北师大版八年级英语下Unit 1 Communication workshop ---Writing my life in 20 years教学课件 (共59张PPT)
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My life in 20 years
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Writing
resolution
Future Life
Job
I will be a …
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House
I will live in/near/with..
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Family
I will …
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Free time activities
I will…
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A: What do you want to be in twenty years?
B: Maybe I ‘ll be a doctor.
A: where will you live in twenty years?
B: I think I ‘ll live in Beijing. Because I went to
Beijing last year and fell in love with（爱上） it. It is
really a beautiful city.
A: What will your family be like in twenty years?
B: I will be married（结婚） and have children who
are very cute and lovely.
A: What will you do in your free time in twenty years?
B: I am looking forward to（期盼） traveling around
the world.
Pair work
v.ing
话题分析：
预测未来生活是中考常考的一个话题。常见的预测未来的话题有：环境，机器人，交通工具，工作和生活等。此类文章的时态通常会用
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Predict the future life
(预测未来生活）
一般将来时。
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假设你是Frank，请根据下面的表格提示，以my life in twenty years为题，写一篇80词左右的短文。可适当发挥。
Name Frank
Job a scientist
How to realize(实现) Get good grades
Study science hard
workplace Shanghai
Hobbies Travel around the world
Play the guitar
Next term’s resolutions …….
Future life
基本框架：
开头（beginning）---- 开门见山，引出话题。(talk about the topic)
主体(body)---- 描述自己未来生活的样子。(the future life)
结尾(ending)---- 呼应开头，表决心并且表达期望。( resolutions and expectations)
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Translation
开头（beginning）---开门见山，引出话题。(talk about the topic)
when you start , your sentence should be...
1. 未来我的生活将是......样子的。
2.每个人都有自己的梦想，我的梦想是......
3. 随着时间的流逝，我未来的生活将会有很大的改变。比如，我的……
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A．预测未来开头常用句式?（第一段）(照应材料,表明写作意图)
1.I think my life will be more interesting than now.
2.My life in twenty years will be fantastic and wonderful.
3.As time goes by, there are going to be big changes in my life.
4.Everyone has the future, also including me. I also have a dream, I will have a lot of changes in the future. For example, my job, my house, my family, my hobbies, and so on.
5.I have a dream for the life in twenty years. I think I will live a good life.
read louder and louder
Translation
主体(body)---- 描述自己未来生活的样子。（第二段）
(the future life)
1. 我认为……
2. 至于我的……，我会……
3. 我的梦想工作是……
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B.描述自己未来生活的样子（body）
Ⅰ. job
1.I think I will have a job that I like. I will be a reporter
2. As for my job, I will be a doctor. It is my dream job that can save many people’s lives.
3.In my view以我来看, I dream of being a singer.
4.By getting good grades and studying harder, I
will be a scientist.
5.Firstly, I hope I will work in Beijing as an actor.
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Let’s have a test
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Translate these sentences:
1.我认为我将有一份我喜欢的工作。我将成为一名老师。
____________________________________________________
2.至于我的工作，我将成为一名医生。拯救人们的性命是我的梦想工作。
____________________________________________________
3.我希望我在上海从事科学家的工作。
_____________________________________________________
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I think I will have a job that I like. I will be a teacher.
As for my job, I will be a doctor. It’s my dream job that can save people’s lives.
I hope I will work in Shanghai as a scientist.
Ⅱ. places to live
1.Secondly, I will buy a big house for my parents in
Shang hai. There will be more trees in the neighborhood.
2.I will live in a house with a big swimming pool/ near
the sea.
3.I will live in a/an… with… because I don’t like
living alone.
4.I will live in… because in my view , …is a very
beautiful city.
5.I think I will live in … because I went to…last year
and fell in love with(爱上) it. In my opinion（以我来
看）, it is really a beautiful city.
