Unit 1 Technology and the Future——Writing ：My life in 20 years 课件（59张PPT，无音频）

(共59张PPT)
My
life
in
20
years
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Writing
resolution
Future
Life
Job
I
will
be
a
…
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House
I
will
live
in/near/with..
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Family
I
will
…
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Free
time
activities
I
will…
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A:
What
do
you
want
to
be
in
twenty
years
B:
Maybe
I
‘ll
be
a
doctor.
A:
where
will
you
live
in
twenty
years
B:
I
think
I
‘ll
live
in
Beijing.
Because
I
went
to
Beijing
last
year
and
fell
in
love
with（爱上）
it.
It
is
really
a
beautiful
city.
A:
What
will
your
family
be
like
in
twenty
years
B:
I
will
be
married（结婚）
and
have
children
who
are
very
cute
and
lovely.
A:
What
will
you
do
in
your
free
time
in
twenty
years
B:
I
am
looking
forward
to（期盼）
traveling
around
the
world.
Pair
work
v.ing
话题分析：
预测未来生活是中考常考的一个话题。常见的预测未来的话题有：环境，机器人，交通工具，工作和生活等。此类文章的时态通常会用
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Predict
the
future
life
(预测未来生活）
一般将来时。
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假设你是Frank，请根据下面的表格提示，以my
life
in
twenty
years为题，写一篇80词左右的短文。可适当发挥。
Name
Frank
Job
a
scientist
How
to
realize(实现)
Get
good
grades
Study
science
hard
workplace
Shanghai
Hobbies
Travel
around
the
world
Play
the
guitar
Next
term’s
resolutions
…….
Future
life
基本框架：
开头（beginning）----
开门见山，引出话题。(talk
about
the
topic)
主体(body)----
描述自己未来生活的样子。(the
future
life)
结尾(ending)----
呼应开头，表决心并且表达期望。(
resolutions
and
expectations)
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Translation
开头（beginning）---开门见山，引出话题。(talk
about
the
topic)
when
you
start
,
your
sentence
should
be...
1.
未来我的生活将是......样子的。
2.每个人都有自己的梦想，我的梦想是......
3.
随着时间的流逝，我未来的生活将会有很大的改变。比如，我的……
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A．预测未来开头常用句式 （第一段）(照应材料,表明写作意图)
1.I
think
my
life
will
be
more
interesting
than
now.
2.My
life
in
twenty
years
will
be
fantastic
and
wonderful.
3.As
time
goes
by,
there
are
going
to
be
big
changes
in
my
life.
4.Everyone
has
the
future,
also
including
me.
I
also
have
a
dream,
I
will
have
a
lot
of
changes
in
the
future.
For
example,
my
job,
my
house,
my
family,
my
hobbies,
and
so
on.
5.I
have
a
dream
for
the
life
in
twenty
years.
I
think
I
will
live
a
good
life.
read
louder
and
louder
Translation
主体(body)----
描述自己未来生活的样子。（第二段）
(the
future
life)
　　
1.
我认为……
2.
至于我的……，我会……
3.
我的梦想工作是……
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B.描述自己未来生活的样子（body）
Ⅰ.
job
1.I
think
I
will
have
a
job
that
I
like.
I
will
be
a
reporter
2.
As
for
my
job,
I
will
be
a
doctor.
It
is
my
dream
job
that
can
save
many
people’s
lives.
3.In
my
view以我来看,
I
dream
of
being
a
singer.
4.By
getting
good
grades
and
studying
harder,
I
will
be
a
scientist.
5.Firstly,
I
hope
I
will
work
in
Beijing
as
an
actor.
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Let’s
have
a
test
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Translate
these
sentences:
1.我认为我将有一份我喜欢的工作。我将成为一名老师。
____________________________________________________
2.至于我的工作，我将成为一名医生。拯救人们的性命是我的梦想工作。
____________________________________________________
3.我希望我在上海从事科学家的工作。
_____________________________________________________
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I
think
I
will
have
a
job
that
I
like.
