(共60张PPT)
How to improve writing
on charts
Bar Chart
柱状图
Pie Chart
饼状图
Graph
表示两组数的关系-通常为函数关系图
Table
矩形的竖行和横行进行排列的表格
Item 1994 1995 1996 1997 1998
Food 65% 60% 48% 42% 35%
Clothing 8% 9% 12% 15% 17%
Recreation 3% 5% 7% 8% 10%
Others 24% 26% 33% 35% 38%
Total 100% 100% 100% 100% 100%
Grades
SeniorⅠ
SeniorⅡ
SeniorⅢ
Hours spent on reading per week
7
5
2
要点提示: 1.简要描述相关信息. 2.分析产生原因. 3.谈谈你的看法
下表是某中学的研究性学习小组对高一,高二和高三学生的课外阅读情况作出的调查结果,请你结合下面的信息和自己的生活,写一篇150词左右的调查报告。
Task1
Opening
Body
Ending
Observe the chart and tell us your understanding of it
Analyze the reasons for the phenomenon
Make a conclusion
简要描述相关信息
(a summary and facts)
2.分析产生原因(reasons)
3.谈谈你的看法
(your own opinions)
Tense:(时态) the present tense
Person:(人称) the third person
According to the table , senior high school
students spend less and less time on after-class reading.
( 根据表格显示,高中生花在阅读上的时间越来越少了.)
Students in SeniorⅠspend seven hours per week reading ,SeniorⅡ students spend five hours and SeniorⅢ students spend only two hours reading.
Have a try
Grades
SeniorⅠ
SeniorⅡ
SeniorⅢ
Hours spent on reading per week
7
5
2
要点提示: 1.简要描述相关信息. 2.分析产生原因. 3.谈谈你的看法
下表是某中学的研究性学习小组对高一,高二和高三学生的课外阅读情况作出的调查结果,请你结合下面的信息和自己的生活,写一篇150词左右的调查报告。
Task1
1.大部分学生认为课外阅读不重要.
2.课后他们更愿意参加其他活动而不是阅读.
3.最后,随着年级的升高,他们有更多作业要做而没有时间阅读.
The reasons are as follows:
First, most students think that after-class reading is not important.
reading with other activities, such as listening to music, playing basketball, chatting online and so on. Last,
have more homework to do and have no time to read. So they have to give up reading.
Second, they often replace
with their grade becoming higher, they
In my opinion, reading is very useful ,so students should spend enough time on it.
我认为课后阅读非常有用,高中生应该花足够的时间阅读。
According to the table , senior high school students spend less and less time on after-class reading. Students in SeniorⅠspend seven hours per week reading , SeniorⅡ students spend five hours and SeniorⅢ students only spend two hours reading. The reasons are as follows:
First, most students think that after-class reading is not important. Second, they often replace reading with other activities, such as listening to music, playing basketball, chatting online and so on...Last, with their grade becoming higher, they have more homework to do and have no time to read. So they have to give up reading.
In my opinion, reading is very useful ,so students should spend enough time on it.
18`
18?
20?
25!
Nothing is impossible!
Ⅰ. Use the typical patterns for tables?
(使用表格模块)
Ⅲ. Use good transitions?
(使用过渡连接)
Ⅱ. Use advanced phrases or sentences?
(使用高级词汇或句子)
Do you?
① The table/graph / chart above shows …
② From the above table/graph/chart, it can
be seen that...
③ As is shown in the table/graph/ chart, ...
④ The table/graph/chart shows the differences between…
Ⅰ.Use the typical patterns
Patterns for opening
Let’s improve it:
1. According to the table , senior high school students spend less and less time reading.
From the above table, it can be seen that senior high school students spend less and less time reading.
As is shown in the table , senior high school students spend less and less time reading.
① There was a great /slight increase /rise in…
② There has been a sudden/rapid / slow
fall/drop in…
③ The number /rate has nearly doubled, in comparison with that of last year.