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Fill in the blanks：
1其次，我将给我的父母买一所大房子。在社区里将会有更多的树。
______, I will ___ a big house ___ my parents. ________more trees in the neighborhood.
2我将居住在海边的一所房子里。
I will ______ a house ______________.
3我认为我将居住在北京。因为我去年去北京并且爱上了它。以我来看，它真的是一座漂亮的城市。
I ____ I will live in Beijing,______ I _______Beijing and fell in love with it. _____________, it is ____________________
Ⅲ .family
1.My parents will be too old to take care of themselves twenty years later, so taking good care of them will be my duty.
2.I hope a family is full of laugh.
3.I will be married（结婚） and have children who are very cute and lovely.
4.What’s more（而且）, I will have a small but a happy family.
5.I will have a husband who loves me very much.
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Ⅳ. free time activities
1.As for my hobbies, I will……
2.I will have a strong interest in……
3.I am going to spend time in
4.I am looking forward to（期盼）
5.In the future, I can do what I like in my free time. I will enjoy ….
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reading
traveling around the world.
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表先后次序：
First, second, third….Finally
to begin with/ to start with, at last
递进 关系：
what’s more; besides; meanwhile; at the same time;
表转折：however; but
因果关系：because; so
其他词：
I think；Maybe；In my opinion；In fact, If；
In my view; As for;
结束词：All in all; In a word; In short
注意衔接词使用:
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Translation
结尾(ending)----呼应开头，表决心及表达期望。(your resolution and expectation.)
1.我相信我的梦想会实现，未来将会越来越好。
2.也许有点难实现，但是我充满希望，我将不会放弃。
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C.预测未来结尾常用句式
1.In a word, I will always try my best to make it possible to have a better life.
2.I am sure my dream will come true because of my hard work. The future will be better and better.
3.How beautiful it is! Maybe it is a little difficult to achieve , but I am full of hope about it. I will never give up. I believe that I can achieve my dream someday.
4.I am looking forward to this wonderful life in the future.
5. All in all, the life will be much better in twenty years.
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Test
1
2
3
4
5
2019 lucky number
6
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假设你是Frank，请根据下面的表格提示，以my life in twenty years为题，写一篇80词左右的短文。可适当发挥。
Name Frank
Job a scientist
How to realize(实现) Get good grades
Study science hard
workplace Shanghai
Hobbies Travel around the world
Play the guitar
Next term’s resolutions …….
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I have a dream for the life in twenty years. I think I will live a good life.
My life in twenty years
General information
1
,I hope I will work in Shanghai as a scientist by getting good
grades and studying harder. I went to Shanghai last year and fell in love with it , it is really a beautiful city.
2
hobbies
job workplace
,I will probably travel around the world with my family in my spare time. , I will play the guitar when I have time.
Future life
,in order to live a better life in the future, I will work hard from now on. it is a little difficult to achieve , but I am full of hope about it. I will never give up. I believe I can achieve my dream someday.
3
Resolution and expectation
First
Second
Because
. In my opinion
Besides
In a word
Maybe
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Writing time …
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(2017年江苏盐城中考作文) 学校将举办英语写作比赛，请根据所给提示，以“my life in twenty years”为题，写一篇短文，分享你对未来的憧憬。
My life in 20 years
family
job
friends
……
take care of my parents……
take on new challenges……
……
talk about the past school life……
注意事项：1词数100词左右，（文章开头已给出，不计入总数）
2文章不能出现真实姓名，学校等信息。
3文章必须包含提供的所有信息，并作适当发挥。
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第一步：审题
养成重视审题的习惯。虽然基础写作题是半封闭性的，但审题仍然十分重要。现以样题为例，谈谈如何审题：
思考的问题 样题分析
第几人称？（person）
文章的题材是什么？（style）
要写的文章主题是什么 (topic)
从几个方面展开作文 (points)
动作是什么时候发生的？(时态)(when)
第一人称及第三人称
记叙文
家庭,工作,朋友,其他方面
一般将来时
我的未来20年的生活
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第二步：搜索相关词组或句型
未来生活
内 容
1.照顾父母
2.接受新的挑战
3.谈论过去的校园生活
4……
1.家庭
2.工作
3.朋友
4.其他方面
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Useful phrases:
take care of 照顾
take on new challenges 接受新的挑战
talk about the past school life 谈论过去的校园生活
too…to 太……以至于不能
play an important role扮演重要的角色
beginning
body
ending
general information
the future life
resolution
expectation
Ow
topic
I think my life will be…
As time goes by, there are going to be…
I have a dream for the life …
Firstly, I think I will have a job that I like. I will be a ..
