模块6 Unit 2 What is happiness to you? Task(1) 课件（28张PPT）
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(共28张PPT)
课 题：书面表达写作指导
教 材：牛津高中英语
出 版 社：译林出版社
A Hard Nut To Crack
--reading-based writing
Warming up
happy moments
get a college degree
get married
have a family
be surrounded by my students
get rewarded
Warming up
lost my mother at the age of two
hard times
independent
hard-working
considerate
helpful
optimistic
……
had difficulty in hunting for a job
lost my grandma 5 years ago
heard my Dad suffer from cancer 2 years ago
Warming up
happy moments
get birthday cards
be hugged
be admitted to…
make friends with
…
VS
hard times
fail the exams
be misunderstood
suffer from diseases
lose someone you love
…
Part 3
_______
Writing ----
Part 1
_______
Summary
Part 2
_______
Story
Opinion
summary of the story
similar experiences
opinion on the story
A story of the survivor of a shipwreck(海难）
A story review
A story review
Pre-writing
Main idea
Part 1
(para 1~4)
Part 2
(para 5~7)
_____？____
_____？____
the story narration(叙述）
the writer’s opinion–
a moral lesson (寓意)
the typical structure of a narrative essay
The survivor’s story
Pre-writing
Basic information
Character(s)
Event
Ending
?
Who is the hero(主人公) in the story?
What happened to him?
What happened in the end?
The survivor’s story
Basic information
Who is the hero(主人公) in the story?
What happened to him?
What happened in the end?
The _________ of a shipwreck on an inhabited ________.
He ____ everything in a _____.
He was ________ by the sailors on a ship _______ the smoke.
Pre-writing
The survivor’s story
survivor
island
lost
fire
rescued
seeing
He was ________ by the sailors on a ship _______ the smoke.
Make up a short summary of the passage
(30 words)
Pre-writing
The _________ of a shipwreck on an inhabited ________.
He ____ everything in a _____.
survivor
island
lost
fire
rescued
seeing
Make up a short summary of the passage
(30 words)
Pre-writing
story
moral meaning
A survivor of a shipwreck lost everything in a fire on an island. Luckily, he was rescued by the ship due to the smoke. The story encourages us never to lose heart in bad times.
A sample----
story narration (叙述)
moral lesson
(寓意)
1) Focus on basic elements of a story: _________________________
2) Use our own words instead of ______ the whole sentence.
Pre-writing
1
Writing tips
who, what, when, where, why, how.
copying
Pre-writing
Impressive description
Exhausted, he eventually managed to build a little hut out of driftwood to…
He arrived home to find his little hut in flames, the smoke rolling up to the sky.
The survivor’s story
Describe a feeling of ___________
Worn out/Tired out,
hopelessness
Pre-writing
Sentence building
____________________________, I couldn’t help crying.
Try to describe your hard times by using V-ing, V-ed, to do
Hearing that…/
Having failed the exams,/
Having lost…/
Having suffered from the disease,
Misunderstood by...
However, _________________ the difficulties, I ______________ in order to _________________.
faced with
Non-finite Verbs (V-ing/V-ed/to do) help create a vivid description of people’s feelings and situations.
Pre-writing
2
Writing tips
Pre-writing
Part 3
_______
Part 1
_______
Summary
Part 2
_______
Story
Opinion(s)
Tell a similar experience.
you/your parents/
friends/classmates...
This is how my story goes…
This story reminds me of
the experiences of Nick,…
Who?
What happened to him?
What happened in the end?
Pre-writing
Nick was born without arms and legs.
He had the idea of killing himself.
He survived & enjoyed his life.
He made speeches, inspiring people around the world.
Pre-writing
Story
This story reminds me of a special speaker, Nick.
He was born without arms and legs. Nick was once considered to have a hopeless life . He had suffered a lot. He wanted to kill himself. He was faced with challenges. Nick survived through his efforts . He even enjoyed his life unexpectedly. He made a difference to the world with his inspiring speech. It is his positive attitude that moves the people.
Pre-writing
Story
This story reminds me of a special speaker, Nick.
He was born without arms and legs. Nick was once considered to have a hopeless life . He had suffered a lot. He wanted to kill himself. He was faced with challenges. Nick survived through his efforts . He even enjoyed his life unexpectedly. He made a difference to the world with his inspiring speech. It is his positive attitude that moved the people.
