Review of Units 5-6 课件20张PPT

(共20张PPT)
Writing
about
Character Introduction
(人物介绍）
Warmly Welcome
Who?is?the?hero?in?your heart? Why?
Step 2 Before-writing
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—— Jany Ran's 专访
Activity 1 Interview
Activity 2 Comment on(评论） and Help
下周三，《二十一世纪英语报》将举办“The Hero in My Heart”为主题的征文比赛活动。所以，昨天我收到了来自Tom的一篇文章，希望我们帮他改进,补充并且润色一下。
We can base on the following:
1. right tense and
personal pronoun（正确的时态和人称）
2. no spelling mistakes（无拼写错误）
3. right capital letters（正确的大写字母）
4.reasonable logical structures
(合理的逻辑结构)
5. no grammar mistakes（无语法错误）
6. good handwriting(好的书写)
Comment on(评论) a composition
Is it very excellent
The Hero in My Heart
Everyone has his hero in his heart.My hero is my father.
My father is a common math teacher. He is very kind and patient. When I was a child, I was thin and weak in sports and math.I was always very sad. But my father didn't think so. First of all,He always said to me,“Don't give up,just try again.” Also, he helped me with my math.Because of his patience and good teaching,I found math was so interesting and became good at it day by day. At last,I overcame lots of difficulties.
In a word,he is a great man in my heart! He tells me how to be a better man. I love my father very much.


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The Hero in My Heart
Everyone has his hero in his heart.My hero is my father.
My father is a common math teacher. He is very kind and patient. When I was a child, I was thin and weak in sports and math.I was always very sad. But my father didn't think so. First of all,He always said to me,“Don't give up,just try again.” Also, he helped me with my math.Because of his patience and good teaching,I found math was so interesting and became good at it day by day. At last,I overcame lots of difficulties.
In a word,he is a great man in my heart! He tells me how to be a better man. I love my father very much.

Ask and Answer

Who is the hero in Tom's heart?
When and what did he do for him?
At last, how did he feel ?
Writing
hamburger

is like
Step 3 While-writing

the beginning

the body

the ending
Secret1 Better the Word
The Hero in My Heart
Everyone has his hero in his heart.My hero is my father.
My father is a common math teacher. He is very kind and patient. When I was a child, I was thin and weak in sports and math.I was always very sad. But my father didn't think so. First of all,He always said to me,“Don't give up,just try again.” Also, he helped me with my math.Because of his patience and good teaching,I found math was so interesting and became good at it day by day. At last,I overcame lots of difficulties.
In a word,he is a great man in my heart! He tells me how to be a better man. I love my father very much.

very
Because of
Also
Practice Makes Perfect
1. He is very kind and patient.
He is kind and patient.
2. Also,he helped me with my math.

his patience and good teaching,I found math was so interesting ...


so/ really/ pretty/ quite
Besides/What's more/Even more/Moreover
Thanks to/With the help of
,he also helped me with my math.
3. Because of his patience and good teaching,I found math was so interesting...

Better words can make the writing ___________.
more vivid(生动的）
The Hero in My Heart
Everyone has his hero in his heart.My hero is my father.
My father is a common math teacher. He is very kind and patient. When I was a child, I was thin and weak in sports and math. I was always very sad. But my father didn't think so. First of all,He always said to me,“Don't give up,just try again.” Also, he helped me with my math.Because of his patience and good teaching,I found math was so interesting and became good at it day by day. At last,I overcame lots of difficulties.
In a word,he is a great man in my heart! He tells me how to be a better man. I love my father very much.

Secret2 Better the Sentence
When I was a child,
I was thin and weak in sports and math

When I was a child,I was thin and weak in sports and math.