I
will
be
a
teacher.
As
for
my
job,
I
will
be
a
doctor.
It’s
my
dream
job
that
can
save
people’s
lives.
I
hope
I
will
work
in
Shanghai
as
a
scientist.
Ⅱ.
places
to
live
1.Secondly,
I
will
buy
a
big
house
for
my
parents
in
Shang
hai.
There
will
be
more
trees
in
the
neighborhood.
2.I
will
live
in
a
house
with
a
big
swimming
pool/
near
the
sea.
3.I
will
live
in
a/an…
with…
because
I
don’t
like
living
alone.
4.I
will
live
in…
because
in
my
view
,
…is
a
very
beautiful
city.
5.I
think
I
will
live
in
…
because
I
went
to…last
year
and
fell
in
love
with(爱上)
it.
In
my
opinion（以我来
看）,
it
is
really
a
beautiful
city.
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Fill
in
the
blanks：
1其次，我将给我的父母买一所大房子。在社区里将会有更多的树。
______,
I
will
___
a
big
house
___
my
parents.
________more
trees
in
the
neighborhood.
2我将居住在海边的一所房子里。
I
will
______
a
house
______________.
3我认为我将居住在北京。因为我去年去北京并且爱上了它。以我来看，它真的是一座漂亮的城市。
I
____
I
will
live
in
Beijing,______
I
_______Beijing
and
fell
in
love
with
it.
_____________,
it
is
____________________
Ⅲ
.family
1.My
parents
will
be
too
old
to
take
care
of
themselves
twenty
years
later,
so
taking
good
care
of
them
will
be
my
duty.
2.I
hope
a
family
is
full
of
laugh.
3.I
will
be
married（结婚）
and
have
children
who
are
very
cute
and
lovely.
4.What’s
more（而且）,
I
will
have
a
small
but
a
happy
family.
5.I
will
have
a
husband
who
loves
me
very
much.
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Ⅳ.
free
time
activities
1.As
for
my
hobbies,
I
will……
2.I
will
have
a
strong
interest
in……
3.I
am
going
to
spend
time
in
4.I
am
looking
forward
to（期盼）
5.In
the
future,
I
can
do
what
I
like
in
my
free
time.
I
will
enjoy
….
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reading
traveling
around
the
world.
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表先后次序：
First,
second,
third….Finally
to
begin
with/
to
start
with,
at
last
递进
关系：
what’s
more;
besides;
meanwhile;
at
the
same
time;
表转折：however;
but
因果关系：because;
so
其他词：
I
think；Maybe；In
my
opinion；In
fact,
If；
In
my
view;
As
for;
结束词：All
in
all;
In
a
word;
In
short
注意衔接词使用:
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Translation
　结尾(ending)----呼应开头，表决心及表达期望。(your
resolution
and
expectation.)
　　1.我相信我的梦想会实现，未来将会越来越好。
2.也许有点难实现，但是我充满希望，我将不会放弃。
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C.预测未来结尾常用句式
1.In
a
word,
I
will
always
try
my
best
to
make
it
possible
to
have
a
better
life.
2.I
am
sure
my
dream
will
come
true
because
of
my
hard
work.
The
future
will
be
better
and
better.
3.How
beautiful
it
is!
Maybe
it
is
a
little
difficult
to
achieve
,
but
I
am
full
of
hope
about
it.
I
will
never
give
up.
I
believe
that
I
can
achieve
my
dream
someday.
4.I
am
looking
forward
to
this
wonderful
life
in
the
future.
5.
All
in
all,
the
life
will
be
much
better
in
twenty
years.
