Unit 13 We’re trying to save the earth! Section B Writing:Save Our Environment课件（共25张PPT）

(共25张PPT)


Writing Practice

How do you feel?
Enjoyable or
terrible?
lots of black smoke
The weather is always foggy.
We can’t see the blue sky.
We can’t breathe the fresh air.
Do you know why?
Because of pollution, our sky isn’t blue any more.
The earth is badly polluted.
Because of pollution, the water isn’t clean any more.
Because of pollution, more and more people suffer from cancer.
患（某种病）
Because of pollution, many animals were killed.
Because of pollution, more and more animals don’t have places to live.
Because of pollution, there are more and more disasters（灾难） on the earth .
Help save the earth
Let’s take action!
What should we do to save the earth?
We should use our own bags rather than plastic bags when we go shopping.
Let’s take action!
What should we do to save the earth?
We should take the bus or ride a bike instead of driving.
Let’s take action!
What should we do to save the earth?
We should stop using paper napkins.
Let’s take action!
What should we do to save the earth?
Remember to turn off the lights when you leave the room.
Let’s take action!
Let’s take action (采取行动)
Bring bags to
go shopping.
Throw rubbish into the bins.
Don’t use wooden chopsticks
stop using paper napkins
（餐巾，餐巾纸）
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There are some easy things you can do to protect the environment and the earth.
1. Use a glass cup instead of a paper cup because this saves paper.
2. Give your old books and magazines to a library instead of throwing them away.
3. Use both sides of paper.
4.Turn off the lights and TV sets when you leave the room. This can save a lot of electricity.
Things which can be done by people every day:

take your own bags when you go shopping.
spend less time in the shower
turn off the lights when you leave a room
take public transport rather than drive
stop riding in cars
avoid using air conditioners
stop using paper napkins
recycle books and paper
Things which have to be done by governments and organizations:
educate the public
ensure that factories get rid of waste in a responsible way
preserve the forests
preserve endangered species
not allow activities that seriously endanger the environment
全球环境恶化想象严重，环境污染已经严重影响到了老百姓的生活和健康! 保护人类共同的家园—地球，是每个人的责任和义务。我们在生活点滴小事上也能做出自己的贡献。请以Save Our Environment为题，谈谈作为学生的我们应该怎样保护环境。80词左右。要点如下：
1. 环境污染对人的影响和危害;
2. 解决方法和应对措施（至少写3个措施以上）
3. 提出号召：我们行动起来，共同创造更美好的明天。
　　
Writing
Save Our Environment









First of all,
Besides,
What’s more,
提出措施
发出号召
1.Why：引出话题（如交代环境的现状）
2.Take action
3.Feelings:
I believe…if…
To protect the environment is to protect ourselves. Let’s take action.
It’s our duty to…，
the environment（worse),
air(polluted), suffer…from(cancer）
a lot prevent…from…
At last,
It’s our duty to protect the environment. The environment is becoming worse and worse, so we must do something to prevent people from polluting the environment. First, we should go to school on foot and tell our parents to walk to work or take buses instead of driving cars. Throw rubbish into the bins. Second, we should save water and electricity by turning off the taps, fans, TV sets and lights in time when we don’t need them. What’s more, water should be reused by us. Third, it is good to make full use of paper. We should use both sides of the paper. Don’t use wooden chopsticks or paper napkins .By doing this, we can save many trees. At last, remember to go shopping with baskets rather than plastic bags. I believe our life will become better and better if we can do these things. To protect the environment is to protect ourselves. Let’s take action.
写作范文
写作要求和建议
1.书写工整
字迹清楚，卷面整洁能使阅卷老师一见倾心；保证不失印象分，力争获取高分。
2.准确审题
准确审题是写好作文的关键，只有明确了作文的题材，人称，时态，要点，结构等，才能从容下笔。
3.迂回而行
当某种汉语词义不会用英语表达时，可以想一个与这个汉语词义相似的几种词义，扩展思路，然后从英语中找出一个与其对应的词来代替。这样可以有异曲同工之妙,而且避免使用中式英语。
4.借花献佛
有时书面表达中需要的单词或词组或许在试卷中的其他地方出现，因为你刚做过题，记忆犹新，那么就可以信手拈来，为己所用。
Exchange and check your partner’s writing according to these rules.
短文通顺完整，能包含所有要点，表达清楚流畅，语言基本无误。 13-15分
短文较通顺完整，表达基本清楚，
语言有少量错误。 10-12分
能写明基本要点，短文不够通顺完整，语言有较多错误，但表达尚能达意。 7-9分
仅能写明部分要点，短文不完整，语言有较多错误，影响意思表达。 4-6分
仅能写出与文章有关的单词或短语。 0-3分
大展身手
It’s our duty to protect the environment.
AS middle school students,what should we do to protect the environment？
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In a word, we should try our best to protect the environment.
写作要求和建议
1.书写工整
字迹清楚，卷面整洁能使阅卷老师一见倾心；保证不失印象分，力争获取高分。
2.准确审题
准确审题是写好作文的关键，只有明确了作文的题材，人称，时态，要点，结构等，才能从容下笔。
3.迂回而行
当某种汉语词义不会用英语表达时，可以想一个与这个汉语词义相似的几种词义，扩展思路，然后从英语中找出一个与其对应的词来代替。这样可以有异曲同工之妙,而且避免使用中式英语。
4.借花献佛
有时书面表达中需要的单词或词组或许在试卷中的其他地方出现，因为你刚做过题，记忆犹新，那么就可以信手拈来，为己所用。
Exchange and check your partner’s writing according to these rules.
短文通顺完整，能包含所有要点，表达清楚流畅，语言基本无误。 9-10分
短文较通顺完整，表达基本清楚，
语言有少量错误。 7-8分
能写明基本要点，短文不够通顺完整，语言有较多错误，但表达尚能达意。 5-6分
仅能写明部分要点，短文不完整，语言有较多错误，影响意思表达。 3-4分
仅能写出与文章有关的单词或短语。 0-2分