2020届高考英语二轮复习讲义：专题五 短文改错3（解析版）

三 1
(2019·安徽合肥二模)
话题：学校运动会
难度：★
建议用时：7分
Our school sports meeting finally came to end last Friday.Tiring but cheerful，we made it a success.I can say it’s the best one I have ever been taken part in.The opening ceremony was a feast for the eyes.To begin with，the headmaster makes a speech.Then came various performance，including singing，dancing and kung fu.Besides，some students dressed up as dolls，and that they wanted to show was confident and talent.When the teachers’ shows began，the audience went crazily.As a class photographer，I took pictures of such many brilliant moments，which，with doubt，meant a lot to all of us.
2
(2019·江西新余一模)
话题：分享减轻痛苦
难度：★★★
建议用时：9分
We’re living in a world where we can never stress the important of sharing too much.By sharing，we can often great reduce our sadness and double our happiness.
When it came to this topic，memories flood into my mind.There was a time when I caught in the sadness of not passing an important exam.My world turned gray and I didn’t feel interested in something until my best friend came up to comfort me.Encouraged and moved by his kindness，I shared my trouble with him，that relieved me soon.Little by little I regained my confidence.The followed months witnessed my efforts，and I finally made a great progress in other important exams.
As you can see，which was sharing with my friend that helped me out of that dark time and bring back my confidence.Sharing is beautiful，not only physically but also mentally.
3
(2019·陕西咸阳模拟)
话题：湖边风景
难度：★
建议用时：7分
It was 9 am.The sun has shone brilliantly.I stood by the lake，waited for my turn to boat.Just then，a little dog lie at my feet quietly.“Am I supposed to touch them？” With little experience of dealing with animals，I hesitated.After while，it seemed to be disappointing and disappeared from my sight.Later I got a chance to row a boat in the lake.Seeing some pigeon flying the white wings in the sky and others feeding themselves on the bank，I merrily rowed the boat，a gentle wind passing me pleasant.
It is not until you experience in person when you can get the real meaning from nature.
4
(2019·江西八所重点中学联考)
话题：回报父母
难度：★★
建议用时：8分
It was raining hardly outside，which made it difficult for me to go home for lunch.Just as I was wondering what I should eat at noon，I saw a familiar figure passed by our classroom.I rushed out and it was my mother，already in fifties which brought me lunch in spite of the heavy rain.In China，many parents make great sacrifices for our children.But what had the children done in return? All too often，most children just take it for granted that their parent should serve for them unconditionally.My dear mum or dad，thank you very much for bringing me up.How shall I do for you?
5
(2019·河南新乡质检)
话题：为爷爷过生日
难度：★
建议用时：7分
It was my grandfather’s birthday on last Friday.Early in the morning，my parents and I set off for the department store to look at a gift.Eventually a warm sweater is bought.To give my grandpa a surprise，I decided to baking a birthday cake.With mom’s help，it still took me a long time when it was my first homemade cake.The moments the cake was out the oven，the celebration began.Watch Grandpa enjoy the cake，I got a greatly sense of achievement.We took a picture of the whole family to record the happiness moment.
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(2019·湖南岳阳二模)
话题：分享
难度：★★
建议用时：8分
One day，my little brother bought an ice cream in the street，enjoying to eating it.Unexpected，he saw his friend coming towards him，so he hurriedly hid the ice creams behind him.After he greeted his friend，they begin to talk.His friend had the dog with him.When he stopped to talk with his brother，his dog moved around.The dog was such glad to find the ice cream in my brother’s hand and it began to eat it with greater pleasure.My brother felt embarrassed that he hadn’t shared the ice cream for his friend，he gave the ice cream to the dog.Then he bought another two for his friend and himself.
