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第3板块 书面表达
专题五 书面表达
层级一 审题准，表达清
层级二 低档作文如何升级为五档作文，策略告诉你
第一讲 靓化词汇——学会运用高级表达
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第三板块 书面表达
书面表达是高考浙江卷的重要试题。本板块精研真题，引领考向；高考真题感悟与模拟题演练相互加力，讲解与练习环环相扣，帮助考生高效备考，轻松增分。
年份 考查点 词数 考纲解读
2019.6 第一节 感谢信 80左右 浙江属于高考综合改革实验省份，实行一年两考。依据《普通高等学校招生全国统一考试英语科考试说明(高考综合改革试验省份试用第一版)》可知，2016年10月份开始的浙江英语新高考与自主命题的浙江卷写作部分发生了重大变化。其变化就是由原来的短文改错和书面表达变成了应用文写作和读后续写或概要写作两篇作文。 第一篇是应用文写作。此题型对于考生来说并不陌生，因为我们在平常的学习中经常接触到这方面的内容。常考的应用文有：书信、日记、海报、倡议书、电子邮件、发言稿、感谢信、建议信、求职信、推荐信、自荐信、邀请信、申请书、通知、招聘、请假条、留言条、启事、欢迎词、欢送词、告别词和广告等。纵观近几年的高考题，信件居多。 第二篇是读后续写或概要写作。《考试说明》上明确表示：“两种形式在不同考次不定期交替使用”。
第二节 概要写作 60左右
2018.11 第一节 求助信 80左右
第二节 概要写作 60左右
2018.6 第一节 申请信 80左右
第二节 读后续写 150左右
2017.11 第一节 邀请信 80左右
第二节 读后续写 150左右
2017.6 第一节 邀请信 80左右
第二节 读后续写 150左右
进入二轮复习，如果想让作文在短时期内有一个质的飞跃，编者认为，那只是一个美好的憧憬而已。写作是一个人语言基本素养的流露，是综合能力的显现，非一朝一夕之功，但这并不等于写作水平已定型，无提升空间。因为英语写作的能力要求远低于汉语写作的能力要求，如果针对自己的薄弱环节训练得当、措施得力，是完全能够在短期内提升一个档次的。
层级一 审题准，表达清
高考作文阅卷， 时间紧、任务重，一篇作文往往在一分钟内被判“生死”。要想赢得高分，首先要赢得阅卷老师的“印象分”。审题偏颇、错误百出的作文会让阅卷老师大倒胃口，阅卷老师会毫不怜悯地将其打入低分冷宫。所以，写作要想取得高分，先要把写作基础抓稳。
一、准审题——为写作定好基调
审题是写作的前提，是一篇书面表达成功的关键所在。审题正确可以保证得到基本分，所以真正开始写作前，必须花相当一部分时间做写前阅读、思考等准备工作，具体包含以下几方面：
审体裁 根据情景提示首先要弄清写何种体裁的文章
审格式 日记、便条、书信、通知等格式
审结构 明确开头、正文和结尾的主要内容，定好段落
审内容 弄清哪些是写作重点，哪些要略写，并注意内容的连贯性
审人称和时态 弄清书面表达要用何种人称并根据材料确定短文的基本时态
“提纲类作文”之审题
[典例] (2019·全国卷Ⅱ)假定你是校排球队队长李华。请写封邮件告知你的队友Chris球队近期将参加比赛，内容包括：
1．比赛信息；
2．赛前准备；
3．表达期待。
注意：1.词数100左右；
2．可以适当增加细节，以使行文连贯。
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[审题] 提纲类作文的审题要点：要注意合理组织要点，将题干中的要点和所给提纲中的要点进行有机地结合，切记不要遗漏题干中的重要信息。
[分析]
体裁 告知信 人称 第一人称为主 时态 一般现在时和一般将来时
结构与内容 第一段 告知队友比赛信息
第二段 赛前准备
第三段 表达期望
[参考范文]
Dear Chris，
Are you excited about our coming volleyball game against Yucai Middle School next Friday? Here I’d like to inform you of some detailed information so that you can make full preparations for it.
First and foremost, the competition to be held in our school stadium will begin at 2 pm and last for roughly 3 hours. So significant is the game that it is required that everyone should present themselves punctually. Further, it is necessary for you to take a good rest, which will provide enough energy for you. To sum up, I wish you could live up to the expectations of our school. And I firmly believe hard work will pay off!
Looking forward to our victory!
