(共25张PPT)
Proof Reading
短文改错
生活中,人人都会犯错,有错就知改。
写作中,人人也会犯错,有错也要改。
Learning objectives:
After the class,we are able to
1. know about proof reading, especially its types of mistaking.
2. know the way to work out proof reading.
3.design similar exercises of proof reading.
When I was young, I'd listen to the radio wait for my favorite songs.
If they played I'd sing along,It made us smile.
Those are such happy times and not so long ago.
How I wondered where they'd gone.
and they're back again just like a long lost friend.
All the songs I love so good.
Every shalala every wo'wo still in shines.
Every shing-a-ling-a-ling that they're starting sing
so fine
When they get to a part,
where he's breaking her heart
It can real make me cry just like before.
It's yesterday once more.
....................
Yesterday once more(片断)
waiting
If
me
were
But
the
well
really
to
1. I can go to home now.
2. I like playing piano.
3. I am fond at English.
the
Wrong word
∧
Missing word
of
Unnecessary
word
高考短文改错的考察方式
Any skills? ?
How to correct? ?
Any rules? ?
改错步骤
1. Go through the whole passage to get a general idea .(浏览全文,掌握大意)
2. Read the passage sentence by sentence and find the grammar mistakes.(分句阅读,逐行找错)
3. Read the passage again, check your answers.(检查核对,敲定终稿)
How many kinds of mistakes in this Proof Reading?
小组合作,讨论并归纳考点内容
Discuss in groups
1.(2018年全国卷)Besides,they often get some useful informations from the internet.
2.(2016年全国卷)The teenage year from 13 to 19 were the most difficult time for me.
3.(2017年全国卷)The instructor kept repeating the word, “Speed up!” “Slow down!” “Turn left!”
归纳总结
名词错误主要错在
information
years
words
单复数;可数与不可数;
名词
1.(2017全国卷)They live far from the school,and it takes them about a hour and a half to go to work every day.
2.(2016年全国卷)In the evening,we are going to have
party in Room 402.
3.(2016年全国卷)At the first,I thought I knew everything and could make decisions by myself.
归纳总结
an
a
冠词错误主要错在
泛指与特指;a.an.the 混用
漏用和多用
冠词
1.(2018年广东百校联考)I was so frightened that I didn't know how to do.
2.(2017年全国卷)In their spare time,they are interested in planting vegetables in their garden,that is on the rooftop of their house.
3.(2015年陕西卷)My only mistake was that I dropped some on the floor after I was packing them up.
4.(2015年全国卷)After looking at the toy for some time,he turned around and found where his parents were missing.
5.(2017年全国卷)Before getting into the car,I thought I had learned the instructor’s orders,so once I started the car my mind went blank.
归纳总结
从属连词的漏用和错用,连词but,and,or, so和although上下文逻辑关系的理解错用
连词错误主要错在
what
which
when/while
that或去掉where
but
连词
1.(2017全国卷)It was a relief and I came to a suddenly stop just in the middle of the road.
2.(2015年陕西卷)My mum makes the better biscuits in the world,so I decided to ask her for help.
3.(2014年全国卷)The teachers here are kind and helpfully.They are not only our teachers but also our friends.
4.(2017年全国卷)I enjoyed studying difference kinds of cars and planes,playing pop music,and collecting the late music albums.
归纳总结
sudden
best
helpful
different
latest
形容词、副词、名词等词性的误用;原级,比较级和最高级的误用
形容词与副词主要错在
形容词与副词
1.(2017年全国卷)Mr and Mrs Zhang all work in our school.They live far from the school
2.(2016年全国卷)If we go on a trip abroad,we can broaden your view and gain knowledge we can not get from books.
3.(2018年黑龙江联考卷)For the purpose of improving me,I will ask my classmates for some advice,which may be of great value to me.
4.(2018年重庆联考卷)To avoid making the same errors,you may as well turn you teachers for help
归纳总结
代词主要错在
前后人称不一致;人称代词,物主代词,反身代词的误用;不定代词的误用及混用
both
our
myself
your
代词
1.(2018年百校联考)Under our help,all the books were free from the rain.
2.(2016年全国卷)My uncle says that he never dreams becoming rich in a short period of time.
归纳总结
介词主要错在
介词短语和习惯用法的搭配错误
With
of
介词
1. (2018年江西百校联考卷)Welcome to China.I’m very pleasing to tell you some arrangements during your stay in Beijing.
2. (2016年全国卷)However,my parents didn’t seem to think so.They always tell me what to do and how to do it.
3. (2014年全国卷)My dream school look like a big garden.There are all kinds of flowers and trees around the classroom buildings.
4. (2018年全国卷)Everyone was silent,wait to see who would be called upon to read his or her paragraph aloud.
5. (2016Rhinestone全国卷)Every day he makes sure that fresh vegetables and high quality oil are using for cooking.
归纳总结
动词错误主要错在
动词的时态和语态错误; 主、谓不一致的错误;非谓语动词形式的误用
pleased
told
looks
waiting
used
动词
动词形,
名词数.
还要注意形和副.
代词格,细领悟
介词短语须关注.
冠词连词常光顾.
短文改错口诀:
非谓语,细辨别
句子成分多分析.
习惯逻辑要记住.
Summary
四不改:
①标点符号不改
②大小写不改
③词序错误不改
④单词拼写不改
文中出现带汉语注释的词,在句中不可能错
Four points that you should pay attention to
Don't forget!
规范答题,否则不得分!
1. I can go to home now.
2. I like playing piano.
3. I am fond at English.
the
在下方划线,正确的词写在下面。
∧
箭头的方向,添加的词写在下面
of
不要用别的符号
Challenge yourself!
短文改错(共10小题;每小题l分,满分10分)
????假定英语课上老师要求同桌之间交换修改作文,请你修改你同桌写的以下作文。文中共有10处语言错误,每句中最多有两处。每处错误仅涉及一个单词的增加、删除或修改。
增加:在缺词处加一个漏字符号(∧),并在其下面写出该加的词。
删除:把多余的词用斜线(\)划掉。
修改:在错的词下画一横线,并在该词下面写出修改后的词。
注意:
1.?每处错误及其修改均仅限一词;
2.?只允许修改10处,多者(从第11处起)不计分。
I am writing to talk about the canteen of our school. There are only a few stand in the canteen, leading to lots of students have to line up for food. It is waste of time, isn’t it? But at times the food is not fresh and does not taste deliciously. So it’s not surprising that some students chose to go to the street to buy junk food which do harm to their health. Would you think about that how to improve it? I would appreciate you if you could take some measures. Hopefully, my opinion can be taken to account.
Thanks!