1. When I was a child,I was _____ thin ____ weak in sports and math.
both
and
2.When I was a child,I was _________ thin ________ weak in sports and math.
but also
not only
Secret2 Better the Sentence
Practice Makes Perfect

...he is a great man in my heart !
2. ...how great he is in my heart !
3. ...he is the man who is the greatest in my heart .
1. ...what a great man he is in my heart !
The Hero in My Heart
Everyone has his hero in his heart.My hero is my father.
My father is acommon math teacher. He is very kind and patient. When I was a child, I was thin and weak in sports and math.I was always very sad. But my father didn't think so. First of all,He always said to me,“Don't give up,just try again.” Also,he helped me with my math.Because of his patience and good teaching,I found math was so interesting and became good at it day by day. At last,I overcame lots of difficulties.
In a word,he is a great man in my heart. He tells me how to be a better man. I love my father very much.

he is a great man in

Better sentences can make the writing ___________.
more interesting
my heart !

Attributive Clause(定语从句）
Secret3 Better the Content
The Hero in My Heart
Everyone has his hero in his heart.
My hero is my father.
My father is a common math teacher. He is very kind and patient. When I was a child, I was thin and weak in sports and math. I was always very sad. But my father didn't think so. First of all,He always said to me,“Don't give up,just try again.” Also,he helped me with my math.Because of his patience and good teaching,I found math was so interesting and became good at it day by day. At last,I overcame lots of difficulties.
In a word,he is a great man in my heart. He tells me how to be a better man. I love my father very much.

always very sad.
I was
I was always very sad.

Add
feelings
reasons
transitional expressions
(过度用语）
Examples
I was always very sad.
1. I was always very sad because___ ________________________________.
2. __________,I was always very sad.
I got poor grades in math and P.E. all the time
At that time
3. I was always very sad for___ ____________________________________________________________.
my teachers and classmates even my mother said that how stupid I was.
Secret3 Better the Content
Practice Makes Perfect
The Hero in My Heart
Everyone has his hero in his heart. My hero is my father.
My father is a common math teacher. He is very kind and patient. When I was a child, I was thin and weak in sports and math. I was always very sad. But my father didn't think so. First of all,He always said to me,“Don't give up,just try again.” Also,he helped me with my math.Because of his patience and good teaching,I found math was so interesting and became good at it day by day. At last,I overcame lots of difficulties.
In a word,he is a great man in my heart. He tells me how to be a better man. I love my father very much.

At last,I overcame lots of difficulties.
At last,I overcame lots
of difficulties.
1.I overcame lots of difficulties
because of _________________.
2.I overcame lots of difficulties, for_______________________.
his encouragement
I found back my confidence


Better content can make the writing ___________.
fuller and richer
Compare A With B
A
B
The Hero in My Heart
Everyone has his hero in his heart.My hero is my father.
My father is a common math teacher. He is very kind and patient. When I was a child, I was thin and weak in sports and math.I was always very sad. But my father didn't think so. First of all,He always said to me,“Don't give up,just try again.” Also, he helped me with my math.Because of his patience and good teaching,I found math was so interesting and became good at it day by day. At last,I overcame lots of difficulties.
In a word,he is a great man in my heart. He tells me how to be better man. I love my father very much.


The Hero in My Heart
Everyone has his hero in his heart.My hero is my father.
My father is a simple and common math teacher. He is quite kind and patient. When I was a child, I was not only thin but aslo weak in sports and math. At that time,my teachers and classmates even my mother always said that I was so stupid. But my father didn't think so. First of all,He always said to me,“Don't give up,just try again.” Besides,he also helped me with my math.With the help of his patience and good teaching,I found math was so interesting and became good at it day by day. In the end,I overcame lots of difficulties and found back my confidence because of his encouragement.
In a word,he is a man who is the greatest in my heart. He tells me how to be a better man. I love my father very much.


Part1 To introduce the basic information.(介绍基本情况）

Part2 To describe what did he/she do for you or for others even for the world.(具体对“我”的影响）

Part3 To express how I feel.(“我”的感受)

Summarize and Follow
Write your own composition
The Hero in My Heart
Part1 To introduce the basic information.(介绍基本情况）

Part2 To describe what did he/she do for you or for others even for the world.(具体对“我”的影响）

Part3 To express how I feel.(“我”的感受)
Our Share time
Step4 Post-writing
Review what we have learned .
Continue to improve your composition.
That's all today!
Thank you
Homework
Hope you can succeed !