仁爱版七年级英语下 Unit 8 The seasons and the Weather Topic 1 How is the weather in winter?Section D---写作课教学指

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英语过程写作指导课
Pre-writing
spring
return in March
get warm
come back to life
a wonderful season
fly kites
...
Make a dialog to talk about the season.
Suppose you like spring best.
summer
begin in June
hot
rain heavily
go swimming
...
Make a dialog to talk about the season.

Suppose you like summer best.
fall/ autumn
come after summer
harvest season
cool
leaves fall
Make a dialog to talk about the season.

Suppose you like autumn best.
winter
last from December to February
cold
wear warm clothes
wind blows strongly
ice or snow
Make a dialog to talk about the season.

Suppose you like winter best.
While-writing
我国幅员辽阔，同一时间，不同地区，气温差异很大。你生活在什么地方？最喜欢什么季节？为什么？请根据以上提示，适当发挥，写一篇70词左右的短文。
审题：
1.审题目。
2.审时态，人称。
3.审内容（分几个层次来写）。
Write an outline
Topic: 自拟。
Beginning:
Main Part:
Ending:
我国幅员辽阔，同一时间，不同地区，气温差异很大。你生活在什么地方？最喜欢什么季节？为什么？请根据以上提示，适当发挥，写一篇70词左右的短文。

自评建议
1.题目书写是否准确规范;
2.所给信息表述是否全面;
3.时态使用是否得当;
4.人称使用是否混乱;
5.文章结构是否完整;
6.字母书写和格式是否规范.
Self-check
Sharing Time
Let’s read and check it together. (Each group one passage)
互评建议
1.题目书写是否准确规范;
2.所给信息表述是否全面;
3.时态使用是否得当;
4.人称使用是否混乱;
5.文章结构是否完整;
6.字母书写和格式是否规范;
7.书写是否美观;
8. 行文是否流畅，有无过渡（词，句）;
9.是否有固定搭配的高级词汇和高级句型存在.
Ex- check
暑假即将到来，每年的这个时候咱们的家乡根河都会以它独有的风光吸引许多游客，请你根据表格内容和合理的想象，写一篇文章来介绍家乡的四季，尤其介绍一下夏天，从而吸引更多的游客来跟和旅游，进而促进根河旅游事业的发展。

City Seasons Weather Activities
Genhe spring warm, windy fly kites …
summer hot, rainy swim, go swimming,eat ice cream …
fall warm in the day, cool at night harvest, eat fresh fruit
winter cold, snow and ice make snowmen
自评建议
1.题目书写是否准确规范;
2.所给信息表述是否全面;
3.时态使用是否得当;
4.人称使用是否混乱;
5.文章结构是否完整;
6.字母书写和格式是否规范.
Self-check
互评建议
1.题目书写是否准确规范;
2.所给信息表述是否全面;
3.时态使用是否得当;
4.人称使用是否混乱;
5.文章结构是否完整;
6.字母书写和格式是否规范;
7.书写是否美观;
8. 行文是否流畅，有无过渡（词，句）;
9.是否有固定搭配的高级词汇和高级句型存在.
Ex- check
Sharing Time
Let’s read and check it together. (Each group one passage)
Post-writing
Summary
如何写好英语作文
1.Review the words, phrases and sentences about the topic
2. Make sure everything about the wrting topic
3.Make an outline


4.Write it for the first time
5.Make a self-check
6.Rewrite it
评改建议
1.题目书写是否准确规范;
2.所给信息表述是否全面;
3.时态使用是否得当;
4.人称使用是否混乱;
5.文章结构是否完整;
6.字母书写和格式是否规范;
7.书写是否美观;
8. 行文是否流畅，有无过渡（词，句）;
9.是否有固定搭配的高级词汇和高级句型存在.