Yours truly，
Li Hua
二、准表达——把内容表达清楚
写作中一旦出现较多错误，会导致语意不清、表达不明，阅卷老师潜意识中会认为该考生基本功较差、能力较弱，给阅卷老师留下这样的印象，作文有可能要比想象中的低一档。写作中考生常犯两类错误：一是惯性错误，就是考生在不经意间习惯性犯的错误，这类错误不但常犯而且还是阅卷老师比较敏感的错误，一旦出现这类错误，往往会被“放大”；另一类就是由于使用高级表达而导致的错误。
(一)惯性错误要避免
1．动词类错误
动词的种类有很多，从不同角度可分为实义动词、系动词、助动词和情态动词，也可分为谓语动词和非谓语动词等。
(1)实义动词又可分为及物动词和不及物动词。写作中常出现的错误有：①及物动词后加了介词；②不及物动词后少了介词。
(2)系动词be在写作中非常活跃，但要用好be动词却不是一件容易的事。常见错误有：①不及物动词用be动词构成了被动语态；②该含有be动词的句子出现遗漏be动词的情况。
(3)助动词和情态动词不能单独作谓语，写作中常见错误主要是倒装句中少用了助动词或情态动词。
(4)谓语动词与非谓语动词的误用是考生最易出错的地方。需注意：谓语动词作谓语，包括时态、语态、主谓一致、虚拟语气；非谓语动词可作除谓语以外的其他成分。
2．并列连词与从句引导词类错误
并列连词与从句引导词是考生容易出错的地方，下面主要介绍常见的一些错误类型。
(1)考生易受汉语干扰导致状语从句中从属连词的重复使用。例如汉语中可以说“因为……所以……”和“虽然……但是……”，但在英语中用一个连词即可表示，用了though/although，就不能再用but；用了because，就不能再用so，therefore等词。
(2)写作中经常用同位语从句给文章增添色彩，但是引导词that的缺失却令这种色彩暗淡了不少。
(3)表语从句的一个易错点是高级表达The reason why...was that...中that的误用，考生容易误用because。
(4)非限制性定语从句中误用that在作文中经常会见到，用which表示人的状况也是屡见不鲜。
(二)高级表达中出现低级错误太遗憾
在阅卷中，阅卷老师常为这样一类卷摇头叹息，无论是从要点的呈现、表达的优美还是衔接的顺畅等方面来看该类卷都近乎完美，应该给高分甚至满分，但偏偏有几处瑕疵给本应完美的习作徒添了些许不和谐的音符，甚至有点刺眼，从而影响了阅卷老师的好心情。阅卷老师为了稳妥起见，在阅卷中尽量避免争议卷的出现，会“惋惜”地扣掉一些分数。因“低级错误”而影响高级得分，岂不遗憾！
层级二 低档作文如何升级为五档作文，策略告诉你
书面表达得分较低的学生的写作特点：1.只使用简单的词或短语； 2.句式单一，单句较多； 3.缺乏承上启下的词语和句子； 4.不会使用从句； 5.不会正确运用谓语动词或短语； 6.不会使用倒装和强调句型。
高考书面表达侧重考查考生的语言运用能力，这就要求考生能够正确运用高级的词汇和语法结构并能够熟练运用句与句之间的连接成分以使行文流畅。因此， 平时的写作训练中，要学会恰当地运用高级句式和过渡语，使文章“闪亮登场”。
第一讲 靓化词汇——学会运用高级表达
英语书面表达第五档作文中提到：语法结构或词汇方面有些许错误，但为尽力使用较复杂结构或较高级词汇所致。换句话说，如果考生使用高级词汇或句型，即使犯了少量或轻微的语言错误，也可不扣分，文章还是属于最高档次。因此，为了让文章档次高，首先要学会使用高级词汇。
高级词汇的使用能够给文章增添色彩和画面感。它会大大提升文章的档次，从而帮助考生获得高分。要做到准确使用高级词汇，应该注意以下几个方面：
一、使用亮点词汇的4种策略
“语”众不同，避免人云亦云
写作时恰当得体地使用别人可能想不到的词汇或表达，会给阅卷老师耳目一新的感觉。
①(2019·北京卷书面表达)I’m very glad to know that you’re coming to tour in China.
→I’m more than delighted to know that you’re coming to tour in China.
②(2019·全国卷Ⅰ书面表达)I hope you can consider my application and allow me to be a volunteer.
→I hope you can take my application into consideration and allow me to be a volunteer.
