2020届高考英语二轮复习讲义：专题五 短文改错2（解析版）

二 1
(2019·山东济宁一模)
话题：扩大词汇量
难度：★
建议用时：7分
Dear Li Hua，
In your last email，you mentioned you felt frustrating at your small vocabulary.Now，I’d like to share you my ideas.
In fact，it’s not such hard to build a large vocabulary—you have to keep at it daily，but pretty soon you will find you have an excellent vocabulary.One of the effective ways are to read good books and you’d better to read at least one good book a week.It’s far good than any other method because you can improve your vocabulary while read an interesting piece of literature.Another nice thing is that you can learn new words and its usages unconsciously，which will help enlarge your vocabulary natural.
Yours，
Peter
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(2019·四川绵阳二诊)
话题：运动会
难度：★★
建议用时：8分
Before Christmas our school hold a winter sports meeting.As it was the last one at school，we did what we could perform well in an opening ceremony.Greatly to our happiness，our show was very much successful.My classmates took part in various events，or our head teacher even joined us in the relay race.Except Wang Lin，several other athletes also ranked Top 5.Some brought cameras to record the excited moments.It was quite a wonderful experience and that we obtained was great fun.Those out-of-class activity indeed helped us relieve the pressure from learning，and promoted us enthusiasm for future study.
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(2019·山东潍坊一模)
话题：介绍Wildlife Club
难度：★★
建议用时：8分
I’m delight to welcome you to our Wildlife Club.You’ll be surprised that a various of plants and creatures are living here.Here are the most visited tourist sites.
One of the pleasant place is Holland Common.This has been public land for two hundred of years，and that you’ll find interesting is that the River Ouse has its source in the Common.There’s information board about the plants and animals and the Common is accessibly 24 hours a day.Then there’s Holl Island which was noted for its great range of trees.It is open only from Friday to Sunday because it’s quite small，but if there were people around every day，many of the wildlife would keep away.
Have a good time here!
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(2019·湖南永州一模)
话题：爱
难度：★★
建议用时：8分
Today，when I walked to home after school，I found the sunset was very beautifully.I stopped at the park and sit on a bench to appreciate the scenery.There was so many people at the park，most of whom were old couples，but they went for a walk.There was a special couple walk hand in hand，which caught my attention.The old woman couldn’t walk well because there was something wrong with her right legs.The old man took care of them carefully.They set good example to the young couples，showing that true love is.Against the sunset，they made up a beautiful scene.
(2019·安徽六校教育研究会联考)
话题：人物介绍
难度：★
建议用时：7分
There is an old man live next to my door.He lives alone.Occasional his children will come to visit to him.When we asked him the reason for which he didn’t move to live with his children，he said he didn’t want to trouble them because their different lifestyles.The man likes to sit in front of the shop，that people chat excitedly every day.Once he helped the woman carry heavy food home.Besides，whenever someone ask for informations，he knows everything.He is surely a good person.And we were willing to look on her as our friend.
6
(2019·山东临沂一模)
话题：笑是最好的良药
难度：★★
建议用时：8分
Laughing is one of life’s most simple pleasure.It is free.You can do it anywhere.Like the flu，laughter can spread easy among people.Often when we hear someone laughing in crowded room or a packed train，we start laughing too—even if we have no idea how.
In fact，mental health can affect on physical health.Therefore，“Laughter is the best medicine” does not mean that I should not take medicine when you’re sick.It simply means that have a positive outlook might help ease your troubles but make you cheerful.Besides，making others laugh with you is also an act what is joyful and kind.
7
(2019·山西二模)
话题：赠送礼物
难度：★
建议用时：7分
On December 10，I was at a grocery store buy canning jars for a project I was working on.The assistant ask me what I was going to use the jars for，and I told her about my plan to making bath salts for friends as holiday gifts.
She was interesting and asked me to let her to know how it turned out.I decided to do better.A few day before Christmas，I brought him a gift jar full of the bath salts I had made.She was very surprised and happy that she gave me hug.The small act of kindness can real make a difference.
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(2019·湖北4月调研)
话题：露营经历
难度：★★
建议用时：8分
When I was in the 6th grade，my parents bought me a cell phone.I was really exciting to receive the phone.The next weekend，my family went on camping in the East Lake Park.We enjoy boating on the lake.I used our new phone to play some of my favorite song.I thought it would be brilliant idea to put my phone in a plastic bag to protecting it from water.After getting back，I took the phone in，only to find the bag full of water.I didn’t know what to save my phone and I tried laying it out to dry.Unfortunately，it started to rain.What an awfully experience!
