，a lot of paper is saving，which is environmentally friendly.
4
(2019·重庆4月调研)
话题：茶文化
难度：★
建议用时：7分
Dear Tom，
How time flies! Next week is your birthday.Happy birthday for you！I’ve sent you a can of tea as a gift，which I hope you will like it.Now I will introduce Chinese tea culture to you.
Chinese tea has history of more than 4,000 years.General speaking，there’re many kind of tea in China，including green tea，red tea and so on.Drink tea has many benefits.For example，it can make people relaxing.Besides，it has been proved that tea was beneficial to people’s healthy.No wonder that tea is become increasingly popular with people around the world.
I hope you will love Chinese tea and tea culture.Happy birthday!
Yours，
Li Hua
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(2019·河北唐山二模)
话题：健康
难度：★★
建议用时：8分
The world seems to be facing two problem.One is that too many people are dangerous over-weighted.This type of problem called obesity.Obesity is when a person have more than 25－30 percent of body fat.The other problem is a illness called anorexia(厌食症)．This is when people are dangerously thin；we are less than 85% of their normal body weight.All of these problems are very serious because of the body cannot work properly when it is too fat or too thin.The heart，liver，kidneys and lungs will not be able to keep the body health.People can die from illnesses causing by being too fat or too thin.
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(2019·湖南怀化二模)
话题：赠送礼物
难度：★
建议用时：7分
Last Monday，it hit me that my beloved grandmother birthday was around the corner.I decided to make her an unique present.Without the slightest hesitation，I threw me into creating this priceless album.I turned on the computer，carefully selected some photos，added up some decorations，and designed each pages carefully.Eventually，an album of love born.Looked at my work with satisfaction，I couldn’t help imagining how delightedly my grandma would be.
Soon，the big day arrived.At the birthday party，I presented the album to Grandma.The moment she saw the special gift，she hugs me affectionately，tears rolling in her eyes，what made my parents smile genuinely as well.
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(2019·河南安阳二模)
话题：冷静参加考试
难度：★★
建议用时：8分
It was a math test，for which I have prepared for a long time.So much importance I attach to it that I even felt a little nervous before a test.My heart began to beat wild immediately I took my seat in the classrooms.Looking at the test paper，our mind went blank.I attempted to focus my attention and it was impossible.So I closed my eyes and took a deep breath，try to calm down.It worked.Gradually I recovered from my calmness.Feeling more relaxing，I picked up my pen and began to write.
8
(2019·辽宁抚顺模拟)
话题：雷锋活动日
难度：★★
建议用时：8分
March 5th is a day in honor of Lei Feng，who people are called on to help others.On the morning of that day this year，our class met the school gate and went to a Hope Primary School by the bus.Upon arriving there，they gave us a warmly welcome.We gave the students some books，food or clothes.And then，we played several game with them and told them stories.Before we leave，we took a photo with them.See their smiling faces，we both felt a sense of happiness.We arrived home and promised to go back whenever possible.How an unforgettable experience it was!
答案
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答案　
One Saturday morning，I was watching TV with my parents when a piece of news caught our .The Guangming Park called on people  adopt trees.That’s  what we had been thinking about.So on the next morning，we went to the park directly.A worker there gave us a detailed introduction  showed us to the pine woods.We  a beautiful pine tree and the worker tied  adoption card to it.When my name was  on the card，I was so proud and felt a sense of responsibility at the same time.To memorize the  moment，we took photos with our new family member—the pine tree.In one of the photos，we  smiled from the bottom of our hearts.