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Test
1
2
3
4
5
2019
lucky
number
6
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假设你是Frank，请根据下面的表格提示，以my
life
in
twenty
years为题，写一篇80词左右的短文。可适当发挥。
Name
Frank
Job
a
scientist
How
to
realize(实现)
Get
good
grades
Study
science
hard
workplace
Shanghai
Hobbies
Travel
around
the
world
Play
the
guitar
Next
term’s
resolutions
…….
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I
have
a
dream
for
the
life
in
twenty
years.
I
think
I
will
live
a
good
life.
My
life
in
twenty
years
General
information
1
,I
hope
I
will
work
in
Shanghai
as
a
scientist
by
getting
good
grades
and
studying
harder.
I
went
to
Shanghai
last
year
and
fell
in
love
with
it
,
it
is
really
a
beautiful
city.
2
hobbies
job
workplace
,I
will
probably
travel
around
the
world
with
my
family
in
my
spare
time.
,
I
will
play
the
guitar
when
I
have
time.
Future
life
,in
order
to
live
a
better
life
in
the
future,
I
will
work
hard
from
now
on.
it
is
a
little
difficult
to
achieve
,
but
I
am
full
of
hope
about
it.
I
will
never
give
up.
I
believe
I
can
achieve
my
dream
someday.
3
Resolution
and
expectation
First
Second
Because
.
In
my
opinion
Besides
In
a
word
Maybe
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Writing
time
…
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(2017年江苏盐城中考作文)
学校将举办英语写作比赛，请根据所给提示，以“my
life
in
twenty
years”为题，写一篇短文，分享你对未来的憧憬。
My
life
in
20
years
family
job
friends
……
take
care
of
my
parents……
take
on
new
challenges……
……
talk
about
the
past
school
life……
注意事项：1词数100词左右，（文章开头已给出，不计入总数）
2文章不能出现真实姓名，学校等信息。
3文章必须包含提供的所有信息，并作适当发挥。
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第一步：审题
养成重视审题的习惯。虽然基础写作题是半封闭性的，但审题仍然十分重要。现以样题为例，谈谈如何审题：
思考的问题
样题分析
第几人称？（person）
文章的题材是什么？（style）
要写的文章主题是什么
(topic)
从几个方面展开作文
(points)
动作是什么时候发生的？(时态)(when)
第一人称及第三人称
记叙文
家庭,工作,朋友,其他方面
一般将来时
我的未来20年的生活
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第二步：搜索相关词组或句型
未来生活
内
容
1.照顾父母
2.接受新的挑战
3.谈论过去的校园生活
4……
1.家庭
2.工作
3.朋友
4.其他方面
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Useful
phrases:
take
care
of
照顾
take
on
new
challenges
接受新的挑战
talk
about
the
past
school
life
谈论过去的校园生活
too…to
太……以至于不能
play
an
important
role扮演重要的角色
beginning
body
ending
general
information
the
future
life
resolution
expectation
Ow
topic
I
think
my
life
will
be…
As
time
goes
by,
there
are
going
to
be…
I
have
a
dream
for
the
life
…
Firstly,
I
think
I
will
have
a
job
that
I
like.
I
will
be
a
..
Secondly,
I
will
buy
…for…
Thirdly,
I
will
live
with…
my
parents
are
too..to..,
so
…
What’s
more,I
will…in
my
free
time
In
a
word,I
will
always
try
my
best
to…
Maybe
it
is
a
little
…,but…
I
will
never
give
up.
I
believe…
第三步：outline
列提纲
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My
life
in
twenty
years
I’m
always
working
hard
for
a
bright
future
I
imagine.