Secondly, I will buy …for…
Thirdly, I will live with… my parents are too..to.., so …
What’s more,I will…in my free time
In a word,I will always try my best to…
Maybe it is a little …,but… I will never give up. I believe…
第三步：outline 列提纲
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My life in twenty years
I’m always working hard for a bright future I imagine. _______________________________________________________________________
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作文 评分标准
1、本题总分15分，按5个档次给分；
2、评分时，根据文章的内容和语言质量初步确定其档次，然后根据档
次来衡量调整，最后给分；
3、评分时应考虑：内容要点的完整性、上下文的连贯性、词汇和句式
的多样性以及语言的准确性。
4、拼写、标点符号或书写影响内容表达时，应视其影响程度予以考虑。
5、如词数少于70或多于110，从总分中减去1-2分
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第一档
完全完成了试题规定的任务。
13分—15分
1、覆盖所有内容要点2、运用了多样的句式和丰富的词汇3、语法或用词方面有个别错误，但为尽可能表达丰富的内容所致，体现了较强的语言运用能力4、有效地使用了语句间的连接成分，所写内容连贯，结构紧凑。
第二档
完成了试题规定的任务
10分—12分
1、覆盖了所有内容要点2、运用的句式和词汇能满足任务要求3、语法和用词基本准确4、使用了简单的语句间连接成分，所写内容连贯
第三档
基本完成了试题规定的任务。
7分—9分
1、覆盖了内容要点2、运用的句式和词汇基本满足任务要求3、语法和用词方面有一些错误，但不影响理解。
第四档
未恰当完成试题规定的任务。
4分—6分
1、漏掉或未描述清楚主要内容2、所用句式和词汇有限3、语法或用词方法的错误影响了对所写内容的理解，只有个别正确的句子，未能清楚地传递信息。
第五档
未完成试题规定的任务。
1分—3分
1、明显遗漏主要内容2、句式单词，词组贫乏3、语法或用词方面错误较多，没有正确的句子，严重影响了对所写内容的理解。
0分 未能传达任何有效信息，所写内容与要求无关。
A 6-star article
Assessment: How many stars can it get ?
1.All about the topic (围绕主题)
2. Good structure (结构合理)
3. Rich expressions (丰富表达)
4.Conjuctions and linking words
(使用连词和关联词)
5.Correct spelling (拼写正确)
6. Good handwriting (书写优美)
Let’s share some
compositions
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My life in 20 years
I am always working hard for a bright future I imagine. Life in 20 years will sure be busy and wonderful.
As for my job, I will be a doctor. It’s my dream job that can save lots of people’s lives. I will take on new challenges because I love it. My parents will be too old to take care of themselves twenty years later. So taking good care of them will be my duty. Then I will have many friends who I can talk about the past school life with. I think it will be funny to talk with them.
One possible version
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Besides, life in 20 years will sure be wonderful. With the development of technology, robots will play an important role in 20 years. Every family will be one or more of them. So will I. My children will learn from the internet ,which would save all the paper needed to print textbooks.
In a word, I will try my best to make it possible to have a better life.
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Love my life
Love my work
Love my family
Love myself
Have a dream
Please work hard and try your best!
Never give up!
future
Thank you！
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I am sure my dream will come true because of my hard work.
The future will be better and better.