Born without arms and legs,
Having suffered
a lot, he
Faced with
challenges,
Pre-writing
Story
This story reminds me of a special speaker, Nick.
Born without arms and legs, Nick was once considered to have a hopeless life . Having suffered a lot, he wanted to kill himself. _________, faced with challenges, Nick survived through his efforts ._____________, he even enjoyed his life unexpectedly. __________________, he made a difference to the world with his inspiring speech. It is his positive attitude that moved the people.
However
Moreover
Last but not the least
H
Linking words help make our writing connected and coherent. (连贯且条理清晰的)
Pre-writing
3
Writing tips
Pre-writing
What do you learn from the passage?
Be hopeful when we are in bad times.
Never lose heart because life is full of ups and downs.
Misfortune is a blessing in disguise.
塞翁失马，焉知非福
……
Misfortune is followed by luck.
discussion
The survivor’s story
Proverbs / sayings (谚语) will sometimes make your opinion more convincing.
Pre-writing
4
Writing tips
Opinions
Story
Summary
While-writing
A story review
As is shown in the story, …
What the story conveys to us is that…
The story reminds me of the experiences of… Faced with… However,… Moreover,… In a word, it is …that helps sb. get through hard times.
As for me, … is of vital significance to ... It plays an important role in …. As the saying goes,…Only when we …can we enjoy ups and downs in our life.
Tips
Focus on basic elements of a story: who, what, when, where, how.
Make use of V-ing, V-ed and to do.
Use proper linking words.
Adopt some proverbs /sayings.
Pay attention to your handwriting.
Post-writing
As you all see, life is really made up of various experiences, full of tears and laughter. That is life. There is always something unexpected right there waiting for you. You never know what the future has in store for you.
Never lose you heart.
It is your friends that will share your sorrows and happiness.
It is your parents that will support you whatever happens.
It is you yourself that will change your fate.
It is your efforts that will pay off.
Fight for your dreams!
I Do believe you will have a bright future.
Finish your writing and polish it up.
Send your writing to me by e-mail.
My e-mail address: 214314812@qq.com
Homework
Thank you!
课 题：书面表达写作指导
教 材：牛津高中英语
出 版 社：译林出版社
A Hard Nut To Crack
--reading-based writing
Warming up
happy moments
get a college degree
get married
have a family
be surrounded by my students
get rewarded
Warming up
lost my mother at the age of two
hard times
independent
hard-working
considerate
helpful
optimistic
……
had difficulty in hunting for a job
lost my grandma 5 years ago
heard my Dad suffer from cancer 2 years ago
Warming up
happy moments
get birthday cards
be hugged
be admitted to…
make friends with
…
VS
hard times
fail the exams
be misunderstood
suffer from diseases
lose someone you love
…
Part 3
_______
Writing ----
Part 1
_______
Summary
Part 2
_______
Story
Opinion
summary of the story
similar experiences
opinion on the story
A story of the survivor of a shipwreck(海难）
A story review
A story review
Pre-writing
Main idea
Part 1
(para 1~4)
Part 2
(para 5~7)
_____？____
_____？____
the story narration(叙述）
the writer’s opinion–
a moral lesson (寓意)
the typical structure of a narrative essay
The survivor’s story
Pre-writing
Basic information
Character(s)
Event
Ending
?
Who is the hero(主人公) in the story?
What happened to him?
What happened in the end?
The survivor’s story
Basic information
Who is the hero(主人公) in the story?
What happened to him?
What happened in the end?
The _________ of a shipwreck on an inhabited ________.
He ____ everything in a _____.
He was ________ by the sailors on a ship _______ the smoke.
Pre-writing
The survivor’s story
survivor
island
lost
fire
rescued
seeing
He was ________ by the sailors on a ship _______ the smoke.
Make up a short summary of the passage
(30 words)
Pre-writing
The _________ of a shipwreck on an inhabited ________.
He ____ everything in a _____.
survivor
island
lost
fire
rescued
seeing
Make up a short summary of the passage
(30 words)
Pre-writing
story
moral meaning
A survivor of a shipwreck lost everything in a fire on an island. Luckily, he was rescued by the ship due to the smoke. The story encourages us never to lose heart in bad times.