7
(2019·新疆三诊)
话题：不良饮食习惯
难度：★★
建议用时：8分
Bad eating habits can destroy our health.There are a lot of bad eating habits in our life.For example，watching television while have meals is bad for our health.Doing this mean you don’t pay attention to your food，forget what full you are，and often eat too much.Another example is having drinks rather than water.Drinks are usually highly in calorie and sugar，that can cause weight problems.Water is important.It makes your brain cell and every organ in your body to work properly.And eating in front of the computer and staying there after meals may also do harm with our health.For benefit of our health，we should get rid of both of these bad eating habits.
8
话题：手机对人的影响
难度：★★
建议用时：8分
There is no denying that mobile phones are playing an importantly role in our daily life.However，the phenomenon people are too addicted in their mobile phones is becoming more and more popular.Mobile phone addicts can’t help check their mobile phones all day，even when they are walking on the road.As the result，their communication with people around them becomes less and less.Besides，their healthy is greatly affected.Many are suffered from neck pains，for example.
In my opinion，it is time we throw away our mobile phones and raised our heads up.We should spend less time communicating with our family and friends face to face.
答案
三 1
答案
Our school sports meeting finally came to  end last Friday. but cheerful，we made it a success.I can say it’s the best one I have ever been taken part in.The opening ceremony was a feast for the eyes.To begin with，the headmaster  a speech.Then came various ，including singing，dancing and kung fu.Besides，some students dressed up as dolls，and  they wanted to show was  and talent.When the teachers’ shows began，the audience went .As a class photographer，I took pictures of  many brilliant moments，which， doubt，meant a lot to all of us.

第一处：考查固定短语。come to an end结束，为固定短语。故to后面加上an。
第二处：考查形容词。修饰人用-ed形式的形容词。故把Tiring改成Tired。
第三处：考查语态。分析句子可知，本句为现在完成时，主语I与谓语take part in为主动关系。故去掉been。
第四处：考查一般过去时。整篇短文都在叙述上周的运动会，所以本句为一般过去时。故把makes改成made。
第五处：考查名词的复数。performance为可数名词，在本句中指多种表演，所以用performance的复数形式performances。故把performance改成performances。
第六处：考查名词性从句的引导词。分析句子可知，and之后的句子为主语从句，在主语从句中，show缺少宾语，根据句意，应用what作show的宾语。故把that改成what。
第七处：考查名词。分析句子可知，was后为名词作表语。故把confident改成confidence。
第八处：考查形容词。go在此意为“变得”，为系动词，后接形容词作表语。故把crazily改成crazy。
第九处：考查固定用法。so many“如此多”为固定短语，没有such many。故把such改成so。
第十处：考查介词。without doubt毫无疑问，符合句意。故把with改成without。
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答案　
We’re living in a world where we can never stress the  of sharing too much.By sharing，we can often  reduce our sadness and double our happiness.
When it  to this topic，memories flood into my mind.There was a time when I  caught in the sadness of not passing an important exam.My world turned gray and I didn’t feel interested in  until my best friend came up to comfort me.Encouraged and moved by his kindness，I shared my trouble with him， relieved me soon.Little by little I regained my confidence.The  months witnessed my efforts，and I finally made a great progress in other important exams.
As you can see， was sharing with my friend that helped me out of that dark time and  back my confidence.Sharing is beautiful，not only physically but also mentally.