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声音越来越大的读句子3遍
我正期待着未来的美好生活。
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翻译句子
to
3.多么美好呀！也许实现起来有点困难，但是我对它充满希望，我将永不放弃。我相信未来的某一天我会实现我的梦想______ ____________it is! Maybe it is _____ ________
______________ to achieve, but I am _______ ______
hope about it. I will never _________________. I believe I can ______ _____ ___________ someday.
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编对话:用新颖的表达方式
What’s your dream job?
Where will you live?
What will you do in your free time?
What’s your new year’s resolution?
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In a word, I will always ______________
(尽力)to make it possible ____________ ____________（过上更好的生活）.
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You are lucky!
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作文 评分标准
1、本题总分15分，按5个档次给分；
2、评分时，根据文章的内容和语言质量初步确定其档次，然后根据档
次来衡量调整，最后给分；
3、评分时应考虑：内容要点的完整性、上下文的连贯性、词汇和句式
的多样性以及语言的准确性。
4、拼写、标点符号或书写影响内容表达时，应视其影响程度予以考虑。
5、如词数少于70或多于110，从总分中减去1-2分
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第一档
完全完成了试题规定的任务。
13分—15分
1、覆盖所有内容要点2、运用了多样的句式和丰富的词汇3、语法或用词方面有个别错误，但为尽可能表达丰富的内容所致，体现了较强的语言运用能力4、有效地使用了语句间的连接成分，所写内容连贯，结构紧凑。
第二档
完成了试题规定的任务
10分—12分
1、覆盖了所有内容要点2、运用的句式和词汇能满足任务要求3、语法和用词基本准确4、使用了简单的语句间连接成分，所写内容连贯
第三档
基本完成了试题规定的任务。
7分—9分
1、覆盖了内容要点2、运用的句式和词汇基本满足任务要求3、语法和用词方面有一些错误，但不影响理解。
第四档
未恰当完成试题规定的任务。
4分—6分
1、漏掉或未描述清楚主要内容2、所用句式和词汇有限3、语法或用词方法的错误影响了对所写内容的理解，只有个别正确的句子，未能清楚地传递信息。
第五档
未完成试题规定的任务。
1分—3分
1、明显遗漏主要内容2、句式单词，词组贫乏3、语法或用词方面错误较多，没有正确的句子，严重影响了对所写内容的理解。
0分 未能传达任何有效信息，所写内容与要求无关。
1.Thirdly , as for my job, I will be a teacher. It is my dream job that can help children and play with them. I will be excited about travelling around the world.——琪琦
2.Iwill have many friends who I can talk about the past school life with.——赵慧
3 In a word, I will always try my best because I believe my hard work will lead to a better life.——王一卓
4.I will look forward to my interesting life.——杨洋
5 I am sure as long as I can study harder and never give up, my dream will come true.——支馨
6 Secondly, as for my family in the future, I hope I can have a family which is small but happy.——— 杜嘉欣
7 To be honest, my parents will be older and older, they are too old to take care of themselves well.—— 小曼
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My life in 20 years
I am always working hard for a bright future I imagine. Life in 20 years will sure be busy and wonderful.
As for my job, I will be a doctor. It’s my dream job that can save lots of people’s lives. I will take on new challenges because I love it. My parents will be too old to take care of themselves twenty years later. So taking good care of them will be my duty. Then I will have many friends who I can talk about the past school life with. I think it will be funny to talk with them.
One possible version
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Besides, life in 20 years will sure be wonderful. With the development of technology, robots will play an important role in 20 years. Every family will be one or more of them. So will I. My children will learn from the internet ,which would save all the paper needed to print textbooks.
In a word, I will try my best to make it possible to have a better life.
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Love my life
Love my work
Love my family
Love myself
Have a dream
Please work hard and try your best!
Never give up!
future
Thank you！
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My life in 20 years
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Writing
resolution
Future Life
Job
I will be a …
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House
I will live in/near/with..