第一处：考查名词。attention为不可数名词，故不可用复数形式。故将attentions改为attention。
第二处：考查动词短语。call on sb.to do sth.号召某人做某事。故在adopt前加to。
第三处：考查副词。这里用副词形式，修饰后面的从句。故将exact改为exactly。
第四处：考查介词。当时间名词被this，that，last，next等词修饰时，不用介词。故将on去掉。
第五处：考查连词。这里前后动作之间为并列关系，故用连词and。故将or改为and。
第六处：考查时态。根据全文时态可知，此处应用一般过去时。故将choose改为chose。
第七处：考查冠词。名词adoption的发音以元音音素开头，故其前应用冠词an。故将a改为an。
第八处：考查语态。my name与动词see之间为被动关系，故用被动语态。故将seeing改为seen。
第九处：考查形容词。这里修饰物moment，故前用形容词exciting，表示“令人激动的”。excited兴奋的，修饰人。故将excited改为exciting。
第十处：考查代词。三人或三人以上用代词all，而both指两人。此处指作者和父母，故将both改为all。
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答案　
Nowadays Senior 3 students are generally faced with a lot of pressure， is rather common.To reduce it，the following  may help.First of all，know exactly what  to your pressure，and then you can take measures to deal with it.Secondly，set up a goal that is not too high，in the other words，don’t put too  pressure on yourself.Thirdly， a way to relax yourself occasionally.For example，you can listen  music，go swimming or just  go walking.Eventually，make friends with others，for example，your classmates，your teachers，and  parents.They will understand you and come to your help  you are really in trouble.In a word，never get yourself stuck in the pressure for “impossible is nothing”．
语篇解读　本文是一篇说明文。文章主要介绍了高三学生经常面对很大的压力，如何减少压力呢？本文提出了几条建议。
第一处：考查非限制性定语从句。分析句子可知，定语从句的引导词指代前面的一句话，要用which。故把that改为which。
第二处：考查名词复数。suggestion是可数名词。根据下文的内容可知是多个建议，因此要用复数形式，故把suggestion 改为suggestions。
第三处：考查主谓一致。分析句子可知，主句谓语是一般现在时，从句中主语是what，谓语用第三人称单数形式。故把lead改为leads。
第四处：考查固定搭配。 in other words为固定搭配，意为“换句话说”，故去掉in后面的the。
第五处：考查形容词。句中的pressure为不可数名词。many修饰可数名词复数，而much修饰不可数名词。因此把many 改为much。
第六处：考查祈使句。分析句子可知，本句是一个祈使句，要用动词原形。故把finding改为find。
第七处：考查固定搭配。listen为不及物动词，后面不能直接跟宾语，要用介词to，故要在listen后添加to。
第八处：考查词性转换。分析句子可知，本句中的go是动词，修饰动词要用副词形式。故把simple改为simply。
第九处：考查形容词性物主代词。分析句子可知，本句为祈使句。其逻辑主语是you。因此是你的父母，而不是我们的，故把our改为your。
第十处：考查连词。分析语境可知，当你遇到麻烦或者如果遇到麻烦，而不是尽管。故把 though改为when/if。
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答案　
When holidays draw ，people usually  each other in a variety of ways.Some people often go on the line and send e-mails or electronic cards to their friends，relatives and teachers  others prefer to make phone calls or send short messages by mobile phone.In a word，people choose differently to exchange their best  during  holidays.
As  me，I’d like  send e-mails or electronic cards.First，it costs little  no money.What’s more，a lot of paper is ，which is environmentally friendly.

第一处：考查副词。表示“接近”应用near，nearly为“差不多”，故把nearly改为near。
第二处：考查动词的时态。根据上文usually可知，此处描述一般客观事实，应用一般现在时，故把greeted改为greet。
第三处：考查冠词。短语go on line“上网”，中间不需要冠词，故去掉the。
第四处：考查连词。句意为：一些人经常上网，发送电子邮件或电子贺卡给他们的朋友、亲戚和老师，而其他人更喜欢打电话或通过手机发送短信。前后表示对比，应用连词while，故把that改为while。
第五处：考查名词的数。wish表示“祝愿”为可数名词，且由their修饰，故用复数形式wishes。
第六处：考查形容词性物主代词/冠词。句意为：总之，人们在他们的节日中选择不同的方式来交换他们最好的祝愿。根据句意可知，指代第三人称复数应用their。也可以用the表示在节日期间。
第七处：考查介词。短语as for sb.“至于某人”，故把to改为for。
第八处：考查固定用法。would like to do sth.想要做某事，后跟不定式，故在like后添加to。
第九处：考查连词。由语意可知，此处表示选择关系，故把and改为or。
第十处：考查被动语态。本句主语paper与谓语动词save构成被动关系，故把saving改为saved。
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答案　
Dear Tom，
How time flies! Next week is your birthday.Happy birthday  you！I’ve sent you a can of tea as a gift，which I hope you will like it.Now I will introduce Chinese tea culture to you.
Chinese tea has  history of more than 4,000 years. speaking，there’re many  of tea in China，including green tea，red tea and so on. tea has many benefits.For example，it can make people .Besides，it has been proved that tea  beneficial to people’s .No wonder that tea 或 increasingly popular with people around the world.
