Unit 2 What time do you go to school ? 话题写作课件： Friends 29张PPT

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写作话题： Friends (朋友)
Step 1（first ：words）

Step 2（second ：make up 组织sentences

Step 3（third：make up article）

Step 4（forth：practice）
the steps of writing
Step1:
words

Ready? Go
how to discribe the appearance外貌
…
height
build
Height
tall
medium height
short
heavy
thin
medium build
Build
Hair
short hair
long hair
curly hair
straight hair
Hair 头发
long straight black hair
长短+卷直+颜色
short /long 长短straight/curly 直卷 black /blonde… 颜色
hair
build
thin
heavy
medium build
height
tall medium height short
Ready to Steps 2 ?
Congratulations to pass Step1!
祝贺你通过第一关!
Step 2:
make up sentence
连词成句
Ready ? go
tall
short
of medium height
A: What does he/she look like?
B: He/She is…
Height
heavy
A: What does he/she look like?
B: He/She is...


of medium build
thin
Build
A: What does he/she look like?
B: He/She has...


Hair
short curly blonde hair
long straight black hair
has short hair
has long hair
has straight hair
has curly hair
has black hair
has blonde hair


is tall
is short
is of medium height
is thin
is heavy
is of medium build

He/She
have/has长有,留有
眼睛大/小
have big/small eyes
Congratulations to pass Step 2!
祝贺你通过第2关
Ready to Step 3?
Steps 3:

make up article
Ready? Go
He is a famous actor and host(主持人）
He is a humorous(幽默的） man
He is of medium height.
He is heavy. He has short straight
hair and a big nose.
He is good at talking about
cross talk（相声）.
He is
Some clues(线索):
Guessing Game
Congratulations to pass Step 3!
祝贺你通过第3关！
Ready to Step 4?
Step4:
Have a try by yourselves!
自己试一试！
Ready? Go
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My best friend
每个人都有自己的好朋友。你心目中最好的朋友是谁，长什么样？请你以“My best friend”为题，写一篇80词左右的短文来描述你的好朋友。
要求：
1. 80词左右；
2. 语言规范、意思连贯、表达完整。
Step1 Think and Fill（想一想，填一填）
审题
体裁：_______________________
人称：_______________________
时态：_______________________
第三人称
一般现在时态
记叙文
以“My best friend ”为题
1. 我好朋友的基本信息
2. 他/她的长相、穿着
3. 你喜欢的原因
beginning
Ending
Step2 Structurize （列一列 ）
Body
评分表
项目 标准 自我评价 同伴评价 教师评价
结构
（3分） 段落合理 （2 分）
衔接自然 (1分)
内容
（8分） 要点1:你好朋友的基本信息 （2分）
要点2:你好朋友的长相、穿着 （2分）
要点3：你喜欢他/她的原因 （2分）
拓展合理 (2分)
语言
（3分） 词汇丰富 (1分)
句法正确 ，语言优美( 2分)
卷面
（1分） 书写工整（ 1分）
优秀作文分享：
My best friend
My name is Jim, Jack is my best friend.
Let me tell you what he looks like. First of all, he is very tall and handsome. He has straight brown hair but he doesn’t wear glasses. He usually wears jeans, a T-shirt and sports shoes.
I like him because he is really cool and fun, and he is good at soccer.
开门见山，道出好朋友的名字。
直接点明喜欢自己朋友的原因，升华主题。
从他的外貌、穿着等方面描述自己的好朋友，逻辑清晰，层次感强。
My best friend
Everyone has his best friend. I also has a
best friend. Her name is Mary, a middle school
student.
Let me tell you what she looks like. She is
beautiful. She has a round face and a small
mouth. She also has a long black hair and big
eyes. She usually wears a pair of glasses. We
can usually see she wears red dress and white
shoes.
Mary is a kind and nice girl and she often
helps me study. So I like her very much.
先有总起句引出主题，再简单介绍自己朋友的基本信息。
全文采用不同句式来描述她的外貌、穿着等方面，语言丰富，有质感；。全文使用“but, and, also…”等连词使行文连贯，而且有层次感。
结尾从不同角度描述她的特点，从而为作者喜欢她提供理由。
本文思路清晰，结构完整，内容丰富
Summary
How to write an article about
friends.

2. Learn some of the writing
skills.
写
查
想
列
评