2. Patterns for facts
④ By comparison, it fell/decreased/increased
from…to…
Senior high school students spend less time on after-class reading as their grade rises.
There has been a rapid drop in the time spent on after-class reading by senior high school students.
高中生花在课外阅读上的时间急剧减少了。
1. According to the table , senior high school students spend less and less time reading.
随着年级的升高,高中生花在课外阅读上的时间越来越少了。
with their grade rising.
①. The reason for…is that…
②. One may think of the change as a result of..
③. There are several reasons accounting for
this. First, …
④. This brings out the important fact that…
3. Patterns for reasons
1. The reasons are as follows:
There are several reasons accounting for this.
The reasons for the rapid drop are that…
①. It’s clear from the table that…
②. in a word,/ in short, /generally speaking/
on the whole…
③. In summary/In conclusion, it is important…
④. Obviously, if we want to…,it is necessary..
⑤. There is no doubt that much attention
must be paid to...
4. Patterns for conclusion
1. I think reading is very useful ,so students should spend enough time on it.
There is no doubt that much attention must be paid to after-class reading so that students can broaden their horizon.
Obviously, if students want to broaden their horizon, it is necessary for them to spend enough time on after-class reading.
显而易见,如果要拓宽视野,花足够的时间阅
是必要的。
Ⅱ. Use advanced phrases or sentences (使用高级词汇或句子)
1.Students in SeniorⅠspend seven hours per week reading ,SeniorⅡ students spend five hours and SeniorⅢ students only spend two hours reading.
, Students in SeniorⅠspend seven hours per week reading and
Much less time , only two hours
reading by SeniorⅢ students.
students,用不同的词替换spend. 适时可采用省略.
On average
(1).平均起来
(2).用替代词代替前文出现的
in SeniorⅡ five hours .
those
is devoted to
(3).被用/花在
is spent in
is used for
2. Most students think that after-class reading is not important.
Most students don’t enough importance after-class reading.
Most students don’t enough
the after-class reading.
(足够重视)
attach
to
pay
attention
to
(给…以足够的关注)
3. with their grade becoming higher, they have more homework to do and have no time to read.
With their grade becoming higher, they have more homework to do,
leaving no spare
time for reading.
结果没留空余时间阅读
(用-ing作状语)
Ⅲ. Use good transitions (使用过渡连接)
表层次顺序,罗列增加: First,…second, …third,…fourth,…last…
→ __________________, __________________,
__________________, _________________,
_________________, ___________________
→ __________________, ___________________,
__________________, __________________,
______________________________________
To begin/start with
furthermore
in addition
meanwhile
First of all
besides
what’s more/worse
last but not least(提及最后的人或事物时)最后但同样重要的是
as a consequence/result
moreover
above all
There are several reasons accounting for this.
,most students don’t attach enough importance to after-class reading.
,their reading is taken up by other activities.
,with their grade becoming higher,…
First of all
As a consequence
In addition
As a result
To begin/start with
Furthermore
Moreover
Besides
As is shown in the table above , senior high school students spend less time on after-class reading as their grade rises. On average, students in SeniorⅠspend seven hours per week reading and those in SeniorⅡ five hours. Much less time, only two hours, is devoted to reading by SeniorⅢ students.
There are several reasons accounting for this. First of all , most students don’t attach enough importance to after-class reading. As a consequence, their reading is often taken up by other activities. such as listening to music, playing basketball, chatting online and so on... In addition, with their grade becoming higher, they have more homework to do, leaving no spare time for reading.
In my opinion, there is no doubt that much attention must be paid to after-class reading so that students can broaden their horizon.
25’!
Develop the sentences into a passage.
Steps of writing a good article
Read the instructions carefully and decide the style.
Follow typical patterns
List the key points.
Put the key points into sentences.
(列提纲)
(明审题)
(选句型)
(妙联句)
(细复查)
Check your work.