语篇解读　本文是一篇记叙文。有一次作者考试失利，很难过。后来，作者将自己的苦恼和朋友进行了分享，缓解了自己的情绪。由此，作者得出结论：分享可以减轻痛苦，增加我们的快乐。
第一处：考查名词。stress是及物动词，后面接名词作宾语，再结合前后的the和of可知，把important改为importance。
第二处：考查副词。修饰动词reduce应用副词，故把great改为greatly。
第三处：考查时态和主谓一致。第一段提到我们要分享。该句句意为：当涉及这个话题时，记忆涌进我的脑海。此处描述的是一般性情况，应用一般现在时态。且主语为it，根据主谓一致原则，谓语动词应用第三人称单数形式，故将came改为comes。
第四处：考查语态和时态。I和catch之间是被动关系。be caught in意为“陷入……”。且该句叙述的是过去的情况，故该句应用一般过去时态。综上，应在I和caught之间加上was。
第五处：考查不定代词。在否定句中表示“某事物”，一般用anything。something一般用于肯定句中。故把something改为anything。
第六处：考查定语从句。逗号后面是非限制性定语从句，修饰主句，引导词在从句中作主语，应用关系代词which。故把that改为which。
第七处：考查形容词。表示“接下来的”，需用形容词following，修饰months。故把followed改为following。
第八处：考查冠词。progress是不可数名词，故a多余，应删除。
第九处：考查强调句式。去掉“which was”和“that”之后，剩余部分是一个完整句子，故该句是一个强调句。故把which改为it。
第十处：考查时态。根据该句前文可知，该句叙述的是过去的情况，故应把bring改为brought。
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答案　
It was 9 am.The sun has shone brilliantly.I stood by the lake， for my turn to boat.Just then，a little dog  at my feet quietly.“Am I supposed to touch ？” With little experience of dealing with animals，I hesitated.After  while，it seemed to be  and disappeared from my sight.Later I got a chance to row a boat  the lake.Seeing some  flying the white wings in the sky and others feeding themselves on the bank，I merrily rowed the boat，a gentle wind passing me .
It is not until you experience in person  you can get the real meaning from nature.
语篇解读　本文是一篇记叙文，记叙了上午9点时阳光灿烂，我站在湖边及在湖上划船所看到的情景。
第一处：考查时态。根据“It was 9 am.”可知，此处要用一般过去时，而不能用现在完成时。故去掉has。
第二处：考查非谓语动词作状语。分析句子可知，wait与其逻辑主语I之间为主动关系，故用现在分词作状语。故把waited改为waiting。
第三处：考查动词的时态。根据文章的时间状语可知，本文讲述的是过去的事，所以要用一般过去时，因此要把lie改为lay。
第四处：考查代词。分析上下文可知，此处指摸那只小狗，所以要用单数，故把them改为it。
第五处：考查冠词。after a while为固定搭配，意为“一会儿”，故在while前添加a。
第六处：考查形容词。disappointing“令人失望的”，一般修饰物；而disappointed“失望的”，一般修饰人或有生命的动物。分析句子可知，本句是指小狗有点失望，因此把disappointing改为disappointed。
第七处：考查介词。船是在湖面上的，要用on。因此把in改为on。
第八处：考查名词的复数。分析句子可知，本句中的pigeon在句中被some修饰，所以要用复数形式，故把pigeon改为pigeons。
第九处：考查副词。分析句子可知，本句中的pleasant用于修饰前面的pass，修饰动词要用副词，故把pleasant改为pleasantly。
第十处：考查强调句型。分析句子可知，此处为强调句型，故把when改为that。
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It was raining  outside，which made it difficult for me to go home for lunch.Just as I was wondering what I should eat at noon，I saw a familiar figure  by our classroom.I rushed out and it was my mother，already in  fifties  brought me lunch in spite of the heavy rain.In China，many parents make great sacrifices for  children.But what  the children done in return? All too often，most children just take it for granted that their  should serve for them unconditionally.My dear mum  dad，thank you very much for bringing me up. shall I do for you?