③(2019·全国卷Ⅰ书面表达)So I can serve as a volunteer to show the visitors around the gallery and I am sure that I am fit for the job.
→So I can serve as a volunteer to show the visitors around the gallery and I am convinced that I am qualified for the job.
④(2019·全国卷Ⅱ书面表达)As a result, enough preparation is urgently needed, including practice, nutrition and a perfect plan.
→As a consequence, adequate preparation is urgently needed, including practice, nutrition and a perfect plan.
⑤(2019·天津卷书面表达)I want to make my voice heard.
→I feel an urge to make my voice heard.
⑥Only when you do more reading and writing can you succeed in improving your English.
→Only when you do more reading and writing can you make it in improving your English.
⑦To our great joy, not only are our classes lively and appealing, but our school life is also rich and colorful.
→To our great joy, not only are our classes lively and attractive, but our school life is also rich and colorful.
⑧(2018·全国卷Ⅱ书面表达)Great changes have taken place in our school in the last few years. And the news came that a short film will be shown in our school.
→Our school has witnessed great changes in the last few years. And word came that a short film will be shown in our school.
更新换代，避免重复
写作时应尽量避免重复使用相同的词语，要用贴切多样的词语来展示自己的水平。用词不同、表达方式迥异，也是高级用法。
①(2018·天津卷书面表达)On hearing the news, some of my classmates and I formed a group to take part in the competition. I know you once took part in a robotics competition and won the award, so you must have accumulated much experience in it.
→On hearing the news, some of my classmates and I formed a group to take part in the competition. I know you once participated in a robotics competition and won the award, so you must have accumulated much experience in it.
②(2018·全国卷Ⅲ书面表达)Moreover，we will build a new stadium and with the stadium built，a wide range of sports events are able to be held.
→Moreover，we will build a new stadium and with the stadium set up，a wide range of sports events are able to be held.
③(2017·全国卷Ⅲ书面表达)The team will hold many activities，some of which will appeal to you，including many matches.
→The team will hold a range of activities，some of which will appeal to you，including many matches.
词汇运用，短语优先
当单词和短语表示同一个意思时，优先使用短语。恰当使用短语，一方面能使文章更加生动，另一方面也能展示出学生扎实的语言功底。
①(2019·全国卷Ⅰ书面表达)Besides, I know English and I can express myself fluently and clearly, which helps me communicate with our distinguished guests efficiently.
→Moreover, I have a good command of English and I can express myself fluently and clearly, which helps me communicate with our distinguished guests efficiently.
②(2019·全国卷Ⅰ书面表达)For one thing, I know Chinese painting well, for my father is a Chinese painter.
→For one thing, I am quite familiar with Chinese painting, for my father is a Chinese painter.
③(2018·天津卷书面表达)We desperately need your help.
→We are desperately in need of your help.
④(2018·北京卷书面表达)Last week, we took the foreign students in our school to experience the authentic tea culture, which proved to be extremely rewarding.
→Last week, we took the foreign students in our school to experience the authentic tea culture, which turned out to be extremely rewarding.
用高级词汇取代简单词汇
为了表现自己的语言功底，显示出自己的写作水平，应避免反复使用低年级学过的简单词汇，尽量使用高中阶段学到的词汇来代替。
①(2018·北京卷书面表达)If you take my advice you are sure to have the most unforgettable experience during your college in Beijing.
→So long as you take my advice you are bound to have the most unforgettable experience during your college in Beijing.
②(2017·天津卷书面表达)Second，I am trying my best to acquire the essential knowledge and skills concerning my position.
→Second，I am sparing no effort to acquire the essential knowledge and skills concerning my position.
③(全国卷Ⅲ书面表达)I should say sorry for being unable to go to the bookstore with you on Friday afternoon.
→I should make an apology for being unable to go to the bookstore with you on Friday afternoon.
二、写作的秘密武器——24个高级词汇
名词 普通词汇 高级词汇 普通词汇 高级词汇
chance opportunity choice alternative
idea opinion people individual
result consequence effect influence
动词 have possess replace substitute
bear put up with understand make sense of
develop promote consider take into account
形容词 enough adequate rich abundant
proper appropriate important vital/ significant
interesting absorbing/ appealing difficult challenging
副词 finally eventually hardly barely
immediately in a flash nowadays currently
连词 so therefore and as well as
①(2017·全国卷Ⅰ书面表达)It is of importance for you to understand the content，Tang poetry.
→It is of importance for you to make sense of the content，Tang poetry.
→It is of importance for you to be aware of the content，Tang poetry.