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Family
I will …
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Free time activities
I will…
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A: What do you want to be in twenty years?
B: Maybe I ‘ll be a doctor.
A: where will you live in twenty years?
B: I think I ‘ll live in Beijing. Because I went to
Beijing last year and fell in love with（爱上） it. It is
really a beautiful city.
A: What will your family be like in twenty years?
B: I will be married（结婚） and have children who
are very cute and lovely.
A: What will you do in your free time in twenty years?
B: I am looking forward to（期盼） traveling around
the world.
Pair work
v.ing
话题分析：
预测未来生活是中考常考的一个话题。常见的预测未来的话题有：环境，机器人，交通工具，工作和生活等。此类文章的时态通常会用
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Predict the future life
(预测未来生活）
一般将来时。
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假设你是Frank，请根据下面的表格提示，以my life in twenty years为题，写一篇80词左右的短文。可适当发挥。
Name Frank
Job a scientist
How to realize(实现) Get good grades
Study science hard
workplace Shanghai
Hobbies Travel around the world
Play the guitar
Next term’s resolutions …….
Future life
基本框架：
开头（beginning）---- 开门见山，引出话题。(talk about the topic)
主体(body)---- 描述自己未来生活的样子。(the future life)
结尾(ending)---- 呼应开头，表决心并且表达期望。( resolutions and expectations)
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Translation
开头（beginning）---开门见山，引出话题。(talk about the topic)
when you start , your sentence should be...
1. 未来我的生活将是......样子的。
2.每个人都有自己的梦想，我的梦想是......
3. 随着时间的流逝，我未来的生活将会有很大的改变。比如，我的……
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A．预测未来开头常用句式?（第一段）(照应材料,表明写作意图)
1.I think my life will be more interesting than now.
2.My life in twenty years will be fantastic and wonderful.
3.As time goes by, there are going to be big changes in my life.
4.Everyone has the future, also including me. I also have a dream, I will have a lot of changes in the future. For example, my job, my house, my family, my hobbies, and so on.
5.I have a dream for the life in twenty years. I think I will live a good life.
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Translation
主体(body)---- 描述自己未来生活的样子。（第二段）
(the future life)
1. 我认为……
2. 至于我的……，我会……
3. 我的梦想工作是……
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B.描述自己未来生活的样子（body）
Ⅰ. job
1.I think I will have a job that I like. I will be a reporter
2. As for my job, I will be a doctor. It is my dream job that can save many people’s lives.
3.In my view以我来看, I dream of being a singer.
4.By getting good grades and studying harder, I
will be a scientist.
5.Firstly, I hope I will work in Beijing as an actor.
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Let’s have a test
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Translate these sentences:
1.我认为我将有一份我喜欢的工作。我将成为一名老师。
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2.至于我的工作，我将成为一名医生。拯救人们的性命是我的梦想工作。
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3.我希望我在上海从事科学家的工作。
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I think I will have a job that I like. I will be a teacher.
As for my job, I will be a doctor. It’s my dream job that can save people’s lives.
I hope I will work in Shanghai as a scientist.
Ⅱ. places to live
1.Secondly, I will buy a big house for my parents in
Shang hai. There will be more trees in the neighborhood.
2.I will live in a house with a big swimming pool/ near
the sea.
3.I will live in a/an… with… because I don’t like
living alone.
4.I will live in… because in my view , …is a very
beautiful city.
5.I think I will live in … because I went to…last year
and fell in love with(爱上) it. In my opinion（以我来
看）, it is really a beautiful city.
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Fill in the blanks：
1其次，我将给我的父母买一所大房子。在社区里将会有更多的树。
______, I will ___ a big house ___ my parents. ________more trees in the neighborhood.
2我将居住在海边的一所房子里。
I will ______ a house ______________.