语篇解读　本文是一篇夹叙夹议文。妈妈冒雨为作者送午饭这件事情引发了作者对孩子如何回报父母的爱的思考。
第一处：考查副词。句意为：外面雨下得很大。hard表示“猛烈地”，hardly表示“几乎不”，故把hardly改为hard。
第二处：考查非谓语动词。see sb.doing sth.表示“看见某人正在做某事”，故把passed改为passing。
第三处：考查固定用法。in one’s fifties表示“某人已经50多岁了”，故在fifties前加her。
第四处：考查强调句型。分析句子可知，此处为强调句型，其基本结构为：it is＋被强调部分＋that＋其余部分，强调人(作主语)时也可以用who，故把which改为that/who。
第五处：考查代词。句意为：在中国，很多父母为他们的孩子做出巨大的牺牲。根据句意可知，此处表示“他们的”，故把our改为their。
第六处：考查时态。此处强调过去的动作对现在的影响，用现在完成时，故把had改为have。
第七处：考查名词。由前面的their可知，此处应用复数，故把parent改为parents。
第八处：考查动词的用法。serve是及物动词，直接接宾语，故去掉for。
第九处：考查连词。句意为：我亲爱的爸爸和妈妈，非常感谢你们抚养我长大。此处表示并列而非选择关系，故把or改为and。
第十处：考查疑问词。句意为：我能为你们做些什么呢？根据句意可知，此处表示“什么”，故把How改为What。
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It was my grandfather’s birthday on last Friday.Early in the morning，my parents and I set off for the department store to look  a gift.Eventually a warm sweater  bought.To give my grandpa a surprise，I decided to  a birthday cake.With mom’s help，it still took me a long time  it was my first homemade cake.The  the cake was out  the oven，the celebration began. Grandpa enjoy the cake，I got a  sense of achievement.We took a picture of the whole family to record the  moment.
语篇解读　本文是一篇记叙文。文章主要记叙作者爷爷过生日，作者为爷爷买礼物并做蛋糕的故事。
第一处：考查介词。时间名词前有last，next，this，that时，不再用介词。故把last前的on去掉。
第二处：考查固定短语。look for寻找；look at看。句意为：一大早，我和父母就出发去百货公司寻找礼物了。故把at改为for。
第三处：考查时态。根据文章时态可知，此处应用一般过去时。故把is改为was。
第四处：考查固定搭配。decide to do sth.决定做某事。故把baking改为bake。
第五处：考查连词。句意为：在妈妈的帮助下，我仍然花了很长时间，因为这是我第一个自制的蛋糕。前后句之间为因果关系。故把when改为because/as。
第六处：考查固定短语。the moment为连词短语，表示“一……就……”。故把moments改为moment。
第七处：考查固定用法。be out of从……中出来。句意为：蛋糕一出炉，庆祝活动就开始了。故在out后加of。
第八处：考查非谓语动词。watch与其逻辑主语I之间为主动关系，故用现在分词作状语。故把Watch改为Watching。
第九处：考查形容词。修饰名词应用形容词。故把greatly改为great。
第十处：考查形容词。修饰名词应用形容词。故把happiness改为happy。
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One day，my little brother bought an ice cream in the street，enjoying to eating it.，he saw his friend coming towards him，so he hurriedly hid the ice  behind him.After he greeted his friend，they  to talk.His friend had  dog with him.When he stopped to talk with  brother，his dog moved around.The dog was  glad to find the ice cream in my brother’s hand and it began to eat it with  pleasure.My brother felt embarrassed that he hadn’t shared the ice cream  his friend，he gave the ice cream to the dog.Then he bought another two for his friend and himself.
语篇解读　本文是一篇记叙文，作者的弟弟在街上吃冰激凌的时候遇到了朋友就把冰激凌藏了起来，结果被朋友的狗发现并吃了，为此弟弟感到很尴尬，重新买了两个冰激凌与朋友一起分享。
第一处：考查动词的用法。enjoy doing sth.享受做某事，故去掉to。
第二处：考查副词。分析句子可知，修饰整个句子作状语，应用副词形式，故把Unexpected改为Unexpectedly。
第三处：考查名词。此处特指上文弟弟买的那个冰激凌，故把creams改为cream。
第四处：考查一般过去时。分析句子可知，本文陈述过去的事情，故用一般过去时，故把begin改为began。
第五处：考查冠词。句意为：他的朋友带了一只狗。第一次提及，故用不定冠词，故把the改为a。
第六处：考查代词。分析句子可知，本文陈述作者弟弟的事情，故把his改为my。
第七处：考查副词。修饰形容词glad用副词so，故把such改为so。
第八处：考查形容词。分析句子可知，本句描述狗吃冰激凌吃得很开心，没有比较的含义，不用比较级，故把greater改为great。
第九处：考查介词。share sth.with sb.与某人分享某物，故把for改为with。
第十处：考查连词。分析前后句可知，前后句可为因果关系，故加so，也可以是递进关系，故加and。
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Bad eating habits can destroy our health.There are a lot of bad eating habits in our life.For example，watching television while  meals is bad for our health.Doing this  you don’t pay attention to your food，forget  full you are，and often eat too much.Another example is having drinks rather than water.Drinks are usually  in calorie and sugar， can cause weight problems.Water is important.It makes your brain  and every organ in your body to work properly.And eating in front of the computer and staying there after meals may also do harm  our health.For  benefit of our health，we should get rid of  of these bad eating habits.