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作文
评分标准
1、本题总分15分，按5个档次给分；
2、评分时，根据文章的内容和语言质量初步确定其档次，然后根据档
次来衡量调整，最后给分；
3、评分时应考虑：内容要点的完整性、上下文的连贯性、词汇和句式
的多样性以及语言的准确性。
4、拼写、标点符号或书写影响内容表达时，应视其影响程度予以考虑。
5、如词数少于70或多于110，从总分中减去1-2分
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第一档
完全完成了试题规定的任务。
13分—15分
1、覆盖所有内容要点2、运用了多样的句式和丰富的词汇3、语法或用词方面有个别错误，但为尽可能表达丰富的内容所致，体现了较强的语言运用能力4、有效地使用了语句间的连接成分，所写内容连贯，结构紧凑。
第二档
完成了试题规定的任务
10分—12分
1、覆盖了所有内容要点2、运用的句式和词汇能满足任务要求3、语法和用词基本准确4、使用了简单的语句间连接成分，所写内容连贯
第三档
基本完成了试题规定的任务。
7分—9分
1、覆盖了内容要点2、运用的句式和词汇基本满足任务要求3、语法和用词方面有一些错误，但不影响理解。
第四档
未恰当完成试题规定的任务。
4分—6分
1、漏掉或未描述清楚主要内容2、所用句式和词汇有限3、语法或用词方法的错误影响了对所写内容的理解，只有个别正确的句子，未能清楚地传递信息。
第五档
未完成试题规定的任务。
1分—3分
1、明显遗漏主要内容2、句式单词，词组贫乏3、语法或用词方面错误较多，没有正确的句子，严重影响了对所写内容的理解。
0分
未能传达任何有效信息，所写内容与要求无关。
A
6-star
article
Assessment:
How
many
stars
can
it
get

1.All
about
the
topic
(围绕主题)
2.
Good
structure
(结构合理)
3.
Rich
expressions
(丰富表达)
4.Conjuctions
and
linking
words
(使用连词和关联词)
5.Correct
spelling
(拼写正确)
6.
Good
handwriting
(书写优美)
Let’s
share
some
compositions
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My
life
in
20
years
I
am
always
working
hard
for
a
bright
future
I
imagine.
Life
in
20
years
will
sure
be
busy
and
wonderful.
As
for
my
job,
I
will
be
a
doctor.
It’s
my
dream
job
that
can
save
lots
of
people’s
lives.
I
will
take
on
new
challenges
because
I
love
it.
My
parents
will
be
too
old
to
take
care
of
themselves
twenty
years
later.
So
taking
good
care
of
them
will
be
my
duty.
Then
I
will
have
many
friends
who
I
can
talk
about
the
past
school
life
with.
I
think
it
will
be
funny
to
talk
with
them.
One
possible
version
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Besides,
life
in
20
years
will
sure
be
wonderful.
With
the
development
of
technology,
robots
will
play
an
important
role
in
20
years.
Every
family
will
be
one
or
more
of
them.
So
will
I.
My
children
will
learn
from
the
internet
,which
would
save
all
the
paper
needed
to
print
textbooks.
In
a
word,
I
will
try
my
best
to
make
it
possible
to
have
a
better
life.
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Love
my
life
Love
my
work
Love
my
family
Love
myself
Have
a
dream
Please
work
hard
and
try
your
best!
Never
give
up!
future
Thank
you！
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I
am
sure
my
dream
will
come
true
because
of
my
hard
work.
The
future
will
be
better
and
better.
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声音越来越大的读句子3遍
我正期待着未来的美好生活。
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to
3.多么美好呀！也许实现起来有点困难，但是我对它充满希望，我将永不放弃。我相信未来的某一天我会实现我的梦想______
____________it
is!
Maybe
it
is
_____
________
______________
to
achieve,
but
I
am
_______
______
hope
about
it.
I
will
never
_________________.
I
believe
I
can
______
_____
___________
someday.
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编对话:用新颖的表达方式
What’s
your
dream
job
Where
will
you
live
What
will
you
do
in
your
free
time
What’s
your
new
year’s
resolution
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back
In
a
word,
I
will
always
______________
(尽力)to
make
it
possible
____________
____________（过上更好的生活）.
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back
You
are
lucky!