A sample----
story narration (叙述)
moral lesson
(寓意)
1) Focus on basic elements of a story: _________________________
2) Use our own words instead of ______ the whole sentence.
Pre-writing
1
Writing tips
who, what, when, where, why, how.
copying
Pre-writing
Impressive description
Exhausted, he eventually managed to build a little hut out of driftwood to…
He arrived home to find his little hut in flames, the smoke rolling up to the sky.
The survivor’s story
Describe a feeling of ___________
Worn out/Tired out,
hopelessness
Pre-writing
Sentence building
____________________________, I couldn’t help crying.
Try to describe your hard times by using V-ing, V-ed, to do
Hearing that…/
Having failed the exams,/
Having lost…/
Having suffered from the disease,
Misunderstood by...
However, _________________ the difficulties, I ______________ in order to _________________.
faced with
Non-finite Verbs (V-ing/V-ed/to do) help create a vivid description of people’s feelings and situations.
Pre-writing
2
Writing tips
Pre-writing
Part 3
_______
Part 1
_______
Summary
Part 2
_______
Story
Opinion(s)
Tell a similar experience.
you/your parents/
friends/classmates...
This is how my story goes…
This story reminds me of
the experiences of Nick,…
Who?
What happened to him?
What happened in the end?
Pre-writing
Nick was born without arms and legs.
He had the idea of killing himself.
He survived & enjoyed his life.
He made speeches, inspiring people around the world.
Pre-writing
Story
This story reminds me of a special speaker, Nick.
He was born without arms and legs. Nick was once considered to have a hopeless life . He had suffered a lot. He wanted to kill himself. He was faced with challenges. Nick survived through his efforts . He even enjoyed his life unexpectedly. He made a difference to the world with his inspiring speech. It is his positive attitude that moves the people.
Pre-writing
Story
This story reminds me of a special speaker, Nick.
He was born without arms and legs. Nick was once considered to have a hopeless life . He had suffered a lot. He wanted to kill himself. He was faced with challenges. Nick survived through his efforts . He even enjoyed his life unexpectedly. He made a difference to the world with his inspiring speech. It is his positive attitude that moved the people.
Born without arms and legs,
Having suffered
a lot, he
Faced with
challenges,
Pre-writing
Story
This story reminds me of a special speaker, Nick.
Born without arms and legs, Nick was once considered to have a hopeless life . Having suffered a lot, he wanted to kill himself. _________, faced with challenges, Nick survived through his efforts ._____________, he even enjoyed his life unexpectedly. __________________, he made a difference to the world with his inspiring speech. It is his positive attitude that moved the people.
However
Moreover
Last but not the least
H
Linking words help make our writing connected and coherent. (连贯且条理清晰的)
Pre-writing
3
Writing tips
Pre-writing
What do you learn from the passage?
Be hopeful when we are in bad times.
Never lose heart because life is full of ups and downs.
Misfortune is a blessing in disguise.
塞翁失马，焉知非福
……
Misfortune is followed by luck.
discussion
The survivor’s story
Proverbs / sayings (谚语) will sometimes make your opinion more convincing.
Pre-writing
4
Writing tips
Opinions
Story
Summary
While-writing
A story review
As is shown in the story, …
What the story conveys to us is that…
The story reminds me of the experiences of… Faced with… However,… Moreover,… In a word, it is …that helps sb. get through hard times.
As for me, … is of vital significance to ... It plays an important role in …. As the saying goes,…Only when we …can we enjoy ups and downs in our life.
Tips
Focus on basic elements of a story: who, what, when, where, how.
Make use of V-ing, V-ed and to do.
Use proper linking words.
Adopt some proverbs /sayings.
Pay attention to your handwriting.
Post-writing
As you all see, life is really made up of various experiences, full of tears and laughter. That is life. There is always something unexpected right there waiting for you. You never know what the future has in store for you.
Never lose you heart.
It is your friends that will share your sorrows and happiness.
It is your parents that will support you whatever happens.
It is you yourself that will change your fate.
It is your efforts that will pay off.
Fight for your dreams!
I Do believe you will have a bright future.
Finish your writing and polish it up.
Send your writing to me by e-mail.
My e-mail address: 214314812@qq.com
Homework
Thank you!