3我认为我将居住在北京。因为我去年去北京并且爱上了它。以我来看，它真的是一座漂亮的城市。
I ____ I will live in Beijing,______ I _______Beijing and fell in love with it. _____________, it is ____________________
Ⅲ .family
1.My parents will be too old to take care of themselves twenty years later, so taking good care of them will be my duty.
2.I hope a family is full of laugh.
3.I will be married（结婚） and have children who are very cute and lovely.
4.What’s more（而且）, I will have a small but a happy family.
5.I will have a husband who loves me very much.
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Ⅳ. free time activities
1.As for my hobbies, I will……
2.I will have a strong interest in……
3.I am going to spend time in
4.I am looking forward to（期盼）
5.In the future, I can do what I like in my free time. I will enjoy ….
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reading
traveling around the world.
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表先后次序：
First, second, third….Finally
to begin with/ to start with, at last
递进 关系：
what’s more; besides; meanwhile; at the same time;
表转折：however; but
因果关系：because; so
其他词：
I think；Maybe；In my opinion；In fact, If；
In my view; As for;
结束词：All in all; In a word; In short
注意衔接词使用:
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Translation
结尾(ending)----呼应开头，表决心及表达期望。(your resolution and expectation.)
1.我相信我的梦想会实现，未来将会越来越好。
2.也许有点难实现，但是我充满希望，我将不会放弃。
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C.预测未来结尾常用句式
1.In a word, I will always try my best to make it possible to have a better life.
2.I am sure my dream will come true because of my hard work. The future will be better and better.
3.How beautiful it is! Maybe it is a little difficult to achieve , but I am full of hope about it. I will never give up. I believe that I can achieve my dream someday.
4.I am looking forward to this wonderful life in the future.
5. All in all, the life will be much better in twenty years.
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Test
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2019 lucky number
6
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假设你是Frank，请根据下面的表格提示，以my life in twenty years为题，写一篇80词左右的短文。可适当发挥。
Name Frank
Job a scientist
How to realize(实现) Get good grades
Study science hard
workplace Shanghai
Hobbies Travel around the world
Play the guitar
Next term’s resolutions …….
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I have a dream for the life in twenty years. I think I will live a good life.
My life in twenty years
General information
1
,I hope I will work in Shanghai as a scientist by getting good
grades and studying harder. I went to Shanghai last year and fell in love with it , it is really a beautiful city.
2
hobbies
job workplace
,I will probably travel around the world with my family in my spare time. , I will play the guitar when I have time.
Future life
,in order to live a better life in the future, I will work hard from now on. it is a little difficult to achieve , but I am full of hope about it. I will never give up. I believe I can achieve my dream someday.
3
Resolution and expectation
First
Second
Because
. In my opinion
Besides
In a word
Maybe
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(2017年江苏盐城中考作文) 学校将举办英语写作比赛，请根据所给提示，以“my life in twenty years”为题，写一篇短文，分享你对未来的憧憬。
My life in 20 years
family
job
friends
……
take care of my parents……
take on new challenges……
……
talk about the past school life……
注意事项：1词数100词左右，（文章开头已给出，不计入总数）
2文章不能出现真实姓名，学校等信息。
3文章必须包含提供的所有信息，并作适当发挥。
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第一步：审题
养成重视审题的习惯。虽然基础写作题是半封闭性的，但审题仍然十分重要。现以样题为例，谈谈如何审题：
思考的问题 样题分析
第几人称？（person）
文章的题材是什么？（style）
要写的文章主题是什么 (topic)
从几个方面展开作文 (points)
动作是什么时候发生的？(时态)(when)
第一人称及第三人称
记叙文
家庭,工作,朋友,其他方面
一般将来时
我的未来20年的生活
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第二步：搜索相关词组或句型
未来生活
内 容
1.照顾父母
2.接受新的挑战
3.谈论过去的校园生活
4……
1.家庭
2.工作
3.朋友
4.其他方面
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Useful phrases:
take care of 照顾
take on new challenges 接受新的挑战
talk about the past school life 谈论过去的校园生活
too…to 太……以至于不能
play an important role扮演重要的角色
beginning
body
ending
general information
the future life
resolution
expectation
Ow
topic
I think my life will be…
As time goes by, there are going to be…
I have a dream for the life …
Firstly, I think I will have a job that I like. I will be a ..