答案
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答案　
Dear Li Hua，
In your last email，you mentioned you felt  at your small vocabulary.Now，I’d like to share you my ideas.
In fact，it’s not  hard to build a large vocabulary—you have to keep at it daily， pretty soon you will find you have an excellent vocabulary.One of the effective ways  to read good books and you’d better to read at least one good book a week.It’s far  than any other method because you can improve your vocabulary while  an interesting piece of literature.Another nice thing is that you can learn new words and  usages unconsciously，which will help enlarge your vocabulary .
Yours，
Peter

第一处：考查形容词。表示人的感受，故用过去分词形式，把frustrating改为frustrated。
第二处：考查介词。share sth.with sb.与某人分享某物，故在you前加with。
第三处：考查副词。修饰形容词用so，而such修饰名词，故把such改为so。
第四处：考查连词。分析句子可知，前后句为承接关系，故把but改为and。
第五处：考查主谓一致。本句主语为“One of＋n.(复数)”，其主语为单数，故谓语动词也需用单数形式，故把are改为is。
第六处：考查固定结构。had better do sth.最好做某事，为固定短语，故去掉to。
第七处：考查比较级。由本句中的far和than可知，此处应用比较级，故把good改为better。
第八处：考查非谓语动词。分析句子可知，此处为while引导的时间状语从句，省略了主语you和be动词are，故把read改为reading。
第九处：考查代词。分析句子可知，此处指代前文中的words，故用复数形式，故把its改为their。
第十处：考查副词。修饰动词用副词，把natural改为naturally。
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答案　
Before Christmas our school  a winter sports meeting.As it was the last one at school，we did what we could perform well in  opening ceremony.Greatly to our happiness，our show was very much successful.My classmates took part in various events， our head teacher even joined us in the relay race. Wang Lin，several other athletes also ranked Top 5.Some brought cameras to record the  moments.It was quite a wonderful experience and  we obtained was great fun.Those out-of-class  indeed helped us relieve the pressure from learning，and promoted  enthusiasm for future study.
语篇解读　本文是一篇记叙文。文章叙述的是圣诞节前夕学校举行了运动会，作者所在的班级积极参与及其感受。
第一处：考查时态。根据Before Christmas和全文时态可知，句子应用一般过去时态，故把hold改成held。
第二处：考查动词不定式作目的状语。此处情态动词could后面省略了动词do，表示我们尽我们所能的目的是在开幕式上表现得很好。所以后面用动词不定式作目的状语，故在could后加上to。
第三处：考查冠词。in the opening ceremony在开幕式上，此处表示特指，故把an改成the。
第四处：考查副词。very much修饰动词，very修饰形容词，故把much去掉。
第五处：考查连词。句意为：同学们参加了各种各样的活动，我们的班主任甚至和我们一起参加了接力赛。此处表示并列关系，故把or改成and。
第六处：考查介词。except除……之外(没有了)；besides除……之外(还有)。故把Except改成Besides。
第七处：考查形容词。excited感到兴奋的，修饰人；exciting令人兴奋的，修饰物。此处修饰“时刻”，故把excited改成exciting。
第八处：考查主语从句。分析句子可知此处是主语从句，引导词在从句中作obtained的宾语，故把that改成what。
第九处：考查名词的复数。根据Those“那些”可知，后面用名词的复数，故把activity改成activities。
第十处：考查形容词性物主代词。此处enthusiasm“热情”为名词，应用形容词性物主代词修饰，故把us改成our。
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答案　
I’m  to welcome you to our Wildlife Club.You’ll be surprised that a  of plants and creatures are living here.Here are the most visited tourist sites.
One of the pleasant  is Holland Common.This has been public land for two hundred of years，and  you’ll find interesting is that the River Ouse has its source in the Common.There’s  information board about the plants and animals and the Common is  24 hours a day.Then there’s Holl Island which  noted for its great range of trees.It is open only from Friday to Sunday because it’s quite small， if there were people around every day， of the wildlife would keep away.
Have a good time here!