←
back
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作文
评分标准
1、本题总分15分，按5个档次给分；
2、评分时，根据文章的内容和语言质量初步确定其档次，然后根据档
次来衡量调整，最后给分；
3、评分时应考虑：内容要点的完整性、上下文的连贯性、词汇和句式
的多样性以及语言的准确性。
4、拼写、标点符号或书写影响内容表达时，应视其影响程度予以考虑。
5、如词数少于70或多于110，从总分中减去1-2分
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第一档
完全完成了试题规定的任务。
13分—15分
1、覆盖所有内容要点2、运用了多样的句式和丰富的词汇3、语法或用词方面有个别错误，但为尽可能表达丰富的内容所致，体现了较强的语言运用能力4、有效地使用了语句间的连接成分，所写内容连贯，结构紧凑。
第二档
完成了试题规定的任务
10分—12分
1、覆盖了所有内容要点2、运用的句式和词汇能满足任务要求3、语法和用词基本准确4、使用了简单的语句间连接成分，所写内容连贯
第三档
基本完成了试题规定的任务。
7分—9分
1、覆盖了内容要点2、运用的句式和词汇基本满足任务要求3、语法和用词方面有一些错误，但不影响理解。
第四档
未恰当完成试题规定的任务。
4分—6分
1、漏掉或未描述清楚主要内容2、所用句式和词汇有限3、语法或用词方法的错误影响了对所写内容的理解，只有个别正确的句子，未能清楚地传递信息。
第五档
未完成试题规定的任务。
1分—3分
1、明显遗漏主要内容2、句式单词，词组贫乏3、语法或用词方面错误较多，没有正确的句子，严重影响了对所写内容的理解。
0分
未能传达任何有效信息，所写内容与要求无关。
1.Thirdly
,
as
for
my
job,
I
will
be
a
teacher.
It
is
my
dream
job
that
can
help
children
and
play
with
them.
I
will
be
excited
about
travelling
around
the
world.——琪琦
2.Iwill
have
many
friends
who
I
can
talk
about
the
past
school
life
with.——赵慧
3
In
a
word,
I
will
always
try
my
best
because
I
believe
my
hard
work
will
lead
to
a
better
life.——王一卓
4.I
will
look
forward
to
my
interesting
life.——杨洋
5
I
am
sure
as
long
as
I
can
study
harder
and
never
give
up,
my
dream
will
come
true.——支馨
6
Secondly,
as
for
my
family
in
the
future,
I
hope
I
can
have
a
family
which
is
small
but
happy.———
杜嘉欣
7
To
be
honest,
my
parents
will
be
older
and
older,
they
are
too
old
to
take
care
of
themselves
well.——
小曼
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My
life
in
20
years
I
am
always
working
hard
for
a
bright
future
I
imagine.
Life
in
20
years
will
sure
be
busy
and
wonderful.
As
for
my
job,
I
will
be
a
doctor.
It’s
my
dream
job
that
can
save
lots
of
people’s
lives.
I
will
take
on
new
challenges
because
I
love
it.
My
parents
will
be
too
old
to
take
care
of
themselves
twenty
years
later.
So
taking
good
care
of
them
will
be
my
duty.
Then
I
will
have
many
friends
who
I
can
talk
about
the
past
school
life
with.
I
think
it
will
be
funny
to
talk
with
them.
One
possible
version
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Besides,
life
in
20
years
will
sure
be
wonderful.
With
the
development
of
technology,
robots
will
play
an
important
role
in
20
years.
Every
family
will
be
one
or
more
of
them.
So
will
I.
My
children
will
learn
from
the
internet
,which
would
save
all
the
paper
needed
to
print
textbooks.
In
a
word,
I
will
try
my
best
to
make
it
possible
to
have
a
better
life.
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Love
my
life
Love
my
work
Love
my
family
Love
myself
Have
a
dream
Please
work
hard
and
try
your
best!
Never
give
up!
future
Thank
you！
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