②(2017·北京卷书面表达)That’s why I think the trip along the Yangtze River will be a better choice.
→That’s why I think the trip along the Yangtze River will be a better alternative.
③In the coming three years，our school life will be difficult.
→In the coming three years，our school life will be challenging.
三、写作的顶级装备——27个加分词汇
表达关注的名词 attention, focus, concern
表达争论的名词 discussion, debate, argument
表达现象的名词 phenomenon
表达优缺 点的名词 advantage, disadvantage, strength, weakness
表达增长或 下降的动词 increase, accumulate, decrease, decline
表达导致后 果的动词短语 result in, lead to, bring about, contribute to, give rise to
表达支持、反对 的动词短语 approve of, be in favor of, object to
表达可能性 的形容词 likely
表达有好处 的形容词 beneficial
表达强调的副词 particularly, especially
①The picture shows a common phenomenon these days.
这幅图显示了这些日子的一个常见现象。
②The Internet has brought about many changes in the workplace.
网络给工作场所带来了很多变化。
③Our teacher is likely to get angry when she sees the dirty floor.
我们的老师看到地面这么脏时，可能会发火。
请用高级词汇替换下列句子中的加黑部分
1．(2019·全国卷Ⅱ书面表达)Now I will inform you of some detailed information to help you fully prepare for it.
答案：make__full__preparations__for
2．(2019·全国卷Ⅲ书面表达)You are welcome to give performances too.
答案：as__well
3．(2018·天津卷书面表达)We were so interested in the competition that we formed a group to take part in it.
答案：keen__on
4．(2018·全国卷Ⅰ书面表达)I’m very glad to learn that you are coming in September.
答案：more__than
5．(2017·全国卷Ⅰ书面表达)So，please spend some time taking a brief look at the history of the Tang Dynasty，which will help you prepare for your class.
答案：Therefore;__make__preparations__for
6．(2017·全国卷Ⅰ书面表达)In order to get a better understanding of Tang poetry，I advise you to learn some brief history of the Tang Dynasty in advance.
答案：acquire
7．(2017·全国卷Ⅱ书面表达)The craftsmen will show visitors how to cut paper into different shapes on the spot.
答案：various/a__range__of
8．(2017·天津卷书面表达)Firstly，the final exam of this term is coming so I am busy preparing for it.
答案：To__begin__with;__around__the__corner
9．(全国卷Ⅰ书面表达)My job application form and personal resume have been prepared and I sincerely hope you can help me correct them.
答案：polish
10．The teacher directed the gifted students towards the more difficult courses.
答案：challenging
习作升级练习
假定你是李华，你想邀请你的朋友John在周六晚上去看科幻电影The Wandering Earth，请用英语给他写一封邮件，内容包括：
1．发出邀请；
2．介绍电影(主题：保护人类共同的地球家园；观众评价等)；
3．请求回复。
注意：1.词数80左右；
2．可以适当增加细节，以使行文连贯。
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[考生作文]
Dear John，
I know that you are interested in science fiction, so I’d like to invite you to see a film this weekend.
The Wandering Earth is being shown these days. Its purpose is to save the earth and protect our common home. Viewers describe it as a breakthrough of the Chinese film industry and it has received many positive reviews so far. Shall we go to watch the film if you are free? How about this Saturday evening? Please contact me when you are free so that I can book the tickets ahead of time.
Looking forward to your reply.
Yours，
Li Hua
[我来提升]
1．将文中加黑词汇升级
(1)purpose→aim
(2)many→a__wide__range__of
(3)free→available
(4)when you are free→at__your__earliest__convenience
(5)ahead of time→in__advance
2．将文中加黑句式升级
(1)Knowing__that__you__are__interested__in__science__fiction,__I’d__like__to__invite__you__to__see__a__film__this__weekend.(分词作状语)
(2)The__Wandering__Earth__is__being__shown__these__days,__whose__aim__is__to__save__the__earth__and__protect__our__common__home.(定语从句)
[参考范文]
Dear John，
Knowing that you are interested in science fiction, I’d like to invite you to see a film this weekend.
The Wandering Earth is being shown these days, whose aim is to save the earth and protect our common home. Viewers describe it as a breakthrough of the Chinese film industry and it has received a wide range of positive reviews so far. Shall we go to watch the film if you are available? How about this Saturday evening? Please contact me at your earliest convenience so that I can book the tickets in advance.
Looking forward to your reply.