新教材
80%非常喜欢:图片漂亮,
激发兴趣;课文有趣、
话题新颖;文化知识丰富、
帮助了解世界。
15%不喜欢:生词多、
句子复杂、 影响理解;
5%未发表意见
Task 2
结论:新教材帮助大部分学生提高了英语水平。
80%
5%
15%
I recently made a survey on my classmates about their view on the new English textbook. , 80% of the students are quite satisfied with it,
15% dislike it and 5% have no opinion. Students
say the text
are very interesting, and and
and however, students
complain that there are too many new words and difficult sentences,
the texts difficult to understand.
, the new English textbook has helped most students improve their English greatly. We should
.
(1). 图表显 示
(2). 而 (表对比)
(3) 那些喜欢新教材的学生 (定于从句)
(4) 带漂亮插图的 (用with表伴随)
(5) 覆盖了许多热门的话题,
(-ing做伴随状语/ to do 作目的状语)
(6) 提供了各种文化的知识来了解世界。
(7) 那些不喜欢新教材的学生 (定于从句)
(8)使(-ing作结果状语)
(9) 总而言之
10. (充分利用它来学习英语)
I recently made a survey my classmates about their view on the new English textbook.
, 80% of the students are quite satisfied with it, 15% dislike it and 5% have no opinion.
(1). 图表 显示
As is shown in the chart
(2). 而 (表对比)
while/
(2) on the contrary
(3)那些喜欢新教材的学生 (定于从句)
who like it
(4) 带漂亮插图的 (用with表伴随)
with beautiful pictures
(5) 覆盖了许多热门的话题,
covering many hot topics
(6) 提供了各种文化的知识来了解世界。
(-ing做伴随状语/ to do 作目的状语)
providing various cultural knowledge
to learn about the world.
(7) 那些不喜欢新教材的学生 (定于 从句)
Students
say
text
are very
interesting,
and
However, students
who dislike it
complain that there are too many new words and difficult sentences, the texts difficult to understand.
, the new English textbook has helped most students improve their English greatly. We should
(8)使(-ing作结果状语)
making
(9) 总而言之
In conclusion
10. (充分利用它来学习英语)
make full
use of it for our English learning.
In summary/In a word
(10. make the best /the most of it for our
English learning.)
1. Please remember the typical
patterns .
2. Perfect your composition in Task1 after class. Make your final copy as neat as possible.
As is shown in the table above , senior high school students spend less time on after-class reading as their grade rises. On average, students in SeniorⅠspend seven hours per week reading and those in SeniorⅡ five hours. Much less time, only two hours, is devoted to reading by SeniorⅢ students.
There are several reasons accounting for this. First , most students don’t attach enough importance to after-class reading. As a consequence, their reading is often taken up by other activities. such as listening to music, playing basketball, chatting online and so on... In addition, with their grade becoming higher, they have more homework to do, leaving no spare time for reading.
In my opinion, there is no doubt that much attention must be paid to after-class reading. So that students can broaden their horizon.
3. So their reading is often taken up by other activities,
4. So they have to give up reading.
5. so students should spend much time on it.
结果,他们的阅读时间被其它活动占去了。
their reading is often taken up by other activities.
Consequently/As a consequence
As a result,/therefore
they have to give up reading
students should spend enough time reading in order to broaden their horizon.
学生应花足够的时间阅读以开拓眼界
II. Use good transitions (使用过渡连接)
1. Phrases: (选取高级连接词)
表层次顺序,罗列增加: First,…second, …third,…fourth,…last…
→ __________________, __________________,
__________________, _________________,
_________________, ___________________
→ __________________, ___________________,
__________________, __________________,
______________________________________
To begin/start with
furthermore
in addition
meanwhile
first of all
besides
what’s more
last but not least(提及最后的人或事物时)最后但同样重要的是
in addition to that
moreover
above all
III. Use good transitions (使用过渡连接)
2. Sentences:
senior high school students spend less time reading as…
As is shown in the table,
It can be seen that
From the table,
senior high school students spend less time reading as…
III. Use good transitions (使用过渡连接)
2. Sentences:
The reasons are following:
There are several reasons accounting for this.