Secondly, I will buy …for…
Thirdly, I will live with… my parents are too..to.., so …
What’s more,I will…in my free time
In a word,I will always try my best to…
Maybe it is a little …,but… I will never give up. I believe…
第三步：outline 列提纲
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My life in twenty years
I’m always working hard for a bright future I imagine. _______________________________________________________________________
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作文 评分标准
1、本题总分15分，按5个档次给分；
2、评分时，根据文章的内容和语言质量初步确定其档次，然后根据档
次来衡量调整，最后给分；
3、评分时应考虑：内容要点的完整性、上下文的连贯性、词汇和句式
的多样性以及语言的准确性。
4、拼写、标点符号或书写影响内容表达时，应视其影响程度予以考虑。
5、如词数少于70或多于110，从总分中减去1-2分
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第一档
完全完成了试题规定的任务。
13分—15分
1、覆盖所有内容要点2、运用了多样的句式和丰富的词汇3、语法或用词方面有个别错误，但为尽可能表达丰富的内容所致，体现了较强的语言运用能力4、有效地使用了语句间的连接成分，所写内容连贯，结构紧凑。
第二档
完成了试题规定的任务
10分—12分
1、覆盖了所有内容要点2、运用的句式和词汇能满足任务要求3、语法和用词基本准确4、使用了简单的语句间连接成分，所写内容连贯
第三档
基本完成了试题规定的任务。
7分—9分
1、覆盖了内容要点2、运用的句式和词汇基本满足任务要求3、语法和用词方面有一些错误，但不影响理解。
第四档
未恰当完成试题规定的任务。
4分—6分
1、漏掉或未描述清楚主要内容2、所用句式和词汇有限3、语法或用词方法的错误影响了对所写内容的理解，只有个别正确的句子，未能清楚地传递信息。
第五档
未完成试题规定的任务。
1分—3分
1、明显遗漏主要内容2、句式单词，词组贫乏3、语法或用词方面错误较多，没有正确的句子，严重影响了对所写内容的理解。
0分 未能传达任何有效信息，所写内容与要求无关。
A 6-star article
Assessment: How many stars can it get ?
1.All about the topic (围绕主题)
2. Good structure (结构合理)
3. Rich expressions (丰富表达)
4.Conjuctions and linking words
(使用连词和关联词)
5.Correct spelling (拼写正确)
6. Good handwriting (书写优美)
Let’s share some
compositions
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My life in 20 years
I am always working hard for a bright future I imagine. Life in 20 years will sure be busy and wonderful.
As for my job, I will be a doctor. It’s my dream job that can save lots of people’s lives. I will take on new challenges because I love it. My parents will be too old to take care of themselves twenty years later. So taking good care of them will be my duty. Then I will have many friends who I can talk about the past school life with. I think it will be funny to talk with them.
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Besides, life in 20 years will sure be wonderful. With the development of technology, robots will play an important role in 20 years. Every family will be one or more of them. So will I. My children will learn from the internet ,which would save all the paper needed to print textbooks.
In a word, I will try my best to make it possible to have a better life.
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Love my life
Love my work
Love my family
Love myself
Have a dream
Please work hard and try your best!
Never give up!
future
Thank you！
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I am sure my dream will come true because of my hard work.
The future will be better and better.
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声音越来越大的读句子3遍
我正期待着未来的美好生活。
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3.多么美好呀！也许实现起来有点困难，但是我对它充满希望，我将永不放弃。我相信未来的某一天我会实现我的梦想______ ____________it is! Maybe it is _____ ________
______________ to achieve, but I am _______ ______
hope about it. I will never _________________. I believe I can ______ _____ ___________ someday.