Yours，
Li Hua
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(共14张PPT)
生物
第3板块 书面表达
专题五 书面表达
层级二 低档作文如何升级为五档作文，策略告诉你
第三讲 过渡衔接，巧妙运用
such as the cultural differences between China and foreign countries
not only
but also
or talking while driving
so I propose an environmentally?friendly commute
because I’ve got flu
so he advised me not to move for at least three days
As far as I’m concerned
To begin with
Moreover
Last but not least
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训练高质考题,知能巩固提升》
第三讲 过渡衔接，巧妙运用
一篇好的文章读起来是抑扬顿挫、圆润通畅、朗朗上口的。词汇再美、句式再高级，若缺乏有效的衔接与过渡，充其量只能是一盘零乱的珍珠，虽光彩夺目却不堪受用。有效地使用过渡成分将亮点语句串“珠”成篇，是成就满分作文的最后一道“工序”。利用好“起”“承”“转”“合”四方法，会让文章读起来自然流畅，彰显考生深厚的写作功底，折服阅卷老师挑剔的目光，为之“倾倒”而给高分。
——创造良好开端
表示“起”的词汇常用在段落或文章的开头，用于开篇引出扩展句。常见的词汇有：first, firstly, first of all, at first, in the first place, above all, to begin/start with, today, now, nowadays, at present, currently, recently, generally speaking, according to等。
①(2019·全国卷Ⅰ书面表达)To begin with, because I am very good at drawing Chinese painting, I can introduce and explain a lot of Chinese painting knowledge to the visitors.
②(2018·全国卷Ⅰ书面表达)According to our tradition，you are supposed to arrive early, so that you can help the family prepare the dinner, which is not only meaningful but also interesting.
③(2017·全国卷Ⅰ书面表达)Now I’m writing to tell you the plan for the next class.
④(2017·天津卷书面表达)Firstly，I am expected to know about the polite language related to my service.
——顺势承上启下
表示“承”的词汇常用于承接主题句或第一个扩展句。常见的词汇有：second/secondly, also, besides, in addition, soon afterwards, after that, what’s more, furthermore, moreover, what’s worse, still less, to make matters worse, worse still, for example, in other words, especially, particularly, obviously, meanwhile, at the same time等。
①(2019·全国卷Ⅰ书面表达)Besides, I have a sense of responsibility and rich experience in being a volunteer.
②(2019·全国卷Ⅰ书面表达)Moreover, I learned Chinese painting for more than ten years in my childhood; therefore, I do know a lot about this great art form.
③(2017·北京卷书面表达)Several days later, when the video was played on the graduation ceremony, it was well received.
——巧妙转折过渡
表示“转”的词汇常用来表示不同或相反的意见或情况。常见的词汇有：but, yet, however, while, otherwise, or (else), on the contrary, on the other hand, contrary to, in any case, though, although, as, even if/though, despite, in spite of, regardless of等。
①(2018·北京卷书面表达)Though/Although the foreign students have studied in our school for a long time，they don’t know how to make tea.
②(2017·江苏卷书面表达)However, China saw a decline in its economic growth rate last year.
③(2017·北京卷书面表达)Some compromises were unavoidable, but the video turned out perfect.
——完美结束全文
表示“合”的词汇常用于小结段落中上文的内容，引导最后一个扩展句或引导结尾句表示段落的结束。常见的词汇有：finally, last but not least, in short, in brief, in conclusion, in a/one word, to sum up, all in all, on the whole, in general等。
①(2019·全国卷Ⅰ书面表达)Last but certainly not least, as vice monitor of our class, I am kind, patient and always ready to help others.
②(2019·全国卷Ⅱ书面表达)To sum up, I wish you could live up to the expectations of our school.
③(2018·全国卷Ⅰ书面表达)In brief, do as the Chinese do when in China.
④(2018·北京卷书面表达)In a/one word, I do hope your dream will come true and it’s my pleasure to show you around in Beijing when that day comes.
用过渡性词语完成句子
1．In addition, your teaching is beneficial for me to broaden my horizons.
The teaching about the cultural differences between China and foreign countries can broaden my horizons.
→In addition, your teaching is beneficial for me to broaden my horizons, such__as__the__cultural__differences__between__China__and__foreign__countries．
2．In this activity, the students have improved their ability of creativity.
In this activity, the students have raised their awareness of environmental protection.
→In this activity，the students not__only have improved their ability of creativity, but__also have raised their awareness of environmental protection.
3．We should avoid using phones while walking.
We should avoid talking while driving.