Causes for this sharply decrease are following:
The change in grades largely results from the fact that…
Ⅳ. Use different sentences (使用多样句型)
_________________________________________
____________________________________.
(分词作状语/定语从句)
I think reading is very useful
II. Use good transitions (使用过渡连接)
Section C
假设你是湖南省某高中高三学生李华,应邀参加在伦敦举办的“亲年生活方式座谈会”,请你根据下表“最受英国青年欢迎的活动”来准备一篇英文发言稿。内容主要包括:
简要介绍表中内容;
2. 谈谈自己对健康生活方式的建议和看法。
注意:
词数不少于120.
2. 文中不得提及考生所在学校和本人的姓名
Sports Football Swimming Cycling Jogging Weight
training
Men 49% 30% 28% 17% 17%
Sports Swimming Cycling Jogging Ice
Skating Badmin-
ton
Women 22% 22% 12% 8% 8%
Boys and girls:
I talk about especially about
, almost a half of young men in Britain like playing football and 30﹪ like swimming. Following these two most popular sports are cycling, jogging and weight training.. it is quite different. About 20﹪ of young women like swimming,
am honored to
(很荣幸)
the lifestyle of
young people
青少年的生活方式
(青少年喜欢的体育运动)
the sports that young people like.
According to the survey
(根据调查)
However, When it comes to women,
(然而,相比之下女性 就不一样了.)
which is almost the same as the
(这与喜欢骑自行的数量一样多.)
number of those who like cycling.
and are necessary for a healthy lifestyle。
people tend to spend more time indoors rather than doing some outdoor exercise, which is unhealthy. Let’s spare some time for exercise each day.
, women tend to like jogging, ice skating and playing badminton.
Besides this
(除此之外)
The number of
women who do sports is much smaller than that of men.
(运动的女性数量比男性少得多)
Getting plenty exercise, having regular health checkups, and eating right are good ways to remain in good physical condition
(足够的锻炼,定期的健康检查和正确的饮食是保持健康的好方法。)
With the
development of the information technology
(随着信息技术的发展)
Boys and girls:
I am honored to talk about the lifestyle of young people, especially about the sports that young people like.
According to the survey, almost a half of young men in Britain like playing football and 30﹪ like swimming. Following these two most popular sports are cycling, jogging and weight training. However, When it comes to women, it is quite different. About 20﹪ of young women like swimming, which is almost the same as the number of those who like cycling.
am honored to
especially
According to
/As is shown in
Following these two most popular
sports
When it comes
On the contrary, it is quite different
for women
Getting plenty exercise, having regular health checkups, and eating right are good ways to remain in good physical condition and are necessary for a healthy lifestyle. With the development of the information technology, people tend to spend more time indoors rather than doing some outdoor exercise, which is unhealthy. Let’s spare some time for exercise each day.)
Besides this, women tend to like jogging, ice skating and playing badminton. The number of women who do sports is much smaller than that of men.
Besides this,
(对表格进行总结,恰到好处)
(使用非谓结构,增强语言表现力)
(With the development of
Health depends on regular exercise, good food and enough sleep which are necessary for a healthy lifestyle.
(全文总结,观点升华)
Ⅰ.Choose advanced phrases (选取高级词汇)
Word
Phrase
3. From the table
on average
/it can be seen that...