第一处：考查形容词。本句描述作者的感受，故把delight改为delighted。
第二处：考查名词。a variety of大量的，故把various改为variety。
第三处：考查名词的复数。One of后接可数名词复数，故把place改为places。
第四处：考查固定用法。two hundred years两百年。故去掉hundred后的of。
第五处：考查主语从句。分析句子可知，此处为主语从句，从句缺宾语，故把that改为what。
第六处：考查冠词。修饰单数名词board，且其前的修饰语information的发音是以元音音素开头的，故在information board前加不定冠词an。
第七处：考查形容词。be动词之后接形容词作表语，故把accessibly改为accessible。
第八处：考查一般现在时。此处陈述客观事实，故用一般现在时，故把was改为is。
第九处：考查连词。分析前后句语义关系可知，前后句为承接关系，故把but改为and。
第十处：考查代词。由于wildlife为不可数名词，故用much指代，故把many改为much。
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答案　
Today，when I walked to home after school，I found the sunset was very .I stopped at the park and  on a bench to appreciate the scenery.There  so many people at the park，most of whom were old couples， they went for a walk.There was a special couple  hand in hand，which caught my attention.The old woman couldn’t walk well because there was something wrong with her right .The old man took care of  carefully.They set good example to the young couples，showing  true love is.Against the sunset，they made up a beautiful scene.
语篇解读　本文是一篇记叙文。短文叙述了作者放学后在公园欣赏日落时，看到一对老夫妇手挽着手走着，由于老妇人的右腿有点毛病，所以走起路来很吃力。但是老人的丈夫细心地照顾着她。他们是日落时分最美丽的风景。
第一处：考查固定用法。walk home走路回家，home为副词，修饰动词walk。故去掉home前的to。
第二处：考查形容词。分析句子可知，本句为主系表结构，应用形容词作表语。故把beautifully改为beautiful。
第三处：考查一般过去时。分析句子可知，本句为一般过去时，and连接并列的谓语动词stopped和sat。故把sit改成sat。
第四处：考查主谓一致。there be 句型为全部倒装句，主语为so many people，所以谓语为were。故把was改成were。
第五处：考查连词。根据句意可知，前后句子表示并列关系，所以连接词用and。故把but改成and。
第六处：考查现在分词。分析句子可知，couple与walk在逻辑上是主动关系，所以用现在分词。故把walk改成walking。
第七处：考查名词的数。右腿只有一条，所以应用leg。故把legs改成leg。
第八处：考查代词。老人照顾的是他的妻子，所以代词为her。故把them改成her。
第九处：考查冠词。set a good example to sb.“给某人树立良好的榜样”为固定短语。故在set后加a。
第十处：考查连接词。分析句子可知，showing 后接宾语从句，宾语从句中应用what作is的表语。故把that改成what。
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答案　
There is an old man  next to my door.He lives alone. his children will come to visit to him.When we asked him the reason for which he didn’t move to live with his children，he said he didn’t want to trouble them because  their different lifestyles.The man likes to sit in front of the shop， people chat excitedly every day.Once he helped  woman carry heavy food home.Besides，whenever someone  for ，he knows everything.He is surely a good person.And we  willing to look on  as our friend.

第一处：考查现在分词。分析句子可知，此处为非谓语动词，old man 与live在逻辑上是主动关系，所以用现在分词living作后置定语。故把live改为living。
第二处：考查副词。修饰整个句子应用副词。故把Occasional 改为Occasionally。
第三处：考查介词。visit为及物动词，后直接接宾语。故去掉visit后的to。
第四处：考查介词。because of后接名词、代词、动名词作宾语；because后接句子。 故在because后加of。
第五处：考查关系副词。分析句子可知，shop为先行词，作后面定语从句的地点状语，所以应用关系副词where。故把that改为where。
第六处：考查冠词。woman为单数可数名词，这里表示一个女人，所以用不定冠词表示泛指，且woman的首字母发音为辅音音素，所以用不定冠词a。故把the改为a。
第七处：考查一般现在时。根据主句中的knows可知，从句用一般现在时；主语为someone，所以谓语用第三人称单数。故把ask改为asks。
第八处：考查名词。information为不可数名词。故把informations改为information。
第九处：考查一般现在时。本句和前面两句都是对老人的评价，即陈述的事实，根据前两句的时态可知，此处用一般现在时。故把were改为are。
第十处：考查代词。短文说的是一位old man，所以代词为him。故把her改为him。
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答案　
Laughing is one of life’s most simple .It is free.You can do it anywhere.Like the flu，laughter can spread  among people.Often when we hear someone laughing in  crowded room or a packed train，we start laughing too—even if we have no idea .
In fact，mental health can affect on physical health.，“Laughter is the best medicine” does not mean that  should not take medicine when you’re sick.It simply means that  a positive outlook might help ease your troubles  make you cheerful.Besides，making others laugh with you is also an act  is joyful and kind.