→We should avoid using phones while walking or__talking__while__driving．
4．The continuous increase in private cars has given rise to the traffic jam and caused serious environmental problems.
I propose an environmentally?friendly commute.
→The continuous increase in private cars has given rise to the traffic jam and caused serious environmental problems, so__I__propose__an__environmentally?friendly__commute．
5．I am sorry that I cannot attend school.
I’ve got flu.
→I am sorry that I cannot attend school because__I’ve__got__flu．
6．The doctor said my injury was a little serious according to CT scanning.
The doctor advised me not to move for at least three days.
→The doctor said my injury was a little serious according to CT scanning, so__he__advised__me__not__to__move__for__at__least__three__days．
选用适当的过渡性词语补全短文
to begin with, last but not least, moreover, as far as I’m concerned
Dear Jim，
I am glad that you are interested in Chinese culture and eager to explore more.
As__far__as__I’m__concerned,__the Ancient Poetry is your best choice. To__begin__with,__by learning Chinese ancient poems, you can have an extensive knowledge of history and culture in ancient China. Moreover,__you can feel the charm of the language by reading poems, which helps to improve your Chinese. To follow the course well, you’d better read and recite as many poems as possible. Last__but__not__least,__it is a good idea to search for related background knowledge so that you will fully understand the conception of poetry.
What do you think of the course? I am sure you will have a lot of fun from it.
Yours，
Li Hua
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生物
第3板块 书面表达
专题五 书面表达
层级二 低档作文如何升级为五档作文，策略告诉你
第二讲 句式要高级，句子要鲜活
how hard it was to work in the
fields under a hot sun
where you can stay for
a week
Whenever/No matter when I’m unhappy
When built up/set up
find it hard to live up to
it is everyone’s duty to protect the earth
It is obvious that
It’s a great pity that
Busy though/as I am with the lessons
can you experience
Chinese food culture
What I want to stress is that
The reason why I suggest you apply for Peking
University is that
It is reported that there will be a Chinese paper?cutting show
The more you know about it，the better you will like it
Not only will all kinds of
but (also)the
paper?cutting works be on display
craftsmen will show visitors how to cut paper into different shapes on the spot
本部分内容讲解结束
按ESC键退出全屏播放
第二讲 句式要高级，句子要鲜活
句式单一，缺乏生气的文章，哪怕无任何错误也不可能得高分。精彩句式的合理使用会使文章极具可读性。考生在写作时应多运用一些高级句式和复合句，并注意句式的灵活多变，让文章读起来抑扬顿挫，让考生深厚的语言功底得以体现，让作文跨上五档线！
特殊句式，风景独好
写作中，如果考生能够使用强调句、倒装句、省略句、感叹句等特殊句式，不仅能彰显考生的英语水平，还能提升写作档次。
1．运用强调句
①(2019·太原模拟书面表达)With your generous help, I firmly believe that I will adapt to the college life as soon as possible.
→It is with your generous help that I firmly believe that I will adapt to the college life as soon as possible.
②(2019·全国卷Ⅱ书面表达)I believe hard work will pay off!
→I do believe hard work will pay off!
2．运用倒装句
(2019·全国卷Ⅱ书面表达)The game is so significant that it is required that everyone should be present punctually.
→So significant is the game that it is required that everyone should be present punctually.
3．运用虚拟语气
If you should accept my application, I would spare no effort to commit myself to your satisfaction.
→Should you accept my application, I would spare no effort to commit myself to your satisfaction.
4．运用省略句
(2019·昆明高三摸底调研书面表达)While we travel along the way, we can enjoy the beautiful scenery as well as the new looks of the villages and towns.
→While travelling along the way, we can enjoy the beautiful scenery as well as the new looks of the villages and towns.
5．it 句型
①(2018·全国卷Ⅰ书面表达)First of all, bear it in mind that you had better arrive punctually or some time earlier than the appointed time, which is of great significance to show your politeness.(it作形式宾语)
②(2018·江苏卷书面表达)It is necessary to hold an objective attitude towards ratings.(it作形式主语)
三大句式，编排巧妙
1.增加亮点的定语从句
定语从句的应用可以非常有效地提升表达档次，在写作中如果我们可以把两个简单句合并为一个含有定语从句的复合句，或者把并列句改为含有定语从句的复合句，这些都能为文章增加亮点。
①(2018·全国卷Ⅱ书面表达)Everyone is welcome to watch the film. It tells about the development of our school.
→Everyone is welcome to watch the film, which tells about the development of our school.