1. SeniorⅢ students only spend two hours reading.
spare much less time to read
/only two hours is devoted to reading by…
2. most students think that after-class reading is not important
(Simple phrase
Advanced phrase)
图表式作文写作分三步:
第一步:开门见山地点明本图表所反映的主题
常使用的词汇有:table, chart, figure, graph, describe// tell, show, represent等
常用句型:
1.The graph/chart/table above shows …
2. From the above graph/chart, it can be seen that...
3. As is shown in the graph, ...
4.The chart/table shows the differences between…
第二步:分析数据间的主要差异及趋势,然后描写(在描写数据间变化及总趋势特征时,可采用分类式或对比式以支持主题,并阐明必要的理由)。注意层次。 即 facts and reasons
常用转折,对比及比较的词汇:
While, but, on the contrary, however, compare with, in contrast to ,as…as, the same as, be similar to, difference between, among, more than, less than
Reasons:
1.The reason for…is that…
2.One may think of the change as a result of…
3.The change in…largely results from the fact that…
4.There are several causes for this significant growth in…First,….Second,…
5.This brings out the important fact that…
第三步:归纳总结或发表评论。
常用词汇:
1.in a word,/ in short, /generally speaking
2.It’s clear from the chart that…
3.In summary, it is important…
…
4.From what has been discussed above, we can draw the conclusion that…
5.Obviously, if we want to…,it is necessary…
6.There is no doubt that attention must be paid
审题:(格式/人称/时态/要点/篇章结构)
篇章结构:
①summary: 对象、内容、时间
tense —
②facts : 描述抓关键;对比的写法
tense–
③reasons:出现某种现象的原因
tense---
④your own opinion/suggestions :
tense--
一般过去时
有明确过去时间状语 用过去时;
无明确年份,反映一种普遍现象或介绍情况的 用现在时
一般现在时、一般过去时
一般现在时、一般将来时
上周,我们以“谁是你的偶像”为题,在2600名学生中进行了一次调查(survey)。以下是调查数据:
[写作内容]
根据以上数据,写一篇短文,包括以下内容:
1.调查时间、调查问题以及调查对象;
2.男女生在以明星为偶像方面的差异;
3.“父母”在男女生偶像中的排序差异;
4.男女生在以伟人为偶像方面的异同;
5.你的偶像及理由。
基础写作
偶像 女生 男生
伟人 18% 18%
父母 25% 11%
影视明星 50% 14%
体育明星 6% 48%
没有偶像 1% 9%
How high do you want to score in the writing part?
15?
20?
25!
Nothing is impossible!
我最近对我班的同学进行了一次有关英语新教科书看法的调查。根据调查显示,80%的学生对于它感到非常满意,然而15%的人不喜欢,以及有5%的人不发表观点。那些喜欢它的学生认为带有漂亮图片的课文非常有趣,覆盖了许多热门的话题,以及提供了各种文化的知识来了解世界。然而,那些不喜欢它的学生则抱怨有太多的新单词和难句,使得文章难以理解。总之,英语新教材帮助了大部分学生提高英语水平。
I recently surveyed my classmates about their views on the new English textbook. According to the survey, 80% of the students were quite satisfied with it, while 15% disliked it and 5% had no opinion. Students who liked it said the texts with beautiful pictures were very interesting, covering many hot topics and providing lots of cultural knowledge to learn about the world. However, students who disliked it complained that there were too many new words and difficult sentences, making the texts difficult to understand. In conclusion, the new English textbook has helped most students improve their English enormously.
Steps of writing a good article
Read the instructions carefully and decide the style.
Follow typical patterns
List the key points.
Put the key points into sentences.
(列提纲)
(明审题)
(选句型)
(妙联句)
(细复查)
Develop the sentences into a passage.
Check your work.
审题:(格式/人称/时态/要点/篇章结构)
篇章结构:
①summary: 对象、内容、时间
tense —
②facts : 描述抓关键;对比的写法
tense–
③reasons:出现某种现象的原因
tense---
④your own opinion/suggestions :
tense--
一般过去时
有明确过去时间状语 用过去时;
无明确年份,反映一种普遍现象或介绍情况的 用现在时
一般现在时、一般过去时
一般现在时、一般将来时