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编对话:用新颖的表达方式
What’s your dream job?
Where will you live?
What will you do in your free time?
What’s your new year’s resolution?
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In a word, I will always ______________
(尽力)to make it possible ____________ ____________（过上更好的生活）.
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You are lucky!
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2、评分时，根据文章的内容和语言质量初步确定其档次，然后根据档
次来衡量调整，最后给分；
3、评分时应考虑：内容要点的完整性、上下文的连贯性、词汇和句式
的多样性以及语言的准确性。
4、拼写、标点符号或书写影响内容表达时，应视其影响程度予以考虑。
5、如词数少于70或多于110，从总分中减去1-2分
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1、覆盖所有内容要点2、运用了多样的句式和丰富的词汇3、语法或用词方面有个别错误，但为尽可能表达丰富的内容所致，体现了较强的语言运用能力4、有效地使用了语句间的连接成分，所写内容连贯，结构紧凑。
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完成了试题规定的任务
10分—12分
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基本完成了试题规定的任务。
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1、覆盖了内容要点2、运用的句式和词汇基本满足任务要求3、语法和用词方面有一些错误，但不影响理解。
第四档
未恰当完成试题规定的任务。
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1、漏掉或未描述清楚主要内容2、所用句式和词汇有限3、语法或用词方法的错误影响了对所写内容的理解，只有个别正确的句子，未能清楚地传递信息。
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未完成试题规定的任务。
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1.Thirdly , as for my job, I will be a teacher. It is my dream job that can help children and play with them. I will be excited about travelling around the world.——琪琦
2.Iwill have many friends who I can talk about the past school life with.——赵慧
3 In a word, I will always try my best because I believe my hard work will lead to a better life.——王一卓
4.I will look forward to my interesting life.——杨洋
5 I am sure as long as I can study harder and never give up, my dream will come true.——支馨
6 Secondly, as for my family in the future, I hope I can have a family which is small but happy.——— 杜嘉欣
7 To be honest, my parents will be older and older, they are too old to take care of themselves well.—— 小曼
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My life in 20 years
I am always working hard for a bright future I imagine. Life in 20 years will sure be busy and wonderful.
As for my job, I will be a doctor. It’s my dream job that can save lots of people’s lives. I will take on new challenges because I love it. My parents will be too old to take care of themselves twenty years later. So taking good care of them will be my duty. Then I will have many friends who I can talk about the past school life with. I think it will be funny to talk with them.
One possible version
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Besides, life in 20 years will sure be wonderful. With the development of technology, robots will play an important role in 20 years. Every family will be one or more of them. So will I. My children will learn from the internet ,which would save all the paper needed to print textbooks.
In a word, I will try my best to make it possible to have a better life.
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Love my life
Love my work
Love my family
Love myself
Have a dream
Please work hard and try your best!
Never give up!
future
Thank you！
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同课章节目录
- Unit 1 Technology and the Future
- Lesson 1 Schools of the Future
- Lesson 2 Online Life
- Lesson 3 Tomorrow's Jobs
- Communication Workshop
- Unit 2 Communication
- Lesson 4 Animal Talk
- Lesson 5 Meeting People
- Lesson 6 The Texting Generation
- Communication Workshop
- Unit 3 Festivals and Holidays
- Lesson 7 Chinese New Year
- Lesson 8 A Picnic
- Lesson 9 Thanksgiving
- Communication Workshop
- Unit 4 Dealing with Problems
- Lesson 10 Problem Page
- Lesson 11 Online Time
- Lesson 12 Generation Gap
- Communication Workshop
- Unit 5 Memories
- Lesson 13 A Daughter's Letter
- Lesson 14 Grandpa's Memories
- Lesson 15 Life in the 1950s
- Communication Workshop
- Unit 6 Detectives
- Lesson 16 A Detective Story (I)
- Lesson 17 A Detective Story (II)
- Lesson 18 The Mystery Writer
- Communication Workshop