第一处：考查名词的数。根据one of可知，后面应跟名词复数，故把pleasure改成pleasures。
第二处：考查副词。修饰动词应用副词，故把easy改成easily。
第三处：考查不定冠词。room是可数名词单数，此处表示一个拥挤的房间，故在in后加上a。
第四处：考查连接副词。由语境知，此处指即使我们不知道为什么。结合句意可知把how改成why。
第五处：考查及物动词。此处affect是及物动词，后面直接跟宾语，故把on去掉。
第六处：考查副词。句意为：然而，“笑是最好的良药”并不意味着当你生病时你不应该吃药。和上句构成一种转折关系，故把Therefore 改成However。
第七处：考查人称代词。由下文的when you’re sick可知，此处应把I 改成you。
第八处：考查动名词作主语。分析句子可知，此处是动名词作主语，故把have 改成having。
第九处：考查并列连词。句意为：它只是意味着，拥有一个积极的前景可能有助于缓解你的麻烦，让你快乐。由句意知，此处是递进关系，故把but 改成and。
第十处：考查定语从句。分析句子可知，此处为定语从句，an act是先行词，指物，在后面的定语从句中作主语，故把what 改成that/which。
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答案　
On December 10，I was at a grocery store  canning jars for a project I was working on.The assistant  me what I was going to use the jars for，and I told her about my plan 或 bath salts for friends as holiday gifts.
She was  and asked me to let her to know how it turned out.I decided to do better.A few  before Christmas，I brought  a gift jar full of the bath salts I had made.She was  surprised and happy that she gave me  hug.The small act of kindness can  make a difference.
语篇解读　本文是一篇记叙文。文章讲述作者到杂货店买罐子自己做浴盐作为节日礼物送给朋友，也给售货员送了一份，售货员很高兴，给了作者一个拥抱。
第一处：考查非谓语动词。buy与其逻辑主语I之间为主动关系，故用现在分词作状语。故把buy改为buying。
第二处：考查时态。根据全文可知，这里用一般过去时。故把ask改为asked。
第三处：考查词法。名词plan后接不定式作定语；或者名词plan后接介词for，再接v.-ing形式。故把to改为for或者把making改为make。
第四处：考查形容词。主语为She，指代人，故用形容词interested，表示“感兴趣的”。故把interesting改为interested。
第五处：考查动词用法。let sb.do sth.让某人做某事。故把to去掉。
第六处：考查名词的数。day为可数名词，由a few修饰，故可知应用复数形式。故把day改为days。
第七处：考查代词。根据上文可知，售货员为女性，故用代词her。故把him改为her。
第八处：考查固定句型。so...that...如此……以至于……。故把very改为so。
第九处：考查固定短语。give sb.a hug给某人一个拥抱。故在hug前加a。
第十处：考查副词。修饰动词需用副词。故把real改为really。
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答案　
When I was in the 6th grade，my parents bought me a cell phone.I was really  to receive the phone.The next weekend，my family went on camping in the East Lake Park.We  boating on the lake.I used  new phone to play some of my favorite .I thought it would be  brilliant idea to put my phone in a plastic bag to  it from water.After getting back，I took the phone ，only to find the bag full of water.I didn’t know  to save my phone and I tried laying it out to dry.Unfortunately，it started to rain.What an  experience!
语篇解读　本文是一篇记叙文。作者讲述了自己和家人出去露营，新手机进水后又被雨淋的悲惨经历。
第一处：考查形容词。excited兴奋的，激动的，修饰人；exciting令人兴奋的，使人激动的，修饰物，所以把exciting改成excited。
第二处：考查固定短语。go camping去野营，该短语是固定短语，所以去掉on。
第三处：考查时态。描述发生在过去的事情，用一般过去时，所以把enjoy改成enjoyed。
第四处：考查代词。文中表示“我的新手机”，所以把our改成my。
第五处：考查名词的复数。song指歌曲时，为可数名词，由于被some of修饰，故应用名词的复数，所以把song改成songs。
第六处：考查冠词。文中泛指“一个好主意”，brilliant的首字母发音是辅音音素，用不定冠词a，所以应在brilliant前加a。
第七处：考查不定式。文中表示“为了防水”，用作目的状语，用不定式，所以把protecting 改成protect。
第八处：考查介词。句意为：回来后，我把手机拿了出来，却发现包里装满了水。文中表示“把手机拿了出来”，所以把in改成out。
第九处：考查疑问词。句意为：我不知道如何拯救我的手机。文中表示“如何”，所以把what改成how。
第十处：考查形容词。修饰名词experience，应用形容词，所以把awfully改成awful。