②(2017·浙江卷6月书面表达)We will go to the Spring Mountain and there we can have a climb.
→We will go to the Spring Mountain, where we can have a climb.
③(2019·全国卷Ⅱ书面表达)Further, it is necessary for you to take a good rest. It will provide enough energy for you.
→Further, it is necessary for you to take a good rest, which will provide enough energy for you.
2．提升档次的名词性从句
名词性从句包括主语从句、宾语从句、表语从句和同位语从句，是写作中常见的高级表达句式。
①(2019·全国卷Ⅰ书面表达)I hold the firm belief that I am the very person for this job.(同位语从句)
②(2018·全国卷Ⅲ书面表达)It is worth mentioning that our volleyball team won the championship twice in national middle school volleyball matches.(主语从句)
③(2018·江苏卷书面表达)There is no doubt that it is unwise to depend completely on the ratings in consumption.(同位语从句)
④(2017·北京卷书面表达)That’s why I think the trip along the Yangtze River is a better choice(表语从句)．
3．吸引眼球的状语从句
在英语写作中，状语从句是经常用到的句型，它的灵活运用能使作文更具吸引力。
①(2018·北京卷书面表达)Since you have long been interested in Chinese culture, I think Beijing Language and Culture University is an ideal place for you.
②(2018·江苏卷书面表达)Therefore, we should give a second thought to these ratings whenever we go shopping.
③(2017·全国卷Ⅲ书面表达)If you want to apply for membership, you are required to fill in the application form and send an email to pingpong@123. com.
④(2019·全国卷Ⅰ书面表达)When it comes to what I can do to help, I believe I can be an outstanding tour guide in terms of Chinese painting explanation.
活用非谓，手法老到
1.运用非谓语动词整合简单句，提升表达档次。
写作时，考生可以利用非谓语动词对两个简单句进行整合，使其成为较高级的表达。
①On the other hand, I will help set up the English Corner. I will provide us students with a platform to practice our oral English.
→On the other hand, I will help set up the English Corner, providing us students with a platform to practice our oral English.(现在分词作状语)
②I feel quite sorry for that. I begin to think about what to do to help.
→Feeling quite sorry for that, I begin to think about what to do to help.(现在分词作状语)
2．运用非谓语动词简化复合句，使语言简练。
①When the airport is completed next year, it will help promote tourism in this area.
→The airport to be completed next year will help promote tourism in this area.(不定式作定语)
②Because I was amazed at how skillful they were, I determined to be just as good as them.
→Amazed at how skillful they were, I determined to be just as good as them.(过去分词作状语)
适时感叹，必要强调
①How happy I was to be one of the members in this warm family! This is one of the most treasured moments in my memory.
成为这个温暖大家庭的一员，我是多么高兴啊！这是我记忆中最珍贵的时刻之一。
②Not only did it get us close to nature and relieve us of the heavy schoolwork, but it also promoted the friendship among us. What a wonderful time!
这件事不仅使我们亲近自然，摆脱繁重的功课，而且增进了我们之间的友谊。多么美好的时光啊！
③How considerate of you to remember my birthday!
您真得很体贴，还记得我的生日。
高级表达，佳作之道
1．As the saying goes...常言道……
Just as the saying goes，“One tree doesn’t make a forest.”，our success is based on cooperating with others.
正如谚语所言：“独木难成林。”我们的成功是建立在与别人合作的基础上的。
2．It goes without saying that...毋庸置疑……
It goes without saying that nothing is more important than health.
毋庸置疑，没有什么比健康更重要。
3．There is no denying that...不可否认……
There is no denying that it was my teacher’s encouragement and help that resulted in my steady progress.
不可否认，是老师的鼓励和帮助让我稳步前进。
4．It is a good idea to do sth.做……是个好主意。
(2019·重庆调研书面表达)It is a good idea to travel with a good friend，which will reduce your travelling expenses.
与好朋友一起旅行是个好主意，这能减少旅行的费用。
5．It is a virtue and tradition for sb. to do sth.
做某事是某人的优良传统和美德。
(2019·河南六市联考书面表达)It is a virtue and tradition for us Chinese people to help those in need.
帮助需要帮助的人是我们中华民族的优良传统和美德。
6．It is strongly recommended that...强烈建议……
It is strongly recommended that the school should give students more free time to take part in sports activities.
强烈建议学校给学生们更多的自由时间参加体育活动。
7．If I were...，I would...如果我是……我会……
(2019·海口调研书面表达)If I were you，I would make good use of my spare time to help him get rid of this bad habit step by step.