I hope you will love Chinese tea and tea culture.Happy birthday!
Yours，
Li Hua
语篇解读　本文是一篇说明文。作者送给自己的朋友一罐茶叶作为生日礼物，并且向他介绍了中国的茶文化。
第一处：考查介词。固定搭配Happy birthday to sb.“祝某人生日快乐”，故把for改为to。
第二处：考查非限制性定语从句。这是非限定性定语从句修饰先行词gift，关系代词 which在从句中作宾语，再用it，成分重复。故去掉it。
第三处：考查冠词。短语have a history of..“有多久的历史”，故在history前加a。
第四处：考查副词。固定短语generally speaking“一般而言”，故把General改为Generally。
第五处：考查名词的数。kind为可数名词，由many修饰，故应用复数形式kinds。
第六处：考查非谓语动词。本句需要动名词短语作主语，故把Drink改为Drinking。
第七处：考查形容词。make sb.relaxed使某人放松，relaxed放松的，一般修饰人，relaxing使人放松的，一般修饰物。故把relaxing改为relaxed。
第八处：考查动词的时态。这里表示一般情况，并结合上下文时态可知，用一般现在时，故把was改为is。
第九处：考查名词。作介词的宾语需要用名词，故把healthy改为health。
第十处：考查动词的时态。描述目前正在进行的状况，可以用现在进行时，故把become改为becoming；或者表示过去发生的动作持续到现在，将来还会持续下去，用现在完成时，故把is改为has。
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答案　
The world seems to be facing two .One is that too many people are  over-weighted.This type of problem  called obesity.Obesity is when a person  more than 25－30 percent of body fat.The other problem is  illness called anorexia(厌食症)．This is when people are dangerously thin； are less than 85% of their normal body weight. of these problems are very serious because of the body cannot work properly when it is too fat or too thin.The heart，liver，kidneys and lungs will not be able to keep the body .People can die from illnesses  by being too fat or too thin.

第一处：考查名词的数。名词problem为可数名词，根据前面的数词two可知，应用复数形式。故把problem改为problems。
第二处：考查副词。修饰形容词over-weighted，应用副词形式。故把dangerous改为dangerously。
第三处：考查语态。句中主语problem与call之间为被动关系，故用被动语态。故在called前加is。
第四处：考查主谓一致。表语从句中a person为主语，为单数名词，故从句中谓语动词用单数形式。故把have改为has。
第五处：考查冠词。名词illness的发音是以元音音素开头的，故用不定冠词an。故把a改为an。
第六处：考查代词。这里指代前句中的people，故用代词they。故把we改为they。
第七处：考查代词。根据上文可知，文中提及两种问题，故用both。故把All改为Both。
第八处：考查连词。因为“the body cannot work properly”为句子，所以用连词because连接；而because of后接名词或动名词短语。故把of去掉。
第九处：考查形容词。此处为“keep＋宾语＋形容词”结构。故把health改为healthy。
第十处：考查非谓语动词。illness与cause之间为逻辑上的被动关系，故用过去分词作定语。故把causing改为caused。
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答案　
Last Monday，it hit me that my beloved  birthday was around the corner.I decided to make her  unique present.Without the slightest hesitation，I threw  into creating this priceless album.I turned on the computer，carefully selected some photos，added up some decorations，and designed each  carefully.Eventually，an album of love born. at my work with satisfaction，I couldn’t help imagining how  my grandma would be.
Soon，the big day arrived.At the birthday party，I presented the album to Grandma.The moment she saw the special gift，she  me affectionately，tears rolling in her eyes， made my parents smile genuinely as well.
