(共36张PPT)
What will my life be like
in 20 years?
版本：北师大课标版
年级：八年级下册第一单元
How time flies!
Ms. wang
Jim
Jim, please write a composition about your life in 20 years.
OK. Let me think of it.
Focus on the structure
Try to remember more information
关注结构 多记信息
Jim's life in 20 years
Para 1
Para 2
Para 3
Para 4
Jim’s life in twenty years
Talk about our/my life in twenty years
P1 introduction
How old will Jim be?
He will be_____ years old.
What kind of person will Jim be?
He will be a __________ and _______person.
In twenty years
34
successful
happy
P2 Work or job
What will Jim be? What will Jim do?
He will be a___________ .
,
In twenty years
businessman
What will he do in his job?
He will
_________his own website
________ his job very much
because he loves _________ the net.
_________to the office very often.
_____ from home according to his own timetable
not need to _________ early
____________work until late at night.
In twenty years
set up
enjoy
surfing
not go
work
wake up
be able to
P3 Family
Where will he live? What will he do with his family?
He will
leave ________.
live in his own ______.
live near his ____________.
visit his parents often.
have a ______ trip together every year.
home
flat
parents
family
In twenty years
P4 spare time
What will Jim do in his spare time?
He will
read ________.
_______ around.
play _________ with his friends
go swimming at the swimming pool _______ his home.
books
travel
football
near
In twenty years
P5 conclusion
Will Jim enjoy his life? Why or why not?
Yes. He will.
He will enjoy his life a lot
Because
he will ______ his time how he wants to
His life will be so __________ and _____________
In twenty years
spend
exciting
comfortable
Make your own mind-map
Work in groups.
Brain storm as many words as possible about work, family and hobbies.
In twenty years, I will be thirty-four years old. I think I will be a successful and happy person.
introduction
Tips:
1. Be brief in the beginning.
2. Use some adjective to make your writing lively.
conclusion
I will enjoy my life a lot because I will spend my time how I want to. Life will be so exciting and comfortable.
Tips:
1. Come back to the topic.
2. Use some clauses to make your writing better.
Use the link words and sentence phrases
I will be a businessman then and will set up my own website. I will enjoy my job very much because I love surfing the net…
I will leave home and live in my own flat. However, I will live near my parents and I will visit them often. Every year, we will have a family trip together.
ⅡMake feelings stronger
Construction
I will be a...
writer
famous
writer
who is popular
among the
readers
in 20 years
I have
confidence
that
Time to show your own composition
pay attention to the structure
use the useful phrases and sentences
write about 80 words.
· 13-15 marks
· 9-12 marks
· 4-8 marks
· 0-3 marks
assessment of composition
√
Group Work
9-12 marks
第二档：符合题目要求，整篇表达清楚，语法错误较少。9-12分。
Pay attention to the spelling, remember more basic words.
第一档：符合题目要求，内容完整，层次结构清晰，表达能用句型词组，基本无语言错误。13-15分。
13-15 marks
Group Work
0-3 marks
第四档：不符合题目要求，整篇表达不清楚，或只照抄、拼凑几个提示词语。0-3分。
Pay attention to the spelling, remember more basic words.
第三档：部分内容符合题目要求，内容不够完整，层次结构不够清晰，表达不够清楚，语言有较多错误。4-8分。
4-8 marks
Avoid Qing-English and basic grammar errors.
· 13-15 marks
· 9-12 marks
· 4-8 marks
· 0-3 marks
assessment of composition
√
singer
teacher
Fly high
with your dreams
banker
musician
painter
doctor
engineer
I BELIEVE I CAN FLY
If I can see it, then I can do it
If I can see it , then I can be it
I believe I can fly,
I believe I can touch the sky.
Anyang
Shanghai
2019
2039
Anyang
Beijing
2019
2039