要是我是你的话，我会充分利用业余时间帮助他渐渐地去掉这个坏习惯。
8．I sincerely hope that...我真诚地希望……
(2019·重庆第一次调研书面表达)We sincerely hope that all students will provide original artworks to celebrate the 60th anniversary of our school.
为庆祝我校60周年校庆，我们真诚地希望所有的学生提供原著艺术作品。
9．The problem with ... is that ...……的问题是……
The truth is that...事实是……
The most important factor is that...最重要的因素是……
This is because/why...这是因/这就是为什么……
(2019·陕西质量检测书面表达)But the problem is that a number of middle school students are growing increasingly addicted to phones.
但是问题是许多中学生沉溺于手机。
The truth is that everyone will have one of those periods when things seem to be going wrong, so you don’t have to worry so much.
事实上每个人都有似乎诸事不顺的一段时期，因此你没有必要太担心。
10．I hold the view/belief that...我持……观点/我认为……
We hold the firm belief that the visitors will know more about Chinese Traditional culture and at the same time enjoy the beauty of it.
我们坚信游客会了解更多的中国传统文化，与此同时享受中国传统文化的美。
佳句输出
1．(2019·北京卷书面表达)While working, I realized how__hard__it__was__to__work__in__the__fields__under__a__hot__sun．
在工作的时候，我意识到在烈日下的田野里工作是多么辛苦。
2．(2019·北京卷书面表达)After that, you can go to Shanghai, where__you__can__stay__for__a__week.
之后，你可以去上海，在那里待一个星期。
3．Whenever/No__matter__when__I’m__unhappy,__it is my friends who cheer me up.
不管什么时候我不高兴了，总是我的朋友们让我振作起来。
4．(2018·全国卷Ⅲ书面表达)When__built__up/set__up，the new stadium will become the new landmark in our school.
建成后，新体育馆将成为我们学校的新地标。
5．Parents usually have such high expectations that their children__find__it__hard__to__live__up__to__them.
父母通常有如此高的期望值，以至于孩子觉得很难不辜负父母的期望。
6．As far as I’m concerned，it__is__everyone’s__duty__to__protect__the__earth．
在我看来，保护地球是每个人的责任。
7．(2018·北京卷书面表达)It__is__obvious__that__some online courses of spoken Chinese can be helpful for you to adapt to the Chinese language environment.
显然，网上的一些汉语口语课程有助于你适应汉语环境。
8．It’s__a__great__pity__that I have to cancel the Sunday bookstore appointment with you.
非常遗憾我不得不取消我们周日一块儿逛书店的约定。
9．(2017·天津卷书面表达)Busy__though/as__I__am__with__the__lessons，I have managed to find time to hang out with my friends.
尽管忙着上课，我还是设法挤出时间和朋友们出去玩。
10．(2018·全国卷Ⅲ书面表达)Only when you come to China can__you__experience__Chinese__food__culture．
只有当你来到中国时，你才能体验中国的饮食文化。
11．(2018·全国卷Ⅰ书面表达)__What__I__want__to__stress__is__that you’d better bring some gifts，such as a book or a Chinese knot.
我想强调的是你最好带些礼物，比如一本书或一个中国结。
12．(2018·北京卷书面表达)The__reason__why__I__suggest__you__apply__for__Peking__University__is__that it is one of the best universities in China.
我建议你申请北京大学的原因是它是中国最好的大学之一。
根据汉语提示完成下面的作文
Dear Henry，
How is everything？I am writing to invite you to join a paper?cutting show to be held this Sunday.
1．It__is__reported__that__there__will__be__a__Chinese__paper?cutting__show(据报道，将有一个中国剪纸展) this Sunday in the art gallery，which is expected to last about eight hours from 8：00 am to 4：00 pm. I know you are always interested in traditional Chinese culture. 2.The__more__you__know__about__it，the__better__you__will__like__it(你越了解它，你就会越喜欢它)，so I think we can go there together. 3.Not__only__will__all__kinds__of__paper?cutting__works__be__on__display(不仅要展出各种剪纸作品)，4.but__(also)the__craftsmen__will__show__visitors__how__to__cut__paper__into__different__shapes__on__the__spot(而且工匠会当场向游客展示如何把纸剪成不同的形状). I am sure you will feel amazed at this traditional Chinese art. Would you like to attend the show with me this Sunday?
I’m looking forward to your early reply.
Yours，
Li Hua
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