语篇解读　本文是一篇记叙文。在作者外祖母生日来临之际，作者决定亲自给她做一件独一无二的礼物，经过一番精挑细选，最终，一张爱的专辑诞生了。生日那天，作者亲自将礼物送给了外祖母，她很高兴。作者的父母也由衷地高兴。
第一处：考查名词所有格。分析句子可知，本句表示“外祖母的”，所以用grandmother’s。故把grandmother改成grandmother’s。
第二处：考查冠词。unique的首字母的发音为辅音音素，所以用不定冠词a 来修饰present。故把an改成a。
第三处：考查代词。主语与宾语为同一个人时，宾语应用反身代词。故把me改成myself。
第四处：考查固定用法。add为及物动词，其后直接接宾语且符合句意。而add up意为“把(数目)加起来(求出总和)，合计”不符合句意。故删除up。
第五处：考查名词的数。each修饰单数名词。故把pages改成page。
第六处：考查一般过去时的被动语态。be born出生，诞生。故在born前加was。
第七处：考查现在分词。分析句子可知，主语I与look at在逻辑上是主动关系，所以用现在分词作状语。故把Looked改成Looking。
第八处：考查形容词。分析句子可知，imagine后接how引导的感叹句作状语，感叹句的结构为主系表结构，所以be动词后接形容词delighted作表语。故把delightedly改成delighted。
第九处：考查一般过去时。分析句子可知，本句为一般过去时。故把hugs改成hugged。
第十处：考查关系代词。分析句子可知，which为先行词，代替前面的整个句子，作非限制性定语从句的主语。what不能用来引导定语从句。故把what改成which。
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答案　
It was a math test，for which I  prepared for a long time.So much importance  I attach to it that I even felt a little nervous before  test.My heart began to beat  immediately I took my seat in the .Looking at the test paper， mind went blank.I attempted to focus my attention  it was impossible.So I closed my eyes and took a deep breath， to calm down.It worked.Gradually I recovered from my calmness.Feeling more ，I picked up my pen and began to write.
语篇解读　本文是一篇记叙文。作者参加一次准备了很久的数学测试，作者非常重视这次考试以至于在考场中大脑突然一片空白。最终通过自我调节恢复了冷静。
第一处：考查动词的时态。根据句意可知，prepare动作发生在数学考试之前，即“过去的过去”，故应用过去完成时，故把have改为had。
第二处：考查倒装句。在so...that/such...that句型中，so，such 位于句首时，句子要部分倒装。故在I前加助动词did。
第三处：考查冠词或代词。此处特指上文提到的a math test，故应用定冠词the或指示代词that。
第四处：考查副词。beat为动词，需用副词修饰，故把wild改为wildly。
第五处：考查名词的数。根据常识可知，作者考试的“教室”只有一间，应用单数形式，故把classrooms改为classroom。
第六处：考查形容词性物主代词。根据前后文可知，此处指代作者一个人，故把our改为my。
第七处：考查连词。由后文的impossible可知，此处为转折关系，故把and改为but。
第八处：考查非谓语动词。try在本句中作非谓语与逻辑主语I构成主谓关系，故把try改为trying。
第九处：考查介词。recover为及物动词，可以直接跟宾语，故后面不需要介词，故去掉from。
第十处：考查形容词。修饰主语I，指人，应用-ed结尾的形容词，故把relaxing改为relaxed。
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答案　
March 5th is a day in honor of Lei Feng， people are called on to help others.On the morning of that day this year，our class met  the school gate and went to a Hope Primary School by the bus.Upon arriving there，they gave us a  welcome.We gave the students some books，food  clothes.And then，we played several  with them and told them stories.Before we ，we took a photo with them. their smiling faces，we  felt a sense of happiness.We arrived home and promised to go back whenever possible. an unforgettable experience it was!

第一处：考查关系词。定语从句中句子完整，不缺成分，故要考虑用关系副词，空前的先行词是March 5th，为时间。故把who改为when。
第二处：考查介词。at the school gate在学校大门口，固定搭配。故在the前加at。
第三处：考查固定搭配。by bus 乘公交车，固定搭配。故去掉bus前的the。
第四处：考查形容词。前面是a，后面是名词，此处缺形容词。故把warmly改为warm。
第五处：考查连词。此处指“我们给这些学生一些书、食物和衣服”，表并列，故把or改为and。
第六处：考查名词。前面是several“好几个”，后接复数名词。故把game改为games。
第七处：考查时态。主句时态是一般过去时，从句要保持一致，故把leave 改为left。
第八处：考查非谓语动词。主句主语是we，与see是主动关系，用现在分词作状语，故把See改为Seeing。
第九处：考查代词。both表两者都，all表示三者或以上都，从文中可以知道我们班都去了，故把both 改为all。
第十处：考查感叹句。感叹句结构：What a/an＋adj.＋n.! ＝How ＋adj./adv.＋a/an＋n.！故把How改为What。