语篇解读　本文是一篇说明文，介绍了生活中一些常见的不良饮食习惯，为了健康，我们应该去除所有这些不良饮食习惯。
第一处：考查状语从句的省略。句意为：吃饭时看电视对我们的健康有害。在while引导的时间状语从句中，当主从句主语一致且含有be的某种形式时，通常省略从句的主语和be，本句中相当于省略了we are，故把have改为having。
第二处：考查主谓一致。文章的基础时态是一般现在时，动名词Doing this作主语，谓语动词用第三人称单数，故把mean改为means。
第三处：考查宾语从句。分析句子结构可知，此处为宾语从句，从句中不缺主、宾、表，缺少状语，表示程度，故把what改为how。
第四处：考查形容词。be high in表示“富含”，故把highly改为high。
第五处：考查非限制性定语从句。分析句子可知，此处为非限制性定语从句，关系词指物，在从句中作主语，that不能引导非限定性定语从句，故把that改为which。
第六处：考查名词。cell表示“细胞”时是可数名词，此处用复数形式表泛指，故把cell改为cells。
第七处：考查不定式。make sb.do sth.让某人做某事，make后接不带to的不定式作宾补，故删掉to。
第八处：考查固定搭配。do harm to表示“对……有害”，故把with改为to。
第九处：考查冠词。for the benefit of表示“为了……的利益”，表特指，故在benefit前加the。
第十处：考查代词。both指“两者”，all指“三者及以上”，由上文可知作者列举了不止两种坏习惯，故把both改为all。
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There is no denying that mobile phones are playing an  role in our daily life.However，the phenomenon  people are too addicted  their mobile phones is becoming more and more popular.Mobile phone addicts can’t help  或 their mobile phones all day，even when they are walking on the road.As  result，their communication with people around them becomes less and less.Besides，their  is greatly affected.Many are  from neck pains，for example.
In my opinion，it is time we  away our mobile phones and raised our heads up.We should spend  time communicating with our family and friends face to face.
语篇解读　智能手机给人们带来方便的同时，也给人们带来了不利，到了我们放下手机并和家人、朋友面对面交流的时候了。
第一处：考查形容词。修饰名词role应用形容词，不能用副词。
第二处：考查同位语从句的引导词。分析句子结构可知，phenomenon后是同位语从句，引导同位语从句的连词that不能省略。
第三处：考查介词。be addicted to为固定搭配，表示“对……上瘾”。
第四处：考查固定搭配。can’t help doing.../can’t help but do...不得不做……；情不自禁做……。
第五处：考查冠词。as a result结果，为固定短语。
第六处：考查名词。their是形容词性物主代词，后跟名词。
第七处：考查动词的时态和语态。suffer没有被动语态，此处描述现在正在发生的状况，故用现在进行时。
第八处：考查虚拟语气。在句型It’s time that....中，从句谓语动词用一般过去时或should do，但后文并列的动词“raised”时态为一般过去时，因此只能改为threw。
第九处：考查动词。raise one’s head抬起头，raise本身就有“抬起”的意思，不需要加副词up。
第十处：考查形容词的比较等级。句意为：我们应该花更多的时间和家人、朋友进行面对面的交流。根据句意，应将less改为more。